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ItsaRandomUsername
April 17th, 2011, 09:55 PM
TOC of Snippets and Shit:

Archer Saved Mami (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=275205&viewfull=1#post275205) - by Megaolix
Madoka Learns Truth the Truth about Counter Guardians (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=275213&viewfull=1#post275213) - by Megaolix
Fraggle's Routes: Part 1 (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=275243&viewfull=1#post275243), Part 2 (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=275256&viewfull=1#post275256) (Mami, NSFW), Part 3 (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=275262&viewfull=1#post275262) (Sayaka) - by Fraggle
Holy Grail War: Magical Girl Shift (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=275312&viewfull=1#post275312) - by AzureGrimoire
Pointless? (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=275316&viewfull=1#post275316) - by NanayaMode
BAR (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=275630&viewfull=1#post275630) - by Nitewind
Kyouko Route (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=289209&viewfull=1#post289209) - by Fraggle
Holy Grail War, Magical Girl Addition (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=301496&viewfull=1#post301496) - by Megaolix
Archer and Kiritsugu, Showdown at Sunset (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=301597&viewfull=1#post301597) - by qsurf
The Many Lives of Tomoe Mami (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=314629&viewfull=1#post314629) - by Sheo Darren
Being Tatsuya is Suffering (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=349392&viewfull=1#post349392) - by Fraggle
??? (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=349508&viewfull=1#post349508) - by Fraggle
Meet the Lancers (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=434108&viewfull=1#post434108) - by Fraggle
HGW, Magical Girl Addition: Due (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=439356&viewfull=1#post439356) - by Megaolix
??? (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=441882&viewfull=1#post441882) - Fraggle
Tales of the Red Knight (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=461615&viewfull=1#post461615) - by Fraggle
??? (Borderline Lemon) (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=462196&viewfull=1#post462196) - Flere821
MadoKami-Sakura (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=462622&viewfull=1#post462622) - by Fraggle
Into the Night (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=463684&viewfull=1#post463684) - by Fraggle
IDEALS Omake (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=464468&viewfull=1#post464468) - by Fraggle
Legends Educate Heroes (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=474500&viewfull=1#post474500) - by Fraggle
Kyubey: REJOICE (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=500609&viewfull=1#post500609) - by Fraggle
Meet the ... : Silence is Golden (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=515181&viewfull=1#post515181) - by Fraggle
Meet the ... : GateOfBabelowned (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=588966&viewfull=1#post588966) - by Fraggle
Crack Snippet (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=610559&viewfull=1#post610559) , Part 2 (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=610991&viewfull=1#post610991), Part 3 (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=706651&viewfull=1#post706651) - by Fraggle
Did Archer just cheat? (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=653357&viewfull=1#post653357) - by Ironfists
Meet the Akemi Family (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=700462&viewfull=1#post700462) - by Fraggle
MadoKami and her Shirou [in a Cage] (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=787290&viewfull=1#post787290) - by Fraggle
Kotomine Shirou and Sakura Kyouko: Debate (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/405-The-Xth-Loop-Discussion-Thread?p=787495&viewfull=1#post787495) - Fraggle





Essentially, what this boils down to is this:

What direction do we want to go in, and what sort of setting shall we opt for? Now that Xth Loop is on the radar and seems ready to evolve past the "snippet-stage", how do we tackle this.

EnigmaticFellow
April 17th, 2011, 09:59 PM
First off, we have to consider the time-line of both ends. Do we want our magical girls to just run into the Holy Grail War or something, or do we want to have something akin to "Steel and Cherry Blossoms"?

ItsaRandomUsername
April 17th, 2011, 10:08 PM
One of the ideas suggested by Comartemis was to make it a pseudo-S&CB styled world with the other Servants around. I will now direct to you my concerns with using such a world:

-Why are the Witches such a threat in the Madoka-verse? Answer: Because they're the primary supernatural power in the show, and as such have full-reign over the lives of the unknowing masses. Another thing is that Witches can only be truly countered by the Puella Magi (although Homura does go to show us that man-made weapons work on the witches just fine, even though it's the PMs who need to do the dirty work). As far as I can tell, PMs are nowhere near Servant level. So by that logic, Servants can probably kill Witches rather easily, unless the Witch in question has bizarre properties that make it exceptionally more difficult to slay. This problem could be easily solved by making so that ALL of the Witches are high-tier and require more than a little elbow grease to off, but this leads to another issue at hand...

-A Hollow Ataraxia-based setting also calls into question the need for an Archer/Homura team-up. If Servants can intercept the Witches/Familiars as they show up, then what is the purpose of the Puella Magi? To get cockblocked by the Servants and therefore get Kyuubey's plans FUBAR'd before they even come to fruition? If the other Servants are still there, then we'd have to be forced to pick and choose who gets to show (ex. Illya, of course, has to be a no-show, since Archer is using Homura as a sort of atonement for his past), because then there'd be character overflow and we'd tarnish the dynamic we'd be trying to build /develop between Archer and Homura.
As a base idea, the reason that the team-up happens in the first place is that Homura's chances of preventing Doomsday are now greater with Archer at her side. There is still this sense of overhanging dread, but there is a slight ray of hope because Homu-Homu has a little more back-up.

More to come as issues/ideas present themselves.

Eveonder
April 17th, 2011, 10:21 PM
Oh-ho, you're actually doing this. I'll give this a read when I finish watching Bunny&Tiger.

But you know... are you letting her fail? Or does failing = Archer destroy everything?

Ruca_Milda
April 17th, 2011, 10:41 PM
Oh didn't notice this thread. Just gonna repost then.

I'm loving the fic! I just hope Archer doesn't try to get my Homura-chan.

Otherwise, there will be consequences....like getting all the Emiya's to become megucas....And as you know, being meguca is suffering....◕‿‿◕

EnigmaticFellow
April 17th, 2011, 10:45 PM
I agree with IRUn that we don't just want Gilgamesh appearing right in front of Madoka and having her being GoBed to death. The only way this can feasibly work is if Homura runs into EMIYA at one point, but the question is how? CGs are usually mindless killing machines while performing a mission.

Eveonder
April 17th, 2011, 10:48 PM
She's desperate and comes across a big book (left by a wizard), which leads her to accidentally perform a summoning ceremony?

Ruca_Milda
April 17th, 2011, 10:53 PM
About some of the things IRUN pointed out:

1) IMO, man-made weapons do not work against Witches, but when wielded by a PM they do. Kind of like Lancelot's ability. I always thought of it like that. I'd think at least one PM has already shown to someone completely human about the witches and QB's plan before they turned Witch.

And I'd rather like to counter your point about Servants being more powerful than witches, but I gotta admit, I have no evidence about that. Oh well.

But yeah I don't want the other servants here, it works just fine with the other Megucas.

EnigmaticFellow
April 17th, 2011, 10:54 PM
(left by a wizard)

Zelretch, the plot device that can potentially explain just about anything.

ItsaRandomUsername
April 17th, 2011, 10:55 PM
If at all possible, it could be Archer!Shirou, the Shirou on his way to becoming a CG, he just needs to die in order to fulfill his end of the bargain to the World (Alaya)? But then we'd need to figure out how Archer seems to know his path is *wrong*, since we know he doesn't become disillusioned until after he's been on countless missions in the name of humanity's will.

The original idea involved Witch!Madoka distorting reality so much that the CG's programming gets altered slightly, which works if you're willing to stomach a handwave like that. But then again, doesn't much fiction involve handwaving of a certain extent? But then there's the big argument about whether or not Alaya's will is strong enough to be overcome by the greatest witch of all time/Madoka's power can subjugate Alaya enough for such an inconsistency to happen. At this point, it seems like it's possibly the most feasible solution out there.


@Ruca_Milda:
No worries. Archer and Homura aren't going to have anything beyond a brotherly/sisterly relationship. Nekomura is still yours.

@Eveonder:
THAT is yet to be determined.

EnigmaticFellow
April 17th, 2011, 10:58 PM
Well, I stomached worst hand waves, but I would rather have a more feasible explanation before falling back on it.

ItsaRandomUsername
April 17th, 2011, 10:59 PM
About some of the things IRUN pointed out:

1) IMO, man-made weapons do not work against Witches, but when wielded by a PM they do. Kind of like Lancelot's ability. I always thought of it like that. I'd think at least one PM has already shown to someone completely human about the witches and QB's plan before they turned Witch.

And I'd rather like to counter your point about Servants being more powerful than witches, but I gotta admit, I have no evidence about that. Oh well.

But yeah I don't want the other servants here, it works just fine with the other Megucas.


Excellent point, Ruca_Milda!


Howzabout we make it so that the power of the Puella Magi is more like Caster-level (IE FREAKING TRUE MAGICKZ) than Rin-level? Also, let's consider the Witches (for all practical purposes) to be akin to mini-Aristoteles...and the mindscape about them is considered their home turf. That would solve the Servant > Witch problem if it were to arise.

And I now change my mind about the man-made weapon business. Even a spork is deadly when wielded by a PM because a PM is using it to slay Witches. Thanks for the input!



Well, I stomached worst hand waves, but I would rather have a more feasible explanation before falling back on it.

Certainly a good point. But with what we have so far, it seems as if it might be the only option, sans LOLZelretch. What a wiley Wizard Marshall!

EnigmaticFellow
April 17th, 2011, 11:13 PM
Certainly a good point. But with what we have so far, it seems as if it might be the only option, sans LOLZelretch. What a wiley Wizard Marshall!

Yeah, I would've suggested something by now if I could think up of it. Even if PMs are the level of Caster servants, we still don't want to do it during the Holy Grail War. That would be too much of a clusterfuck. I guess we'll just go with Ace's first snippet and the handwave to explain how they met.

Froggie
April 17th, 2011, 11:15 PM
Topic that finally got me to stop lurking :) I love me some PMMM. Would you rather have all comments funneled here or in the snippet thread itself, I wonder?

At any rate, a Counter-Guardian being dispatched to fight off Kriemhild-Gretchen does sound plausible. After all, her powers are enough to completely depopulate the earth in 10 days, right? That sounds majorly bad. While you could take that to mean that her barrier eliminates all life on the planet, you could also take it to mean that her barrier overwrites the Earth with her own conception of heaven, like her witch card states. I mean, the world probably doesn't want to get overwritten, right? That also sounds majorly bad. Bad enough that, since she's over-writting the world, a Counter-Guardian might not be a mindless killing machine, perhaps?

Mike1984
April 17th, 2011, 11:18 PM
Counter Guardians work for Alaya, not Gaia, so damage to the world doesn't matter to them.

However, depopulating the Earth in 10 days does, so....

ItsaRandomUsername
April 17th, 2011, 11:22 PM
Welcome!
Fiction-related comments go in the story thread, and anything discussion-related ought to be handled here, methinks.



overwrites the Earth with her own conception of heaven, like her witch card states

That was our logic and reasoning behind it, yes.

Exactly. This Witch is on a completely different level than all the others. So much so that the above happening does not seem like a handwave, but a rather appropriate explanation which makes sense when you think about. Some might have their opinions on it, but honestly you cannot please everyone. Someone will always complain about something, so the best we can do is try to make it work out fine.

We definitely need to make it so that Archer does not turn into a Mary Sue, though. God, do we NOT want that at all. Just because Homura has Archer as an ally now does not mean her job is that easier.

Froggie
April 17th, 2011, 11:34 PM
Counter Guardians work for Alaya, not Gaia, so damage to the world doesn't matter to them.

However, depopulating the Earth in 10 days does, so....

I'll be the first to admit that my Nasu-savvyness is not up to par. I've just wiki'd both terms and can see your point. While Gaia would probably cheer Kriemhild-Gretchen on, Alaya would probably shitting its metaphysical pants. Though, still, I don't think Gaia would be all that happy with the native state of the world getting overwritten by Kriemhild-Gretchens' barrier. It's certainly not the natural order of things, I think. Something that both wills could agree on?


We definitely need to make it so that Archer does not turn into a Mary Sue, though. God, do we NOT want that at all.

Reading the snippets I was more concerned about Homura going from Little Miss Badass Ice-Princess to a sobbing wreck. That was a bit jarring, I must admit.

Well, it's my opinion that Kriemhild-Gretchen presents a credible enough threat that a Counter-Guardian would be dispatched and a DISRUPTIVE enough threat that one that did get sent off might not act... as programmed, I suppose? I mean, she supposedly outright erases anything that has experienced "misfortune" that gets caught in her barrier. Playing it completely straight, Archer would show up and go Poof! That wouldn't make for a very interesting story at all!

Ruca_Milda
April 17th, 2011, 11:35 PM
BTW, Just a random thought of mine:

A Meguca's power level is calculated by this: Potential(which serves as a huge boost, and lets us get stuff like Madoka, who could conquer the world) + her wish.

IMO, the reason why Homura started out pretty uselessly and without weapons, unlike the others, was because her wish was too hax. She could surpass entropy and stop time with it. Which is why she was "balanced out", having no weapon.

However, so that girls like Homura don't turn completely useless, they also get the power to use man-made weapons and turn them into their own weapons. Just a theory of mine, in case we ever need to discuss power levels or such.

Froggie
April 17th, 2011, 11:49 PM
Which is why she was "balanced out", having no weapon.

However, so that girls like Homura don't turn completely useless, they also get the power to use man-made weapons and turn them into their own weapons. Just a theory of mine, in case we ever need to discuss power levels or such.

Could also consider that her magical "potential", as it were, was probably non-existent. I mean, in the original time-line she went from day one to Walpurgis Nacht without Kyubei offering a contract once, until she was about to break from despair (which is his usual MO). Now, Madoka on the other hand? So much magical potential that even without despair inducing events he's trying to recruit her. The way I figure, for Homura it was something like: "Hey, this girl is about to break and become a witch anyhow. Lets take her soul, even if I would've normally ignored her" and for Madoka it was like: "Holy crap, gimme! I'll break you later, just gimme! Now!"

ItsaRandomUsername
April 17th, 2011, 11:53 PM
Anywho, a little announcement here:

The original thread might get nuked in order to re-establish story structure properly. SO, just be aware of that.

Ruca_Milda
April 17th, 2011, 11:58 PM
While reading through the Madoka wiki, I saw this on one of the interviews:


Miyamoto: Yes. Magical girls are not strong. Homura is only strong because of her special ability, but she's weak as a magical girl.

So...yeah I guess my theory is kinda right?

Something more:


In the witch's barrier, there are a lot of weird signs placed everywhere. What are they?
It's what they found in the human world. When the barrier is created, anything in the surrounding environment will be drawn into it. They will then get affected by the magical powers of the witch, and its looks will be altered.

So... maybe Megucas can do something similiar to that with man-made weapons, thus being able to hurt the witches. Huh, I can find some interesting stuff on the wiki.

Eveonder
April 17th, 2011, 11:59 PM
LOLZelretch is horrible, but I can stand LOLZelretch much better than handwaves, (unless it's a crackfic).


"Homura is only strong because of her special ability, but she's weak as a magical girl." <= this means she's the only one with Lancelot's knight of honour?

Ruca_Milda
April 18th, 2011, 12:04 AM
I thought "her special ability" was referring more to her time-stopping, which, let's admit it, is really fucking hax.

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 12:09 AM
I thought "her special ability" was referring more to her time-stopping, which, let's admit it, is really fucking hax.

True, in the naruverse, she'd be on the level of true magic, while other things would just be magecraft. But then maybe aliens just experience time different.

Fangstrike
April 18th, 2011, 12:10 AM
As for Homura being weak, I kind of agree, though it feels blasphemous to do so. Kyubey says the strength of a Puella Magica is determined by two things their talent, which I took to be their innate power/skill, and how many witches they've devoured. So my thinking is that even though Homura started out weak, she got an insanely unique ability, and since then she's been "eating healthy" (read mad witch hunting-it's not like she runs out of prey when she repeats time infinitely). Kind of how like Servants can devour souls, except Puella Magica kind of need to since they don't have the Servant equivalent of a Master, plus it slows down/prevents their mutation into a witch. Corruption is bad, very bad. So I could easily buy Servants and Puella Magica being within the same league in terms of powers.

As for how this all started, Homura and Archer teaming up. I have to confess that I was a little surprised to see Homura being a crying mess. I was willing to buy her being emotional after losing Madoka yet again; she gets teary in the anime still. I think the fact that she has such a close relationship with Archer was a whole lot more jarring. I mean there's not enough tsun in there yet; it's like we skipped over that fun phase, though I can see reasons for wanting to do so.

As for the Counter Guardian issues and how Homura and Archer met, how about they fight? Seriously, that would be badass. Counter Guardian/killbot Archer comes to kill Madoka before she can become a Puella Magica/Witch that threatens the fabric of reality on a level surpassing ORT, and Homura has some words (read: goes batshit) with this guy trying to come between her and her life's mission/true love. In the midst of the battle, Homura activates her time magic, accidentally taps into Zelretch's realm of expertise, brings Archer back in time with her and rips/screws up his connection from Gaia. Kind of like Archer: I must kill you now... wait where the heck am I?

Ruca_Milda
April 18th, 2011, 12:16 AM
Q - And compared with Sayaka and Kyouko, what kind of mahou shoujo is Homura?
A - The design is that as a mahou shoujo, Homura is actually weak. Urobuchi said that she is not too different from an ordinary girl. Of course after transformation she becomes stronger than a normal human, but among mahou shoujo she can be put into absolutely the weakest category. So to make up with that, she got hold of other powers and fine-tuned what she already had. In Ep.8 when she was held by Kyouko and she could not escape, you know her power did not include teleportation. When she was chasing after Sayaka's soul gem, she only skipped over time and ran ahead. She is a special type of mahou shoujo.

Yep, this settles it. I think this is the first time I've ever done true research about powerlevels and the such; I've never done it even for TM. Just proves once again PMMM will always be my favorite anime *heart*

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 12:31 AM
As for the Counter Guardian issues and how Homura and Archer met, how about they fight? Seriously, that would be badass. Counter Guardian/killbot Archer comes to kill Madoka before she can become a Puella Magica/Witch that threatens the fabric of reality on a level surpassing ORT, and Homura has some words (read: goes batshit) with this guy trying to come between her and her life's mission/true love. In the midst of the battle, Homura activates her time magic, accidentally taps into Zelretch's realm of expertise, brings Archer back in time with her and rips/screws up his connection from Gaia. Kind of like Archer: I must kill you now... wait where the heck am I?

I thought Archer or EMIYA needs a contract to manifest. At very least he needs a prana source without a connection to Gaia. Unless, he starts devouring witches too... they're humans souls in despair, right? Kind of? That would be a bit strange. I really don't want him eating the souls of little girls.

Fangstrike
April 18th, 2011, 12:39 AM
I thought Archer or EMIYA needs a contract to manifest. At very least he needs a prana source without a connection to Gaia. Unless, he starts devouring witches too... they're humans souls in despair, right? Kind of? That would be a bit strange. I really don't want him eating the souls of little girls.

Well, given the story's premise, Archer somehow forming a contract with Homura is one of the baselines. Independent action should sustain him for a day or two maybe long enough to get on Homu Homu's good side. Bleh, my ideas got plotholes, never denied that. Just putting it out there.

Ruca_Milda
April 18th, 2011, 12:43 AM
Archer makes a contract with Kyuubey, gets Sayaka's dress.

For some odd reason, Zelretch also brings in Lancer dressed up as Kyouko.

AND NOW THE KYOUKOXSAYAKA IMAGES/DOUJINS JUST GOT CREEPIER

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 12:44 AM
He's not a servant as in he has no class or class attributes, he's closer to a ghost liner and might not need a contract though more likely than not, he'd need one. Regardless, he needs a source of prana.

ItsaRandomUsername
April 18th, 2011, 12:51 AM
A contract does seem like it would have to be formed (I was going to mention something along those lines originally, but that's another snippet), I agree. But not via p0n0s to vag000, there's more than one way to skin a cat.

As for the Homura/Archer fight, that might be rather cool. I can see that happening~
And with the Time Magic/Ripping Archer away, I'd say that the event alone forms a contract between the two of them.

@Fangstrike:
My snippet is when Archer and Homura are more at ease with each other, just as an FYI (although I think you might have noticed that). There will be tsun, don't you worry. Especially with how it should all start of. And I wouldn't really use "crying mess" to describe her. :p

Comartemis
April 18th, 2011, 03:55 AM
One of the ideas suggested by Comartemis was to make it a pseudo-S&CB styled world with the other Servants around. I will now direct to you my concerns with using such a world:

-Why are the Witches such a threat in the Madoka-verse? Answer: Because they're the primary supernatural power in the show, and as such have full-reign over the lives of the unknowing masses. Another thing is that Witches can only be truly countered by the Puella Magi (although Homura does go to show us that man-made weapons work on the witches just fine, even though it's the PMs who need to do the dirty work). As far as I can tell, PMs are nowhere near Servant level. So by that logic, Servants can probably kill Witches rather easily, unless the Witch in question has bizarre properties that make it exceptionally more difficult to slay. This problem could be easily solved by making so that ALL of the Witches are high-tier and require more than a little elbow grease to off, but this leads to another issue at hand...

-A Hollow Ataraxia-based setting also calls into question the need for an Archer/Homura team-up. If Servants can intercept the Witches/Familiars as they show up, then what is the purpose of the Puella Magi? To get cockblocked by the Servants and therefore get Kyuubey's plans FUBAR'd before they even come to fruition? If the other Servants are still there, then we'd have to be forced to pick and choose who gets to show (ex. Illya, of course, has to be a no-show, since Archer is using Homura as a sort of atonement for his past), because then there'd be character overflow and we'd tarnish the dynamic we'd be trying to build /develop between Archer and Homura.
As a base idea, the reason that the team-up happens in the first place is that Homura's chances of preventing Doomsday are now greater with Archer at her side. There is still this sense of overhanging dread, but there is a slight ray of hope because Homu-Homu has a little more back-up.

More to come as issues/ideas present themselves.
The problem of the Puellas not being the only ones who can fight witches is true even without the Servants around, though. I mean look at all the regular magi we have floating around, much less agents of the Church and demon-blooded families and even accidental encounters like Dead Apostles wandering into barriers and such.

As an alternate suggestion for the Counter Guardian Killbot dilemma, maybe in the last arc the wish Madoka made when she accepted QB's contract -- having had the situation with the timeloops explained to her -- was something that would help Homura succeed in future arcs, like "I wish that Homura wouldn't have to fight alone anymore" and the wish singled out Archer.

However there's also the question of "why hasn't the Counter Force acted in any of the previous arcs?", which won't be so easy to answer.

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 04:05 AM
In that case, the Counterforce won't have needed to act as of yet. Though the moment Madoka becomes a witch and starts destroying the world, a CG or more should act. Just like how the Counterforce didn't act up despite Sakura being the Dark Grail simply because it hasn't gotten 'that bad' yet. At the same time, Archer was aware that as a CG, he would need to destroy the thing probably along with the city if things got worse.

ItsaRandomUsername
April 18th, 2011, 04:22 AM
Well, we have now decided to make it so that PMs are now high-tier and Witches are godly hard to kill, which deals with the issue of "anyone can kill Witches". That problem has now been addresed and dealt with. Now, it's exceptionally hard for any normal-high level magus/Executioner/Dead Apostle to actually be able to murderify a Witch. To put it in Nasuversian terminology, imagine that a Witch is like a mini-Aristoteles, and that their barriers act as their Reality Marbles.

