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Kratosirving
July 4th, 2011, 05:51 AM
Part I

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It had started out normally enough. Archer had once again said something that Rin found revolting and she had swung her foot upward to knock him on his back. This time however, Archer caught her foot and lifted her off the ground, the sudden act and feeling of helplessness shocking her.


"Now I am the Master,” Archer said, grinning.


"What? Don't make me use a Command Spell because you're being an idiot, Archer," she snapped back.


"Did you forget? You're out of them, silly girl," he purred.


She blinked, stared at him and said, "Y-you wouldn't."


"Oh? What wouldn't I do?" he chuckled sinisterly. "I think it's about time I put you in your place for all the times I've been kicked around by you, 'Master'."


Her blood ran cold at his words and she swallowed. "Look, I apologize if I've seemed harsh..."


He arched an eyebrow ever so slightly. "You think I want an apology from you? Oh, rest assured, you'll apologize alright..."


Rin automatically tried to squirm, trying to find an opening. "Fine, I understand, please put me down."


"Oh, I will do no such thing. You see, I kind of like you like this. I can see everything up this skirt of yours," he said with laughter in his voice.


Her eyes widened at that and she swallowed. "Archer, what are you planning?" She cursed the tremor in her voice and the slight rush of heat.


Archer's grin widened. "Oh, surely you shouldn't have to guess, right? I mean, this spot down here already seems to know, going by how wet it is. Or did you perhaps not clean up properly?"


Rin glared at him before moving her hands to cover herself. "I'm NOT wet, damn it. You think I'm going to get like that down there because you finally grow a back bone..."


Archer's eyes narrowed at that. "...You think I finally decided to stand up to you? Look at this position Rin. I could have done this anytime I wished. Do you know why I haven't until now?"


"..." She bit her lip. There were a few reasons she could think of. She swallowed and answered, "You were either indulging me, secretly enjoy the abuse, or some absurd motion you don't want to hurt me. Or you just want to look up my skirt."


Archer snorted. "Please, like I have to try hard to look up your skirt. You flash me many times each day Rin, it's no wonder all of those boys at your school want you. You're a tease."


Her flush intensified at that and she kept covering herself with one hand and pulling her skirt down with another. She asked, "Fine than, why haven't you?"


A small smile crept back onto Archer's face. "It's because you're too damned cute when you're angry, Rin," he said normally.


She went still at that, the blood still rushing to her face. The answer was enough of a shock her hands fell still. She swallowed and said, "Then why didn't you say anything about it?"


He chuckled again. "Because your reactions are priceless, Rin. Oh? Looks like I was right after all wasn't I?" he teased as he glanced knowingly back at her.


Her head was starting to spin. She swallowed and said, "Well, it's not like you can do anything with me like this."


"Oh I beg to differ. After all, I'm just standing here and you're already like this. Besides, I don't have just one arm you know." Archer added before bringing it down to her mid-section and swiftly yanking the red sweater she always wore up and over her head and pinning her arms painfully behind her back with it.


She cried out at that, completely helpless against him. Now her head was pounding and her arms were pinned behind her back. And he was given a view of her camisole and panties. "F-fine...You win, could you put me down? I'm starting to feel dizzy," she told him.


Archer snickered. "What, is the blood rushing to your head, Master? What a coincidence..." Leaving it at that, he traced a small nameless dagger, than walked to the wall and pinned her sweater (and thus her arms) to the wall with it. "Now than, you look rather nice as a wall decoration, but something's missing..." Walking back over to her nightstand, he began to rummage through it.


Rin took a deep breath as the blood started flowing back properly as she was...pinned to her wall. She watched with wide eyes as he began to look through her nightstand. Her legs kicked at the wall and she asked, "Archer, what are you doing? You...get away from there!"


Archer chuckled to himself as he listened to her shout behind him. He continued to rummage through her drawer until he found what he was looking for and took it, hiding it behind his back as he walked back over to Rin. "Ah, I found the perfect addition to this..."


"T-this isn't funny anymore, Archer," Rin said as she swallowed, wondering what he'd taken from her dresser. "I-if you want to do something...Well, I do owe you for a lot and repaying you with...that, and well...it's not like I don't want to."


Archer snorted. "What are you prattling on about? Anyhow..." Smiling widely, he brought his other hand from behind his back and held up the small piece of cloth. "I'm sure you recognize this Rin, you use it from time to time when you have trouble sleeping."


"Y-you're going to blindfold me?" she said, her voice a squeak.


"Good, it just goes to show you are still smart about these things Rin." Saying that, he than leaned forward and quickly attached the small cloth over her eyes. "Well Master, how does it feel to be stumbling in the dark again?


She gasped at that and shivered. "You know I've never done anything like this...You're going to turn me into a deviant." With her sight stripped her other senses went into overdrive. She was all too aware of the looming presence of his huge body and the steel laiden voice. Her body relaxed somewhat as heat was coiling inside of her. Somehow she wasn't surprised it would be like this. However, she was more aware that her body was starting to betray her own frustrated need in subtle ways.


Archer chuckled. "I knew it, you are a pervert, Master. Still, I think you're enjoying yourself a little too much, so I think I'll leave you be so you can cool off for a bit."


"D-don't leave me like this!" Rin cried out as she tried to move her arms, "A-and I'd thought you'd be happy that I...You said I was cute."


Archer laughed again. "Oh, but you're reactions are so much sweeter...That, and teasing you is absolutely exquisite. Don't feel bad though, I'll leave the window open so you can have some air while I head into town to buy what we need for dinner."


