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    Across The Multiverse (Nasuverse Crossover)

    This is my very first post to the largest fansite of my absolute favorite fandom. So might as well release one of my works to start off a foray into the unknown with a bang. This is on FF.net, but I'm editing it for the sake of both plot and that I want it to fit in this site without a hitch.

    I'm a novice writer, having only done it on a full time scale for about a year or so now. So my work will probably not compare in quality to any of the really amazing stuff already here, but believe me, I'm working to try.

    Across The Multiverse is a story created when I was surfing the Type-Moon wiki a while back, and I spent a bit of time on Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg's page. In the regards of his various apprentices, that may or may not have ended up crippled emotionally, mentally or physically, I've decided to cook up the story of one such apprentice.

    Remember, I'm a novice writer, not the best, so try not to critique me too hard or harshly unless its undeniably deserved.

    So, here we go.

    Oh, and a warnings and comments: THIS STORY HAS OCs. And one is one of the main protagonists. Well, he is the protagonist. So if you harbor a hate of some sort for OCs, then please, turn back now. Oh, and he's not going to be a Gary Stu. At least, I hope he won't/isn't.

    And if ther
    e's any recommendations on how to organize this story, then please, feel free to tell me. I'm new to this all.

    And this is kinda copy pasted from my original Word files, so any help here would be nice too along with well written criticism / praise / any other things.
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    Across the Multiverse

    My name is Kouhei Takeda. I happen to be the latest and quite possibly doomed apprentice of the grand magician, Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg. I'm a second-rate magus, and my master wants to take me on a road trip across the multiverse... Just my luck...

    An OC AU Nasuverse Fanfiction.


    Throughout this project of mine, my OC, Kouhei Takeda, will travel with his new master to various places in the multiverse, which means various alternate realities where things will not be the same. In the process, there shall be copious amounts of character development, humor, swearing is to be expected, fanservice, action, and whatever a road trip across the multiverse can bring.
    Each trip will end up with Kouhei and Zelretch returning to Kouhei’s home world, where they’ll review their trip, reflect, and brush up on extra character development for his relationships with various characters.

    Hope that covers the basics.
    Last edited by EthernalRain; April 17th, 2012 at 09:24 PM.

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    Oh you're the guy who made this fic. I was wondering what happened to it. I look forward to updates
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    Still working on Chapter 3. It's hit about more than 5k words, but I'm stuck on a certain part I want to do my best on. Well, I'm currently editing down slightly the first chapter, and I should be done soon. I'm putting it here in the hopes of joining a well known community, getting to know more people, and also getting a bit more feedback to help with my writing.

    Enough rambling now, I've got work to do... Only a quarter of a way there...

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    Across the Multiverse

    Chapter 1


    Another World
    So for the first chapter…

    Welcome to Possible Nasuverse Universe #7692.

    Please enjoy your stay.

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    “Kouhei. Wake up.” A woman’s voice murmured to me.


    “Mommy?”


    “Put on a jacket. We have to go.” Her voice seemed urgent.


    “Where’s Daddy?”


    “Daddy can’t come with us.” Now her voice seemed afraid.


    “Why?”


    There was a thrashing sound. “YURIKO! OPEN THE FUCKING DOOR!”


    “Just stay quiet, Kouhei.” My mother pleaded.


    The sound of the door smashing open… The screams and wails of a dying woman… The feeling of fear pouring through my soul. And the feeling of shock as my assailant, my father, died with a knife in hand and a sword in his chest.


    “Are you okay son?” An aged face smiled at me, as if relieved that I was okay.


    “W-Who are you?”


    A wrinkled hand gripped my shoulder, helping me up.


    “Risei. Kotomine Risei.”
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I felt my nose crinkle, as the smell of something snaps me back into consciousness. That dream… That memory… I haven’t experienced that in a long, long time. Wait… That smell… It was familiar…

    Something burning?

    My eyes snap open, as I push myself up from where I had slept. I had decided to take a short nap, while waiting for the results of my alchemical experiment. My experiment was on fire. The stubby little test tube was up in flames, randomly colored puffs of smoke rising from the opening of the volatile little tube. Oh fuck.

    I grab a fire extinguisher from the wall, various runes activating to protect my notes and other work. I spray the miniature blaze with the extinguisher, sending foam flying all over the place. This was the third accident this week! At this rate, I’ll never master alchemy well enough to make a homunculus!

    “Kouhei, did you set something on fire again?” A voice called to me.

    “Um… No?”

    “Kouhei, God doesn’t like liars.”

    “… Okay, I did.”

    I hear a sigh. “Just get ready for school.”

    I mutter incomprehensively as I work on cleaning up my workshop. It’s not so big, just a few shelves, a table used for various experiments, and a storage room for stuff. Once I get enough money, I’ll order a specimen tube from Clock Tower and start creating my homunculus. It’s probably going to be a guy.

    I don’t want to have to explain to my father and sister why I have a naked girl floating in tube in my workshop. Actually, it’s going to be as equally awkward if it’s a naked guy. So maybe I’ll make it an animal based homunculus. A dog would be nice.

    After cleaning away all the foam, I sit down or the table amongst my experiments. This isn’t going so well. I’ve got my father’s notes regarding the subject, and I’ve managed to handle other the branches of thaumaturgy well enough, or at least decently. I just suck at contemporary alchemy.

    That wounds my pride a bit.

    I walk over to one side of the wall, pressing on the wood. It gives way, and swings open. I squint my eyes as the morning light seeps into my eyes, from a grate. I’m in the ventilation system. I crawl into the vent, moving forward. Soon, I reach another grate. I swing it open.

    And I’m inside a bedroom. I sigh, giving a stretch. I need to modify the vent a little. I’m getting a bit too big for it. My eyes swing left and right, looking through my room. Nothing much is in here, just a bed, my desk, a closet, a TV, and a very well used computer. My sister keeps coming in here to use it.

    She says it’s to check if I have any porn in it, but I know she just likes to read stories and send emails. Her favorite hobby is sending chain letters about our religion. It’s quirky, weird at times, but she doesn’t seem like she wants to stop. She acts like an angel one second, then a devil during the other.

    I walk over to my closet, opening it. I pull out my school uniform, quickly dressing myself with an eye on the clock. Brown eyes meet brown eyes in the mirror. I look myself over once, taking note of all my features. Brownish-black hair, still rather messy, check. Weary expression due to the result of failed experiments, check. Eyebags. Check.

    Okay, self motivational speech time.

    “I, Kouhei Takeda, am not a failure.” I say with pride, chest puffed out. “I am not a failure.” I repeat, forcing a smile to my face. “I’m going to be a master of thaumaturgy.” I grin.

    Self motivational speech. Check.

    Cue slouched shoulders and depressed feeling. Check.

    “I’m a failure of an alchemist.” I groan, rapping my head against the glass.

    Assuring I’m a failure as an alchemist. Check.

    “You’re no failure.”

    My eyes meet golden ones. A fair face grins at me, framed by grey hair. She’s dressed in her uniform, specifically of the Saint Paulo Miki Private Middle School. With crossed arms, she rests against the doorway of my room. With the black skirt, and other clothing, she kind of looks like a nun.

    “You’re an epic failure.” She chimes. She doesn’t act like one though.

    I rap my head against the glass. I don’t want to break it though, that would be seven more years of bad luck to my already unlucky (yet relatively decent) life.

    “Caren, what the hell?” I groan.

    She pouts. “That’s no way to talk to your imouto.”

    Caren Ortensia Kotomine. Get out.

    She sticks her nose into the air, with a “Hmph.” Then she leaves my room. I don’t know why I put up with her. Oh wait, we live together. Damn it.

    I peek out my window, looking at the shed connected to the house with a vent. My workshop is pathetic compared to my father’s. But it’s good enough for my experiments. Though I probably need to renovate it a bit to fit a specimen tube in there. I want to be a great alchemist. Maybe I’ll try to get a copy of the Einzbern alchemy notes that they’ve published. But barely anything ships all the way out here!

    Maybe I can ask another magus in town to order some stuff for me.

    “Hurry up!” I hear Caren call for me.

    “Got it!”

    I grab my bag from my bed, and run out the door. I weave through the hallways of our home, running for the door. Caren’s there waiting for me, bag in hand and a sandwich in the other. Wait, that’s not a sandwich. Is that my cell phone?

    “You don’t have many girls on this thing, do you?”

    I palm my forehead. Angelic my ass.

    “Caren. Stop teasing your brother. You’re going to be late for class.” A gruff voice calls out to us.

    I turn around to see the dark brown eyes of my father. He yawns, a cup of coffee in one hand, a newspaper tucked under the other. This is the man I’ve practically idolized since I was a child learning about magecraft. One of the last men standing in the Fourth Grail War, and an excellent magus in his own right. Such a great man.

    His greatness is dampened by the fact he’s in pajamas and fuzzy bunny slippers, courtesy of Caren.

    Kotomine Kirei
    , one of the greatest magi in our time, wears fuzzy bunny slippers.



    Never got over that fact.

    “Don’t forget this.” He tosses something to me. I catch it with one hand, grinning a bit. It’s was a leather bracelet with a metal cross on it. I strap it around my left hand, the metal cross facing out on my wrist.

    “I doubt I’m going to face Dead Apostles on the way to school.”

