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Gundam Meister
March 18th, 2011, 03:12 PM
I though i should make this thread






Class:Saber
Real Name Acqua of the Back
Strength: A+
Mana: A
Endurance: A
Noble Phantasm : A+
Agility : A
Luck: B

Divinity Rank B++




Index of Modern Fiction Servants from the General Discussion Create-A-Servant thread:


A Song of Ice and Fire series:
[Rider - Aegon Targeryon] by ikoke

Assassin's Creed:
[Assassin - Altair Ibn La-Ahad] by Apple

Baldur's Gate:
[Berserker - Minsc] by drmchsr0

Bastion (video-game):
[Rider - The Kid] by Cyber Angel

Bioshock:
[Caster - Jack Wynand] by TheDivineDemon

Black★Rock Shooter:
[Saber/Rider - Black★Rock Shooter] by Zer0light

Blazblue:
[Saber - Hakumen] by mAc Chaos
[Saber - Ragna the Bloodedge] by mAc Chaos

Bleach:
[Lancer - Ulquiorra] by Paladin lord (first of two profiles in same post)

Braid:
[Caster - Tim] by MssrNeko

Campione!:
[Saber - Kusanagi Godou] by Blackdeath6031

Code Geass:
[Assassin - rouch Lamperouge] by mAc Chaos

Dark Souls:
[Assassin - The Dark Lord] by Apple
[Berserker - Gwyn] by Apple

DC Comics:
[Saver/Caster/Rider - Superman a.k.a. Clark Kent] by Larekko12
[Assassin - Batman a.k.a. Bruce Wayne] by MssrNeko
[Assassin/Berserker - The Joker a.k.a. Jack Napier] by TheDivineDemon

Dead Space:
[Caster/Ruler - Marker 3A] by Apple
[Berserker - Isaac Clarke] by GaterJ4wz (first of two profiles in same post)

Destroy all Humans!:
[Archer - Cryptosporidium 138] by GaterJ4wz (second of two profiles in same post)

Disgaea:
[Saber - Unknown Warrior] by Mcjon01

Dragon Age:
[Archer - Varric Tethras] by Apple

Drakengard:
[Saber/Rider/Berserker - Caim] by Neir

Doctor Who:
[Rider - Doctor Who] by TheDivineDemon

Don Quixote:
[Rider - Don Quixote] by Cyber Angel

Donkey Kong:
[Berserker/Archer - Donkey Kong] by firloz (first of two profiles in same post]

Dungeons & Dragons:
[Assassin(?) - Reshar] by Incarnite Azurnum

Final Fantasy series:
[Saber - Cloud Strife] by MssrNeko (first of three profiles in same post)

Gankutsuou:
[Avenger - Gankutsuou] by ylas

Guilty Gear:
[Saber - Sol Badguy] by Petrikow

Haiyore! Nyaruko-san:
[Caster - Nyaruko] by Lycodrake

The Hunchback of Notre-Dame:
[Berserker - Quasimodo] by MssrNeko

Hunter x Hunter:
[Caster - Chrollo Lucifer] by NailsInYourFeet
[Assassin - Chrollo Lucifer] by urca

Infinity Blade:
[Saber - Siris] by MssrNeko

Kingdom Hearts:
[Berserker - Terra] by Emperor Kiritsugu

The Legend of Zelda:
[Caster/Archer/Ruler/Rider/Assassin - Zelda] by Allon Marton
[Berserker - Link] by Moessei (real authorship: unnamed friend of Moessei)

The Lord of the Rings:
[Archer - Legolas] by Paladin Lord
[Assassin/Saber - Bilbo Baggins] by Asdfghl

Mahou Sensei Negima:
[Archer - Negi Springfield] by CanonRap
[Caster/Berserker - Negi Srpingfield] by Zer0light

Mass Effect:
[Lancer - Shepard] by mewarmo990
[Berserker - Jack] by TheDivineDemon

Marvel Comics:
[Saber - Taskmaster a.k.a. Tony Masters] by MssrNeko
[Archer - Black Widow a.k.a. Natasha Romanoff] by SpetsnazChick
[Rider - The Incredible Hulk a.k.a. Bruce Banner] by GaterJ4wz
[Caster - Deadpool] by MssrNeko
[Assassin - Deadpool] by willyvereb

Monster Girl Quest:
[Saber - Luka] by Bloble

Naruto:
[Assassin/Archer - Deidara] by firloz
[Lancer/Saber/Caster/Berserker/Archer/Assassin - Kimimaro] by firloz (second of two profiles in same post; now you're thinking with Multi-Classing)
[Assassin - Itachi Uchiha] by Lycodrake

No More Heroes:
[Saber/Berserker - Travis Touchdown] by I3uster

Nosferatu, eine Symphonie des Grauen:
[Berserker - Count Orlok] by MssrNeko

One Piece:
[Rider/Berserker/Ruler - Monkey D. Luffy] by rajieru

Persona (video-game series):
[Saber/Archer/Lancer/Caster - ???] by celsius (the Persona protagonist)

The Phantom of the Opera:
[Assassin/Caster/Berserker - Erik] by NailsInYourFeet

Pirates of the Carribean:
[Rider/Avenger/Saber - Jack Sparrow] by TheDivineDemon

Planescape Torment:
[Saber - Dak'kon of Shr'akt'lor-Risen] by ylas

Puella Magi Madoka Magica:
[Berserker - Miki Sayaka] by bhl88
[Caster/Archer - Mami Tomoe] by SVNB Backup

Pokémon:
[Rider - Red] by TheDivineDemon
[Rider/Ruler - Yellow] by Apple (from the Pokémon Adventures manga)

Power Rangers:
[Saber/Rider/Caster - Tommy Oliver] by TheDivineDemon

Pride and Predjudice:
[Berserker - Mr. Darcy] by You

The Princess Bride:
[Saber - Inigo Montoya] by MssrNeko

Rance Series:
[Saber/Berserker - Rance] by firloz

Read or Die:
[Archer - Yomiko Readman] by Cyber Angel

Saint Seiya:
[Berserker - Ikki Phoenix] by Mazyrian
[Saver - Shaka Virgo] by Mazyrian

Samurai Jack:
[Saber - Samurai Jack] by TheDivineDemon

Sharpe (novel and television series):
[Saber - Richard Sharpe] by Troika

Sherlock Holmes series:
[Assassin - Sherlock Holmes] by Blastedspider

Slayers:
[Caster/Archer - Lina Inverse] by Blastedspider

Soul Series:
[Saber - Nightmare] by mAc Chaos

Star Wars:
[Saber/Caster - Luke Skywalker] by TheDivineDemon
[Berserker/Caster - Anakin Skywalker] by TheDivineDemon

Street Figther:
[Assassin/Berserker/Archer - Ryu] by Shirou_EMIYA

Sword Art Online:
[Caster - Kayaba Akihiko] by firloz
[Assassin - Kirito] by Zer0light
[Assassin/Archer - Asado Shino] by Eva

Tales (video-game series):
[Rider - Senel Coolidge] by Ruca_Milda

That Guy with the Glasses:
[Caster - Linkara] by Paladin Lord

Toaru Majutsu no Index:
[Berserker/Archer/Caster - Accelerator] by Zer0light
[”unknown” - Kamijou Touma] by Zer0light

Touhou Project:
[Saber - Konpaky Youmu] by G-man
[Caster - Kirisame Marisa] by G-man
[Assassin - Izayoi Sakuya] by G-man
[Ruler - Shikieki Yamaxanadu] by petalferrous

Umineko no Naku Koro Ni:
[Caster - Frederica Bernkastel] by White Winter

Valkyrie Profile:
[Saber/Archer - Lenneth Valkyrie] by Neir

The Wheel of Time:
[Caster - Rand al'Thor] by TypeWannabe

Zorro Series:
[Assassin - Zorro][v2.0] by Paladin Lord (second of two profiles in same post)

Uncategorized:
[Archer - The Ancient Mariner] by Five_X
[Archer - Bird of Chernobyl][v2.0] by Yakumo-san (external website)
[Caster - Mesahime] by Memor-X
[Saber/Archer - Emiya Shirou] by TheDivineDemon (Shirou from the Hill of Swords FF)
[Saber - Emiya Shirou] by Firloz (Shirou from the Hill of Swords FF)[/SPOILER]

Spooky
March 18th, 2011, 06:17 PM
This reminds me of a little snippet I wrote a while back. I'm sure it breaks all sorts of rules, but w/e. Cookie to the first to guess the servant.

***

"Enuma Elish!!!"

The King of Heroes sneered as he watched the huge explosion Ea made as it connected with the other Archer-class servant.

"Tch, worthless. In the end he was just like all the other mongrels," Gilgamesh gloated.

Thump, thump

Gil dropped the sneer at the sound. "Can't be. No one can survive being hit dead on by my Noble Phantasm!"

Thump, thump

The footsteps echoed again. Gil turned back and gaped at the sight. It was him, that damnable cowboy!

Archer walked through the smoke completely unharmed, his longcoat swaying with each step. He paused, his craggy face with it's seemingly ever-present scowl not hidden in the least by his wide-brimmed hat. His arms rested at his sides, each fist filled with the deadliest of deadly weapons. His long hair blew gently in the breeze as one hand rose to point a pistol at the arrogant king.

Though it was against everything Gilgamesh believed in, he began to feel what he could only describe as fear as he watched the impossible happen.

"Not enough gun," was all Gil heard before the first and only shot rang out.

Gundam Meister
March 18th, 2011, 06:19 PM
This reminds me of a little snippet I wrote a while back. I'm sure it breaks all sorts of rules, but w/e. Cookie to the first to guess the servant.

***

"Enuma Elish!!!"

The King of Heroes sneered as he watched the huge explosion Ea made as it connected with the other Archer-class servant.

"Tch, worthless. In the end he was just like all the other mongrels," Gilgamesh gloated.

Thump, thump

Gil dropped the sneer at the sound. "Can't be. No one can survive being hit dead on by my Noble Phantasm!"

Thump, thump

The footsteps echoed again. Gil turned back and gaped at the sight. It was him, that damnable cowboy!

Archer walked through the smoke completely unharmed, his longcoat swaying with each step. He paused, his craggy face with it's seemingly ever-present scowl not hidden in the least by his wide-brimmed hat. His arms rested at his sides, each fist filled with the deadliest of deadly weapons. His long hair blew gently in the breeze as one hand rose to point a pistol at the arrogant king.

Though it was against everything Gilgamesh believed in, he began to feel what he could only describe as fear as he watched the impossible happen.

"Not enough gun," was all Gil heard before the first and only shot rang out.

The Saint Of Killers

willyvereb
March 18th, 2011, 06:20 PM
Saint of Godmodding, you mean right?:p

Spooky
March 18th, 2011, 06:25 PM
The Saint Of Killers

Already? Fine, then.

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Mazyrian
March 24th, 2011, 07:14 PM
Qin Shi Huang, the First Emperor

259 BC - 210 BC
King of the Chinese state of Qin during the Warring States period, Qin Shi Huang lead his kingdom victorious against the other six and conquered them all, becoming the first emperor of an unified China and founder of the Qin Dynasty.
Widely considered a tyrant, he undertook many monumental projects (at huge human cost), and burned many books and persecuted scholars. He became increasingly paranoid later in his life, and was obsessed with obtaining immortality. Still, the unified China remained (even if his dynasty didn't), and so can be considered one of the (if not the) most influential emperors of all China's history.

Class: Saber
Alignment: Lawful Evil

Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: C
Mana: B
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class skills
Riding: C (He's proficient riding most vehicles)
Magic Resistance: B (Nullifies magic requiring three or less verses)

Personal skills
Military tactics: C (He is versed in the art of war)
Charisma: E (Leadership is increased, but morale decreases)
Magecraft: B (It was not registered in history, but he was a powerful magician and alchemist, even if in the end he couldn't obtain a potion of immortality. His magic specializes in support and building of constructs more than direct combat, though)

Noble Phantasms

The Great Wall - Bounded Field of Absolute Defense
Rank: B
Type: Anti-army
One of Qin's more remembered achievements is the building of the Great Wall, as defense against the northern nomads. In fact, he mostly joined previous dispersed walls segments. Also, it's not the Great Wall famous today as a tourist spot; that one was built during the Ming Dynasty (1268 - 1644), and is considerably to the south of Qin's one.
As one of Qin's greatest projects, when summoned as a Servant he gets this Bounded Field as its materialization. When deployed, he and his allies (chiefly his Terracotta Army; see below) get a substantial bonus to their defense.

The Terracotta Army - Invincible Golem Army
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-army
One of the greatest archaeological discoveries of the 20th century, in the tomb of the emperor Qin there was a whole army of over 8,000 life-sized terracotta soldiers.
In fact, this terracotta army is not a representation of his army, but his actual army: an accomplished magician and alchemist, the key to Qin's conquest of China was an army of immortal Golems made by himself, which was then buried with him.
As a Servant, he can summon its golems as he wishes; the golems spurt out of the earth and are ready to fight. Everyone is comparable with a lesser Servant, with strength and endurance of C and E in the the rest of the parameters (though without NP). They can be destroyed, but unless disintegrated they rebuild themselves in a few days.
He has access to the whole 8,000 golems; however, only the most powerful Masters could provided mana enough to summon more that a small fraction of them at once. However, were Qin to got hand of a greater mana provision, this NP could raise its rank to EX.

willyvereb
March 24th, 2011, 07:41 PM
Name: Ado Edem
Class: Saber
Alignment: Neutral Unknown
Gender: True Unknown

STR: EX
END: EX
AGI: B
MANA: EX
LCK: E-
NP: EX

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: A
Riding: E

Personal Skills:
Prana Bursts: A
Levitation: A

Noble Phantasm:
- Slash Emperor: Double-edged sword that can grow into any size at the speed of thought in expense of chipping away the same amount from Earth.
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Fortress
Range: 1 - 99+
Maximum Target: 1

Yeah, I was pretty lazy.:p

Grant
March 24th, 2011, 10:00 PM
Name: Vlad Tepes
The former ruler of Wallachia, his reign was noted for three things. A hatred of disloyalty, a hatred of criminals and a hatred of the Ottomans. A brutal leader he used vicious tactics to instill fear in his enemies and subjects, especially his over exaggerated use of impalement as a punishment. He ultimately died on the field of battle and helped inspire the fictional vampire Dracula centuries later/

Class: Lancer
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Gender: Male

Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: A
Magical Energy: C
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Abilities:
Riding: B. Has the ability to ride most animals but not holy beasts or demons
Magic Resistance: D. Nullifies single-action magic. Magic resistance equivalent to a warding amulet.

Skills:
Battle Continuation: B. It allows the user to continue fighting even through serious injuries and may even survive until they receive a clearly fatal blow.
Restart: B. The ability to escape battle. It can also return an unfavorable battle to the beginning (Turn 1) and leave the opponent with any injuries or weaknesses they may be experiencing.
Protection against arrows: D. The user may be able to dodge projectile weapons. However the user cannot defend against weapons thrown from a distance and cannot protect themselves from more than one weapon at a time.
Charisma: A. The ability to lead an army. More harsh orders can be given, though morale will fall.

Noble Phantasm
Field of Thorns:
Creates a field of stakes that impale any who isn't an ally and deals a single rank A+ wound to them. Those with a history of criminal activity, treason or an association with Islam will suffer an additional rank A wound.
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Army Noble Phantasm
Range:1-99
Maximum Target: 500 People

Furious Strike:
Takes his anger and performs a single piercing strike on them. If not immediately fatal the position of the spear and it's barbed edges will inflict further injuries (roughly rank B) on the victim if they attempt to struggle. During this time Vlad will be trapped along with his target and any attempts to remove his spear will require additional time.
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Personnel Noble Phantasm
Range-2-6
Maximum Target: 1 Person


Obviously no offense or intent to associate Islam with criminality or treason is intended. Just reflecting history.

Dullahan
March 25th, 2011, 06:07 AM
Name: Amir Arsalan
The hero Arsalan, King of Roum (Istanbul). Notable for slaying the demon Fulad-Zerah, and his witch mother.

Class: Saber
Alignment: Lawful Good
Gender: Male


Strength: A
Endurance: C
Agility: A
Magical Energy: D
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: A+

Noble Phantasm
Shamshir-e Zomorrodnegar
Demon Hunting Blade
The blade used to slay the demon Fulad-Zerah, formerly the property of King Solomon. Grants A-rank Magic Resistance to the bearer. In addition, wounds made by Shamshir-e Zomorrodnegar cannot be healed by conventional means.
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-personnel
Range: 1-5
Maximum Target: 1

Neir
March 25th, 2011, 05:00 PM
Eh, I want to post it again anyway.

True Name: Caim (Drakengard/Drag-on Dragoon)
The Prince of the Kingdom. Leader of the forces against the Empire and the Watchers. In a battle to defend the Goddess Furaie from the Empire, he was mortally wounded. In his captured castle he found a Red Dragon who had been shot from the sky and chained to the ground. So that both would live to continue fighting, they formed a pact, sharing each others' lives. When Caim is summoned, the Red Dragon is summoned as well, but remains in spirit form unless called by Caim (as Rider) to act as a telepathic translator to the Master. The Red Dragon does not need magical support from the Master, due to her nature as the Goddess Seal.

Class: Saber/Rider/Berserker
Alignment: Chaotic Good/Insane
Gender: Male

(Saber/Rider/Berserker)
Strength: A/B/A+(+)
Endurance: A/B/A+(+)
Agility: B/A/A+(+)
Magical Energy: A/C/A+(+)
Luck: C/C/B(+)
Noble Phantasm: D-B+/A++/C-A (Random)

Skills:
Eternal Arms Mastery: A
Able to bring the full power of any weapon he holds to bear. The result of having used so many types of weapons.

Riding: EX (lost as Berserker)
Possesses the ability to ride Dragons, as well as operate aircraft. No skill in ground-based machines.

Pact: A+
Caim has formed a pact with the Red Dragon Angelus. The price of the pact was his ability to vocalize in any way. In exchange, the two share a telepathic link, as well as physical powers. Caim's true power (as Saber or Berserker) comes not from his Noble Phantasm, but from his pact with the Red Dragon.

Mad Enhancement: A+
Caim's bloodlust and desire for revenge drive his power to absurd heights. When Mad Enhanced, all parameters are doubled. However, Caim will be largely uncontrollable by his Master until the enhancement is released.

Noble Phantasms
52 Weapons
Caim has access to the weapons he collected during his battle against the Empire, including the fearsome Hymir's Finger. The weapons are not all of the same quality, and his ability to use the magic of his staves is limited, due to his lack of magical training. When summoned as Berserker, Caim is unable to use any weapon but the longsword he received from his father, the King.
Rank: D-B
Type: Anti-personnel
Range: 1-15
Maximum Target: 1-25

Angelus (Rider only)
Red Dragon
Caim can summon the Red Dragon Angelus in her third evolution, her most powerful form outside of the Chaos Dragon. She is invulnerable to any attack below Rank B, and her fire alone can decimate a legion. Even if Caim is knocked from her back, she will continue to fight to protect him.
Rank: A++
Type: Anti-castle
Range: 5-100
Maximum Target: 1-400

Erlkonig
March 30th, 2011, 08:19 PM
Name: Ado Edem

Yeah, I was pretty lazy.:p

My own take.

Ado Edem (Notes)
Class: Saber
Alignment: Unkown Neutral
Gender: Presumably Male
The last hope of humanity, Ado Edem was a modified human known as an Ether Liner, who possessed a Demonic Sword called Slash Emperor. Ado Edem fought against the A-Rays (Human/Creature artificially created hybrids), but didn't stand out to the level of a hero. However, when beings far above any being on the world arrived on Earth, Ado Edem was one of the very few beings which could actually fight against them on his own, and defeat them. In the end, he saved humanity, and was proclaimed a hero by the will of man, though his cause of death is unknown.

STR: A+++
END: EX
AGI: A++
MGI: EX
LUK: A+ (You don't survive a nuke with E- luck)

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: A
Riding: E

Individual Skills:
Independent Action: A (Uses Grain to maintain oneself)
Levitation: A (Nullifies Gravity)
Prana Burst: A
Clairvoyance: C
Military Tactics: C
Pioneer of the Stars: EX (He fucking saved the world)
Vitrification: B

Noble Phantasms:
- ??????
Barrier
Rank: A+++
Ado Edem's armor which he carried in battle at all times. It is completely sealed, and outer conditions do not affect Ado Edem because of it. It is an armor that can only be pierced by a strength equal to that of a celestial body (Aristoteles), a weapon capable of exposing the truth (Anti-World), or something the likes of True Magic.
- The Sword That Consumes Stars ~ Slash Emperor
Anti-World
Rank: EX
Originally in the form of a seed, it grows into a ornate double-edged blade, each of the blades capable of extending to a length equal to the enemy's size. The place where the blades join and Ado Edem's arm is is enveloped by a white crystal-like material in the shape of roses. Though extremely beautiful, it projects the essence of what humanity does: Destroy the world to protect one. This is because Slash Emperor chips away at the ground of the world one is in to form the sword.
Range: Varies
Maximum Target: 1 (Can indirectly harm others)

---

Much more broken, and much more fitting.

Kieran
March 30th, 2011, 09:02 PM
Just a note - never hurts to name sources for your characters. Some are instantly recognisable, but others are not.

Erlkonig
March 30th, 2011, 09:10 PM
Well, Ado Edem is from Nasuverse. There, I wrote down where he's from next to him.

Gundam Meister
March 30th, 2011, 09:33 PM
Shana aka. "Flame-Haired Burning-Eyed Hunter (Shakugan No Shana)
Class Saber
STR: B+
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: A+
LUK: B
Noble Phantasm: A++

Class Skill

Magic Resistance C+
Riding : E

Individual Skills

Flight: A
Prana Burst B+


Noble Phantasm

Fuzetsu

Anti Army A+


Fuzetsu is the most common of all unrestricted spells, and it also refers to the special dimension the Method creates; here the Crimson Realm and the real world intermingles, and all sorts of causalities, including time, are stopped for ordinary living beings and Mages. Flame Hazes are able to create such seals at will. Battles in the seal can damage real world objects, and harm the paused living beings (it is possible to reverse the effects, if one uses enough Power of Existence). However, if the Seal is ever unlocked during a battle, the damage is irreparable (special objects are needed to be able to move in the seal)



Tenpa Jyousai Heaven-and-Earth Sundering

Dullahan
April 3rd, 2011, 09:12 AM
When it comes to being stupidly, brokenly overpowered, here's a contender:

Yukari Yakumo
Youkai of Boundaries (Touhou)
Class: Caster
STR: EX
END: EX
AGI: EX
MGI: EX
LUK: EX
Noble Phantasm: EX+++

Noble Phantasm
Reality Marble: Hakurei Border Paradigm
Anti-Reality EX+++

Actualizes Gensokyo onto the local area. Forces all opponents to abide by spell-card/danmaku rules for as long as the Reality Marble persists. All enemy attacks not permitted by danmaku rules will be denied. In addition, the mana cost of Unique Ability: Gap Formation is reduced to zero.

Erlkonig
April 3rd, 2011, 09:28 AM
EX doesn't have a multiplier. Just saying.

EnigmaticFellow
April 3rd, 2011, 11:22 AM
EX doesn't have a multiplier. Just saying.

Yukari manipulated the gaps between rankings so that the EX rank would also have multipliers.

Kidding aside, it really should just be EX.

Dullahan
April 4th, 2011, 05:08 AM
It should be. If only there was a ranking somewhere above EX...

Erlkonig
April 4th, 2011, 06:18 AM
An EX can perfectly be above other EX, they just can't be measured by Servant powerlevels.

Blackdeath6031
April 4th, 2011, 06:26 AM
All EX means is that its "off the scale", or is something that cannot be measured.



Name: Himura Kenshin
Class: Saber / Assassin
Strength: A+
Mana: D
Endurance: A
Noble Phantasm: ???
Agility: EX
Luck: B

Lawful Good

Noble Phantasm
Hiten Mitsurugi Ryuu
A sonic assassination sword style that aims to kill in as little time as possible.
Sakabatou
A reverse bladed sword that reduces his damage. However it also makes it more likely for his opponents to somehow becomes his comrades.