OH SHIT.

I'd like to see some magus/Church Official/vampire deal with it now. The way this would be set up is that the Puella Magi are pretty much tailored to be Anti-Witch (and should be somewhere classified in the powerlevel as having their abilities be on the level of True Magic and therefore levels beyong anything a modern mage is capable of). Nothing less than a PM or a high-level spirit/entity can take on a Witch if we classify them like this.


But then again, this is pretty much going to be a non-issue. I just can't see THIS story working out in a Hollow Ataraxia-setting without completely blowing off the elements it has at the core. But the above should prove useful for anyone else wanting to implement PMMM into the Nasuverse and make it so that the Witches are actually a credible threat.




Re: Madoka's Wish
Not a bad idea, although if written a certain way from the get-go it will lack the proper development that Archer and Homura's relationship could have. That initial coldness, due to Homura's "personality" coupled with the fact that the man she is now contracted with was trying to emotionlessly kill her, which changes into warmth and companionship that the other idea had sits better with me. But if it's possible to also get good development on similar levels from "Madoka Wishes For Someone to Help Homura, that Someone is Archer", then we could take that.

What idea #2 is, essentially:
"Huh? Some guy's here. Who're you?"
"Your new partner."
*tsuntsuntsun until Archer keeps using his persistence to convince her through a trial-by-fire that he will not leave her to fight by herself ever*



Re: Counter Force
Chalked up to either Homura going back in time before she sees the CF get mobilized, or Witch!Madoka is capable of actually holding of the CF long enough for everyone to get nommed, I would have to say.
inb4 someone calling it a "handwave"

ringlhach
April 18th, 2011, 04:39 AM
About the "Only you can kill Witches!" thing: making them crazy-strong helps, but you're overlooking one big thing: who says Kyuubey has to be telling the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth? He may know about or be aware of the CGs, and just never bother to mention "oh, if it gets bad enough, these mindless killing machines will show up and clean up the problem by killing it until it is dead and repeat as necessary." His whole schtick is suffering, after all, and the CGs showing up and offing everybody that has been exposed to, knows about, or has ever been near a Witch kinda kills that.

Hm, that brings up an idea... Kyuubey x Kotomine.

About the CF: How long would it take Alaya to notice a time loop? Would it happen?

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 04:55 AM
About the CF: How long would it take Alaya to notice a time loop? Would it happen?

I doubt Alaya would notice or care. It tends to crush problems with brute force as it has a lot of brute force. It's possible, Homura's traveling amongst many parallel dimensions, leaving doomed Madokas behind. She wouldn't know this of course.

Ace
April 18th, 2011, 02:40 PM
The problem of the Puellas not being the only ones who can fight witches is true even without the Servants around, though. I mean look at all the regular magi we have floating around, much less agents of the Church and demon-blooded families and even accidental encounters like Dead Apostles wandering into barriers and such.

As an alternate suggestion for the Counter Guardian Killbot dilemma, maybe in the last arc the wish Madoka made when she accepted QB's contract -- having had the situation with the timeloops explained to her -- was something that would help Homura succeed in future arcs, like "I wish that Homura wouldn't have to fight alone anymore" and the wish singled out Archer.

However there's also the question of "why hasn't the Counter Force acted in any of the previous arcs?", which won't be so easy to answer.

I say the reason why the Counter Force hasn't done anything since that loop because either Homura left before the situation with Witch!Madoka required attention and in the other loops, it simply wasn't needed since the Puellas were doing the work.

Satehi
April 18th, 2011, 03:08 PM
Problem here, strongest witch Walpurgisnacht is only a small city buster at maximum if you give her lots and lots of time, and even Alexander in Gordius Wheel can reduce Shinto to ashes in under an hour. Excaliblast or enuma elish will be practically OHKO, so a hollow ataraxia setting is out of the question.

Unless you're going to handwave that away completely, in which case...

meh.

Ace
April 18th, 2011, 06:29 PM
Yeah, I'd prefer it if we didn't have to use too big of handwaves like that.

Fangstrike
April 18th, 2011, 07:13 PM
Concerning the topic of Homura and Archer bonding over things, I can see Homura's wish to save Madoka at all costs being an interesting topic, considering Archer threw away everything to save everyone. Her wish is more personal and tangible compared to Archer's ideal. Homura's kind of like HF Shirou.

Witches as Aristotles? Whoa. I actually put them on the level of Dark Sakura hooked up to Angra Mainyu. Lots of power, artillery, and regen. Not necessarily fast or smart tactics wise like heroic spirits. And if worse comes to worse they eat you.

Rc1212
April 18th, 2011, 07:42 PM
Concerning the topic of Homura and Archer bonding over things, I can see Homura's wish to save Madoka at all costs being an interesting topic, considering Archer threw away everything to save everyone. Her wish is more personal and tangible compared to Archer's ideal. Homura's kind of like HF Shirou.


Yeah, seeing these two interact will be Awesome.

By the way, I have but one request.

See my Avatar pic? Thats Homura throwing a Nuke/Big Bomb. Think you could write a scene based on that? Maybe an Omake? Please!
It doesn't even need to be a Nuke/Big bomb, just something that will make Archer's jaw drop.

Froggie
April 18th, 2011, 08:21 PM
Just out of curiosity: how many time loops are you working with? The anime only showed 5, but I've always been of the opinion that we were to understand that there were more "in the background" between loop 4 and 5. That is to say: how old, mentally speaking, are you making Homura?

On a topic that was touched a few times prior: A simple explanation for why Homura hasn't run across a Counter Guardian in previous loops is that 1) the first time Madoka became Kriemhild-Gretchen she immediately bolted into the past 2) the second time Madoka became Kriemhild-Gretchen, Homura was probably miles away from ground-zero. That is to say, she either didn't stick around or was too far away. Maybe after a couple of timelines she has momentary breakdown at yet another failure, near ground zero, and has the chance to see something new, that does not adhere to her previously established statistics?

Also, am I the only one who thinks that the initial reaction of Homura seeing someone attacking Kriemhild-Gretchen would be, you know, to pull out the big guns and start firing, no questions asked? I mean, it'd probably end up with her getting her head chopped off, but so long as the gem is still intact she can always just send her mind into the past, like always.

Finally, am I the only who thinks it would be hilarious if Homura jumps into the past, accidentally takes Archer with her, and he finds himself over-writing in a considerably older Shirou? Like, a chance to change things without having to paradox yourself out of existence!

Ace
April 18th, 2011, 08:27 PM
PMMM is set way in the future but Skeleton!Archer might be fun too. I can already see it

Madoka: AAHHH!!! A ZOMBIE!!!
Archer: I'm not a-
Homura: You are the walking dead.
Madoka: DIE ZOMBIE!!!
Archer: T_T

Lotus Saint
April 18th, 2011, 08:38 PM
Archer wouldn't cry!
He'd actually be the bone of his sword.

Froggie
April 18th, 2011, 09:01 PM
PMMM is set way in the future but Skeleton!Archer might be fun too. I can already see it

Not that far in the future. The most popular theory is that it takes place in 2011, because the dates of Homura's release from the hospital and entrance into school match perfectly with the calendar of March 2011. Heck, in the 100 questions that was done for Madoka she says she wants an iPod for her birthday. And all the tech shown in the show is current (or so I've read...) if ridiculously expensive. If Shirou was born in the 80's he'd be what? Late 20's or early 30's tops?

Though I must admit that Zombie Archer would be hilarious.

Ace
April 18th, 2011, 09:11 PM
I'm not sure where I read that PMMM was set in the future, or maybe that's just the impression I got.

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 10:28 PM
It's the hammer space alliance! Well technically Archer projects his weapons and thus has an unlimited arsenal but it's still hammer space.

EnigmaticFellow
April 18th, 2011, 10:30 PM
Archer's hammer space is located in his soul. As for Homura...

Muramasa
April 18th, 2011, 11:01 PM
Instead of Counter Guardian EMIYA, why don't you use a Shirou who's a traveling 'Hero of Justice'? Or even a Shirou who's close to making a pact with the world?

ItsaRandomUsername
April 18th, 2011, 11:03 PM
AlmostArcher!Shirou was an alternate idea I had, and it might be written as well.

At the very least, the "Archer" we'll be using will definitely be able to use UBW and K&B.

Lotus Saint
April 18th, 2011, 11:12 PM
What about Hrunting and Overedge?
WHAT ABOUT THOSE?!

Cascade
April 18th, 2011, 11:13 PM
Homuhomu, I am interested in this.
However, I wonder if things will be changed when the next episode comes out. It's such a roller coaster of a series.

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 11:17 PM
The Shirou of the Illya route?

ItsaRandomUsername
April 18th, 2011, 11:20 PM
@Eveonder:
Possibly. Who knows?

@Lotus Saint:
And Hell Yes with Hrunting and Overedge. Can't forget those, can we?

Lotus Saint
April 18th, 2011, 11:21 PM
How about RAW ANUS Rho Aias?

ItsaRandomUsername
April 18th, 2011, 11:22 PM
Confirmed.

He has everything Archer has, just so you all know.

EnigmaticFellow
April 18th, 2011, 11:22 PM
Don't forget about Caladbolg II either.

Lotus Saint
April 18th, 2011, 11:23 PM
So will he also trace stuff that Archer didn't really use in F/SN?


Don't forget about Caladbolg II either.

Didn't he already use that?

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 11:24 PM
Useless Avalon unless Saber LilyArturia shows up?

Why 'possibly'? Why is there no Illya?

ItsaRandomUsername
April 18th, 2011, 11:24 PM
Certainly a possibility, provided it works for the situation. Like a Not-Excalibur, or even Durandal.

Also,
Gae Bolg II


@Eveonder:
While it's true that "Archer" was very close with Illya, it has yet to be determined just how much of an "Illya route" his story is/was.

Lotus Saint
April 18th, 2011, 11:26 PM
Gae Bolg II

http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR7VkoRRf9qmEdngwBCBjgPFAoCX3Ynl QlMNh_x-j9UQFYrPZOESw&t=1

EnigmaticFellow
April 18th, 2011, 11:26 PM
*imagines Archer stringing Gae Bolg on his bow

How will this even work? Guess its time to mess with the physics of the weapon again.

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 11:28 PM
What the heck is that? Well I supposed he can shoot it if he shrinks it down. A lot closer to an arrow than a sword at least...

Modify the spear into a sword?

ItsaRandomUsername
April 18th, 2011, 11:34 PM
@Lotus Saint:
Umm...is that a good thing? Because if it is, then I am happy.


@Eveonder:
Bingo.

And I'd like to thank Twelveseal for coming up with Sword!GaeBolg in his Loli Grail War. If I'm gonna shout-out I might as well say it outright.

Fangstrike
April 18th, 2011, 11:38 PM
Just Finally, am I the only who thinks it would be hilarious if Homura jumps into the past, accidentally takes Archer with her, and he finds himself over-writing in a considerably older Shirou? Like, a chance to change things without having to paradox yourself out of existence!

Ya know, that actually makes sense. Cuz Homura-chan seems to like start over in her own body, so maybe the same thing happens with Archer. I mean Archer's mind/soul jumping back into teenage Shirou's body. As a now Gaia-Free ex-counter guardian, what's the first thing Archer does?

While Archer sharpens Kanshou and Bakuya.
Archer: Hey, Shinji! How's it goin' man? I just wanted to say I'm sorry for kickin your ass and wanted see if we could meet up later. Really? That's great.
Looks at list of names. Further down, Kotomine Kirei and Matou Zouken.

Ah, but then he wouldn't be a Servant/Ghost Liner.

Lotus Saint
April 18th, 2011, 11:39 PM
Doesn't archer modify the sword into a arrow or something?



@Lotus Saint:
Umm...is that a good thing? Because if it is, then I am happy.



Yes, it's a good thing.

Eveonder
April 18th, 2011, 11:41 PM
Ya know, that actually makes sense. Cuz Homura-chan seems to like start over in her own body, so maybe the same thing happens with Archer. I mean Archer's mind/soul jumping back into teenage Shirou's body. As a now Gaia-Free ex-counter guardian, what's the first thing Archer does?

While Archer sharpens Kanshou and Bakuya.
Archer: Hey, Shinji! How's it goin' man? I just wanted to say I'm sorry for kickin your ass and wanted see if we could meet up later. Really? That's great.
Looks at list of names. Further down, Kotomine Kirei and Matou Zouken.

Ah, but then he wouldn't be a Servant/Ghost Liner.

I was thinking of doing a fic like that but this would be more epic... cuz Archer in Shirou would have to deal with Servant Archer. Heck, he could troll himself.

ItsaRandomUsername
April 18th, 2011, 11:44 PM
No teenage Shirou. Sorry everyone. PMMM is roughly about 2011 (IIRC), and F/SN is early 2000's at the least.

Lotus Saint
April 18th, 2011, 11:47 PM
Will Archer trace things that haven't appeared in F/SN?

Froggie
April 18th, 2011, 11:48 PM
K, so that's right out. What about the other questions I posed? Given those any consideration? To reiterate


Just out of curiosity: how many time loops are you working with? The anime only showed 5, but I've always been of the opinion that we were to understand that there were more "in the background" between loop 4 and 5. That is to say: how old, mentally speaking, are you making Homura?

How old, mentally, will Homura be? how many time-loops are we talking about prior to the beginning of your story?


Also, am I the only one who thinks that the initial reaction of Homura seeing someone attacking Kriemhild-Gretchen would be, you know, to pull out the big guns and start firing, no questions asked? I mean, it'd probably end up with her getting her head chopped off, but so long as the gem is still intact she can always just send her mind into the past, like always.


Any consideration to making the first "meeting" between Homura and Archer to be one... less than friendly?

ItsaRandomUsername
April 18th, 2011, 11:50 PM
@Froggie:
5 loops about. She's rather mentally old.

And if the first meeting between them is "less than friendly", then I wouldn't mind working with that dynamic.

Ace
April 19th, 2011, 03:19 PM
I don't think Homura would try to kill anybody who was fighting Witch!Madoka since y'know she's a witch and Homura herself mercy killed one Madoka already.

But I actually like that idea.

Froggie
April 19th, 2011, 09:54 PM
@Froggie:
5 loops about. She's rather mentally old.


However, isn't the average time loop only a couple of months? With 5 loops she'd be anywhere from 13 to 15 mentally. Colder and more dedicated than the average 15 year old, sure, but still just a 15 year old.


I don't think Homura would try to kill anybody who was fighting Witch!Madoka since y'know she's a witch and Homura herself mercy killed one Madoka already.

But I actually like that idea.

It was just an idle thought, really. Witch or not, Kriemhild-Gretchen WAS Madoka, and saving her IS her single motivation. I just thought it'd be pretty cool if, in an emotional and irrational moment, seeing someone attack the Witch-Formerly-Known-As-Madoka resulted in a "Shoot first, ask questions later" scenario :)

ItsaRandomUsername
April 19th, 2011, 09:56 PM
However, isn't the average time loop only a couple of months? With 5 loops she'd be anywhere from 13 to 15 mentally. Colder and more dedicated than the average 15 year old, sure, but still just a 15 year old.

That's just a literal interpretation of "mental age". We all know that mentally Homura is WAY older than a 15 year old because of all the traumas she has experienced.

Eveonder
April 19th, 2011, 10:38 PM
That's just a literal interpretation of "mental age". We all know that mentally Homura is WAY older than a 15 year old because of all the traumas she has experienced.

Zebras don't always make your older. They can make you lose all your memories and become like a baby too. =3

ItsaRandomUsername
April 19th, 2011, 10:40 PM
WHY WE TALKIN BOUT ZOO ANIMALS?!

Eveonder
April 19th, 2011, 10:45 PM
WHY WE TALKIN BOUT ZOO ANIMALS?!

We're not. Traumas are Zebras because they're stripped and strange. I blame some trippy manga somewhere.

Satehi
April 19th, 2011, 10:46 PM
Pretty sure each loop is like, 2 weeks?

Ruca_Milda
April 19th, 2011, 11:45 PM
@Irun: Yeah, the MINIMUM is 2011, I remember reading something like that in the interviews. I think it was Miyamoto who said that, Madoka could very well work on either the present time or a very near- future.

ItsaRandomUsername
April 23rd, 2011, 02:32 PM
In light of new information present in episodes 11 and 12, we now know that Homura has been through COUNTLESS LOOPS. Which, coincedentally, is what I originally assumed the number to be (as a rule of thumb involving time loops, unless the actual number of loops is specified always assume that it has happened too many times to keep track of).


That and you know you wanna see sum Archer + Homura vs. Walpurgisnacht

Rc1212
April 24th, 2011, 10:04 AM
Yes!!!

That battle would be so Epic....

Megaolix
August 18th, 2011, 06:24 AM
As requested by IRUN, the old discussion will be used for snippets and discussion derivating from it to not fatten the main thread.

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Archer save Mami snippet

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I can see it coming. It looks so slow. If I wanted to, I could jump away immediately and attack it from above, then apologize to Madoka and Sayaka for scaring them. But it won’t happen.

Help…

Only my mind makes this scene move so slowly. I know I am unable to move. I know that despite what I see, it is moving far faster than I can react. I know that I will die in the next second or the one after it.

Someone…

Is this moment what others mean when they say your life flash over you when you’re about to die? For no reason, I recall the family I lost. I remember how hard my life was right after. The apartment was so empty, I cried myself to sleep for many nights after that accident. It was a godsend that my parents had planned for the worst and that I had far more than enough money to care for myself for a long time. It was only a small drop of comfort and would have gladly traded it all to get my parents back… but at the very least, I didn’t go cold or hungry.

Anyone…

I recall the day I saved Madoka and Sayaka. I expected them to run away from all this. They had come very close to death despite how calm I acted. How could that not scare anyone? Then again, maybe my thinking was biased. After all, I knew myself how painful death could be.

And from that point… I wasn’t alone anymore.

I don’t want to die…

They didn’t mind following me, despite how dangerous it could be. They weren’t deathly afraid of facing beings that almost killed them if they could defend themselves. Maybe I was hoping for too much back then, but I had the wild hope of finally having comrades in battle.

So please…

But now I don’t care anymore. I don’t mind if they’re too scared to fight now. I don’t mind having to continue fighting alone. We’re friends now, so they would still talk to me, right? I wouldn’t have to always be alone back home, right? I didn’t want to die back then. I don’t want to die now. Not now. Not when I could finally smile…




Help me.




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Something slammed into the Witch’s side, causing an explosion and sending the monster off course. A moment ago, Mami was staring at the fangs about to devour her. Now, she only saw the dissipating smoke of the explosion.

“…Eh?”

“You fool! Never let down your guard until the fight is over!”


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I turned. I was sure Madoka, Sayaka and Kyubey did the same. I was also ready the bet even the Witch turned to see who had attacked it.

On one of those high tables was a strange man with a bow in his hands. He was wearing red and black and looked like a knight. His tanned skin and white hair gave him a foreign look, but it also gave him some special, if strange kind of charm.

My eyes saw my saviour, a strange man who came out of nowhere to save me.
My mind told me he couldn’t be human. Not with the strength I sensed from him.

A strange arrow appeared in his hands. But before I could wonder how it could fly, he had already launched it at the still-stunned monster, sending the Witch further away. And while it was recovering, the knight suddenly moved up past me. When I turned, I saw his back. He had also dismissed his bow in favour of twin swords, coloured black and white.

He looks so big…

“Remember this day from the rest of your life. The moment you relax in battle is when you lose everything.” The knight said, keeping his eyes on the enemy as he scolded me. “I will finish this myself now if you don’t mind.”

He looks so confident…

He started running, choosing to confront the Witch at close range. I would admit to myself later that I should have followed him and fought too, since it had been my fight, my role as a Puella Magi. But I simply looked as if in a trance.

He looks so strong…

Uncaring of its size, the man fought the beast with swords. He changed them at times and looked in full control of the fight. A state I was in too before I made my foolish mistake. One that almost ended my life.

I had many questions… Who was he? How could he use magic, for magic must certainly what he must be using? Why was he here? How did he get here? Why did he save me? Did he have a reason to do so?

I wasn't a powerless princess waiting to be saved, yet a Prince still came to my rescue...

So many questions, maybe with sinister answers…

But he had saved me. I lived. And I would make sure to remember this day, just as he said. Not only to never do the same thing, as he had asked, but also because it was the day I met him.



Dear me… I think I fell in love.

Megaolix
August 18th, 2011, 06:29 AM
Madoka learns the truth of CGs + bonus epilogue & Omake to snippet

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“Madoka? What are you doing here?”

There was no way Madoka simply spotted him and went to see him. Night had fallen and she looked like she ran all the way from wherever she started from to his observation spot. Archer wondered what she would have done had he been on a place not reachable by stairs or elevators.

Probably would have climbed anyway…

“Hff… Hfff… I… I asked Homura where you would be at this time. I-“ Madoka started to say, painfully gasping for air before being interrupted by Archer.

“Calm down and get your breath back first. I’m not going anywhere.”

Archer was glad the pink-haired girl took his advice, but she still looked distressed. Whatever she had come here for, he was certain it implied him. And knowing how kind-hearted the girl was, it was probably something that greatly shook her.

He was certain Kyubey was to blame for this.

“Is it… Is it true?” Madoka asked. “That you’re a… a Counter Guardian and that-“

“I see. I’m guessing you asked Kyubey about it?” Archer said, interrupting her again. He barely repressed the huge to sigh. He knew where this was going and how it would hurt the girl in front of him.

“Yes.” Madoka answered. Archer spoke again before she continued.

“No need to tell me how I came up in your conversation. None of the others are with you?”

“We… We didn’t know what do think, but I decided I had to confirm it from you first.” Madoka said, now recovered and standing straight up.

Well, no doubt there was at least one observer to this scene then. Homura pretty much knew all about him already, but she would no doubt be on the lookout for Kyubey, in case the furball suggested that Madoka could ‘save him’ from his fate.

“Well, no need to beat around the bush. Yes, I am a Counter Guardian. The fact that I’m on ‘off time’ right now is pretty much a miracle that probably won’t be replicated. I’ll return back to the job once my time here is over.”

“Then, you really go and k-kill…”

“Yes.” Archer said, preferring to not let Madoka force herself to finish asking questions she really didn’t want to ask. “Whenever I am summoned, I have to kill anyone present, both guilty and innocent.”

Madoka gasped and took a step back. No matter how ready she had been, it was obvious she was not expecting the casual tone Archer had answered her. The fact that she was still here spoke of how bad the girl had it these past few weeks.

“Why…?”

“Why what?” Archer said.

“Why do you have to do this?” Madoka asked, on the verge of tears.

“Because like Puellas, I exchanged my soul for a miracle. And like an idiot, I had no idea what I was getting into. Guess I’m just like them after all.” Archer answered.

“…And what did you wish for?” Madoka asked, her voice lower than before.

“That if the World could save a few hundred lives from a disaster that killed them, I would serve the World in exchange. At the time, I just thought I would be able to continue saving lives after my death. But we both know how that turned out.”

Surprising Archer, Madoka actually took moved a bit towards him. Her head was lowered, having trouble deciding what to think next.

“Archer… What did you want to do? Why did you…”

Archer waited a bit, but no words were coming. It seemed she wasn’t sure what to ask at this point. Despite this, Archer tried to answer the best he could.

