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    Tsukihime - Nanaya side

    Hello everyone, I'm Skyfire, a new comer to this site and seeing your fanfics made me want to try and make my own fanfic.....
    The plot I'm starting on is a somewhat reversal of Nanaya Shiki's and Tohno Akiha's places. "What if the Nanayas killed the Tohnos, Akiha was the only survivor and was the one who got adopted?" Also, the Nanayas are the guardians of Misaki city instead of the Tohnos

    Right now, I'm still thinking of how the personalities of Nanaya Shiki and Tohno Akiha would be.

    Can anyone suggest to me how the two of them would be like?

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    Nanaya Shiki would probably be like a less insane version of his Kagetsu Toyha self.

    As for traumatized Akiha, I don't know. But you'll need an explanation for why she survives in a village full of people who freak out when they see her.
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    Great idea, tough to write.

    (Bonus points for it being Akiha-centric)
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    Quick question what about Roa and the maids ?

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    Thank you

    By the way, Akiha wouldn't be able to fight enemies like Nrvnqsr and Roa right? even if she did inverse?
    I guess I have to leave it to Shiki to do all the fighting...

    Roa possesses Shiki's original sister *ahem* AKIHA who tried to kill Akiha out of jealousy since he was close to her.
    Nanaya Kiri kills her but she manages to survive and makes a comeback in the middle of the story...

    Since I..... eh..... only read Arcueid's and Akiha's story, Hisui is simply Shiki's silent maid while Kohaku is Akiha's maid who will probably be teasing her occasionally. No sad backstories since Nanaya Kiri nor *ahem* AKIHA would be doing *that stuff*
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    She can fight Roa, Nero is impossible though.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Erlkonig View Post
    Great idea, tough to write.

    (Bonus points for it being Akiha-centric)
    this.

    Also difficult to not overwank Nanayas.
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    Roa is only within the DAAs as an Extra, just because he can't die.

    Nrvnqsr is there through actual power, and in the 10th position no less. The gap of power between them is immense.
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    Who will Roa be if SHIKI is dead, or is SHIKI not dead? Will the maids play into this, and how will Arc factor in?

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    Right, I planned for Nero to send half of himself to fight Shiki for the first time (I'm not sure whether to involve Arcrueid yet and how much of a role should I give to Ciel)
    Shiki kills Nero instantly but since he just killed 333, Nero just reappears later on with the wise choice to fight Shiki full on with 666 beasts

    Roa possesses Shiki's original sister *ahem* AKIHA who tried to kill Akiha out of jealousy since he was close to her.
    Nanaya Kiri kills her but she manages to survive and makes a comeback in the middle of the story...

    Since I..... eh..... only read Arcueid's and Akiha's story, Hisui is simply Shiki's silent maid while Kohaku is Akiha's maid who will probably be teasing her occasionally. No sad backstories since Nanaya Kiri nor *ahem* AKIHA would be doing *that stuff*

    Right now, I'm just checking if the story's even plausible...

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    Well, the idea is interesting, but might be a tad hard to pull off. I recommend that you read the other routes before doing it. While I don't think the characterization and events of those route would really affect your story, they still have some mentions of the Nanaya and other things, IIRC. Ciel's route being the one with the most that I remember.

    EDIT: You're including the events of the Near Side routes? In that case, I take back the comment about the events of the other routes being less significant.


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    Quote Originally Posted by reborn214 View Post
    how will Arc factor in?
    Arc and Imouto best friends!

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    Hmm, the Roa posession is an issue, but I guess it can actually make sense. Imagine SHIKI getting killed by the Nanayas, this leaves an impression on Roa who wants to reincarnate into a Nanaya. So he reincarnates into Shikis then unborn sister he knew nothing about because the pregnancy wasn't visible yet. Or something.
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    Since I..... eh..... only read Arcueid's and Akiha's story, Hisui is simply Shiki's silent maid while Kohaku is Akiha's maid who will probably be teasing her occasionally. No sad backstories since Nanaya Kiri nor *ahem* AKIHA would be doing *that stuff*

    ....fix that, before writing it out.
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    Hmm, by the way how would Shiki have the MeODP?

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    Quote Originally Posted by reborn214 View Post
    Hmm, by the way how would Shiki have the MeODP?
    Fell down the stairs.


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    Quote Originally Posted by reborn214 View Post
    Hmm, by the way how would Shiki have the MeODP?
    I personally would leave them and Nero out.
    Nero has no reason to go after Shiki in the Far side routes, and even less in this scenario.
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    It's supposed to mirror the original route.
    So, in this story, *ahem* AKIHA stabs Shiki with a knife that was supposed to be intended for Akiha. (AKIHA is a yandere too)
    Shiki dies, Nanaya Kiri sees AKIHA looking like a vampire and almost kills her. Akiha unknowingly uses her power to save Shiki. The Nanaya clan finds out about this and figures that they can't kill her since she shares her life and then decides to send her to the Arimas.
    Current plot

    The Nanaya clan kills all the non humans in Misaki city. Nero is sent to avenge the dead apostles that were killed.

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    The Nanaya clan isn't buddy buddy with the Arima's a demon clan though you could sen her to the Fujou (demon hunters where the maids use to come from) so she could meet with Kohaku and Hisui.

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    You mean another branch family of the Nanayas. The Nanayas sending someone to the Arimas after they slaughterd their main family doesn't make any sense.
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