Abilities
Charisma/Leadership: B++
Riding: D
Presence Concealment: A
Magic Resistance: A

willyvereb
April 4th, 2011, 07:03 AM
The two profiles above have some seriously wanked up stats.
Since when did Yukari show any kind of super strength?
Same for Kenshin's strength. A+?
Like he has anything close to Berserker's power
Same for the EX agility. Fake Assassin would teach him the true instantaneous cut skill.
Also I don't remember him ever resisting magic. It's not like the Servants get extra abilities just because they are summoned for the Grail War.

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 03:52 PM
Bumping up the thread with a new Servant profile:

Name: Wade Wilson "But just call me Deadpool."
Class: Assassin NINJA! "iiiah!"

Stats:

Strength: C
Endurance: C++
Agility: B+
Magic: D
Luck: A+
"You are being a bit humble there, bro..."

Noble Phantasm:

- Doorknobs: Pair of guns that can assume any form and never run out of ammo. "OH YEAH!"

Rank: D "What? They're double EX, I'm tellin' you!"
Type: Anti-Unit "Remember kids, my gunz don't kill people... I kill people."
Maximum targets: 2 "...and anyone else getting in my way."

Class Skills:

Presence Concealment: E- "Ouch! that hurt man, really..."

Skills:

Battle Continuation: A

Mental Pollution: A "Is this a more sophisticated term for insane?"

Regeneration: B
Ability to quickly restore the self after sustaining damage. The Servant can automatically heal from serious wounds at the expense of prana. At such level the regeneration borders the realm of resurrection. Nothing save for the destruction of the spiritual core can permanently kill the Servant. Although overusing this skill may leave both the Servant and Master without any prana to use. "Hey, don't forget the pain! Regeneration friggin' hurts!"

Fictional Awareness: A
Ability to reach the mysterious "Fourth Wall" of Akasha.
It's a skill very close to the True Magic, achieved by mere chance. For A rank the Servant can not only understand its entity as fictional character but even able to converse with the Author. (You missed the best part! Those little yellow boxes are so amusing! ) Miraculously this so-called "Breaking the Fourth Wall" works without spending an ounce of prana.






















"WHAT? Is that all? Bro, it's so unfair. Where the hell is my background? You know being being homies with Cable and whatnot. Man, I even made the freakin' Big G envious of my size once. If you know what I mean..."

Tangerang
April 11th, 2011, 04:13 PM
The two profiles above have some seriously wanked up stats.
Since when did Yukari show any kind of super strength?
Same for Kenshin's strength. A+?
Like he has anything close to Berserker's power
Same for the EX agility. Fake Assassin would teach him the true instantaneous cut skill.
Also I don't remember him ever resisting magic. It's not like the Servants get extra abilities just because they are summoned for the Grail War.

Although, yukari could easily give herself super strength.

you know, boundary between strength and weakness or some random shit like that. boundary between slow and fast. boundary between whatever.

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 04:15 PM
Yet that doesn't count for regular strength.
You can just say that Archer has A+ strength because if he could just reproduce Berserker's sword with his strength.
Not to mention that Yukari NEVER showed such ability, even if she may. This suggestion borders the fanwank.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 04:18 PM
Yukari wouldn't even really need super stats.
She could just will you out of existence in a way.

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 04:22 PM
Yet she got her ass kicked by the Lunar forces.
Seriously, Yukari isn't the strongest in her verse. Neither she can just "will out you from existence".

Tangerang
April 11th, 2011, 04:24 PM
Well, she is a youkai?

Eh? tbh, we don't really much basis for how strong or weak her regular strength is.

we know Suika is probably the strongest (physically) in gensokyo, 'lol tearing down mountains with my bare hands, shattering the sky, ect.'

Also, Yamada Shiki (the emma with the ridiculously long name) is apparently surprisingly strong/powerful.


Yet she got her ass kicked by the Lunar forces.
Seriously, Yukari isn't the strongest in her verse. Neither she can just "will out you from existence".

I'm not too familiar with silent sinner in blue or whatever that was, but wasn't that on purpose so yuyuko go steal their sake or whatever? Or so I heard, haven't actually read it.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 04:25 PM
I think she wasn't even trying TBH.
She has the power to rewrite reality to her whims, she has powers that rival the god's.
Yet, why would she loose to a group of super smart youkai that are very afraid of death?
All in all, she was doing what she does best, trolling.

ringlhach
April 11th, 2011, 04:27 PM
Yukari wouldn't even really need super stats.
She could just will you out of existence in a way.

But would she bother?

EDIT: Bah. Fuggin' ninjas. Just like that firewall.

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 04:29 PM
Well, that's why we shouldn't just give her EX stats in everything. It isn't like she's physically far above any Servant. Her ability is a gamebreaker but that's obvious.
I remember hell having FTL speed though. Still Agility =/= speed as we know from Hassan's example.
Since she's a caster I think she should get D and C rank stats, save for Endurance maybe.
Magic and NP is obvious EX though.


I think she wasn't even trying TBH.
She has the power to rewrite reality to her whims, she has powers that rival the god's.
Yet, why would she loose to a group of super smart youkai that are very afraid of death?
All in all, she was doing what she does best, trolling.

Any proofs? That's just a fan excuse why she lose. Also I doubt Youkari has true reality warping powers. Altering and manipulating the boundaries is hax but not the kind that just erase you with a blink.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 04:31 PM
She doesn't really have a NP though.
Nothing is really notable about her weapon/item wise.

Well, except maybe that fucking parasol of hers.

ringlhach
April 11th, 2011, 04:33 PM
Well, that's why we shouldn't just give her EX stats in everything. It isn't like she's physically far above any Servant. Her ability is a gamebreaker but that's obvious.
I remember hell having FTL speed though. Still Agility =/= speed as we know from Hassan's example.
Since she's a caster I think she should get D and C rank stats, save for Endurance maybe.
Magic and NP is obvious EX though.

And maybe Territory Creation (http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Perfect_Cherry_Blossom:_Phantasm_Spell_Cards#Spell _Card_141).

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 04:34 PM
Well, her ability can be a Noble Phantasm as well.
Also she has Chen and Ran as her summons.
Remember Lancelot and Heracles had special abilities and techniques crystallized as NPs.
@ringlhach: Well, that's part of her "boundary manipulation" power.
Also as a caster she naturally gets that power.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 04:36 PM
Oh yeah, forgot about Heracles.

And what about Youmu?
She could prove to be extremely deadly.
You know, what with covering 200 yojana in a single slash.

Grant
April 11th, 2011, 04:36 PM
Name: Lina Inverse
A powerful sorceress specializing in destructive magic, she has acquired a reputation for utterly obliterating anything that gets in her way. Although her actions rarely result in the deaths of innocent people, this casual violence and her mercenary nature have led her to become very unpopular.

Class: Caster
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Gender: Female

Strength: D
Endurance: D
Agility: C
Magical Energy: A++
Noble Phantasm: EX

Class Abilities:
Territory Creation B: Can create a "Workshop" where all of her spells count as having the power of an additional verse.

Skills:
Spellcraft A: Through natural talent and years of experience Lina can easily understand the inner workings of a spell and how to adjust the incantations to allow for far greater effect than the common version.
Affinity for Chaos: From her long use of black magic and considerable studies all black magic spells Lina casts are counted as being one rank higher than they normally would be.

Noble Phantasm:
Dragon Slave: A black magic spell that calls on the power of one of the Mao-o, this is the most powerful and destructive of all black magic spells. If used too close to the caster it is quite likely to kill them in the blast, even with the use of barriers.
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Army Noble Phantasm
Range: 1-99
Maximum Target: 100 People

Demon's Blood Talismans:
Four stones of unknown origin that may be linked to the power of the four Mao-o. These stones greatly enhance magical power and allow users to cast spells that they normally would be unable to use.
Rank: A++
Type: Support Noble Phantasm
Range: 0
Maximum Target: 1 Person

Giga Slave: The ultimate spell from Lina's world that invokes the Lord of Chaos, possibly bringing the being into the world. Lina considers it only a spell to use if the world itself is at risk. As the spell threatens the world by its very nature, even beginning an attempt to cast it will result in an immediate response by the Counter Force.
Rank: ?
Type: Anti-World
Range: ?
Maximum Target: 1-?

ringlhach
April 11th, 2011, 04:36 PM
@ringlhach: Well, that's part of her "boundary manipulation" power.
Also as a caster she naturally gets that power.

Yeah, I know. Just because she's a Caster doesn't necessarily mean she's good at it, though.

Tangerang
April 11th, 2011, 04:36 PM
But we don't know her physical stats. She could be down there, she could be below Servant level, she could be above servant level, who the hell knows, there aren't many feats to compare her to. We know that she's considered the among the most powerful of youkai, and has connection/is probably around the same level as Yuyuko and Suika.

Also, about the can't will you out of existence thing. Perfect Memento notes that she can also 'manipulate the boundary between fact and fiction' and she can easily destroy all of Gensokyo with ease. but just manipulating fact and fiction seems like it could easily be 'lol erase person from existence'.

And I'd say Suika deserves Ex ranked Str? Or at least A+++?

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 04:38 PM
What about Yuuka?
Has the Ultimate magic and it probably powerful enough physically to take on Suika or Yugi.

Tangerang
April 11th, 2011, 04:41 PM
Any proofs? That's just a fan excuse why she lose. Also I doubt Youkari has true reality warping powers. Altering and manipulating the boundaries is hax but not the kind that just erase you with a blink.

So, she didn't stage that entire invasion on purpose just to create a distraction so yuyuko could steal the lunarians treasure/sake?

Or do you mean the first invasion, where she let her youkai army get routed on purpose to teach them a lesson about greed and expansionism?

hmm? I know the latter was pretty much heavily implied in canon side materials.

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 04:41 PM
I heard some calcs on Heracles's mythological feat. Notably holding up the entire sky in place of Atlas.
The conclusion was that it about equals the strength to smash a mountain with brute force.
Yeah, he never did show that. Just noting. Although it can be cause of the "lol Servants are weaker than the original" thing as even Illya's output were insufficient to power such monstrous force.

By the way I can see the later inhibiting Suika to show her full power. So anywhere from A+ to EX, I guess.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 04:45 PM
Yukari's probably old enough to have trolled a baby Gilgamesh.

Satehi
April 11th, 2011, 04:46 PM
YOU CAN'T CALCULATE SOMETHING LIKE THAT, YOU ARE ALREADY HOLDING UP THE SKY

although, I guess you could say atlas = zeus who can throw mountains, but powerlevels don't always work that way

/raeg

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 04:53 PM
Well, the calculation included the weight of the entire Earth's atmosphere and the result was about as high as a nuke.
By the way, it's physically easier to lift a mountain than outright destroy it with a punch.

eddyak
April 11th, 2011, 05:00 PM
Perfect Memento notes that she can also 'manipulate the boundary between fact and fiction' and she can easily destroy all of Gensokyo with ease. but just manipulating fact and fiction seems like it could easily be 'lol erase person from existence'.
Doesn't this mean she could pull the likes of Sasaki Kojiro and Eva Unit 01 out of her arse?

Tangerang
April 11th, 2011, 05:01 PM
My god, I am ashamed to realize that we are having a debate about touhou powerlevels, yet nobody thinks to even mention the strongest!

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8149/cirno4.jpg

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 05:01 PM
Doesn't this mean she could pull the likes of Sasaki Kojiro and Eva Unit 01 out of her arse?


She probably can.

Gundam Meister
April 11th, 2011, 05:08 PM
Name: Fiamma of The Right
Class: Caster

Strength: A
Endurance: A++
Agility: B
Magical Energy: EX
Noble Phantasm: EX


Class Skill

Territory Creation A+ : Allows Fiamma to call forth the Star of Bethlehem and Archangel Gabriel and also allow Fiamma full control over the Holy Right

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 05:12 PM
Name: Fiamma of The Right
Class: Caster

Strength: A
Endurance: A++
Agility: B
Magical Energy: EX
Noble Phantasm: EX


Class Skill

Territory Creation A+ : Allows Fiamma to call forth the Star of Bethlehem and Archangel Gabriel and also allow Fiamma full control over the Holy Right

>Fiamma
>Caster
>A strength
>A++ endurance
>EX magic energy and NP

AHAHAHAHAHA
NO

Mazyrian
April 11th, 2011, 05:20 PM
So, she didn't stage that entire invasion on purpose just to create a distraction so yuyuko could steal the lunarians treasure/sake?

Or do you mean the first invasion, where she let her youkai army get routed on purpose to teach them a lesson about greed and expansionism?

hmm? I know the latter was pretty much heavily implied in canon side materials.

Where was this second thing said?
I've read Silent Sinner in Blue, and in it Yukari openly states that she has no chances against the Lunarians, and the whole distracting them to steal something was because it was the best she could do.

(BTW, in another place she says that even ganging up with Yuyuko and Reimu they wouldn't stand a chance against Shikieki, so there is another powerhouse)

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 05:23 PM
I think it's a bluff.

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 05:35 PM
Magical defenses aren't counted for endurance. Fiama is C-B rank at best. Since he's Caster, I would go with the former.
Strength is E class since he really never exercised or faced serious hardships.
Agility is probably C or B.
You were right on the EX magic and Noble Phantasm though.

Tangerang
April 11th, 2011, 05:47 PM
...reads some random other pieces of touhou tidbits.

huh, NASA fought a war against the lunarians?

Neil Armstrong confirmed for THE STRONGEST!?

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 05:48 PM
So just because he has the the powers of an Archangel he's given EX rank?

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 05:53 PM
Well, he can pretty much life-wipe Eurasia while just recently got depowered, withstood the force of 3 city-wiping lasers and the Holy Right has lightspeed auto lock-on that utterly annihilates the target without any sign of movement or destructive force.

Fiama at full power was said to be stronger than even God (hyperbole), could turn an entire star to dust, had the knowledge of countless magic grimiores from Index and was able to conduct any miracle on the planet.
He IS the personification of hax in the ToAru verse.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 05:59 PM
And yet he'd still die from Fragle rock or Gae Bolg.

Neir
April 11th, 2011, 06:00 PM
And yet he'd still die from Fragle rock or Gae Bolg.

Or a regular knife to the face, I'd bet.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 06:02 PM
Or from warping reality to make his right arm non-existent.
Or just cutting it off entirely.

Tangerang
April 11th, 2011, 06:03 PM
Quick warning, just in case, if you're going to bring up spoilers from To Aru, remember to SPOILER THAT SHIT :p

thank you.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 06:05 PM
Blah blah blah FRAGLE ROCK blah blah GAE BLOG blah words words blah CaladbolgII!
TSUBAME GAESHI blah blah HRUNTING blah blah The Gate to that one Temple that Sasaki guards..

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 06:08 PM
Well, he has divine robes at the same level as Index's Walking Church at least.
It can survive a nuke or allow to withstand the surface heat of the Sun for 3 entire days. So bullets would be utterly mundane on him. Not to mention he's about as fast as Kanzaki or even Aqua.
So he has a thick magic force field which I doubt Gae Bolg can pierce.
Add that the Holy Right is capable of shielding him from incoming attacks, like it protected him against the lasers which he had no way to perceive. Yet the defense reacted with ease.

He can also use the Holy Right's ability to not just teleport his attacks but even himself. He can pass great distances that way.

In conclusion: anything save for Ryougi getting a cheap shot on this guy would not even make him flinch. Fiama is just that ridiculously overpowered.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 06:10 PM
There is no defense for Gae Bolg, and you can't even avoid it.
It reverses the laws of casualty.
The only way to survive and not be pierced in the heart is to have ABSURDLY high luck.
And there's only 1 person in INDEX that has that.

Tangerang
April 11th, 2011, 06:10 PM
And people still don't SPOILER THAT SHIT.

Jeez.

Optimus
April 11th, 2011, 06:15 PM
Lancer
True Name: Celtcháir mac Uetchar
Sex: Male
Allignment: True Neutral
Height/Weight: 2.02 m/77 kg

Attributes:

STR: B
END: C
AGI: B+
MGI: C
LCK: D

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance, Rank B
Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for him to be affected.

Personal Skills:

Eye of the Mind (True), Rank C
Heightened insight that was refined through experience. At this rank, the Servant can calmly analyze situations and predict the best outcome execpt in emotionally challenging battles.

Rune Magic, Rank A
Knowledge about the Rune Magecraft originated from Northern Europe. At this rank, the user is capable of using the 18 primordial runes and their combinations.

Battle Continuation, Rank B
Strength of vitality for predicaments. Also, the ability to withdraw from combat and reach allied territory alive after being defeated. Makes it possible to survive and fight when inflicted grievous wounds as long as they are not asbolutely deadly (That is, if none of the spirit cores are hit during battle).

Noble Phantasms:

Lúin of Celtchair. Anti-Unit. Number of Targets: 1-3 AoE: 10. Rank C+.
The version of the curse Celtchair normally uses. By creating a bounded field all across the spear using all the possible combinations of the 18 primordial runes, he manages to restrain the deadly curse put over it so it won't accidentally destroy him during normal battles; but even so, it is so powerful that still manifests by burning from the tip and dealing wounds that take longer to heal.

Luín of Celtchair. Anti-Personnel. Number of Targets: 1-7. AoE: 10000. Rank A.
The fully unleashed cursed spear owned by the Grey Hero of the Ulster house. When activated, this spear's curse will reverse the destiny of up to seven enemies making them "dead" and impale their hearts. Unlike other cursed spears, whose power can be avoided by using a shield with sufficient prana, the only way to prenvent being killed is to have greater capabilities than the spear's curse to change one's fate due to the sheer viciouness of the spear: if it's stopped, it will simply seek the enemy's rear.

It has, however, a great drawback, and it's that the curse is so strong that it will also affect the owner reducing all its parameters by one for a duration of up to four days.

Here's Cú Chulainn's friend~

Neir
April 11th, 2011, 06:15 PM
Thank you for not being Touhou.

Also, very interested, and quite balanced. If anything, he might be a bit weak. Either way, nice.

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 06:15 PM
There is no defense for Gae Bolg, and you can't even avoid it.
It reverses the laws of casualty.
The only way to survive and not be pierced in the heart is to have ABSURDLY high luck.
And there's only 1 person in INDEX that has that.
No, Gae Bolg can be stopped by a strong enough magic defense (thick block of prana). Remember Lancer can only pass God hand if he amps up his power via runes. Divine Robers are exactly that.

And who's the luckiest guy in ToAru? Fiama
before he got his illusions broken *laugh*


And people still don't SPOILER THAT SHIT.

Jeez.
I didn't mention any plot points. Just the pure power of Fiama of the Right. If I bring up something spoiler-worthy I will mark that accordingly.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 06:22 PM
I thought Shiage was the luckiest.
You know, what with Beating a powerful level 5 despite being a level 0

And, What about Fragle Rock?

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 06:28 PM
Well, Shiage is simply just that good.
Mugino was also pretty arrogant both times and the situation had a little PIS. By that reasoning Touma would be the luckiest guy for surviving many high-end fights. Hell, he even defeated this Fiama mentioned above. Although he had to asspull a new yet unknown ability to succeed, not to mention the background assistance from a bunch of people.
Fiama on the other hand:
Literally suffered no hardships in his entire life. He's just like Gilgamesh in that sense, including even his super-arrogant attitude.

Satehi
April 11th, 2011, 06:31 PM
Holy Right adjusts power according to his opponent, so in one sense he never uses his ace but in another he is always using it?


Well, the calculation included the weight of the entire Earth's atmosphere and the result was about as high as a nuke.


Doesn't work that way.

Applying real world science to this would mean that the atmosphere is:
currently known mass + whatever Hercules/Atlas carries= atmosphere
in which case the second value is unknown.

Lotus Saint
April 11th, 2011, 06:38 PM
What is the limit to Fiamma's defensive robe thingy?


And just to tease Neir.
Utsuho would probably be absurdly over-powered.

willyvereb
April 11th, 2011, 07:08 PM
Unknown. He tanked three city-busting lasers via the Holy Right's auto-defense. His robes should be as good as the Poppe if not better
The Pope blocked a city-buster spell with his body to save the people and he survived, even if it cost him his divine robe.
God's Right Seat is above the Pope in authority and as such should get better defense. Especially their leader, Fiama.

Huntring
April 11th, 2011, 07:30 PM
Since we are on the topic of ToAru verse broken characters I might as will post another broken character. Take note that if you have not yet read the Light Novels do not appoarch as this will spoil you.



Name: Accelerator
Class: Assassin (Fake)
Sex: Male
Allignment: Choatic Good

Strength: E Endurance: E Agility: E
Luck: C Magical Energy: E Noble Phantasm: EX

Class Abilities:
Presence Concealment: E

Personal Skills:
Eye of the Mind (True): B
Battle Continuation: A
Bravery: B

Noble Phantasm:
AIM Field [vector control]: The ability to control vector due to one's Personal Reality. With this Accelerator can redirect any physical attacks and cause damage to the attacker. Due to his strong AIM Field it also serve's as a Anti-Magic defense capable of stopping any attack with a equal to or lesser rank than A+ Noble Phantasm. Even attacks that are equal to or greater than A+ will get their strength reduced greatly. He can also use his ability to control the vector's of objects ranging from making a rock fly at sonic speeds to creating a plasma storm. He can also apply this ability to himself to boast his speed and strength to A and also could use this ability for flight. The possibilities of this ability is near endless.
Rank: A+++
Type: Anti-Fortess (it varies depending on the usuage though)
Range: Varies
Maximum Target: Varies

White Wings [He Who Wields a Piece of Power That Equates to God]: The power that Accelerator gains after evolving into something akin to a angel. With this he gains Divinity:A+++ and is capable of controlling Imaginery Vectors as well as projecting a Vector Mist that blocks any attack that is not equal to a Anti World attack. Even a Anti-World attack's power is decreased greatly.
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-World
Range: Varies
Maximum Target: Varies


Take note that I have been vague on what his White Wings could do since it has not been revealed yet. Thus I used the powers that the Black Wings had because I assumed that the White Wings is only a improvement of the Black Wings. I made Accelerator a Fake Assassin because that's the only class that fits given that he was something similar to a assassin when working with Group and no other class fits him.

Satehi
April 11th, 2011, 07:34 PM
He could be a berserker, as that is what he normally is in BW.

Huntring
April 11th, 2011, 07:37 PM
But this is the White Wing version. Besides Accelerator needs a cool head to do his vector calculation. As a Berserker he would be super weak.

Grant
April 11th, 2011, 08:22 PM
Name: Aqua
A Keyblade wielder famed just as much for her beauty as her skill in magic she feels a great devotion to her friends and anger at the darkness that has caused them so much pain. Aqua is often the voice of reason and responsibility, seeking the best way to make everyone happy.

Class: Caster
Alignment: Lawful Good

Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Magical Energy: A+
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Abilities:
Item Creation A: Aqua can create any magical tools she needs and even fuse tools and spells to create new ones.

Skills:
Quickcasting: Through long study and the aid of her Keyblade Aqua can cast a spell simply by calling its name, greatly reducing the amount of time before she can cast another spell.
Recharge: This skill allows Aqua to use the same spell in less than half the time they normally take, sometimes reducing it to mere seconds.
Elemental Boost: Aqua's experience with magic and use of helpful items boosts the power of her spells. Thunder, Ice and Fire spells gain increased damage from this.
Reflect: By concentrating Aqua can create a barrier all around her that sends attacks back at her enemies. Only the most powerful of attacks can break through Reflect.

Noble Phantasm:
Brightcrest: An advanced Keyblade that grants additional strength, reach and magical power. Aqua can also use it as a device to fly on.
Rank: A
Type: Anti-personnel Noble Phantasm
Range: 1-3
Maximum Target: 1

Command Styles: By using multiple spells of certain types closely together Aqua can actually charge her powers and cover herself in magic, allowing her to do many things from illusions and increased speed to creating a massive blade of light as large as Aqua herself.
Rank: A+
Type: Support Noble Phantasm
Range: 0
Maximum Target: 1

MssrNeko
April 11th, 2011, 09:32 PM
Here's one; the original Caster, lol.