“It was always my dream: To be a superhero. To save everyone. To help anyone in need of help.”

“So why…” Madoka asked, choking back her tears. Archer knew she was a smart girl despite what she said, so she probably connected the dots between what he wanted and what he was forced to do. “How are you able to just act like there’s nothing wrong?”

And there it was. The question Archer dreaded. He already knew the girl would recognize nothing but the truth. He knew what it would do to her.

He also knew he would answer it anyway.

“Because I can’t be saved. When I’ll go back, it probably won’t take long before I forget the days I spent here. There is no reason for me to just mope around or scream at injustice or whatever. There’s nothing more to it.”

“That’s… That’s not fair. It’s… It’s…”

Madoka couldn’t take it anymore and started crying. A second later, she was on her knees, unable to support herself. Archer knew how kind the girl was, so he hated how he was responsible for the scene in front of him. He walked up to her and kneeled, trying to look at her in the eyes.

“Come on Madoka… It was like this a long time before I met you. There’s no reason for you to cry for someone like me.” Archer said, gently using his hand to raise her face.

But instead of looking at him, she moved to wrap him in a hug, refusing to meet his eyes. It was awkward, with him kneeling and her on her knees, but she still held on to him as strongly as she could.

“That’s not fair… It’s too cruel… Why…?”

“It was never fair in the first place.”

“Homura… Homura told us a bit about you, with the dreams she had… You always wanted to help others, so why did it happen to you?”

“Maybe it was Fate. Maybe it was my wish, like Kyoko would say. Wishing for others always brings the worst ending, she said. Maybe she was more right than she expected to be. Maybe I just wasn’t meant to be happy.”

“You… You saved Sayaka from that! That’s not absolute! Madoka said, shouting to words between her sobs.

“Maybe.”

“You deserve… you just wanted to help others… Why do you have to suffer like that…”

“Madoka, I already told you there’s nothing you can do about it.”

“But you… Someone like you shouldn’t be forced to be this sad.”

“I was a fool and will forever pay for it.”

“You’re wrong… you’re not a fool. No one should call you a fool.”

“I’m still one…”

“It’s wrong…”

“It was never right.”

After this, Madoka stopped speaking. She simply continued to cry her heart out. Archer wondered how she still managed to go out and continue living her life instead of simply locking herself away. Finding the truth about Soul Gems, about Witches, what would happen if she contracted Kyubey… The last part had been a particularly unpleasant affair. Defeating the seer had been a big emotional mess all-around, especially since it was so easy to understand why she wanted to murder Madoka. And now this… No, it wasn’t easy to be Madoka these days.

“Madoka, you’re a big girl. There’s really no need to be like this over me.” Archer said, rubbing her head a bit in an attempt for comfort. It seemed to have some effect, as Madoka’s sobs started to slow down.

“Can’t… Why can’t you just stay like this with us?” Madoka asked.

“It’s simply delaying the inevitable. And Homura won’t be able to support me forever either.”

Archer didn’t bother telling her it was most likely he would fall the day of Walpurgis Night.

Archer moved to stand up, forcing Madoka to do the same as she still hadn’t let go of him. He patted her head again, silently telling her it was time to let go. She slowly removed her arm and took a few steps back, rubbing her eyes to stop crying as she did so.

“Archer… There’s… there’s really no way to save you? Not even a wish cou-”

“Madoka, I’m not letting you trade your life for mine.” Archer said, cutting her off.

“Still… there has to be… You shouldn’t just suffer just because you wanted to help others…”

“Well, unless you can somehow ever manage one day to stand facing the World and tell it to hand me over, there’s really nothing to do about me.” Archer said. “Now come on, I’ll carry you back home. Your parents must be worried at this hour.”

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“I know I’m the one who said it, but… I honestly didn’t expect you to actually do it.” Archer said, looking at the newly ascended Goddess. Said Goddess was currently sporting a big goofy smile, clearly proud of what she did and happy with the results.

“Eh eh… Now you’ll finally be able to do what you always wanted.” Madoka said. Unable to resist any longer, She floated forward and hugged him like he was her personal giant teddy bear. “I’m so happy to have saved you. Somehow… somehow I knew there had to be something I could have done.”

“Well, guess I can’t really complain.” Archer said. He waited for Her to let go before adopting a relaxed stance and a grin. “Shall we get going then? I’m not just going to stand idle while there are people to be saved, you know?”

OMAKE

“Madoka… Why are my weapons always pink as I make them?” Archer asked, no amused.

“Well, since you’re ‘serving’ me, maybe you should have something to show that you’re associated to me. Your colors don’t really match mine, so…”

“Madoka, I think even the demons will be laughing at me. This is ridiculous.”

“You’re right, it doesn’t fit well… Oh, I have an idea!” Madoka said, hand slamming together.

“I have a bad feeling about this...” Archer muttered to himself.

“Since you save magical girls for me now, it would make sense for you to be one too!” Madoka announced, snapping her fingers before Archer could properly react in horror at the suggestion.

Before he could even say a word, he found himself in a form he had witnessed in one timeline of his life as Shirou. Or rather, he was now in the ‘Emilya’ form of that life.

“What do you think?” The Goddess asked. “Aren’t you cute like this?”

“…Maybe pink weapons weren’t such a bad thing after all.”

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New Noble Phantasm gained!

The Prayer of Hope
Since Archer started serving the Goddess Madoka, he could finally believe he fought for his ideals without betraying them, even if he couldn't truly help everyone everywhere. In many times and places, he appeared at the side of Puella Magis to help them out of desperate situation. Never again would those girls have to fight alone and let their prayers turn to despair if Madoka has anything to say about it.

Of course, Archer himself is not an exception to this.

If Archer ever find himself in a desperate situation, the Goddess will intervene and under Her guidance, the Puellas will take arms once again, ready to assist the one who helped them before. They will appear at his side and remind him that he too no longer has to fight alone.

On a side-note, Madoka would grant Archer help if he asked for it, even if the fight wasn't going badly. But She knows he's too stubborn to do it.

fraggle
August 18th, 2011, 07:08 AM
a collection of all my snippets so far:

GOOD END??

"No" Archer replied with a straight face. "Just, No"

"But..."

"Even if you transcended form a mortal to the concept of hope, even if you bear the burden of looking after all those girls till the end of time.."

"So..." the goddess tried to but in

"And even if you can bring my former little master to orgasmic bliss by just touching her...."

"Hey" the cosmic entity blushed while listening as the now true heroic spirit rambled on,

"Of course I'm grateful you released me of my contract with the world, and that you give me the chance to aid the puella who's needs are the greatest....".

Archer truly was grateful. The part of him that once lived for those ideals he had inherited had been reawakened during his stay in Mitakihara Town. For the first time he was given the strength and the opportunity to safe as many lives as he could, for when a Puella magi would face enemies with the odds stacked against her and with the lives of many in the stakes, he would be allowed to descend to the mortal realm to destroy the demons that threatened humanity. He no longer was powered by the will of humanity, but as long as the puella magi had hope, Madoka's will would remain.

And as long as her will remained, his battle would be able to continue.

"...But there are limits in how I will indulge to your whims."

The goddess pouted, or the manifestation of the part of her that was communicating with him was. Trans-dimensional existence had never been one of his strong points."But why wont you wear this uniform then? If you don't like the white , then I can make you a red one" She tried



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"Madoka" He calmly replied, as to lecture a small child. "It's covered in frills. Men do not wear an uniform filled with frills, and I am not a Lady"


"I know of that apron you keep handy in your Reality Marble just-in-case" She replied in her defense.

"But it has no frills," Archer replied. "Thus, it is still manly."


The apron in question, which was covered with the line "Have withstood hunger to create many dishes, yet my stomach shall never hold anything" was indeed frill-less, and thus men all over the world could stay in the kitchen knowing that they still looked manly while wearing their frill-less apron.



Upon your summoning, I have come forth. I ask of you, are you my heroine?


"Madoka," Archer spoke calmly. "I know I said something about how we lacked a face to face conversation sometimes, But...."

"What?" The goddess giggled.

"This is taking things a bit to literally" The red haired 14 year old boy muttered.

"Well look at the time Emiya-kun! looks like Sayaka-chan is in trouble, so it's show-time for our brave hero!"

"you got to be kidding me!" Archer gawked at Madoka. "you're sending me out like 'this' !? "

Madoka smiled.........






2 minutes ago Miki Sayaka was on the verge of dieing a very ugly death. Now all she could think about was how the mysterious boy had blocked the strike aimed at her neck, and as swords rained down while he carried her to the edge of the maze before it collapsed. He even did a backflip over what appeared to be a bar or some other twisted thing while holding her close.

He carried her...

He held her.....

He jumped that Bar.........


"I'm so hitting that," the red spear-woman muttered. The gunslinger also looked out of it; was she actually fiddling with her curls?

Emiya sighed. This reunion did not go as planned. At least his former master seemed to remember him. He looked up at her while trying to ignore the other infatuated girls in the area when he finally got a clear look of her face...


Why the hell did she go full MOE?

Potential routes:


Hmm.

Mami: Unlimited Musket Works.

Kyouko: Destined to fall in love with a cook.

Sayaka: Seigi no Mikata-wannabe

Homura: Time-traveler paradox-creator.

...Balanced harem?






Unlimited Blades and muskets :Mami route

Day 2 : Power in numbers

Sayaka could only gawk as an countless number of muskets met their demise at the hand of a rain of swords.........


Day 3 : Cooking at home

"It looks like you're not a novice at cooking Mami," Emiya complimented her. "But why did you only make sea-fruit dishes today" .
In response, she looked away shyly while whistling.

Night 4 : bound

"Why aren't you wearing clothes!" Emiya shrieked as the blond walked out of the door of her bedroom.
Mami smiled while slowly walking towards him "I 'am' wearing.... "
"A magic ribbon does 'not' equal clothes!" he quickly replied. "And... Did you just bind my hands together with that thing?"
"it's easy to escape that particular bind isn't it?" Her blush increased as her smile grew " but you might pull something off in the process......"

Ideals make you more then just a man: Sayaka route Night 1: Confusion

Sayaka loved Kyousuke for as long as she could remember. For his sake she had donned the mantle of an hero of justice! A defender of the weak! So why was it not his face that lingered in her head this night, but that of the other swordsman. She was not a fickle woman like that, she would set the record straight if she ever saw that red haired bar-jumping brat again!

That night she dreamed that she was a princess and that her prince was gently carrying her in his arms. She didn't see his face, but if felt really warm and safe.


Day 2: battle of swords

"So you way of saying 'Thank you for saving my life' is by trowing a cutlass at me?" Emiya asked. This of course only agitated the girl even more, prompting her to raise her skirt while blades materialized around her legs.

"I got many more where those came from!" she jeered, "think you can keep up with me!?"

"Here I come blue knight" he calmly replied, while his twin blades materialized. "Do you have enough blades in stock?"


Somewhere in the multiverse, Emiya Shirou sneezed, alarming Rin and Saber of his escape attempt before pulling him back into their bed.


She had lost. No matter how many weapons she had materialized the boy had matched her in equal numbers. but the most infuriating thing was that he didn't even wielded any of them in his hands. his skill with his swords was so much better then hers that he could repel all of her strikes with those twin swords of his. Instead, he could launch them in midair to cut of her attacks and escape routes.

Iin other words; he had been playing with her.

"Why did you go easy on me!" she yelled at him. "Do you think I'm a little girl who always needs to be saved and coddled!"

"Not really", the boy replied. "I just thought this would be a good training exercise. After all, we both are allies right?"

"Allies?"The girl looked confused at the boy. The boys smiled at her "Yes. Aren't we both allies of Justice?"


While he served as Homura's servant he had witnessed the decay and death of the girl who aspired to be a hero. perhaps Madoka had given him these days so that he could save the girl who once shared his dream of becoming an hero.


Day 3 : loss and rain


"She's my best friend, and tomorrow she's going to tell him her feelings," she cried as the boy held her.
when Mami had told him that Sayaka had gone missing after school he had headed to the industrial site where they met yesterday. She didn't even notice him until he sat down next to her on the top of an abandoned building. but then she latch on to him as she forced all her fears and pain out of her before it would suffocate her.

In this world she had only one close friend, and that friend had betrayed her in a way that tore her apart from within, because she knew she couldn't hate her for it. they were two maidens in love with the prince, and she had cast away her role as a schoolgirl to become the hero of justice she admired. she couldn't discard her ideal, but because of that she would loose the thing wat had been so precious to her.

There was no way for her now to compete for Kyousuke's love.

And so she cried into the boy's chest as she lamented her fate, and the only thing he could do was hold her tightly as she finally let go of all her fears and pains.

"You will probably loose more things you care about as long as you walk this path," the boy told her. "We cannot save everyone, nor can we hold on to everything we care about. But as long as we stay true to our ideals and as long as we don't betray them, then we should be able to look back at our lives without regret."

And even though it looked like he was lost in his memories he still smiled at her, fully believing in what he had said.

she though that smile was beautiful.


Delicous food:Kyoko route

day 1: Courtship?

"Want some?" The girl asks, while holding a box of pocky in front of his face.


Day 2 : trough the stomach

They had gone shopping for food together. Not only had he paid for the food, he had actually cooked her a meal so great that she couldn't remember the last time she ever tasted something that good.

Like hell she was going to let him get away after this.

"Marry me."

"Wait, 'what' ?" the boy replied confused, not following her line of thought.

"I said 'Marry me'"

"But why?"

"To fast for ya? Let's start dating then!"

"I still don't..."

"friend with benefit then?"

"You lost me." He replied with a straight face.

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"WHY THE HELL ARE YOU STRIPPING?"

"You said you didn't get it, so I'm showing you!"


day three : Didn't mean to turn you on


Her breath came in short burst as she held the red trobbing lance in her hands as she was perched on her knees. The smell of blood still lingered on it as it had pierced trough it's victim only minutes ago. she caressed the rod with her hands as she....

"Please don't violate my noble phantasms," Emiya interrupted her 'appreciation' of the barbed spear, which she had pulled out of the heart of the demon they had been fighting. Suddenly the lance faded away from existence as the boy allowed reality to erase the imitation he had forged.

"You really know how to leave a lady hot and bothered, don't ya" the female redhead muttered, as she stood up from the ground while looking lustfully at the boy.


Night 4 :

He froze as she pressed her naked body against his back, cursing himself for leaving his eyes of her, giving her the chance to trap him like this.

smiling, she slowly breathed against his neck before moving her mouth next to his ear.

"Want some?"





Omake:

BGM:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tfKHqYO8zl0

As he walked into the abandoned church he could not shed the feeling of deja-vu. It felt like any moment someone could walk out and ....


"Rejoice Emiya Shirou!" a voice called out trough the empty church. followed by the sound of the main door being locked up.

"Whats this!, Kyoko what are you doing?" He shrieked as the girls started stripping right in front of him.

"Rejoice, for I shall take you to a heaven of pleasure!" she proclaimed as she slowly walked up to him.

"There are so many thing wrong with this that I don't know where to start."





And of course a shout out to the VN:


Sayaka looks down at the red-haired girl below her and takes a deep breath.
"Ah… hm… I'm surprised… I didn't think I swung this way."

"who said anything about you stopping" the redhead replied, before pulling the blue knight back towards her


"Ah, this feels nostalgic" the boy muttered to himself, before dividing his attention between the two girls next to him.




"Where is everyone?" Mami wondered, as she was patrolling the city with homura.

Homura-chan homu homu homura chan
I ask of you: Are you my master

"How cruel" the boy lamented."To think my former master would be so cold against this loyal servant after all we went through together."

"D-Don't say something like that!" Homura replies hastily while blushing. For some reason my current form had more influence then my former adult form which she was used to. "T-They will misunderstand the entire situation!"


"All we went through?" Sakaya asked.

"M-Master?" Mami tried to keep the blush off her face.

"Loyal servant!" Kyoko looked like something delicious had appeared before her out of nowhere.

"Homura-chan is in that sort of relationship? How delicious!" Mami murmured. "I mean, how distasteful!"

"My Saviour is an Uke?" Sayaka replies in shock.

"You so got to share him with us 'Mistress' Homura!" Kyoko laughed.

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"You lost me," Emiya replied to the girls



Poor Emiya. He's the only boy in heaven with all those puella magi, and although some play for the same team there are a lot of girls who still have 'urges'. And remember, he really liked helping people in any way he can :P


At first.....


So when he was offered a chance to respond to a summoning to the mortal realm, combined with a little vacation, who was he to say no?

He really likes helping people remember :)


[Fate stay night 'Fate' route Unlocked]


next episode:

:rin:Tohsaka Rin summons a true heroic spirit powered by the concept of hope. Will her Archer guide her to victory in the 5th Heavens feel? Meanwhile, the goddess Madoka-sama dispatches her 4 chosen angels to retrieve her stolen servant.

And a red haired boy who dreams of becoming an hero is in for the surprise of a lifetime:fight:.



Rejoice Beast-lair! for the 5th grail war shall start once again!





/人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\


Ilyasviel von einsberg........ Will you make a Contract with me?


:illya:ITS A GIANT WHITE RAT! BERSERKER!! KILL IT KILL IT KILL IT!

fraggle
August 18th, 2011, 07:16 AM
WARNING! Contains lemon so NSFW!

the collection of all Mami-route snippets:

Why aren't you wearing clothes!" Emiya shrieked as the blond walked out of the door of her bedroom.
Mami smiled while slowly walking towards him "I 'am' wearing.... "
"A magic ribbon does 'not' equal clothes!" he quickly replied. "And... Did you just bind my hands together with that thing?"
"it's easy to escape that particular bind isn't it?" Her blush increased as her smile grew " but you might pull something off in the process......"


Her casual statement froze him to the ground. the ration part of his mind, the part of him that had remained after his transition from the world's counter guardian to the heroic spirit of the concept of hope pointed out that this was a 14 year old girl who probably wasn't making any reasonable decisions at the moment.

The part of him that represented his 14 year old body told him that a naked girl was standing right in front of him, waiting for him to pull that damned ribbon.

Sensing his indecision, Mami unconsciously tried to cover herself, pushing her arms against her chest while taking a small step backwards. the ribbon connected to his hands was now fully strained, with only a little pull needed to unwrap her. As tears started to form in her eyes, she turned her face away from him.


He made up his mind.

There was no regret.

This was the only path.





He pulled the ribbon....


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The room had been filled with the sound of schoolgirls chatting and having tea with cake during the day.

This night all one could hear were the moans and breathing noises of the 2 teenagers making out in the middle of the room. She had wrapped her arms around the boy's back to hold on to him, as their tongues battled for dominance. His hands softly grabbed her bottom pulling her closer to give her better access, and to press her warm body closer to his. She could feel his arousal growing in his pants as she slowly grinded her hips against him.

An unexpected squeeze from the boy caused her to grind her hips even harder against his pants, and a small moan escaped from her mouth, he quickly took the opportunity to thoroughly invade her mouth as she had dropped her guard. Not that she really minded right now, as her hands roamed on his chest.

That damn t-shirt was getting in her way.

Removing the pants and shirt from his body was an easy task once he understood her frustrations. With his clothes on the ground she pushed him down on the couch as she sat down in his lap. She quickly grabbed his hands and pulled them together behind her back, before summoning her ribbon and binding them with her strongest bind , leaving him defenseless against her. Slowly she started grinding her hips against his erection while pressing her breast against his bare chest. A small moan escaped from her throat as she was smiling beatifically.



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It was not the first time an enemy had tried to bind him as to leave him open for an attack.

And what an attack it was....

He nearly lost it when she rubbed their aroused bodies together at an antagonizing slow pace, as to tease him while showing who was in control. Her bind could not be broken by pure strength alone, so she was confident that he'd remain at her mercy.

But Emiya was a magus, and one skilled at re-enforcing. So instead of trying to force his way out with brute force, he started to force his od into the ribbon.

re-enforcing an object beyond its limits made it fragile, and even though the ribbon resisted the forced re-enforcing, he had plenty of od to spare in his current form.

A gasp of surprise escaped from Mami as he released himself from her bind with a single flick of his wrists. Before she had a chance to react he forced her down on the couch and traced her ribbons to bind her hand and feet to the sides of the couch. This time it was his turn to smile.


For the next 10 minutes he touched her, he fondled her, he caressed her and he was slowly drowning her in her feelings of pleasure. All she could do was wriggle on the couch as the binds held her down while he slowly teased her all over her body.

But then he suddenly stopped. his face looked as if he was in deep though, and to Mami's surprise, and fear, the bindings holding her down suddenly vanished.

He couldn't leave her like this, could he? Has she done something wrong, had she gone to far? Had she..


"Spirit and technique, flawless and firm" he declared suddenly, positioning his hands on her chest
"What are you do.." Mami tried to ask, before the pleasure shut down her ability to form a lucid sentence.

"Our strength rips the mountains" he continued, as his hands preformed their magic on her breasts before he moved his right hand down her body. Mami's body burned as she swore her nipples had hardened to the point of being made out of steel. the pleasure clouded her mind as the boy continued.

"Our swords split the water." His left hand continued his administration of her breast as his right hand stabbed and stroked the inner folds of her petals, drenching his fingers in the fluids. The volume of Mami's moans increased.

"Our names reach the imperial villa." His administrations burned her body with pleasure as it brought her on the edge. A little more, just a little more and she would loose her mind.

"The two of us cannot hold heaven together." She screamed as she came, drenching his right hand even further as her entire body trembled from the aftershocks. Her eyes were vacant and her mind had gone white. He held her trembling body again his chest till she regained some control over her body.

Lustful eyes looked up at him, and a small smile grew on her face as her hands found his hardened erection..........

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Ever since she became a puella magi she had lived 2 lives. on the outside she was the perfect sempai, the diligent student who's real identify was an hero who fount the dark side of humanity, both her colleagues as her fellow students looked up to her as she was the kind and loving sister they all wanted.

The real her, the insecure girl who wanted friends, a boyfriend an a happy end had been buried deeply inside her heart, as she knew that such wishes could no longer be granted for her. She had wished to live after all, not for a happy ending to her tale.

A part of her wanted them all to see her now, sitting down on her knees while drenched in sweat and her own fluids as she was giving head to a boy she had met only a week ago.

Although it felt that the time before he entered her life was a lifetime ago.

He had brought her to a new level of ecstasy , and she was eager to repay him the favor. However, as she licked and sucked on his member she painfully realized...

She was not very good at it.

She almost panicked, she really wanted him to feel as good as she had, but she didn't know how to do it. As she moved, her nipples brushed against his legs.

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Well, maybe 'that' would work?


Emiya had been able to keep his mind together as the girl was lavishing her attention on his member. Unlike her,e possessed enough self control to resist pain in battle after all. He wouldn't lose control no matter what she could do.

Yet when she enveloped his throbbing sword with her breast he quickly found himself losing control of his breathing.

'This was cheating!' He thought as he couldn't suppress his moan. 'This was clearly unauthorized use of assets!'

She looked up at him with a smug grin as she fondled his member with her breast, while teasing the top with her mouth. she had saw him tense up when she started using her breast, and was happy to see him react to her in this way.

For the next several minutes the room was silent, safe for the soft slurping noises the girl made and the sound of flesh hitting flesh as she tried to drive him over the edge.