"No-No Archer, what if someone sees me or..." Rin panted as she shook her head.


"Oh you'll be fine, we're up on the second story, so no one can see you from the street." He knew very well however about the other houses in the area having two stories, but he wasn't going to leave her so exposed anyhow. He'd leave the heavy drapes down and the window open to leave the illusion of it though.


Rin bit her lip and retorted, "I know that there are other houses with second and third stories on this street Archer. How would you feel about Shinji trying to take advantage of me like this?"


"And how exactly is he going to do anything? He can't use magic, and he's too damned stupid to think of anything else," Archer asked back, thoroughly enjoying himself.


"Damn it, why are you so dense! I'm all but giving you an invitation but yet you're the one being a damned tease!" Rin snapped at him.


Archer smirked. "All in good time, Rin. Still, you're acting really heated, so I better do what I can to relieve you of that. Besides, these will get dirty if they stay on much longer anyhow..." Saying that, he moved back to her and traced another small dagger, skiving the camisole off her upper body, and than lowering her sticky black panties from her legs. "Sorry about that, but I can't exactly lift it over your head now can I? Well than, I'll be back later Rin. Keep an 'eye' on the place, will you?"


"Archer!" she screamed as he stripped her. Her heart was thundering and he was going to leave her blindfolded and naked like this. Automatically, she tried kicking at him, maybe use her foot to draw him back or anything.


Archer's smile dropped as he quickly grabbed her legs. "You really are a rebellious and troublesome Master..." He concentrated for a moment, and the second dagger he had made shifted into a pair of magnetic cuffs. He than placed them over her ankles and held them towards the wall, where they stuck fast. "It's amazing how much lead and other metals are hidden behind this wallpaper isn't it?"


She yelped at that as now she was perfectly pinned to the wall. She swallowed and said, "And you're a difficult and stubborn Servant!"


"..." He was seriously considering whether to gag her as well for a moment, but shook it off. Hearing her reactions was the best part to all of this. "Of course I am, I am an Archer after all." Saying that, he loudly clomped out of the room, leaving her there.


She screamed at him as he left, a long wordless scream of pure frustration. "Idiot," she whispered before banging her head gently against the wall and twisting her arms and ankles. She realized she took the wrong direction with him, but she didn't know how to actually show him... "And now I'm naked and pinned to my wall," she muttered, not to mention she was soaked. She was probably the most deviant virgin in Fuyuki. She blamed Ayako and her romance novels for that.


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Well, here's the first part of a fun little project that 'popped up' overnight as I was chatting with Elf. One thing led to another, and we made this batch of loveliness. I'm going to leave you guys with a vote on what should happen next, and/or any suggestions that I haven't thought of that make sense are welcome and will be considered.


Option One: Archer stays behind, watching Rin's reactions and finally after a set amount of time heads back to her room.


Option Two: After a few minutes of thinking, Rin shouts out that she's sure Archer is still there, and Lancer jumps in through the window.


Option Three: Ayako comes over to hang out after having decided that with Rin the day before. Archer says that she's in her room waiting...

Keyne
July 4th, 2011, 06:10 AM
Heh, funny. :)

Also, I detected a few "than" that should be "then".

I'll go with 3.

giodan
July 4th, 2011, 06:18 AM
ahahahahahah!!!! i'l go whit lancer!!! too funny!!!

my vote is for Option Two!

Kieran
July 4th, 2011, 07:38 AM
And just to be contrary, I'll pick 1 - though any of them sound entertaining. And I get the impression Elf will love this when she sees it . . .

Erlkonig
July 4th, 2011, 07:59 AM
Option 2.

We need to straighten out that Gay Bulge.

Techlet
July 4th, 2011, 08:35 AM
This is unexpectedly hawt. :3

Also, I vote for Ayako.

xelloss
July 4th, 2011, 09:02 AM
Option 2.

Ivan The Mouse
July 4th, 2011, 09:27 AM
Gay Bulge, please. Option 2.

amado
July 4th, 2011, 09:32 AM
option 3

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 11:01 AM
Option 3, Ayako.

Lotus Saint
July 4th, 2011, 11:07 AM
Option 2.

Kratosirving
July 4th, 2011, 11:18 AM
And just to be contrary, I'll pick 1 - though any of them sound entertaining. And I get the impression Elf will love this when she sees it . . .

Heheh, I told her I was going to crop this up and post it, so we'll see the reaction. :D

Looks like Lancer's winning so far, I'll let this go for a day or so to see how it ends up.

SeiKeo
July 4th, 2011, 12:06 PM
3, so 3.

Neir
July 4th, 2011, 12:36 PM
Number 2

ringlhach
July 4th, 2011, 12:58 PM
2, with the provisio that Archer already knows he's there. What? He's snapped, the title says so.

Milbunk
July 4th, 2011, 01:35 PM
3

shiningphoenix
July 4th, 2011, 01:40 PM
Ooh, it's so hard to decide... not 1.

Bloble
July 4th, 2011, 01:58 PM
This is too hard. Archer's already gotten too many scenes, so it's a toss up between 2 and 3...
I'm gonna have to go with 3.

Alulim
July 4th, 2011, 02:30 PM
I will go with three.

Ergast
July 4th, 2011, 03:14 PM
for the lulzs? let's say 3.

Lancer is just too bro to touch another guy's ho. He is so bro that he won't do it even if said guy said it to him in another reality. His broness trascends realities, and it's his real (hidden) NP. Yep, I'll milk the joke until there is no more TM

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 03:18 PM
Yeah, I don't see the Lancer option really going very far. Ayako is a lot more promising.

