Create your own Modern Fiction Servants

I though i should make this thread






Class:Saber
Real Name Acqua of the Back
Strength: A+
Mana: A
Endurance: A
Noble Phantasm : A+
Agility : A
Luck: B

Divinity Rank B++




Index of Modern Fiction Servants from the General Discussion Create-A-Servant thread:


A Song of Ice and Fire series:
[Rider - Aegon Targeryon] by ikoke

Assassin's Creed:
[Assassin - Altair Ibn La-Ahad] by Apple

Baldur's Gate:
[Berserker - Minsc] by drmchsr0

Bastion (video-game):
[Rider - The Kid] by Cyber Angel

Bioshock:
[Caster - Jack Wynand] by TheDivineDemon

Black★Rock Shooter:
[Saber/Rider - Black★Rock Shooter] by Zer0light

Blazblue:
[Saber - Hakumen] by mAc Chaos
[Saber - Ragna the Bloodedge] by mAc Chaos

Bleach:
[Lancer - Ulquiorra] by Paladin lord (first of two profiles in same post)

Braid:
[Caster - Tim] by MssrNeko

Campione!:
[Saber - Kusanagi Godou] by Blackdeath6031

Code Geass:
[Assassin - rouch Lamperouge] by mAc Chaos

Dark Souls:
[Assassin - The Dark Lord] by Apple
[Berserker - Gwyn] by Apple

DC Comics:
[Saver/Caster/Rider - Superman a.k.a. Clark Kent] by Larekko12
[Assassin - Batman a.k.a. Bruce Wayne] by MssrNeko
[Assassin/Berserker - The Joker a.k.a. Jack Napier] by TheDivineDemon

Dead Space:
[Caster/Ruler - Marker 3A] by Apple
[Berserker - Isaac Clarke] by GaterJ4wz (first of two profiles in same post)

Destroy all Humans!:
[Archer - Cryptosporidium 138] by GaterJ4wz (second of two profiles in same post)

Disgaea:
[Saber - Unknown Warrior] by Mcjon01

Dragon Age:
[Archer - Varric Tethras] by Apple

Drakengard:
[Saber/Rider/Berserker - Caim] by Neir

Doctor Who:
[Rider - Doctor Who] by TheDivineDemon

Don Quixote:
[Rider - Don Quixote] by Cyber Angel

Donkey Kong:
[Berserker/Archer - Donkey Kong] by firloz (first of two profiles in same post]

Dungeons & Dragons:
[Assassin(?) - Reshar] by Incarnite Azurnum

Final Fantasy series:
[Saber - Cloud Strife] by MssrNeko (first of three profiles in same post)

Gankutsuou:
[Avenger - Gankutsuou] by ylas

Guilty Gear:
[Saber - Sol Badguy] by Petrikow

Haiyore! Nyaruko-san:
[Caster - Nyaruko] by Lycodrake

The Hunchback of Notre-Dame:
[Berserker - Quasimodo] by MssrNeko

Hunter x Hunter:
[Caster - Chrollo Lucifer] by NailsInYourFeet
[Assassin - Chrollo Lucifer] by urca

Infinity Blade:
[Saber - Siris] by MssrNeko

Kingdom Hearts:
[Berserker - Terra] by Emperor Kiritsugu

The Legend of Zelda:
[Caster/Archer/Ruler/Rider/Assassin - Zelda] by Allon Marton
[Berserker - Link] by Moessei (real authorship: unnamed friend of Moessei)

The Lord of the Rings:
[Archer - Legolas] by Paladin Lord
[Assassin/Saber - Bilbo Baggins] by Asdfghl

Mahou Sensei Negima:
[Archer - Negi Springfield] by CanonRap
[Caster/Berserker - Negi Srpingfield] by Zer0light

Mass Effect:
[Lancer - Shepard] by mewarmo990
[Berserker - Jack] by TheDivineDemon