Servant: Caster
True Name: Zarathustra (Zoroaster)
Alignment: True Neutral

Strength: E
Endurance: D
Magic: EX
Agililty: C
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: EX

Class Abilities

Item Construction: A

-Zarathustra is capable of creating any magical item from potions to magical texts

Territory Creation: A

-Zarathustra is capable of creating a "Temple"

Skills

High-Speed Divine Words: A+

-Coming from the beginning of the Age of Gods, Zarathustra can use HSDW to instanteously cast his spells

Sorcery: EX

-Credited with "inventing" magic, Zarathustra is peerless in magical prowess

Noble Phantasms

Asha Divine Truth
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Evil
Range: 1-50
Target: 500

By invoking the name of the creator spirit, Ahura Mazda, Zarathustra is capable of using the Amesha Spenta, the seven guardians of creation. Appearing as personages wrapped in scarlet flames, these spirits will seek out evil-affliated Servants and destroy them with the fires of Creation and pure truth.

Druj Corrupted Falsehood
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Good
Range: 1-50
Target: 500

By invoking the name of Angra Mainyu, the anti-thesis of Ahura Mazda and deity of destrution, Zarathustra is capable of summoning the seven Daevas. Appearing as personages of black, murky water, these wraiths will seek out good-affliated Servants and destroy them with the corruption of Angra Mainyu.

Neir
April 11th, 2011, 10:36 PM
Ah, I finally found a good pic for Caim.

http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/103/0eee95f7512e538b103c7fa.jpg

Ruca_Milda
April 11th, 2011, 11:08 PM
Re-post:

Senel Coolidge
Class: Rider
Strength: B-A (Punched a god that could destroy the world given time, and fucking threw her around for god's sake)
Endurance: B-A (See above, resisted blows from a god)
Agility: C (Ehh...not many speed feats I think)
Magical energy: E ( Shit MGI.)
Luck: E-D (His luck is what put him in most of the horrible situations in Legendia.)

Noble Phantasms:

Sacred Erens (Rank....possibly B-EX, I dunno)

....It helps him punch things in the face? Thanks to this, he can accomplish many strength feats, like defeating a god and adding elements to his attacks.

Skills:

Riding - E-C? (He's good with vehicles, but I don't think he's anywhere near B...C at most if I fanwank as much as possible)

Instinct - B-A ( Participated in many battles, was shown to do feats akin to Saber's instinct)

Battle Continuation - C-B (Many, many times, I thought he was going to die on certain scenes and the motherfucker just came back alive. The wounds were nowhere close to something Lancer or Berserker suffer, though, so rankdown)

Mike1984
April 12th, 2011, 03:26 AM
Well, he has divine robes at the same level as Index's Walking Church at least.
It can survive a nuke or allow to withstand the surface heat of the Sun for 3 entire days. So bullets would be utterly mundane on him. Not to mention he's about as fast as Kanzaki or even Aqua.
So he has a thick magic force field which I doubt Gae Bolg can pierce.
Add that the Holy Right is capable of shielding him from incoming attacks, like it protected him against the lasers which he had no way to perceive. Yet the defense reacted with ease.

He can also use the Holy Right's ability to not just teleport his attacks but even himself. He can pass great distances that way.

In conclusion: anything save for Ryougi getting a cheap shot on this guy would not even make him flinch. Fiama is just that ridiculously overpowered.

In which case those things would all be Noble Phantasms which he possesses. None of them increase his actual endurance.


Applying real world science to this would mean that the atmosphere is:
currently known mass + whatever Hercules/Atlas carries= atmosphere
in which case the second value is unknown.

Applying real-world science to it means concluding that there is nothing for Heracles to carry, and even if there were he wouldn't be able to carry it due to it being gaseous.

willyvereb
April 12th, 2011, 03:29 AM
^See my posts above. I said the exact same thing.
Fiama has C rank endurance at best. His haxes though are more than enough for compensation.

Optimus
April 12th, 2011, 05:47 AM
And here goes another, this time it's none other than one of the Twelve Peers...

Saber
True Name: Oliver of Vienne
Sex: Male
Allignment: Lafwul Good
Height/Weight: 1.73 m/65 kg

Attributes:

STR: B+
END: B
AGI: B
MGI: C+
LCK: C
NP: B

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance, Rank B
Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for him to be affected.

Personal Skills:

Eye of The Mind (True), Rank A
Heightened insight that was refined through experience. At this rank, the Servant has been in so many crucial battles that he is able to devise a plan and execute it no matter which is the situation to turn the tables in his favor. In the level of bringing forth a miracle.

Protection from the Faith, Rank C
A Skill possessed only by those who have sacrificed themselves for a religious view. Despite being a form of divine protection, it is not a blessing from a higher existence. It is only the absoluteness of one's body and soul, which is born from faith. At this rank, damage dealt to the Servant through normal attacks or magecraft will be lessened by half.

Battle Continuation, Rank C
Strength of vitality for predicaments. Also, the ability to withdraw from combat and reach allied territory alive after being defeated. At this rank the Servant can keep on fighting or withdraw from a battle even when having recieved a crippling blow, doing so with effort and will.

Instinct, Rank C
The power to "feel" the most favorable developments for oneself during battle. At this rank, this resembles a formidable sixth sense that reduces by a sixth any obstacles of vision and hearing.

Noble Phantasm:

Halteclair, [The Clear Heavens Sword], Anti-Personnel. AoE: 10. Number of Targets: 1-5. Rank B.
This sword was awarded to Oliver by Roland as proof of their friendship, in a similar fashion Charlemagne granted Roland Durandal as proof of theirs. This sword's pommel has a crystal engraved on it, which grants the user the ability to see through all the enemy's schemes and attacks, the strength to launch the proper counter attack or the agility to avoid them.

Enjoy~

Mazyrian
April 12th, 2011, 10:46 AM
I don't know in which thread to post this, so I'll post it in both. Ha!

Shaka Virgo (Saint Seiya)
Class: Saver (As in, Fate/Extra Saver)
Alignment: Lawful Neutral

STR: A (Shaka doesn't show it much, but thanks to the Cosmo Saints are pretty strong)
END: C (It was said repeatedly that save for the Cloth Saints weren't more durable than a really trained human)
AGI: EX (The whole moving at the speed of light thing)
MGI: A++ (If the Cosmo is translated as magic, Gold Saints should have a pretty high stat)
LCK: D (Not particularly lucky or unlucky, I think)
NP: A

Skills:

Telekinesis: A+ (He can control enemies bodies, destroy Clothes, and could have returned form another, eh, dimension thingy?)
8th sense: C (Not as much as Deathmask, I'd guess) He can travel to the world of the death

Noble Phantasms:

The Gold Cloth of Virgo
Class: Anti-unit
Rank: C (Or maybe lower? God Hand is B, and this isn't close)
One of the twelve golden armors for the Saints of Athena, they are at the top of the class in durability.

Tenbu Hourin - The Treasure of Heaven
Class: Anti-unit
Rank: A
The maximum technique of Shaka, he opens his usually closed eyes to unleash his full Cosmo and removes in quick succession the opponent's five senses and even the sixth one, the mind, turning them into essentially living corpses, completely disabling them.

Tobias
April 12th, 2011, 10:52 AM
awwww....I miss the old lucy one I did.


but, 30 seconds of skimming google catch is all I have the energy for.


meh.

Gundam Meister
April 12th, 2011, 12:39 PM
Tendou Souji aka Kamen Rider Kabuto

Class : Rider

Strength : A+
AGI : EX
END : B
MGI: D
LCK : B
NP : EX

Class Skill

Riding C+ : Rider as the ability to ride all forms modern vehicles at this level but prefers to use is own personal Motorbike the Kabuto Extender

Ruca_Milda
April 12th, 2011, 03:11 PM
Ryougi Shiki

STR: EX
END: EX
AGI: EX
MGI: EX
LCK: EX
NP: EX

I kid, I kid. :P

Asras/Asura (Tales of Innocence)
Saber


STR: EX (Broke a fucking unbreakable sword. UNBREAKABLE.)
END: A++
AGI: A++
MGI: E, possibly D-. Not many feats on this.
LCK: E ( His luck is mostly what brought his end...)
NP: A

Skills:

Magic Resistance: B

Battle Continuation: A

Charisma : A

Divinity: B-A, possibly. This one is a bit of on the ehhh side, I don't remember if he clearly had Divinity.

Instinct: A

NP's:

Name: Durandal
Rank: A
Class: Anti-Unit

In ToI, forged by a blacksmith that can accomplish miracles(again a bit ehhh on this side). This version of Durandal can even speak and has a mind of it's own.

willyvereb
April 12th, 2011, 03:30 PM
Nah, Shirou broke Gilgamesh's unbreakable Noble Phantasms BY DOZENS. That's not a big deal in the Nasuverse which runs on the Beyond the Impossible trope.

Gundam Meister
April 12th, 2011, 03:31 PM
Lloyd Irving ( Tales Of Symphonia)

Class : Saber

STR: B
END: C
AGI: A
MGI: D
LCK: C
NP: EX


Class Skill

Magic Resistance : B

Battle Continuation: C

Charisma : C+

Divinity C+

Instinct C+

NP's:



Name : Material Blade

Rank B+

Type : Anti Unit

A Pair of swords of Flame and Ice that empowers Lloyds attacks with flame and ice


Name : Falcon Crest

Rank : A+

Type Anti Fortress


A special skill that Lloyd can use by joining the Matarial Blades together when use it creates a pillar of destructive mana covering an area of 400 meters in diameter




Eternal Sword

Rank: EX

Type: Anti World


A sword which allow Lloyd to cleave apart the very of fabric Time and Space apart and also can be used travel back in time and cleave a world in half and uniting it again

Name: Exphere, Angelus Project

Rank: A+/A++

Type: Anti-unit

The Expheres are artifacts that empowers the user body to superhuman levels, making them more resilient, stronger, quicker, with better reflexes and better regeneration and use of mana. The Angelus project is one of the more powerful Expheres, being an experiment to make a Cruxis Cristal. After having absorved the might of a Cruxis Crystal, the Angelus project is even stronger than a Cruxis Crystal.
Enhance all parameters by a rank, the regeneration and magic resistance, grants Clairvoyance(E), a pair of wings that can be summoned at will, and a series of Skills, depending of the configuration of the Exphere and the exgems.

willyvereb
April 12th, 2011, 03:48 PM
Well, I didn't play Symphonia so I don't know his feats but:


STR: B+ (Broke a fucking unbreakable sword. UNBREAKABLE.)
END: B+
AGI: A+
MGI: D
LCK: C
NP: EX
You used a little too much "+"-es here. To break it down:
- How much that sword was considered unbreakable? I mean feats of it never breaking. Diarmuid who had B rank strength could snap his Noble Phantasm in two with ease.
- B+ endurance? Archer was literally skewered by Gil yet and survived for a late payback. Yet he was just C rank in endurance. Is he kind of like Shirou who cannot be put down for good?

-A+ Agility? So he's at the same level as Assassin? That sounds fishy, really.


Class Skill

Magic Resistance : B+

Battle Continuation: B

Charisma : A

Divinity C+

Instinct B+

I think you are a little hasty on the battle continuation and instinct. Especially the later since it would mean he had precog-like ability to sense danger. Again I don't know his feats so...
Also Saber class or not B rank magic resistance is a little much, unless he really did show to resist spells.

Name : Falcon Crest


Rank : A+

Type Anti Unit


A special skill that Lloyd can use by joining the Matarial Blades together when use it creates a pillar of destructive mana covering an area of 400 meters in diameter
This Noble Phantasm should be at least Anti-Army, if not outright an Anti-Fortress in category. Also you should just put it under the Material Blades as a special skill. Just like Excalibur and Excaliblast aren't two different NPs.

That's all. Sorry for nitpicking but somehow the mood got me.

Gundam Meister
April 12th, 2011, 03:53 PM
Well, I didn't play Symphonia so I don't know his feats but:

You used a little too much "+"-es here. To break it down:
- How much that sword was considered unbreakable? I mean feats of it never breaking. Diarmuid who had B rank strength could snap his Noble Phantasm in two with ease.
- B+ endurance? Archer was literally skewered by Gil yet and survived for a late payback. Yet he was just C rank in endurance. Is he kind of like Shirou who cannot be put down for good?

-A+ Agility? So he's at the same level as Assassin? That sounds fishy, really.



I think you are a little hasty on the battle continuation and instinct. Especially the later since it would mean he had precog-like ability to sense danger. Again I don't know his feats so...
Also Saber class or not B rank magic resistance is a little much, unless he really did show to resist spells.

Name : Falcon Crest


This Noble Phantasm should be at least Anti-Army, if not outright an Anti-Fortress in category. Also you should just put it under the Material Blades as a special skill. Just like Excalibur and Excaliblast aren't two different NPs.

That's all. Sorry for nitpicking but somehow the mood got me.

i edited it so what about now

Ergast
April 12th, 2011, 04:14 PM
Lloyd have skills to protect and reduce magic damage by about 90% so MR rank B is well earned, and he has very good instincts, bordering, sometimes, the precog. Though battle continuation may be a bit too high. I would set it at C at most (he is a determinator, just not that determinator, and he can survive killing blows from time to time)

Falcon Crest should be, if anything, under the Eternal Sword, as it is a technique created when he joins the Material blades and forms the Eternal Sword to attack his enemies (in game battle) But seeing how he can use it, (or at least a variant) in Dawn of a new world, where he doesn't have neither the Material Blades nor the Eternal Sword, and that Abbyssion can use it with the Nebilim blades I'll say its a technique that doesn't depend on the Material Blades.

Besides that, I would lower Lloyd's charisma to C+ or B at most. He is charismatic, but not that charismatic.

And I would add another NP:

Name: Exphere, Angelus Project

Rank: A+/A++ (I'm not sure)

Type: Anti-unit

The Expheres are artifacts that empowers the user body to superhuman levels, making them more resilient, stronger, quicker, with better reflexes and better regeneration and use of mana. The Angelus project is one of the more powerful Expheres, being an experiment to make a Cruxis Cristal. After having absorved the might of a Cruxis Crystal, the Angelus project is even stronger than a Cruxis Crystal.
Enhance all parameters by a rank, the regeneration and magic resistance, grants Clairvoyance(E), a pair of wings that can be summoned at will, and a series of Skills, depending of the configuration of the Exphere and the exgems.

And about Lloyd's Agi... I wouldn't say that rank A was too high. At the end of the game he is just that good. Not Kojiroh's level good, but he reach Cu Chulain's level.


About Asras... I can't really talk. Besides being known as the strongest warrior of the Daevas in his time, I don't know enough (I have to finish Innocence one of this days), but I'll say that his agi is a bit too high (Lloyd is way more quick and has more finesse than him, and at least as skillful).

About his Strength... He is strong, but I don't think he is stronger than Herc. Again, I can't say it for sure (the matter about Agi I can, as at the beggining you can use him, and comparing him with Lloyd, the later is more graceful and quick)

willyvereb
April 12th, 2011, 04:17 PM
Well, you did lower them but...
Okay, the stats look fine. Skills aren't bad either.
Did you read the last part of my post though?
I mentioned combining the Material Blade with the Falcon Crest and reclassiying it to anti-fortress Noble Phantasm. Leveling everything in 400 meter radius is pretty much that category.

Gundam Meister
April 12th, 2011, 04:32 PM
Lloyd have skills to protect and reduce magic damage by about 90% so MR rank B is well earned, and he has very good instincts, bordering, sometimes, the precog. Though battle continuation may be a bit too high. I would set it at C at most (he is a determinator, just not that determinator, and he can survive killing blows from time to time)

Falcon Crest should be, if anything, under the Eternal Sword, as it is a technique created when he joins the Material blades and forms the Eternal Sword to attack his enemies (in game battle) But seeing how he can use it, (or at least a variant) in Dawn of a new world, where he doesn't have neither the Material Blades nor the Eternal Sword, and that Abbyssion can use it with the Nebilim blades I'll say its a technique that doesn't depend on the Material Blades.

Besides that, I would lower Lloyd's charisma to C+ or B at most. He is charismatic, but not that charismatic.

And I would add another NP:

Name: Exphere, Angelus Project

Rank: A+/A++ (I'm not sure)

Type: Anti-unit

The Expheres are artifacts that empowers the user body to superhuman levels, making them more resilient, stronger, quicker, with better reflexes and better regeneration and use of mana. The Angelus project is one of the more powerful Expheres, being an experiment to make a Cruxis Cristal. After having absorved the might of a Cruxis Crystal, the Angelus project is even stronger than a Cruxis Crystal.
Enhance all parameters by a rank, the regeneration and magic resistance, grants Clairvoyance(E), a pair of wings that can be summoned at will, and a series of Skills, depending of the configuration of the Exphere and the exgems.

And about Lloyd's Agi... I wouldn't say that rank A was too high. At the end of the game he is just that good. Not Kojiroh's level good, but he reach Cu Chulain's level.


About Asras... I can't really talk. Besides being known as the strongest warrior of the Daevas in his time, I don't know enough (I have to finish Innocence one of this days), but I'll say that his agi is a bit too high (Lloyd is way more quick and has more finesse than him, and at least as skillful).

About his Strength... He is strong, but I don't think he is stronger than Herc. Again, I can't say it for sure (the matter about Agi I can, as at the beggining you can use him, and comparing him with Lloyd, the later is more graceful and quick)

You dont mind if put this the Lloyd post

Ruca_Milda
April 12th, 2011, 04:53 PM
I'm a ToI junkie, as you can see. :3

Also, most of Asras's feats are shown on the flashbacks near end-game and he's shown to be pretty strong. I didn't notice I posted STR as EX, though....I thought I had put it as A. Damn it Ryougi, stop haunting me! D:

And....Gilgamesh's swords had a concept of not being broken since when...? At least I don't think I remember anything like that.

EDIT: Random MSN comment about Asras, his soldiers were really useless so he soloed most of the wars along with Virtra/Hermana? Something like that? Just something someone else remembers hearing about.

willyvereb
April 12th, 2011, 05:00 PM
Noble Phantasms are divine or demonic weapons with ridiculous strudiness. The description of Prana Burst said that any normal weapon would break under Saber's enhanced strength. Yet Noble Phantasms can withstand it with ease. (Oh well, even Sasaki's non-NP sword by the way. But he's just that good, I guess...:p)

Ruca_Milda
April 12th, 2011, 05:04 PM
Yeah, but they're just really really really tough.

Durandal, technically, has the concept of not ever being broken.

Also, all this reminds me of the one thing I thought was awesome about him: His RAAAAAAAAAAEGGGGGG at being betrayed by his own lover, and stabbed with his own sword who was also collaborating with his own lover to kill him, somehow made a really fucking uber monster that managed to form an organization and Xanatos everyone.

But...I'm a bit biased so better ask someone else. >_>;

Ergast
April 12th, 2011, 05:34 PM
You dont mind if put this the Lloyd post

Sure, that's why I posted it XD

But you still kept the "Anti-unit" in the Falcon Crest, and you forgot to put the name of the NP I suggested.

Gundam Meister
April 12th, 2011, 05:42 PM
Sure, that's why I posted it XD

But you still kept the "Anti-unit" in the Falcon Crest, and you forgot to put the name of the NP I suggested.

Thanks and i added the name and change Falcon Crest from Anti Unit to Anti Fortress

Tangerang
April 12th, 2011, 05:49 PM
Let's try this

Name: Captain Falcon
Class: Racer
Alignment: Lawful Good?

STR: A
END: C
AGI: EX
MGI: D
LCK: D
NP: EX

Skills:

Falcon techniques: Can light himself on fire for his attacks. His own fire does not burn him.

Noble Phantasms:

Show your moves! (Rank B: Anti-Unit): A taunt which forces the enemies to either unleash their strongest attack, or show their chest for some reason.

FALCON PUNCH! (Rank EX: Anti World): FALCON PUNCH

Erlkonig
April 12th, 2011, 07:05 PM
Nah, Shirou broke Gilgamesh's unbreakable Noble Phantasms BY DOZENS. That's not a big deal in the Nasuverse which runs on the Beyond the Impossible trope.

>Broke

...Wot?

Tangerang
April 12th, 2011, 07:07 PM
>Broke

...Wot?

End of UBW.

UBW instant projected weapons against GoB weapons, both broke in the clash

Theocrass
April 12th, 2011, 07:07 PM
Let's try this

Name: Captain Falcon
Class: Racer
Alignment: Lawful Good?

STR: A
END: C
AGI: EX
MGI: D
LCK: D
NP: EX

Skills:

Falcon techniques: Can light himself on fire for his attacks. His own fire does not burn him.

Noble Phantasms:

Show your moves! (Rank B: Anti-Unit): A taunt which forces the enemies to either unleash their strongest attack, or show their chest for some reason.

FALCON PUNCH! (Rank EX: Anti World): FALCON PUNCH

I always though his power was more controlled combustion than pyrokinesis. He's sort of like a living jet engine that can only fire in short bursts.

willyvereb
April 12th, 2011, 07:08 PM
Yes, he did.
Gilgamesh was so much cornered by Shirou's act that he could only block his attacks by risking his weapons to break.
His willpower BS power-up allowed him to ignore the basic rule of projections and his weapons surpassed Gil's. Ridiculous, but that's what happened.

Erlkonig
April 12th, 2011, 07:09 PM
End of UBW.

UBW instant projected weapons against GoB weapons, both broke in the clash

They actually broke? So Shirou was able to make weapons equal to Gilgamesh's?

Ruca_Milda
April 12th, 2011, 07:11 PM
I'm fairly sure they did break...but IIRC everyone's still arguing about that to this day, so.

Tangerang
April 12th, 2011, 07:12 PM
I always though his power was more controlled combustion than pyrokinesis. He's sort of like a living jet engine that can only fire in short bursts.

wasn't completely serious, like with the 'show your moves' np which had an alternate ability based on the meme where it sounded like 'show your boobs'

Ergast
April 12th, 2011, 07:31 PM
They actually broke? So Shirou was able to make weapons equal to Gilgamesh's?

The novel describes how both Shirou's and Gilgamesh weapons shatters after one swing. You could argue that either:

a) Shirou's power song, Emiya, empowered the weapons to reach the same power than the originals or surpased it, as Shirou said they can do
b) Shirou was just BP-ing Gilgamesh sorry arse and weapons.
c) Shirou is just that awesome.

I like a and c, but make your choices.

Milbunk
April 12th, 2011, 07:35 PM
I was bored so I made this feel free to note any mistakes.

Name: M4 Sherman
Class: Inverse Rider
Alignment: Lawful Neutral

STR: A
END: B
AGI: D
MGI: E
LCK: C
NP: A

Skills:

Ammo Transfer: Transforms Prana into ammo so as long as you have plenty of Prana you can fire continuously.

Information download: Allows its master instantly learn everything about the tank including how to drive it.

Noble Phantasms:

75 mm Cannon: Able to penetrate up to 457 meters at 90 degrees any servant caught in the blast will be seriously injured.

.50 cal Browning M2HB machine gun: At about 50

Erlkonig
April 12th, 2011, 07:38 PM
>SUMMON A TANK AS A SERVANT
>RIDE IT
>"DRIVE ME CLOSER, SO I CAN HIT IT WITH MY SWORD!!!"

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_MvrxhPSMnQg/SwoDhLcJb-I/AAAAAAAAAZ8/jU2EUXnGBU4/s1600/Awesome.jpg

Satehi
April 12th, 2011, 08:08 PM
I pick d) they are sharp objects hurled at high speeds, so they both break.

:p

ItsaRandomUsername
April 12th, 2011, 09:48 PM
PHYSICS!

Gundam Meister
April 14th, 2011, 01:58 PM
Sora (Kingdom Hearts)

Class Saber

STR: A+
END: B
AGI: B
MGI: C+
LCK: D
NP: B

Ergast
April 14th, 2011, 03:37 PM
I always saw Sora more on the Agi side, not the str side.

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 02:36 PM
Awesome thread, I love this kind of stuff. I have tons of character sheets like these I've made and collected from the internet. Or I used to anyways, then my HDD died and I've been remaking them one at a time... Here are a couple of my favorites:



Heroic Spirit: Himura "Battousai" Kenshin (Rurouni Kenshin)
Class: Assassin
Gender: Male

Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: A++
Prana: D
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: B


[Class Skills]
Presence Concealment: B


[Personal Skills]
Vow of Non-violence: C
A vow never to kill. As long as it is within his power to prevent anyone's death this vow will compell him to do so. If this vow is broken all of Kenshin's other personal skills become unusable.

Protecter: A
A strong will to protect those around who cannot protect themselves. If anyone nearby, other than himself, is in danger Kenshin's Strength, Endurance and Agility will be increased one rank as long as he is protecting that person.

