Quote Originally Posted by Spinach View Post
Very fast paced. Still a few places where you forgot to put spaces between words, and some words are capitalized that shouldn't be, and words that should be capitalized aren't. Also you keep spelling "damn" as "dam", lol.

Aside from that, WHO IS THIS LANCER WHO NEARLY KILLED MY HASSAN?



Well, that's not necessarily true. Take EXTRA Lancer for example. The dude's batshit insane and doesn't care about honorable battles at all. He just wants to poke you with his spear.
yeah but they are still battle hungry guys. the point is that the servants are easily pissed off that they hate their enemy as told in the story. I kind of find it hard to believe that they get annoyed so much that its hate. usually that only happens if they attack their masters and even then the servants wont hate the other since they are fighting to win.