Marvel Comics:
[Saber - Taskmaster a.k.a. Tony Masters] by MssrNeko
[Archer - Black Widow a.k.a. Natasha Romanoff] by SpetsnazChick
[Rider - The Incredible Hulk a.k.a. Bruce Banner] by GaterJ4wz
[Caster - Deadpool] by MssrNeko
[Assassin - Deadpool] by willyvereb

Monster Girl Quest:
[Saber - Luka] by Bloble

Naruto:
[Assassin/Archer - Deidara] by firloz
[Lancer/Saber/Caster/Berserker/Archer/Assassin - Kimimaro] by firloz (second of two profiles in same post; now you're thinking with Multi-Classing)
[Assassin - Itachi Uchiha] by Lycodrake

No More Heroes:
[Saber/Berserker - Travis Touchdown] by I3uster

Nosferatu, eine Symphonie des Grauen:
[Berserker - Count Orlok] by MssrNeko

One Piece:
[Rider/Berserker/Ruler - Monkey D. Luffy] by rajieru

Persona (video-game series):
[Saber/Archer/Lancer/Caster - ???] by celsius (the Persona protagonist)

The Phantom of the Opera:
[Assassin/Caster/Berserker - Erik] by NailsInYourFeet

Pirates of the Carribean:
[Rider/Avenger/Saber - Jack Sparrow] by TheDivineDemon

Planescape Torment:
[Saber - Dak'kon of Shr'akt'lor-Risen] by ylas

Puella Magi Madoka Magica:
[Berserker - Miki Sayaka] by bhl88
[Caster/Archer - Mami Tomoe] by SVNB Backup

Pokémon:
[Rider - Red] by TheDivineDemon
[Rider/Ruler - Yellow] by Apple (from the Pokémon Adventures manga)

Power Rangers:
[Saber/Rider/Caster - Tommy Oliver] by TheDivineDemon

Pride and Predjudice:
[Berserker - Mr. Darcy] by You

The Princess Bride:
[Saber - Inigo Montoya] by MssrNeko

Rance Series:
[Saber/Berserker - Rance] by firloz

Read or Die:
[Archer - Yomiko Readman] by Cyber Angel

Saint Seiya:
[Berserker - Ikki Phoenix] by Mazyrian
[Saver - Shaka Virgo] by Mazyrian

Samurai Jack:
[Saber - Samurai Jack] by TheDivineDemon

Sharpe (novel and television series):
[Saber - Richard Sharpe] by Troika

Sherlock Holmes series:
[Assassin - Sherlock Holmes] by Blastedspider

Slayers:
[Caster/Archer - Lina Inverse] by Blastedspider

Soul Series:
[Saber - Nightmare] by mAc Chaos

Star Wars:
[Saber/Caster - Luke Skywalker] by TheDivineDemon
[Berserker/Caster - Anakin Skywalker] by TheDivineDemon

Street Figther:
[Assassin/Berserker/Archer - Ryu] by Shirou_EMIYA

Sword Art Online:
[Caster - Kayaba Akihiko] by firloz
[Assassin - Kirito] by Zer0light
[Assassin/Archer - Asado Shino] by Eva

Tales (video-game series):
[Rider - Senel Coolidge] by Ruca_Milda

That Guy with the Glasses:
[Caster - Linkara] by Paladin Lord

Toaru Majutsu no Index:
[Berserker/Archer/Caster - Accelerator] by Zer0light
[”unknown” - Kamijou Touma] by Zer0light

Touhou Project:
[Saber - Konpaky Youmu] by G-man
[Caster - Kirisame Marisa] by G-man
[Assassin - Izayoi Sakuya] by G-man
[Ruler - Shikieki Yamaxanadu] by petalferrous

Umineko no Naku Koro Ni:
[Caster - Frederica Bernkastel] by White Winter

Valkyrie Profile:
[Saber/Archer - Lenneth Valkyrie] by Neir

The Wheel of Time:
[Caster - Rand al'Thor] by TypeWannabe

Zorro Series:
[Assassin - Zorro][v2.0] by Paladin Lord (second of two profiles in same post)

Uncategorized:
[Archer - The Ancient Mariner] by Five_X
[Archer - Bird of Chernobyl][v2.0] by Yakumo-san (external website)
[Caster - Mesahime] by Memor-X
[Saber/Archer - Emiya Shirou] by TheDivineDemon (Shirou from the Hill of Swords FF)
[Saber - Emiya Shirou] by Firloz (Shirou from the Hill of Swords FF)[/SPOILER]

This reminds me of a little snippet I wrote a while back. I'm sure it breaks all sorts of rules, but w/e. Cookie to the first to guess the servant.