Elf
July 4th, 2011, 04:02 PM
Yeah, I don't see the Lancer option really going very far. Ayako is a lot more promising.

And with Ayako, Archer can watch and then maybe join in.

I always thought Archer had a voyeuristic streak.

Alulim
July 4th, 2011, 04:03 PM
I agree.

ringlhach
July 4th, 2011, 04:05 PM
He could watch with Lancer, too, and maybe ambush him. It'd be an interesting twist on Lancers, to say the least. Yes, I know that was Diarmuid's thing, but hell, why not?

Elf
July 4th, 2011, 04:08 PM
He could watch with Lancer, too, and maybe ambush him. It'd be an interesting twist on Lancers, to say the least. Yes, I know that was Diarmuid's thing, but hell, why not?

Ultimate Troll would be that Lancer's starting to get into things, Archer comes in, traces Enkidu, binds Lancer with it and makes Lancer himself watch.

Alulim
July 4th, 2011, 04:10 PM
Still prefer Ayako, though that does sound fun.

ringlhach
July 4th, 2011, 04:15 PM
Well, it is called "Archer Finally Snaps," and that sounds like something he'd do, only I don't know how effective Enkidu would be. What's this Lancer's Divinity, anyway?

Elf
July 4th, 2011, 04:23 PM
Well, it is called "Archer Finally Snaps," and that sounds like something he'd do, only I don't know how effective Enkidu would be. What's this Lancer's Divinity, anyway?

Lancer's half god.

Enkidu works better the more divinity something has in it. Even less a rank, it would probably hold Lancer for a little while.

Kratosirving
July 4th, 2011, 04:28 PM
Heheheh, love the talk so far. Ayako is winning so far, but we'll see how this goes. I'll offically lock the "voting" Wednesday morning, so still plenty of time for Lancer to catch up. Archer alone looks like...well, dead.

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 05:00 PM
He could watch with Lancer, too, and maybe ambush him. It'd be an interesting twist on Lancers, to say the least. Yes, I know that was Diarmuid's thing, but hell, why not?

He could, but that would be a lot less fun than him doing so with Ayako. After all, Archer ain't likely to fuck Lancer....

Plus, Archer is going to tell Ayako that Rin is "waiting for her", so Ayako would have reason to assume she "wants" it. Lancer is less likely to do so, and Archer wouldn't let him anyway.

Kratosirving
July 4th, 2011, 05:10 PM
You know there's pent up lesbian action between the two anyhow, even without the incentive of that CG from Realta Nua.

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 05:13 PM
You know there's pent up lesbian action between the two anyhow, even without the incentive of that CG from Realta Nua.

Exactly, which is why Ayako is by far the best option.

Bloble
July 4th, 2011, 05:21 PM
You know, I wonder what would happen if Ayako decided to bring Sakura along with her...

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 05:23 PM
You know, I wonder what would happen if Ayako decided to bring Sakura along with her...

Sakura would free her sister and give Archer a good kicking, probably. Although, then again, Sakura does have a mischevous side in HA....

I guess it depends on the timeline.

Bloble
July 4th, 2011, 05:23 PM
I'd think that Ayako would rope her into helping.

But then I was always a dreamer...

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 05:28 PM
I'd think that Ayako would rope her into helping.

But then I was always a dreamer...

Well, I don't think Sakura can be "roped in" to such things all that easily, honestly. But, on the other hand, it's porn, so whatever is hottest goes (within reason).

Elf
July 4th, 2011, 05:32 PM
Man, if Sakura got into it, I'd think that Archer would get pulled back in.

"You know, it's not nice to tease Nee-san like that."

Not to mention, there's probably some dark part of Sakura who wants to see Rin deflowered while tied up.

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 05:41 PM
Man, if Sakura got into it, I'd think that Archer would get pulled back in.

"You know, it's not nice to tease Nee-san like that."

Yeah, that's quite possible.


Not to mention, there's probably some dark part of Sakura who wants to see Rin deflowered while tied up.

Not one that would be expressed in a situation like this....

Neir
July 4th, 2011, 06:13 PM
Yeah, she wants Rin to SUFFER. Even if she's not conciously aware of it most of the time.

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 06:18 PM
Yeah, she wants Rin to SUFFER. Even if she's not conciously aware of it most of the time.

No, she doesn't. She has some small level of resentment for Rin which gets massively inflated by AM when she turns Dark. The rest of the time, she has absolutely no interest in making Rin suffer.

I3uster
July 4th, 2011, 06:19 PM
http://img.tgfb.net/drama/src/130528286141.jpg

Bloble
July 4th, 2011, 06:21 PM
I think it would be kinda hot if Sakura had the repressed urge to make Rin suffer sexually.

But she doesn't! She doesn't have it at all, so there's no reason for Mike to get mad at me! Pleas don't kill me!

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 06:46 PM
I think it would be kinda hot if Sakura had the repressed urge to make Rin suffer sexually.

No argument there.


But she doesn't! She doesn't have it at all, so there's no reason for Mike to get mad at me! Pleas don't kill me!

No argument here either....

Neir
July 4th, 2011, 08:08 PM
Except when she says it in the game. But since you consider Dark Sakura to be a different character, you can remain quiet and smug in the knowledge that you are infinitely more right.

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 08:12 PM
Except when she says it in the game.

Yes, when she's heavily influenced by Angra Mainyu....

You know, exactly like I said.