    “Always be prepared Kouhei. Always be prepared.” He advises. “Now, get to class.”
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I walk down the road with Caren by my side after getting off the train, fiddling with the bracelet on my wrist. Caren stares at it pointedly, raising an eyebrow. “I doubt we’ll be facing vampires any time soon.”

    “You’re just jealous that Father lets me carry around Black Keys.”

    She pouts. “As if. I’m not going to be one of those Executors, I’m going to be an Exorcist.”

    “Says the girl who can’t stand to watch horror movies.” I chuckle, dodging a hand as it tries to hit me one over the head. I continue walking down the street, grinning as Caren fumed behind me.

    “I can stand horror movies!” She cried.

    Right.” I whistle. “Followers of the Eighth Sacrament don’t hide behind blankets and cry “Daddy”, do they?”

    “We were kids! You did the same!” She near-shouted at me, waving her arms about in frustration.

    “No I didn’t.” I reply. I had gripped a Black Key and nearly sliced the TV in half until Father came in, took the blade from my hand and comforted a traumatized Caren. Not my best moment, I agree.

    Caren continues to fume, as the school comes up in the distance. It looks like most high schools in Fuyuki, except with the large church on school grounds. But unlike most high schools, there’s a small population of magi attending. I’m fairly sure about that. The number of magi attending Saint Paulo Miki Private School is limited down to about I guess 5. That’s quite a bit in my standards.

    Let’s see, that’s me, Caren, the local priest, and about two other prana signals I haven’t managed to pinpoint. Though it could just be Caren using thaumaturgy to screw with people. Father (and I mean the one at home and at another parish) doesn’t like it when she does that. Apparently it reminds him too much of the Grail War. Or at least, that’s what I think.

    I believe Caren’s mother played around like that as well. I don’t know if she was a magus or not, but it seems that Caren is more like her than she thinks. I pity father in his early years. To be honest, I’ll pity anyone to get to know Caren who hasn’t known her before.

    I raise an eyebrow at my younger sister, as she bows lightly. “See you later, Onii-chan!” She chimes with a happy smile. She’s already immersed in her angelic persona, ready to face the world with a mask made to troll certain people. Well, that’s my sister. I learned to live with her.

    I wave goodbye with a free hand, the other slinging my bag around my shoulder.

    Oh crap, she still has my cell phone. I know I’m a magus and all, but when I sent my phone number to the people at Clock Tower, half of the people there didn’t know what it was. My letter had gone back and forth between about 20 people until someone knew what it really was. And then they still used an ancient phone, and called me at awkward hours of the day to see how my research was going and if I needed anything.
    They’re all intelligent magi! Don’t they know anything about time zones?-!

    I sigh, making my way to my classroom.

    I feel my body work through the motions, hearing my voice speak the morning prayers as I paid little mind. What really was on my mind, was the ringing of the church bells. I could feel the pulse of the sound work it’s way through me, shaking me with some sort of feeling to my core.

    I could feel my prana pulse and flow at the deep beat. My prana always seemed to react with the urge to come to life and enact in the outer world whenever I heard the sound of church bells ringing. When I thought about those bells ringing, I could reign my prana in and enact all sorts of magecraft. But it felt weird at school.

    I may feel relaxed in body, but in prana… I can feel it pulse within me, because I can’t ignore the sound of the mental trigger that allowed me to utilize thaumaturgy. It’s taking quite a bit of effort to just not let out a burst of prana. This is good training, I guess. Just another step in my path towards being a great magus.

    It’s a long, long trail ahead of me to reach my goal. Oh well, I can bear with it. I’ve got trail mix and shotguns. And about 8 long pointy swords that have the ability to smite horrendous insults to God.



    I’ll deal.
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    I spent the day absentmindedly finishing homework and listening to lectures, drawing various designs and future plans for upgrades to my workshop on the side. My current plans include Anti-Caren Bounded Fields, extending the height of the roof to fit a specimen tube in, and deciding when I have the time to take advantage of that wood sale at the hardware store.

    Oh, and get my hands on that new takoyaki machine I saw on TV last night.

    Unlike most magi, I’m half-half in my outlook. Half of my magecraft is centered around practical application, while the other half is strictly devoted to research. I need to shift my priorities around if I want to become an Executor though. I still transmute some scrap paper into lead when my pencil runs out, and I put a small bounded field up that makes people ignore my papers when I write tests for an example of practical uses of thaumaturgy.

    They’re very simple applications. Though I’ve had to convince Father Tsurugi that I don’t use them to cheat. I’ve never really needed to for that matter. Except that one time when Caren kept me up all night with her antics, and never even leaving me alone even when I needed to study.

    I won’t talk about that.

    Once I’ve become an Executor, I can fight for my beliefs as a primary reason, and on the side, I can earn money to fund my own research. The people at Clock Tower refuse to do so, since I’m affiliated with the Church. I wonder how they would have reacted if I stuck Kotomine to the end of my name? I’m Kouhei Kotomine, legally anyway. It’s not like Clock Tower delves into the mundane legal system. It’s not like they interfere much with the mundane world at all.

    I will still always refer to myself as Kouhei Takeda. Or Kouhei Takeda-Kotomine at times.

    I still wonder what would have happened though. How they would have reacted, what would have been done, would they have been with me or against me? I severely doubt they would ally with me or help me in anyway.

    After all, I doubt they’d want anything to do with the son of the man who helped destroy the Holy Grail.
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    I eat lunch quietly inside my classroom, still thinking about how my life is going to work out from the moment I step outside. I put quite a lot of thought into planning, and I’m known to be very ambitious. If I can rise through the Church’s ranks, I wonder if I can somehow manage to go and visit Atlas one day. It’ll take a long time, but The Giant’s Pit is too great a call for any self respecting alchemist.

    That, or I take a visit to the Prague Association. Though if I involve myself with one, I won’t be able to even involve myself with the other… Choices, choices. They’re so difficult, but they’re there to be made with caution and dignity.

    Speaking of dignity, haven’t heard much from Tohsaka Tokiomi in a while. Father never speaks with him much, but I had found his contact information in an old folder in his bedroom. He sent me instructions on how to build a decent workshop and the runes I needed to help keep it relatively functional. He’s a nice man.

    But he rambles in his letters with a flourish that only a member of his family could even possibly (or humanely) achieve. Akasha interests me, like it does with the man. It’s not something the Church deals with. And I doubt I’ll be as fanatical about reaching it.

    But something about it interests me, like the way the Five True Magics do.

    I spot a flash of grey hair, and the sparkle of golden eyes. Outside the window, I spot Caren surrounded by a bunch of her friends and quite a few girls of other grades. She’s always been such a popular girl, due to her angelic personality. Or her “public” angelic personality.

    “Kotomine, your sister seems popular.”

    A flash of brown hair appears before me. A grin appears on a young man’s face, as the very same young man hops into the seat beside mine.

    “I wish she wasn’t…” I grumble.

    “Don’t worry about it!” The young man’s hand pats my back.

    “Yeah, yeah, Mackenzie.”

    Christopher Mackenzie, a young Canadian transfer student who I quickly made friends with back when he transferred here. His family didn’t like it here, leaving years prior, but he decided to board with his grandparents and continue his education abroad.

    “Besides, we’re going to graduate soon! You’ll have plenty of time to stalk her when that happens! I’m pretty sure you’ll need to! After all, something as pretty as that will need something strong like you to protect her from the raving masses of men that await her in the thralls of high school.”

    I smack him one up across the head.

    If any boys take a fancy to her… That’s what alchemy, eight swords that are the bane of undead existence, various guns, and laxative filled trail mix are for. I take extra care to avoid my special laxative trail mix. It’s the one bag on the right on the shelf. Don’t forget it, Kouhei.
    Caren is a rather attractive girl, no incest implied of course. Hell, we’re not even related. Not that I partake in incest. It’s against our religion.



    Yeah, I have no sister complex. Dare to imply such things, and you’ll get the same treatment as anyone to come after my sister. Which involved disembowelment and laxative trail mix. Or being used as zombie bait when vampire hunting.
    Either one.

    Later, I sit on a bench outside, waiting for Caren to show up. School’s finished early today; the teachers were meeting for something, probably a complication in the curriculum or about the upcoming sports festival.

    “Hi Onii-chan!”

    I turn my head, to see Caren bouncing up and down beside me with a soft smile on her face. Hm, seems like she had fun today. I stand, looking down on her. She’s still shorter than me by about a head.

    I feel something smack me between the eyes.

    “Here you go!”

    I blink, staring almost cross eyed at the object. It appears to be my phone. Damn it. I swat it out of her hands, catching it in the air. I flick it open, to see if anything had happened to it.

    Okay, my contacts list is intact. Clock Tower and my contacts in the Church haven’t been contacted. Phew. I doubt I could handle the backlash if it was found out that I left a library of contact info that belongs to very influential and dangerous people, out in the open. That was a great relief.







    Okay, I’m fairly sure I’ve never met this girl. Or this girl. Or that girl. Who the hell are these random girls that appeared in my contact list?



    “Caren, did you pawn my phone number?”

    “Yes.”



    Crap
    .

    “And what you get in return?” I ask quickly, frowning.

    “Lunch money and bragging rights.” She smiled innocently.

    “… You pimped me out.” I gape.

    “Aw, you’re welcome, Onii-chan.”

    Father will never let her get away with this.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    Hm. Any of them make a good future wife?”

    Damn it
    .

    I stare down Father as we square off in the backyard of our home. He’s got a book in one hand, a Black Key in the other.

