My advice to you, venomking, is to just stop. Just stop.
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My advice to you, venomking, is to just stop. Just stop.
He doesn't have Magic Resistance or any kind of other mental defense Skill so maybe someone can try to mind control him?
For what purpose though? He's literally built purely to stall for time.
Do you command him to start randomly attacking things just so someone else can actually hit him and finally put him down?
I think venomking's going with the idea that while he defeated all his opponents in life just by stalling until they exhausted themselves, he secretly wishes to fight an opponent who won't be defeated by that method and finally forces him to go all-out. Not even really sure why I'm defending the sheet honestly given the many problems it has, but that part in particular may be justifiable.
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I mean, a Servant who never attacks is going to be pretty much unworkable in a Grail War no matter what concept you go with, so some artistic license is probably necessary...
The whole stall for days tactic was just his defeated rivals being salty and spreading false rumors to try to discredit him. Didn't work since that sounded pretty amazing too...although also tedious as all hell.
It all spiraled into forum politics and he gave up trying to defend himself since doing so wasted time better spent fighting.
He's actually this raging dervish of fist destruction that rivals even great Pollux himself.
This whole sheet is actually under a Innocent Monster type obfuscation of real facts.
It was probably the exact same servant. I remember there being a very good take on him where his NP punch of singular destruction doesn't actually have a name because it was never once used in his life. It was a good take on the "not-a-pacifist-but-not-gonna-attack-you" style. Reducing him to "lol i just really wanna have a good fight plz" like so many others is a disservice to a unique outlook on combat.
This guy just sounds like Greek John L Sullivan
http://i.imgur.com/InLQAng.jpg
http://imgur.com/InLQAng
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William Tecumseh Sherman
Alternate Class: Berserker
Alignment: Lawful Good
Alias: Cump, The First Modern General, Commanding General of the United States Army
Origin: America
Parameters
Strength: (D)
Endurance: (C)
Agility: (C)
Mana: (D)
Luck: (B)
NP: (B)
Gender: Male
Likes: Peace, Freedom, Theater, Painting, Animals, Ulysses S. Grant
Dislikes: War, Slavery, Politics
Talents: Military Tactics, Leading others to victory
Natural Enemy: Hitler, Tyrants, Dictators
Attribute: Man
Armaments: Rifle, Sword, Pistols, Knife
Wish: World Peace…or something like that
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
That's an excellent Sherman. Blows mine out of the water in some ways, though I'm still proud of the "lava man" approach I went with for my own sheet. Was that an inspiration, by any chance?
It was on the old thread, so you could easily have never seen it.
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Sherman showing up actually makes me wonder what a Robert E. Lee Servant might look like. I'd do one myself except I have no idea what his NP could be (other then something to do with the whole "Lost Cause" legend).
Has anyone made a Nemesis sheet? I can't find it anywhere...
ok, my idea behind hi was as one of those humans born with super human, but were thata strength become an internal struggle for him to the point were he created a style of fighting were he never atacked afraid to cause tragedy by killing, he wants to be a hero who inspires not trhou the battle feald and not with bodies and tragedy and used boxing to inspire. and also when if fix the sheet latter, porabably tomorow i mean i know i said id do it tonight but medltonin mixed with dozen other sleeping pills says other wise, anyways i also mentioned it brefly that if he cant by any means dodge it will break the bones in order to dodge and while useing his np, his very arm might litterky rip from his body just dodge an attack and while yes it will reatacj it self and heal itself its not regerenation the damage is still there so a long drawn out fight actaully doesnt work to his advantage. so ye she cant die from the damage it still weakens him.
...I think I just found out where all the typos in your sheets are coming from.:p
Seriously though, unless you're exaggerating mixing together a dozen different sleeping pills cannot be a good idea. Especially since doctors agree sleeping pills only grant you like an extra 2 minutes of sleep anyway.
I actually do have a servant sheet coming, but I'm having way too much trouble trying to think what her 3rd NP will do.
My first Avenger sheet, I hope she's edgy enough to join the Avengers...
http://i.imgur.com/SMT2imB.jpg
Class : Avenger
Alternate Classes : Caster, Watcher
Identity :HeraInvidia
Origin : Classical Mythology
Alignment : Chaotic Evil
In Latin, invidia is the sense of envy, a "looking upon" associated with the evil eye, from invidere, "to look against, to look in a hostile manner. Invidia ("Envy") is one of the Seven Deadly Sins in Christian belief. Invidia is also the Roman name for the ancient Greek goddess, Nemesis, although both of them are different entities in reality.