Empathy: B
An advanced form of preception that allows the user to read someone's emotional state. At this rank as long as he can read their emotions Kenshin can predict an opponents movements even if they are too fast to see.


[Noble Phantasms]
Sakabatou
Rank: E
Type: Anti-Unit
A katana with the dull side facing outwards. This makes nearly all of Kenshins attacks do weaker non-lethal damage, however defeating an opponent with this weapon makes it more likely that they will become comrades.

Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit
An ancient sword-style that is designed to defeat multiple enemies as quickly as possible. It uses a diverse array of techinques that mostly rely on drawing the sword quickly or using multiple strikes. Its most powerful attacks include the Kuzu Ryu Sen, similar to the legendary Tsubame-Gaeshi in that it distorts the laws of physics, it attacks each of the nine vital areas at the same time meaning it can only be defended against by attacking before it is used. As well as the Amakakeru Ryu no Hirameki, Kenshin's only technique that can be fatal even with the Sakabatou, it is an attack that temporarily increases Kenshin's Agility to EX, making him capable of moving fast enough to become invisible while using this technique. If the first strike is blocked the force creates a vacuum that pulls the opponent in, making the second hit impossible to avoid. However, if the opponent knows about it beforehand its effectiveness is greatly reduced.


To the guy that came up with the Sakabatou skill earlier in the thread: I wish I had thought of that. Instead I just added it to my version. And I just have to lol at Kojirou beating Kenshin... Kojirou's only skill is basically 1/3rd of a Kuzu Ryu Sen, and Kenshin's Amakakeru Ryu no Hirameki is so fast he goes from standing still to "so fast he's invisible" in one step.




Heroic Spirit: Agrias Oaks (Final Fantasy Tactics)
Servant: Saber
Gender: Female
Alignment: Lawful Good

Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: C
Prana: B
Luck: C
Noble Phantasm: E~A++


[Class Skills]
Magic Resistance: C[EX]


[Personal Skills]
No Faith: B
Once an true believer in the Church of Glabados, Agrias has been betrayed time and again by the Chuch and after learning the truth from the Germonik Scriptures and killing St. Ajora himself she has lost every bit of faith she once had. This boosts her Magic Resistance to EX rank, providing complete protection from spells short of True Magic. However all of her own magic has become almost completly useless.

Master of Many Jobs: A+
Having mastered many jobs in her lifetime, this ability allows Agrias to change her available abilities and skill-sets to any that she mastered during her journey through Ivalice. Since she was summoned as a Saber she cannot change her base job from Holy Knight, but sub-job and supporting abilities can all be changed. Doing so requires her complete concentration however, therefore it is nearly impossible to use in battle.


[Noble Phantasm]
Adventurer's Armory
Type: ???
Rank: E~A++
A small bag that contains a near infinite space. Stored inside is the multitude of equipment accumulated during Agrias' journey with Ramza in Ivalice. Some of the most notable among them:

[Excalibur]
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A
Similar to the weapon used by King Arthur in name alone, this weapon is a family heirloom of Cidolfus Orlandu. Wielding it increases the user's agility by two ranks, strengthens any 'Holy' attacks, and allows the user to be healed by 'Holy' attacks. This is Agrias' preferred weapon, as it works very well in conjunction with her Holy Sword skillset.

[Chaos Blade]
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A++
A Holy sword of unparalleled attack power, said to have benn made by God. This sword deals incredible amounts of damage with every attack and slowly heals the user. Even the slightest hit with this weapon will deal damage equivalent to unleashing the special attack of a B ranked Noble Phantasm. As long as Agrias carries this weapon it will also constantly heal her over time.

[Golden Escuteon]
Type: Support
Rank: B
An impregnable barrier, this sheild can nullify any physical or magical attack, regardless of strength, so long as it is positioned between the attack and Agrias. It cannot, however, stop attacks that come from multiple directions or have special effects that make them unblockable.

[Chantage]
Type: Support
Rank: A
A perfume that allows the wearer to cheat death. As long as she wears it no matter how badly damaged Agrias becomes, even to the point of complete annihilation, she will always be revived one minute later to her condition just before death. However this only works as long as she still has an anchor to this world in the form of her master.


The No Faith skill is probably the worst part about this one. It seems plausible based on what she went through and how having 0 Faith in FFT would translate into FSN and it prevents her from doing hax stuff like "Calculating" super powerful spells on everyone in the area while healing herself... But it's still seems kinda lame to me.

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 02:40 PM
And since we're posting ridiculously over-powered characters:


Heroic Spirit: Simon the Digger (Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann)
Servant: Rider
Gender: Male

Strength: B
Endurance: A+
Agility: C
Prana: C
Luck: A
Noble Phantasm: EX
Alignment: Neutral Good


[Class Skills]
Riding: A+
While incapable of riding any sort of living animal, Simon can ride any non-living mount, as long as it is infused with his spiral energy.


[Personal Skills]
Spiral Energy Generator: A+++
Similar to Magical Energy, Spiral Energy is produced by all living things in small amounts. Spiral Energy is capable of transforming sufficiently strong desires into reality. However it cannot directly effect living organisms, therefore it can only be used to transform inanimate objects into something that the user can wield against the opponent. At this rank Simon generates an abnormally excessive amount of Spiral Energy, equivalent to the total output of trillions of life-forms, giving him the ability to completly transform and manipulate any object up to the size of the moon.


[Noble Phantasms]
Lagann ~This Drill Will Pierce the Heavens~
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit
A small gunman that has a high compatibility with Spiral Energy. It can materialize drills that can be used to attack but it's main use is to act as a Spiral Energy converter, allowing the transformation and control of any mecha it combines with.

Gurren Lagann ~A Combining of Courage That Sets a Man's Soul on Fire~
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Army
Simon's primary Noble Phantasm, this mecha is a combination of Lagann with a larger Gunman, Gurren. It's main attack, Giga Drill Breaker, pins an enemy with it's boomerang shades and materializes a huge drill, flying though the opponent.

Arc-Gurren Lagann ~Raging Wave Combination~
Rank: A+++
Rank: Anti-Army
Formed by Gurren Lagann combining with the Space-Dreadnought Arc-Gurren, this Gunman is the size of a large city and is capable of dimensional alteration attacks such as it's "Burst Spinning Punch" which shatters space-time, sending the opponent back to the time of the Big Bang.

Cho-Ginga Gurren Lagann ~One Machine Equal to the Gods~
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-World
Formed by combining Gurren Lagann with the Cho-Ginga Dai Gurren, this Gunman is the size of the moon and it's main attack, once again the Giga Drill Breaker, is easily capable of destroying an entire planet. Even at his optimum capacity it would take Simon several minutes of concentration to summon this.

Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann ~Breaking Through Space and Time~
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Galaxy
This Gunman is roughly the size of a large galaxy and is normally formed by combining the Cho-Ginga Gurren Lagann with more than a dozen Spiral Energy converters, like Lagann, and an enormous supply of Spiral Energy. Although he would be able to pilot it, Simon is unnable to summon this alone even under optimum conditions. (Probably not even with all three command spells used at once...)

Super Tengen Toppa Gurren Laggan ~Moving Forward With Every Revolution~
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Universe
While only about 50 times the size of the Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann, it is exponentially stronger, being composed almost entirely of Spiral Energy. While it is capable of destroying at least half of a universe with it's Giga Drill Breaker, it takes the cumulative Spiral Energy of an entire Big Bang to form and power.


The Spiral Energy Generator skill is kinda lame, but it was either that or say Spiral Energy = Magical Energy, but that seemed even worse...



Heroic Spirit: Samus Aran (Metroid)
Servant: Archer
Gender: Female
Alignment: Neutral Good

Strength: C[A]
Endurance: C[A]
Agility: C[A]
Prana: E
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: A


[Class Skills]
Independant Action: A+
Samus is capable of lasting for a week without support from a master.

Magic Resistance: D
Provides immunity to single action spells and weakens the damage done by most magic.


[Personal Skills]
Chozo DNA: C
Although not born a Chozo, Smaus was adopted by them after her family was killed by Space Pirates and, in order to survive the harsh environment of Zebes and use her Powersuit, her DNA was partially spliced with that of a Chozo warrior. This gives her Strength, Endurance and Agility on par with servants despite being an otherwise normal human girl.


[Noble Phantasms]
Chozo Powersuit
Type: Support
Rank: A
An incredibly high-tech bio-mechanical exo-skeleton that, when worn, increases all of SamusStrength, Endurance and Agility by two ranks. It has an arm cannon that fires powerful beam and missle based weaponry. It contains many upgrades collected by Samus in her journeys throughout the Galaxy such as Power Bombs, Speed Booster, Space Jump, Screw Attack and many, many more.

Zero Laser
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: A++
Bypassing the normal limits of the Chozo Powersuit, Samus can fire all of it's energy in one enormous blast. Doing so, however, will leave the suit completely inoperable until its energy can be restored, making it an all-or-nothing attack.


This one seems kinda weak compared to the others, but that's just because I didn't want to list every single upgrade. If she had every upgrade from every game she's be pretty ridiculously strong.

eddyak
April 15th, 2011, 02:42 PM
Vow of Non-violence: C
A vow never to kill. As long as it is within his power to prevent anyone's death this vow will compell him to do so. If this vow is broken all of Kenshin's other personal skills become unusable.
Most useless Servant ever.

Lotus Saint
April 15th, 2011, 02:43 PM
[Excalibur]
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A
Similar to the weapon used by King Arthur in name alone, this weapon is a family heirloom of Cidolfus Orlandu. Wielding it increases the user's agility by two ranks, strengthens any 'Holy' attacks, and allows the user to be healed by 'Holy' attacks. This is Agrias' preferred weapon, as it works very well in conjunction with her Holy Sword skillset.

[Chaos Blade]
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A++
A Holy sword of unparalleled attack power, said to have benn made by God. This sword deals incredible amounts of damage with every attack and slowly heals the user. Even the slightest hit with this weapon will deal damage equivalent to unleashing the special attack of a B ranked Noble Phantasm. As long as Agrias carries this weapon it will also constantly heal her over time.


Sure, only use the most OP knight-swords.
NOBODY CARES FOR DEFENDER!
OR SAVE THE QUEEN!

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 02:53 PM
Heroic Spirit: Uesugi Kenshin (Sengoku Rance)
Class: Saber
Gender: Female
Alignment: Lawful Good

Strength: A
Endurance: A
Agility: B
Prana: C
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: A


[Class Abilities]
Magic Resistance: B
Cancels spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for her to be affected.

Riding: E
Although she has all of the theoretical knowledge required to ride a mount, since she was at war with the Takeda family for most of her life she has never actually ridden a Tebasaki.


[Personal Abilities]
Military God's Aura: A
In battle Kenshin gives off the aura of one who is an unparalleled master at both individual combat and military engagements. This gives Kenshin the equivalent of an A rank in both Bravery and Military Tactics and decreases all opponents Agility by one rank unless they have an equivalent rank in Bravery or Military Tactics.

Instinct: B
The power to "feel" the most favorable developments for oneself during battle. A type of refined sixth sense that approaches precognition. Allows for efficient combat abilities even if vision or hearing are hindered.


[Noble Phantasms]
Emporer's Sword
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit
One of three artifacts required to become the true Emporer of Japan. Increases Strength by one rank.

Emporer's Ring
Rank: C
Type: Support
One of three artifacts required to become the true Emporer of Japan. Increases Luck and Prana by one rank.

Emporer's Hakimachi
Rank: C
Type: Support
One of three artifacts required to become the true Emporer of Japan. Increases Agility and Endurance by one rank.

Emporer's Aura
Rank: A
Type: Support
This ability is only usable by summoning all three of Kenshin's other Noble Phantasms at once. While this ability is active anyone of Japanese descent must obey every order she gives absolutely. It also decreases the Agility of all of her opponents by one rank (stacks with Military God's Aura).


And last of what I've made that's finished. I used to have many more, most of them more historical and mythological characters, and I'm working on remaking them. I'll probably post any of them that don't suck here when I finish.

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 02:59 PM
Most useless Servant ever.

Yeah, it'd be almost impossible to win the Grail War with Kenshin as your servant. Unless you are Kiritsugu anyways...

eddyak
April 15th, 2011, 03:07 PM
Yeah, it'd be almost impossible to win the Grail War with Kenshin as your servant. Unless you are Kiritsugu anyways...
*Kenshin defeats enemy*

"Will you become my nakama?"

*enemy's head explodes*

"WHATTHEFUCKDIDYOUJUSTDOKIRITSUGUYOUASSHOLE"

HitokiriNanaya
April 15th, 2011, 03:15 PM
Dante
Class: Saber, Rider, Berserker
Gender: Male

Strength: A
Endurance: A++
Agility: A+
Prana: B
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: EX

Magic Resistance: D: As being a Half-Demon he natural has some resistance to magic.

Unshakeable Defense: C: : At this rank, Dante is able to defend against most surprise attacks, and if he suffered no damage, launch a counter-attack.

Skills:
Battle Continuance: A: Dante can take fatal hit that would kill a servant and fighting.

Mana Burst: E[C]: Influenced by his demon blood

Monstrous Strength: D: Dante can move objects and people that weight much more that himself.

Noble Phantasms

Devil Trigger:
Type: Support
Rank: EX
This allows Dante to take his demon form, and briefly raise all his stats and skills. This also allows him to regenerate to some degree.

Devil Arms:
Type: Anti-Personal
Rank: D-A++
All of the Devil Arms that Dante has collected during his life are available to use just press R2 to switch They range from close range weapons to ranged weapons

willyvereb
April 15th, 2011, 03:23 PM
Wanked up stats for Servants again...how surprising.

eddyak
April 15th, 2011, 03:28 PM
Dante
Agility: A+
>Giving Dante the same agility level as someone who practised so hard he broke reality

Trollolololololol


Devil Trigger:
Type: Support
Rank: EX
This allows Dante to take his demon form, and briefly raise all his stats and skills. This also allows him to regenerate to some degree.EX is for abilities that are completely unique, or make their user so powerful they literally transcend every damn living thing. No way some dumbass transformation is gonna be EX.

willyvereb
April 15th, 2011, 03:30 PM
Just check Kenshin and his dreaded A+++ agility!:p

Tangerang
April 15th, 2011, 03:32 PM
If Agi is a measure of how agile you are, why does mad enhancement (a high enough rank of it) increase agi?

Surely loss of sanity and thinking decreases how agile you are?

HitokiriNanaya
April 15th, 2011, 03:37 PM
>Giving Dante the same agility level as someone who practised so hard he broke reality

Trollolololololol

>Implying that all the crazy tricks Dante does, from hitting the enemies in unique way's that no ordinary man could do to the fact that his Trickster style makes him almost impossible to hit, can be done by anyone.

=/


EX is for abilities that are completely unique, or make their user so powerful they literally transcend every damn living thing. No way some dumbass transformation is gonna be EX.

Yeah since the dumbass transformation made him powerful enough to take down the King of the demon world. And supposedly rivals, if not exceeds his father in power, who sealed the demon world by himself.

eddyak
April 15th, 2011, 03:41 PM
>Implying that all the crazy tricks Dante does, from hitting the enemies in unique way's that no ordinary man could do to the fact that his Trickster style makes him almost impossible to hit, can be done by anyone.
Yeah, cos Heroic Spirits are ordinary men.

willyvereb
April 15th, 2011, 03:45 PM
Those are still little in comparison to regular Servant stats.
A-rank agility may be justified, considering Dante's style but his endurance and strength stats are pure bollocks there. You know NP attacks aren't included in the strength stats and Servants can effortlessly tear up 100 square meters of buildings and asphalt in combat.

And defeating the king of hell isn't that nice if that certain king has barely any good feats. There are many mythological creatures better than Mundus and even defeating those won't warrant you the EX rank. His Devil Trigger is A or B rank at best. Also it might be better to include it as skill instead of a Noble Phantasm.

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 03:49 PM
Just check Kenshin and his dreaded A+++ agility!:p

Not sure where you got that, since it actually says A++ in my post... And that may be debatable, but it's not that far-fetched since he's at least equal to Kojirou's A+ Agility.

Lotus Saint
April 15th, 2011, 03:56 PM
Not sure where you got that, since it actually says A++ in my post... And that may be debatable, but it's not that far-fetched since he's at least equal to Kojirou's A+ Agility.

Yeah no.

willyvereb
April 15th, 2011, 03:57 PM
I don't think Kenshin's skill ever surpassed the rules of physics. Kojiro essentially beat the rules of time and space to submission and performed 3 absolutely simulataenous attacks.
That's not exactly the level Kenshin is playing at. His best feat was to cut a vegetable in half so finely that he could stick it back together. Quite far from bending the reality.

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 04:01 PM
Kenshin's Kuzu Ryu Sen is pretty much exactly the same thing as the Tsubame Gaeshi except it hits 9 times instead of 3. His Amakakeru Ryu no Hirameki is so fast he goes from standing still to "so fast he's invisible" in one step. How exactly does Kojirou qualify for "so fast he breaks the laws of physics" and Kenshin doesn't?

Lotus Saint
April 15th, 2011, 04:04 PM
Can't every servant mo so fast that they're invisible?

willyvereb
April 15th, 2011, 04:10 PM
Except te fact that it barely surpasses the speed of sound while Kojiro's regular attacks alone are so fast that the obviously superonic Saber can't really see them.

Also I think you missed the part about Tsubame Gaeshi achiving the Second True Magic without the use of any magecraft but pure refined excessive skill.

So he trained until reality gave up limiting his movements and he can perform 3 slashes at exactly the same time. Kuzu Ryu Ken is incomparable to this insane thing.


Can't every servant mo so fast that they're invisible?

They can. At least any good Servant can. Diarmuid and Saber's first fight in Fate/Zero is the best example.

Even True Assassin has a disappearing from sight feat.

eddyak
April 15th, 2011, 04:23 PM
Kenshin's Kuzu Ryu Sen is pretty much exactly the same thing as the Tsubame Gaeshi except it hits 9 times instead of 3. His Amakakeru Ryu no Hirameki is so fast he goes from standing still to "so fast he's invisible" in one step. How exactly does Kojirou qualify for "so fast he breaks the laws of physics" and Kenshin doesn't?
Tohno Shiki pulled off "lol cut you to seven pieces" in an instant, can run along walls and disappear from sight. Void Ryougi's said to be far above his level, and even she can't pull off more than a defensive battle against a regular Servant.

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 04:24 PM
Also I think you missed the part about Tsubame Gaeshi achiving the Second True Magic without the use of any magecraft but pure refined excessive skill.

So he trained until reality gave up limiting his movements and he can perform 3 slashes at exactly the same time.

Yeah, that's pretty much the definition of Kuzu Ryu Sen. Nine attacks that are so fast they are all preformed at exactly the same time.

Lotus Saint
April 15th, 2011, 04:25 PM
Let's face it, Kenshin isn't very powerful.
Now let us continue with Servant creation.




Yeah, that's pretty much the definition of Kuzu Ryu Sen. Nine attacks that are so fast they are all preformed at exactly the same time.

You're not getting it.
and: Don't make me bring up touhou.

Erlkonig
April 15th, 2011, 04:34 PM
You're not getting it.
and: Don't make me bring up touhou.

Not that I've marathoned the R. Kenshin anime, but isn't he implying that he uses something at the same level as Kojiro? That sounds kinda broken, I can't believe a character from THAT anime would be able to use Multi-dimensional Refraction phenomena.

HitokiriNanaya
April 15th, 2011, 04:36 PM
Those are still little in comparison to regular Servant stats.
A-rank agility may be justified, considering Dante's style but his endurance and strength stats are pure bollocks there. You know NP attacks aren't included in the strength stats and Servants can effortlessly tear up 100 square meters of buildings and asphalt in combat.

Not really since Dante's been shot in the head, eat alive, stabbed twice in a row (and pinned to a wall with his own sword which he pulled off of himself) shot up, beat up, and been to hell and back. He's endurance is quick a feat.

And he was able to stop a giant statue's fist with both hands before it Nero killed the priest.


And defeating the king of hell isn't that nice if that certain king has barely any good feats. There are many mythological creatures better than Mundus and even defeating those won't warrant you the EX rank. His Devil Trigger is A or B rank at best. Also it might be better to include it as skill instead of a Noble Phantasm.

I can agree with this.

eddyak
April 15th, 2011, 04:45 PM
Not that I've marathoned the R. Kenshin anime, but isn't he implying that he uses something at the same level as Kojiro? That sounds kinda broken, I can't believe a character from THAT anime would be able to use Multi-dimensional Refraction phenomena.
Yeah, pretty much. Kenshin might be insanely fast to regular swordsmen in his 'verse, but Kojiro's faced off and pretty much beaten Saber, who can consistently fight Diarmuid, a guy with two spears, at well over the speed of sound, he's repelled freaking Heracles, despite the fact that his attacks couldn't even penetrate the guy's skin, and fought off Lancer, the fastest Servant. He seriously doesn't stand a chance against people descended from gods and dragons and stuff.

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 04:48 PM
Meh, as I'm sure you can tell from my username I'm a bit of a Rurouni Kenshin fanboy, and I'm not perfect, so after seeing those examples I'll admit I rated Kenshin's Agility higher than it should be.

I still don't see any difference between the Tsubame Gaeshi and the Kuzu Ryu Sen though. Just because it isn't called a Multi-dimensional Refraction Phenomenon, doesn't mean it isn't. It's the exact same end result preformed in the exact same way. But I guess I'll just agree to disagree.

willyvereb
April 15th, 2011, 04:55 PM
I think your English skills could use some polishing then.
- Kenshin's Kaze Ryu Ken does 9 quick slashes that are so fast they seem to be instant.

- Kojiro's Tsubame Gaeshi works by multi-dimensional refraction phenomeon which brings 2 additional slashes for the original from parallel universes, essentially making 3 slashes that are literally instant.
To explain it more it's like Assassin suddenly grew four additional arms, making it six or he split into 3 persons for a moment. He performs 3 attacks from 3 different directions in a way to seal any space for evasion or dodge. Once you are caught by Tsubame Gaeshi, there's no escape.

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 05:01 PM
Kenshin's Kaze Ryu Ken does 9 quick slashes that are so fast they seem to be instant.

Nope. Not in the official translation at least. Some other versions have translated it that way so I don't know for sure how it's meant to be in the original Japanese, but it's specifically said in the official translation that they aren't preformed one after another quickly but all at the same time.

Erlkonig
April 15th, 2011, 05:04 PM
I still think it's more like Nine Lives Blade Works instead of Tsubame Gaeshi

willyvereb
April 15th, 2011, 05:06 PM
I think that's a mistranslation or metaphor because normally it makes no sense. In Assassin's case we assumed the same until Word of God told us that what Kojiro did was essentially the Second True Magic unconsciously.
So there's no mistake. Kenshin's Kaze Ryu Ken can be avoided while normally Assassin's do not. One attack bends reality to its will while the other has only sheer speed.

Kenshin
April 15th, 2011, 05:12 PM
Like I said, it's possible it's a metaphor or mistranslation, but it's a bit ridiculous to say that until the author specifically says otherwise that it must be a mistranslation.

Ergast
April 15th, 2011, 05:21 PM
To be honest here, the fact that Rurouni Kenshin is still in the realms of the humanly posible (or almost humanly posible) would show that Kenshin, in fact, slashes just very quick. IIRC, Hiten Mitsurugi is all about speed. Yeah, he is good, but he doesn't make the physic laws his bitches.

About Dante... the Devil trigger maybe (just maybe) is a bit wanked, but his stats... I have to say that I don't see anything wrong with them. He has showed strenght enough to stop the punch of a statue of 100 m, survived a few trust through his chest (with swords worthy of Cloud). A shoot to the head just annoyed him, and he is insanely skillful with anything he uses (except katanas, for some reason, he isn't that good with Yamato, at least if we compare it with his skill with other devil arms)

eddyak
April 15th, 2011, 05:22 PM
I don't think Kenshin's author knows much about physics. It's either an attack at the speed of light (to make the strikes literally all at the same time), or it's at a speed fast enough that with human eyes, you can't help but think they're coming at the same time, because they're just too fast.

willyvereb
April 15th, 2011, 05:26 PM
STR stat =/= Strenght but attack power. Dante normally doesn't wreck entire sections of buildings, unless he use some kind of special weapon.
Berserker do. Saber and Diarmuid do in Fate/Zero. Gilgamesh does it as well (hell, his NP bombardment was compared to carpet-bombing the area - and that was just 6 NPs thrown or maybe less)

Lotus Saint
April 15th, 2011, 05:29 PM
I don't think Kenshin's author knows much about physics. It's either an attack at the speed of light (to make the strikes literally all at the same time), or it's at a speed fast enough that with human eyes, you can't help but think they're coming at the same time, because they're just too fast.