But since you consider Dark Sakura to be a different character, you can remain quiet and smug in the knowledge that you are infinitely more right.

Did you even bother to read my comment before typing out your standard "lol, let's insult Mike" response? I explicitly said that her resentment for Rin gets massively inflated when she turns Dark. Whether she's the "same character" or not is entirely irrelevant, all that matters is whether she'd do it in her normal form.

And, BTW, the answer to that is "no, she wouldn't", in case you're not capable of working that one out for yourself (which wouldn't exactly shock me...).

Kieran
July 4th, 2011, 08:20 PM
Turning nasty like this is just an incentive for them to bait you further . . .

Mike1984
July 4th, 2011, 08:27 PM
Turning nasty like this is just an incentive for them to bait you further . . .

He was the one who "turned nasty" first....

Neir
July 4th, 2011, 08:41 PM
Not really. I just believe in unconcious desires. Having a different opinion of Sakura's character isn't being nasty.

Kratosirving
July 4th, 2011, 08:43 PM
Yup, and you can both take it to another topic, I won't have this here. It's a pointless argument that has nothing to do with this.

Erlkonig
July 4th, 2011, 08:46 PM
Internet: All rages are righteous to the raging.

Neir
July 4th, 2011, 08:47 PM
Fair enough.

Elf
July 4th, 2011, 11:51 PM
Or hey, Sakura could just be playing matchmaker.

She's tired of seeing her older sister being repressed all the time and all the sexual tension between her and her former Servant as well as Sakura's Taicho.

So she thinks, "Well, Nee-san, Ayako and Archer-san all need to get some . . . I've got a perfect situation here and now EVERYONE can live happily ever after."

(Honestly, the idea of Sakura playing matchmaker between Archer and Rin is too cute.)

Techlet
July 4th, 2011, 11:55 PM
(Honestly, the idea of Sakura playing matchmaker between Archer and Rin is too cute.)

This makes me want to write something...

RadiantBeam
July 4th, 2011, 11:56 PM
This makes me want to write something...

*encourages you to write something*

Elf
July 4th, 2011, 11:56 PM
This makes me want to write something...

. . . Then please do!

Elf likes to read too!

And hey, if you need help with porn, well I'm super easy to contact. :)

Techlet
July 5th, 2011, 12:03 AM
I have a faint idea of how the sex is going to play out. It'll be an Archer/Rin/Sakura threesome and will involve the kitchen, the living room and then Rin's bedroom and copious amounts of whipped cream. Sakura will be the big sister in bed and Rin will be deliciously tsun tsun.

Because what do the three of them have in common? Cooking and awkward sex.

Elf
July 5th, 2011, 12:08 AM
I say go for it!

Then it leaves Archer and Rin cuddling in bed while Sakura goes back to Shirou to celebrate her victory in matchmaking?

Alulim
July 5th, 2011, 12:09 AM
Sounds good~

Techlet
July 5th, 2011, 12:10 AM
Then it leaves Archer and Rin cuddling in bed while Sakura goes back to Shirou to celebrate her victory in matchmaking?

Yup.

http://achievements.schrankmonster.de/Achievement.aspx?text=Two%20Sempais%20One%20Night

EnigmaticFellow
July 5th, 2011, 12:14 AM
I may be late for the party, but I will vote for 3 since we always need MOAR Ayako.

Elf
July 5th, 2011, 12:14 AM
Yup.

http://achievements.schrankmonster.de/Achievement.aspx?text=Two%20Sempais%20One%20Night

And that's something that Sakura can gloat to Rin a little bit later.

Oh god, it's so cute, please do it. :)

SeiKeo
July 5th, 2011, 12:16 AM
And that's something that Sakura can gloat to Rin a little bit later.

Oh god, it's so cute, please do it. :)

Are you trying to prevent more Ayako? Cause that be the wrong thing there.

Bloble
July 5th, 2011, 12:17 AM
Apparently AMERICA!!!! wants lesbians.

SeiKeo
July 5th, 2011, 12:18 AM
You gonna argue with AMERICA, son?

Elf
July 5th, 2011, 12:20 AM
Are you trying to prevent more Ayako? Cause that be the wrong thing there.

No, Technology wants to write his own story and I'm encouraging to do so.

I'm all up for a Rin/Archer/Ayako threesome.

Techlet
July 5th, 2011, 12:32 AM
And that's something that Sakura can gloat to Rin a little bit later.

Oh god, it's so cute, please do it. :)

The morning-after talk:

Rin: "Archer, what do I mean to you?"

Archer: "..."

Rin: "And don't give me that 'you're everything to me' schtick! I want to know the truth! Not some corny line from a romance novel! A-and it's not like I read those kind of books or anything, I just borrowed one from Ayako and...and... Stupid Ayako!"

Archer *deep breath*: "Rin, you -"

Rin: "J-just because I slept with you once doesn't mean that you can do whatever you want with me! I'm not some dimwit chick who'll fall head over heels for a bunch of sappy lines! So don't expect me to just...just p-p-put out. *blush* Even if you've saved my life and protected me...with those skillful hands...*deeper blush* Bah! I did this for Sakura, okay! Don't misunders-!"

Archer *after silencing Rin with a tactical application of tongue*: "You make me feel alive, Rin."

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Now to put that into prose...

Elf
July 5th, 2011, 12:34 AM
Archer *after silencing Rin with a tactical application of tongue*: "You make me feel alive, Rin."

I approve. I approve on so many levels.

Now go forth and write this!