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"Enuma Elish!!!"

The King of Heroes sneered as he watched the huge explosion Ea made as it connected with the other Archer-class servant.

"Tch, worthless. In the end he was just like all the other mongrels," Gilgamesh gloated.

Thump, thump

Gil dropped the sneer at the sound. "Can't be. No one can survive being hit dead on by my Noble Phantasm!"

Thump, thump

The footsteps echoed again. Gil turned back and gaped at the sight. It was him, that damnable cowboy!

Archer walked through the smoke completely unharmed, his longcoat swaying with each step. He paused, his craggy face with it's seemingly ever-present scowl not hidden in the least by his wide-brimmed hat. His arms rested at his sides, each fist filled with the deadliest of deadly weapons. His long hair blew gently in the breeze as one hand rose to point a pistol at the arrogant king.

Though it was against everything Gilgamesh believed in, he began to feel what he could only describe as fear as he watched the impossible happen.

"Not enough gun," was all Gil heard before the first and only shot rang out.

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Originally Posted by Spooky

This reminds me of a little snippet I wrote a while back. I'm sure it breaks all sorts of rules, but w/e. Cookie to the first to guess the servant.

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"Enuma Elish!!!"

The King of Heroes sneered as he watched the huge explosion Ea made as it connected with the other Archer-class servant.

"Tch, worthless. In the end he was just like all the other mongrels," Gilgamesh gloated.

Thump, thump

Gil dropped the sneer at the sound. "Can't be. No one can survive being hit dead on by my Noble Phantasm!"

Thump, thump

The footsteps echoed again. Gil turned back and gaped at the sight. It was him, that damnable cowboy!

Archer walked through the smoke completely unharmed, his longcoat swaying with each step. He paused, his craggy face with it's seemingly ever-present scowl not hidden in the least by his wide-brimmed hat. His arms rested at his sides, each fist filled with the deadliest of deadly weapons. His long hair blew gently in the breeze as one hand rose to point a pistol at the arrogant king.

Though it was against everything Gilgamesh believed in, he began to feel what he could only describe as fear as he watched the impossible happen.

"Not enough gun," was all Gil heard before the first and only shot rang out.

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The Saint Of Killers

Saint of Godmodding, you mean right?:p

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Originally Posted by Gundam Meister

The Saint Of Killers

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Already? Fine, then.

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Qin Shi Huang, the First Emperor

259 BC - 210 BC
King of the Chinese state of Qin during the Warring States period, Qin Shi Huang lead his kingdom victorious against the other six and conquered them all, becoming the first emperor of an unified China and founder of the Qin Dynasty.
Widely considered a tyrant, he undertook many monumental projects (at huge human cost), and burned many books and persecuted scholars. He became increasingly paranoid later in his life, and was obsessed with obtaining immortality. Still, the unified China remained (even if his dynasty didn't), and so can be considered one of the (if not the) most influential emperors of all China's history.

Class: Saber
Alignment: Lawful Evil

Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: C
Mana: B
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class skills
Riding: C (He's proficient riding most vehicles)
Magic Resistance: B (Nullifies magic requiring three or less verses)

Personal skills
Military tactics: C (He is versed in the art of war)
Charisma: E (Leadership is increased, but morale decreases)
Magecraft: B (It was not registered in history, but he was a powerful magician and alchemist, even if in the end he couldn't obtain a potion of immortality. His magic specializes in support and building of constructs more than direct combat, though)

Noble Phantasms

The Great Wall - Bounded Field of Absolute Defense
Rank: B
Type: Anti-army
One of Qin's more remembered achievements is the building of the Great Wall, as defense against the northern nomads. In fact, he mostly joined previous dispersed walls segments. Also, it's not the Great Wall famous today as a tourist spot; that one was built during the Ming Dynasty (1268 - 1644), and is considerably to the south of Qin's one.
As one of Qin's greatest projects, when summoned as a Servant he gets this Bounded Field as its materialization. When deployed, he and his allies (chiefly his Terracotta Army; see below) get a substantial bonus to their defense.