I don't think it's light speed.
If it was light speed his sword would probably disintegrate.

Satehi
April 15th, 2011, 05:32 PM
Massive shockwaves would probably disintegrate everything around as well.

But this is manga and anime, so that will never happen.

Tangerang
April 15th, 2011, 05:40 PM
Nope. Not in the official translation at least. Some other versions have translated it that way so I don't know for sure how it's meant to be in the original Japanese, but it's specifically said in the official translation that they aren't preformed one after another quickly but all at the same time.

yet Seta Soujirou is even faster :p

Kenshin's attack is said to be at godspeed iirc, or something.

Which is closer to nine lives.

MssrNeko
April 15th, 2011, 06:30 PM
Another Servant for this thread. The Sleeping King of Denmark and enemy-turned-friend of Charlemange....

Class: Saber
True Name: Holger Danske (Ogier the Dane)
Alignment: Lawful Good

STR: A
AGI: C+
END: B+
MGI: D
LUK: C
NP: B

Class Abilities
Magical Resistance: E

Riding: B

Skills
Charisma: B

Bravery: B

Eye of Mind (True): A

Instinct: B

Battle Continuation: C

Noble Phantasm(s)

Cortana Sword of Mercy
Rank: B
Type: Support
Range: --
Max Target: 1

The legendary sword given to Holger by Charlemange as a token of friendship. Originally called "Curtana", the name was changed when the length of the sword was cut down to fit Holger. A paradoxical weapon, its blade is dull and it cannot be used to kill another being. However, it is blessed with two miracles that Holger can use and can be used as "reminder of mercy".

Sauvagine Sword of Battle
Rank: C
Type: Anti-Personnel
Range: 5
Max Target: 1-10

The lesser known second sword of Holger. Holger's main weapon of choice since Cortana is forbidden to harm or kill. This blade of this sword never dulls and is capable of penetrating defensive abilities or NPs ranked C or lower. Made from a different swordmaker, Sauvagine was given to Holger with Cortana by Charlemange.

Eveonder
April 16th, 2011, 12:34 AM
Ohh... not bad, even though you distorted his myth, what exactly is the support ability associated with the Sword of Mercy? Does it take the form of a sword with a broken tip? Or is it a proper sword that's dull?

Ergast
April 16th, 2011, 10:24 AM
STR stat =/= Strenght but attack power. Dante normally doesn't wreck entire sections of buildings, unless he use some kind of special weapon.
Berserker do. Saber and Diarmuid do in Fate/Zero. Gilgamesh does it as well (hell, his NP bombardment was compared to carpet-bombing the area - and that was just 6 NPs thrown or maybe less)

That's because if you could destroy the castle of turn, the game would be too short.

That or "Lol, demonic constructions are just better"

Lotus Saint
April 16th, 2011, 08:35 PM
Has one of Meliadoul been done?

willyvereb
April 18th, 2011, 09:45 AM
Class: Saber
True Name: Onime no Kyo (Demon Eyes Kyo)
Alignment: Chaotic Good

STR: A+
END: B
AGI: A
MGI: A
LCK: B
NP: A+

Class Abilities
Magical Resistance: A

Riding: D

Skills

Bravery: A

Eye of Mind (Fake): A

Instinct: A

Battle Continuation: B


Noble Phantasm(s)

Tenrou
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Enemy
Range: 1-2
Max Target: 1

Demonic sword forged by the famous blacksmith, Muramasa. Tenrou has an unearthily sharp edge and a powerful demon sealed inside. By "talking" to his sword Kyo can tap into te hidden powers of the blade to both increase his strength and acces a number of special techniques like the Mumyo Jinpu Satsuji Ken and Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Ougi arts. The later invovolve calling forth the Four Divine beasts of the Chinese cosmology for various forms of attacks.

Regretfully I can't find any place for his Crimson Eyes. It has an obvious power-boosting effect and its user can shake of various hax abilities by willpower alone. But I can't call it a Mystic Eye, neither a Noble Phantasm.Ah, the dilema!

eddyak
April 18th, 2011, 09:53 AM
Class Abilities
Magical Resistance: A
When have we ever seen Kyo use magic? I'll admit I gave up on the manga when it got to stupid levels of shounenry, but I don't think he should get anywhere near A magic or magic resistance.


Regretfully I can't find any place for his Crimson Eyes. It has an obvious power-boosting effect and its user can shake of various hax abilities by willpower alone. But I can't call it a Mystic Eye, neither a Noble Phantasm.Ah, the dilema!
Maybe some low level of Mad Enhancement, or that ability Heracles has that blocks out mental interference, focus or something?

Ergast
April 18th, 2011, 09:58 AM
I'll say that your Kyo is a bit too strong (a B or a B+ would be fitter in my opinion, Date is way stronger and I doubt he would reach that A+) and he has a bit too much mgi (I'll give him a B+)

About the eyes... how about give him some skill like intimidation (rank B)?

Also his magic resistance is a bit too high. Arturia has that much MR because she already has an insane magic resistance. I would give him a B (thanks to be the body of the Red King, mind you) at best, if not a C

Kratosirving
April 19th, 2011, 11:19 AM
i'll throw in my favorite character from my latest obsession, Fortissimo EXA//Akkord:Bsusvier. :cool: Thankfully she's not a complete overpowered broken ass like a few of the characters from it, so she could potentially work in the rules of the F/SN Servant system, I think.

Name: Momiji Satomura

Originally a normal girl in her world, Momiji killed her older sister when she was fifteen because both of them were in love with the same boy. Her sister eventually won the affection of this boy, and consumed by jealousy, Momiji pushed her sister in front of a passing car, causing her death. No one else had noticed that she had done so, and so Momiji alone lives with the guilt of such a terrible sin.

This act was the catalyst for the emergence of her ability, Grimoire. Unlike most grimoires that are books of magic, Momiji's ability was formed under the influence of sin, becoming the embodiment of the Seven Cardinal Sins, which are represented by seven crystals that surround her body when active.

Class: Caster
Alignment: Neutral
Gender: Female

Strength: E
Endurance: C
Agility: D
Magical Energy: B
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: B

Class Abilities:

Territory Creation: X
Although a Caster, Momiji cannot create any "territory" that is favorable for her magic.

Tool Creation: X
Although a Caster, Momiji cannot create any "tools".


Skills:

Battle Continuation: C (EX when certain condition of Noble Phantasm is met)

Allows the user a low chance to continue fighting even after receiving grievous wounds. Deceased chance when greater damage is suffered.

Noble Phantasm:

Grimoire: The Embodiment of Sin
Rank: C
Type: Anti-Personnel
Range: 2-12
Maximum Target(s): 1-7 people.

Seven crystals that are each of the different colors of the rainbow surround Momiji, each are similar in that they are named after a different demon or devil, and that they are the same shape and have the same attack, which is to fire a concentrated beam of light at the enemy, dealing a small amount of damage. However, for every successive hit the damage grows, and for each different beam that connect with the enemy, one of their senses is stolen.

Lucifer/superbia – The red crystal. Symbolizes Pride, and steals the sense of smell.

Leviathan/invidia – The orange crystal. Symbolizes Envy, and steals the sense of balance.

Satan/ira – The yellow crystal. Symbolizes Wrath, and steals the sense of sight.

Belphegor/acedia – The green crystal. Symbolizes Sloth, and steals the sense of hearing.

Mammon/avarita – The blue crystal. Symbolizes Greed, and steals the sense of touch.

Beelzebub/gula – The indigo crystal. Symbolizes Gluttony, and steals the sense of taste.

Asmodeus/luxeria – The violet crystal. Symbolizes Lust, and steals the sense of pain.

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a97/KratosIrving/momijigrimoire.jpg


Judgment: The Light of the Aurora That Purges Sin
Rank: B+
Type: Anti-Army
Range: 5-60
Maximum Target(s): 60 people

The seven crystals are brought in a circle in front of Momiji, and a rainbow colored burst of light is released from it, shooting forward and capable of dealing massive damage.

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a97/KratosIrving/momijijudgment.jpg

L'Arc-En-Ciel: The Execution of One Who Sins
Rank: EX
Type: Support
Range: EX
Maximum Target(s): 1 person maximum

If the target opponent has had all of it's senses stolen by each of the Grimoire crystals, Momiji can than activate this ability at any time she chooses. When used, Momiji instantly regenerates any damage caused by that target, and she regains any Prana she has consumed. Also regenerates any of the crystals if they have been destroyed. Target opponent regains their senses, but Momiji can use this ability every time the opponent is afflicted by all seven sins.

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a97/KratosIrving/momijilarcenciel.jpg

Grant
April 24th, 2011, 07:54 PM
Name: Terra
A Keyblade wielder tormented by the power of darkness within him, he fought valiantly to protect his friends but was ultimately undone by his own insecurities. Now rage rules his heart and he strikes out at everything besides his Master.

Class: Berserker
Alignment: Chaotic Mad

Strength: A
Endurance: A
Agility: B
Magical Energy: C
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A

Class Abilities:
Mad Enhancement C: Rank up for all parameters except Luck and Mana, but in exchange one can no longer think and speak properly.

Skills:
Quickcasting (Reduced): Through the aid of his Keyblade Terra can cast a spell simply by calling it's name, though his lack of skill in magic reduces the power of the spells. This skill is useless due to the effects of Mad Enhancement.
Elemental Affinity (Earth): Terra's connection to rock and soil grants him protection against spells that involve it as well as additional mobility on fields and mountains.
Dash: Terra can increase the speed of movements to the point where he can inflict serious damage simply by passing an opponent, though he can only run in straight lines.

Noble Phantasm:
Chaos Ripper: A Keyblade Terra obtained after striking down his former master, it provides a great bonus to his strength and reach though it reduces his magical power. It can also be used as a device to fly on, but this ability cannot be used due to Mad Enhancement.
Rank: A
Type: Anti-personnel Noble Phantasm
Range: 1-3
Maximum Target: 1

Command Styles: By using multiple spells of certain types closely together Terra can actually charge his powers and cover himself in magic, most of which are linked to rock and soil. As a result of Mad Enhancement he is permanently using Dark Impulse which covers his body in dark energy and greatly increases the strength of his left hand.
Rank: A+
Type: Support Noble Phantasm
Range: 0
Maximum Target: 1

Hotako
April 25th, 2011, 05:36 AM
I'm conflicted about the stats as they'd be different with or without the sword but:

Class: Saber
Name: Elric, 428th ruler in direct line of descent from the first sorcerer emperor of Melniboné, Wielder of Stormbringer.
Alignment: Chaos (Aka. Whatever Arioch wants him to be at the moment... Blood and Souls)

Info on Stormbringer: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stormbringer

Soldat der Trauer
April 26th, 2011, 04:38 AM
Name: Hei/BK-201 (aka The Black Reaper)
Class: Assassin (Fake)
Alignment: Heroic Neutral (according to TVtropes anyway...)

{more later, like after I have slept}

terraablaze
April 26th, 2011, 11:10 AM
Man when did this thread become active, I was planning on posting in the one in GD, and now someone beat me to Ogier the Dane as well.

No Papillion?
No Balm of Gilead?
And why is Cortana have compeletly different properties than what I am familiar with?

Does anyone mind if I write up my Rider version of him when I have time?

MssrNeko
April 26th, 2011, 09:17 PM
Ohh... not bad, even though you distorted his myth, what exactly is the support ability associated with the Sword of Mercy? Does it take the form of a sword with a broken tip? Or is it a proper sword that's dull?

I took the miracle idea from Durandal's screen on F/SN. And the support would be......urm, mercy?

At terrablaze: There are a buttload of Cortana's I had to sift through. Edward the Confessor's, Ogier's, Holger's, Tristan's supposed one, etc. I just decided to mold them into one. And to tell you the truth, I don't have much information on him as I would like. Fill free to use your own.

Gundam Meister
May 31st, 2011, 02:17 PM
Bump

Class: Caster
True Name: Dracula (Castlevania)
Alignment: Lawful Evil

STR: C+
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: A++
LCK: C
NP: A+

Class Abilities

Territory Creation: EX

Prince Arjuna
June 1st, 2011, 07:28 PM
Maybe I'll try for a bit
Class: Caster
True Name: Izanami-no-Okami (Persona 4)
Alignment: Lawful Neutral

Strength: C
Agility: D
Endurance: B+
Magical Energy: A
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Abilities
Territory Creation: B+
Item Construction: B+

Personal Skills

Divinity: A++ (she's a real goddess)

Shapeshift: C (in P4, she can turn into a certain unimportant gas attendant without anyone knowing)
Allows the user to change appearance, sort of.

Magecraft: C-
Capable of using onmyodo and oriental magic.

Noble Phantasm(s)

Yomotsu Hirasaka
Rank: C
Type: Support
Maximum target(s): 1
As a mistress of underworld, she is capable to recreate the entrance of the underworld, Yomotsu Hirasaka, a gate for those who have died shall enter. This is the entrance that Izanagi, Izanami's twin brother and husband, had blocked with a boulder after fleeing in terror due to Izanami's hideous appearance. Due to Yomotsu Hirasaka's foggy, gloomy nature, an ideal place for Izanami, all parameters are ranked up.

Thousand Curses
Rank: EX
Type: ??
Range: ??
Maximum target(s): 1-1000
Instant death for those who are targeted. This is a curse that is given to mankind after Izanagi abandoned her due to her hideous appearance, in which she would kill a thousand of mortals everyday. Izanagi countered the curse by birthing to a thousand and five hundred mortals everyday. Only those who have Divinity above Rank B can endure the curse, but will sustain 'pressure' from the curse and receive one rank down for all parameters.

Alulim
June 1st, 2011, 07:40 PM
^ Hooray~

I should post my Okami servants here.

Prince Arjuna
June 1st, 2011, 10:26 PM
And here's another one:

Class: Lancer
True name: Izanagi (Persona 4)
Alignment: Neutral Good

Strength: B
Agility: A-
Endurance: B+
Magical energy: B+
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: B

Class Abilities
Magic Resistance: B

Personal Skills
Divinity: A+
A full god.

Eye of the Mind (Fake): A
The possession of sixth sense to avoid danger.

Bravery: B+
The user has capability to negate mental interference such as confusion, pressure and fascination. Bonus effect of increasing melee damage.

Noble Phantasm(s)

Amenonuhoko, The Heavenly Jeweled Spear
Rank: B
Type: Anti-unit
Range: 2-4
Maximum target(s): 1
A spear which was used to create the Japan islands by Izanagi and Izanami on the bridge between heaven and earth, Ameno-Ukihashi. The blade of the spear is fashioned like a scout knife and the spear is entirely made of metal of unknown source.

Myriad Truth
Rank: EX
Type: Support
Range: 5-50
Maximum target(s): 1-1000
Izanagi's ultimate power and form, a technique that can only be unleashed in certain condition. It is made specifically to counter curses and illusion. Izanagi used this technique once to counter Izanami's curse to kill thousand mortals by birthing to thousand and five hundred mortals everyday.

Alulim
June 2nd, 2011, 04:02 PM
Okami Servant time~

Class: Saver

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Okami Amaterasu

Alignment: Neutral Good

N. Phantasm: A+

Strength: B

Mana: A

Endurance: C

Agility: A+

Luck: C

Class Skills:

Independent Action: B

Magic Resistance: A (Ex, When Godhood is at max)

Personal Skills:

Divinity: Ex (A) (Reduced due to current incarnation)

Eye of the Mind (True): C

Instinct: X (B) (Increased due to being in an animalistic mindset)

Clairvoyance (Fake): A (Side-effect of the Celestial Brush)

Noble Phantasms:

Godhood: Support (Ex) Disguises the true appearance of Amaterasu from those without active magic circuits or belief in the gods. It also increases her Magic Resistance when within sight of believers (worshippers).

Imperial Regalia: Anti-Unit (B) The Divine Instruments Solar Flare, Tundra Beads, and Thunder Edge, along with the ability to use all of their associated abilities.

Celestial Brush: Varies (A++) A technique once wielded by the Gods and only the most powerful of mortal men in ancient times. It allows the user to utilize nature and alter the fabric of reality, within certain set limits. This also grants the user the ability to view the world as a canvas, seemingly stopping time. Since becoming a Heroic Spirit in this incarnation, Amaterasu no longer is limited by ink.

It is divided into a number of individual techniques:

Sunrise: (Support) Allows one to either create or prolong daytime by placing the sun in the sky.

Rejuvenation: (Support) This restores damaged or broken objects to their original condition.

Power Slash: (Anti-Unit) Allows one to cut through many obstacles (or people) without any form of physical contact being necessary.

Greensprout: (Support) Makes any form of plant life, such as trees, grow, bloom, or sprout instantaneously. Can even revive plants long dead.

Cherry Bomb: (Anti-Unit) This creates a single round bomb with a burning fuse. The fuse normally takes several seconds to burn down and detonate the bomb, but it can be quenched by water or other outside forces; alternately, if the main body of the bomb comes into contact with fire or a weapon strike, the bomb will explode instantly.

Waterspout: (Support) Allows one to move water from a source to a new destination, such as a fire. Can even make it rain for a short while.

Crescent: (Support) Allows one to create or prolong nighttime by placing the moon in the sky.

Galestorm: (Support) Creates a strong wind at will. Disrupts other wind-based abilities.

Inferno: (Anti-Unit) The user ignites a target from an existing source of fire, such as an open flame or the Divine Instrument Solar Flare.

Veil of Mist: (Support) The user slows down time for a short while.
Mist Warp: (Support) Grants one transportation between mirrors, provided that the user has made prior contact with them and that they are big enough to fit whatever is being channeled through.

Catwalk: (Support) Allows the user to scale vertical surfaces at will.

Thunderstorm: (Anti-Unit) The user electrocutes a target by using an existing source of electricity, such as an overhead lightning storm, open socket, exposed power cable, or the Divine Instrument Thunder Edge.

Blizzard: (Anti-Unit) The user freezes a target by using an existing ice source in the landscape, such as a frozen pond, or the Divine Instrument Tundra Beads.


Class: Rider

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Okami Chibiterasu

Alignment: Neutral Good

N. Phantasm: A

Strength: C

Mana: A

Endurance: C

Agility: A+

Luck: B

Class Skills:

Riding: Ex (Chibiterasu is unable to utilize this as a wolf)

Magic Resistance: B (A, When Godhood is at max)

Personal Skills:

Divinity: A+++ (B) (Reduced due to current incarnation)

Bravery: C

Instinct: X (B) (Increased due to being in an animalistic mindset)

Clairvoyance (Fake): B (Side-effect of the Celestial Brush)

Noble Phantasms:

Godhood: Support (Ex) Disguises the true appearance of Chibiterasu from those without active magic circuits or belief in the gods. It also increases his Magic Resistance when within sight of believers (worshippers).

Divine Instrument Providence Crystal: Anti-Unit (B) A gem that holds within it all the elements of nature.

Eternal Bonds: Support (A) Calls upon a partner from Chibiterasu’s history. It also grants them Chibiterasu’s Riding rank of (Ex) in order for them to ride a god. The summoned partners are equivalent to Heroic Spirits themselves. They can only be summoned one at a time.

Celestial Brush: Varies (A++) A technique once wielded by the Gods and only the most powerful of mortal men in ancient times. It allows the user to utilize nature and alter the fabric of reality, within certain set limits. This also grants the user the ability to view the world as a canvas, seeming to stop time for thirty seconds. Since becoming a Heroic Spirit in this incarnation, Chibiterasu no longer is limited by ink.

It is divided into a number of individual techniques:

Sunrise: (Support) Allows one to either create or prolong daytime by placing the sun in the sky.

Rejuvenation: (Support) This restores damaged or broken objects to their original condition.

Guidance: (Anti-Unit) Allows the user to force anyone without Magic Resistance to move along a set route as chosen. Does not affect the mind, or upper body.

Power Slash: (Anti-Unit) Allows one to cut through many obstacles (or people) without any form of physical contact being necessary.

Greensprout: (Support) Makes any form of plant life, such as trees, grow, bloom, or sprout instantaneously.

Cherry Bomb: (Anti-Unit) This creates a single round bomb with a burning fuse. The fuse normally takes several seconds to burn down and detonate the bomb, but it can be quenched by water or other outside forces; alternately, if the main body of the bomb comes into contact with fire or a weapon strike, the bomb will explode instantly.

Waterspout: (Support) Allows one to move water from a source to a new destination, such as a fire. Can even make it rain for a short while.

Inferno: (Anti-Unit) The user ignites a target from an existing source of fire, such as an open flame.

Magnetism: (Support) Allows the user to magnetize metal objects and either pull them together, or push them apart.

Galestorm: (Support) Creates a strong wind at will. Disrupts other wind-based abilities

Thunderstorm: (Anti-Unit) The user electrocutes a target by using an existing source of electricity, such as an overhead lightning storm, open socket, or an exposed power cable.

Alulim
June 2nd, 2011, 04:04 PM
More~

Class: Saber

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Ushiwakamaru

Alignment: Lawful Good

N. Phantasm: B

Strength: A

Mana: C

Endurance: A

Agility: C+

Luck: E

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: A

Item Construction: C

Personal Skills:

Clairvoyance (True): A+ (Grants Waka brief visions of the future)

Projectile (Swords): C

Military Tactics: C

Noble Phantasms:

Hōgan: Support (C) Waka’s official title supposedly granted by the Imperial Court, also known as ‘tragic hero’. While this has no relevance to Waka’s life, it is part of his legend. It hides Waka’s true abilities behind that of his legend as Yoshitsune. It is broken the moment one figures out Waka’s true nature.

Pillow Talk: Anti-Unit (B) An Immaterial sword, disguised as a flute, with the ability to pass through armor and hit directly against the flesh.




Class: Caster

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Princess Fuse

Alignment: Lawful Good

N. Phantasm: A

Strength: E

Mana: A

Endurance: D

Agility: D

Luck: A

Class Skills:

Territory Creation: B

Personal Skills:

Clairvoyance (True): B

High-Speed Divine Words: B

Vitrification: C

Noble Phantasms:

Satome Power Orbs: Support (B) These are the eight orbs that the Eight Canine Warriors protect. Each orb represents a different concept of zen buddhism. They grant Fuse the equivalent of ‘Magic Resistance: A’.

Nansō Satomi Hakkenden: Support (A+) Nansō Satomi Hakkenden is Fuse’s reality marble that calls upon the Eight Canine Warriors to fight for her within an endless windy field of flowers. The only obstructions are the many windmills that dot the landscape. The dogs are all accomplished fighters, sworn to serve anyone of the Satome family. Each Canine Warrior possesses one Power Orb, which grants them the equivalent of ‘Magic Resistance: D’.

Alulim
June 2nd, 2011, 04:05 PM
Class: Archer

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Yoichi

Alignment: Lawful Neutral

N. Phantasm: B

Strength: C

Mana: D

Endurance: D

Agility: C

Luck: A++

Class Skills:

Independent Action: A

Personal Skills:

Clairvoyance (True): C

Disengage: C

Protection of the Gods: Ex (Yoichi is completely protected from any supernatural elemental force, such as fire from a dragon)

Noble Phantasms:

Archer’s Apple: Support (C) A special apple that Yoichi can always hit, even if he is on the other side of the world. Can possibly be used to mark a target.

Kiseki: Anti-Unit (B) Yoichi’s bow, a perfectly normal wooden bow until it was used as a medium for many godly ‘miracles’. Since becoming a Heroic Spirit’s weapon, this bow can channel these ‘miracles’ any time Yoichi wills it.



Class: Lancer

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Benkei

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

N. Phantasm: B

Strength: B

Mana: E

Endurance: B

Agility: B

Luck: D

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: C

Personal Skills:

Collector of 1000 Swords: B (Gives Benkei basic knowledge on how to wield any weapon)

Eye for Art: D

Noble Phantasms:

Thousand Edge: Anti-Unit - Anti-Army (E - B) The complete collection of Benkei’s one thousand weapons housed on his back. He is able to utilize each individually or make the multitudes rain down on his foes. The number though, is limited to the thousand he has in his possession.