In the end it was to much for him, and with a grunt he released himself all over her chest. Yet the sight of the sweaty, naked and dirtied my his seed was enough to force him back into action, even though he had just found release.

"Perhaps we should move to my bedroom?" She shyly suggested.

He saw no reason to disagree with her.


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As he slowly stood up she quickly made her way to the bathroom, and grabbed a damp towel to clean up her chest. She wasn't sure if he really minded, but she wanted to make sure he wouldn't hesitate in touching her.

She 'really' wanted him to touch her again.

As she walked out of the bathroom, she let out a gasp of surprise as Emiya suddenly picked her up in a princess carry. She blushed as he carried her to her simple western-styled bed.

She used to fantasize that a boy would carry her like this towards a bed. There he would shyly kiss her as they would tenderly make love.
The thoughts that shot trough her mind right now were not so pure compared to her fantasies from those days.

They both were ready the moment he laid her down on the bed. She eagerly spread her legs as he positioned himself above her. In one smooth movement he filled her up, as she moaned in delight. She quickly locked her legs behind her back as the both mindlessly rubbed their bodies against each other. As both of them roamed their hands across the others body the boy softly bit the girl in the neck, drawing soft erotic noises from the girl. Motivated by the results, he continues to fondle the girl while sucking on her neck as the volume of her voice increased.

Suddenly, he slowed down, and detached himself from her neck as he pushed himself off her. Mami softly moaned as the warm body that had been resting against her skin was suddenly replaces with cool air.

"I am the bone of my sword."

Mami almost didn't hear him, as she grinded her hips against his pelvis, trying to drag his member deeper inside of her. Suddenly remembering the last time he paused for an incantation, she looked up at him.

"Set; hundred shooting heads "

The barrage that was suddenly unleashed on her body triggered her strongest orgasm so far, as he drilled her into her own bed. He finished of right after her ,and he dropped his upper body on top of her. His breath tickled against her ear as he tried to regain control of his body. She moved her head to kiss him as...

Her simple western bed ,which had been stressed beyond the point of return, crashed to the ground as the feet broke free from the main frame of the bed.

Nether of them spoke, both trying to comprehend what just had happened.

Then Mami just shrugged, and started making out with him again.


The bed could wait to tomorrow after all......






She woke up alone the next morning, the smell and her ruined bed proof of the activities form the night before. It was a good thing she didn't have to go to school this day, as she didn't feel like leaving the house any time soon. She saw that her clothes and those of her 'lover', she blushed as she used the term, were still here so where had he gone too?

Her question was answered as her door opened and he walked in, wearing what seemed to be a red bathrobe. She could only guess where he got it from. In his hands he held a tray holding what seemed to be a small traditional breakfast.

He had actually gone trough the trouble of waking up before her so he could make her breakfast. The though alone made her feel warm inside.

"I know it is a bit late in the morning, but I though you might wanted to have some breakfast." He said as he sat down next to her, while setting the tray down on the nightstand next to her bed.


Never had breakfast tasted as good as it had on this day......







Mami route ending: Golden separation
6th Day: Sunset

There was no need for words between them. He had told them before that his time here was limited, and she had already cried till she could no longer shed any tears. The man she loved and she herself would separate here, both walking their own way. This was how it was supposed to be.

The other girls held a respectful distance from the two, as if they felt that coming closer would be a violation of this precious moment between the two.

"We will definitely meet again one day" he told her. And she had no reason to disbelieve him.
"I will always love you," she said softly as she leaned her head against his chest.

He softly kissed her as the last rays of the sun disappeared behind the horizon. And then he was gone.

A single tear slipped down from her eye down her cheek, but a smile remained on her face.

This was not a farewell, but only a small goodbye.

The would definitely meet again. She knew this deep in her heart.



Epilogue:


The last thing she remembered was using her last power to save a young puella magi from her death, before the goddess had appeared to take her soul with her. Now she walked trough the fields in the direction of what appeared to be a city. She could hear voices in the field as she saw other girls running around, from small children playing hide and seek to girls near adulthood, like herself, who were watching them play while drinking from what appeared to be a bottle of wine.


She followed the road towards the city until she saw what appeared to be a city gate on the horison. As she came closer her eyes spotted a small red spot on a rock in front of the gate. She started to run.

When she recognized him her run turned into a fulltime sprint.

She jumped into his arms, kissing him while tears streamed off her face.

He no longer was the boy she met that day. he had grown into an adult, or had he always been one from the start?
She no longer was the 14 year old girl. She had managed to survive her battles for over 3 years after he left, and had been one of the oldest puella magi the world had seen.


There was no need for words between them.




MAMI ROUTE END

fraggle
August 18th, 2011, 07:23 AM
Here al all my snippets I wrote for my Sayaka route


This is the story of a girl who became a hero of justice:

BGM:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yrtM4onLQ1I

Two minutes ago, Miki Sayaka was on the verge of dieing a very ugly death. Now all she could think about was how the mysterious boy had blocked the strike aimed at her neck as swords rained down while he carried her to the edge of the maze, before it collapsed with the death of the Demons. He even did a back flip over what appeared to be a bar or some other twisted thing while holding her close to his chest, sheltering her from anything what could hurt her.

She couldn't utter a single word as he left them behind, disappearing in a single leap towards the closest building.


Take a melody,
Simple as can be,

She watched the boy play his beloved violin. And knew that nothing could ever sway her from the fact that her wish had been the right one.

Give it some words,
And sweet harmony.

She sat defeated in an open space, surrounded by blades."Why did you go easy on me!" she yelled at him. "Do you think I'm a little girl who always needs to be saved and coddled!"

"Not really", the boy replied. "I just thought this would be a good training exercise. After all, we both are allies, right?"

"Allies?"The girl looked confused at the boy.

The boys smiled at her "Yes. Aren't we both allies of Justice?"

Raise your voices,

"She's my best friend, and tomorrow she's going to tell him her feelings," she cried as the boy held her.

And so she cried into the boy's chest as she lamented her fate, and the only thing he could do was hold her tightly as she finally let go of all her fears and pains.


All day long now,
Love grows strong now,

She held on to him, with only two fingers on the edge of his sleeve. It felt as if the world itself was holding him in his place.
He could barely hear the words she muttered while hiding her face by pressing it against his back.

"Please don't leave me alone."

He turned towards her as she looked ad him with teary eyes. He softly embraced her, and in responce she held on to him as if he was a life-saver, and she was about to drown.

Neither of them said a single word after that,

For there was no need for it.


Sing a melody of love,
Ah love.


Sayaka route:

'No crying till the end'


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Siren's song:

She trembled in delight as she felt him starting moving inside her, she felt no pain, he had made sure of that with his teasingly slow administrations for the last hours.

What had begun as a single hug had turned into chase kisses, had turned to kisses with him gently fondling her body, and somewhere around then and now they had both lost all of their clothing on the way.

Even now he still held her close to him, as her hips spasmed as she sat in his lap. They sat on her bed, as he rested his back against the wall.

She felt safe.

She felt happy.

She felt loved.


And so, for the first time this evening, she let her control slip as a sound escaped form her throat...
But instead of the undignified moan they both expected, an ethereal voice filled the room. He blinked. He had not see this one coming,and from the blush on her face, nether had she.

Suddenly he moved again. The stimulation caught Sayaka off guard, and she let loose another ethereal note as the pleasure hit her. It was as if the blush had spread all over her naked sweaty body, as she tried to glare angry at the boy who just now had played a trick on her.

She 'meeped' as she saw the grin on his face grow even larger....


Sayaka's Song:


Kyousuke, Hitomi, Kyoko, Mami, Homura, her parents, her Ideals, her wishes......
None of them mattered right now, for all that mattered was her song.

He was the conductor and she was the orchestra. His hips gave her her rhythm, as his hands tempered her body and her voice.

Adagio

They moved slowly at first, their hips grinding at a slow rate as he gently caressed her. She softly sung into his ear, as her head rested on his shoulder.

there were no words of lyrics, yet it felt as is she was telling the start of her story.
She sung of love, of hope and desires.

Allegro

As he increased his speed and his administrations, her song changed with the the chancing pace.
She moved her head so that their foreheads touched, and as they stared into each other's eyes, she continued to sing more enthusiastically .
She sung of an hero's appearance, the clash of blades, and the forging of a friendship.


Grave

As he slowed down his speed, she slowed down, and laid her head again his chest. Sensing the change in mood, he softly held on to her as tears started to fall from her eyes.
She sung of betrayal, of pain and loss.

Intermezzo

He slowly held her face with his two hands and planted a soft kiss on her lips, cutting of her song. Her teary eyes shot open for a moment, before closing again as she allowed herself to return the kiss. They didn't move for over a minute, until she slowly detached her lips form his. Just before he could open his mouth, she put her finger on his lips. She smiled while grinding her hips against him, before continuing her song.

Da Capo

One again they started moving slowly, as they did when her song begun. Although tear-streaks still remained on her face, her eyes smiles as she continued to sing her song.
She once again sung of warmth, of hope...

of love.


Coda

As they both reached their limits he started to speed up again. Her hips moved in sync with his as her singing increased in tempo to match their rhythm. Her voice as he guided her towards the finale.

He was pushing her Higher, and higher and higher...



And so she sang about Love, Love.....LOVE

Finale

As they came together, she let loose one last note, which filled the room.

Emiya's eyes widened as he felt his magic circuits flare up in response to her final note.

She held on to her final note for several second before she crashed down into his arms, her lungs depleted of air. She could barely move, her body felt heavy and she felt like she would fall asleep at any moment now.

The last thing she remembered was her lover softly kissing her on the lips before her mind drifted away to the lands of dreams.


Sleep did not come to Emiya soon that night. As he held his lover in his arms as she slept, his mind drifted to the song she had created while they 'made love'. He smiled at the term, but he felt he could not describe what just has happened with just 'sex'.

His magic circuits had reacted to her song in the end, and for some reason this bothered him more then it should.

Mostly because the feeling had been too familiar for him to feel comfortable. He didn't know if this was a joke played on him by Madoka, or that there was a part of being a puella magi thats simply had eluded him so far. But something Sayaka did had triggered something inside him,

Besides the obvious things of course.

In the end he decides to let it be, as he slowly lied down next to Sayaka.

She slowly sang her new found song, even in her sleep, and before he knew it he was softly humming in his sleep along with her, until he even sang the words......

Words that she had never uttered, that she didn't even know, but had been the gateway to his soul from the day he had discovered his true nature....


"This is the only path, I have no regret"

"My whole life was.........."

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Resolution

The dark entity moved towards her. She couldn't make out any facial forms, which most demons did posses, but she swore she could see two red dots which functioned as eyes. It looked as if the main body was made out of blood and shadows, and she could see ribbon-like appendixes spawn near what she could call the feet of the creature. The air surrounding it smelled like blood and rotting flesh. The thing was as easily as high as a normal house, and she didn't want to know what kind of reach those ribbons would have.

'This thing is a monster,' She thought.

Not only had this thing completely concealed it presence as it moved into the city, it had even been smart enough to avoid leaving a trail by refraining form eating regular humans, Only devouring people that wouldn't be missed, like the homeless stragglers near the industrial site, or the yakuza group that had gone missing several days ago.The fact that it displayed such intelligence worried her even more.

But the thing that set her of most was the way it looked at her. Normal demons would look at puella magi like her as disturbances, or as an danger, if they even could express such feelings.

This thing was looking at her as if she was a luxury meal. She had heard stories from Mami about demons so strong and twisted that they would actively hunt puella magi to devour them for their strength.

This thing wanted to devour her....

It had been able to set up an ambush , as she was separated form everyone else. They were currently split up to chase several other disturbances, no doubt created by this thing in front of her.

Her thoughts were cut short as the things body swelled up, before shooting several bloody ribbons at her. She was barely able to dodge them as she jumped out of the way. Not only did the thing immediately launch a second dozen from its body, the first ones followed her as she started trowing cutlasses at the ribbons to pin them down.

The cutlasses bounces of the ribbons. They were made out of simple metal, and were unable to pierce the black material. She was forced to keep dodging as the ribbons kept gaining on her.

Her swords were useless against this thing. At this rate it was going to catch her. It would catch her, and it would devour her.

She didn't want to die, not after finally feeling happy again,not after what happened last night. She was going to live. She was going to survive and see Shirou again.She just needed a weapon that could just cut trough this!

One ribbon suddenly changed direction, now aiming for her head. She watched in slow-motion as it came at her. She slowly raised her arm....

The monster screamed as a white sword sliced trough the ribbon with ease, the anti-demonic charms carved into Bakuya making short notice of the demon's attack. an attack of another bunch of ribbon was easily thwarted by Kanshou, as it appeared next to its twin sword.

It quickly pulled back its remaining appendages, giving Sayaka a short moment to recover herself. Her arms felt heavy, which could be explained by the fact that she was holding the much heavier Chinese dao, instead of her usual cutlasses.

Wait..

What?

Before she could complete comprehend where the swords had come from, the Demon continued its attack. Only by using her magically gained speed and strength was she able to beat the ribbons of her as she tried to dodge as many as it extended in her direction. The weapons might be much more effective against it, but she had no experience wielding them, and thus she could only try to fend the Demon off while trying to evade as much as she could.

Suddenly, the monster was bombarded with pellets, as a rain of muskets signaled Mami's arrival to the scene. Kyoko followed shortly by trying to slice of several ribbons with her spear, but nether of their weapons could penetrate its thick hide and Kyoko was quickly forced to jump back as she and Mami became its new targets. Seeing the ribbons advance on Kyoko she copied a trick she had seen when she had sparred with Emiya.

She threw the white sword at the ribbons aiming for kyoko, while holding on to its black twin. As she had hoped it sliced right trough those ribbons as well, but to her dismay the blade got stuck in the wall of the building next to her, instead of returning to her hand as she had hoped. Sensing that her luck had changed, the Demon once again focused on her, sending out several of his thicker ribbons in her direction, before a rain of swords put a stop to all of his attacks as the red knight made his entrance on the battlefield.

He remained calm while watching the Demon, although his eyes widened in surprise as he saw her holding the black dao, and finding the white one buried in the wall of a building.

"It's good to see that your okay Sayaka-chan!" Mami exclaimed as she came running towards her and Emiya. Right behind her was kyoko, holding the white blade she had quickly pulled out of the wall.

"You dropped this," she smirked, while waving it in front of her face."Isn't it a bit to heavy for those weak arm muscles ? Better stick with those toothpicks of your's if you want to keep those slim and feminine arms ."

"How did you get these?" Emiya interrupted, before Sayaka could return a remark to Kyoko.

"I don't know" she replied. "I just really wanted a weapon that could cut trough him, and then I thought of you and...."

Mami and Kyoko blankly looked as Sayaka turned red as if she was recalling something very embarrassing.

"For now, don't try to make more then one pair at a time." He sternly told her. " We don't know how many you can create, and how much of your power it takes. I don't want you to hurt yourself using these blades uncontrolled."

"Shirou..."

"Hate to interrupt you little 'moment'" Kyoko butted in, " but that guy is charging his LASER! "

Shirou looked up to see the Demon launch a flash of light at them. Almost instantly, he traced his strongest defensive concept, 'Rho Aias'. The projection was a moment to slow; although Aias was able to shield them off, the first 3 petals were incomplete when the attack hit, and shattered soon after impact. Wounds appeared on Emiya's body as the laws of the conceptual weapon forced him to pay the cost for his action.

The attack would not breach the final layers, but it would strain his body greatly, as the Demon's attack showed no sign of powering down. He needed to finish this quick. If he was fighting this thing solo he could try several of his noble phantasm's, or in the worst case fall back to strike with ranged attacks form a greater distance.

But Sayaka had already wasted a lot of power, and Mami and kyoko would also be in danger if he could not finish the thing of in his single strike.

The only choice he had was to overwhelm the Demon with his full arsenal, by summoning everything he had into this world...

Or by bringing the demon into his.

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Unlimited blade works



"I am the bone of my sword"

Mami and Kyoko looked up at me, recognizing the chant from earlies fights, but not understanding what I was about to do. The chant held no power in itself. Mages use their power by forcing their will upon the world. self-hypnoses gave them that power.The chant was simply a tool to focus my mind. It reflected the path that she had now given to me. An oath I had forged they day madoka-sama had endowed me with the title of a champion of hope.

My ideal made reality.

Yet even I could not deny my surprise as Sayaka suddenly started singing. The ethereal voice from last night returning as she slowly sang her song without words. Kyoko and Mami looked at her as if she had grown a second head, as they both were at a loss for words at this point.

Yet I knew, for that song was her own oath, the one she had forged with me that night. forged by her dreams, her ideals, her loss and pain, once weakened and broken by love, yet strengthened and reforged by it too. It was her way to express her very existence, and I could not deny it. After all, hadn't I done the same thing myself back, then when I summoned my reality marble for the first time?

"Steel is my body, and fire is my blood"

I continued reciting my oath, as she sung next to me. my words and her sound did not match as a normal song would do, but we both felt the resonance. This was a dangerous game. The manifestation of an Reality marble is an dangerous feat. You practically laid your own soul bare for all to see. To allow someone else to influence it in this way was madness, for both parties.

Yet I felt like I had no reason to stop.

"I have fought countless battles"

The attack from the Demon increased, as if he felt the danger approaching from us. the fourth petal screeching as the pressure increased. It would hold for now, but my time would run out soon.

"Saving their hopes from loss
Never for my own gain"

Although there were countless maidens I would never safe, I was blissed with the fact that, even for a short time, I had preserved the hope and lives of those I was able to aid in battle. That alone was my much sought reward after eons of bloody and thankless service.

We sung and spoke in sync now, as our words and sounds prepared ourself to force our will onto the world itself.

"Have withstood pain to create many weapons"

Mami and Kyoko, feeling from the mood that something would happen soon both readied their weapons.

"This is the only path, I have no regret"

We both knew that we would separate once my mission here was done. No matter how much I loved her, I could not deny my existence as a guardian of hope.She would probably never see me after this day, until Madoka herself would claim her soul in the end.

Yet we would walk forward on our paths as allies of justice and hope.

Those are our paths, and they would surely cross one day.


"My whole life was unlimited blade works"



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"W-Where are we"

Mami had quickly closed her eyes as the world around her exploded into light. Yet when she opened her eyes she refused to believe that they were still working for a moment.

They were not in the barrier from the Demon anymore. Hell, they weren't even in Mitakihara anymore

The Sky above her was cleared of any clouds, with the only items filling the sky being the sun, which seemed to be at the horizon, illuminating this world in a shower of gold light. The sky itself was filled with countless gears, each one slowly turning, as if they formed some kind of gigantic machine together, their purpose to her unknown.

But she could swear that she heard singing voices in the air.

Emiya looked around him, He too was surprised. The normal clouded sky of his reality marble had been wiped clean, showing all the parts of his forge that rested in the sky. The cogs themselves however had also been affected. He could make out detailed illustrations on the cogwheels, which together formed an impressive array of musical notes, which felt rather familiar to him.

Looking down at his own body, he recognized the symbols, as the same magic circles were currently positioned over the wounds he and the others had suffered, closing them at a phenomenal rate.

But the greatest change was the landscape itself. The barren plains, filled with swords, had disappeared, as the sandy ground had been replaces with an ocean, topped off with a layer of water which seemed to defy the laws of nature, allowing his weaponry to stand up on the water as if they all had been granted a pedestal by the lady of the lake.

The same power that prevented the swords form sinking away was probably also responsible for keeping them afloat, for a short moment he had thought that the body of water had been covered with a layer of ice, but he was quickly forced to conclude that the ground under his feet really was water, just not acting with the laws of physics. Well, water was her main element after all. No need to act surprised if she rewrote the rules of her own elements in a reality marble.

The demon had ceased its attack, and Emiya allowed the remains of Rho Aias to fade away. In its half-beaten state it would not be of any use anymore.

Besides, it was their turn to go on the offensive. The gears in the sky turned, the singing voices increased in strength...

Metal rained form the sky, pinning the Demon to the grounds and preventing it from launching any attacks towards them.


Yet even this would only hold him for a while.

How many puella magi had this thing devoured to gain the resistance against the gathered mystery in those weapons? Killing this thing wouldn't be enough. He had to make sure that it was completely wiped of the face of the planet.

He would have to use 'that' sword to make sure nothing remained. But that meant he would have to rely on the girls to be able to keep the demon in one spot as he charged the attack. Nether Kyoko's or Mami's weapon carried enough power to wound him, and Sayaka had little experience with her twin blades.

Lucky for them, he had all the weapons they could ever need.





"What kind of spear is called 'gay bully? I mean, that’s just silly" Kyoko stated with disbelief in her voice.

"It's called 'Gae Buidhe. The Golden Rose of Mortality”. He replied coldly. "It was one of the weapons wielded by the Irish hero Diarmuid Ua Duibhne. It will leave wounds that cannot be healed on its opponent, so treat it with respect."
"S-Sorry" She apologized, as she held the spear to her chest.

"It's beautiful." Mami whispered, as she held the wooden crossbow with her right arm. "It's almost as if it’s alive."

"The Yew bow. The bow of prayer. That crossbow's arrows will react violently with anything impure, especially poisons, so watch out where you aim that thing. I trust you know how to aim a crossbow?" Mami nodded, her look of admiration replaced with a serious expression.

Sayaka stood next to them, holding her own Dao. He had tried to quickly explain their main properties to her, but there would be no time to practice for any of them. Both Mami and Kyoko were 'Borrowers', so they would only be able to use the weapons at a fraction of their true power. For that reason he had given them weapons whose powers where passive, and could be called upon without the need to actively invoke them.

A weapon as Gae Bolg would have been useless in their hands; the demon spear would have been unwilling to release its full power, even if one supplied it with the required mana.


Sayaka was an 'owner' like himself, now slowly being able to understand the history of her twin blades as she recreated them. Still, she too could only use the weapon at a reduced rank compared to the original, and she lacked a great deal of experience wielding those heavy blades.


"I'll need you to hold him off while I prepare the weapon to finish him off," He explained to them. "While I do that, I won’t be able to maintain the rain of swords, so you will be on your own."

"No worries" the red girl replied. "We'll have him running circles around his own tail!"

"Mami, cover them from a distance, and try to aim your shots in any wounds they can tear open. The bow's arrows should be most effective there."

"I'll look after them for you" She replied smiling

"Just keep him rooted in place, and fall back when I give the signal." He turned towards the demon, which had slowly started to move, weathering the rain of steel.

"I have an idea.” Sayaka spoke up, as she looked at the 'ground' littered with blades in front of the demon.



Strike

"Wait for it." Sayaka ordered, as she closely watched the beast crawl towards them. The others stood behind her, Kyoko and Mami readying their weapons as Emiya held a golden sword, his eyes closed as if he was praying.

"Wait for it."

The rain of swords disappeared. The demon let out a triumphant cry as it prepared to move in their direction.

Sayaka sung a single note. The ground softly trembled as the beast made its first step towards them. Letting lose another triumphant cry, it prepared to rush towards them.....


When suddenly the 'ground' under him returned into normal water. With a cry it fell down, trapping itself in the newly made hole, unable to climb out.

"Now!" And with that battle cry, they charged.


