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If you were the writer, do you think you could have fixed any plot holes or write things/events better in Arcueid or Ciel's route?

I am not sure what to think about Dr. Arach. She seems partial mary sue like. The whole dead apostle evolution via syringe just doesn't sit right with me.

I meant having Noel in the final battle instead of Arcueid (I felt the Noel battle felt like another Rin vs Sakura battle from HF). I didn't really understand how Roa possesses Shiki anyways.

what's your opinion? Should Noel have been the final antagonist in Ciel's arc? (we know what happened in the original game, but if they went more original)

You think they will redo the whole Roa/SHIKI dynamic? And have SHIKI as a separate character completely? That was something that irked me in the original? Like WHAT happened in between or in the...

I dont think intenti is needed though, isn't it a biology thing? Wasn't Noel just a bad fit, though not sure why she didn't just go dead/ghoul instead? I mean, wasn't that the whole part where Mario...

200 cc a week she said?

I mean, shiki cam allow satsuki to suck his blood and then just use his mystic eyes to purge himself of his vampirisation

You can pretty much make a satsuki game all by itself. You can already have 2 routes here. What if she stayed a human, you have the normal days that shiki may have lost. And 2nd route is the whole...

You even have a real reason why Arcueid has to return as well. (I sense somebody hateful is trying to steal my love)

Or that Altrouge is planning to end the world or something or is just tsundere that her imouto has gotten the love she wanted. I don't know....

Ok, took the time to read part of Ciel's route now....MY problem is that I felt like Dead Apostle Noel is what Satsuki's route SHOULD have been, had she been included in the near side route. I mean,...

My guess is for Sacchin would just be her and Shiki vs Nero, while Arcueid/Ciel deal with Roa or Akiha/twins vs SHIKI.

Holy crap, it's been 7 years since I wrote the last chapter. Anyways, chapter 4 complete is up on fanfiction.net, read it there.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8311566/4/Severed-Bonds

Damnit, you just made me thought of something. (+) x (+) = (-). Morgan and Arturia (large chest) multiply together becomes a flat chest. xD

Mordred showing up was was like a school yankee negotiating with the school council president in order to wipe out the local delinquents while demanding for Jeanne's lunch money (command seals) for...

Is the drama cd on preorder already? DOn't see anything on amazon.jp

During rewriting chapter 4, I need to get the timeline straight to write Shirou's portion of the story, please feel free to correct me.

1. Fate/zero

2. 5 years later- Kerry dies. Shirou starts...

Wow, Kirei is going to raise Ayaka? If that's the case, THEN I could see Ayaka fearing Kiritsugu more and in extension Shirou, because Kirei 'hates' Kiritsugu. Shirou....well....he kind of get alongs...

So Ayaka is now a possible osana najimi/rival to Shirou. I can ship this. xD

@nitewind: Unfortunately, my beta has been consumed by his life circumstances and unable to beta anymore, so back to squareone. No beta lol.


Oh and thanks to kinlyki, the title page is...

It's the damn spell check. I'll go back and look through all of them later when I come back from work tom.

More like I have the pictures, just edit it to the way that it seems like a title page. What I had in mind is a picture of Ilya on the left (with a bluish tint), Shirou on right (with a orange/redish...

I feel bad for not posting anything for so long. But to make sure that my readers don't feel abandoned, I will post part 1 of chapter 4. Other parts would be posted eventually as I rewrite parts of...

I don't think the Fate (type moon) panel made the cut this year.

Well, there is a fanart on the web where it shows Kiritsugu hands Homura a grenade while telling her, "Use it only if necessary," whereas Homura responds with, "Yes master/teacher."