The Terracotta Army - Invincible Golem Army
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-army
One of the greatest archaeological discoveries of the 20th century, in the tomb of the emperor Qin there was a whole army of over 8,000 life-sized terracotta soldiers.
In fact, this terracotta army is not a representation of his army, but his actual army: an accomplished magician and alchemist, the key to Qin's conquest of China was an army of immortal Golems made by himself, which was then buried with him.
As a Servant, he can summon its golems as he wishes; the golems spurt out of the earth and are ready to fight. Everyone is comparable with a lesser Servant, with strength and endurance of C and E in the the rest of the parameters (though without NP). They can be destroyed, but unless disintegrated they rebuild themselves in a few days.
He has access to the whole 8,000 golems; however, only the most powerful Masters could provided mana enough to summon more that a small fraction of them at once. However, were Qin to got hand of a greater mana provision, this NP could raise its rank to EX.

Name: Ado Edem
Class: Saber
Alignment: Neutral Unknown
Gender: True Unknown

STR: EX
END: EX
AGI: B
MANA: EX
LCK: E-
NP: EX

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: A
Riding: E

Personal Skills:
Prana Bursts: A
Levitation: A

Noble Phantasm:
- Slash Emperor: Double-edged sword that can grow into any size at the speed of thought in expense of chipping away the same amount from Earth.
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Fortress
Range: 1 - 99+
Maximum Target: 1

Yeah, I was pretty lazy.:p

Name: Vlad Tepes
The former ruler of Wallachia, his reign was noted for three things. A hatred of disloyalty, a hatred of criminals and a hatred of the Ottomans. A brutal leader he used vicious tactics to instill fear in his enemies and subjects, especially his over exaggerated use of impalement as a punishment. He ultimately died on the field of battle and helped inspire the fictional vampire Dracula centuries later/

Class: Lancer
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Gender: Male

Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: A
Magical Energy: C
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Abilities:
Riding: B. Has the ability to ride most animals but not holy beasts or demons
Magic Resistance: D. Nullifies single-action magic. Magic resistance equivalent to a warding amulet.

Skills:
Battle Continuation: B. It allows the user to continue fighting even through serious injuries and may even survive until they receive a clearly fatal blow.
Restart: B. The ability to escape battle. It can also return an unfavorable battle to the beginning (Turn 1) and leave the opponent with any injuries or weaknesses they may be experiencing.
Protection against arrows: D. The user may be able to dodge projectile weapons. However the user cannot defend against weapons thrown from a distance and cannot protect themselves from more than one weapon at a time.
Charisma: A. The ability to lead an army. More harsh orders can be given, though morale will fall.

Noble Phantasm
Field of Thorns:
Creates a field of stakes that impale any who isn't an ally and deals a single rank A+ wound to them. Those with a history of criminal activity, treason or an association with Islam will suffer an additional rank A wound.
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Army Noble Phantasm
Range:1-99
Maximum Target: 500 People

Furious Strike:
Takes his anger and performs a single piercing strike on them. If not immediately fatal the position of the spear and it's barbed edges will inflict further injuries (roughly rank B) on the victim if they attempt to struggle. During this time Vlad will be trapped along with his target and any attempts to remove his spear will require additional time.
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Personnel Noble Phantasm
Range-2-6
Maximum Target: 1 Person


Obviously no offense or intent to associate Islam with criminality or treason is intended. Just reflecting history.

Name: Amir Arsalan
The hero Arsalan, King of Roum (Istanbul). Notable for slaying the demon Fulad-Zerah, and his witch mother.

