Errr... sorry to say this, but you should probably have someone take a look at your work for errors. I only glanced through it so I didn't find all of them but those that I did, made reading this a...
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Errr... sorry to say this, but you should probably have someone take a look at your work for errors. I only glanced through it so I didn't find all of them but those that I did, made reading this a...
Hmm.... the epilogue is kinda confusing with some loose ends (which I think can be answered with after stories).
What are they fighting now? Why the need for the distraction so that Takara can...
Huh? Isn't this supposed to be a sequel instead of a prequel? Why can't Galen recognise Takara?
Err... Do we do it like this?
An extra person X was on the island and was responsible for the murders. Whether that person arrived before or after the rest of the group at the mansion is...
Wait. The Miyuverse Shirou died? That can't be right.
Also, the thing about Miyu becoming biological siblings with Shirou can't be right either. It was Miyuverse Shirou's wish that was granted,...
....F**king YEEEEESSSSS x9999999999999999999.
Ahhhh (lamenting) if only this would be continued. Unfortunately, I know better than to hope.
Bioshock? At least I think it is.
Seeing this, I wonder what Galen's response will be if they end up in Silent Hill or The Evil Within?
Ohhhhh. So what you meant was that Mileena was 'parent adopting' instead of 'child adopting' Hermione. Now I get it.
Mileena asked to call Hermione her mother. So I don't think it's a problem of perspective though. Unless I'm missing something.
BTW. Thanks for the video. It definitely answered some questions.
Err... I'm gonna need some context. Don't know enough about FNaF to understand what's going on.
Also, 'Hermione getting adopted by Mileena'? Isn't it the other way around?
Takara - Soul Stone
Shirou - Reality Stone (UBW's complete resurrection?)
Galen - Power Stone (Thunder/Lightning IS a symbol of power of sorts)
Aoko Aozaki - Time Stone
Rin - Space Stone...
I think Edmond Dantes/The Count of Monte Cristo fits more.
Other than the 'toppling corruption and injustice through trickery', he's also an Avenger in FGO which is the same class Galen was.
Hey, where's Illya? And Ai?
Still trying to make Galen's life hell even in heaven, huh? BTW, what do you mean by 'Two or three apiece'? I'm not sure of the nuance.
Kiritsugu vs Voldemort, Round 2.
After all, Kiri's gonna be Voldy's prime target after what the Emiyas had done to him and his plans. There's also that grudge from the Hall of Prophecies.
In that case:
Dark Souls -> Shirou - Fire
Demon's Souls -> Takara - Demons
Shirou vs Voldemort. Son vs Father.
A Star Wars match up.
Takara vs Shin.
A payback long overdue.
Galen vs Greyback.
Kieran, you're really sadistic if you sent Galen into that world.
What bar and which classic?
Say, what's the timeline in Death Note for this part?
I both love and hate these kinds of teasers. I love it because it makes me brimming with anticipation. I hate it because it's unlikely to have a continuation.
Sorry for the late reply.
Anyway, I still think that the premise is still insufficient. Like I mentioned, Galen and his cohorts wouldn't have let the charges stick. Statute of Secrecy be damned,...
... That doesn't make much sense. I don't care how influential the guy was supposed to be is. Without magic, there is no way that Galen (and his cohorts) would've let the charges stick. One dose of...
Err... I'm not sure what just happened. Can anyone explain this to me? Why can't Takara recognize Galen?
Are there any problems when comparing Saber with her Lancer counterpart (Specifically, one part of her)? She wouldn't Excaliblast me would she?