    “I don’t know.” I repeat for the fourteenth time.

    “Hm.” He flips the page of his book, switching between the throwing and stabbing positions with the blade in his hand. A small smirk graces his face, as he snorts at something on the pages. Then he closes the book and turns to me.

    “Now, shall we begin?”

    I nod, reaching out with my left hand. I focus prana into the metal bracelet strapped to my wrist, feeling it come to life. The cross on the bracelet shines with a white light, forcing me to squint my eyes as I try to look past it. With my right hand, I reach into the brightness. This artifact was just a little thing from grandfather’s early days as an Executor, and now it was practically mine.

    There. I feel it.
    My hand grasps a handle, somewhere within the light. And then I pull.

    A Black Key of my own is in my hand, ready to be used.

    I barely have enough time to react, as my father’s sword sweeps down for my head. I brace my feet, bringing my own blade up to deflect his. A faint smile is on his face, as he draws back. This…

    I am fucked.

    But for the sake of time and less pain, I decide to fight back. I prime the sword in my hand ready to throw it. My feet draw back as my hand does. And with a swing of my hand, I let the blade fly.

    “Too predictable.”

    A twirl of his sword sends my sword sinking into the ground behind him. In another short flash of light, I have another blade in my hand, running towards him to strike again. I’m down one, but I have 7 left in my current arsenal. I slide low.

    And I choose to sweep up with an upward slash.

    However, it’s useless. Father’s foot smacked down on the base of my sword’s grip, ripping the sword out of my grip and sending it flying. I jump back, pulling another key from the void attached to my wrist. 6 left.

    To conserve my amount of weapons, I only use one Key and hold it like a sword, rather than the popular claw grip.

    I throw the sword in my hand as a distraction, drawing another blade from my wrist quickly after. Father’s sword quickly deflects the other, as I lash out for his neck. His elbow digs into my chest as I jumped for the chance to strike, sending me flying back. I roll to the side, dodging as his weapon stabs the ground where my leg once was.

    “Fight smarter.” He advises.

    Sometimes, I swear he’s ruthless in my training, perhaps even as ruthless as his time in the Fourth Grail War. But if he actually was… I doubt I’d last a minute. I doubt I’d still be alive.

    5 Black Keys left.

    I pick up my recently dropped blade with my left hand, stabbing out at his foot in a reverse grip. He sidesteps, right as I draw another sword from my wrist. With the weight of momentum, I roll about and with a wide swing I strike at his chest. He kicks at the sword still stuck in the ground.

    The blade gives way, causing me to lose my balance. I fall to the ground, landing on my shoulder with my attack only hitting air. He kicks out once again, taking away another Key.

    3 swords left.

    I’m learning how to fight I guess. Hopefully not how to fight losing battles. Because that was what was happening to me right now… I roll away from my father, and he didn’t strike down on me.

    “You make too many useless motions. It may work against the Undead, but against a magus or a vampire, you’ll be dead before the first strike.” He told me as I got up.

    I draw two Keys with one sweep of my hand. With another sweep, both keys are sent flying towards my father, each aimed for his shoulders. Primarily, I’m used to throwing one, but two or more, and my aim gets off target…

    One almost skins his right shoulder, and the left just sinks into the fence further behind him, having missed completely. Just my luck. One Key left, and I’m feeling exhausted. One Key left, and I haven’t even managed to scratch my “enemy”.

    Even though my opponent is of the highest tier in combat prowess, it still wounds my pride to lose. Even with the times I’ve lost to continuously to Caren, due to not finding the heart in myself to even raise my blade against her, this still hurts. Though that might just be my ego and my bruised and battered body talking... I draw my last sword.

    I sprint with all my might forward, hoping to close the distance as quickly as possible. Father does nothing but stand there, as I jump up with my sword aimed straight for his stomach. I can make it! I’m going to win!

    Oh crap it.

    He had pivoted with the littlest of motions, the point of my weapon soaring past him. He grabs my wrist, planting an elbow into my back. And I hit the ground hard with a groan. My sword clatters in the distance.

    “Try harder next time.” Father tells me, grabbing onto my collar to pull me up. He lets me stand, and brush myself of. “Focus on the points I told you. Utilize motions and attacks that don’t needlessly waste energy and time. Be less predictable, and try to use your other abilities.”

    “But-” I start off, but he raises a hand to interrupt me.

    “The Black Keys are useful against vampires and the unholy darkness, I agree. But they are not the only weapon in your arsenal. Surprise is often the key in battle. But be efficient with your skills. Needless waste is needless.”

    He pats me on the head once, and walks towards our small house.

    I stretch sore and worn out muscles, going through the common task of finding and recollecting my Black Keys.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I groan, as Caren prods the black mark in the crook of my neck. I hadn’t gotten that fighting, I had tripped on the gardening hose and landed on the hilt of a Black Key. That… That wounded my already slowly-being-crippled pride once more.

    “Whatcha doin now?” Caren asked, as I pored over a book.

    Trying to figure out how to Caren-proof my workshop. So far, my research hasn’t been going well. The Bounded Fields didn’t work. Even after all my research. You know how I know?

    I bow my head solemnly, as I set the book into a shelf in the very same mentioned workshop as Caren prods around again once more. I grab a tape measure, and start measuring the distance from the roof to the floor. The specimen tube will need a few more feet of space to fit in here. I go amongst my work, while thinking about how to explain this to Caren and Father.

    I need to explain why I want to create a homunculus, and why there’s a need to have a naked person floating in a tube for private company.



    Decisions, decisions. Don’t know how to make them, and at the rate of my current sources of income, I doubt I’ll be making them soon. That depresses me a bit, but it just goes to show how much I need to work. I prod Caren with an iron rod, trying to steer her away from my experiments that have caught her interest.

    “Shoo.” I tell her, pointing at the “door” with the rod of metal in my hand.

    “Nuh-uh.” She tells me, shaking her head with her cutest little pout yet. It just makes me want to pinch her cheeks! And I choose to do so.
    It’s fun watching her squirm in my grip.

    She squirms out of said grip, and moves towards the door-flap-thing. She sticks her tongue at me, and shouts, “Meanie!” And crawls away through the vent.

    I sigh, returning to my job.

    Ring. Ring.


    I blink, as the phone I have in here rings. It’s hooked up to the one in the main house. We have two phones in the main house, one in Caren’s room and one in Father’s office (surprising for a magus family, isn’t it?). The last one is here in my workshop, and Father doesn’t know about it. I use it to intercept and listen to calls between my father and his contacts. It’s useful for finding out where he’s going, what he’s doing, and why he’s doing it.

    It pluck the phone from its base, holding it to my ear. From what I can tell, it’s Father Tsurugi.

    Kotomine, he’s back again!

    Who’s back?” I hear my father ask in his trademark gruff voice.

    You know! He comes back every year! I’m afraid for the students’ safety! You know about his infamous reputation!

    I can go help you deal with him, if you’d like.

    That would be very welcome, Kotomine. The last thing we need is a Dead Apostle running about Fuyuki, much less an Ancestor of all things.

    I shall take care of it tonight. I will meet you at your parish at eleven.

    I barely managed to scrawl down the location they were talking about going to. When I had finally put the phone down when their conversation had ended, I sat on my worktable, reflecting. It couldn’t be possible. What were the odds?

    Dead Apostle Ancestor.


    I could feel my heart sink into my stomach.

    One of the most powerful beings known to exist was here in Fuyuki. My father and his comrade priest were going to fight him. My father was going to fight a Dead Apostle Ancestor. I’m confident in his skills, but…

    A Dead Apostle Ancestor? He could die. And he seemed to be planning to leave without us. What if he did die?

    What would I tell Caren?

    I break into a run for the door-flap-thing (I’m calling it a doorflap now) and scramble through the vent. I come out in my bedroom, and my eyes drift to the clock. It’s only 10 now. I have to prepare for the fight of my life in only a few dozen minutes.

    I may or may not die. But I can’t let my father and his friend go on their own, they might not be enough for a Dead Apostle Ancestor. I run to my closet, throwing it open and reaching behind my clothes. I grab onto a wooden panel, sliding it away.

    I press the button of a nightlight, and I’m greeted with the sheen of metal. A small armory of airsoft guns. I know what you may be thinking, that plastic pellets will do nothing against a vampire unless he was made of paper. But I know a little trick.

    Courtesy of the late Emiya Kiritsugu.

    Channeling prana into my hand, I grab a shotgun from the formerly hidden rack, and balance it between my palms. It’s a full metal replica of a SPAS-12. Through the process of Alteration and Transmutation, I feel the insides of it shift into something different. Thank you, Emiya Kiritsugu, for teaching me the basics about how firearms work. And thank you too internet.

    Never would have made it this far in the world without you.


    And so, I hefted my altered weapon into the air proudly. The process had worked. Now I had a bona fide shotgun. And instead of tiny little plastic pellets…

    This thing now pumped lead.

    I put the shotgun down on my bed, reaching into my closet again. I pull out two letters, looking them over.

    One was dedicated to myself and Caren, and it had, “If I don’t come home...” written in fine handwriting.

    The other was dedicated to Caren and my father, “Open if something happened.”, written in my awkward chicken-scratch-like writing.

    Mine contains a final letter and a will. I don’t know what’s in my father’s.

    I grab the shotgun, and stuff it under my jacket. I dress in comfortable clothing, previously having Kevlar transmuted and intertwined with it. I have my fully loaded bracelet strapped to my hand, and a bandoleer of shotgun shells wrapped around my waist and under my jacket. I’m ready.

