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Chapter 1: Snow and blood

The little girl was having a dream.

An unpleasant one, to be sure: Seven lights surrounded her, burning like blood-soaked stars. Her body was being set ablaze: It...

Chapter 0: The same hell, another savior


A raging fire.

Flames so high that the sky itself was painted with red.

The ground, too, was drenched in the color of blood. That goes without...

It's looking pretty good, keep it up!

Chapter 8: Mephistopheles






The creature, bathed in azure flames, looked at Lancer with disdain.

"Look at this, King of the Dwarfs, this is the face of damnation!"

Is there any way to change the length of images in this forum?

BTW, the faceclaim of "demon caster" is Ergo Mundus in his unleashed form, from the Gate of Memories game.

Chapter 7: Tarnished Diamond






The man with the lightning-like tattoo was rushing through the corridors.

His companion, the silver-haired swordsman, silently looked at the pulsating...

Chapter 6: Human





An ant opposed the blood empress.

Defying all common sense, a small creature refused the will of the crimson royalty. It was madness indeed.

Corrections appreciated and done ^^

The girl that holds the microphone is not a Servant, she's someone from a minor Holy Grail War in which Soren participated.

It's been a weird month, I had...

Sorry, I've been pretty busy this month. Here's the continuation of the war.




Chapter 5: The mad demon's feast

Well, as Spirits of Hatred, I guess all the Avengeres are bound to be edgy in the end haha.

About this Avenger: Yeah, it's not the actual Red Riding Hood, but something that's still completing...

Hi! Sorry, I won't have much time to post until Friday, but I don't want to let this thread remain inactive for too long, so I'll try to find some time to post interludes from time to time. If...

Ok, thanks! I'm posting an "interlude" chapter to see if I find the right format. If it's ok, then I'll start to "re-format" the chapters that are already published. Maybe add something like...

Are you sure that Tokiomi would be unable to maintain Enkidu? He was a dick, but theoretically he was a top class magus.

In theory alter emiya has no memories, so... If we were following UBW...

Would you consider the format of the last chapter an improvement, then? Considering that now everything is together as a block of text and the spaces indicate a separation. That's how I saw it in the...

Chapter 4: Crimson star




The petite body of the silver-haired girl rested over the luxurious bed, covered with the Holy Shroud her Servant provided. The bed was also his doing, of course....

Hi! Thanks for the comment ^^

What do you mean by line-break? Just "erasing" the "Enters" between lines?

For example:

The boy was standing in a white room.
Around him, the colorless walls...

Glad to see someone else reading that manga. Are you also reading Happiness, by chance?

BTW, has anyone read Guilty Crown: Lost Christmas VN? It caught my attention, but the GC anime killed almost...

Hi! Today I couldn't post the chapter, so instead I'll post the info of the two servants whose true identities are revealed. The next chapter features Rider, whose identity is pretty obvious, so next...

Well, it's true that there's a cast switch around chapter 85, but the old cast is strongly present too, and currently there are a few "sub-groups" of main characters. The first part is about the main...

Currently reading Tower of God. Pretty cool story and great worldbuilding. The art of the first chapters isn't very good, but it skyrockets after the timeskip.
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Has anyone there tried Anima: Beyond Fantasy? It has strong influences from various anime/mangas, including Type-moon works (Heck, you can even play a character with Mystic eyes of Death Perception).

I'm the bone of my procrastination,
Guitar is my hobby, coffee is my blood.
I have created over a thousand fics.
Unknown to 2000's music, nor known to filthy Dark Souls casuals.
So as I write,...

Is anyone interested in beta-reading mi fic?http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/7542-Fate-Parousia

Asclepius is identified as the child with a serpent staff.