Giant Beast Hunting made me think more of Toriko than of Shokugeki no Soma
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Giant Beast Hunting made me think more of Toriko than of Shokugeki no Soma
I must get around to watching Toriko one of these days.
But aside from being one of Arthur's Skills, the idea behind using it came from one of my favourite scenes in One Piece which is the Sanji vs Absalom fight where Absalom tries to intimidate Sanji by taking off his shirt and revealing he's a Frankenstein of all these different animal parts and Sanji's reaction is to just eye him up and down and start naming all the different kinds of ingredients that he can make by stripping the meat off of Absalom's body after he's defeated him. XD
King of Treasures Gilgamesh
Originally posted Here
Class: Brawler
Alternate Classes: Archer, Caster
True Name: Gilgamesh
Alignment: Lawful Good
Armaments: N/A
Appearance
Bio
Parameters
Strength: A++
Endurance: A+
Agility: B+
Mana: D
Luck: D
NP: EX
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasms
Authors Notes
Interaction with other Sevants
Other Servants I created Mary Seacole Shileder Artoria Pendragon and Caster Artoria Pendragon
I'm guessing this is going to be a Gil focused on how he subdued Gugalanna. I get your intentions, but EX strength is just impossible. For reference, Tiamat "only" has A++ strength, which is the official top so far (only equalled by Asterios). I suggest you to chill with the overly high ranks and compare the power levels of official Servants first
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/...20100730235150
FC Link
Alternate Classes: N/A
True Name: Yael
Alignment: True Neutral
Origin: The Bible
Armament: Mallet, pegs
Parameters:
STR: C
END: D
AGI: C
MANA: D
LUCK: A
NP: C
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
Notes
Yael: I wonder if Sisera's fate is where "hammered" as a synonym for intoxication came from.:p
Jokes aside, this is a pretty well-done sheet. But one Personal Skill feels a bit too sparse even for someone whose legend was as specialized as hers. Wouldn't at least something like Mata Hari's Espionage be fitting?
But I rather like the kinds of Servants that can make do with a single Skill (and have been waiting for the opportunity to do one), in part due to how rare they are. Espionage was something I considered, but I feel that Presence Concealment does the job well enough for the purpose of her legend. She can't make herself invisible or anything, but she can fade away her presence just enough to seem weaker and more harmless or something to that effect.
I agree with Royd that one personal skill isn't enough. Given what you're saying in the Notes section, you could have given her Innocent Monster, even if it's at a low rank
Y'know, I was reading the section for the KoRT in Apocrypha's mats and the mention about fake catalysts for the eponymous 13 Knights being sold caught my eye and made me consider the hilarious prospect of trying to summon Arthur Pendragon with a fake catalyst and instead getting Arthur Uther Pendragon - the Neo-Druid leader and media personality.
I'd be so tempted to make a joke sheet outta that if I could be bothered. :roman:
Berserker
Identity: Conomor the Accursed
Also known as: Bluebeard
Height: 186 cm
Weight: 91 kg
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Attribute: Earth
Origin: France
Armament: Claws
Natural enemy: Judeal, Tréphine
Parameters:
Strength: C++
Endurance: B
Agility: A
Luck: E
Mana: B
NP: B
Background
Personality
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Relations
Okay, so you may be wondering why the title of Fake Berserker and the Gilles FC. This is just the first of a compilation of 7 "faker" Servants, a classification that includes Servants that are imposters/archetypes/share a legend with canon Servants, and that, due to their similitudes, are summoned with the same appearance as them. As it's been described in the Background section, Conomor is another possible origin of Bluebeard, hence the Gilles FC. I'm greatly satisfied with how this sheet looks, except perhaps for At the Boundary, which I may end up replacing by Golden Rule or a howl version of Fran's Lament of the Hollow Living.
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Also, the reference to Shirō in the second NP had to be done
Conomor: Cool sheet for what seems to be the true origin of the "Bluebeard" legend. I particularly like how you made his second NP more grotesque than just a typical "werewolf transformation" ability.