    I’m relaxed, I can use my magecraft, and I am armed. I’m ready for a battle. I’m ready to go to technical war. I held the letters in my hand, and leave my room for what may have been the final time.

    I give it one last look, and close the door.

    “Where’re you going?”

    I turn, spotting Caren leaning against her bedroom door.

    “I’m going out.”

    “Father says you can’t go with him.”

    Damn it, he must have heard my breath over the phone.

    “Why would I follow Father?”

    “I don’t know why. He just said we should stay home.”

    “Sorry, but I really need to go.” I turn around, already weaving through the house to get to the door. Caren runs up to me, and grabs my wrist.

    “Where are you going?” She asks me, an eyebrow raised.

    “… I can’t tell you.” I tell her.

    “Why?”

    This reminds me of a few years ago, when I went to go eliminate some Undead on the outskirts of the city. She was still a little, innocent if not a bit mischievous little girl. Her eyes widen a bit at the letters in my hand. “Is it an order?” She asks. I shake my head.

    I hand the letters to her. Her eyes widen further.
    “You’re going to fight something, aren’t you?”

    I nod.

    “… And you don’t think you’re a match for it. I know that face. You don’t think you can win. You think you might die. ”



    Hesitantly, I nod. My hand’s already on the doorknob, turning it slightly. I freeze, as I watch her shudder. I have to go, I have to get to Father.
    I throw open the door, running out onto the Bounded Field enclosed front yard.

    Noli me tangere.

    I fall to the ground as a red cloth encloses my legs. I try to pull away with my arms, but the cloth holds firm. My head turns to see Caren gripping onto one end of the cloth, keeping me still.

    “I can’t let you go.” She says, a determined expression on her face as the cloth around my legs began to tighten.

    “I can’t let Father and Father Tsurugi go alone.”

    Her eyes widen again as I draw a Black Key. I sever the cloth with the sword, the cloth around my legs falling loose as they were severed from the connection to her prana. I yank off the cloth from my legs, and stare into Caren’s eyes.

    “I’m going Caren. You can’t stop me.”

    Her eyes grow teary.

    OH DAMN IT. Don’t cry, don’t cry, don’t cry, don’t cry-


    WAAAAAAAAAH!

    I barely have time to brace myself as Caren flies towards me, grappling me in a tight hug.

    I won’t let you go Onii-chan!” She cried, tears falling from her eyes.

    I stood there in her tight grip, unmoving as she held onto my chest.

    “Remember when we were kids Caren? When Father promised he’d protect us? That he’d help us when we needed it?”

    She continued crying.

    “Father never broke his promise. But now it’s my turn to do the same for him.”

    I peel her from my body, looking into her watery eyes. “I’ll come home Caren.”

    As give her a tight hug, as I made a promise I didn’t know I could keep, I felt so guilty. I was going to fight a battle I couldn’t possibly win. A Dead Apostle Ancestor. The mere mention of what my enemy was scared the crap out of me. But I’m going anyway.

    “I’m going to come home Caren. And I’m Father’s coming back with me.”

    I hug her once, feeling her feebly hug me back. She was so small, so frail. She was my little sister, the girl my father and I had to shield from the world. Or shield the world from her.

    My little sister… I might die in this battle.

    I feel a tear cascade down my cheek. My hug is a bit tighter now, more desperate. I might die. Father and Father Tsurugi probably aren’t strong enough to take on an Ancestor.

    Servants can’t back them up now. Gilgamesh probably could, but he’s too full of himself to even help. The Assassins were long gone. Against such an unholy being like the Ancestor they were going to face…

    They really might die. I don’t want to sound like I have little confidence in their abilities… But when talking about a being of unspeakable evils, it pays to be pessimistic. I’m stupidly running into my death.

    But Father has saved me many times. I can’t help but want to do the same, just once, for him. If this Ancestor can come and go to Fuyuki, every year, without no one stopping it, he or she or it must be insanely powerful. I let go of Caren, wiping away her tears with my sleeve.
    I let her go, and I start walking.

    And I can hear her cry, knowing that her teary eyes are watching me leave.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    Father and Father Tsurugi had left a while ago. I stared down the location of the Ancestor. It seemed to be a rather modern, simple home, compared to the luxurious abodes of various vampires and their familiars. And unlike those vampires, no Undead seemed to crawl or hobble around.

    The house was surrounded by a variety of gardens, each having a myriad of flowers and strange stone pedestals. Each of the pedestals seemed to reach my waist, having a red jewel protruding from the center. This is surprisingly similar to something in my memories…

    Ah, I remember! Those were the detection barriers that were powered by jewels! I remember those from the Tohsaka Manor. They’re an excellent example of the power of Jewel Magecraft.



    But how does this Ancestor know about it? I doubt he or she would know the well kept secrets of the Tohsaka family. I can sense the prana flowing about, as the individual parts of the detection flow and move in their elaborate motions. I don’t have the flexibility of an Assassin to move right through it.

    My eyes notice something amongst the maze of flowers and stone pedestals. Some of the jewels are cracked. Father and Father Tsurugi must have come through that way. From my vantage point in the tree, I jump down, and make my way towards the first broken jewel.

    I take a gentle step forward into what I believed to be the circumference of detection. Nothing happened.

    I spot the path of broken jewels to the house. The battle was going to start soon. I run amongst the flowers, moving towards the house while avoiding the rest of the still active detection fields. I have to get there.

    As soon as I reach the house, I hit my first dead end. I look for a sign of both priests entrance, but couldn’t find a single thing. Father might have used some sort of magic to break in, I guess. But I couldn’t do the same magic. So I guess I have to do it the old fashioned way.

    I pluck a pebble from the ground, and toss it towards the wall. It simply bounces off, nothing happening to it. I touch a single finger to it, taking a gamble. Nothing happened to my finger, it wasn’t eaten up by a portal, nor electrocuted, or anything.

    The wall was clean. I couldn’t sense prana or mana from it either. I could probably scale this to get to a balcony I see in the distance, and then shimmy to a window. I run into the ledge, using leg strength gained from years running the track at school, pushing up halfway across the wall.

    I grip the edge of the ledge, and pull myself up. With very unstable balance, I slowly, VERY SLOWLY, make my path, shimmying across the ledge to get to my destination. As I climb over the rail into the balcony, I notice only a door leading into the house. No windows to give me a hint on what was inside, nothing.

    I walk to the door, feeling around for prana or mana. Nothing. The door was clean. It seems that the primary defense seemed to be reliant on the jewel fields.

    The vampire must be very cocky, since the door was already unlocked. The two of them might have entered in here. I take a deep breath. And I open the door.

    The inside was more akin to a castle then the outside. There was red carpet, flowers sitting on dainty tables, and fancy paintings lining the walls along with candle holders and chandeliers. I could hear no sound. And frankly, that scared me.

    I walk down the ornate hall, looking about. I pull out my shotgun, ready for anything. I was practically planning to shoot at whatever moved. The eyes of people in the pieces of art followed me everywhere. For a second, I berated myself, knowing that something was already probably watching me, something was waiting for me.

    I had probably walked into a trap. That can be blamed on my inexperience. I had walked into my very possible death. DAMN.

    Now I was probably going to die here, in a very gruesome way. I won’t be able to fulfill my dreams, nor experience life. But I won’t go down without a fight. I learned to fight with experience, no matter how badly those experiences went.

    I have been battered, bruised, and utterly broken at times. But I am no longer ending up like so, after all the things I’ve done up to today. Today, I was going to shine. I was going to fight a Dead Apostle, and I was going to do my damn hardest to win alongside my Father and Father Tsurugi.

    I’m going to prove I’m not a half-assed little magus, and I’m going to prove I’m ready to be an Executor. I’m ready to fight in the name of my family and faith. I stop, looking around. I am ready to fight.

    “Come out. I know you’re there.” I say into the candlelit hall.



    No one was there. And I had probably screwed up by alerting things to my position.

    I sigh, turning and walking. Where were they?

    I pause at the end of the hall, looking about the portraits. They all seemed so genuine. They’re probably knock-offs of famous paintings, made down to the slightest detail. So I can’t help but tilt my head at the painting of the Mona Lisa. It was so realistic, EXTREMELY similar to the genuine article.

    Nice, huh? Had it imported.

    My head swings around, shotgun at the ready. Nothing was there in the hall. Basic firearms training came at the forefront of my mind. A few tips from Hisau Maiya and common doctrine from various airsoft matches repeated themselves in my thoughts.

    Oi, careful with that thing. You might poke someone’s eye out.

    “What are you?” I breathe.

    Just a tired old man. Now, won’t you kindly come here?

    My gun weaves left and right as I speed down the hall. I bump against another wall, gun swinging in all directions as I try to find my target. He’s here. A Dead Apostle Ancestor was targeting me. If I had ate something for dinner, I would have shit my pants there and then.

    Lord, please save my soul.


    My neck brushes against something, apparently the frame of a painting.

    I turn around.

    I feel my heart sink into my stomach and boil in its acid. I know which Dead Apostle Ancestor lived here. I know whose voice it was. And out of all my damned luck, I chose to pick a fight with the most dangerous magus known to man.

    A man in a magus’s cloak stood in the painting. Grey hair adorned his head, and a similarly colored grizzled beard dressed his face. Red eyes
    looked down on me, with such strength I was sure they pierced my soul. His mere identity scared the crap out of me.

