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It was fine. You got the basics across. Happy times for all three, with no jealousy. And Takara accepting Hermione's affections (and presumably vice versa). Besides, if you feel it's inadequate, you...

Would Tsumi defeat Voli pretty easily then as well? He couldn't permanently kill him thanks to the Horcruxes...but a temporary death?

So Tonks and her mother are both named Dora? Is Tonks a middle name or nickname then? The first part of Nymphadora's intro confused me for that reason. Still, it was a nice little Cameo of the other...

Nice update. It's nice to see that despite the general plot of this book being relatively "simple", you still manage to throw in enough conflict and character development that it feels anything but....

Nice chapter. The Blair meeting has interesting possibilities for the future, but sadly they will have to be put on hold for a while. Also, the Tracey death flags are being raised. Though if it does...

Liked the chapter. The Takara internal monologue was both amusing and cute. The thing about the gun though, honestly, just about anyone would have no difficulty handling the recoil from your run of...

Nice surprise to see a new chapter early. I wasn't expecting one until Sunday.

Nice to see you find a potential solution for how the Stone and the Elixir it produces should be handled, and one...

Nice chapter, quite enjoyable. Not too much else to add right now. Though I will mention that I'm looking forward to the teasing that Ilya is doubtlessly going to inflict upon Rin for getting caught...

Good chapter Kieran, looking forward to more. Also, out of curiosity, how long is it in universe until Halloween? ;)


You know, most laptops nowadays give you the option to toggle the mousepad on...

Fun chapter.

Shin is slowly but surely moving ever closer to the megalomaniacal evil villain ideal. And if his sister decides to leave him alone as you stated, then it wouldn't surprise me if it...

Alright, finally got a chance to read the latest chapter. The bunker was an odd find, and the potential breach of the Statue of Secrecy could well turn into a book of it's own should you take it far...

Has anyone else guessed/made a prediction of the ending?

I'm thinking that Jon isn't actually Eddard's son, he is the son of Eddard's sister, Lyanna. We know that Ned's sister died in a room that...

Didn't realize Voldiemort lacks all of his counterpart's knowledge. If he's just a kid, then even Dumbledore's vast knowledge means it's little more than a comprehensive textbook without practice....

See if your family won't let you drink a little. A beer or glass of wine with dinner will introduce your body to alcohol, and at least build up a base level tolerance. If you want more, go for two....

Nice and original concept. :)

On a friend's recommendation, I am just starting Piers Anthony's Incarnations of Immortality series, with On a Pale Horse.

Meh, Sturgeon's Law. There are still hidden gems of stories buried under all the crap. And if the amount of crap is closer to 99%, those gems are still there.

The tough part is somehow navigating...

This is the HPverse, where characters regularly conjure items and violate conservation of matter with nary a raised eyebrow. Where time itself is subject to the manipulations of schoolchildren....

Nice chapter Kieran.

Looks like Ginny and Luna, with Neville, have their work cut out for them. Fomenting a quiet resistance and rebellion with people already inclined to take up one's cause is...

Wouldn't Voldy be long dead before they even consider the logistics of mass producing the cure sans immortality, much less making it public?

Are Takara and Hermione going to get around to drinking the elixir themselves? Takara should be able to do so without any ill effects. Hermione, I'm guessing, could only survive the process through...

Well, that's bloody unfortunate timing. The odds stacked against them are worse than ever, and his best spells just got diminished in power.

Do werewolf animagi, being still Dark and all, get an extra boost to Dark spells? Also, now Galen at least has a working defense against dementors. He may or may not be able to cast a Patronus,...

Saw it recently. The film wasn't bad. It wasn't a as good a reboot as Batman Begins in my opinion, but could have been much worse as well.

The plot was reasonably tight, the special effects good....

Oh, I'm sure he realizes Voldy's planning on using him. Shin grew up with the Tohnos, so this sort of thing isn't anything new to him. They're each planning on using each other, and each knows what...