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    The Millennium War Volume One: Threshold of Despair.

    Prologue

    The grail war is over and the days pass quietly. I’m starting to learn Alchemy and some magic since grandfather is dead and Senpai stopped me from changing. Satoshi and his grandfather Kiritsugu are nice people however their eternal house guest Kotomine Shirou is an insufferable ass.

    …That’s wrong, right?

    No of course it’s not, I remember clearly the way things are, Fuyuki is a quiet place is in the shadow of castle Brunestund.

    Wait

    That’s wrong too.

    I’m not sure what part of it though.

    I’ve been making a whip using alchemy, I can’t remember why a whip though. At any rate it’s past the malleable stage, I just have to add an element to alter it.

    I’ll do it later, Nee-san and the others want to investigate castle Brunestud.

    It’s a hike but we’re all together Kotomine Shirou, Nee-san, Nii-san, Kiritsugu-san, Archer, Satoshi-kun and I.

    The Castle is a frightful place but we all know something is wrong with it, so we have to figure it out.

    Kotomine-san and Nii-san are near the bridge into the castle when suddenly Kotomine-san shoves Nii-san into the dry moat causing him to fall into the darkness of a large drainage pit.

    Archer-san grabs the young priest by the collar ready to knock him out when Nii-san shouts from the unseen depths.

    “Shirou you asshole!”

    On reflex I run to the edge of the moat and call out to Nii-san.

    “I’m fine Sakura, just a bit wet, go on inside without me, I’ll catch up” he says. I’m not sure why but for some reason his attitude towards me is nice and caring and strangely that seems wrong.

    we look at each other and all seem to innately understand that we can’t all go in at once in case something happens. For the moment Nee-san and I stay outside, we can use the time to get more supplies for the group.

    The boys are good fighters but it seems none of them plan for emergencies very well beyond their first plans.

    Who will you follow inside?

    1) Kiritsugu

    2) Archer

    3) Kotomine Shirou

    4) Satoshi
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    it is my firm belief that regarding the ban of mike1984 I have been given insufficient reason for the affair and it's conclusion, further than this I feel that the light manner it has been treated in is appalling. It is my sincere hope that he is not regarded in the same way as actually malicious posters who have appeared on beast's lair or otherwise as a joke to be snickered at when spoken of in the future. I will not forget my friend or view him in the manner those in charge here have presented him and his actions, nor will I accept the situation as it stands where people snicker at him as if he were a joke.

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    2.) Archer.

    His plans fail, he blows shit up.



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    OK, I'm going to vote 4, because Toshi deserves a vote....

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    ...are you sure you have a beta?

    Eddy's busy and this, unlike the actually chapters (which will be fully beta'd) is short leo, so i'm trying to see if i've improved any on editing myself.
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    it is my firm belief that regarding the ban of mike1984 I have been given insufficient reason for the affair and it's conclusion, further than this I feel that the light manner it has been treated in is appalling. It is my sincere hope that he is not regarded in the same way as actually malicious posters who have appeared on beast's lair or otherwise as a joke to be snickered at when spoken of in the future. I will not forget my friend or view him in the manner those in charge here have presented him and his actions, nor will I accept the situation as it stands where people snicker at him as if he were a joke.

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    I'll give my vote to Kiri, then.

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    OK, I'm going to switch to 2, because Satoshi isn't going to win....

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    I'll give my vote to Kiri, then.

    who?

    OK, I'm going to switch to 2, because Satoshi isn't going to win....

    ok, we are officially tied then.
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    it is my firm belief that regarding the ban of mike1984 I have been given insufficient reason for the affair and it's conclusion, further than this I feel that the light manner it has been treated in is appalling. It is my sincere hope that he is not regarded in the same way as actually malicious posters who have appeared on beast's lair or otherwise as a joke to be snickered at when spoken of in the future. I will not forget my friend or view him in the manner those in charge here have presented him and his actions, nor will I accept the situation as it stands where people snicker at him as if he were a joke.

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    2. Chances are, he'll just end up protecting us, though.


    Sakura isn't going in, you're just choosing who to follow in. (it does matter)

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    it is my firm belief that regarding the ban of mike1984 I have been given insufficient reason for the affair and it's conclusion, further than this I feel that the light manner it has been treated in is appalling. It is my sincere hope that he is not regarded in the same way as actually malicious posters who have appeared on beast's lair or otherwise as a joke to be snickered at when spoken of in the future. I will not forget my friend or view him in the manner those in charge here have presented him and his actions, nor will I accept the situation as it stands where people snicker at him as if he were a joke.

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    kiritsugu. In other words, I chose option 1

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    Rin: "Sabers are more molestable..."
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    I dont even know what Lunatique is. I assume it's terrible for the sake of argument.

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