Alulim
July 5th, 2011, 12:35 AM
Indeed you must.

Mike1984
July 5th, 2011, 03:31 AM
Yup.

http://achievements.schrankmonster.de/Achievement.aspx?text=Two%20Sempais%20One%20Night

Heh, lol.

Yeah, you should definitely write this....


And that's something that Sakura can gloat to Rin a little bit later.

Oh god, it's so cute, please do it. :)

Well, only if Shirou was OK with it....


Are you trying to prevent more Ayako? Cause that be the wrong thing there.

I think that would be a different story altogether....

Keyne
July 5th, 2011, 03:53 AM
Do you know what's funny? There wasn't even the slightest mention about Sakura in the text yet, and this thread has already turned in a Sakura thread.

I'll just sit and chuckle. Please continue. :D

ringlhach
July 5th, 2011, 03:59 AM
Mike is present; therefore, this is a Sakura thread. *inserts pompous-sounding Latin to the effect that "this is self-evident" [/jk]. That does seem to be how it works, though.

Mike1984
July 5th, 2011, 04:02 AM
Mike is present; therefore, this is a Sakura thread. *inserts pompous-sounding Latin to the effect that "this is self-evident" [/jk]. That does seem to be how it works, though.

I wasn't the one who brought her up initially, and nor was I the one who made entirely false comments about her nature....

Neir
July 5th, 2011, 04:10 AM
Lawl.

ringlhach
July 5th, 2011, 05:22 AM
I wasn't the one who brought her up initially, and nor was I the one who made entirely false comments about her nature....I simply made a correlation between your presence and the thread becoming a Sakura thread; no more, no less. I didn't say who or what caused it, just that you being in a thread means that it is a Sakura thread. Or politics, or SOMEONE'S BEING WRONG. Which is also a partial trigger for Sakura threads.

Kratosirving
July 5th, 2011, 05:43 AM
It was a reference to a set of earlier posts, but keep it resolved. I don't want boring and in the end pointless walls of text clogging any more threads than it already does (when they aren't on the thread topic of course :D)

Ergast
July 5th, 2011, 07:22 AM
PARAGON INTERRUPT! You know, Elf? I can't remember if you have written a lemon between Shirou and Rin. I know your specialization is Archer but if you have written that scene, I would love to read it.

PS: I would have done a RENEGADE INTERRUPT, but I don't think it would have worked here.

I3uster
July 5th, 2011, 08:54 AM
Yeah, pushing her out of the window would be a little too hardcore if you just want to read something.

Techlet
July 5th, 2011, 09:06 AM
Gilgamesh would be the KING of RENEGADE INTERRUPTS.

"Women and children!"

*GoB spam*

Ergast
July 5th, 2011, 09:44 AM
Yeah, pushing her out of the window would be a little too hardcore if you just want to read something.

Not to mention that Shirou and Rin would demand my head for threatening Sakura... head that couldn't be claimed, as Mike would get it before they could even think about demanding it.

Keyne
July 5th, 2011, 09:46 AM
Not to mention that Shirou and Rin would demand my head for threatening Sakura... head that couldn't be claimed, as Mike would get it before they could even think about demanding it.
And I'd be there, sitting on the roof and crossing out your name from the Book of Fate... ufufufufu~~

Kratosirving
July 5th, 2011, 10:40 AM
And Theo is off in the distance, going "Just as planned."

Fangstrike
July 5th, 2011, 02:37 PM
It must be option 3.

Ergast
July 5th, 2011, 03:05 PM
And I'd be there, sitting on the roof and crossing out your name from the Book of Fate... ufufufufu~~


And Theo is off in the distance, going "Just as planned."

Both of you are forgeting that nobody dies when they are killed here in BL. Although is a pain in the ass to regrow a head. It stings like hell. Luckily for me, neither Rin, Shirou or Mike has the MEoDP. Now that hurts when you have to regenerate.

Anyway, I'm not doing any RENEGADE INTERRUPT, so this is a moot point to discuss.

Also, waiting for (with some luck) some Ayako goodness.

Kratosirving
July 5th, 2011, 03:06 PM
Certainly leaning that way, but I'll keep in open until tomorrow morning like I said. Although Lancer needs 6 votes now just to tie...

Soldat der Trauer
July 5th, 2011, 06:34 PM
Option 3, please.

SeiKeo
July 5th, 2011, 06:35 PM
7 votes.

Theocrass
July 5th, 2011, 07:05 PM
Option 3?

Airen
July 5th, 2011, 07:13 PM
Option 3.

Erlkonig
July 6th, 2011, 12:18 AM
9 votes.

Heroslayer
July 6th, 2011, 12:20 AM
Hehehe, had to go back to see what the options were. I vote 3!

SeiKeo
July 6th, 2011, 12:21 AM
10 votes.

Eveonder
July 6th, 2011, 03:36 AM
option 3 =3

amado
July 6th, 2011, 03:41 AM
11 votes now.
unless someone can bribe convince the others to switch vote, its clearly #3.

Kratosirving
July 6th, 2011, 05:32 AM
Yeah I'm going to go ahead and call it since I got home early (AGAIN! ARGH FAIL 5.25 HOURS OF WORK 2 NIGHTS IN A ROW!) so we'll have Ayako come over and have a good little surprise...

Techlet
July 6th, 2011, 05:33 AM
Yeah I'm going to go ahead and call it since I got home early (AGAIN! ARGH FAIL 5.25 HOURS OF WORK 2 NIGHTS IN A ROW!) so we'll have Ayako come over and have a good little surprise...