    I knew who he was.

    Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg. The Master of the Second Magic, Kaleidoscope.


    A deity-like being amongst magi. The wielder of a miracle that transcended time and space. A Dead Apostle who was the only being of his kind to ally as a savior of humanity, heralded with reverence amongst his fellow magi and even the Church. A man so great, once he died, if he ever died, would become one of the greatest legends known in ETERNITY.

    And I had broken into his house.

    A hand grips on my shoulder. My heart practically stopped as my head turned around.

    Red eyes met mine.

    “Hello there boy! How’s it going? I was just joining your father and his friend for tea-”

    My eyes rolled back into my head, and I fell to the ground.

    Blackness overtook me.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    POV: Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg.


    I couldn’t help but try to stifle a chuckle, as Kotomine Kirei unceremoniously dumped his son on a couch.

    “Idiot boy.” I hear him mutter, as he takes a seat across from me.

    I turn to his friend, another priest. He had huge glasses, and anxiously carried a katana in his hand. He clumsily wiped away longish black hair
    from his young face, bluish brown eyes staring at me with a hint of fear and respect. Ah, I missed that look, quite a lot to be honest.

    “Your son’s an interesting kid, Kotomine.” I smile at him, then sip from a goblet. The taste of quality wine is divine, no matter where you go.

    “There’s something about him… What’s the word?”

    “Brash? Foolish?” Kotomine suggests.

    “No. More like determined. Headstrong. Independent. Selfless. Brave. Not a hint of cowardice. But not a shred of any major self-confidence either.”

    Kotomine blinks. “That’s… A rather accurate description, if I say so myself.”

    “I read people well.” I sigh, setting my goblet down. “So how may I be of service to you two?”

    “Why are you here again?” His friend, Tsurugi, asks. “You’re dangerous. Unpredictable.”

    I raise an eyebrow. “Oh? Can’t a man simply enjoy a vacation once in a while? I enjoy taking trips like these. Isn’t such a thing normal?”

    “Maybe if you took a plane. Not tear a hole in space-time and jump in.” Kotomine adds his two cents.

    But it wouldn’t be as fun or mystifying if I didn’t take vacations like the way I do. I’m a master of a Magic, might as well take advantage of it when I can. While I still can. I chuckle a bit, leaning back in my velvet seat.

    “So would you care to explain why you’re here?” I ask them.

    “Orders.” Tsurugi said. “From the higher ups.”

    Makes sense.

    “Answers.” Kotomine answered my question. “Curiosity in my case.”

    “Well, there’s not much to say to you. Welcome to my vacation home in this universe. Nothing much. This universe is one of my favorites.” I admit.

    Frankly, it is one of my absolute favorites. No major conflicts, nothing threatening to tear apart innocent lives, no egocentrically inclined maniacs running all over the place. There’s just peace and quiet, allowing me to enjoy the wonders of Fuyuki without the craziness of the Grail War like in other universes. I can relax for a change here.

    I just need to put up with everyone knowledgeable about thaumaturgy jumping out of their pants upon sight of me.

    I offer the two wine, which they accept gladly.

    “T-There’s no blood in this, r-right?” Tsurugi asks, a bit pale.
    Kotomine and I give him a pointed look as an answer.

    “R-Right, g-got it.” He stammered.

    It’s hard to believe all the changes in this universe. They’re amazingly profound from the others. And they all seemed to stem from one choice, one little change in personality and disposition of a certain man. It’s hard to believe that such a small yet profound difference could change the entire reality.

    I smile fondly at the first time I had learned the fact. It still surprised me to this day. Just a simple little thing. But it as simple as it was, it was just simply amazing.

    In this world, Kotomine Kirei had the ability to love.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I smile along with Kotomine as his son drifts awake.

    “Wha…?”

    “Good morning boy. Rise and shine.”

    GAAAAAAAAAAAH!” He screams at the sight of me, pointing wildly in my direction with shock draped across his face.

    My smile grows to a grin. That will never get old. The boy clutches at his chest, breathing heavily with his skin as pale as snow. “OH MY-” He freezes as he notices the fact that he was about to use his Lord’s name in vain, in the presence of two priests one of whom is his father.

    “Hello, Kouhei Takeda-Kotomine.” I tell him.

    “How-”

    “I’m a friend of your father.” I tell him. Well, a friend of his father in this universe. I have lost count of the various Kotomine Kirei’s that have tried to kill me, but in vain. I like this Kotomine better.

    He’s not homicidal, sadistic, nor tortures children. He does make for an excellent father though. As evidenced by how his daughter Caren lives with him, along with his adopted son. They’ve grown up amazingly.

    I have an interest in Kouhei though. Something about him just garners my attention. It’s not in any weird sense of course, but it still draws me to think of the potential this boy has. The boy sits now before me, back arched and head bowed in respect.

    “Sit up straight.” I tell him.

    He snaps up with immense speed.

    “What’re you good at?” I ask him.

    “Excuse me?”

    “You know, what magecraft are you proficient in?” I make a gesture.

    “Um… I aspire to be an alchemist, and I’m decent at Gradation Air, which you obviously know as Projection. I rely on artifacts that I can channel my prana into, and from what I remember as a kid, I was slightly good at Jewel Magecraft. I don’t use, and refuse to use, anything heretical or sacrilegious.”

    I nod at his reply. Interesting. A little more self confidence, and this boy could grow into something amazing. His magic circuits are nothing
    special, but they radiate such energy… Haven’t felt something like this since the day of Tohsaka Nagato...

    A failure, nothing even worth noticing in most magi’s eyes, but what he grew up to be… He was one of my greatest apprentices, and I do not regret meeting the young man. I like working through life off my gut feeling. It hasn’t done me wrong once.

    It’s done about a few hundred random apprentices wrong, but I have a good feeling about this boy. I have rarely met any members of the Church so deeply entwined in magic, since meeting the Kotomine Family, and that Ciel woman from Misaki. He could grow to be a great magus, or a powerful member of the Burial Agency. It’s all a matter of his outlook.

    I don’t remember if I have ever met a Kouhei Takeda in another universe. I’m surprised I haven’t. I’ve met many variations of people before. But I doubt I’ve met a Kouhei Takeda.

    He’s not a prominent person in many realities. But I think that’s soon to change.

    “Do you want to be great, Kouhei?” I ask him.

    Brown eyes meet mine.

    “Do you want to be great? Grand, powerful, famous, whatever... Do you want to be something in your future?” I ask once again.

    He nods.

    “I can’t hear you.” I lean forward.

    I want to be....” He mumbles incoherently.

    “Still can’t hear you.”

    “I want to be...”

    “A little louder.” I urge him.

    "I..."

    "Out with it!"

    I, Kouhei Takeda-Kotomine, want to be… I want to be a great alchemist. I want to be a great magi. I want to be a great member of the Holy Church. I want to be a great person. ” He says with such determination, giving me an answer that I did not expect.

    That’s it. I’m choosing to make another decision on a whim again. But I’m fairly confident that this turn will be different from all the others. I am going to make it different.

    Like Tohsaka Nagato, I will make this boy great beyond comparison.

    “Do you want to be my apprentice?”

    Kotomine Kirei, and his friend Tsurugi, gape at me.

    Kouhei’s jaw hit the floor. Literally, as he had fallen out of his seat.

    Do you want to be my apprentice?

    Kotomine’s mouth opens to object, but I waved my hand at him absentmindedly to interrupt him. It’s all down to Kouhei’s choice. His eyes show great conflict as he sits himself straight, his mind probably waging a mental war. My fame/infamy seems to follow me wherever I go.

    It’s understandable that he would decline. Knowing what happened to my previous apprentices, it’s completely understandable. But it’s his decision, completely up to him to make. This boy’s potential could make him anything, he’s essentially a blank canvas.

    And he’s just waiting for the right artist to paint on him. His father’s done the line work, and it looks amazing. His sister’s done the shading, and it’s fleshed him out. Life has done the dimensions, and they’re at perfect scale.

    And all he needs is just a bit of color. Colors that I know how to use.

    “Can I have some time to think?”

    “Certainly.”

    It’s all a matter of time.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I set another ruby into another stone pedestal, flowing prana into it. Another bounded field comes to life, the detection barriers rising once more.

    I turn to my possible apprentice, as he watches me work.

    “Is there anything you’re interested in learning?

    “Um… I guess I’d love to learn more about Alchemy, and some basic elemental magic. Maybe some runes, or magic that would work with the artifacts I own.” He tells me, falling into step behind me. The two priests watch us from the balcony, Kotomine eyeing me.

    I know he’s shocked, afraid, angry, or some other emotion regarding my decision to attempt to get Kouhei as an apprentice. I don’t blame him for bearing such feelings; it’s his right a father to do so. I regret the circumstances of my previous apprentices, but they couldn’t handle the strains
    of my expectations. And most of them were stuck up rich brats with ten foot stakes up their asses.

    Most couldn’t handle the fact that my training relied on physical turmoil. They got traumatized by experiencing things they weren’t used to. That or they got crippled due to their own naiveté, or mere carelessness. Or they couldn’t stand that they had to get their carefully manicured hands dirty.

    It was that again, or most of the declines of my earlier students were due to the utter mind fucking experienced by doing things and seeing things in the other universes.