Alulim
June 2nd, 2011, 04:07 PM
Final~

Servant: Berserker

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Oki

Alignment: Lawful Mad

N. Phantasm: A

Strength: A

Mana: C

Endurance: B

Agility: A+

Luck: D

Class Skills:

Mad Enhancement: C

Personal Skills:

Eternal Arms Mastership: A

Instinct: C

Monstrous Strength: E (Grants Oki beast-like power when human)

Shapeshift: C (Allows Oki to transform between man and wolf at will)

Noble Phantasms:

Forest of Deception: Support (Ex) Oki’s reality marble that calls upon the most feared forest of his homeland, Yoshpet. Yoshpet means consuming forest in his native language, for many who enter never return. It deludes the mind and removes any sense of direction one may have, and only those of the Oina tribe, like Oki, are immune to its soporific effects. The layout of the forest changes with time, so no path remains open for long. In addition to which, much of the plant life within is malicious and will actively pursue intruders to either kill or consume them.

Kutone: Anti-Unit (A) A holy blade that glows with power. It converts the prana of the wielder into a silver aura that slays evil and protects the user from anything classified as ‘impure’ such as the yokai of Oki’s homeland.



Servant: Assassin

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Rao (An evil fox spirit in the form of a priestess, Rao. Became a hero due to saving people in order to keep up her disguise)

Alignment: Lawful Evil

N. Phantasm: A

Strength: D

Mana: B

Endurance: E

Agility: A

Luck: D

Class Skills:

Presence Concealment: A

Personal Skills:

Mental Pollution: Ex (Due to being an evil Yokai, humans are completely unable understand her)

Mystic Face: C

Projectile (Prayer Slips): D (Lacks the proper skills to fully utilize them)

Noble Phantasms:

Fox Rods: Support (A+) Rods containing the souls of 9 foxes. It can bestow incredible power unto those with evil intentions. (Increases all parameters, except luck, by one rank) It also allows the summoning of 9 ‘Tube Foxes’ to serve the user.

Ninestrike: Anti-Unit (B) A Divine Instrument level sword. Can shoot beams of light fueled by the wielder’s prana.




Servant: Avenger

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Sugawara Michizane

Alignment: Lawful Neutral

N. Phantasm: B

Strength: B

Mana: A

Endurance: C

Agility: C

Luck: E

Class Skills:

N/A

Personal Skills:

Innocent Monster: A (He was possessed by a demon after death, people attributed the acts of the demon to Sugawara himself. He wears the demon’s face as a mask)

Military Tactics: B

Noble Phantasms:

Unnamed Lute: Anti-Unit (B) An unnamed lute with an immaterial sword hidden inside. Can ignore armor and strike directly against flesh.

Xamusel
June 2nd, 2011, 04:10 PM
Class: Archer

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Yoichi

Alignment: Lawful Neutral

N. Phantasm: B

Strength: C

Mana: D

Endurance: D

Agility: C

Luck: A++

Class Skills:

Independent Action: A

Personal Skills:

Clairvoyance (True): C

Disengage: C

Protection of the Gods: Ex (Yoichi is completely protected from any supernatural elemental force, such as fire from a dragon)

Noble Phantasms:

Archer’s Apple: Support (C) A special apple that Yoichi can always hit, even if he is on the other side of the world. Can possibly be used to mark a target.

Kiseki: Anti-Unit (B) Yoichi’s bow, a perfectly normal wooden bow until it was used as a medium for many godly ‘miracles’. Since becoming a Heroic Spirit’s weapon, this bow can channel these ‘miracles’ any time Yoichi wills it.



Class: Lancer

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Benkei

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

N. Phantasm: B

Strength: B

Mana: E

Endurance: B

Agility: B

Luck: D

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: C

Personal Skills:

Collector of 1000 Swords: B (Gives Benkei basic knowledge on how to wield any weapon)

Eye for Art: D

Noble Phantasms:

Thousand Edge: Anti-Unit - Anti-Army (E - B) The complete collection of Benkei’s one thousand weapons housed on his back. He is able to utilize each individually or make the multitudes rain down on his foes. The number though, is limited to the thousand he has in his possession.

Ooh, cool! Hey, is it alright if I use Nasu no Yoichi and Benkei for my AU F/sN-Naruto Crossover? Thing is, I'm no good with making up Servants, and I was going to work on those two, anyway, but you already made them... please?

Alulim
June 2nd, 2011, 04:15 PM
Well, they are more based on their game counterparts than historical, but as long as you give credit where credit is due then I am fine with it.

Xamusel
June 2nd, 2011, 04:17 PM
Ah, good, I was going to give credit where due, anyway... thanks, Alulim.

...Which game, by the way, were you talking about?

Ergast
June 2nd, 2011, 04:18 PM
Okami and Okamiden.

Xamusel
June 2nd, 2011, 04:19 PM
Ah... wasn't too sure about the game, not that I'm familiar with them, but thanks for clearing it up.

Alulim
June 2nd, 2011, 04:51 PM
Look them up here to see what they look like.
http://okami.wikia.com/wiki/%C5%8Ckami_Wiki

Xamusel
June 2nd, 2011, 04:58 PM
Okay, that makes better sense, thanks for sharing the wiki link.

Alulim
June 2nd, 2011, 05:00 PM
Welcome~

Arkanian
June 3rd, 2011, 11:20 PM
I'll admit that I don't have a very good grasp of the rankings system just yet, so the rankings are probably way off... I couldn't really think of good names for the Noble Phantasms, either...

Class: Caster

Name: Harry Dresden

Alignment: Chaotic Good

Servant Stats:

Strength: C
N. Phantasm: B
Mana: B
Agility: C
Endurance: B
Luck: D


Class Skills:

Territory Creation: (B+) Can create a workshop; if a powerful spirit is present, can create a "Sanctum," which is superior to a workshop.

Item Construction: (C) Can create potions of varying effect; can also create magical foci, but takes large amounts of time to do so.

Riding: (B) Most vehicles can be handled with above average skill. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasm Races such as Demoniac Beast and Holy Beast-rank creatures.


Personal Skills:

Soulfire: Can expend stamina (Not mana) to increase a spell's power by one rank. Spells bolstered such can be considered divine.

Nature of a Rebellious Spirit: (B) Possesses a natural disrespect for authority. Negates Charisma of an equal rank or lower.

Magecraft: (B) Possesses high level knowledge of magic, utilized primarily through foci.

Battle Continuation: (B) Can continue to fight without decreased proficiency so long as injuries sustained are not fatal. Can continue to fight with fatal injuries for a short time, but physical and magical ability is decreased.

Mastery of Other Arms: (D/E) Possesses proficiency in weapons associated with another class, in this case firearms (D-Rank) and swords (E-Rank).


Noble Phantasms:

Silver Pentacle: Support (C) An inherited Medallion made of silver. Representative of his belief in Magic itself, he can channel his faith into it to create a semi-divine light that wards off monsters. Beings of a highly demonic nature will be burned by its light.

Bob the Skull: Support (B) A spirit of knowledge contained within a skull. When consulted it can provide information on the workings of any sort of magecraft. If allowed outside of the skull, it can possess the bodies of non-sentient creatures; however it can only do so at night.

Susan: Anti-Army (B) The undead dinosaur that Harry Dresden once rode into battle. This event became legendary enough that Dresden is capable of summoning it as a Noble Phantasm.



Yeah, corrections and suggestions would be appreciated; I'm not completely happy with how this came out.

I also came up with servant stats for some characters from the novel I'm writing (Solely for my own amusement). They're honestly not that great, though.

Alulim
June 3rd, 2011, 11:24 PM
Susan! Hooray for the Dino!

Elyrin
June 6th, 2011, 02:19 AM
Jack Rakan, because why the hell not.

Servant Saber

Name: Jack Rakan
Alignment: True Neutral

Parameters:

Strength: B(A+)
Agility: B(A)
Endurance: A+
Prana: B(A+)
Luck: C(B)
Noble Phantasm: A

Skills:

Magic Resistance, Rank A: Cancels incoming spells of A rank or below. Rakan is essentially untouchable by all but a handful of modern Magi.

Battle Continuation, Rank A+: The ability to stay alive and continue fighting despite severe injuries. Wounds will not adversely affect Rakan's fighting ability, and he can continue fighting until taking multiple decisive fatal wounds.

Bravery, Rank A+: The ability to negate mental interference. At this level, Rakan is essentially immune to all forms of mental interference. Grants the additional bonus of increasing melee damage.

Eye of the Mind (True), Rank A: Heightened insight refined through experience. Rakan is capable of calm analysis of battle conditions and the surrounding area even when in danger, and can easily formulate a plan for victory or escape after examining all possibilities. Even if there is a 0% chance of success, this ability can make the impossible possible.

Projectile (Weaponry), Rank A: Expertise with thrown projectile weapons. At this level, any weapon Rakan is capable of using can be thrown with force comparable to an artillery strike.

Divinity (False), Rank C: Rakan does not possess actual divine ancestry, but due to his immense power he was worshipped by some as a living god. This skill grants him abilities associated with Divinity without gaining any glaring weaknesses.

Magecraft, Rank A+: Knowledge of many different forms of Magecraft. Rakan is capable of analyzing, understanding, and replicating any magical technique he has seen more than once. Even some abilities that should be unique are within his ability to use.

Prana Burst, Rank A: The ability to imbue both weapons and one's own body with Prana to increase performance. Grants a considerable boost to strength and defense.

Noble Phantasms:

Ho Heros Meta Khilion Prosopon - The Hero With A Thousand Faces
Support, Rank B
A massive magical armory, containing one thousand weapons. Most of the weapons within are swords of various types and sizes, but there are a number of axes, spears, and other weapons as well. Most of the weapons have no special ability as Noble Phantasms, but they can still be used as Broken Phantasms if needed. The armory contains a handful of items whose own legend has allowed them to become separate Noble Phantasms.


Zankanken - Battleship Cleaver
Anti-fortress, Rank B
A sword, similar to many others within Rakan's armory, except for its incredible size. More than 120 feet long, it was a weapon originally used for destroying flying warships. It possesses no unusual abilities, but rather its power lies in sheer attack strength.


Type-97 Magical Armour - Imperial Battering Ram
Anti-fortress, Rank A+
An enormous armoured gauntlet, larger than Jack Rakan's entire body. It is unwieldy, but powerful, capable of crushing all but the strongest defense with ease. When activated as a Noble Phantasm, a piston in the weapon fires, causing the attack to impact with greatly increased force. Its damage recieves a boost when Rakan is critically injured.


Willpower Defense - All you need is a little spirit
Support, Rank B
Jack Rakan's will to live, manifest as a magical defense. Negates all damage from attacks below B Rank, and reduces damage from higher-ranked attacks. When activated as a Noble Phantasm, Willpower Defense will stop one attack without fail. Even a Conceptual Weapon embodying the concept of 'piercing any defense' will have trouble bypassing this Noble Phantasm.


Invincible - The Man Who Cannot Die
Support, Rank A++
For much of his life, Jack Rakan was considered an invincible warrior by many - including himself. Due to Rakan's sheer power, skill and confidence, he fully believes that he cannot be killed. As a result, this Noble Phantasm reduces his parameters and forces him to fight armed, as he is a stronger fighter when unarmed. He is unable to take any opponent seriously until he is already in mortal danger, at which point his restraints are lifted.

If Jack Rakan is killed by any means, he will immediately return to his feet and continue to fight unhindered. Even complete destruction of Rakan's body cannot stop the activation of this Noble Phantasm.

EnigmaticFellow
June 6th, 2011, 02:31 PM
Now I want to see a fight between Rakan and Gilgamesh.

Xamusel
June 6th, 2011, 02:52 PM
I know who would win the fight between Rakan and Gil... RAKAN!!

Master of Chaos
June 30th, 2011, 04:54 AM
With the advent of CM4 - and the introduction of Fate/Apocrypha - I predict that many new heroes will end up being added here pretty soon. Still, especially because of the new materials that came in the book, I believe we should review our definitions and standards about Servants for a moment. Here is what something that I've worked on.

CLASS DESCRIPTIONS

Saber
The knight of the sword. For Heroic Spirits that come under it, an appropriate legend for a knight of the sword is a matter of course, but the highest rank in all parameters but MGI is also required. The Class Skills Magic Resistance and Riding are provided. Also, many of the Heroic Spirits that come under it have as their forte to excel in instantaneous attack power.
Standards: STR-A END-B AGI-B MGI-C LCK-D

Lancer
The knight of the spear. Right after Saber, the conditions to come under it are strict. In addition to excel in overall parameters, AGI must be especially high. Inevitably, their specialty is hit-and-run tactics that capitalize on the reach and nimbleness of the spear. Origins is comprised of many Heroic Spirits of knights.
Standards: STR-B END-C AGI-A MGI-D LCK-E

Archer
The knight of the bow. A class that made the strength of the Noble Phantasm its forte, the conditions thus become not the size of the parameters, but possessing strong projectile weapons and unique abilities related to projectile weapons. Aptitude as a scout is high, other than the Magic Resistance of a knight, also possess Independent Action as Class Skill.
Standards: STR-C END-C AGI-C MGI-E LCK-E

Rider
The mounted soldier. Heroic Spirits that possess legends with a deep relation with some sort of vehicle (not limited to creatures) come under it. There is a tendency of having low parameters when compared to the Three Knights, but that is compensated by the performance of the mount detailed in the legend. As Class Skills, other than Magic Resistance, it also possess Riding at an unusual high rank.
Standards: STR-D END-D AGI-B MGI-C LCK-E

Caster
The magus. The conditions to come under it are just having attained the highest ranking of magic ability. Because of this special quality, many of the Heroic Spirits that come under it have low fighting ability. Furthermore, because most Servants are equipped with the Magic Resistance Class Skill, it is evaluated as the weakest Class.
Standards: STR-E END-E AGI-C MGI-A LCK-B

Assassin
The assassin. Heroic Spirits that possess legends as professional killers come under it. Because most don’t have glorious legends as heroes, their parameters are low. Their Class Skill is Presence Concealment and a fighting style that capitalize on this ability becomes their lifeline.
Standards: STR-D END-D AGI-B MGI-E LCK-B

Berserker
The mad warrior. Heroic Spirits that went mad in battle come under this. Normally, a condition in which a Servant can fully display the performance of the original Heroic Spirit would be ideal. However, Mad Enhancement strengthens the Servant into a performance that surpasses that of the Heroic Spirit in exchange of robbing his reason. Originally, it is a Class meant to strengthen weak Heroic Spirits.
Standards: STR-C END-D AGI-D MGI-E LCK-E

Avenger
The revenger. A class specialized for the summoning of anti-heroes. Conditions to come under it are to have a legend as a villain that caused great evil. Parameters are not necessarily high, but many have unique skills and Noble Phantasms that make them a great threat. Class Skill is the random Wild Card.
Standards: STR-D END-D AGI-C MGI-C LCK-E

Saver
The messiah. Conditions are to possess a legend as a martyr who brought salvation to humanity somehow. Many of the Heroic Spirits that come under it are widely famous all around the world. That being said, these Servants are not necessarily strong in combat and, in fact, many have abilities more suited to support roles.
Standards: STR-E END-D AGI-D MGI-B LCK-A

Ruler
The supreme ruler. Conditions are to possess legends of manipulating others into doing one’s biding. Mostly Heroic Spirits that were monarchs or military generals in their previous life come under it, but the likes of “a sage with authority over demons” and “a feral child that controls wild beasts” are also eligible. Usually weak at one-on-one fights, but in exchange possess abilities and Noble Phantasms that excel at group battles.
Standards: STR-D END-D AGI-D MGI-E LCK-C



Regarding the two last Classes, Saver was introduced in Fate/Extra and Ruler in Apocrypha.

Keyne
June 30th, 2011, 04:59 AM
Saver
The messiah. Conditions are to possess a legend as a martyr who brought salvation to humanity somehow. Many of the Heroic Spirits that come under it are widely famous all around the world. That being said, these Servants are not necessarily strong in combat and, in fact, many have abilities more suited to support roles.
Standards: STR-E END-D AGI-D MGI-B LCK-A
Heroic Spirit Jesus of Nazareth, anyone?

Master of Chaos
June 30th, 2011, 05:08 AM
Heroic Spirit Jesus of Nazareth, anyone?

Pretty much any Catholic Saint falls under this one. Other than that, I think that national heroes like George Washington and Che Guevara could also be eligible.

DreamsRequiem
June 30th, 2011, 05:10 AM
Cool.

Keyne
June 30th, 2011, 05:27 AM
Cool.
Cool.

Ergast
June 30th, 2011, 06:15 AM
Interesting...

Kotollama
June 30th, 2011, 06:23 AM
i liked it.

can i use for my RPGs?

Keyne
June 30th, 2011, 06:25 AM
The Ruler class goes along nicely with Jeanne. By divine providence she managed to rally up a huge amount of French knights and soldiers to fight along with her to liberate France.

Kotollama
June 30th, 2011, 06:32 AM
The Ruler class goes along nicely with Jeanne. By godly providence she managed to rally up a huge amount of French knights and soldiers to fight along with her to liberate France.

before, she could be only saber, but the problem is
for jeanne, flag > sword. that was said by her in the trial... so, it's quite forced to put her in saber class only because "there's no other classes more suited for her"
now the problem is solved.
i was thinking in put a "commander" servant class in RPG, but i hate to use unnofficial material in my Fate's RPGs.

Keyne
June 30th, 2011, 06:36 AM
She carries the Banner of France, I presume.

Kotollama
June 30th, 2011, 07:53 AM
She carries the Banner of France, I presume.
it is not like "a banner of France", but it's quite interesting.

once she got the attention of the dauphin, she asked to a servant to dig in a churchyard (i think the one of fierbois). There, they found a very rusted sword. it is said that when the blacksmith iniciated the processes in the sword, the rust came off very easily, and is said that was the sword used by Charles Matel to expell the muçulmans from some territories of the Iberic Europe... so, it's a legendary sword. (note: the same sword broken when jeanne slapped a whore with the blunt face of that sword in a certain episode)
but, coming again to the banner topic, i think that once she entered in Orleans (i can be wrong), she asked for a servant of her to provide a white banner, with the name of Jesus and Mary. If i'm not wrong, it have a cross to, right in the middle.

One thing really important is that, in her trial, they asked her "if you would to choose only one, the sword or the banner, who you would choose?" and she responded with conviction that she would choose the banner, as the sword was, for her, more like a tool for parry, but the banner was much more important.
And, getting off the topic again, but i think it's a good ocasion to, it was attested that jeanne never killed a man in the battlegrounds... she even forced her companions to release the prisioners; she always gave the option of surrender to her enemies, even BEFORE the combat (the english army always laughed at that part).

Most of these informations can be found in the book "Jeanne d'Arc Médium" of the french author Léon Denis, who used strong (to my opinion) arguments and did a good research to write that book.


again, sorry about the BAD ENGRISH.

Keyne
June 30th, 2011, 07:54 AM
once she got the attention of the delphin (delphine?)
Dolphin.

Was that the word you were looking for?

And off-topic or not, this is quite interesting.

Master of Chaos
June 30th, 2011, 08:05 AM
i liked it.

can i use for my RPGs?

Sure, go ahead.


The Ruler class goes along nicely with Jeanne. By divine providence she managed to rally up a huge amount of French knights and soldiers to fight along with her to liberate France.


before, she could be only saber, but the problem is
for jeanne, flag > sword. that was said by her in the trial... so, it's quite forced to put her in saber class only because "there's no other classes more suited for her"
now the problem is solved.
i was thinking in put a "commander" servant class in RPG, but i hate to use unnofficial material in my Fate's RPGs.

Depending on how it is done, she could also make an excellent Saver. Her flag was more some an item of sentimental value than a Noble Phantasm-material relic. The closest thing that she ever had of a legendary item was the holy sword found at St Caterine's church in Fierbois.



Also, something that I forgot to put earlier. Avenger's Class Skill, Wild Card, was something that I came up myself. In essence, upon summoning, it selects a Class Skill of one of the other Classes that is most suitable to the Avenger and copy its effects (for example, when Angra Mainyu was summoned in the 3rd War, it copied the effects of Mad Enhancement, which was the Class Skill most suitable for him). I was thinking of making the Skills for the two remaining Classes as well, but couldn't come up with anything good. All that I am sure is that, in accordance to their descriptions, they should have something focused in supporting others (Saver) and something suitable for group battles (Ruler).

Kotollama
June 30th, 2011, 08:54 AM
Perhaps even in english we can use the "dauphin" therme, as we COULD use "Saber" in the brazilian dub (damn, they turned CASTER in "Castor", the portuguese spelling of BEAVER).

hmmmmmmm even if nasu put the status "saint" in jeanne, i can't see her as a "saver" because she was GUIDED by "higher ups"; she wasn't a "superior being", but more an "human being more sensible to the higher calling", a intermediate, a medium. But I UNDERSTAND YOUR POINT OF VIEW.

So, i'm thinking, what defines a conceptual weapon? a banner could have a CONCEPT? witch one? because buffing the moral don't sound me like "hey, this is agains one of the laws of the physics" o.o

but to me, her NPs would be a low one as a sword (maybe, not necessary, but she had a legendary sword), a higher one as the banner and, (yay TM, good job with this one) something about her martyr, when she burned at the stake. i liked the effect of voices witch typemoon put there; i would put too.

Keyne
June 30th, 2011, 08:59 AM
The belief for divine guidance can be a concept.

lethum
June 30th, 2011, 09:11 AM
Hey guys, do you remember the fairy flag? Shouldn't it be a Noble Phantasm in the Nasuverse?

Ergast
June 30th, 2011, 09:28 AM
Perhaps even in english we can use the "dauphin" therme, as we COULD use "Saber" in the brazilian dub (damn, they turned CASTER in "Castor", the portuguese spelling of BEAVER).

Hey, its better than in spanish. For how good the voices and the acting is, the translations sometimes... They literally said Seiba in the dubbing, instead of Seiber (that would be how a spanish speaker would say Saber), and they used Casta instead of Caster (Casta is the spanish spelling of Breed)

And IIRC, they also used Lanza (the spanish of spear, or Lance) instead of Lancer.

At least they dubbed right Archer (archer), Rider (raider) and Berserker (berserker).

Kotollama
June 30th, 2011, 10:39 AM
Rider = MÍSTICA (mystic)
Berserker = VIKING (don't need translation)
Caster = CASTOR (beaver)
Saber = SABRE (indeed, saber, but somewhat is funny to see shirou calling for a sword)
Lancer = Lanceiro (indeed, lancer)
Assassin = Assassino (fine)
Archer = Arqueiro (fine too... hey, what, shiki?)

but the pronounces where terrible too, like
Shirou sounds like "tiro" in de PT-BR dub, "shot"
Illya sounds like "Ilha", "island".
And here they pronounce like Sakuura.

also, was lol to see "attack of the swallow" and "FEEL THE EXCALIBUR".

Keyne
June 30th, 2011, 10:55 AM
Saber = SABRE (indeed, saber, but somewhat is funny to see shirou calling for a sword)
Don't worry, food's already abused the poor sabres enough.

Ergast
June 30th, 2011, 10:58 AM
...

Okay, I withdraw my complains, the spanish version is awesome. At least by comparison.

SeiKeo
June 30th, 2011, 11:23 AM
"FEEL THE EXCALIBUR".

We need to make this a meme somehow.

I3uster
June 30th, 2011, 11:33 AM
It sounds like the slogan for an energy drink.

Alulim
June 30th, 2011, 12:36 PM
Indeed.


Or someone demanding you to feel them up.

Xamusel
June 30th, 2011, 12:39 PM
Uh...

I'll go with the energy drink idea.

Kotonoha
June 30th, 2011, 12:39 PM
Rider = MÍSTICA (mystic)
Lol.

Berserker = VIKING (don't need translation)
LOL.

Caster = CASTOR (beaver)
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL.

ringlhach
June 30th, 2011, 12:41 PM
Or someone demanding you to feel them up.That was my first reaction to that. "FEEL THE EXCALIBUR... IN MY PANTS!" I didn't want to be the one to bring it back up, though. Theo, you do a whole lot of image editing, right? Could we get a demotivator or something?

