All right. Just to settle this: The matter of Archer's memories of Sakura was planned out when I first plotted this story in 2009, and was locked in stone when I released Chapter X in 2011.
I did...
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All right. Just to settle this: The matter of Archer's memories of Sakura was planned out when I first plotted this story in 2009, and was locked in stone when I released Chapter X in 2011.
I did...
XVI. 2/8: The Archer Monologues Revelations
XV. 2/8: Necrophilia Salem
Multiple first-person POVs are an even worse idea than first/third shifts. They're even harder to justify in-universe, and unless the new narrator is immediately identified, you knock your readers...
She would ask you to show her particular Personas with specific skills, and each time you did, her SL would go up a rank. It actually makes a fair bit of sense, when you think about it--Personas are...
Are we sure that's CG Archer? My impression(/trying to match up with canon) was that was Shirou, still alive, after having made his contract.
Taiga...well, Shinji kicks her during the Bloodfort like he did in Fate. Unlike in Fate, though...
(Shinji pays for it.)
Eastern for me. If When I write, I try to hear the characters' voices. As they're speaking Japanese, for the most part, the Eastern order flows better.
(For example: Listen to Kotomine saying...
It's been a while since I went through the index. Let's see what jumps out at me...
+1
Fate Revolution Online: Kayaba Akihiko using SAO as an involuntary magic tutorial device for the players...
The War finally started in chapter 22.
The FFD fight scenes are pretty good, but as far as sticking to the Servants' canon capabilites...well, it's FFD. It goes without saying what happens to...
It's in the lemon section.
Heh.
Romance isn't a big factor in this story, but I will say that when the dust clears (as in, time-skip epilogue) there will be three final pairings. Shirou's in one of them.
You're dwelling too much on physical pain, I think. The one thing that struck me about his deaths in canon was how quick they were--he barely saw Berserker before he went splat in Fate, and he never...
This question can only be answered with a definitive, emphatic...
...shrug. :D
He still has a role to play, yes, but I'm loath to give any spoilers about that beyond the hints in the story...
Something impossible, under any other circumstances.
No worries about the thread. I don't mind.
1) Whether she should have known about Kirei or not, going by UBW, Caster didn't. She attacked Kirei, but didn't make sure that he was dead (or at...
Which Archer part? :)
He wears a lot of different hats in this story. He's one of the main movers of the plot, and he plays a key role in the resolution.
The sex is a part of the latter, and...
Removing Shirou was a means to an end. The original idea was to pair up an uncorrupted Sakura and Saber as Master and Servant, and doing it as a continuation from the first bad end was the most...
As far as I can tell (being more or less a lurker, I can't say for certain) these threads are usually created by the authors themselves to post story parts within the thread. I never saw much point...
Not dead.
...
No, seriously! It's not dead! :p
I had some problems with the plot, and then work went to hell around August, but that's behind me now, and I'm hoping to have the next chapter...
Any chance of the list in the OP being put in alphabetical order, or something along those lines?
In the meantime, +1 to:
-Tainted Ideals
-That Ever Illusive Utopia
-Chaos Theory
-Fate/Far...
Listen to Elf, for she speaks great wisdom! :)
That being said, she did touch on one of my pet peeves of writing advice:
The principle is valid--and extremely important--but the problem...
I'm an obsessive planner. I've learned the hard way that writing freely is a good way to write myself into a corner, so I try to work out a fairly detailed and coherent outline before I begin a...
I think there was a timeskip somewhere in that chapter that went by me.
That said, this is shaping up to be an interesting War, when Third Fang finally gets around to writing it. (Setting aside...
The impression I got from HF True was that they were more concerned about hiding Shirou than Rider, but that even so they were going to be making waves--as a group--in the future. Rin's initial plan...