BGM:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ji03z81ebyg&amp;feature=related


Two flashed, one red and one blew, sped towards the monstrosity trapped in the water. When he detected their approach he launched dozens of ribbons at them, but this time his attack was completely foiled. Where her own spear had failed to slice a single ribbon, Gae Buidhe tore them apart. The ribbons that survived were unable to retract themselves, leaving the monster with less power to defend itself.

Kanshou and Bakuya tore though the remaining ribbons and both knights charged past the beast, but not before both drawing first blood in the form of 2 gaping wounds in both sides of the beast.

It screamed in pain as the two legendary weapons burned as cut his flesh, preventing it from simply healing its wounds.

Mami's bow sung as she fired two shots at the beast. In the wake of the two red arrows she had fired in the wounds the ethereal roots of the bow burrowed themselves into its flesh, before violently reacting with the corrupt material of which it was made, tearing large pieces of the beast apart.

It had never fought enemies like the ones it faced now. It could not remember ever been hurt like this before.
It screamed in Pain, but now also out of fear.

The golden sword started to glow as the boy prayed. He felt her power starting to flow trough him, as her very essence powered the greatest noble phantasm he could wield. The Crystallization of hope would deliver victory in this battle.

But he still needed a little more time.

"Don't touch that stuff" Sayaka shouted at Kyoko, as blood and dark slime was launched trough the air. Kyoko screamed, as she wasn't able to dodge everything, and as dark matter hit her left arm it started to eat trough her flesh.

Immediately, the Gears turned, and as the detailed illustrations on the cogwheels glowed, stronger magic circles appeared to restore her flesh. But now they were once again forced on the defense, as the corrupted matter form the beast prevented them from rushing in. At least the demon had been wounded enough that it couldn't move anymore.

Mami launched another volley at the beast. The arrows once again took root in its flesh, and started to tear the beast apart, as the knights made short work of the ribbons it tried to use to block the shots.

Suddenly, a strong wind started blowing from behind them, as the girls fell back and looked behind them, Emiya slowly walked forward, carrying the fully charged crystallization of hope.

The sheer pressure of the sword nearly pushed them all to the ground.

"Get behind me"




http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8q6uShocSFg&amp;feature=related

It was in pain.

Why was it in such a pain?

How could they have put it in such a pain?

He would eat them all, he would devour them like the other that had tried to hurt him, he would munch on them and swallow them and....

One of the tiny things was carrying a light

that light.....

That light......

What is that light!


This was his second true Noble phantasm. He might have been the 'owner' of countless weapons, but he was the true 'wielder' of his reality marble, and this sword.

The ultimate sword forged to battle demons, the only weapon that would allow Madoka to interfere with the material universe.

Based on the sword of his saber, Arturia Pendragon, Excalibur had been the Last Phantasm, the ultimate fantasy, crystallized inside the planet from the collective wishes of mankind, as the crystallization of the prayer named glory.

This sword had inherited the name and strength of its predecessor. For it was the Final deliverance, crystallized outside time and space from the wish of the goddess herself, as the crystallization of the prayer named hope.

The absolute symbol of his duty as guardian. The reward for is absolute devotion till the end of times.

The sword of absolute hope: Excalibur

He held the sword in front of him, as he prepared to release its power. The girls stood behind him, only able to look at the sword, the demon itself forgotten.

He raised the sword.

"EX"

And closed the curtain for the demon's existence in one stroke.

"CALIBER!!"

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Seperation

With the release of his attack and the destruction of the demon, the world of gears faded away as reality retook it's place. Kyoko found herself standing on the concrete ground, still holding the legendary weapon in her hands.

"I'm so keeping you" she spoke to the spear, before she let out a cry as the weapon faded away. "Hey!" She yelled, turning her head towards the boy. "What the big I......"

She abruptly stopped. In front of her stood the boy, still wearing his red overcoat over his black armor. Only the red color was rapidly fading away...

No, not just the coat, she swore she could almost see trough him at this point.

"Oh dear. It looks like I let myself loose a bit to much. Well, its almost sunset anyway, so I didn't have much time left to begin with." As his face contacted, he seemly forced the color to return to his body, but she still could tell that this would only last for a few minutes.

"Emiya" she softy spoke his name, as if her loud voice could cast him off the world. Mami too looked shocked, as she didn't know what to say.


Sayaka slowly walked up to him, and slowly touched his face with her fingers. When she felt that he was still here, she hugged him, burying her face into his chest.

After a few moments she let go of him, ans stood up to look him straight in the eyes.


"Ill keep running forwards, no matter what. I will not regret anything, so I can be proud of myself at the end." She vowed to him.

A part of him wanted to stop her, tell her that she should live a happy life.

But he himself had also never listened to that part, so who was he to stop her.

As long as she had no regrets in the end she could be proud of herself, no matter what happened.

"I'll be waiting for you then, at the end of your journey. You will have to tell me everything, so don't you dare give up midways." He smiled at her.


She remained silent as he faded away.....



"He's gone.", Mami muttered, almost as if she couldn't believe it. Sayaka didn't move. Kyoko slowly walked up to her.

"Sayaka, are you okay?" She asked, reaching out to the girl in front of her.Sayaka suddenly turned around to face them. Although tears streamed from her eyes, she smiled at them.

"Don't worry! He'll be waiting for me at the end, so as long as I move forward we'll definitely meet again!" She grabbed kyoko's shoulder and pulled her along next to Mami. With an arm around both of their necks she smiled at them.

"Lets get moving, shall we?" The rumbling of their stomachs pierced the silence, and as if by magic they all burst out in laughter.There was no need for sadness, for it was just a small separation.Their path would certainly cross one day.

And so she sang as they all walked towards the setting sun.




9th Day : Confession

Kamijou Kyousuke walked towards the top of the schools roof. The last few weeks had been very packed, with his dismissal from the hospital, his school life and his upcoming practice recital. He hadn't seen Sayaka in a while, but he had been swarmed by his other friends ,so he had to admit that she has slipped from his mind. After Hitomi had confessed to him he had felt a bit awkward about telling it to Sayaka, as he was now dating her best friend. Sayaka and he had been close friends for so long, and as far as he knew sayaka and Hitomi had been best friends.

Hitomi had remained silent when he asked her about it. He hoped Sayaka wouldn't feel mad about him stealing her friend away from her. After all It wasn't as if they couldn't all be friends after this?

As he approached the roof he suddenly picked up a voice. He first though he imagined it, but as he came closer to the door of the roof he could hear is more clearly with every step.

He fastened his pace, intrigued by the song.


Sayaka was standing on the roof, her back turned to him as she faced the city. She continued singing, as if she didn't notice him as he entered trough the door. He could only listen to her, all other thoughts drifting to the background as she sung her song.

He had never knows she could sing like this.

As she stopped, he suddenly regained control over his body. feeling like he had been peeping on her he quickly greeted her.

"Miki-san"

"Kamiyou-kun"



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"I used to love you "

The statement had hit him like a ton of bricks. He had never seen her as anything other as a childhood friend, and certainly never in that way. Sayaka was Sayaka, and had always been so. Suddenly recalling how he had acted to her for the last few weeks, he suddenly felt like the worst asshole in the world. He liked her as a friend but still......

"Sayaka, I'm...."

"Ah, don't worry, you don't have to feel guilty or anything." She laughed at him. " In fact, I'm happy for you and Hitomi-chan, so take good care of her."

"But, you just said that that..."

"Ah, I felt a little down in the beginning, but I got cheered up, so you really don't have to feel guilty. In fact, maybe i should thank you."

"Thank me? what happened?"

Sayaka blushed for a moment, before giving a sly smile at him.

"Oh Kyousuke, what bad manners do you have! A lady doesn't just kiss and tell, you know."

He had no reply to her statement. As he was still reeling, she walked past him, while stretching her arms to the sky.

"Well, this felt really good! I should have done this days ago. It was fun speaking with you Kamiyou-kun! I'll see you around!"

As she walked down the stairs she started singing again.

She walked forwards....



Epilogue

She lied broken on the ground, her soulgem cracked form the power used to defath the demons in the labyrinth. She knew this was the end

She had saved many lives, including those of the 2 young girls who had just begun their path as a puella magi. She hoped that she had been able to teach them everything important, before she had left them behind.

Their path would continue as long as they kept moving.

As her body became heavy 2 people suddenly appeared before her. She recognised the girl first.

"Madoka"

She suddenly knew her, of had she always known?

Madoka gently grasped the soulgem, draining its corruption before leaving once again. Only the red-dressed man remained.

He softly touched her cheek as he drew closer to her.

"So, do you regret it? " He softly asked her.

"No" she replied, and with that she felt her consciousness fade away.

the last thing she felt was him carrying her in his arms........



When she woke up in a lush green forest, she found herself once again in his arms, as if he had carried her bridal-style to the clearing, before sitting down.

"Wont you tell me your stories" he asked her.

She laughed at him, before suddenly kissing him on his lips, while trowing her arms around his back.


The clearing would be filled with sound, as she sang the tale of meetings and separations, of love and loss, and the life of a hero of justice.



Sayaka route....END

AzureGrimoire
August 18th, 2011, 08:09 AM
As IRUN's request...

Lancer stared... and stared some more... in front of him was a red haired female lancer...
'Lancer!!!' His mind screamed for obvious reasons, as the female lancer knocked him out of the shed. Behind the said Lancer was another female that was firing her muskets at him.

'Musket Fire!!!' His mind screamed again at the possibility of a Heroic Spirit using 'modern' weaponry as he easily deflected the shots with his lance. He also noticed two more female figures, one is wielding a familiar twin swords in a defensive style.

'Wait a minute... aren't those the swords that sword-wielding Archer used against me?!' He mentally screamed for the third time. The last one, who is armed with a shield, is busy tending the injuries he inflicted to the red-haired magus...

'Now that I noticed...' Lancer thought as he carefully analyzed the newcomers...

After a few seconds, Lancer took a deep breath, jabbed his index finger at the general direction of the shed then screamed, "HOW DID YOU SUMMONED FOUR HEROIC SPIRITS?! WHY ARE THEY YOUNG GIRLS?! WHY THE HELL ARE THEY COLOR COORDINATED?! WHY DOES THEIR CLOTHES MATCH THE COLOR OF THEIR HAIR?! ARE YOU A PEDOPHILE?!"

"Excuse me?!" Emiya Shirou tried to answer but his injuries protested. He just looked at the four girls and asked, "Who... are you girls..."

"Should we give him our names?" the female lancer asked the musket wielding girl.

"We are not part of the Throne of Heroes, so I don't see any harm telling him our names." The musket wielding girl promptly answered. The other two girls nodded then the four of them kneeled in front of Shirou and began to introduce themselves.

"Kyouko Sakura"

"Tomoe Mami"

"Miki Sayaka"

"Akemi Homura"

"We have heeded your summoning, and come forth." They spoke in sync, "We ask you, are you our master?"


Illyasviel von Einzbern was downright jealous. Why shouldn’t she. Seeing her ‘beloved’ Onii-chan being surrounded by girls which she thought was around her age will surely send her on a jealous fit that will make Parsee Misuhashi proud.

“Onii-chan!” Illya spoke with a little pout on her face, “Who are those girls hanging around with you?!”

“Illyasviel?!” Rin quickly switched to combat mode because behind Illyasviel was her Servant Berserker.

“Ohh… a big one…” Kyouko grinned as she twirled her lance and shifted to her combat stance. “Me and Sayaka will be on the frontline this time.”

“Eh?!” Sayaka was clearly surprised at Kyouko’s proclamation. “But isn’t he-”

“Don’t worry, I’ll provide covering fire.” Mami cut her off as she materialized hundred of muskets in the air.

Homura silently took out a Walther WA 2000 sniper rifle out of her shield.

Illyasviel was about to protest about Heroic Spirits using modern weaponry when a different voice spoke.

“Ohh~! They’re magical girls! Different power source but definitely magical girls!” a wand like thingy came out of nowhere.

”M-m-magical girls?!” Rin quickly looked at Shirou’s summons with wide eyes as she pointed at their direction.

“Looks like the cat’s out of the bag…” Kyouko sighed. So much for being incognito.

“It does not matter.” Homura spoke, “Protect our Master, Defeat the enemy Servants and incapacitate the enemy Masters… It’s the mission she gave to us.”

“I beginning to think you’re having the hots towards her.” Kyouko spoke.

“What are you doing here Ruby?! Didn’t I ordered you to stay in the castle?!” Illyasviel angrily asked the floating wand. Ruby apparently was part of the ‘Package Deal’ when she summoned Berserker

“I am investigating this weird power I sensed in the Earth Pulse of this city. It turns out it was those girls who were the source of that power. But enough of the explanation, we need to defeat the enemy Magical Girls! It’s time of a Prismal Transformation!” Ruby said as it placed itself onto Illyasviel’s hands.

"W-w-wait! What Prismal Transfromation?!” Illyasviel tried to protest but Ruby is already in control.

[The Mirrorform is ready for! The opening of the Kaleidoscope Gate!]

And in a flash of light, Illyasviel’s clothes changed from her favorite winter themed clothes to Magical Girl themed. When the lights died out, everyone’s jaws have dropped. Including Illya’s. Homura, on the other hand, silently cursed Illya for stealing her Madoka-sama’s preferred color scheme.

“W-w-what the hell?! Where is my winter clothes?! What did you do to my favorite winter clothes?! And what kind of clothes you made me wear?!” Illya raged as she shook Ruby violently.

“That’s your Magical Armor! It protects you from any harm! Physical and otherwise!”

While Ruby and Illya continued their quarrel, the four Puella Magi felt an emotion they have not felt for a long time…

”Why do I feel I’ve been cheated.” Mami asked to no one particular.

Somewhere hidden, Counter Guardian (of Hope) EMIYA a.k.a. Archer, sighed. This Holy Grail War went from crazy to downright crazier. He hopes that it’s just the world trying to screw him over for being freed from it’s grasp… and not an intervention by Zelretch and Madoka-sama. He shuddered at the thought Madoka meeting someone like Zelretch…


"Wow. This is fun!" Madoka Kaname squealed as she fiddled her powers a bit. "Can you teach me on how to effectively control my powers Mr. Schweinorg?"

"Sure." Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg replied, "I still have a few hours to burn before the surfing tournament I joined in starts... and please, call me Zelretch. You calling me Mister Schweinorg makes me feel old."

"Okay Mr. Zelretch!" Madoka happily replied.

Zelretch sighed, "By the way, about our little project..."

"The first ever Holy Grail War: Magical Girl Shift in Fuyuki City? I already sent my trusted friends there... I received word that there's a bit complication since we did this project a little bit too late. Some of the masters have already summoned their Heroic Spirits." Madoka replied, shifting to her so called Professional Mode, "How about your delegates?"

"Illyasviel von Einzbern is now Kaleido Ruby," Zelretch replied as he took out a coffee table and two chairs out of his personal hammerspace, "Luviagelita and Miyu Edelfelt a.k.a. Kaleido Sapphire is about to arrive from England... which leaves me with two more slots..."

"You have something in mind Zelretch-sensei?" Madoka then used her powers to fill the said coffee table with cake and other sweets.

"I could make Bazett summon the Original Magical Girls of the Age of Gods... but I think Gilgamesh might try to seal the two in his stupid Gate..." Zelretch them proceeded to murmur something foul against Gilgamesh.

"The Original Magical Girls?" Madoka's head tilted sideways as she tried to grasp the idea of Magical Girls before Kyuubey came in the equation.

"They are Euryale and Stheno... Medusa's sister..." Zelretch replied, "I think I'll just pull someone from the World Line similar to this..."

"World Line?"

"Hush there, little goddess... I like Steins;Gate..."

-=-

Emilya Shirou shivered. S/he have a feeling that someone is going to make his/her life more difficult...

NanayaMode
August 18th, 2011, 08:16 AM
Reposting mine here.

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"You know, killing me is pointle-" Whatever else the white creature was going to say was cut off as a drill-shaped sword tore through the creature's head.

"Yeah, I know."

"No matter how many times you kill me..." Another white creature appeared from another direction. "I will always come ba-" Two curved swords, one black and one white, sliced through the creatures body before returning to the man's hands.

"You don't need to remind me."

"So why are you doing thi-" A dozen arrows pierced the white creature that came into view.

"Because I'm bored," Archer replied.

'I'll never understand humans.' Kyubei decided not to show up again for a while.

ItsaRandomUsername
August 18th, 2011, 09:34 AM
Hey, people are listening to me? Whuh!!!!

Anyway, good to see this all posted again. =) Does a body good, like milk does!

nitewind
August 18th, 2011, 01:17 PM
Reposting snippet per Irun's request.

Here's a pure crack idea I thought up:

"Alright, I have two questions," Homura said as she and Archer were walking down the streets of Fuyuki, "First, who was that woman with red eyes and silver hair that was dressed like you?"

"Honestly speaking I have no idea," Archer replied, his tone indicating deep thought, "though if I had to guess I'd say she was summoned as Rin's archer for the grail war instead of me. Why I have no idea."

"And what was your second question Homura-chan?" Archer asked, his voice filled with an unknown dread.

"Yes, the second question," Homura absentmindedly replied before stopping and staring Archer straight in the eye.

"What was with ALL THOSE WOMEN LIVING IN YOUR HOUSE?!?!" she half shouted half asked "We saw Saber, Rin, Sakura, Rider, Luvia, Illya, and that female archer all living with your past self!"

"I hope you have an explanation for this," Homura cutely demand.

"Well, what can I say?" Archer said as he sheepishly scratched the back of his head. "It's the power of the BAR."

And Homura was never able to look at Archer the same way again.

Alulim
August 18th, 2011, 01:22 PM
And Homura was never able to look at Archer the same way again.Indeed.

nitewind
August 18th, 2011, 10:50 PM
Indeed.
Glad you liked it. What did you think of the punchline?

Alulim
August 18th, 2011, 10:54 PM
Glorious, nothing less.

linkhyrule5
August 24th, 2011, 12:02 AM
So, random omake seed.

Madoka tries to help all magical girls in need, right?

Saber is magical. Saber is a girl. Saber, in desperation, made a contract with a more powerful entity: her soul for a wish.

I vote we have them meet :p.

Alulim
August 24th, 2011, 12:02 AM
...Indeed.

Arashi_Leonhart
August 24th, 2011, 12:18 AM
Saber is magical. Saber is a girl. Saber, in desperation, made a contract with a more powerful entity: her soul for a wish.

That's actually canon anyway. She is participating in the Holy Grail War for the chance to grant a wish, and she traded in her soul to be a Counter Guardian to do so. The contract is just never formed, though, because she never wins the Grail and gives it up.

ItsaRandomUsername
August 24th, 2011, 12:31 AM
Alaya is now Cubey/Cubey is now Alaya.

Incubators have been hanging around humans since the dawn of civilization. Guess we now know how Archer made his Contract with the world. He forcefully summoned an Incubator and made it give him a Contract even though he isn't a young teenage girl.

....this makes far more sense than it has any right to.

SeiKeo
August 24th, 2011, 12:33 AM
Alaya is now Cubey/Cubey is now Alaya.

Incubators have been hanging around humans since the dawn of civilization. Guess we now know how Archer made his Contract with the world. He forcefully summoned an Incubator and made it give him a Contract even though he isn't a young teenage girl.

....this makes far more sense than it has any right to.

Kyubey is Ryougi?

...my brain.

Arashi_Leonhart
August 24th, 2011, 12:33 AM
Guess we now know how Archer made his Contract with the world. He forcefully summoned an Incubator and made it give him a Contract even though he isn't a young teenage girl.

....this makes far more sense than it has any right to.

Archer: All according to Keikaku.
TL Note: Keikaku means plan.

VelspertheCat
August 24th, 2011, 12:33 AM
Incubators can grant wishes to men too. There's a line in there that it isn't efficient at all, though. Not sure how the wish can be forced, though. Does Archer find some sort of reverse Rulebreaker?

ItsaRandomUsername
August 24th, 2011, 12:36 AM
HAX, of course. Just like he always does.

Buuu....why am I so tempted to do something with this???

VelspertheCat
August 24th, 2011, 12:40 AM
'cuz magical girl Archer would be hiliarious?

ItsaRandomUsername
August 24th, 2011, 12:46 AM
Omake time after I get with this chapter.

There shall be Mami, pocky, and flashbacks. And mangas.
And QB trollin'.

Lotus Saint
August 24th, 2011, 12:56 AM
IRUN, post the next chapter within 2 days and I'll give you something special.

ItsaRandomUsername
August 24th, 2011, 01:01 AM
An Ultimatum, eh? Time to go Jason Bourne on this, then.

Lotus Saint
August 24th, 2011, 01:04 AM
If your typing speed goes slower than 24 words a minute the bomb in Illya's chest will explode.

Techlet
August 24th, 2011, 01:07 AM
If your typing speed goes slower than 24 words a minute the bomb in Illya's chest will explode.

The faster IRUn types, the less Ilya's chest will expand!

Save her delicious flat chest, IRUn!

qsurf
August 24th, 2011, 01:36 AM
*blinks, wipes away the tears* Fraggle? Those snips were ​beautiful.

Alulim
August 24th, 2011, 01:41 AM
*blinks, wipes away the tears* Fraggle? Those snips were ​beautiful.Indeed, that is why fraggle is my god.

linkhyrule5
August 24th, 2011, 01:52 AM
Doesn't Ilya already have a bomb in her chest? Well, a Holy Grail, anyway, which is much the same thing... :P

Arashi_Leonhart
August 24th, 2011, 01:58 AM
So then, IRUn's typing keeps Servants from entering the Grail.

...

Quickly, someone, summon a bunch of Servants, and then MAKE SURE IRUN IS AT HIS COMPUTER 24/7.

linkhyrule5
August 24th, 2011, 02:00 AM
Thus trapping seven heroic spirits in the real world indefinitely.

...

Why is this a good thing? :rin:

Techlet
August 24th, 2011, 02:01 AM
Considering Sakura's role post-HF, that's just going to make her obsolete. :V

Arashi_Leonhart
August 24th, 2011, 02:02 AM
I can think of many people who would love to have some of the Servants around indefinitely.

Also, we only get Rider with HF Sakura. Not nearly enough.

ItsaRandomUsername
August 24th, 2011, 02:02 AM
Oh, Sakura in the Xth Loop's timeline...

Teehee~

Techlet
August 24th, 2011, 02:04 AM
Oh, Sakura in the Xth Loop's timeline...

Teehee~

She's one big, juicy Soul Gem just waiting to get filled.

Arashi_Leonhart
August 24th, 2011, 02:09 AM
Filled with darkness? But I thought...it was white...

Giggity.

Techlet
August 24th, 2011, 02:14 AM
Nah, that's only when her Soul Gem gets all filthy after repeated use.

ItsaRandomUsername
August 24th, 2011, 02:16 AM
She's one big, juicy Soul Gem just waiting to get filled.

Such quaint assumptions~


Nah, that's only when her Soul Gem gets all filthy after repeated use.

Does her Soul Gem begin to stink after repeated use?

Techlet
August 24th, 2011, 02:21 AM
Yes. That's the point where she becomes the Witches because her whore moans hormones are out of control.

ItsaRandomUsername
August 24th, 2011, 03:08 AM
Kotomine can out-troll QB.

Discuss.

NanayaMode
August 24th, 2011, 03:55 AM
Kyubey doesn't understand humans. Of course Kotomine can out-troll him.

