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IhaxlikeNoob
December 27th, 2012, 07:24 AM
Welcome, welcome all.

So I look around Beast's Lair and in one particular section I find something, something that I wanted to try out: Fanart.
Seeing all these other artists around here made me want to try it out as well, reason being is that I want to compare my own works to theirs; also hoping I get some critique.

I leave my thread to start with this picture; ladies and gentlemen, I leave you with my first contribution:

EMIYA​
It's a rough picture and lacking in a few details, however I'm quite satisfied (proud) of it and considering how much of a perfectionist I am that's saying something.
Usually when I start up a picture I would always be dissatisfied with it, erase it, become discouraged, and give up drawing for the day.

http://i.imgur.com/HRq80.jpg?2

Here's the story behind the creation of this picture (For those who care about it):

I wanted to get into the fanart scene (as stated above), however I have yet to acquire a tablet or anything of the sort, thus I'm stuck with the drawing programs and lacking in the much needed hardware.
Curious about what sort of drawing I could conjure up and having nothing better to do I decided to try them out. I jumped into Microsoft Paint (Yes, Paint, don't know why I did though) and started doodling. Eventually I had a solid image in my head and went with it, did take a while to get it done however.
The end result is this.

Critique is welcome, in fact I would very much like to have some. (Not a masochist, honest!)

I'll also likely upload my sketches as well to this thread.

Index:
Narabeck Commission by I3uster (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/3196-IhaxlikeNoob-s-Art-Thread?p=1061467&viewfull=1#post1061467)
Accelerator (Companion art piece to Kamijou Touma) (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/3196-IhaxlikeNoob-s-Art-Thread?p=1061493&viewfull=1#post1061493)

Froggie
December 27th, 2012, 08:19 AM
Ooh, that's pretty awesome for something done in paint. Thumbs up!

I'm not really good enough to be giving anyone feedback, but it seems to me like the creases that denote where the shoulder joints are are a bit oddly placed. I would move them in closer to the body so that the arms at the shoulder have a fuller look.

Five_X
December 27th, 2012, 12:19 PM
Hey, the details are quite nice! I look forward to seeing where this goes. :3

SeiKeo
December 27th, 2012, 12:34 PM
I'm not a doc or anything, so take my anatomy with a grain of salt, but aren't Archer's shoulders less sloped? It seems sort of narrow for him.

IhaxlikeNoob
December 27th, 2012, 02:19 PM
Ooh, that's pretty awesome for something done in paint. Thumbs up!

I'm not really good enough to be giving anyone feedback, but it seems to me like the creases that denote where the shoulder joints are are a bit oddly placed. I would move them in closer to the body so that the arms at the shoulder have a fuller look.

Yeah, noted. I'm not the the best when it comes to crease placement on the clothing, i'll try to improve that next time around.

Hey, the details are quite nice! I look forward to seeing where this goes. :3
I'll try to impress.

I'm not a doc or anything, so take my anatomy with a grain of salt, but aren't Archer's shoulders less sloped? It seems sort of narrow for him.
I figured that with Archer crossing his arms it would be acceptable to make his shoulders like that.
IRL you always have shoulders sloping downward, with Takeuchi you have shoulders that seem perpendicular with the neck.

Lianru
December 27th, 2012, 02:34 PM
The ear is a bit high, I believe that normally the top part is level with the eyes and the bottom part level with the nose.

IhaxlikeNoob
December 27th, 2012, 02:42 PM
The ear is a bit high, I believe that normally the top part is level with the eyes and the bottom part level with the nose.
Really? I just tried it out with my own face and it seemed like my own ear at the top lined up with the ridge in the bone that signified where the eyes started.
I'll take it into account next time.
That being said, I really don't want another example of Crocker syndrome here.

IhaxlikeNoob
December 27th, 2012, 07:48 PM
So I decided to upload my Narabeck commission from I3uster, however this I outlined the picture with pen as well as uploaded it to imgur for better clarity than last time.

http://i.imgur.com/5j5lG.jpg

Question here, does it have to be strictly TYPE-Moon fanarts posted onto this thread?
I have other pictures that I might wan't to share either in the future and right now.

Froggie
December 27th, 2012, 08:02 PM
Question here, does it have to be strictly TYPE-Moon fanarts posted onto this thread?

I post a lot of Madoka Magica art and no one has yelled at me to stop yet.

IhaxlikeNoob
December 27th, 2012, 08:35 PM
I post a lot of Madoka Magica art and no one has yelled at me to stop yet.
Alright thanks for the answer.
Here's somthing I drew like, say six months ago?

Toaru Majutsu no Index fans will recognize this guy.

http://i.imgur.com/a3j14.jpg

It has a Kamijou Touma companion piece that I'll try to put up tomorrow.

shinji
January 16th, 2013, 04:12 AM
It's a very cute sign pic. Is there any larger version? Thx~:neco_arc:

IhaxlikeNoob
January 16th, 2013, 04:35 AM
You mean sig pic right?

Also, this isn't the right place to ask me where I got it from, you could have just pm'd me or just gone to the visitor messages on my profile.

Tadaaaaaaa! (click for full size)
http://i1266.photobucket.com/albums/jj534/KAIZA2002/lchibisigsmall.png (http://i1266.photobucket.com/albums/jj534/KAIZA2002/lchibisigfull.png)
Raw edit by Rowanism, Photoshopped by KAIZA, actual picture is by the Carnival Phantasm team.
Just click on the pic for the larger version.

- - - Updated - - -

Also if anyone cared that I'm long overdue on the image uploads, sorry bout that.
Been busy lately and couldn't scan (or draw for that matter) anything.

Good news at least is that I have a drawing tablet now.

IhaxlikeNoob
January 18th, 2013, 07:24 PM
To anyone who is expecting an new pieces (or if I'm just imagining that I have anyone watching this thread, ;_;) rejoice! It's time to update.
http://i.imgur.com/URvBMJV.jpgHoh? You refuse to entertain me any longer mongrel? That's fine, you have the King's permission to die now.

Took about three days worth of work to get it this far, but as you can obviously tell I'm still not done with it yet. You know, finish drawing, add details, colouring it and so forth.

Tell me what you guys think of it.

Froggie
January 18th, 2013, 07:31 PM
I like the work on the hand very much. The ears are a bit weird though

Lianru
January 18th, 2013, 07:32 PM
Yeah, they stick out too much I think. They could also be longer.

KAIZA
January 18th, 2013, 07:32 PM
Hoh, very nice. You draw nice hands, I gotta say. The hands...
As for critique, his chest looks a bit too wide, especially compared to his head.
And maybe there's something about his ears, but that's probably just me.
^What they said.

IhaxlikeNoob
January 18th, 2013, 07:40 PM
^ I admit I've been heavily influenced by Takeuchi's 'super broad shoulders' a little too much, but I assure you his chest only looks really wide because of the clothing!

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I guess I'll have to work on the ears; make them a bit narrower, little longer too.
Thanks.