Class: Saber
Alignment: Lawful Good
Gender: Male


Strength: A
Endurance: C
Agility: A
Magical Energy: D
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: A+

Noble Phantasm
Shamshir-e Zomorrodnegar
Demon Hunting Blade
The blade used to slay the demon Fulad-Zerah, formerly the property of King Solomon. Grants A-rank Magic Resistance to the bearer. In addition, wounds made by Shamshir-e Zomorrodnegar cannot be healed by conventional means.
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-personnel
Range: 1-5
Maximum Target: 1

Eh, I want to post it again anyway.

True Name: Caim (Drakengard/Drag-on Dragoon)
The Prince of the Kingdom. Leader of the forces against the Empire and the Watchers. In a battle to defend the Goddess Furaie from the Empire, he was mortally wounded. In his captured castle he found a Red Dragon who had been shot from the sky and chained to the ground. So that both would live to continue fighting, they formed a pact, sharing each others' lives. When Caim is summoned, the Red Dragon is summoned as well, but remains in spirit form unless called by Caim (as Rider) to act as a telepathic translator to the Master. The Red Dragon does not need magical support from the Master, due to her nature as the Goddess Seal.

Class: Saber/Rider/Berserker
Alignment: Chaotic Good/Insane
Gender: Male

(Saber/Rider/Berserker)
Strength: A/B/A+(+)
Endurance: A/B/A+(+)
Agility: B/A/A+(+)
Magical Energy: A/C/A+(+)
Luck: C/C/B(+)
Noble Phantasm: D-B+/A++/C-A (Random)

Skills:
Eternal Arms Mastery: A
Able to bring the full power of any weapon he holds to bear. The result of having used so many types of weapons.

Riding: EX (lost as Berserker)
Possesses the ability to ride Dragons, as well as operate aircraft. No skill in ground-based machines.

Pact: A+
Caim has formed a pact with the Red Dragon Angelus. The price of the pact was his ability to vocalize in any way. In exchange, the two share a telepathic link, as well as physical powers. Caim's true power (as Saber or Berserker) comes not from his Noble Phantasm, but from his pact with the Red Dragon.

Mad Enhancement: A+
Caim's bloodlust and desire for revenge drive his power to absurd heights. When Mad Enhanced, all parameters are doubled. However, Caim will be largely uncontrollable by his Master until the enhancement is released.

Noble Phantasms
52 Weapons
Caim has access to the weapons he collected during his battle against the Empire, including the fearsome Hymir's Finger. The weapons are not all of the same quality, and his ability to use the magic of his staves is limited, due to his lack of magical training. When summoned as Berserker, Caim is unable to use any weapon but the longsword he received from his father, the King.
Rank: D-B
Type: Anti-personnel
Range: 1-15
Maximum Target: 1-25

Angelus (Rider only)
Red Dragon
Caim can summon the Red Dragon Angelus in her third evolution, her most powerful form outside of the Chaos Dragon. She is invulnerable to any attack below Rank B, and her fire alone can decimate a legion. Even if Caim is knocked from her back, she will continue to fight to protect him.
Rank: A++
Type: Anti-castle
Range: 5-100
Maximum Target: 1-400

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Originally Posted by willyvereb

Name: Ado Edem

Yeah, I was pretty lazy.:p

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My own take.

Ado Edem (Notes)
Class: Saber
Alignment: Unkown Neutral
Gender: Presumably Male
The last hope of humanity, Ado Edem was a modified human known as an Ether Liner, who possessed a Demonic Sword called Slash Emperor. Ado Edem fought against the A-Rays (Human/Creature artificially created hybrids), but didn't stand out to the level of a hero. However, when beings far above any being on the world arrived on Earth, Ado Edem was one of the very few beings which could actually fight against them on his own, and defeat them. In the end, he saved humanity, and was proclaimed a hero by the will of man, though his cause of death is unknown.