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e64/DEATHSTRIKE-117/15452.jpg

Kratosirving
July 6th, 2011, 06:03 AM
ARRRRRRRGHHHHHH!!!!! MY EYES CANNOT UNSEEEEEEEEE!!!!

Altima of the Gates
July 6th, 2011, 06:09 AM
Cleanse your eyes with this:

http://konachan.com/post/show/37534

Kratosirving
July 6th, 2011, 06:41 AM
Cleanse your eyes with this:

http://konachan.com/post/show/37534

I LOVE YOU ALTIMA-SAMA!!

SeiKeo
July 6th, 2011, 11:08 AM
I love that CG so much.

Grant
July 6th, 2011, 07:36 PM
Was there any text with that or did it just have that image?

Kratosirving
July 9th, 2011, 08:01 AM
Part II

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Archer smirked as he heard Rin's shout echo through the old halls as he headed downstairs to take a nap on the couch. He had no qualms of actually going anywhere, he just wanted his Master to sweat a little bit.

Rin shouted, "Archer, I know you're still here!"

However, no sooner had he laid down that the doorbell rang. A few annoyed thoughts ran through his mind, but he quickly got up and opened the heavy door. His eyebrows moved upwards in surprise as he saw that the person at the door was Mitsuzuri Ayako, one of Rin's friends.

Rin froze as she heard the door bell rang and fell quiet. She squirmed uneasily and listened as best as she could, reinforcing her ears.

"Good day, Mitsuzuri-san. What brings you by here today?" Archer asked.

Fuck. Rin thought as she fell quiet.

"Tohsaka asked if I wanted to come over and hang out for a bit after school the other day, so I decided to pop in today." Ayako answered to the tall white-haired man she had been introduced to as a the butler. "Where is she anyway?"

Archer, please tell her I'm not here. Please...damn it, it's not fair, Rin thought quietly, squirming. She knew her attempts at flirting weren't exactly orthodox, but she didn't want some boring, normal relationship.

Archer frowned inwardly for a moment, but than a positively evil thought came to his mind, and a slight smirk wormed it's way to the surface. "She mentioned something like that. Rin is up in her room waiting for you. I'll bring some tea up to you in a minute."

I'm going to kill you, Rin thought as ice curled in her veins.

Ayako smiled uneasily at the tall man. "T-Thank you than. I'll head on up," she said as she quickly shuffled past him and made for the stairs. I don't know what it is, but something seems...odd. She thought to herself as she trodded upwards. It had been some time since she'd been here, but it was hard to forget such a grand place, even though she'd only been in a couple of rooms before.

"Mitsuzuri, don't come in," Rin called out, "I'm a bit tied up at the moment." Literally. Archer, if you can hear this…

Ayako paused outside the door as she heard her friend's voice. Her eyes widened a little at it though. She sounded a little...frantic. Did she forget I was coming over or something? Maybe she's still getting dressed or something. Silly, we're both girls, so there's no reason to be embarrassed or anything. I think I'm going to mess with her a little. "What, did you forget I was coming Tohsaka? You shouldn't be lounging around without clothes on in the middle of the day anyway," she snickered through the door.

"Mitsuzuri, if you come in here, I'm not going to forgive you," Rin shouted.

Ayako paused at that. She was concerned now. Her friend sounded...really flustered, almost as if she were stuck doing something she didn't want her to see... "...Tohsaka, I know you don't have a boyfriend or anything, but you should save that kind of thing for the night when no one is expected to be here." She said uneasily through the door.

Rin bit her lip as she felt tears spring to her eyes. She wanted to have a boyfriend and it backfired. She said, "It's not what you think."

Ayako sighed slightly to herself. "Look, I get it Tohsaka. Hell, I tend to do the same things myself. That bet we made just keeps looking stupider every day."

"I'm going to win it if he wasn't so stupid," Rin muttered, "And I'm not doing that either. Just…could you ask Archer to come up? I'm sorry, but can we take a raincheck?"

Ayako was about to sigh and agree heavily when she heard a pair of heavy boots upon the staircase behind her. "Speak of the devil, it looks like your butler is coming with the tea he mentioned."

Archer frowned as he rounded the corner only to find Ayako standing next to Rin's closed door with her arms folded over her chest. "What's wrong Mitsuzuri-san? Rin throw you out already?"

"Don't let her in here, Archer," Rin said, nearly in tears.

"That's about it," Ayako said as she sighed. "Guess I'll just come back another day. Sorry to make you bring tea up here, Archer-san."

Archer chuckled aloud. "Oh there's nothing to worry about. Rin is just being rude. Come along than," he said as he carefully opened the door while holding onto the tea tray and marched into the room, setting the tea on a nearby stand.

"No, don't come in!" Rin screamed as she heard the door open.

"Tohsaka, are you-" Ayako began as she quickly jumped into the room, and stopped short. "Wha-wha-wha..." Her voice failed as she struggled to make sense of what was in front of her. She was...there, stuck to the wall and completely naked, save for a blindfold over her eyes. It was all too much for her, and she suddenly slumped as she fainted, Archer catching her before she hit the floor.

"A-Archer…let me down now," Rin said, trying not to cry. She had no idea what was going on and if Ayako saw her like this...she didn't want to have to erase her friend's memory, but she might have to.

"Get a hold of yourself Rin. She merely fainted, she'll be alright. Although, I imagine she'll carry that image with her for a while. Still, I suppose enough is enough..." Saying that, he released the mana for the sword pinning her to the wall, and she fell the couple of inches back to the floor.