    I didn’t know that taking a young man to a world where clothes were never invented would make him nearly die of blood loss! It was an interesting trip. Like the time I visited Clock Tower in the reality that magecraft was known throughout the planet. I knew I shouldn’t have lent Waver Velvet the Kaleidostick to show an example of magecraft to his students for a broadcasted lesson.

    I did not expect the miniskirt. Or the kinky corset. Nor did I expect the bunny ears… Oh damn it, I did not need the mental image right now.


    I finish settling in the last ruby, activating its magic.

    I turn to the boy who may be my future apprentice, and sit upon the stone pedestal. His state as a magus is small right now, but he has all the skills of a proper killer of magus. If he chose to train a little bit more in his practical applications of magic, and improve upon his skill with Black Keys… He could be quite a formidable foe for anyone.

    The Church of this world might see him perfect agent for the Burial Agency.

    I find him to be the perfect material for an apprentice. I won’t force him to go do things against his beliefs, but you could count it a hobby of mine to watch promising young students rise to greatness or to be traumatized and/or crippled during the attempt. I won’t tell that to his father though. Some people are born with greatness; others have it thrust upon them.

    I wonder which one of these groups of people Kouhei Takeda belongs with.

    “Is that all you want to learn? Then if so, what do you want to do with your life?”

    “Er…”

    I can tell he hasn’t given much thought about this. Very indecisive. Those habits need to stop in the future, because if he can’t properly make a decision or think quickly on his feet, he’s going to end up dying in a real battle. If I was a more violent vampire…
    I think I could have easily slaughtered the poor boy where he stood.

    “So, you have no real decision yet on what to make of your future?”

    He nods.

    “But you feel like you could do anything with it, if you just put your mind to it?”

    He nods again.

    “You want to do great things.” I muse. “And you seem willing to do great things to get there.”

    “I do.” He answers. “I’m willing to do anything.”

    “Even making such a sacrifice? You could leave your family and friends, and go months, maybe years without seeing them. Are you sure upon yourself that you want to make such a decision?”

    “I… I don’t know.”

    Exactly, indecisive. But he has the right to do so, what I’m proposing is not something one can decide in an instant. A few of my previous students were forced into it because of their families.

    The others came for their own self benefit.

    Tohsaka Nagato… He was an odd case. But he saw his dreams clearly, and made it his lifelong mission to walk the path he saw would lead to his
    destination.

    He was foolhardy, brash.

    You know, I see a bit of a young Nagato in this young man.

    So as I watched the father, son, and that random other priest walk away from my home, I gave it a bit of thought. Reincarnation was possible. Kouhei could be the reincarnation of this world’s Tohsaka Nagato. Probably not, it could just be a coincidence.

    But both had given off a… What was it?

    Both had given off a determined fire. One that burned so vibrantly, it would be near impossible to blow it out…
    __________________________________________________ ______

    POV: Kouhei Takeda-Kotomine.


    I walk quietly beside my father down the street towards our home. I feel embarrassed beyond… Everything I’ve ever known. I turn to my father as he turns to me.

    He pats me on the shoulder. “Thanks for coming.”

    I rub the back of my head with a free hand, smiling softly. “And about the apprenticeship…?”

    “It’s your choice Kouhei. I’ll fully support your decision.”

    I nod in understanding.

    OW!” I groan as he smacks me one over the head.

    “That was for deciding to possibly run into your death. While the notion was appreciated, I don’t need you making stupid decisions in the future.”

    He tells me in his gruff voice. “So how did Caren react? I forgot to call home.”

    “Eh… Look for yourself.”

    We spot a disheveled Caren standing at the entrance to our one floor home. Her chest huffed and puffed. Tears ran down her eyes, falling to the ground. Our letters, already opened, were crunched up in her hand.

    DAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDY!” She sobbed, running toward our father.

    With a hearty jump, she was in his arms, clinging to him for dear life. She cried into his shoulder, as his arms wrapped around her. “There, there.” He murmured as he nestled his cheek through her hair.

    His mouth creased into a soft, soft smile, as he comforted his daughter, my sister, as she cried away her worries and sorrows.

    I couldn’t imagine life without them.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I walked down the streets of Fuyuki, Christopher Mackenzie by my side.

    “Kotomine, lighten up!” He grinned at me. “Live a bit! You look too much like your father with that expression on your face!”

    “Yeah, yeah Mackenzie.” I mutter.

    “Something on your mind?” He asks.

    “I guess…” I answer, looking at him. His eyes are already turned away to a bunch of schoolgirls walking by. I smack him one over the head.
    Girls are always on his mind.

    “We’re going for Karaoke later, you coming?” He asked, his attention still focused on the schoolgirls, who squealing about the “cute foreigner” and his friend.

    “Yeah, sure. Who else is going?”

    “Mayumi’s going, and Ayaka. A few more girls and guys you know from our class.” He grins.

    I sigh. The guy’s working towards a harem, and quite a few girls allow him to use their first names. Though it could just be because he’s a foreigner who doesn’t use honorifics often other than when he thinks about it, or that they really are interested in him. I remember when he transferred here, he tried his hardest to get his life to work like a visual novel.

    He managed to slowly succeed.

    Hence Mayumi and Ayaka, best friends who both are interested in him. I don’t have much luck with women. I’ve learned that quite a few of Caren’s friends have crushes on me. I really shouldn’t have brought her lunch in her room that one day, after I had trained with Father.

    And I should have known she had friends over. And I should have worn a shirt.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I sat on a seat, laughing my ass off as Mackenzie attempted to sing with the best of his ability. The rest of us clap as he finished, and he took an elaborate blow. I swear, Ayaka blushed and Mayumi swooned.

    They’re interested in him, alright.

    After everyone had taken their turn with the microphone (I had declined, this is yet another thing I suck at), we had gone to a restaurant for dinner.

    I smile, as Mackenzie laughed and talked with two of the most important girls in his life. Friends of mine butt shoulders with me, and I can’t help but delve in to their conversations. I’ve known these people for years. Some I’ve known since my first day attending Saint Paulo Miki Private School.

    “Hey, Kotomine. You sure nothing’s wrong?” Makenzie asks.

    All eyes are on me.

    “It’s nothing.” I tell them.

    “You seem down!”

    “Come on, tell us?”

    “Is it a girl?”

    “Oh, a secret lover!”

    “Is something going on at home?”

    I hang my head, thinking of a way to explain.

    “Listen, guys…” I start off. “Due to reasons I can’t afford to explain, I might have to go on a trip… And I don’t know when I’ll be back.”

    Silence.

    “So… You’re leaving?”

    “No, I’m not leaving forever… But yeah, for… Um…” I really don’t know.

    “Is something going on?”

    “It’s not that, it’s just… I’ve got something I want to do. And I have permission to go through with it. But I really don’t know when I’ll be back.”

    “So?” Mackenzie grins at me. “We can wait.” He pats me on the shoulder.

    “Just make sure you’re back before graduation.” He smiles, this one sincere.

    “And bring us souvenirs!”

    “Bring back a girlfriend!”

    “Make sure you have lots of fun!”

    I can’t help but smile as they encourage me to go. I wouldn’t have made it this far without their help. I think I know a decision. But I can’t help but regret the possibility, the choice of possibly leaving them behind.

    Why did do some decisions have to be so hard to make?
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I lay down in my bed that night, giving great thought to this. This shall be the biggest choice of my life. I can accomplish all my dreams. But is accomplishing my dreams worth leaving all this behind?

    I’m leaving my father, my sister, my friends, my schooling. I don’t really need my schooling with my intelligence, but everything else… I don’t want to give up the people I care about. But the things I can do…

    With the help of Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg, I can learn how to change the world.

    And that both amazes me, and frightens the crap out of me. I know a lot about Zelretch, and tales that have reached this far away from the Clock Tower. I know about his various apprentices that end up traumatized, broken, and even dead in gruesome ways. But…

    He could teach me a lot. More than I probably would know without his help. If I went with him, I could learn more then I possibly could in this lifetime. It’s quite literally an once-in-a-lifetime chance.

    I can’t afford to give something like this up.

    So… I think I have a basic decision.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I sit across from the aged man inside his home. This time, I was welcome.

    “Will I be able to return here?”

    “Whenever we’ve finished a segment of your training.”

    “And about the time-”

    He raises a hand to interrupt me. “When we return, we shall come back about a few days before we departed. It could be months or maybe years on a trip, but only days, maybe weeks for your family. The time difference is no obstacle. It is more malleable, flexible than one might think.”

    “…” I can make it to graduation.

    I’m giving this a lot of thought.

    The advantages outweigh the disadvantages, but the risks of a faulty gamble still glare out to me. I’m worried. I’m scared. I’m absolutely shit-my-pants frightened.

    But to achieve my dreams, something has to give.

    The Law of Equivalent Exchange
    . In order to create, something must be given. In order to make my dreams reality… I shall pay the
    appropriate price.

    I will make my decision.

    I am probably going to regret this sometime soon.

    But this is my decision.

    I am ready.

    I will be your apprentice.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    “Do I tell Caren about this?” I ask my father as I pack my bags.

    “Hm. It’s up to you.” He answers.

    I've told Caren I’m going on a trip with friends. But in reality, I’m going to be hopping across reality with my new Master. I’m still shocked. This doesn’t feel real.

    Of all strange circumstances I’ve experienced... This all has to be some elaborate dream.

    I understand that Zelretch picks people like me on a whim, but… This is out of nowhere. Random beyond my understanding. Beyond human understanding.

    Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg isn’t human.

    But maybe that gives him a better understanding of how our world works.

    I sling my bag over my shoulder, stepping towards the window and taking a deep breath of morning air. I walk into the hall after, pausing before Caren’s door. “Caren?” I say, knocking on the wood.

    The door creaks open. “Onii-chan?” She blinks, rubbing her eyes. “You haven’t gone on your trip yet?”

    I smile. “Not yet. Just stopping by to say bye...”

    I pat her on the head, and she grumbles.

    I am about to embark on a trip, where I’ll finally be able to seek after my dreams, and make them reality. And I’m leaving Caren and Father behind. I won’t be seeing them for a long time.

    So what do I say to her?

    I didn’t know what to say. I was a very emotive person when amongst people I trust. So I did what I felt. And what I felt was…

    I just hugged her, lifting her into the air, and I cried.

    Onii-chan!” She squeals.

    I’ll miss you Caren...” My voice is more solemn.

    You’re such a softie! You’ll never be an Executor at this rate!”

    That’s my Caren. Always pushing me to move forward in life...

    I’ll miss you…

    “Onii-chan?”

    I settle her on the ground, patting her head. She sees my tears, eyes widening. I wipe them away, smiling fondly.

    “I’ll see you soon, Caren.”

    And with another, final ruffle of her hair, I turn around.

    And with Caren’s golden eyes boring into my back, I find the heart to force myself to walk away.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    It’ll only be days, maybe weeks for Caren.

    And I am ready for the months, maybe years to come for me.

    I stood with Father and Zelretch in his vast, barrier laden garden. The still blooming, yet-to-die flowers sway softly in the autumn wind.

    “Are you ready, Kouhei?” Father asks me.

    I smile, nodding eagerly. I hold out my hand. He nods himself, and takes it without a word. And much to my surprise…

    He had pulled me into a tight hug.

    “Take care, Kouhei.” He said to me.

    “I will, Father.”

    When we part, I feel him slip something into my bag.

    “Just a gift.” He assures me. A confident smile is on his face. I bow in thanks.

    “Ready to go, my apprentice?”

    I stare into the red eyes of my master. A wrinkled face grins down upon me, nodding in acknowledgement. I stand proud and tall. I kind of feel confident now, I feel like I have control over the way my life shall go for now on.

    I am no longer powerless, like I was as a child.

    I take a respectful bow.

    “I am ready, Master.”

    He nods.

    Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg raises his hand out towards the flowers. The wind blows a bit faster now, sending a flurry of petals flying around us. He begins to mutter a chant, something I can’t understand. The faster he spoke, the faster the wind around us began to soar.

    I was witnessing the Second Magic. I was seeing the Kaleidoscope with my own two eyes. I am seeing the scientifically impossible. I am seeing a miracle in its work.

    Open.

    As if a zipper had slid down in mid air, a rip in reality had appeared before us. It seemed to be an uneven tear, as if someone had ripped apart fabric with a knife. I watched my master smile, peering into the tear.

    “Follow me.”

    And then he just walks into it.

    I turn back to my father, shaking his hand. And then with a bit of hesitation, I walk towards the tear in reality. I take a deep breath. And then I peer inside.

    All breath left my lungs as my eyes fell upon the sights.

    I could see the universe. I saw stars. I saw planets. I saw galaxies.


    I saw THOUSANDS of rifts, similar to the one I used as a window.


    I was looking at the multiverse. And I felt something grab me… Not by a limb, not on my body… I felt something grab my soul, and
    tug on it in a direction.


    I, Kouhei Takeda-Kotomine, took my jump into a new life.


    I literally jumped. I soared through space, enclosed by the myriad of lights.


    And then I began to fall.
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    Alright pretty good can't wait for more.
    Note: might be a good idea to split chapters into several parts like the fanfic prismatic chaos, like his school life into 1-1, his home life 1-2, infiltrating zweinorg's house 1-3 and kouhei's decision 1-4
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    Australia sure has some mighty mojo, no?


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    Color me interested. I'll be watching this.
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    Nothings happening. I DEMAND SOMETHING TO HAPPEN

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
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    it's just the beginning dude patience I a virtue etc etc
    "Everything in creation is flawed. Humans don't need to be mentioned. Air, intent, and even time. My eyes can see the death of things. They're special, like yours. So I can kill anything that lives. Even if that thing is God."

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    I'm just enthusiastic. =3=

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    Ok my bad
    "Everything in creation is flawed. Humans don't need to be mentioned. Air, intent, and even time. My eyes can see the death of things. They're special, like yours. So I can kill anything that lives. Even if that thing is God."

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    Impressively. Even at the first chapter.
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    Nicely done. After that chapter I'm gonna have to follow this story...

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    Chapter 2 is already on fanfiction.net by the way
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    "Everything in creation is flawed. Humans don't need to be mentioned. Air, intent, and even time. My eyes can see the death of things. They're special, like yours. So I can kill anything that lives. Even if that thing is God."

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    While chapter 2 is already uploaded, I'm drastically editing some scenes and adding new ones right now. It should be done in a few minutes, so please be patient with me.

    Sorry about that, guys.

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    Chapter 2

    Welcome to the Multiverse
    __________________________________________________ ______

    Welcome to Fate/Stay Night.

    Possible Canon World #5.


    Please enjoy your stay.


    POV: Kouhei Takeda-Kotomine.

    __________________________________________________ ______

    I was falling.


    But it did not feel like I was falling.


    Stars, blackness, universes, emptiness.


    I witnessed the Crossroads of Oblivion at their work.


    I saw worlds end and their rifts close, I saw worlds begin and their newly made rifts tear open. I saw civilizations at their rise, and at their fall. I saw wars, I saw peace. I witnessed ETERNITY and I witnessed it's END.


    The rifts lead to ALL and NOTHING.


    I don't know why I knew this. Something in me just knew.


    And if these rifts were the gates to EVERYTHING...


    Then somewhere, out there in the vast never-ending Crossroads...


    There was the gate to Akasha, the Root.


    "Down here."

    The force guiding my soul made me fall towards a certain rift. This one was glowing with a soft light, an indicator of where I was supposed to go. The rift was small, but I probably could fit through it pretty easily. I know that's my destination.


    I drift through the rift.


    And I feel my consciousness go dark.

    __________________________________________________ ______

    "Hello boy! Wake up!"

    Tired eyes flicker open, squinting at the bright lights that threatened to blind me. My muscles felt weak, strained as I tried to push myself up to no avail. It was hard enough that the weight of my bag suddenly felt so heavy compared to the weight during my entry into the rift. I just felt tired.

    "I'm accounting this to shock for your first time, then."

    My eye forces open, spotting my master framed by a canopy of leaves.

    "Welcome to consciousness, boy." He grinned down to me. A wrinkled hand tugs on mine and lifts me up. The very same hand helps my suddenly frail legs stand.

    "Where are we?"

    "Here, just walk. I'll guide you."

    My arm wraps around his shoulder, as he supports my weight. I can hardly see through blurry eyes, but I can make out a forest through my clouded vision. I don't know where we are yet. I feel leaves, and rocks underneath these feet of mine, so I'm fairly sure we're in a forest, and from the vibrant colors I can just barely see, it's autumn here.

    I can feel the chilled wind ruffle my hair, and brush across my skin. Various pleasant scents make their way to my nose, and I can hear the flaps of migratory birds. It's a nice feeling.

    "Come on, we're almost there." He assures me. I can see the blurred shape of a grin on his face.

    We continue walking through the forest.

    "Welcome to your first alternate reality, Kouhei Takeda."
    He lets go of me, and I rub my eyes. I can see again.

    "Woah."

    We're standing on a hill, facing out towards a city. Everything's so familiar. I recognize buildings, the familiar shopping centers, my school, and the streets. Even the vibrant red bridge that linked the two parts of the city together was there.

    I was standing before Fuyuki City, in another dimension.

    ...

    Amazement struck me first, then raw shock hit in. I believe I had stood there for minutes, taking in the sights. This is my home, yet it isn't my home. Various tidbits of science fiction had brought up into my mind. If this was an alternate reality of Fuyuki City, wouldn't that mean there are alternate people of who I know here? That would mean an alternate Father, an alternate Caren, alternate versions of my friends-

    There could even be an alternate Kouhei Takeda.

    "Master-"

    "No."

    "Excuse me?"

    "We won't interfere with the workings of this universe." He tells me sternly.

    "But-"

    "That includes changing the lives of the people living here. We don't do that unless we understand the consequences of doing such a thing."

    Consequences.


    Never thought about those... Now the ramifications of showing up out of nowhere to a person I know in this universe might be weird, considering the fact that they might not even know me. Yet, maybe. That, or the appearance of a second me might really freak the crap out of them. That explains Master's words. But what isn't explained is how the heck he knew what I was thinking about...

    "So, what our plans, Master?"

    "We train and observe."

    I nod. "When shall we start?"

    "After we find a place to stay..."
    __________________________________________________ ______

    "... This is underneath the bridge."

    "Exactly! Nothing like the great outdoors."

    "This isn't camping! This is homelessness!" I argue. I kick a can into the river, watching it float away. There's no one down here but us, our bags and other belongings.

    "This shall be our home base for now. We won't exactly start tackling training until you get used to a few matters of inter-dimensional travel."

    I sit on the ground, sighing with my head bowed. "And those matters are?"

    "You have to find them for yourself to truly understand." He tells me.