Or maybe something Merlin'd!Saber might say to Shirou.

Keyne
June 30th, 2011, 12:43 PM
Or maybe something Merlin'd!Saber might say to Shirou.
So ooc it hurts. D:

ringlhach
June 30th, 2011, 12:47 PM
Oh, you know you want it. Who cares about characterization? >:3 [/jk]

I already assume that any fic involving a futa!Saber is already crack or otherwise dysfunctional. At that point, I don't really mind a little more. Especially because the only time she'd be likely to even be able to say that is post-UBW if she sticks around. It's not like Rin would mind...

Alulim
June 30th, 2011, 12:48 PM
Has that ever been done anyway?

Keyne
June 30th, 2011, 12:49 PM
Has that ever been done anyway?
Nope.

Master of Chaos
July 1st, 2011, 07:36 AM
I will just leave this here.

Class: Saver (Saber, Ruler)
True Name: Jehanne d’Arc
Gender: Female
Alignment: Lawful Good

STR: C END: C AGI: B MGI: B LCK: A NP: C

CLASS SKILLS

Aura of the Messiah: A
The ability to support others through just one’s presence alone. Improves the moral and provides bonus modifiers to the rolls of all allies within a 1km radius. Furthermore, at A-Rank resistance against mental interference is also provided.

PERSONAL SKILLS

Divine Order: EX
The ability given to a person entrusted with a mission from heavens. When facing an obstacle beyond one’s capacity, one can draw support from a higher power. Temporary boost of specs to match one’s level with that of the opponent.

Mystic Eyes: A-
Mystic Eyes of Revelation (Apocalypsis). Sees the most favorable procedure to reach a determined future. Not future prediction, but actually to determinate the future through one’s own will, future measurement. Activation condition is that the user must be present at the location where the events will take place. An ability possessed by many saints in the past, Jehanne is a special case in which this was not something she originally had. Rather, this is yet another power that God granted her, thus the only future that she can “see” is the one related to the fulfillment of her mission.

Protection of the Faith: B+
A Skill possessed only by those who have sacrificed themselves for a religious view. Despite being a form of Divine Protection, it is not a blessing from a higher existence. It is only the absoluteness of one’s body and soul, which is born from faith… but if it is too high, it causes abnormalities in the personality.

NOBLE PHANTASM

Fierbois – Protector of the Realm
Rank: C+ Type: Anti-Unit
The sword of heavens. The holy sword found at the church of St. Catherine de Fierbois. A beautiful long sword decorated with five crosses throughout its whole extension. Legend goes that it once belonged to a certain warlord who repelled an invading Muslim army from Europe.

A weapon that emphasizes the trait of “durability”, its power as a Noble Phantasm is to Rank Up END and provide bonus modifiers to all defensive values while equipped. Furthermore, as the embodiment of the “defense of France” mission, its divine protection can be extended to others so long their actions are regarded as “fighting for the sake of France.”




The idea here is that, as a Heroic Spirit, Jehanne has two different facet: one as a military commander and one as a saint. As Saber and Ruler, her military side is more blatant, but as a Saver her side as a Saint receives more emphasis. Thus, not only her parameters, but even her skills and Noble Phantasm should be different.

dragon20990
July 2nd, 2011, 11:59 PM
NAME: Honda Tadakatsu

CLASS: Rider
GENDER: Male

DESCRIPTION: Japanese Samurai who rode under the flag of Tokugawa during the sengoku era. Praised to be the ideal samurai by enemy and ally alike. In over 100 battles he has never been wounded and has never lost a fight. He was a warrior with no equal, proven by winning every single one of our duels.

ALIGNMENT: lawful good

STRENGTH: A++
MANA: C
ENDURANCE: A+
AGILITY: D
LUCK: A

CLASS SKILLS:

RIDING: A
MAGICAL RESISTANCE: A

PERSONAL SKILLS:

CHARISMA: B
MILITARY TACTICS: C
LOYALTY: A++

NOBLE PHANTASMS:


ANTI-ARMY NOBLE PHANTASM: Mikuniguro (horse) A++ - Famous steed of Tadakatsu Honda. Has been with Tadakatsu in all conflicts including one where they were outnumbered 60 to 1. As long as he is not dismounted, he will take no damage.

Spear: Tonbo -Giri (spear called dragonfly cutter) A - One of the three great spears of Japan. It is said a dragonfly split in half by simply landing on it. The spear's sharpness cuts through all defenses A rank or lower.

Dependent Action: If a command seal is used on Tadakatsu Honda, All of hist stats will boost 2 levels in order to compleate the command.

Neir
July 4th, 2011, 12:51 PM
FUCK YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

Revy
July 7th, 2011, 12:36 PM
I didn't finish them, but since I wrote them, I'll share. :)

Soma Cruz (Archer)




Strength: C+
Mana: A+


Endurance: C+
Luck: C+


Agility: C+
Noble Phantasm: ?




Class Skills


Independent Action (A-)

Ability which allows independent movement even after the Master’s magical energy supply has been cut off. At this rank, Archer does not require the energy of a master, instead being able to rely on the energy of the souls stored within him. However, combat which requires the use of magical energy will deplete his strength.


Magic Resistance (B+)

Nullifies all magic that requires less than three verses. Cannot block large scale magic such as great magic and ritual magic. Can be further augmented by Archer’s spirits. Sacraments of the church are still effective however.



Personal Skills


Power of Dominance (EX)

The power of the Dark Lord, Dracula, to absorb and utilize the souls of the many creatures he defeats. Being the reincarnation of Dracula himself, Archer also possesses this ability.


Monstrous Strength (C)

An ability possessed by monsters and beasts. It temporarily raises strength parameter by one for a time limit determined by the rank. The longer Archer uses this ability, the more he turns into the Dark Lord, Dracula.



Noble Phantasms


Claimh Solais, Shining Blade of Lost Legend (B)
Shadow Aria, Phantasmal Demon Forge (E~A)



Lightning (Rider)



Strength: B
Mana: B


Endurance: C
Luck: C


Agility: C
Noble Phantasm: A++



Class Skills


Riding (A)

The ability to ride beasts and vehicles. At this rank, one can ride even demonic and holy creatures, if they are beasts. This, however, does not include dragons.


Magic Resistance (C)

Nullifies all magic that requires less than two verses. Cannot block large scale magic such as great magic and ritual magic.



Personal Skills


Arcane Arts (B)

Magical arts born from a foreign world. Due to the unique method in which these arts are invoked, conventional means of magic resistance are less effective when defending against these spells. Any magical resistance which meets these spells are reduced by one rank while damage is being dealt.


Eye of Mind: True (B)

The calm analysis of battle conditions even in the heat of battle. At this rank, even if there is a one percent chance of victory, the servant is still able to devise a plan to exploit it.



Noble Phantasms


Blazefire Saber (C-)
Zantetsuken (B+)
Odin, Eidolon of Thunder (A++)



Soifon (Assassin)




Strength: B
Mana: B


Endurance: C
Luck: C


Agility: A+
Noble Phantasm: B+



Class Skills


Presence Concealment (B)

The ability to conceal one’s presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. At this rank, the servant cannot be tracked by normal methods and lower-level spells. The rank of this skill drops significantly when engaging in direct combat.



Personal Skills


Vitrification (B)

A serene state of mind. A mental protection that nullifies mental interference. By limiting one’s fighting spirit; one can effectively conceal their presence to most beings. In combination with Presence Concealment, this ability makes Assassin extremely difficult to detect.


Kido Arts (A+)

The ability to utilize the spiritual arts known throughout the Soul Society. At this rank, Assassin can utilize a wide range of powerful kido arts without the need for a chant. Additionally, Assassin is only one of two individuals capable of using Shunko, an advance form of kido which greatly increases one’s abilities.


Shunpo (A+)

The ability to move over a great distance at a high-speed, using only a single step. At this rank, Assassin is noted as being a Shunpo Expert and can perform multiple steps in succession without tiring.



Noble Phantasms


Suzumebachi, Hornet of Stinging Death (B)
Jakuhou Raikouben, Hornet of Striking Thunder (B+)



· Kratos (Berserker)




Strength: A++
Mana: D


Endurance: A+
Luck: D


Agility: B+
Noble Phantasm: A



Class Skills


Mad Enhancement (B)

Increases a servant’s parameters in exchange for their sanity. At this rank, all parameters are increased by one rank. The servant on the other hand loses the most of their sanity, only being able to understand a few words.



Personal Skills


Bravery (A)

The ability to cancel mental interference such as pressure, confusion, and suggestion. At this rank, the servant is immune to all kinds of mental interference including distractions and emotions. Furthermore, there is a chance that the servant’s battle ability will increase when fighting a strong opponent.


Battle Continuation (A)

Strength of vitality for predicaments. At this rank, it is possible to fight even with deadly injuries. The servant can remain alive so long as a decisively fatal wound is not received.


Eternal Arms Mastership (C-)

Mastership of combats arts unrivalled in one’s era. At this rank one can make use of their full fighting ability even if under mental influences. The rank of this ability is only hurt due to Berserker’s natural, deep-seeded rage preventing perfect merging of mind and body.


Divinity (E)

The level of divinity one possesses. As the son of Zeus, Kratos’s original rank is A; however, his rank dropped severely due to being stripped of his powers and his ruthless slaying of the gods on Mount Olympus.



Noble Phantasms


God Slayer, Rage of the Spartans (A)
Blades of Athena, Chains of Redemption (B+)



· Dante (Saber)




Strength: A+
Mana: B


Endurance: A
Luck: D


Agility: A+
Noble Phantasm: EX



Class Skills


Riding (A)

The ability to ride things. At this rank, one can ride even demonic and holy creatures, if they are beasts. This, however, does not include dragons.


Magic Resistance (B)

Nullifies all magic that requires less than three verses. Cannot block large scale magic such as great magic and ritual magic.



Personal Skills


Demonic Lineage (A)

The measure of one’s demonic blood. As the son of the Dark Knight, Sparda, Saber possesses abilities which place him far beyond a mere human. These abilities include the use of magic-like powers and high-speed healing.



Noble Phantasms


Rebellion, Demonic Sword of Blood and Revolt (C)
Devil Trigger, Aegis of Demonic Blood(B+)
Devil Arms, Arsenal of Hellish Conquest (EX)



· Uchiha Sasuke (Caster)




Strength: C+
Mana: B


Endurance: D
Luck: E


Agility: A
Noble Phantasm: A+



Class Skills


Territory Creation (D)

The ability to create a territory which amplifies one’s abilities as a magus. As Caster himself is not a magus, creation of a workshop is impossible. On the other hand, creation of a “field” which is advantageous to him is still possible.



Personal Skills


Presence Concealment (B)

The ability to conceal one’s presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. At this rank, the servant cannot be tracked by normal methods and lower-level spells. The rank of this skill drops significantly when engaging in direct combat.


Ninjutsu (A)

One’s ability as a ninja. At this rank, Caster has ascended to the highest ranks of power and can utilize even high level techniques near effortlessly.


Sharingan (B++)

A unique, ocular technique which awakens in those of the Uchiha. It is a powerful eye technique which grants the user an array of special powers, ranging from clairvoyance to unleashing powerful techniques.



Noble Phantasms


Kusanagi no Tsurugi, The Grass Cutter Blade (C)
Amaterasu, Black Flame of Heavenly Illumination (A)
Tsukuyomi, World of the Moon Reader (A+)
Susano’o, Champion of the Tempest (A+)

Alulim
July 7th, 2011, 01:52 PM
Interesting, like what you did with them.

VelspertheCat
July 8th, 2011, 06:43 PM
Does Sasuke power up when dipped in Angra Mainyu's mud? Will he show us his hatred? Or will he unlock Balancing Sasuke modo?

ringlhach
July 8th, 2011, 06:54 PM
That'd actually be a decent explanation for that whole family, when you think about it... Or not, in the case of Theo. Speaking of, we might want to hide this before we all get mauled by the local bear.

VelspertheCat
July 8th, 2011, 07:00 PM
Fate/Stay Shinobi? Rin becomes the Sage of Six Paths when AM turns into the Juubi? Her Average One trait winds up mutating her eyes into the Rinnegan/Sharingan hax mix, but she gets dipped in Grail Mud.

lethum
July 8th, 2011, 07:16 PM
TBH, what the Sage had, and what the higher levels of the sharingan can imitate pretty well is the Denial of Nothingness. Of course in the manga it was called onmyoujutsu, but the description fit the first magic, IIRC.

Revy
July 13th, 2011, 12:38 PM
Lelouch Lamperouge

Alignment: Chaotic Good
Servant Class: Caster

Strength: E
Mana: E
Endurance: E
Agility: E
Luck: C
Noble Phantasm: A-

Class Skills:
Territory Creation B

Personal Skills:
Charisma A
Eye of Mind (True) B
Military Tactics A
Subversive Activities A

Noble Phantasm
Geass, Power of the Imperial Ruler A-

Eveonder
July 28th, 2011, 07:36 AM
Tore (Алтан ураг) "Genghis" Khan
Chengiz Khan, Princess of the Bow, The King of Butchers

For the sake of my fic, I created a servant to replace Archer. Due to Shirou's condition, Rin will not become his ally and neither will Emiya!Archer be summoned. This OC is meant to be a knight of the bow that matches up to Saber even at her best. She is a true Archer that could defeat even Gilgamesh if they engage each other at sufficient range. I'll consider drawing her with my rusty bad art skills if my story ever manages to reach the 5th grail war in four arcs or so. This took quite some time and research. She's supposed to be the one from whom Archer copied non-NP K+B, the servant from the original war. She is Genghis Khan and yet not Genghis Khan. Grammar and style might be bad since this is more meant for me than for readers. Personality-wise... well she doesn't like the title king of butchers, that's all I can saw for now. What do you think?

Class: Archer
Master: Tohsaka Rin
True Name: Tore
Sex: Female
Height/Weight: 172cm 60kg
Alignment: Neutral Good

Strength: C
Agility: B
Mana: A+
Endurance: C
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Skills:
Independent Action (A)
As supreme commander of the Mongol horde, she can act on her own without a master for upwards of a year. However, under combat conditions, she would probably only last a few weeks.

Magic Resistance (B)
Better than a warding amulet, she is able to nullify magic up to 5 lines.

Personal Skills:
Mind's Eye (True): B - Built from combat experience, the ability to attack and avoid attacks with insight.
Riding: A - Ability to ride things, including lower level divine beasts and demonic beasts.
Clairvoyance: C+ - The ability to see distant objects and see through presence concealment of equal rank.

Noble Phantasms:
Naadam
Festival Bow of the Golden Lineage
A bow supposedly blessed by the Chinese nature spirits as a reward for Tore's virtue after her youngest step-brother Tolui sacrificed himself to appease the Chinese spirits and heal her other step-brother Ögedai. The bow will always strike if the target is within a kilometer. It blesses its wielder superior balance and is perfect for mounted archery. Its wielder will be the greatest marksman, the fastest rider, and the most stable wrestler of all Mongolia. Unfortunately, the arrows are only guaranteed to strike the target, not a specific area of the target. There is also no guarantee for the amount of damage dealt by the arrow since superficial damage also counts. The bow itself was originally made by Tore as her personal weapon. A frame carved of thousand year old birch. Sinew from the strongest deer. Bone and horn from a one horned doe (unicorn). And glue made from a giant lake serpent's swim bladder. The string was first woven from the hide of a moose but was later replaced by Tore's hair. Even before being blessed, this bow could easily strike true at 500 bow (meters) and could block blades without being damaged. After being blessed, this legendary bow strikes targets even a kilometer away. It is a highly efficient Noble Phantasm that can be used a thousand
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Peronnel Noble Phantasm
Range: 3-99
Maximum Targets: 3 people

Arrow of Khan
The Impelling Rain of Thousands
The Khan will never run out of arrows. As support, Arrow of Khan is merely a quiver of unlimited birch arrow fletched with swan feathers. Each arrow is specially treated so that even wood can pierce steel. The arrows when shot double in number for every 40 meters flown. However, the each arrow can only double maximum of 10 times (1024 arrows). When shot with Nadaam, only 1 of potentially 1024 arrows will definitely strike, the accuracy of rest depend on Tore's skill.
Rank: C
Type: Support/Anti-Army Noble Phantasm
Range: 3-99
Maximum Targets: 1000 people

Züchi-yn Ulus
The Golden Horde
A horn that summons parts of the legendary golden horde almost like ghost liners. It requires too much prana to summon the warriors, so she mainly uses this to summon weapons, siege weapons and warhorses, including her twin swords, Kanshou and Bakuya and her own legendary and yet nameless mount, a black horse that runs like the wind raised to divine beast status through veneration. After Jochi's death and subsequently Genghis Khan's death, many of Jochi's children along with the Grand Khan held her in the highest regard. Though she no longer bore the name Chengiz Khan openly, she was still in command of the entire army. While the Grand Khan ruled with authority, she commanded with power. This Noble Phantasm includes a B+ rank attack that is an anti-fortress siege bow which pierces all barriers. The A+ rank attack is a full on cavalry charge back by bow, axes, and siege weapons.
Rank: E-A+
Type: Anti-Army Noble Phantasm
Range: 1-99
Maximum Targets: 999 people

Biography:
Tore is Temüjin (Genghis Khan)'s daughter and the one who represents Khan on the battle field. As the only child of a great female warrior held in the highest esteem by her father, she was trained as a warrior since birth. Her mother died in child birth but her father gave her training in her mother's memory.
From Genghis Khan, Tore learned the art of horse, bow, combat, and most importantly command. The values of honor, loyalty, and honesty were imparted to her like sacred treasures but she did not pick up her father's cruelty. Genghis Khan was a fair man but he punished harshly those who would dishonor, betray and lie. Even as a child, she followed her honored father to the battle field. At the time, she wasn't strong enough to engage to direct combat so she fought mounted with a bow. Even so, she demonstrated her tremendous talent. From a young age, she was able to match even the greatest warriors while fighting at range. But as she grew older, the need to engage in duels without her bow or mount forced her to pick up a secondary weapon.
Female warrior lack the strength to wield an axe so Tore chose to use swords instead. In time, her prowess with her swords grew and she was given command after winning a duel with her father's second. That is why when her father suffered a crippling wound unifying the tribes, she took his place on the battle field. Her smaller frame was hidden and covered with imposing armour with Genghis Khan emblazed onto the right shoulder. She played her father's part in battle and answered to his title. Her father would wear the same armour when addressing his warriors and in the end, she and her father became one and the same. In her armour, she was referred to as Chengiz Khan and Tore simply vanished from all records in order to become the shadow of Khan.

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Later, after invading China, she found a pair of wondrous ancient Chinese falchions, Kanshou and Bakuya, that served her as her main close combat weapons from that point forth. And then the Khwarezmian incident happened. Her soft attitude towards the people of Khwarezmian despite their Shah's affront to the honor of Khan had consequences. Her father put his eldest and cruellest son Jochi in command of the campaign replacing her. In addition, Tore's most beloved sister was to be given as a prize to one of Jochi's generals for his cruel accomplishment of diverting a river through a city. She never heard from that sister again but she could do nothing. She had fallen out of favour with her loyalties being questioned. To Temüjin, honesty, loyalty and honor were held in the highest regard. But he had one more trait that even he was not aware of, cruelty. Tore who had no cruelty seemed strange to him and he did not trust her at the time due to his lack of understanding.
Shah Ala ad-Din Muhammad had insulted honor of Khan by allowing his governor to capture the ambassadors of Khan and their caravan. When more ambassadors were sent, they were shaved of hair and the original caravan was executed. This time Shah acted personally. The mistakes of a governor were forgivable if the Shah apologized but the actions of a Shah reflected his nation. As ambassadors represented their leader, their position was supposed to be sacred and safe from political greed. Genghis Khan was livid and wanted to massacre Khwarezmian down to the last man while taking all the women and children as slave. Jochi was perfect for that purpose and led most of the invasion.
However, during the final campaign, Jochi in his arrogance failed earning the Mongols a humiliating defeat. At this time, her father regained confidence in both Tore's loyalty and her abilities due to the many victories she earned the Mongol while leading her private force. Jochi had fallen from favour, Tore regained command and soon afterwards led the Mongols to victory against Khwarezmian.
Once again in favour, Tore tried to investigate her sister but could not find her. However, she did track down Jochi's planned coup and his part in her sister's fate. He had arranged for her sister to be taken from her as a blow dealt in jealousy because he could not attack her directly even while she was out of favour. For revenge, Tore informed her father of Jochi's coup and he was soon poisoned afterwards. Her own position was strengthened significantly and she was granted military authority on par with her father so long as she lived.
Even after Genghis Khan died, Chengiz Khan remained. She served as a protector, a guide, a commander, and a hidden leader amongst the Khan for many years always remaining in the shadows and acting in the name of Khan. She was Tore, she had no name, but was possibly the single strongest warrior of the Golden Horde. After her warrior years passed, she settled and served as a teacher or advisor for her many younger relatives. She died peacefully in old age.
Tore's one regret is never finding out what happened to her sister. She wishes she could have been stronger and more like a proper Khan so that her sister would not have been given to Jochi's general.

Mazyrian
July 28th, 2011, 10:30 AM
Very nice. I always wanted to make a Genghis Khan Servant, but never could come up with his NP; this is the closer I've seen to that, and better anything I could make. How could she defeat Gil tough? She doesn't seem that hax.
Is all your original creation, or did you take it from somewhere?

Eveonder
July 28th, 2011, 01:07 PM
I'm proud to say Tore is original. I did research into the original Genghis Khan of course but I don't think a character like this has ever appeared in any game. I do admit that some inspiration came from Koihime Mosou where all the heroes are female but other than genderbent historical figure, I think it's unique. Like I said, I made it for my fic.

As for beating Gil... Züchi-yn Ulus should really be an EX ranked NP except it takes too much prana to summon the entire golden horde into the world, but even a portion of it can be incredibly strong. It is essentially a Gate of Babylon containing every soldier, weapon, and mount used by the the Golden Horde. That includes legendary swords collected from across the Mongol Empire, anti-fortress typed Noble Phantasms, and enough horses to overrun Fuyuki. She can summon the equivalent of a couple dozen A+ rank NP and fire them at the same time, that's more firepower than Excalibur. The army of men is more taxing to summon because even though they belong to her, they are still dead men and need to be anchored to the world by prana (The same applies for animals). But by the same token, it's not a reality marble so her army won't fade unless directly hit. Some of these men are actually heroic spirits themselves but none of them possess a NP above A+ rank. Though I shudder to make the comparison to Naruto, she has a giant storage seal for equipment and a summoning technique for men. If she's lucky in a direct charge, she has a 10% chance of victory. But that's not why she'll win. She will win because her mobility is higher than Gil even without riding a divine beast. More importantly, she can see him before he can see her and even though their range is equal, her range assault with bow and arrow is just a bit more prana efficient and she has a bit more prana than he does. And most importantly, before engaging a ranged duel, she can set up parts of the golden horde as a trap to attack him when he's occupied. In the end, Ea doesn't do any good if it doesn't hit anything and unless he takes out Vimana, he can't win. Even with Vimana, there's a 50% chance that it'll get shot down. In the end, it comes down to what she is. Tore will win because she is a true Archer, a hero who overcame many trial of adversity having only herself to rely one, while Gil is only an Owner summoned by virtue of a catalyst and forced into a class where he doesn't really fit. Gil would lose to Emiya or Heracles any day.

Mazyrian
July 29th, 2011, 10:16 AM
Hm, I can see Tora is stronger than I thought. Still, I think you are somewhat underestimating Gil; I think full power Enuma Elish could level the whole city, and I wouldn't put past him having some anti nomad army treasure (or better and canon, the originals of her treasures). Not that I bashing Tora, but part of the idea behind Gil is that he has more power than basically everyone else. Even under ideal conditions, Heracles couldn't just overpower him.