She pulled off the blindfold and briskly brushed her tears away. "You're an IDIOT! If you weren't so damned blind…"

Archer moved forward and pulled her close, crumpling her hair as he did so. "And I thought you were enjoying the situation too. You troublesome Master..."

"Well, if you would have stayed and finished things I would have," she said as she returned the hug. "You finally got the hint and…maybe I took things too far too by being a bitch and taking advantage of you.

Archer chuckled again. "Maybe? Oh most definitely. You know, for someone who always tries to plan for things you never see the obvious."

"Well…" Rin said with a blush, "We need to do something with Mitsuzuri, and I'm still winning that bet."

"No you're not Tohsaka, not on my watch." Ayako said as she sat back up and looked at the two in a huff. "He's right you know. You never see the obvious, idiot."

Rin flushed and asked, "What do you mean not on your watch? I think it's pretty obvious where this was heading."

Ayako blushed deeply herself before standing up. "Damnit Tohsaka! Wake up already!" She shouted with a hurt look in her eyes.

Rin's eyes widened and she felt herself turn even redder. "Oh. Oh! Mitsuzuri…"

Archer slowly maneuvered behind Rin and after winking at Ayako he pushed Rin forward. Ayako quickly caught her and crushed her in a hugas she sobbed quietly. "Idiot...You never see things in front of you..."

"Ayako...you...you don't want anything like that with me," she said as she hugged her friend.

"Shut up. Like you've got any right to tell me how I should feel damnit." Ayako said as she pounded Rin's back slightly. "Hell, you've liked that guy for how long now and you still haven't done anything."

Rin said, "But my world's dangerous for you Mitsuzuri, and…now this has gotten even more complicated." She sighed as she looked up at her Archer for help.

For his part, Archer was taking this all very calmly. "I think you should just accept things as they are Rin. That business is over, and matters of the heart aren't to be trifled with, no matter who you are. Look at how I ended up."

Rin realized she was naked with the two people she cared about the most. "But . . . "

Ayako finally started to calm down as she stood there, rubbing Rin's back. "Hey...don't you want to know how I figured it out, Tohsaka?"

"Figured what out, Mitsuzuri?" Rin said as she reached for a blanket to cover up.

"...How I figured out that I loved you, idiot." She said as she lightly pounded her back again.

Rin smiled and asked, "How?"

Ayako paused for a moment to gather her thoughts, than sighed again. "For a while I didn't know. Hell, I never even though about it. After we made that bet I kept having guys come up and confess to me, but I'd always turn them down. There was something there that I felt they lacked, or I lacked, or something or another. You kept turning down the scores of boy that confessed to you too, so I thought nothing of it. Than a couple of months ago you started to seem...different. Your eyes would have this faraway look in them, as if wanting something you had briefly again, and would do anything to have it back. Than Archer-san showed up and everything changed. You'd keep bringing him up at school whenever we talked, and you always looked so happy when you spoke about him. And every time I saw you like that my heart would cringe. I tried to ignore it, I really did, but I couldn't damnit."

Rin bit her lip and looked at her Servant. She had been so ecstatic to see him again, to have him back, and she…just abused him. She than glanced at the two of them and said, "Mitsuzuri…I'm sorry." Then she looked at Archer and said, "Why do I screw up at the worse times?" She looked back down again and said, "I didn't mean to hurt you, Mitsuzuri, but…"

"That's when I finally realized why I kept rejecting every guy that came up to me. I didn't want them, I never did. I guess I felt that somehow you felt the same way." Ayako continued, not listening to Rin as she rested her head on her shoulder. She opened her eyes and looked at Archer. "Damnit, I hate having been slow to act like an idiot."

Rin stroked her hair and held her, knowing fully well the pain of something she couldn't have. She said, "Because I wanted someone else, someone who I thought I'd never see again…and you realized you wanted someone who was right in front of you and…now this is all too messed up."

Archer sighed. "Rin. It may seem a little...difficult to accept this, but I think you need something a little more...normal to balance out everything."

"…But I wanted you," she said as she looked up at him.

"And she wants you." Archer said firmly. "I have no intention of leaving you alone, and I imagine she feels the same."

Rin's eyes widened as a tiny smile crossed her face. She looked at Ayako and said, "If…we continue with this…there are things about Archer and I that you cannot tell anyone."

(You have unlocked the achievement: Harem! (Tohsaka Rin))

Ayako gasped, than crushed Rin even harder. "I don't care what you tell me, I can keep any secret. You should know that already damnit."

Rin laughed and said, "Well, true, but…I just don't want you getting hurt. These are things that might get you killed if the wrong groups found out that you knew about them. Having Archer's dangerous enough, but…he can handle himself."

Ayako looked up at her with curiosity now. "What, are you deeply involved with Yakuza or something Tohsaka? I never thought you'd be involved in something like that, although I guess it makes sense with Archer-san.

Rin said, "What I'm in makes the Yakuza look tame. Also, stop calling me Tohsaka. If the three of us are going to be together, you're going to call me Rin."

"But...Fine. But, you have to do the same for me, R-Rin..." Just saying her name made her embarrassed, but it was a start.

Rin smiled and stroked Ayako's hair and then stood up. "I'm a magus."

Ayako blinked for a second. Magus? "...Oh."

"I can use magecraft," Rin said as she held up her left arm to ignite her crest. The symbols appeared, bathing her in alien green light.