STR: A+++
END: EX
AGI: A++
MGI: EX
LUK: A+ (You don't survive a nuke with E- luck)

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: A
Riding: E

Individual Skills:
Independent Action: A (Uses Grain to maintain oneself)
Levitation: A (Nullifies Gravity)
Prana Burst: A
Clairvoyance: C
Military Tactics: C
Pioneer of the Stars: EX (He fucking saved the world)
Vitrification: B

Noble Phantasms:
- ??????
Barrier
Rank: A+++
Ado Edem's armor which he carried in battle at all times. It is completely sealed, and outer conditions do not affect Ado Edem because of it. It is an armor that can only be pierced by a strength equal to that of a celestial body (Aristoteles), a weapon capable of exposing the truth (Anti-World), or something the likes of True Magic.
- The Sword That Consumes Stars ~ Slash Emperor
Anti-World
Rank: EX
Originally in the form of a seed, it grows into a ornate double-edged blade, each of the blades capable of extending to a length equal to the enemy's size. The place where the blades join and Ado Edem's arm is is enveloped by a white crystal-like material in the shape of roses. Though extremely beautiful, it projects the essence of what humanity does: Destroy the world to protect one. This is because Slash Emperor chips away at the ground of the world one is in to form the sword.
Range: Varies
Maximum Target: 1 (Can indirectly harm others)

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Much more broken, and much more fitting.

Just a note - never hurts to name sources for your characters. Some are instantly recognisable, but others are not.

Well, Ado Edem is from Nasuverse. There, I wrote down where he's from next to him.

Shana aka. "Flame-Haired Burning-Eyed Hunter (Shakugan No Shana)
Class Saber
STR: B+
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: A+
LUK: B
Noble Phantasm: A++

Class Skill

Magic Resistance C+
Riding : E

Individual Skills

Flight: A
Prana Burst B+


Noble Phantasm

Fuzetsu

Anti Army A+


Fuzetsu is the most common of all unrestricted spells, and it also refers to the special dimension the Method creates; here the Crimson Realm and the real world intermingles, and all sorts of causalities, including time, are stopped for ordinary living beings and Mages. Flame Hazes are able to create such seals at will. Battles in the seal can damage real world objects, and harm the paused living beings (it is possible to reverse the effects, if one uses enough Power of Existence). However, if the Seal is ever unlocked during a battle, the damage is irreparable (special objects are needed to be able to move in the seal)



Tenpa Jyousai Heaven-and-Earth Sundering

When it comes to being stupidly, brokenly overpowered, here's a contender:

Yukari Yakumo
Youkai of Boundaries (Touhou)
Class: Caster
STR: EX
END: EX
AGI: EX
MGI: EX
LUK: EX
Noble Phantasm: EX+++

Noble Phantasm
Reality Marble: Hakurei Border Paradigm
Anti-Reality EX+++

Actualizes Gensokyo onto the local area. Forces all opponents to abide by spell-card/danmaku rules for as long as the Reality Marble persists. All enemy attacks not permitted by danmaku rules will be denied. In addition, the mana cost of Unique Ability: Gap Formation is reduced to zero.

EX doesn't have a multiplier. Just saying.

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Originally Posted by Erlkonig

EX doesn't have a multiplier. Just saying.

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Yukari manipulated the gaps between rankings so that the EX rank would also have multipliers.

Kidding aside, it really should just be EX.

It should be. If only there was a ranking somewhere above EX...

An EX can perfectly be above other EX, they just can't be measured by Servant powerlevels.

All EX means is that its "off the scale", or is something that cannot be measured.

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Name: Himura Kenshin
Class: Saber / Assassin
Strength: A+
Mana: D
Endurance: A
Noble Phantasm: ???
Agility: EX
Luck: B

Lawful Good

Noble Phantasm
Hiten Mitsurugi Ryuu
A sonic assassination sword style that aims to kill in as little time as possible.
Sakabatou
A reverse bladed sword that reduces his damage. However it also makes it more likely for his opponents to somehow becomes his comrades.

Abilities
Charisma/Leadership: B++
Riding: D
Presence Concealment: A
Magic Resistance: A

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