It becomes more readable and less "breaks your train of thought" definitely.
But then it becomes less immediately-apparent to which word the Japanese text is linked to. Maybe if the English words...
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It becomes more readable and less "breaks your train of thought" definitely.
But then it becomes less immediately-apparent to which word the Japanese text is linked to. Maybe if the English words...
Do they also ride around on mammoths all day long?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=reOLeLX0Q9U
Fun to read, yes. Beautiful? Well...
I have to say that -- while that thing looked...
White mud, remains of a person...
Lio was reduced to white ash. Is that significant in some way?
VOLCANO MAGIC!
Your description, and musing about, Iceland made me imagine a place that...
Awesome story. Looking forward to more.
One of the nicknames for Mercer -- or at least, it is on SpaceBattles -- is, indeed, "hobo shoggoth."
Hmm...
Blacklight is theorized/described as being "primordial life"... In Nasuverse terms,...
The story of Cross's father and the Ryougi he beat to get the sword, reminds me a bit of some Cracked articles I read on badass soldiers from WW1/2. Some of them did some crazy shit that really just...
It's good, but its like over a million words long...
Oh, heh, but the last boss fight has some hand-to-hand fighting... And "It Has To Be This Way" is a pretty cool theme.
Although I do...
Truly, being Lio is suffering. He can't even pull off being cool when alone!
Maybe something in the setting of Worm? That's also a ridiculously long (but really good) work of fiction... one...
Thanks guys. :)
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SpaceBattles.com is an internet forum. Despite the name and what it started out as, its branched out to all sorts of genres and stuff. It's got a Creative...
Since this fic sometimes gets recc'd, or brought up as an "this fic updated" mention, on Spacebattles would you guys be willing to remove the mildly NSFW picture links? I don't want to miss out on...
I lost my shit at this.
... And then again, 5 seconds later.
Heheheheh... How does that even happen? How do you even come up with a plan that ends up looking quite like that at the end?
Interesting dialogue, as usual.
There's a schedule?
Prognosis: at most, five days to live.
Are you fuc-
(That last one's a joke, Shirazumi.)
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At that time, I was...what was I doing then?
Moping on the...
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I wonder if Pariah or the Three Kings can manipulate things enough to keep somebody from being killed by bullets. And if so, under what circumstances they'd do that. And also what...
I agree with all of this.
Dullahan's world just seems so... rich.
Actually, I for one don't have a single problem with the pace of the plot. I don't get the "GET ON WITH IT" feeling at all,...
I like how Lio constantly referenced the different ways Touko got stuff out. "That warehouse from the Last Crusade", indeed...
Also, the brief mention of MacPherson again was... touching.
Well. I'm hoping to see the mishaguji do something in the next update? :p
Which also gives an interesting base-line for the opponents who manage stuff, like Cross.
It does make them...
You know, I just gotta say that I feel for the new characters you make, have them do something (or serve as the POV character for a chapter or two) and who then fuck up and die somehow.
Its sad to...
The idea of "explosive collar" is "to have a thing that, if meddled with or if given some signal, kills the person." It's a way to take a person hostage. And there are ways to avoid a telekinetic...
Chapters 9 and 10 are both readable now. Though I actually read the update on FFN.
... It's strange, since I am able to read your normal posts perfectly well. It was only the long story posts that...
They could put her in an explosive collar type thing.
Or otherwise ensure that they can automatically kill her with the press of a switch -- or perhaps instead require the press of a switch to...
Personally, the biggest problem for me isn't the formatting...
But the fact that chapter 9 and 10 were both posted in white text. Which means I can't see shit.
I guess I'll read it when it...
I think it'd be easier to follow, if it used 2-5 sentences long paragraphs to describe, maybe? By which I mean, if you have 20 sentences, split 'em into multiple paragraphs, rather than having it as...
I don't have any trouble with the tangents.
I think they're cool.
The gazebo thing was meh though, but probably because I'm not good at visualizing things -- it meant that despite being...
Interesting stuff...
Eh? Also interesting stuff I'm glad to have read, but I don't see the relevance to my post? Or was this a tangent you went on, rather than stuff that addressed the rest of...