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Much clearer... and I was intending on the out-of-context power being within context as per an Origin Story for the SI. Should I write the Origin Story first, then, to make it clearer?

Er... Kieran, I think you might want to fix the last sentence you typed in your previous post, because I'm having trouble reading and understanding it.

As for the rest of your comments... those...

Alright... is there anything else I need to fix about this first set of chapters? I'm honestly confused and concerned about the matter.

You're welcome. :) I hope you get to update soon enough with the details.

Okay, hold on a fair second... yes, I know it won't be a "fair second" when you see this.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aALun5u1bGcuzyqzlYJ3FzlUF05mFlPG0UsUVDPcQvw/edit?usp=sharing

There...

I think, in the spirit of staying consistent, you should go with the non-Type-MOON options. I don't have a strict answer as to why, but I feel it's important, truth be told.

Hey, Kieran, question for you... do you happen to have any luck using Google Docs for anything? I ask because I have something to show you from the writing I've done for my stories.

If Google Docs...

Thanks for the heads up, man. Also, I'm writing more content for this story with the plan being that I write a backlog for the entire story (or series of events that lead up to this).

Hey, Kieran, could you please help me describe the inside of Avalon Castle on Phantasmagoria Island? I can't possibly give a description of it without your input on the matter.

I vote for both alterations to be made. I like them both enough. :)

Thanks for the jumping-off point for Rin, man. I appreciate it, truly. :)

I hope that Kieran manages to canonize the Omake at this rate... you know what I mean?

Uh... is it just me, or did the creators of The Addams Family get inspired by Lovecraft? Also, I was mistaken about Abigail's family name. It's Williams.

Er... who's Great-Aunt Lavinia? There's no mention of who she is on that page.

Oh, right, are the Addams's related to a certain Foreigner-class Servant named Abigail? I mean in this worldline...

Let me get to watching that video you linked about Nero momentarily.

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So... what's Wednesday's beef with Frid?

Yes, actually, it is. :)

Thanks, man. I need it a lot, to be fair.

Okay, that makes sense... I guess that means I need to go back to the drawing board for what happens while Rin's away. My idea involved it being a multi-story affair, which would take shape as each...

Oh, Kieran, I have a question for you. Is it possible for some entity to leave something within Phantasmagoria that corrupts the entire area into something akin to a super dark eroge? I have an idea...

You're welcome. :) Now... time to fix up a general outline of what I have in mind for Rin and the rest of the Warriors of Light. Could you please find some way to send Rin on an outing for this to...

Uh, Kieran, you forgot to remove the last / from the image's URL. Just a heads up.

Okay, I think I have a better idea of how to address the issues I've had with my writing for this project. My opening story in this lineup is the origin of my SI in this iteration, then we'll have a...

See what I mean? I don't have a clue what you were really talking about.

Guilty Gear sounds likely, though that might be me getting something wrong.