PARAMETER
STR : E
END : E
AGL : E
MGI : EX
LCK : E
NP : A++
CLASS SKILLS
Avenger : A
A Class Skill of the Avenger class, representing the state of an Avenger as one that gathers people's hatreds and grudges onto oneself. It is easier for one to accumulate loathing and resentment. When receiving damage, mana generation is increased. At this rank, not only damage or negative emotion but the very being and presence of someone stronger or more fortunate than she is will be instantly converted into magical energy.
Oblivion Correction : C
A Class Skill of the Avenger class. People are creatures that forget many things, but an Avenger never forgets. The critical effect of Avengers who attack from beyond oblivion is strengthened. Avenger will not forget anyone she envies until they’re not worth being envied anymore.
Self Replenishment (Mana) : B
A Class Skill of the Avenger class. Magical energy endlessly gushes forth until revenge is taken. Recovers a minuscule amount of magical energy every turn. Avenger will always gain magical energy as long as her envy towards someone still exists.
PERSONAL SKILLS
Divinity : C-
A skill that measures of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast raises. It can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods. Those who have A Rank Divinity or above has reached the throne of a god. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called 'purge defense' in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig.
Avenger originally possesses high divinity, but it has been significantly lowered due to her “Innocent Monster” skill. Avenger is the Roman equivalent of the Greek goddess Nemesis, and is often associated with her, though this results in her being more and more envious of Nemesis, because she is far more famous than her. It can be said that Nemesis is Avenger’s nemesis.
Innocent Monster : A
A skill that denotes the attribute possessed by Servants whose true history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter, without concern for the actual person's will or appearance. As a consequence, the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Incidentally, this Personal Skill cannot be removed.
Although she was a goddess, Avenger’s reputation, history, and existence have been significantly distorted by myriads of tales, description and gossips that depicts her as the personification of malignant envy. Ovid describes the personification of Invidia at length in the Metamorphoses :
“Her face was sickly pale, her whole body lean and wasted, and she squinted horribly; her teeth were discoloured and decayed, her poisonous breast of a greenish hue, and her tongue dripped venom. … Gnawing at others, and being gnawed, she was herself her own torment.”
Mystic Eye : - (EX)
A Skill that denotes one’s possession of Mystic Eyes, capable of imparting magical effects upon a subject and interfering with the outside world. This skill is sealed due to her Noble Phantasm.
NOBLE PHANTASMS
Oculus Malus
The Primordial Evil Eyes
Rank : E-A++
Type : Anti-Unit
The Primordial Evil Eyes is the source and origin of all types of Mystic Eyes. The Evil Eyes is the Mystic Eyes that is found in various cultures and religion throughout the world. It is often associated with envy, reflecting the belief that envy originates from the eyes. Mystic Eyes and Evil Eyes are often thought to be the same concept, and in some ways, it can be said that this is true. The common “Evil Eyes” is a Mystic Eyes possessed not only by magi but also by normal humans, born not from magical energy, but from human emotions, either malignant or benignant. In short, Evil Eyes is a broader concept of the Mystic Eyes.
Avenger possesses the Primordial Evil Eyes, an ultimate Evil Eyes that has manifested into a Noble Phantasm due to her association with the concept of “Evil Eye”. The sense of envy is said to be the greatest emotion to ‘fuel’ the Evil Eye within the possessor’s eyes.
As a Noble Phantasm that represents the ‘origin’ and ‘source’ of all Mystic Eyes, the power and potential of the Primordial Evil Eyes that Avenger possesses is limitless. While mental interferences magecrafts are very common and are widely practiced by modern magi, the most common Mystic Eyes that can imitate similar effect are very rare. Avenger’s Noble Phantasm, however, are capable of ‘imitating’ the effects of magecrafts into her own Mystic Eye, which means that she can apply the effect of most magecraft to someone just by perceiving them with her eye. Because she is a goddess, Avenger can use various advanced magic from the Age of Gods to apply its effects into this Noble Phantasm. For example, she can emulate the effect of Medusa’s Cybele by applying petrifying spell into her own Mystic Eyes. Combined with her Avenger class skills which makes it easier to generate magical energy, this Noble Phantasm’s potential is indeed limitless.
Personality (Incomplete)