Lotus Saint
August 24th, 2011, 04:52 AM
Kotomine has trolling in his genes.
It was passed on to Caren but it hasn't awakened yet.

fraggle
August 24th, 2011, 05:39 AM
or so we think...........

damn, `I'm so addicted to the nanoha crossover that i haven't written here in days. I don't even know if I'll ever finish my Kyoko route, cause i still have no clue how to continue that one.

Megaolix
August 24th, 2011, 10:00 AM
or so we think...........

damn, `I'm so addicted to the nanoha crossover that i haven't written here in days. I don't even know if I'll ever finish my Kyoko route, cause i still have no clue how to continue that one.
If you're stuck with how to deal with the suggestion part, why not skip over it and go to the part where Archer and Kyoko corner Sayaka?


*blinks, wipes away the tears* Fraggle? Those snips were ​beautiful.

Indeed, that is why fraggle is my god.

Awww, no love for the snippets I wrote? Or the others ones too?

qsurf
August 24th, 2011, 10:33 AM
Sowwy Megaolix *scratches his head awkwardly* I guess Fraggle's were pretty much the climax (I know what ya thinkin' and no...not in that way) to an amazing sequence.

I mean when taken individually, they were each great, each one with it's own awesomeness, but then put together in that sequence, it just got better and better and better, and then well...*blushes and toes the ground*...y'all put right a series of injustices against those brave and foolish girls. So thank you all.

*ducks his head down and goes back to reread the snips*

Muramasa
August 24th, 2011, 04:03 PM
Awww, no love for the snippets I wrote? Or the others ones too?

I love both your Fate/PMMM snippits. I hope you write more since IRUn doesn't seem to be in any rush to continue.

ItsaRandomUsername
August 24th, 2011, 04:56 PM
You are so damn impatient. :/

fraggle
August 24th, 2011, 04:57 PM
I'll start gathering my Kyoko route snippets so I can add the next chapter to it ( which I have yet to write).

Muramasa
August 24th, 2011, 05:05 PM
You are so damn impatient. :/


You should consider that a good thing. It means you have a fanbase that is 'highly interested' in your work and want's to see it continued.

Translation: Your fic doesn't suck. More please. :)

fraggle
August 24th, 2011, 05:46 PM
Wager

As her funding had been running low, she decided that it was a good idea to 'visit' An ATM machine at 4 AM this morning. She approached an unoccupied machine, located in one of the shadier parts of the city. As she shifted into her battle uniform, knowing from experience that it would prevent her from getting caught on cameras, she checked the street for people. As expected, there were none.

Just as usual.

She grabbed her hairpin, and charged it with just enough power to short out the machine, so that she could 'manually' grab a deposit.

Off the books of course.


"What a surprise, I was not expecting to see you in this neighborhood."

She spun around, cursing herself for letting someone slip behind her. She'd have to get out of here fast if anyone had seen her before she transformed, or else people would start looking for red-haired girls with a lot of cash on them.

Like a certain girl who had been spending her days at a local hotel, occupying the penthouse while paying in cash.

Yet it seemed that luck was on her side, for it wasn't a cop, and it wasn't even an adult.

It was the boy from the day before.



"Well, what is a cute boy like you doing here?" she smoothly replied.

"I was in the neighborhood, and I needed to withdraw a little cash for now" He calmly replied as he held up a bank card. It had no name on it, only an account number. "However, I'm afraid that these ATM's don't accept magical hairpins willingly. Perhaps you should just use your bank pass?"

"A smart-ass aren't you? It’s more like a donation then a withdrawal in my case" she replied. “See it as payment for keeping the demons of the street, A girl need to eat and sleep you know."

She was expecting a look of anger, or maybe a look of pity. She didn't mind, like she'd care what he thought of her. She took what she needed, and that was that.

But he showed her nether of those. Instead he looked as if he was in deep though. Seeing an opportunity, she turned around to finish her job.

He suddenly grabbed her arm. "Why you!" She yelled, as she tried to get free of his grip. “Let go of me or ill..."

"Twelve hours" he calmly said to her.

"What?"

"Come with me for 12 hours"

"Why should I?

"I'll pay you."

As he talked to her he pushed his card into the ATM, and entered the code.

"Why?" Kyoko asked. Suddenly her eyes widened "I might be short on money, but I'm not that kind of girl you As... "

"I know!" he interrupted her, realizing where her though had led her. "that why I want you to come with me."

"Please" he asked her softly.

"Fine" She replied, while turning her head to the side. "But you're paying for food"

"Of course. My treat." He smiled at her, turning back to the ATM when it started beeping, before it spewed out a swat of paper money.

"First let’s get some breakfast, and then let’s see if I can get you a dress. Talking about clothes, I’d better chance first."
One moment, a fourteen year old boy stood before her, as he put a metal helmet, which had appeared out of nowhere, on his head.
“Tarnhelm”
The next moment she was looking at a full grown man, who looked like he was around 30 years old.
“Let’s go, shall we? “

"Heh?"








They had eaten a meat at a family restaurant, before he had taken her into the city’s shopping district. There he had taken her into one of the most expensive boutiques of town.
She was currently being dressed in a Red strapless dress, as one of the assistants from the store helped her put it on.
Emiya had left for a moment, saying that he what to arrange transportation first.

Transportation to where?

“Don’t you look lovely?” The woman gushed, as Kyoko snapped out of her thoughts. “I heard from your father that you were going to a party tonight, so I though this dress would suit you nicely. I think it goes great with your hair.”

“S-Sure.” Kyoko replied, feeling uncomfortable under the woman’s gaze. The whole thing felt so weird to her that she almost regretted agreeing with him in the first place.

Emiya returned a few minutes later, already dressed in suit, courtesy of that magical helm of his. He ushered her into a cab, paying the dress using the bank card she had seen earlier.

As they drove down the street she was unable to contain her questions

“What are you doing?”

“Making preparations for the main plan” he calmly replied.

“Where did you get the money for all this?” She said, as she waved her arms around her.

“I went to a certain pawnshop last night who loaned me a large sum of money, Using several ‘family heirlooms’ as interest.

“You cheated a pawnshop?”

“I didn’t. I’ll pay them back the full price this evening, with interest. I just needed the money to start my plan”


“Tell me then” Kyoko said “What is this ‘great’ plan of yours?”

“Tell me Kyoko” Emiya started as the car turned over and stopped, having reached their designation. The door of the cab was opened, and Kyoko could see where they had been driving to.

The Casino

“Do you like to gamble? “ Emiya finished



4 hours later
They were rich.

When they had entered the casino she had thought he had gone mad, everyone knew that most people leave a casino with less money in their pockets then when they entered, and he was planning on making a fortune? Nobody was that lucky in real life.

Or so she thought.

When he entered he had quickly swapped a large wad of his cash for chips, after which he simply took a spot at one of the few open black jack tables.It was still early in the day and not many people had been present.

Then he just kept on winning. Sure he did lose a few rounds, but even she couldn’t believe how lucky he was. Soon the already large stack of chips grew even larger, and soon he reached the maximum bets on the table at every round.

He was quickly invited to play at one of the high-risk tables.It was an offer they all would soon regret.

She simply stood and watched as he slowly amassed a fortune right under her nose. People didn’t pay much attention to her, either seeing them as a parent with his child.

Or more likely, a man with a risqué companion.

But the attention of the persons surrounding her was firmly entrenched at the man himself, who continued to beat the odds as the money flowed towards him.

In the end they walked away with a fortune.

He had actually done it.

She didn’t know if she wanted to applaud, or hate him for it..








"I'll be staying in town for about a week."

He suddenly said to her, as they walked away form the pawn shop. She had turned back to her normal clothing, the red dress folded into the bad she was holding. He too had just dismissed the helmet, and was walking next to her as his fourteen-year old self.

"Really, nice to know."

"I bought an furnished apartment yesterday. If you're looking for free food, you're free to stay at my place for a while."

"Thats...nice" she started, "But you still owe me my salary for today" She smiled at him, oblivious joking at him.

"When I'm gone, both the apartment and the remaining money are yours."


She stopped walking, as she looked at him as if he had gone crazy.

"Are you insane?" she yelled at him.

"If I say yes, will you take the money?" he smiled at her.

She barely knew him, she had only met him a day ago.

And now he was offering her a home, and enough money to last her for over a year.

"Why?" She narrowed her eyes at the boy. She didn't trust him at all. "What kind of idiot would gather so much money, just to give it away like that to a total stranger?"

"An Idiot who seems to care about you a little to much. Besides, you would never turn away a free meal. We both don't like to waste food after all"

As if it had been waiting for a signal, her stomach grumbled, announcing for all to hear that she hadn't eating since breakfast.

"Wanna eat at my place?" He offered her once again.

She suddenly smiled impishly

"Isn't It 'our' place then?"



Cooking class in session



She had followed him as they walked into the city, as he headed toward his apartment.

Well, their apartment.

She still didn't know why he would leave everything to her. Perhaps he needed to cover his tracks, and was planning on using her as a decoy for would-be pursuers? Yet, for some reason she had gone with him, and had trusted him so far. She blamed it on the lack of suger, or the lack of food she had eaten so far.

Well, at least she could get a free dinner out of this.



They arrived at an large apartment building, as they walked into the main hall he greeted the housekeeper, who was watching the people walk in and out. He had chosen this particular apartment-complex as the housekeeper kept a strict watch, while refraining for asking 'inconvenient' questions.

Al long as he got paid of course.

Emiya guided Kyoko into the lift, pressing the button which would take them to the top floor, where he had rented one of the multi-room apartments.


Kyoko's smile grew into a fanged smirk as she took in the main room of the apartment. The furnishing was quite plain, a kotatsu in the middle of the room, a small TV on one corner, a book closet, which hadn't been used so far and a sitting couch against one of the walls. She could see two doors leading to what she assumed were the bedrooms, and she spotted the kitchen, along with a small dining table.Her Smile widened even more when she spotted the fruit basket on top of the dinner table.

She was in the mood for some apples after all.

"If you want something to eat we better get started with making dinner." he suddenly replied as he handed her a apron"

"Heh?"




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Kyoko would easily proclaim herself as a expert on food. After all, she had eaten at most of the simple restaurants she could find in every city, before moving along to keep track of the witches.

However, she didn't know a thing about cooking.

When she was younger her mother had only let her help with small things, as she was to young to work with knifes, or so her mother had said. After that, there had been simply to little to cook for her to help. By the time she had made the contract she barely made it to the table in time, as she often encountered witches or familiars on her way in the afternoon.

Thus, while wearing an apron and holding a kitchen-knife, Kyoko had no idea what to do. He had asked her to cut the vegetables for the simple hot pot he had planned, as he started to prepare the meat he had bought earlier.

'Well, how hard could it be' She thought, as she brought the knife down.

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She focused her eyes on the vegetable she was currently cutting, as to prevent him from seeing the tears form frustration growing. after mutilating the carrot she had started on he had softly grabbed her hands as he placed himself behind her, ans slowly demonstrated how she was supposed to handle the knife. She wasn't an helpless girl who needed a hand to hold dammit. She just wasn't used to it.

They both remained silent as they slowly went trough all the vegetables. She let him guide her motions to chop the vegetables, as she slowly relaxed and leaned against his back. His hands stiffened for a moment, before continuing to guide hers toward the next cut.

'Oh, This could become interesting' she thought, as once again a smirk appeared on her face. She continued to rest against him as they prepared their dinner.

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After finishing the food, Emiya took a small break, heading outside on the balcony of the apartment as the food was places on a small fire, as he asked Kyoko to keep stirring the food inside the pot. Dinner would be ready in less then 30 min, but he really needed a break to regain some self control.

He remembered meeting Kyoko for the first time. Back then he had been Homura's servant, and their first meeting had quickly turned into a 'playful' battle. Back then he had been surprised by her initial attack, which allowed her to drain first blood. But ever since that moment had been able to remain calm and collected, even while fighting her at full power.

But now he had developed a vulnerable weakness against her. He still possessed the mind and soul of a man who had lived countless years, and who's mind had been forges with the flames of of battle.

He now also possessed the body of a boy who's hormones were starting to influence that mind and soul, as he discovered when she rested her back against him. It had taken a moment to cover up his weakness, to pretend he hadn't been surprised but he knew better.

She had most likely spotted it and, knowing her personality, would go on the offensive whenever she saw fit.


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None of them spoke during dinner. Emiya was slowly consuming his portion. Even though he didn't really require food in his current state, he still enjoyed tasting his products.

Kyoko was 'inhaling' her portion. It had been a simple hotpot, with the meat and the pot prepared by him, and the vegetables they had cut together, yet still tasted much better then the stuff she usually ate.

suddenly the piece of carrot she had been holding near her mouth slipped, and fell into her chest. as she pulled on her shirt to give her other hand access to retrieve the fallen food she saw form the corer of her eyes that Emiya had quiclky shifter away, turning his head towards the TV, even though it was still off.

'Ah',Kyoko thought. 'This really was going to be fun'.

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She struck as they were doing the dishes together.

"Marry me." She said, as casually as if she had asked him to hand over the soap

"Wait, 'what' ?" The boy replied confused, as he almost dropped a plate in the confusion.

"I said 'Marry me'" She repeated, now turning over to look him in the eye as the smirk on her face grew larger.

"But why?" Even though he knew she was toying with him, he still was unable to find his balance.

"To fast for ya? Let's start dating then!" Her smirk reached epic proportions.

"I still don't..."

"friend with benefit then?" She 'pouted' at him, as she looked at him with big teary eyes.

"You lost me." He replied with a straight face, as he turned back towards the dishes

.
.
.

"WHY THE HELL ARE YOU STRIPPING?" He yelled as if he had burned himself.

"You said you didn't get it, so I'm showing you!" She replied, as she dropped the shirt she had been wearing, revealing a modest bra in its place.



He threw a towel at her head, as he stormed out of the kitchen.



'What the hell have I gotten myself into?' He lamented, as the kitchen was filled with the sound of laughter.





He'd hit that ass?



3rd day:

After making breakfast, accompanied with Kyoko's newfound source of amusement, they decided to patrol the city during the day. The other girls were occupied with school, thus leaving the job up to them.

Fortunately this meant that non of the other girls would be caught up in Kyoko's amusement, as she screwed around with him.

Unfortunately, this also meant that there was nothing stopping her from screwing around with him in the first place.



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For the last 4 hours he had been able to ignore her jokes, her silly gestures meant to embarrass himself. He replied with witty remarks of his own, as they scouted the city while looking for any disturbances which signaled the existence of demons.They were currently on the roof of a department store, as his reinforced eyes scanned the neighborhood, while Kyoko enacted her next plan to derail him.

But now she was just being silly. He looked at her with a blank face, as he raised one eyebrow.

The girl was sucking on the candy cane she had bought and, as she noticed his attention on her, slowly started licking it as she erotically devoured the piece of candy.

"Now you're just pushing it." the boy stated, as the girl started drooling over the candy. "You're not even trying to make it look like you don't know what you're doing."

The girl stopped, and looked him in the eye as she slowly, oh so slowly, pulled the cane out of her mouth and held it in front of his face.
"Want some?" She offered, as a cheshire smile appeared on her face.

His eyebrows twitched, as he turned away to jump towards the next rooftop.


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Dinner had been easy, as they had enough leftovers form the days before to work with. Wat had not been easy was the fact that Kyoko had used every opportunity to walk against him as he prepared the food. She apologized every time she rested her body against his, just to pick something from a closet which 'o so conveniently' was positioned right where he was working at that moment.

He had been able to intercept her master-plan before she even had a chance to enact it, so this was probably payback for that.

"Legendary naked apron, my ass" He muttered, as he started setting up the table.



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Dinner was reasonably normal, as both he and Kyoko hated wasting food, thus preventing her from doing drastic things while she ate. After the finished he cleaned up the kitchen as she returned into her room.He didn't ask, fearing the answer that she would give. She was bad enough as it was.But in the end, he knew he should have asked anyway.

She walked up to him, wearing the dress he had bought her the day before, combined with her usual knee socks,and the damn grin on her face.
"I cant find any clean underwear, so I hope you don't mind me walking around like this"

"Now you're pushing it to far." He replied, as he slowly started to lose control.

"Well then, what are you going to do to this 'naughty girl'. You're gonna spank me or something?" Kyoko taunted.

Suddenly, something inside his head snapped, and in one movement he grabbed her and pulled her over his knee. He raised his free hand, as he extended his fingers.


"You wouldn't!" She cried out in surprise, as she looked him in the eyes.

He looked back at her. she flinched.

"You would." She concluded, as he brought down his hand.





Struggle


"Well then, what are you going to do to this 'naughty girl'. You're gonna spank me or something?" Kyoko taunted.

Suddenly, something inside his head snapped, and in one movement he grabbed her and pulled her over his knee. He raised his free hand, as he extended his fingers.


"You wouldn't!" She cried out in surprise, as she looked him in the eyes.

He looked back at her. she flinched.

"You would." She concluded, as he brought down his hand.[/QUOTE]


She cried out as his palm hit her ass, not hard enough to bruise her, yet with enough strength that she could feel her bottom warm up as he dished out his revenge.

A part of her was furious. How dare he handle her like this! That part of her wanted nothing more then to grind him into the ground, to make him regret ever underestimating her like this. Another part could only admire the 'sheer' gall he showed, as he handled a magical warrior of her caliber as if it was nothing.

Eventually the two parts managed to form a consensus.

He was 'so' gonna pay for this.

She acted when he raised his hand for another round , grabbing the offending arm while shifting in his lap as she tried to pin him down with her legs. In response he grabbed her free hand. For a while they were at a standoff, as they both struggled to take control as red eyes stared fiercely into brown ones. One could almost see the lightning flying between the two as they stared each other down.

Then she slammed her lips on his.

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Their battle for dominance continued as they made out, both continuing to pin down the other, waiting for the other to slip up or lower their guard. Not that they minded the new tactic Kyoko had introduced.

There lips parted, and their stare-down continued as they both gasped for breath in short burst as their bodies heated up. She pulled the hand that she was holding between her legs and slammed them together,preventing him from withdrawing the limb.

His fingers felt warm, moist flesh.

"I cant find any clean underwear, so I hope you don't mind me walking around like this" She had said.

His body stiffened, as he tried to ignore what she had done just now.

She laughed as she felt him lowering his defense, and she grabbed his remaining arm while pinning him down. He was at her mercy now, as she pinned him to the ground next to the kotatsu. He stared at her, his eyes still burning, even though he couldn't move. Her mind felt clouded, her hate from before melting away as other desires took it's place. She felt the last restrains inside her melt away.

Kyoko once again closed the distance as she pressed her lips on his, as she pushed her tongue into his mouth. With glee she noted that he didn't waste any time returning the favor, as he freed his arm to pull her closer.


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After a few minutes they once again gasped for air as Kyoko sat up, still straddling his lap. Both of them where flushed, as if their clothes were a size to small and much to warm.

In one smooth motion she pulled of the strapless dress, confirming that she indeed had 'forgotten' to put a bra or panties on. Her naked body, safe for the knee-socks she was wearing, was covered in sweat, small breast slightly swayed as she breathed in and out.

"Ah, you're a natural redhead" Emiya suddenly stated, as he studied the lower part of her body.

Her mouth opened to shout at him, though she was unable to find the words, as a blush spread across her face. He laughed as her face turned into the same shade as all of her hair.

In response she grabbed the belt of his pants. "How about you then!" She yelled as she pulled down his pants.


She suddenly gulped


Spinning me round

Kyoko was at a loss of thoughts.

Until a few seconds ago she had held the upper hand in their struggle. Now she had fallen silent, as she confirmed that they both were natural redheads. Also, She noted, as she took a closer look, the more mature manga she had read weren't the best source of information on detailed descriptions of anatomy.

Thus she could only blink as she stared at his 'enthusiastic' member....Giving him the time to lay his hands on her shoulder, before launching her, while twisting her upper body around in one move. Gravity seemly took a break as she spun around in midair.

By the time she touched the ground he had quickly kicked of the pants she had pulled down, and this their staredown continued with him sitting on his knees as she crawled form the ground, both naked,sweating, aroused and short of breath. Both started laughing as they realized how ridicules the situation had become.

She sat down on her bottom, and spread her legs as she resting on her arms while leaning backwards, showing him every naked part of himself. Her ribbon had been lost somewhere during their struggle and her unbound long red hair flowed freely along her body covering parts of her breast, as her hair clung to her naked body, making it far more tantalizing then just naked skin could have been. He no longer could hide his arousel, but nether could she, as she raised her hands toward him, inviting him to come over.

"Want some?" She offered.

He saw no need to decline. They both hated to waste delicious things after all.

Lust

"Want some?" She offered.

For some reason this was much more then a question. The remark rang around in his head, as if it was wielding a sledgehammer that was breaking down any restraints that were still holding him back. A small part told him that he was rapidly losing control as he gazed into her eyes.........

She moaned as his member entered her, her legs clamping down around him as she pulled herself into his lap. She kissed him as they desperately drove their hips together, driven by the urge to get more closer, more deeper. her toes curled as he fondled her breasts while licking and sucking on them, overwhelming her with the different sensations.He grunted as she sunk her fangs into his neck, as to mute her voice, only for him to repay her back as he softly bit down on her nipple.

Yet it wasn't enough, she wanted more, harder, stronger.

He looked up a she suddenly detached herself from him, as she slowly got back on her knees, before turning around as she rested her arms on top of the kotatsu. Understanding suddenly dawned onto him as she smiled at him while raising her bottom in front of him.



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The apartment was filled with the grunts and moans of the two teenagers as the boy pounded on the girl from behind, as she rested on top of the kotatsu. They fucked like animals, hard and unrelenting he slammed into her, and she relished it as he pushed her over the edge. She cried out as she came for this first time that night. While her entire body trembled from the shock he pulled out ,releasing his load on top of her back.

The sight of her sweaty body, covered with his seed, combined with her unfocused lust-filled eyes quickly primed him back to action.

"Want to take a shower? " He offered her.


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The sound of water suppressed most of her moans as they continued inside the small shower cabin that had been installed in the bathroom. Her Wet hair clung to their bodies as he once again pushed her over the edge, as the hot water from the shower washed away all evidence of their activities from before.

As her breathing returned to normal she looked at him with mad eyes, lust and madness dancing around within. He gulped as she grabbed his arm.



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He did not, could not and never hopes that he should ever explain how a naked boy and a naked girl ended up on top of Mitakihara's highest skyscraper. he sighed as a naked Kyoko curled closer to him, as the cold wind pierced the small barrier he had been able to set up before she had ravished him for the 5th time that night. As Kyoko's magic faded from his mind, he finally was able to think clear once again.

He sighed again as he started looking for the fastest way to his apartment, without getting noticed while roof-hopping.

He really did not feel like explaining this to anyone.






TBC

ItsaRandomUsername
August 25th, 2011, 01:22 AM
Question here:

In the actual story thread, do you guys want an interlude posted to tide you over until the true update arrives, or shall I just post it all at once? Your choice.