Ayako's hand unconsciously drifted down to run along the glowing green pattern that looked like some kind of horrific tattoo. "Wow, I never saw this before...And here I was thinking that by magus you meant you were a witch that seduced men or something."

"…Well, I sort of fail at seduction…I mean…Ah," Rin said failing as she moved to cover herself.

"Pfft...Hahaha!" Ayako couldn't help herself and burst out laughing. "You suck at trying to seduce apparently, but you know you exude an aura that attracts everyone to you, you know. Why else do you think you got so many confessions you idiot?

"Well, I know I'm not bad looking," Rin said with a huff, "And you're rather pretty yourself, Ayako. I've just…well, there was this one time but I was helping the other two out because Emiya-kun's an idiot and…" She stopped as she looked at Archer and said, "This when you were doing your heroic sacrifice."

Archer looked up, suddenly intrigued. "Oh? So, what did you do?

"Well, Saber needed prana, and to do tantric rites properly she needed to enjoy it too but he obviously knew nothing going in so I…got Saber ready and…" Rin's face heated up at the last part, how it ended with Shirou thrusting into Saber from behind while Rin licked the petite blond, tasting her maiden's blood and her and Shirou's lust.

"...Tantric..." Archer said.

"...Saber?..." Ayako said with questioning eyes.

"You know, the blond foreign friend of Emiya-Kun's," Rin said, "The whole story is going to take a lot of time to tell…" Then she looked at Archer and said, "Like I said, no one did anything with me. Which wasn't fair…"

"...Stop, Rin." Ayako said, surprisingly them both slightly. "No doubt it's a long story, but I don't want to hear about...that right now."

Rin flushed and said, "I'm sorry. I…might need clothing…" She realized she was stammering, not knowing what to do with Archer and Ayako in her bedroom.

Ayako than released her grasp on Rin and stepped back. "Hahaha, sorry. I kind of forgot that you were like that."

"I didn't," came Archer's reply.

Rin smirked and said, "You forget very little Archer." She went to grab a robe as she looked at Archer. "We need that tea."

"Well I had brought it up earlier. It should still be warm enough," Archer said as he moved back over towards the table he had placed the tea tray on earlier and poured three cups out.

Techlet
July 9th, 2011, 08:19 AM
Not exactly what I was expecting but, nonetheless, Harem Get!

Counterguardian
July 9th, 2011, 08:26 AM
"I didn't"

I lost it at here.

ringlhach
July 9th, 2011, 08:37 AM
Or they could all get nekkid. I'd fund that, actually.

Mike1984
July 9th, 2011, 08:44 AM
Damnit, Archer, don't untie Rin before she gets fucked....

Kieran
July 9th, 2011, 08:56 AM
Agreed - the state she's in, she's liable to kill him as soon as she's loose. Smart of him to use Ayako as a meat-shield.

Techlet
July 9th, 2011, 09:00 AM
Damnit, Archer, don't untie Rin before she gets fucked....

This. I imagine she would be a lot mellower and easier to deal with after she's satisfied.

amado
July 9th, 2011, 10:11 AM
yay! we got ayako.

Damnit, Archer, don't untie Rin before she gets fucked....

also this! I dont think ive read something like that yet. ignoring my age

Kratosirving
July 9th, 2011, 11:00 AM
Was debating on it as things went last night tbh, but decided to go more for a harem rather than a Archer fucking Rin on the wall while Ayako is out cold.


Not to say that it's completely out of the picture though, heheheh.

Techlet
July 9th, 2011, 11:05 AM
Or Ayako wakes up and fucks Rin on the wall while Archer watches in spirit form, doing commentary.

SeiKeo
July 9th, 2011, 11:35 AM
Or Ayako wakes up and fucks Rin on the wall while Archer watches in spirit form, doing commentary.

I lost it.

Kratosirving
July 9th, 2011, 11:45 AM
Yeah, that made me laugh hard.

Mike1984
July 9th, 2011, 11:50 AM
Was debating on it as things went last night tbh, but decided to go more for a harem rather than a Archer fucking Rin on the wall while Ayako is out cold.

Well, I was kind of hoping for the "Rin tied to the wall totally helpless" thing to actually lead somewhere....

Kratosirving
July 9th, 2011, 12:02 PM
Oh it lead somewhere, just not where everyone was expecting, heheh.

Alulim
July 9th, 2011, 01:49 PM
Sexings imminent...hopefully.

Bloble
July 9th, 2011, 01:50 PM
Rin's harem... will it expand endlessly? One day consuming all of Fuyki, and even Misaki? Who can stand against it's power?

Neir
July 9th, 2011, 01:50 PM
Oh it lead somewhere, just not where everyone was expecting, heheh.

To the chinese restaurant for some Mapo Tofu?

KOTOMINE HAS SEX WITH EVERYONE; STILL BORED

Kratosirving
July 9th, 2011, 02:46 PM
To the chinese restaurant for some Mapo Tofu?

KOTOMINE HAS SEX WITH EVERYONE; STILL BORED

...I FUCKING LOST AGAIN!

RadiantBeam
July 9th, 2011, 02:48 PM
Rin's harem... will it expand endlessly? One day consuming all of Fuyki, and even Misaki? Who can stand against it's power?

No one.

That's the fun part.

Techlet
July 9th, 2011, 10:24 PM
To the chinese restaurant for some Mapo Tofu?

KOTOMINE HAS SEX WITH EVERYONE; STILL BORED

THIS.

Eveonder
July 10th, 2011, 07:11 AM
Rin can't kill Archer. Indignant female fury can only injure till almost dead but fails to take the last hit point.