Eveonder
July 29th, 2011, 11:40 AM
Ya, you're right about that. Gil is definitely stronger but because he's stronger, I'm saying he'll lose. Tore will take him seriously and snipe him, while Gil remains arrogant. She's faster than him and can attack him from various angles at the same time with her men, retreating beyond his kill zone every time he attempts counter attack. It's like calling in an air strike until he goes down not giving him a chance to get serious. Other servants aren't arrogant enough to walk into a trap like that or let such a tactic get set up but Gil will definitely underestimate his fellow king until it's way too late. I doubt he learned his lesson from fighting Saber or Zero!Rider. I can't think of a single hero who can defeat Gilgamesh if he's serious right from the start using Vimana and Ea against everyone. Tore would lose to Berserker no matter what unless she picks up a few allies but she has a high chance of winning against any other servant.

Larekko12
July 31st, 2011, 05:05 PM
Hm, I can see Tora is stronger than I thought. Still, I think you are somewhat underestimating Gil; I think full power Enuma Elish could level the whole city, and I wouldn't put past him having some anti nomad army treasure (or better and canon, the originals of her treasures). Not that I bashing Tora, but part of the idea behind Gil is that he has more power than basically everyone else. Even under ideal conditions, Heracles couldn't just overpower him.

Full powered Enuma Elish will destroy the World and leave nothing left.


Here's My Try.


Class: Rider,Saber
Kratos Aurion: God of War
Master: Rin Tohshaka
Height: 186 Cm
Weight 78 Kg
Sex: Male
Alignment: Lawful Good
Str:B++(A)
Agl:A
Mana:A+
End:A(Ex)
Luck:B
Noble Phantasm:B-Ex

Class Skill

Independent Action (A):
One of the Four Seraphim Veteran of Countless Battlefield and one of the Ruler of his World and possesor of a Cruxis Crystal.

Magic Resistance: B(A)
Able to nullify Mystic Assualt B(A)- Rank and below.

Personal Skill:
Minds Eye (True) A+: Knowledge honed the four thousand years of battle, study, and Subterfuge allows him to plot through almost all situation and to defeat the term hopeless.

Riding Rank B(A)

Expert of Many Specialization A: 4000 thousand years is a long time with access to all the knowledge in his world.

Element Magic Assault B: Able to cast General Elemental Magic of his home system up to rank B.

Elemenatal Magic Helaing B: Able to heal all but the most greivous of Wounds such as amputation and disembowelment.

Quick Casting A: Able to cast A and Ex Magic in Two Lines. Able to cast B rank magic in 2 seconds.

Angelic Nature A: Removes need for rest, and food. Grants Sensory Control. Drastically enhances to point of Clairvoyance Rank B Allows Flight

Magic Swordsmanship A: Allows Free mix of Swordsplay and magic and Element strikes up to Rank A

Noble Phantasms
Cruxis Crystal Angel Mode: A Rank Support: An advanced Exsphere. This Functions as a Miniature Mana Chanel allowing a human to draw in much more Mana than normal and bring out there fullest potential. normally passive when Activated wings are Released and Strength and Endurance is raised one Rank.

Last Fencer A Rank: made from a Exceedingly Rare metal by the greatest of dwarven Smiths this Blade came to Kratos toward the end of Mithos Reign.

(Rider)Mastery of Derris Kharlan E-Ex.: A giant planetoid pulsing with mana, Angel and monsters. This is a marvel of True magic. Kratos came into is mastery. Combined with Teleportation magic Kratos can call upon all of Welgaia and Vinheim's resources. Or when with the Aid of the Eternal Swordsman Summon it into position in orbit for a strike or draw the battle into its confines.

Judgement A++(Ex) Anti Army: Calls upon the wrath of the Heavens to strike down the unclean with several towers of extra high powered light energy rays. Problems with accuracy against Small Numbers. Rank up against Demons, Evil Aligned Characters, Dark Element, Monsters,Dark Corrupted Characters. Maximum Targets: 1000 people

Shining Bind Ex-(Ex+++): Calls upon the power of a divine Glyph and Chain to Purify and Destroy the Corrupt and Kratos Enemies.
Super effective Versus Demons, Evil Aligned Characters, Dark Element, Monsters,Dark Corrupted

Max Targets:20

Neir
July 31st, 2011, 05:06 PM
True name: Lenneth (Platina) Valkyrie
Class: Saber
Alignment: Lawful Neutral

STR: B+
END: B
AGI: B
MGI: B
LCK: C+
NP: B

Skills:
Charisma - Rank C+
Able to lead a group of powerful warriors in combat with great skill, and increases theor effectiveness. Her charisma is derived more from the power of her presence than her personality.

Eye of the Mind (False) - Rank B
Ability fostered by training in Valhalla and forged in countless battles. The ability to turn around dire situations.

Weapon Mastery - Rank D+
Lenneth has access to a holy lance and a holy bow in addition to the Angel Slayer. These weapons qualify as rank C- Noble phantasms. She is as skilled with these weapons as she is with a sword.

Magic Resistance - Rank A

Riding - Rank D
As a valkyrie, Lenneth possesses massive wings and the ability to fly. As such, her riding ability goes unused, and is diminished.

Noble Phantasms:
Divine Assault: Nibelung Valesti - Rank B-EX

A devastating flurry of blows followed by a massive strike by an enormously powerful spiritual lance. This attack is unaffected by magic resistance or resistance to spiritual attacks. Demonic or unholy foes are tremendously weak against this attack, and may be purified/instantly regardless of END.

Angel Slayer - Rank A
A sword posessing both holy and demonic properties. It was created by Lenneth during her final battle with Loki which ended in her victory and placed her as the new creator of the world.

Alulim
August 23rd, 2011, 02:19 AM
Well...with my current obsession with BlazBlue I have created this in hopes that it will spark my creative juices and help with my fic (completely unrelated). It was difficult to adapt some of the abilities of this character into Servant-like stats, I hope I did well...

Also as it would take ages to completely explain certain abilities I just put the bare-bones information. Also I kinda...forced the NP a bit...this guy didn't really have anything else that stood out as one. I am working on others currently...but I am considering steering clear of Hakumen as TypeWannabe is writing a story where he was summoned.

Also, spoilers may lie within.

“AzureAzureAzureAzureAzure!”

Class: Assassin (Possible Berserker)

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Arakune (Lotte Carmine)

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

N. Phantasm: D

Strength: B

Mana: D

Endurance: C

Agility: A

Luck: D

Class Skills:

Presence Concealment: C [A+](Arakune is able to augment this with his ability to melt into objects)

Personal Skills:

Mental Pollution: Ex (“NoLeftRightUpDown!”)

Monstrous Strength: D (Arakune can utilize the power of the Boundary to temporarily enhance his strength.)

Shapeshift: D (Allows Arakune’s viscous body to take on a myriad of shapes for a limited amount of time.)

Black Beast: E- (By stepping into the Boundary Arakune has gained its power, at the cost of his sanity…and human form. This gives him a vast source of prana to draw from, but he needs to periodically feed on other living creatures to fuel this.)

Noble Phantasms:

Crimson – Beeeeeees!: D – A curse that when placed upon an enemy causes them to be instantly targeted by all of the bugs stored within Arakune’s body. The curse makes the insects always land on target, regardless of the range. This curse wears off in time and can be dispelled with little difficulty, so it is only efficient for close-quarters combat or tracking an enemy to their base.
http://images.wikia.com/blazblue/images/5/52/ArakCSArt.png

Alulim
August 23rd, 2011, 04:50 AM
Well, here is the second in the series. BlazBlue has captured me...which kinda frustrates me a little, but what can you do?

Again, I had to alter and simplify things to make them fit...so I hope I didn't leave anything too important out.


Ah yes, there may be spoilers

“White feathers for innocence, black feathers for darkest sin! We are the messengers and hammers of god, come to deliver righteous justice! Let sinners be punished! Let justice be done!”

Class: Saber

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Tsubaki Yayoi

Alignment: Lawful Good

N. Phantasm: B

Strength: B

Mana: A+

Endurance: D

Agility: C

Luck: D

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: B

Riding: D (As a noble of the Duodecim Tsubaki has been taught how to ride horses.)

Personal Skills:

Guardian Knight: E (As Tsubaki is a strong believer in justice she cannot allow innocents to be harmed, thus she will protect them with all her might.)

Protection of the Faith: C (Tsubaki’s belief in justice is so strong that it almost reaches the level of religious fanaticism, because of this she receives protection as if a deity was watching over her.)

Ars Magus: A (Aptitude with Ars Magus, similar to magecraft of the same rank. There is very little difference between Ars Magus and modern magecraft so they function largely the same. Aptitude of this rank allows the usage of a wide variety of Ars, regardless of purpose.)

Noble Phantasms:

Sealed Weapon Izayoi – Steal the Light from the World: B – An Ars Armagus in the form of a sword and shield, they resemble nothing more than a pen and book respectively. As its name suggests Izayoi is able to 'steal' light from its surroundings, causing blackouts and can even blind the enemy temporarily. It can even steal radio wave signals, and can render any other electro-magnetic equipment useless. But this power comes at a great cost; Izayoi also steals the light from the user’s eyes, eventually causing them to permanently lose their sight.
http://images.wikia.com/blazblue/images/8/8f/TsuCSArt.png

Fingolfin
August 23rd, 2011, 05:43 AM
True Name: Clark Kent/Kal-El (Superman)
Class: Saver
Alignment: Lawful Good/Chaotic Stupid

STR: EX (He can throw planets.)
END: EX (He shrugged off a supernova.)
AGI: EX (He can move so fast that it reverses time.)
MGI: F
LCK: A
NP: EX (He doesn't need them, but yeah, he has them.)

Noble Phantasms:

The Ability to Pull Powers out of His Ass: EX

This is something left over from the silver age. Super-knitting is an example.

Indomitable Will: EX

This actives when superman is determined. Once that happens, nothing can stop him. Yes, not even kryptonite and he'll just shrug off magic. Not even death itself can stop him in this state.

Weirdness Magnet: EX

No matter where he is; shit will be going down.

Skills:

Weirdness Desensitization: ?

He has had so much experience with world ending threats and outer dimensional abominations that it's just second nature for him now. Nothing surprises him.

Super Intellect: EX

He's ridiculously smart. Stated to be capable of thinking of a billion scenarios at once. It doesn't stop him from being a complete idiot though. It also makes it hard to fool him with tricks of the mind, and it makes brainwashing him pretty damn hard. Even you do manage it, a piece of him will still be able to eventually fight it off, especially when his loved ones are at stake.

He's a Nice Guy: EX

He's the very embodiment schoolboy goody-two-shoeness. It makes it impossible for holy relics to harm him, and makes anything unholy run away in terror. Like they've just seen Hello Kitty coming at them with a chainsaw.

He's a Jerk: EX

Sometimes he can be quite the asshole without meaning to be. This occasionally almost leads to the destruction of the world and or universe, every other day. In fact, he's probably the last servant you ever want to summon.

Aladar
August 23rd, 2011, 12:05 PM
True Name: Clark Kent/Kal-El (Superman)
Class: Saver
Alignment: Lawful Good/Chaotic Stupid

STR: EX (He can throw planets.)
END: EX (He shrugged off a supernova.)
AGI: EX (He can move so fast that it reverses time.)
MGI: F
LCK: A
NP: EX (He doesn't need them, but yeah, he has them.)

Noble Phantasms:

The Ability to Pull Powers out of His Ass: EX

This is something left over from the silver age. Super-knitting is an example.

Indomitable Will: EX

This actives when superman is determined. Once that happens, nothing can stop him. Yes, not even kryptonite and he'll just shrug off magic. Not even death itself can stop him in this state.

Weirdness Magnet: EX

No matter where he is; shit will be going down.

Skills:

Weirdness Desensitization: ?

He has had so much experience with world ending threats and outer dimensional abominations that it's just second nature for him now. Nothing surprises him.

Super Intellect: EX

He's ridiculously smart. Stated to be capable of thinking of a billion scenarios at once. It doesn't stop him from being a complete idiot though. It also makes it hard to fool him with tricks of the mind, and it makes brainwashing him pretty damn hard. Even you do manage it, a piece of him will still be able to eventually fight it off, especially when his loved ones are at stake.

He's a Nice Guy: EX

He's the very embodiment schoolboy goody-two-shoeness. It makes it impossible for holy relics to harm him, and makes anything unholy run away in terror. Like they've just seen Hello Kitty coming at them with a chainsaw.

He's a Jerk: EX

Sometimes he can be quite the asshole without meaning to be. This occasionally almost leads to the destruction of the world and or universe, every other day. In fact, he's probably the last servant you ever want to summon.

Only the almighty Mary Sue class can counter this monster!

VelspertheCat
August 23rd, 2011, 12:11 PM
He gets mistaken for a bird and Kojiro takes him down.

Aladar
August 23rd, 2011, 12:45 PM
Caster: "It's a bird!"
*Assassin performs Tsubame Gaeshi, Supes falls on the ground dead several seconds later*
Caster: "I guess not..."

Larekko12
August 23rd, 2011, 01:43 PM
Caster: "It's a bird!"
*Assassin performs Tsubame Gaeshi, Supes ignore the non magic sword as it shatter in three different scenarios seconds later*
Caster: "Me want Nao..."
Fixed.

reborn214
August 23rd, 2011, 02:06 PM
Class: Caster

Servant Stats:

Spirit: Old King Allant

Alignment: Evil

N. Phantasm: EX

Strength: F

Mana: A+

Endurance: F

Agility: F

Luck: C

Skills

Knowledge of the soul- with it he can consume souls and bend them like no other

Noble Phantasms

The Demons-EX with it he can summon any of the demons he has ever controlled including an animated shade of himself holding Soulbrandt to steal souls from the people. People with their souls taken turn to mindless zombies which continue to reap the souls of others. Once a demon has been slayed Allant cannot summon it again. Each demon has a D rank independent action.

Soulbrandt- A rank - a legendary sword that grows stronger the darker the users heart is

Summary Old king Allant is completely and utterly useless by himself. Any competent magus could easily kill this pale pathetic slug. However his demons can easily overrun towns and spawn large zombie hordes. Kill him before he gets prana enough to summon his demon.

Fingolfin
August 23rd, 2011, 03:35 PM
Here's a more serious one.

True Name: Bruce Wayne (Batman)
Class: Assassin
Alignment: Chaotic Good

STR:C-
END:B
AGI:C
MGI:F
LCK:? (Batman doesn't need luck.)
NP: EX

Noble Phantasms:

Crazy Prepared: EX

He's ready for anything, at any time and any place. It's said that if he's given enough prep time he could even beat God.

Utility Belt: A+

Batman's handy Swiss army knife of gadgets and doodads. You could probably find anything in there; from smoke bombs to pictures of your mother. This combined with his crazy preparedness makes him a force to be reckoned with.

Skills:

Martial Arts Master: B

He's mastered dozens of fighting styles known to man and several known to monkeys, just in case.

Eye of the Mind (True): A

He's the Batman. Of course his battle instincts have been honed into a practically precognitive degree.

Presence Concealment: A+

He's very good at this. The problem is that it he always uses it to scare the hell out of people or disappear when you have your back turned. It's very rude.

Cruor
August 23rd, 2011, 03:48 PM
Time for some Muramasa. Am unsure if Final Justice should be more Battle Continuation then a NP or even it's own Skill.

True name: Ayane Ichijou (Image (http://i.imgur.com/mde0k.png). 3 years later as Eiyuu (http://i.imgur.com/9vbMc.png))
Class: Rider
Alignment: Lawful Neutral

STR: B
END: A
AGI: C
MGI: B
LCK: D
NP: A++

Weapons: Wakizashi, Katana, Gatling Guns (http://i.imgur.com/qvKYW.png), and the 7 Karakuri.

Theme Song: Uzuki (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W8cEueHSZr4)

Skills:
Riding: B - The ability to pilot a Tsurugi and most vehicles perfectly.


Noble Phantasms:

Masamune's 7 Karakuri: Seven abilities Masamune uses in battle besides its Shinogi.


Mugen Juuseishi: Finger bullets from the hand. Probably not actual fingers as Ichijou wasn't freaking the fuck out when using it. Image (http://i.imgur.com/DtZlQ.jpg).
Kappuku Touteki Choukan: Short range tentacles launched from the body. Did I mention they're Ichijou's intestines (YOU DON'T NEED THEM UNLESS YOU ARE EATING)? Chance of distraction- very high. I mean, the little girl in the mech suit just totally threw her entrails at you who would not look? Image (http://i.imgur.com/PmbNC.jpg).
Onken - Roppon Kussou: 6 tentacles launched from the chest that pierce the enemy and hold them in place. Tentacles are made from the bones Ichijou's ribcage. Can be used in conjunction with Kappuku Touteki Choukan (see previous image). Ichijou's screams were music bloodchilling~ Image (http://i.imgur.com/6cAs2.jpg).
Higatetsuhou - Koenshaku: Uber powerful exploding bullets made from the user's own body. The more sacrificed the bigger the boom. Ichijou launches her teratomas. The explosions are so big Masamune/Ichijou are nearly always caught in the blast. High gain from even minor things (big explosions from launching her skin for instance). Bullets are shot from a gun hidden in Masamune's arm. Image (http://i.imgur.com/Z0i5G.jpg).
Oboro Shoushiken: Superheating Masamune's katana to create Masamune's strongest non-Shinogi attack (though Higatetsuhou has a better radius). Image (http://i.imgur.com/E2PQB.jpg).
Tsuutensai Rasenshou: Masamune's 8th Karakuri of his 7 Karakuri. Really just a hugeass drill he stole from a GHQ base. Can be shot or done TTGL style and do weird spin charges. Doesn't work in space because physics. When Masamune found that out he thought Kageaki was using sorcery to make it not work. lol action-reaction law. Image (http://i.imgur.com/xwUPs.png).


Masamune (Activated with no cost): Prized Tsurugi that was kinda hanging out in vaults for hundreds of years. Before Sorimachi kinda stole it (well, he has connections he might have just asked for it) and gave it to Ichijou to mess with Kageaki's head even more (as if reviving a bunch of people Kageaki's killed/been involved with and putting them in a hugeass experimental Blood Crus wasn't enough). Known by some of 2chan as the Guro Tsurugi (by now you probably agree with that). Has two forms bug mode when not activated and the giant ass power armor. I think I should mention he's totally bugfuck insane and has a quench for justice that can really only be matched by Vhailor, Hakumen, and Sanger Zonvolt and that 'YOU DON'T NEED THEM UNLESS YOUR EATING' thing is a literal quote from him. Image (http://i.imgur.com/5ykp8.jpg).

Return Period (Passive): Masamune's Shinogi. The ability to steal another's NP after getting hit with it and surviving (after getting hit with Sword of Ending/Ugachi Masamune literally grew a nodachi on its shoulder [most likely from the video, out of Ichijou's own organs] to use it).

Final Justice (Passive): So great is Masamune and Ichijou's will to bring justice that even after dieing (they were like- totally cut in half by Muramasa's Railgun) they can still fight normally with full power. Image (http://i.imgur.com/7qw6o.jpg). Half of Ichijou after being slashed by the Railgun while they're still plummeting down to Earth (http://i.imgur.com/xK9fb.jpg).

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Almost no Skills but tons of NP's. I think the 7 Karakuri should be considered Skills and Final Justice too but I just left them as NP's for the hell of it. I tried ordering the Karakuri so they get more disgusting (well, aside from Oboro and Tsuuten as one's the strongest and the other is called the 8th). Did this first because Masamune is simply the most awesome character int he game.

Larekko12
August 23rd, 2011, 05:21 PM
Class: Caster
Name:Yuna, Grand Summoner Endgame
Alignment:Neutral Good
NP:B-A+

Stats

STR:C
AGI:B+
ENC:C
MANA: A+
Luck:B

Class Skills:
Territory Creation:B
Item Creation:B crosstrained with Rikku
Magic Resistance:B
Personal Skills:

White Magic:Ex Absolute command of White Magic True magic capable of reviving the dead, Tearing down all barrier, manipulating time with no ill effect. And the Maniplation and Materialization of the Soul. Spell have damaging affect against the undead and demonic.

Black Magic:A Mastery of all but the Strongest two black magic Spells which are a Rank unto themselves.

Summoning:Ex able to call and give form to all Aeons as well as modify there abilities. Preistly skill with the soul.Able to banish ghosts.

Combatant Casting:A: The style of Magic in Yuna Home prizes Speed and the combat she has seen has has only refined that.

Eya of the Mind True B: As a healer for the sake of her friends she has dilligetly learned to watch the battlefeild with the eyes of a hawk through many life or death fight seeking to deny the usage of the Life spell.

Item Use B: Able to use most artifact items of her world.

Celestial Mark:A+: The mark of one who has been allied with awakened 'Celestial Weapons' Has the Quality Shattering the limits of all Aeons

Noble Phantasms:

Nirvana, The Absolute Clarity of the Moon Support Anti Unit A: The Celestial Staff of the Moon Sigil. Aligned with Magic and the Aeon Valefor. This is a weapon that shall always strike true ot the essence of the enemy ignoring all defensive abilities and there consequences save simply not being there. This weapon also acts as an absolutely insane and utterly broken broken magic Amplifier reducing the Prana cost of any mystic action to ONE UNIT. The Weapon also resonates with the Aeon Valefor shattering the inherent limits on it power and its a abiltiy. Finally this weapon resonate with the passion of it wielder soul tripling the speed its owner enter Overdrive.

Overdrive,The Passionate Soul B: A skill that transcend all to reach the level of Noble Phantasm. When a warrior of supreme talent in Yuna's gather sufficient energy that resonates with a certain condition they can peform Divine Skills that Surpas contemporary limit by far. For Yuna this Skill resonate with healing and allows her to call one of her Aeon fully primed with thier own Overdrive Art irregardless of conditions.

Adventurers Bag of Sharing, The Eternal Support of Allies that Transcends All:B-A++ The Mystic bag is one that breaks many rules and has very few. When true friends share this bag all items in this bag can be accessed by them irregardless of position regardless of space time. There can only be one copy of a truly unique items in time sync. You can store up to 99 copies of not unique items.

How's This and Should i make sheet for the Aeons.

Edit:

Heroslayer
August 23rd, 2011, 06:47 PM
Not bad, but wouldn't Yuna (Summoner version) have really crappy strength? I mean, it looks like you just made, end game Yuna of all sphere routes. Black and White magic, summoning and various mid to high stats.

I dunno, a caster should have less points in physical stats to me. I mean, I don't think either of the Casters (Zero or FSN) had any physical stat above D. Not to mention you put her Noble Phantasms as B-EX but all of them are A and above.

EDIT: No wait, Caster from FSN had a C in agility.

Larekko12
August 23rd, 2011, 07:04 PM
Nah white mages are notoriously more physical beatdowny cause FFX magic white goes through Tiduses Agile Paladin and rikkus. She also pickedup some thief/alch skill skills. Also the mages dodge like crazy in that game. Modded NP. Also Some black magic runs through the Ronso path and you can clean up the board a bit.

Though I really like Nirvana cause the this goes she can stab it in to beserker head and he'll die you can also stab through Avalon with it. I can lower it though. Cause nirvanas very hax. And if she wasn't so nice she would do things like break cast autolife on the city the rapid nuke it with holy. Then toss a mega potion charged for safety.

RR121
August 23rd, 2011, 07:06 PM
Stop abusing +'s. C++ is about equal to A+ so just use that. A+++++ is 5x a Rank A, while a rank B is 4/5 a rank A.

Sherrinford
August 23rd, 2011, 07:31 PM
Let's see what's new in here-


MANA: A+++++

...excuse me? Don't you think there's something completely wrong odd there?


Stop abusing +'s

Good to know... +'s are the new "EX-rank".

Perfect.

RR121
August 23rd, 2011, 07:35 PM
Pro tip -- stop creating servants that would tank Gil, Archer, Berserker, and fully powered Saber allied against them if you want to be taken seriously.

Its kinda silly.

Sherrinford
August 23rd, 2011, 07:40 PM
Pro tip -- stop creating servants that would tank Gil, Archer, Berserker, and fully powered Saber allied against them if you want to be taken seriously.

Its kinda silly.

...such wisdom... Buddha? Is that you?

RR121
August 23rd, 2011, 07:41 PM
Yes, it is I. Also, falling from buildings is bad for your health.

Stay tuned for more insightfulness next week.

Alulim
August 23rd, 2011, 07:50 PM
Yes, it is I. Also, falling from buildings is bad for your health.Le Gasp! Thank you for averting complete disaster for Al, he was going to fall from his house's second floor! Now I know not to~


Also expect the third BlazBlue servant sometime today.