SeiKeo
August 25th, 2011, 01:22 AM
INTERLUDE. POST IT.

qsurf
August 25th, 2011, 07:43 AM
Kinda got a little inspired again thanks to rereading Sayaka's route, might have to revisit PMMM to make sure I have Sayaka's soul down though:

"I am the bone of my sword"
~This is my song~

"Steel is my body, and fire is my blood"
~Its notes my dreams, its melody my hope~

"I have fought countless battles"
~I have sung it all my life~

"Saving their hopes from loss
Never for my own gain"
~Echoing through my soul it spills forth
And in sharing, will fill this empty vessel~

"Have withstood pain to create many weapons"
~Born in darkness it gave me light~

"This is the only path, I have no regret"
~To all of you I share this gift~

"My whole life was unlimited blade works"
~Let me sing a song of the Oceans of Faith~

ItsaRandomUsername
August 25th, 2011, 09:19 PM
It's official.

Emo!Cubey x Madoka is my new PMMM OTP

Megaolix
August 29th, 2011, 10:39 PM
Hmmm... Is there any Puella that could fit the Rider class? I've got a funny idea, but I need to know who can fit that class or if I have to skip over it for the omake I have in mind.

qsurf
August 29th, 2011, 11:15 PM
The most probable one is Homura, during her fight with Walpurgisnacht she took control of a fuel truck and rammed it into the witch's face. Then again, I would guess all Puella are capable of such, but I guess she did it in a big enough way that it could (tentatively) make her a Rider-class.

Megaolix
August 29th, 2011, 11:19 PM
The most probable one is Homura, during her fight with Walpurgisnacht she took control of a fuel truck and rammed it into the witch's face. Then again, I would guess all Puella are capable of such, but I guess she did it in a big enough way that it could (tentatively) make her a Rider-class.

Blargh, that's what I feared. I actually have another role for Homura. Oh well, guess I'll just skip over Rider for my next omake.

qsurf
August 29th, 2011, 11:32 PM
Blargh, that's what I feared. I actually have another role for Homura. Oh well, guess I'll just skip over Rider for my next omake.

Why does it feel like I need to cry for the missed awesome? Ah well, ganbatte Mega-tan! X3

Megaolix
August 30th, 2011, 12:23 PM
Hmmm... it ended being just short fun. Wasn't as inspired as I expected it to.

Holy Grail War, Magical Girl Edition. Presented to you by Zelretch and Madoka. Meet the contestants.

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“…”

“…”

“Do you remember doing anything that could have annoyed Madoka recently?” Orika asked.

“No. I think it’s her idea of a good way to stop us from fighting.” Homura answered.

“I… see.”

“I’m not thrilled either about it.” Homura said, before looking up at the sky. “Madoka? If you can hear me, I’ll like you to remember life isn’t like movies. We won’t stop hating each other just by being forced together.”

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“Aaahh! Mr. Zelretch! It’s not working.” Madoka said, panicking as Homura already found out her plan.

“Ah ah, no need to worry Madoka.” Zelretch replied. “Just because they know doesn’t mean they can change anything about it. Besides, it’s only the start of this ‘movie’, isn’t it?“

“Oh, right!”

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“I still can’t believe you of all people is Saber. What was Madoka thinking?” Mami asked. Both her Master and Shirou had gone inside the church and she felt the need to discuss how this odd turn of events happened.

“You job is to shot things from far away, mine’s to slash things from close. Who care if it isn’t with a sword?”

“Still, I think we all expected you to be summoned by Orika.” Mami replied, wondering how Kirika, of all people, had been summoned by Shirou. “Wouldn’t you have preferred that?”

“Duh! Of course I would have! But next best place isn’t so bad. I get to eat nice food, sleep in a nice room and I know Master won’t mind allying with Orika if I ask nicely.”

“Poor Sayaka must be so depressed. Ever since Madoka announced her idea, she imagined herself as Saber.” Then again, Mami remembered that Madoka couldn’t look straight at her friend since that project started.

“Well, maybe she just got a better role for her style. Besides, any of us would have crushed her if she was a Saber. Better stick Shirou with someone who can actually win. Makes me curious what she got.”

Later that night, as Ilya showed herself with a young blue-haired girl who they could only see a mad grin and glowing red eyes on her face, they had their answer. Mami guiltily admitted to herself that yes, Sayaka was probably better as Berserker.

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Much, much later, after all was over and they were all back in what had been dubbed Madokahalla for lack of a better name...

“WWWHHHYYYYYY????” Sayaka asked, desperately trying to get an answer out of Madoka, who refused to look at her.

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So yeah. Oriko as Caster, Homura as Assassin, Mami as Archer, Kirika as Saber and Sayaka as Berserker. Kyoko is of course Lancer and I have no idea who to use as Rider. Oh well. If Kirika and Oriko aren't attacked on the spot, it's because they had no reason to attack others Puellas in a World were Witches don't exist. But still, Homura remembers and Oriko could see what her own self did in another world.

Is it bad that I find it so fun to torment Sayaka?

And IRUN, you still need to make that table of contents for the omakes here.

VelspertheCat
August 30th, 2011, 12:46 PM
Rider could be Joan of Arc, maybe?

Megaolix
August 30th, 2011, 12:53 PM
Rider could be Joan of Arc, maybe?

Maybe. It's not like I really plan on continuing this. Just some fun trying to fill slots if a HGW went with only Puellas.

linkhyrule5
August 30th, 2011, 01:10 PM
Kyubey could be Rider. (Actually, technically, Kyubey would be Mount, but close enough... :D)

qsurf
August 30th, 2011, 01:28 PM
Would have commented sooner, but I was blown by the idea that some of the most powerful and influential women in history could have been Puella...like say Cleopatra, Boudicca, Himiko-hime, Pocahontas, Joan L'Arc, Marilyn Monroe...so on.

Hmm:
Puella Magica = Counter Guardians (in a sense)?

Anyways, gonna read snippet, brb.

EDIT:
Well now...I have to agree, Sayaka does have Berserker material, after all, she flipped out when everyone else more or less remained level. *snickers*

That said, Kirika and Oriko, I know them not so I guess I have a manga to search for (right?). Any other Puella Media I need to know about?

The snippet itself wasn't bad, was a little confusing at first due to the new names, but it had me picturing Archer!Mami vs. Berserker!Sayaka, which I have to admit, wouldn't be all that bad after all =3 Unlimited Swords vs. Unlimited Guns, Archer might start feeling a little irritated watching the whole thing.

(In the Entertainment Center of Madokahalla, basically a massive bar with a massive screen tv packed with Puella and their three guests wearing either blue or yellow shirts)
Archer (in a blue t-shirt with SWORDS written on it): Oh come on! Clearly she cheated! Foul ref! Foul I say!
Kiritsugu (in a yellow t-shirt with GUNS on it): Didn't I teach you anything kid? If you ain't cheating, you ain't trying, and anyways, guns are always better.
(Some of the blue shirted Puella close to the VIP start jeering and obscenely gesturing at Kiritsugu whilst the yellows share his laughter)
Archer: Grr, you didn't teach anything at all ya wash up! And anyways swords trump guns...after all, whatchya gonna do when you run outta ammo? Throw the thing at 'em?
Kiritsugu: *sighs* Boy, look, I understand you might have problems with aiming and discharging too early, but you just need to stop overcompensating.
Archer: *twitch* You, me, outside. Now.
(Meanwhile, between the two)
Madoka: *sweat-drop* Hoooooooooh boy.
Zeltrech: *chuckles as he takes a sip of his milkshake* Excitable aren't they?
(From outside): ORIGIN BULLET! / THREE WING CRANE REALM!

AzureGrimoire
September 5th, 2011, 02:02 AM
I found this in FFN.

HEROINE OF JUSTICE.
In the light of the destruction of the Holy Grail and the subsequent catastrophe wrought upon Fuyuki City, it was understandable that a mere car accident would go unnoticed.

Not to one Emiya Kiritsugu, though. After all, he was a Hero of Justice.

Three years later...
"I am a heroine of justice! Trace, on! Let's go, Tora-shinai!"

And Mami Emiya proceeded to beat the crap out of Gertrude with magically-created copies of a certain demonic wooden practice sword that would not rest until it tasted blood, a phantasm beast sealed by the Fujimura family using a black-and-yellow tiger strap.

Even Sayaka felt bad for the Witch.

-0-

"You're not a Puella Magi," Homura accosted Mami over a cup of tea. "How did you get into the Witch's Barrier in the first place?"

"Oh, so that is what you call the Type Witch's Bounded Field? Tohsaka-senpai taught me how to penetrate Bounded Fields like these." Mami assumed a thoughtful stance that would forever be called the Emiya Lecture Position Number One. "Although, to be accurate, these Barriers are more like Reality Marbles. Since Type Witches were originally human like you and me, such a capability means they are Divine Spirits. Then again, I remember that Divine Spirits can turn into Elementals if they are no longer worshipped. If that train of thought is correct, or if the Type Witches are actually Elementals, then the Barriers are actually Marble Phantasms. But considering your theory about them being the creation of the Type Kyubey, which is not a creature of Gaia but an alien from another World Egg-"

"I have no idea what you are talking about, Tomoe-san," Homura hated to concede before the confusing exposition could get really warmed up.

-0-

Speak of the Counter Force, even Homura (and the time-travelling Puella Magi thought she had seen it all) was confused when an older version of Mami with bleach white hair, a really hot tan, mammies that put Mami's to shame, and Chinese dao swords appeared.

"Archer?" Mami exclaimed. "You're a Counter Guardian?"

"Drown in your ideals and die!" TOMOE declared as she attacked her younger self.

Aside, Homura secretly worried that this kind of paradox just might happen to her one day...

-0-

As one may expect, this eventually led to a Mirror Match with lines ripped straight out of the Fate Stay Night entry in TV Tropes.

"I want to save everybody!" Mami, her clothes reduced to sexy shreds, declared.

"That is both a logical contradiction and a denial of the self," was the cold retort of the similarly, practically nude TOMOE.
(Oddly enough, neither of them were wounded, battle damage appearing to be Sekirei or Ikki Tousen style.)

"But the ideal encompasses an aesthetic that makes the endless journey worth it. Why can't I selfishly pursue selflessness?"
"... that is a very good point you've made there..."

"Thank you, Archer, I couldn't have realized it without your help."

"You are welcome, Mami."

-0-

After Homura informed them of the approaching Walpurgis Nacht, TOMOE immediately developed a plan. "You're going to need more prana," she told Mami, "If you're going to use our- your take on our Reality Marble."

TOMOE gave Madoka a knowing looking. The confused Mami followed her future self's gaze.

Eternally curious and helpful, Madoka asked "How can I help?"

TOMOE grinned and replied "Prana transfer through a tantric ritual."

Mami blushed.

Madoka looked confused. "Is that magecraft's euphemism for hot lesbian sex?" she asked in all innocence.

Mami steamed.

"No," Homura hissed possessively.

"C-can I join?" Sayaka timidly asked.

"Sayaka!" Homura accused while Mami resembled the cutest blonde-topped tomato in the world.

"Only if I get to join, too!" Kyouko butted in. "I have dibs on Sayaka's butt!"

"Kyouko!" Sayaka joined Homura in yelling at the redhead as well as joining Mami's blush party.

"I'll trade you Mami's princess curls for your butt..."

"Deal!" Sayaka had always adored Mami's interesting hairstyle.

"Sayaka!"

"Can I have your mammies, Mami-san?" Madoka shyly asked.

"Et tu, Madoka?" Homura looked betrayed.

"I'll do you one better, Kaname-san," TOMOE stated. "I need a prana boost, too." After gesturing to her own vast tracts of land, she smirked at Homura. "Akemi-chan, since my younger self and I will be making a Madokawich, you can have Kaname-chan's milk all to yourself."

"Homura-chan," Madoka worried, "Your nose is bleeding..."

-0-

And so!
"We are the bone of our swords! Steel are our bodies and fire are our blood! We have created over a thousand blades!"

"Unknown to death nor known to life!" / "Unaware of loss nor aware of gain!"

"Have withstood pain to create many weapons!" / "Withstood pain to create weapons, waiting for one's arrival!"

"Yet, those hands will never hold anything..." / "I have no regrets. This is the only path..."

"So, as I pray-" / "My whole life was-"

"Unlimited Blade Works!" Mami and Archer vowed as the unlimited armory of their shared Reality Marbles burned away Walpurgis Nacht's Barrier. "Here we come, Night of Witches." Shining swords appeared in their hands. "Do you have enough despair at your disposal?"

"Mami-san and TOMOE-san, you're so awesome!" Madoka gushed. She clasped Caliburn, the Golden Sword of the Victorious, the Sword In The Stone, The Sword That Chooses, which she had drawn from its stone pedestal and wielded one-handed with no effort whatsoever.

Homura drooled at the sight of the new once-and-future king of Britain while cradling Hercules' Nine Lives reconfigured as a 9-tube rocket launcher.

Sayaka held Durandal above her head. "I am Sayaka Miki! And I... have... the poweeeerrr!"

"I want!" Kyouko squealed as she rubbed her cheeks up and down Gae Bolg's unyielding length. "I sooo do want!"

"I am in despair," Kyubey groaned, a state ironically brought about by the last phantasm of humankind's hopes and dreams as crystallized by the planet into a wave motion sword.

"EXCALIBLAST!"

qsurf
September 5th, 2011, 02:13 AM
...oh gods. Oh sweet, merciful gods.

A part of me is appalled at the technique, but holy sweet Madoka! This oozed the kind of insanity I just LOVE! *panting*

Techlet
September 5th, 2011, 04:23 AM
Holy crap. More of that is required.

nitewind
September 5th, 2011, 10:12 AM
*reads it* *reads it again* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! OH my sides!!! Whoever wrote that deserves a medal!!

Sherrinford
September 5th, 2011, 10:18 AM
... what... what did I just read... ?

Alulim
September 5th, 2011, 02:15 PM
...that was fun.

fraggle
September 5th, 2011, 03:46 PM
Is it bad that I don't have any distinct feeling for that piece?


Kyouko/Sayaka route is postponed for now. Classes started again and I'm still hooked on FSN/Nanoha verse. At this rate I'll never update anything I start.


I have become what I fought against........

NanayaMode
September 5th, 2011, 04:54 PM
I have become what I fought against........
"No! I must kill the Witches!" she shouted
Homura said "No, Sayaka. You are the Witches"
And then Sayaka was Oktavia.

fraggle
September 5th, 2011, 05:05 PM
And then Fraggle was IRUN, and almost never updated again :P

qsurf
September 5th, 2011, 10:51 PM
greattearsofsaddness.jpg

Techlet
September 5th, 2011, 10:53 PM
And then Fraggle was IRUN, and almost never updated again :P

D:

But there's nothing that says an imitation can't surpass the original!

linkhyrule5
September 5th, 2011, 10:54 PM
Heh. Indeed...

Arashi_Leonhart
September 5th, 2011, 10:54 PM
Makes it sound like you want fraggle to update even less than IRUn.

nitewind
September 5th, 2011, 11:51 PM
NOOOO!!!!! Anything but that!! Let's hope it's the opposite.

fraggle
September 6th, 2011, 07:07 AM
"Admit it Fraggle! The dream of writing new snippets for all threads and routes everyday is an Illusion! If you can' t accept that then drown in your uncompleted scrabbles and DIE!"

"You're wrong! Even if the act of writing all the possible snippets is a lie.. It is still beautiful!"


and then IRUN was GOLDEN!

ItsaRandomUsername
September 6th, 2011, 09:17 AM
I can get behind that. Somehow.

And guess who's in a creative mood?

Heroslayer
September 6th, 2011, 09:28 AM
You? *Raises hopes*

nitewind
September 6th, 2011, 10:40 AM
^Agreed.

Arashi_Leonhart
September 6th, 2011, 11:00 AM
Text or it didn't happen.

qsurf
September 19th, 2011, 07:44 PM
Necro apologies...but I believe these pics might be a little relevant:


http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa302/tsurf_2007/sample-c86b9f51d859cde9ed9f9b11dbb97a78.jpg
http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa302/tsurf_2007/sample-c439a6cb88e3f6790884a492b580c581.jpg


Sayaka-centric, but they definitely remind me of the Sayaka route =3

SeiKeo
September 19th, 2011, 07:47 PM
That second one, whoa, darn there Sayaka, looking awesome.

Muramasa
September 19th, 2011, 07:54 PM
Sayaka being badass?


I approve.

fraggle
September 19th, 2011, 07:57 PM
Necro apologies...but I believe these pics might be a little relevant:

http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa302/tsurf_2007/sample-c86b9f51d859cde9ed9f9b11dbb97a78.jpg
Sayaka-centric, but they definitely remind me of the Sayaka route =3


This pic.............
It fit's so well, if not for the lack of K&B


2nd Pic is an UBW poster parody, I've seen it a while ago, but it still looks awesome.

ItsaRandomUsername
September 19th, 2011, 07:59 PM
Second wind coming my way~

Muramasa
September 19th, 2011, 08:02 PM
Second wind coming my way~


Aaah yeah.

Alulim
September 19th, 2011, 08:04 PM
Hooray!

qsurf
September 19th, 2011, 08:09 PM
Second wind coming my way~

*huggles IRUn* Yay! I can find more pics if that helps =3

nitewind
September 19th, 2011, 11:09 PM
OOOHHHHH YYYYEEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!!! Irun's gonna write more!

Arashi_Leonhart
September 20th, 2011, 07:01 PM
BAM! Third OST out!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IYKTkITsvrE

SeiKeo
September 20th, 2011, 07:02 PM
BUENO

ItsaRandomUsername
September 20th, 2011, 07:08 PM
Mild Spoilers:
Working on the good ol' Charlotte scene ATM, among other things. Any requests that people would like to see, besides the obligatory GARness?

EnigmaticFellow
September 20th, 2011, 07:10 PM
Mild Spoilers:
Working on the good ol' Charlotte scene ATM, among other things. Any requests that people would like to see, besides the obligatory GARness?

Hmm, would Mami have that strange thing that goes on-top of her shoulders?

Heroslayer
September 20th, 2011, 07:11 PM
Hmm, would Mami have that strange thing that goes on-top of her shoulders?

You mean her head?

ItsaRandomUsername
September 20th, 2011, 07:18 PM
I'll put it to good use sooner or later. :3

Muramasa
September 20th, 2011, 07:22 PM
Okay... I'm a little scared for Mami now. >_<

Megaolix
September 20th, 2011, 07:48 PM
After the fight is done, Archer need to walk up to Mami. She'll still be under awe of course and maybe panic a bit about what she would do or even say.

Then Archer should knock her forehead and start lecturing her on everything she did wrong and that she's lucky he was here. ;)

...Mami's going to live, right?

fraggle
September 20th, 2011, 08:04 PM
Remember when I still wrote snippets for this tread?


--------------------------Snippet----------------------------------------


"Listen to me Kaname Tatsuya" the counter guardian spoke seriously at the young child, who simply looked at him with a befuddled expression. " Soon I'll be gone, and you will be the only important young male character in this story.."

"Hey I'm still here!" Kyousuke pointed out as he stood up.

" THE ONLY IMPORTANT MALE CHARACTER" Emiya yelled at the interruption, as countless blades pinned that non-important character to the ground.

"Remember", he continued as he looked at the child with a mixed look of envy and pity, " That from now on all female character will be after you, seeing that the only thing more attractive then GAR is a cute shotaro boy to all those fifteen year old puella magi's"

Tatsuya trembled in fear, as he slowly started tearing up. EMIYA shimply petted him on the head as he smiled at the boy as he tried to reassure him.

"Now remember, whenever those psycho girls try to get their hands on you you can always look for Homura-neechan. That girl is so HomuHomu for your sister that she will probably stay immune for your shotaro powers. Just prevent yourself from getting dressed up in one of your sister's dresses and she should be able to help you."

Tatsuya simply nodded as his childlike brain burned those word of wisdom into them, his subconscious understanding that they would be of great importance one day, and maybe even safe his life

The poor boy had no idea how true that line of thought was.................

-------------------END--------------------------

Heroslayer
September 20th, 2011, 08:07 PM
Pffft....hahahahaha....Oh god... my sides.

That was great. Especially Archer's "Only IMPORTANT male character" snipe on Kyousuke.

Ah... poor Tatsuya. He'll become the Negi of the Madoka world.

ItsaRandomUsername
September 20th, 2011, 08:12 PM
Is it weird that I got some psuedo Kiritsugu vibes from Archer here?

Heroslayer
September 20th, 2011, 08:16 PM
Naw, that's what he's channeling. The passing the torch thing. Though for Shirou, that awesomeness didn't kick in for a while. It was just latent except for THE BAR being an early sigh of his awesomeness.

I have really been looking at your Avatar and Sig too much random. Awesomeness...

Alulim
September 20th, 2011, 08:30 PM
Yet more proof of fraggle's genius.

fraggle
September 20th, 2011, 09:04 PM
OST 3: Sagitta Lumines is quite inspiring for tearjerkers and heartwarming moments.




---------------------------------------It's okay to dream again------------------------

The goddess was not alone after she had send her beloved back to the world. As she stretched out her arms, the concept of hope called upon the tiny fragment of humanity's will that she had drawn with her into the infinite world. The broken form, the remains of what used to be the concept EMIYA, appeared in front of her. She could still distinguish his human form, even though his armor had long since failed, and blades had replaced most parts of his body at this point. Yet with all the parts of him that had been twisted beond recognistion his face still sported that tiny smile of his.

The sole evidence of his feeling in his final moment on her last day as a human being. The knowledge that in the end he had been able to chance something, and save someone.

Yes, for the man who has lost all hope himself had been the one who had guarded and guided the girl who would become hope itself, along with his master who had given the girl the courage and will to make this decision. Even while knowing that his own torment would never cease to end, he still had prayed for the endless cycle of Homura's quest to be broken, even if it doomed himself to his eternal torture.

But she had rewritten the world, and although the throne of heroes was unaffected by time itself, it had not been able to refuse her hold on his concept.

EMYA did not exist anymore, all that remained was this package of memories and concepts. As she smiled the remains slowly started to light up, before the outsides of the body slowly started to disintegrate into light, leaving behind the unblemished form of a the young boy who had originally set out to become an hero. The boy who had inherited the ideal of saving everyone, the very origin of the broken and cynical hero who stood by her side even after the end.The boy would soon be reborn as the hero he had dreamed of becoming, of that there was no doubt. With the concept of hope as one's patron there would be no other outcome. But for now she would let the boy sleep for as long as he wanted in this timeless realm, as he once again dreamed of heroes and saving.

It had been so long since he had been capable of doing so after all.................


AN: It started out well, but the ending is weak.



have to get up in 5 hours again >_<

Muramasa
September 20th, 2011, 09:20 PM
So much epic in one post... It blows my mind.

Arashi_Leonhart
September 20th, 2011, 10:13 PM
Okay... I'm a little scared for Mami now. >_<
http://victorica.hanyuu.net/image/4136852cc0690a1a0c4daf0f097737e3/Konachan.com%20-%20106752%20charlotte%20kaname_madoka%20kyuubee%20 mahou_shoujo_madoka_magica%20miki_sayaka%20okitaku ng%20tomoe_mami.jpg

http://konachan.com/post/show/106752

Feel better?

Muramasa
September 20th, 2011, 10:45 PM
http://victorica.hanyuu.net/image/4136852cc0690a1a0c4daf0f097737e3/Konachan.com%20-%20106752%20charlotte%20kaname_madoka%20kyuubee%20 mahou_shoujo_madoka_magica%20miki_sayaka%20okitaku ng%20tomoe_mami.jpg

http://konachan.com/post/show/106752

Feel better?