If you want to give Conomor an original Skill based on how he was rejected by both heaven and hell, I'd suggest one that lets him be unaffected by any divine punishment or holy blessing/sacrament. It'd be a double-edged sword since he'd take no damage from divine punishment attacks (like the flames of Hell), but also can't receive the benefits of positive blessings and healing magic. That's my idea, anyway.
=Berserker=
https://i.imgur.com/wuN1bID.png?1
Possible Alternate Classes: Assassin
True Name: Célestine R. - A Chambermaid
Gender: Female
Height/Weight: 170 cm / 50 kg
Alignment: Chaotic Insane
Place of Origin: France (Le Journal d'une femme de chambre)
S & M by Rihanna
=Parameters=
Strength: B+
Endurance: A
Agility: B
Mana: C+
Luck: A+
NP: B
=Class Skills=
- Madness (EX):
All parameters are increased. Sanity is not lost. It was never there to begin with.
Though a fictitious character, through her diary Berserker functioned as the keyhole in which Humanity’s ugliness rested its head—of hatred and disgust and harm to others and herself in the rampant of perversity. She, herself, often acted outrageously in pursuit of her desires behind closed doors, reveling in murder, debauchery, and those ideals she so complained about and those who commit to them.
=Personal Skills=
- Natural Beauty (B):
the allure of an unmatched beauty
Berserker can temporary increase her Luck. Furthermore, it serves as a fascination to those that catch glimpse underneath.
- Protection of the Faith (A+, False):
an absolution of body and mind borne from beliefs.
Though Berserker was not holy by any means, her insanely strong convictions broke through to an otherwise unachievable divine protection. The result of this are rational protests and irrational discernments.
- Oh, Misfortune! (EX):
has the capacity to ignore Command Spells and concentrate their effects to somewhere, something, or someone else
Woe to the weary, lest they become the one with collar ‘round their neck
=Noble Phantasms=
- The Heart of a Chambermaid (B, Anti-Unit):
a geiss from a woman interested in all things unpleasantly pleasing
Berserker is able mark the chosen target of her whims and appear and disappear and reappear in their presence whenever it suits her as long as they’re within sight. If they are behind closed doors, unable to be seen, then Berserker is capable of tracking their scent wherever they are or plan to go. The more righteous the target, the stronger the geiss becomes, the further binding it is. Cock. Bang. Boom. Lustful love written in blood.
Sticks and stones may break your bones, but chains and whips excite her.
=Bio=
N/A
Now here is the first profile of my Loki series i hope youa are not to shocked...
Loki
(Lancer)
Servant Lancer has answered your prayers ,heh *smirks* be careful Master...
https://i.imgur.com/qJdBa02.jpg
Height: 193 cm
Weight: 70~ kg
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Attribute: Earth
Origin: North Europe
Weapon: sickle
Other qualifying classes: Rider, Assassin,Berseker,Saber,Caster,Avenger,Beast of Betrayal
Likes: His pathetic Children,Attention,pranks and praise.
Dislikes: Being ignored,Odin,Thor
Talents: Sinister shemes(tactics),to sow discord
Natural enemy: ???
Parameters
Background
Personality
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Relations
Aside from your absolute butchering of the English language, which made this a pain to read through, it isn't so bad?
Surprisingly good sheet coming from you, except for your still horrible grammar and the OPness of the second NP
Yeah, that Second NP makes a Grail War pointless, and if a mere Servant could do that...
I talked with Koga about this over PM and it's not actually as game-breaking as it sounds. The tree needs five hours to fully take root and upon doing so, it needs to be planted in an area with plentiful leylines to have enough magical energy to grow. In a Grail War story I imagine Loki would spend the first half of the story skulking in the shadows and secretly setting up a territory for the tree. Near the end there'd be a big twist where he invokes it and throws the Grail War into chaos, forcing the remaining protagonist Servants to put aside their differences and work together to destroy the tree before it can grow to full size.
Basically he'd end up a final boss character like Shirou Amakusa from Apocrypha, whose schemes remain in the background for most of the story but totally derail the plot when fully revealed.