Much. :)

EnigmaticFellow
September 20th, 2011, 10:53 PM
*Looks at latest picture link.

Why do some people keep getting Mami's art wrong?

Arashi_Leonhart
September 20th, 2011, 10:58 PM
2837

Better?

EnigmaticFellow
September 20th, 2011, 11:01 PM
2837

Better?

Needs to be the other way around.

Techlet
September 21st, 2011, 12:22 AM
We need to go wider. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POjj67bIQiU)

http://i.imgur.com/fHjnw.jpg

Arashi_Leonhart
September 21st, 2011, 12:28 AM
No, deeper.

http://kana.hanyuu.net/sample/dbd91ab587478877165efdec7d14dccb/Konachan.com%20-%20100239%20sample.jpg

http://konachan.com/post/show?md5=dbd91ab587478877165efdec7d14dccb

...I must apologize, I have now turned this into a Madoka image spam thread. -_-

nununu
September 21st, 2011, 12:32 AM
What is this? I don't even- (http://konachan.com/post/show/113867/akemi_homura-mahou_shoujo_madoka_magica-mobile_fig)

Arashi_Leonhart
September 21st, 2011, 12:33 AM
What? Big O, a DOM, and a Gundam are apparently helping Homurun-chan. You should see the one where she's in Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann. It just shows TTGL, a tiny dot that's labeled "Walpurgis Night" and two text bubbles:

Kyubey: She cannot fight it alone! You need to make a contract with me!

Madoka: I think she'll be fine.

Techlet
September 21st, 2011, 12:35 AM
BWONG

http://i.imgur.com/u8gCm.jpg

Muramasa
September 21st, 2011, 12:38 AM
@Arashi


You apologize for injecting a thread with awesome?

nununu
September 21st, 2011, 12:41 AM
Argh, can't find it. I keep getting distracted by the pantyhose >.<

nitewind
September 21st, 2011, 01:18 AM
@Arashi
If it'll make Irun write faster then spam away.:neco_arc:

Eveonder
September 21st, 2011, 04:54 AM
Irun...? who is this Irun? Does he exist? lol, I guess we'll need to be patient.

VelspertheCat
September 21st, 2011, 04:56 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Qlp1vlD-iA&amp;feature=related

Have a nice contract for now.

(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Qlp1vlD-iA&feature=related : Link in case it doesn't show)

fraggle
November 2nd, 2011, 12:36 PM
40 days since last post? Fraggle want to post a snippet :(


time to summon this thread back to the front page!







A base of zero's and ones. A foundation of forum and the admin of threads. The original poster is the great writer IRUN
The alighted spam becomes a wall. The port forwarding in the four directions close. From the web, come forth and follow the forked road of the Beast's lair
Log in,Log in,Log in,Log in,Log in.
Repeat every five times.
Simply, post once written
――――I announce.
My will shall create this post, and this Thread shall create my fate!
Abiding by the rules of this forum, if you abide by this feeling, this reason, then answer!
Here is my oath. I am the one who will create snippets from nothing!, I am the one who will create original contents for another's story!
You, clad in the great trinity of word processor, Internet and reply, come forth form the well of my Imagination! O Post of the new content!


------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------



http://i.imgur.com/HBkUA.jpg

Fraggle presents: Meet the lancers

The reason why Kyoko should never have listened to Cú-niisama's advise on capturing the heart of a lady.








"UAAAAAAAAAAA!!!". The house was filled with the cries of the red lancer as she failed to keep her emotions in check, the pain in her chest much worse then any wound she had been given before. Her brothers tries to console her, the sight of their little sister, who usually bore the brightest smile of them all, was a depressing one.


" Kyoko, what do you do to Sayaka-chan for her to react in such a violent matter anyway?" Diarmuid softly asked as he petted the distraught girl on her head.

" I, well I....." Kyoko stammered.

" Yes?" Diarmuid pressed on.

" ***************************************" Kyoko murmured.

" What? WHy, how do you even know about things like that?" Diarmuid sputtered while Cú Chulainn simply nodded in approval.

" Cú-niisama told me when I asked him for advise" The red lancer replied dejected.

The blue lancer suddenly felt the temperature drop to the freezing point as the first knight of Fianna focused himself on the source of his little sister's corrupted thoughts.

" What? I just told her what I used to do in her situation! It's not like you are any help here mister ' Diarmuid of the Love Spot' ! . Unlike you we need to go on the hunt ourself to get the woman we want!"

" Well, right now it has done more bad then good. For now I want you to go to Miki-san's house and apologize for teaching Kyoko those things!"

" Hell no!" the blue clad man replied. " That blond older sister of her is frigging scary! She kill me with that invisible sword of her!"

-----

" I'm sure Kyoko was just confused or something Sayaka. She probably did something that that dog taught her." Saber spoke up as her little sister sniffled, sayaka's former anger now replaces with a mix of fear and sadness as she suddenly realized she had knocked out the girl she liked with a mean uppercut.

Sayaka eventually fell asleep on her sister's bed as the elder sister continued to softly pet her head, before moving from the bed. As she softly closed the door after leaving the room, armor started to materialize as saber decided on her course of action.

" Lets go dog-hunting....."

-----

" By the way Diarmuid, we got another letter from Kyoko-chan's homeroom teacher" The lancer from Ulster suddenly spoke up as he handed the other man the heavenly perfumed letter. Diarmuid's face shifted to an expression of confirmed doom as he realized what was about to come.

" Saotome Kazuko again?"

" Why yes!" The blue clad man smiled. "It looks like she was a bit disappointed that you didn't show up at the last Parent-teacher meeting! so it looks like she took the initiative to make a special appointment with you alone!"

" Curse this face of mine"

" Isn't it already cursed?" Cú Chulainn smirked.

Kyoko, who's crying had been reduced to sniffle was soon laughing again, as she watched the two adult men try to beat the tar out of each other.

---------------------------------

If Archer had been granted a more mature body, he would probably have commented on how this was the strangest universe he had even been dropped in.

But as he joined his fraternal twin brother Tatsuya in their heroic effort to wake up their mother his though were of much simpler order

" MAMA WAKE UP! IT'S MORNING!" The two brothers cheered, as their big sister Madoka stormed the curtains in their battle against the sleeping mother.

It was not a bad universe to live in after all.

-----

" Homu-nee!" Kanade Shirou greeted, as the black haired girl lowered herself to her knees as she hugged the red haired boy ( a color both his mother and his father lacked, but had apparently inherited the recessive gene from his grandparents).

" Mami-nee!" Tatsuya greeted the blonde girl as she too pressed his head against her chest, where the boy slowly started to suffocate.

'Foolish brother. If you can't evade those curves then drown in those oppai and die' the redhead smirked, unheard by the others.

what? some habits never disappear even after dozens of reincarnations.

-----

Diarmuid grabbed his head as he woke up, the pounding feeling betraying the fact that he drunk far to much last night. his stomach turned to ice as he rememberd that he had started the evening with Kyoko's teacher for an ' Informal Parent-teacher meeting' on what appeared to be the woman's favorite bar.Dread filled his mind as slowly the fragments of the previous mind , mostly distorted by the copious amounts of alcohol they had consumed, returned to his mind.

How the hell had she been able to drink him under the table in the first place?

The last pieces of the night cleared up as he remembered subtle flesh being caressed by his fingers as they.......

A small movement in the corner of his eye drew him back the the present, only for him to freeze up at the woman, naked except for a small apron, as she walked into the bedroom while carrying a plate with several sliced of toast and fried eggs.

Diarmuid gulped as the lovestruck woman placed the food next to the bed as she scooted next to him........

-----

"Where's Diarmuid-niisan?"

" You don't want to know." her other brother replied. " It would be awkward when you go to school tomorrow"

-----


" W-what I mean is........ It's okay if it's you Kyoko" Sayaka muttered, as she fiddled with the collars and the chains in her hands.........

Kyoko gulped, as the sight of Sayaka stammering and blushing broke trough every restrained that she had.

Cú Chulainn would have been proud, if he wasn't out of town to evade the enraged blond swordwoman who was trying to kill him.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------THE END----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


Fraggle strikes again :P

SeiKeo
November 2nd, 2011, 12:37 PM
Best thread necrro.


" W-what I mean is........ It's okay if it's you Kyoko" Sayaka muttered, as she fiddled with the collars and the chains in her hands.........

Best.

fraggle
November 2nd, 2011, 12:47 PM
It's not a necro, It's a summoning!


Seriously, after going trough the trouble to draw that damn formalcraftcircle on my screen -_-

EnigmaticFellow
November 2nd, 2011, 01:10 PM
It's not a necro, It's a summoning!


Seriously, after going trough the trouble to draw that damn formalcraftcircle on my screen -_-

Silly fraggle, one uses codecasting to perform magecraft with computers.

reborn214
November 2nd, 2011, 01:10 PM
Fate Lancer gives the best advice ever

Alulim
November 2nd, 2011, 01:48 PM
...awesome.

qsurf
November 2nd, 2011, 02:13 PM
*sets up a temple to Fraggle*

Flere821
November 2nd, 2011, 04:15 PM
lol... is it wrong for me to find fraggle's Beast Lair incantation more hilarious than the rest of that post combined?

fraggle
November 2nd, 2011, 04:22 PM
lol... is it wrong for me to find fraggle's Beast Lair incantation more hilarious than the rest of that post combined?


It depends, Is my incantation that good, or is the rest that bad?

Hymn of Ragnarok
November 2nd, 2011, 05:42 PM
Very amusing, if rough on spelling and grammar. I quite like the picture myself.

ItsaRandomUsername
November 2nd, 2011, 06:08 PM
Sorry about the wait everyone.

College has been a trial on this poor, wretched soul of mine, leaving me naught with much time to call my own. Plus, computer errors deleted pieces of work that I was in the middle of writing, and since one thing leads to another...

BUT, with that being said, just so you folks know I will be getting out of this writing hiatus soon enough. And thanks again as always, Fraggle. Your work is always appreciated.

fraggle
November 2nd, 2011, 06:32 PM
Damm, I actually summoned Irun O_O


Now which BL-members did this thread summon too?

ItsaRandomUsername
November 2nd, 2011, 06:36 PM
Flere821 and Qsurf, since I haven't seen them around recently.

fraggle
November 2nd, 2011, 06:37 PM
the members appreaded:

Hymn of Ragnarok
Flere821
qsurf
Alulim
reborn214
LeopardBear
EnigmaticFellow

seven servants BL-members with ItsaRandomUsername as the holy grail!

Now these seven Bl-members must fight to the death! Ill take the role of head-troll/ supervisor.

The winner will obtain IRUN's new chapter!

Alulim
November 2nd, 2011, 07:19 PM
Al wins, he is a deer-Buddha-god thing.

ItsaRandomUsername
November 2nd, 2011, 07:20 PM
If you see the Buddha, kill the Buddha.

RadiantBeam
November 2nd, 2011, 07:23 PM
Saber as Sayaka's protective older sister.

HELL TO THE YES.

nununu
November 2nd, 2011, 07:35 PM
Silly fraggle, one uses codecasting to perform magecraft with computers.

Yoku Waraku Gendai Mahou in BL?

o_O

Hymn of Ragnarok
November 2nd, 2011, 07:43 PM
Saber as Sayaka's protective older sister.

HELL TO THE YES.

While indeed amusing, I think the family of Lancers is chock full of potential. Add Scathach as the eccentric aunt, an on and off flirtation between Cu Chulainn and Saber that is (mostly) one sided, and it's perfect.

qsurf
November 2nd, 2011, 11:21 PM
The Kanade are made of barely missed emo and win.

That is all :P

=====================

Now, about that tiny matter of summonings and a certain deer believing he could win.

Come then Al, come and I will show you despair!

"My Soul exists to create..."

ItsaRandomUsername
November 3rd, 2011, 12:42 AM
Soon.

Maybe.

One of these days.

But definitely sometime!

fallenblades643
November 3rd, 2011, 08:19 PM
Fraggle I love you. Now onto business, this lurker shall take the 8th slot as servant avenger.

Cypher27
November 4th, 2011, 01:13 PM
the members appreaded:

Hymn of Ragnarok
Flere821
qsurf
Alulim
reborn214
LeopardBear
EnigmaticFellow

seven servants BL-members with ItsaRandomUsername as the holy grail!

Now these seven Bl-members must fight to the death! Ill take the role of head-troll/ supervisor.

The winner will obtain IRUN's new chapter!
So the next chapter come in 60 years?!?

EnigmaticFellow
November 4th, 2011, 01:25 PM
So the next chapter come in 60 years?!?

This is IRUn, of course it does. Were you expecting it any sooner?

ItsaRandomUsername
November 4th, 2011, 01:27 PM
This conversation amuses me.

*Kotomine grin*

EnigmaticFellow
November 4th, 2011, 01:29 PM
^
You're the greater grail IRUn. Doing the Kotomine grin is the job for the mediator, fraggle.

ItsaRandomUsername
November 4th, 2011, 01:30 PM
...then who is the mediator?

o__0

EnigmaticFellow
November 4th, 2011, 01:31 PM
...then who is the mediator?

o__0

Read my earlier post, and look at fraggle's post as well.

ItsaRandomUsername
November 4th, 2011, 01:38 PM
...my God, it makes so much sense.

Anyway, I have time this weekend, sooooo.....

Megaolix
November 4th, 2011, 07:08 PM
Here something's to motivate you from me too. You remember the idea of Archer being summoned and Madoka sending the Puellas to search for him? Here's a scenario under the same idea.

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Archer was cornered. There was no escape route. Nothing he had could force a way out of the mess. His opponent drew ever closer to him and he gulped in fear.

“Madoka, do you even know what you’re saying?!”

“Very, very much. A knight should get a reward for his deeds, right?“

“But aren’t you a bit-“

“Archer” Madoka said, interrupting him. “Think carefully where you are. Remember how far we are of the concept of Time. Remember how many ages I went to bring here Puella Magis. Don’t you DARE say I am too young for this.”

So much for that idea.

“I could have sworn that your room was on the opposite when I turned left…”

“You have no idea how easy it is to manipulate stuff inside your own realm.” Madoka answered. “See for yourself.”

And Archer saw. Indeed, he was now on Madoka’s luxurious bed (a self-indulgence she wasn’t ashamed of at all) without the Goddess Herself on top of him.

“Are you sure you’re ready for this? I mean, you say you are bu… but…”

Archer wasn’t even interrupted. Madoka, who had been all smiles and cheery as she pursued Archer to finally ‘do it’ under a flimsy pretense, suddenly felt very, very cold.

“If I am ready, Archer? You think I’m not?” Madoka asked, the tone indicating that he asked something he really should have left alone.

She was still smiling. That just made her even scarier in Archer’s opinion.

“Having something linked to you is interesting, you know? Archer, when you use Unlimited Blade Works, you know everything that’s going on inside it, right?”

That was true. He didn’t voice the answer but both already knew the answer.

“It’s the same here. Really, I would rather give everyone their privacy, but I can’t help but FEEL what is going on everywhere at all times. You follow me so far?”

Archer nodded.

“So you know… When you went to Mami’s room, I felt it. When Homura wanted to feel like a young normal woman, I felt it too. When Sayaka and Kyouko both invited you, I also feel that. “

Archer tried all he could, but he couldn’t help but gulp in fear of where this was going.

“There’s no concept of time here, but I think that’s not the only thing lacking. I don’t think I ever saw someone really tired after working out or training either. It’s not like we have real bodies either. So anyone can go on as long as they feel they need to for whatever they are doing."

Oh hell…

“And all those… experiences are in my soon-no-longer maiden’s mind. Considering this, if you ask me if I feel ready… Then I would answer yes. My body is ready. My mind is ready. And you better be ready, because we are doing this HERE and NOW.”

Archer vanished.

There was no sound and no sudden light. One moment Archer was here. The next he wasn’t.

Of course, Madoka already knew where he was. She was a Goddess after all. She knew he wasn’t responsible for this. She knew the girl who summoned him wasn’t responsible either. Certainly, she couldn’t have pinpointed this exact moment in a timeless realm.

Even knowing all this, Madoka’s smile turned into a frown for a moment.


--------------------------------------------------------------------

“I’m not hearing anything…”

“You think we should open the door a bit and check?”

“No way, they’ll notice us!”

“But doesn’t she know we’re here anyway?”

“Keep it down, I hear footst-“

Whatever was going to be said was interrupted as the door was suddenly thrown open, surprising the four girls behind it. When they looked up to see what had happened, they saw Madoka, smiling and serene.

She was also radiating cold anger, making her the scariest thing they ever saw in their existence.

“Homura. Kyouko. Sayaka. Mami. I have something I need you to do.” Madoka said, not even bothering to ask what they were doing (she knew anyway). “Go to Fuyuki, find Archer, restrain him, bring him to a bed, ANY bed and call me. Use any means necessary.”

“You know that he’s probably already back here somewhere, right? Considering there’S no tim-“ Mami said, before being interrupted.

“Any means necessary.”

“You sure you really want-“

“Any means necessary.”

“Are you-“

“Any. Means. Necessary.”

“And… What after that?” Homura dared to ask.

“Then you leave me and him alone. Then I will take him and we will love it.” Madoka said, her smile turning bigger as she explained it.


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At Fuyuki city, Archer only had a few moments to wonder why he crashed in furniture when Rin arrived to see what had happened. Already, the knowledge of the Grail War filled his mind. At the same moment, a feeling of doom was stuck in his mind. Forget the sarcastic smile he used. Forget the attitude. Archer turned to his Master and spoke immediately.

“Before I say anything else, let me tell you right now that you have no idea what you just did and how crazy this is going to get…”

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Fear a frustrated Madoka. Fear Her.

ItsaRandomUsername
November 4th, 2011, 10:46 PM
LOL

qsurf
November 4th, 2011, 11:05 PM
Oh dear...poor Rin knows not what she has done. She made Madokami frown.

Alulim
November 4th, 2011, 11:39 PM
Rin is going to...well, she has a goddess angry at her.

nitewind
November 4th, 2011, 11:44 PM
^This is going to be a train wreck of EPIC proportions isn't it?:neco_arc: GIVE ME MORE!!

fraggle
November 5th, 2011, 02:13 PM
Assisted Consent Rin : " Bringing the Goddess back to heaven wasn't that much of a challenge in the end."

Elf
November 5th, 2011, 02:54 PM
Oh god . . . I . . . want more of this.

I've missed this story and I actually enjoy the other fics based off of it popping up.

(I'd write one myself, but I'm off fanfic for November.)

fraggle
November 5th, 2011, 03:49 PM
Hmm, I might expand the "Meet the lancers universe later.


Fun fact. In tis particular universe Kamiyou didn't get his arm crippled because of an accident. Saber snapped the bone in two after he rejected her little sister, and started dating Hitomi which made Sayaka all depressed.Rumors have it that she might have borrowed Gae Buide to rub it in, but Diarmuid denies any such actions.

2ndsly
November 5th, 2011, 03:50 PM
Madoka learns the truth of CGs + bonus epilogue & Omake to snippet

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Trimmed for practicality.



New Noble Phantasm gained!

The Prayer of Hope
Since Archer started serving the Goddess Madoka, he could finally believe he fought for his ideals without betraying them, even if he couldn't truly help everyone everywhere. In many times and places, he appeared at the side of Puella Magis to help them out of desperate situation. Never again would those girls have to fight alone and let their prayers turn to despair if Madoka has anything to say about it.

Of course, Archer himself is not an exception to this.

If Archer ever find himself in a desperate situation, the Goddess will intervene and under Her guidance, the Puellas will take arms once again, ready to assist the one who helped them before. They will appear at his side and remind him that he too no longer has to fight alone.

On a side-note, Madoka would grant Archer help if he asked for it, even if the fight wasn't going badly. But She knows he's too stubborn to do it.


I'm making a copy of this for my archives.

Flere821
November 5th, 2011, 03:52 PM
*snip*
Fear a frustrated Madoka. Fear Her.
Great work there =D

2ndsly
November 5th, 2011, 07:10 PM
Megaolix,
Should you ever have need for an army, mine is at your disposal.
Follow the link in my sig fir more info.

Muramasa
November 5th, 2011, 07:47 PM
@Megaolix


I spit my coffee reading that. Absolutely hilarious! *claps* Bravo good sir. Bravo.

fraggle
November 5th, 2011, 08:29 PM
@megaolix, continue.........................




@ everyone. in my meet the ......... series I made the obvious choice of making the 3 lancers a family, and the 2 sabers.

The Kanade family has the archers( madoka and Emiya).

Mami has her older brother Gil, who took over the company of their parents after they died, used his talent and luck to obliverate the competition, but is so busy wth his work that he can barely spend time with his beloved Imouto ( besides from threatening every boy that she talks to, no lowlive gets the honor of breathing the same air as his beloved Imouto :P).

He finally manages to make time to visit her, and runs into a certain blond swordswoman. Comedy ensues.

Moemura/Homura lives with uncle Lancelot, but the guy is just as shy as Moemura, and will hide from everyone, or dress up so heavily that you can't even see his face. He is very protective of her though, and will turn into berserker if he even suspects that you are a danger to her.

the problem being that he himself does more damage then most of her potential threads can .





Now where the hell doe we put Iskander. this story can't be complete without our king of conquerors!

Heroslayer
November 5th, 2011, 08:30 PM
Their homeroom teacher?

Great Teacher Iskander

ItsaRandomUsername
November 5th, 2011, 08:32 PM
@megaolix, continue.........................




@ everyone. in my meet the ......... series I made the obvious choice of making the 3 lancers a family, and the 2 sabers.

The Kanade family has the archers( madoka and Emiya).

Mami has her older brother Gil, who took over the company of their parents after they died, used his talent and luck to obliverate the competition, but is so busy wth his work that he can barely spend time with his beloved Imouto ( besides from threatening every boy that she talks to, no lowlive gets the honor of breathing the same air as his beloved Imouto :P).

He finally manages to make time to visit her, and runs into a certain blond swordswoman. Comedy ensues.

Moemura/Homura lives with uncle Lancelot, but the guy is just as shy as Moemura, and will hide from everyone, or dress up so heavily that you can't even see his face. He is very protective of her though, and will turn into berserker if he even suspects that you are a danger to her.

the problem being that he himself does more damage then most of her potential threads can .





Now where the hell doe we put Iskander. this story can't be complete without our king of conquerors!

Oh God the possibilities.

fraggle
November 5th, 2011, 08:36 PM
Their homeroom teacher?

Great Teacher Iskander

he also does geography classes.

"FOR THIS LESSON WE WILL NEED THE ATLAS THAT YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BRING WITH YOU! NOW, CAN ANYBODY TELL ME WERE I CAN FIND MACEDONIA ON THIS MAP?"

2ndsly
November 5th, 2011, 08:41 PM
he also does geography classes.

"FOR THIS LESSON WE WILL NEED THE ATLAS THAT YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BRING WITH YOU! NOW, CAN ANYBODY TELL ME WERE I CAN FIND MACEDONIA ON THIS MAP?"

Yes, please!

fraggle
November 5th, 2011, 08:53 PM
Great teacher Iskander is so great that he turns the bullies into his most diligent students!

qsurf
November 6th, 2011, 01:16 AM
His Reality Marble will be the Reality Marble of the ages.

"Is a teacher ever truly alone?"