    "Can I have a hint?"

    "Nope." He whistles. "There's one point about inter-dimensional travel that you must understand before we can continue on with our journey. It's one of the most important, and you will not survive for long without understanding it."

    I groan. This is going to take a while, isn't it?

    "Now go off on your search. I'll go out when I feel like it." He waves a hand at me, ushering me off.

    I set my bag down beside him, and turn to walk away.

    I begin to walk down the streets of Fuyuki, in the more modern half of the city. I remember a lot of these places, having been here with friends. If I were to encounter myself here, wouldn't that be cool? Though I'd probably end up giving myself a heart attack or a stroke... I wonder what's going on back home.

    I miss everyone already.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I have no honest clue what I'm looking for. I have no real information about what kind of alternate reality this is. So, after practically hours of just wandering the familiar streets of Fuyuki, I'm sitting before my master, eating ramen as he downs a small buffet. I know he was rich in multiple universes, but this was a bit much.

    "What's the difference between this world and ours?" I ask out of the blue.

    "Hm... Some things I can't tell you." He pauses to swallow, "But here's one."

    I lean forward to listen.

    "The Fifth Grail War is about to begin."

    The blood drains from my face.

    "The fifth?" I murmur weakly.

    "I doubt this shall happen back at your home, but from where I am from, the Fifth Grail War came about ten years after the fourth, due to circumstances I'm not very willing to disclose." He answers, continuing to eat.

    The Fifth Grail War...


    The Fourth Grail War was terrible enough. And I had the scars and first hand experiences of it. They're not my best memories, there are things I'd be much better off without remembering. I remember the panicking, the worries, the pains, and dear Lord have mercy, I remember all the blood. Every single little droplet... Especially the innocent blood spilt by that foul, damned Caster's hands.

    I set my ramen down, no longer hungry. I pull my knees closer to me, and I rest my forehead upon my kneecaps. I feel so cold, even beside a fire. Fear can break the greatest men. I'm not yet a man, so fear simply shatters me.

    "Are you okay boy?"

    "I'm fine." I lied.

    "Is it about the war?"

    ...
    I find it within me to slowly nod.

    "Do you want to talk about it?"

    I stare at the ground. My mind began to drift to the events of my past.

    "No, I don't."
    __________________________________________________ ______

    About Ten Years Ago


    I stood with the aged man who named himself Kotomine Risei. I held the jacket that covered me quietly, as we walked down the street. I could barely think straight, my mind on fire with a blaze of thoughts and emotions. The weight of loss caused my heart to ache, to throb in pain. I was alone, and I had no one else left in my life.

    "Mommy and Daddy are gone..." I murmured. Daddy killed Mommy. I still didn't know why.

    A hand patted my shoulder, guiding me. "It'll be alright son." He assured me, leading me forward. It was a cold night, from what I remember. My hollow eyes just watched the ground, unseeing, unfeeling.

    "We're here." I raise my head.

    We were at the top of a hill, and standing tall and proudly before us, was a church. The shadow of a metal cross bore down on us, a foreboding shadow at that. Albeit the creepiness the church seemed to give off in the moonlight, I felt something else wandering about my mind. I felt safe here, like nothing could touch me, hurt me, do things to me.

    I felt welcome in the house of God.


    He lead me to the tall wooden doors, ushering me inside. I was now in a courtyard, surrounded by flowers and small and carefully tended plants. It was quiet here, but gave off the feeling of sanctuary. Risei lead me to a smaller door, this one leading inside. We're standing to the side of a large room, one I could tell was the chapel.

    "Father!"

    A young, suit-clad man ran up to us. He rubbed brown hair back, as his brown eyes stared into the eyes of my rescuer. "What happened? Did he manage to gain the vampires help?" He asked Risei.

    "No, he didn't."

    "What happened? Who's this boy?"

    Both of them looked down towards me, and Risei gestured for me to introduce myself.

    "Kouhei Takeda." I say quietly, looking down.

    "Is he-"

    "Yes, he is. The man's dead. He killed his wife before I could stop him." Risei answered.

    My small hand reached up to wipe away tears.

    "Come here, we'll get you something to eat." Risei told me, guiding me away.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I put a spoon of hot oatmeal into my mouth, sitting on a tall stool in the church's kitchen. Across from me, a grey haired little girl with golden eyes drank juice from a sippy cup with a grin spread across her face. The young man, who I assumed then was her father, smiled softly at her, rubbing her head. I remember when Mommy did that for me...

    "Are you okay, Kouhei?" The man asks me.

    I hesitantly nod.

    "If there's anything you need, just ask."

    "Okay."
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I sat in a pew, hugging myself in the dark. It was quiet, no one seemed to be coming for mass today. I was left alone to my thoughts. But in my honest opinion, I really didn't want to be alone. I notice a light coming up beside me. It's the man whose Risei's son, holding a candle. He sets the candle in the space on my other side, then sits down.

    I don't even know his name, but he's doing this much for me.

    "Kouhei?"

    "Uh... What's your name?"

    "Kotomine Kirei."

    "..." I'm quiet again.

    There's silence between us, neither one wanting to speak a word. We're just sitting beside each other in the presence of... In the presence of...

    I wasn't religious. So I didn't really believe in God.

    I was curious though. I wondered what kind of person God was. I wondered why he was putting me through this. I thought God was supposed to be a good person.

    So why was he putting me through hell?

    "Why...?" I ask, putting my head on my knees. I began to shake, emotion overtaking me. My cheeks felt wet.

    I remember Mommy holding me. I remember her touch. I remember the door shaking. I remember Mommy's screams.

    I remember Daddy's bloodthirsty eyes.

    "Why did Daddy kill Mommy?" I said with a shaky voice.

    A hand patted me on the back as I cried.

    "Does God hate me, Kirei...?" If he didn't hate me, why is he doing this to me?

    I feel the hand pat me on the head.

    "Kouhei, God will never hate you. People tend to blame what's happened to them on God, but it isn't God's fault. It isn't your fault either."

    "Then why...? Is it something I've done?"

    "Kouhei, God will forgive you. I'm sure he's trying to help you. But all you need is to give him a little time, and a little faith. And pray, Kouhei. It'll go a long way."

    "..." I was quiet, giving it thought. "I miss Mommy."

    "I know you do. And I'm sure she'll want you to be a strong, brave boy." His hand ruffled my hair.

    And so, I bowed my head down and I continued to cry. His arm wrapped around me, and pulled me close as a few tears fell down my face.

    I had lost my Mommy for good. This wasn't like the time I got lost at the mall, crying until she found me... This time she was gone. I won't see her again.

    I had lost my Daddy... If I ever consider him Daddy again... I don't miss him. Not after what he had done.

    I had lost one father.

    But now, after today...

    I had gained two.

    __________________________________________________ ______

    I look at the little girl, Caren. She bounced up and down to some show on the TV that morning, giggling happily. She bobbled over to me, with a big grin that showed off the teeth she had. "Play! Play!" She tugged on my hand, trying to pull me over to a small pile of toys sitting in the corner. I don't feel like playing right now. She continued pulling on my hand, but I tugged it back.

    She pouted, trying to stand tall. Then she went over on her own, picking up a toy and starting up her imagination. I stood up from the couch, and decided to walk around. Outside of the office, where I had kept Caren's company, I entered the hall, and began poking around. My wandering lead me to a door set into a stone wall, which seemed to lead nowhere outside.

    I opened it, revealing a stairway going down. With curiosity, I descended into the depths of the church. The stone steps clattered loudly as I made my way deeper and deeper. I jump to the ground from four steps high, a habit of mine.
    I'm in a smaller hallway, this one leading to a single door.

    "Assassin. Scout the area. Tohsaka needs that information." I hear.

    I walk to the door, creaking it open slightly. And my eyes widen at the sight.

    Multiple black clad, dark skinned figures surrounded Kirei. Each bore a mask, one of a white skull. I had learned about the circumstances of the Grail War from my mother. Seven Masters allied with seven Servants fighting it out to the death for the right to claim the Holy Grail... I didn't expect in any way, for the man who's taking care of me to be a Master.

    The people clad in black began to disperse into the air, leaving Kirei standing in the center of the room.

    "I know you're there, Kouhei."

    I step out from behind my hiding place, silent and pale. "Come here." He orders. Hesitantly, I find the will to walk to his side.

    "Did you see that?" He asks.

    I nod. It wouldn't be right to lie. I learned lying was bad. "Are you mad?" I ask.

    He smiles with that small, yet warm smile. "Of course not. You didn't find it at all strange?"

    "I know about thaumaturgy and all that..." I murmur, poking my fingers together.

    "Do you know how to use it properly? Safely?" He asks me.

    I shake my head. "I only know a few things."

    I know what Magic Circuits are, and I know how to get prana into my hands and out of my body, but that's it. Kirei reaches into his cloak, and pulls out what seems to be the hilt of a sword without a blade. He hands the thing to me, letting me look it over. It's a rusted red color, the guard covered by a design, and very light.

    "Try putting prana into it."

    I adjust the hilt into my right hand, feeling a few of my small circuits come to life. Prana leaves my hand, and enters the blade. It takes a few seconds, and I can feel the converted prana enter the hilt. And then my eyes widen.

    Materializing before me was a long, thin blade attached to the hilt in my hand. It was really cool, in my opinion.

    "It's called a Black Key. I use it to fight demons and evil people." He answers, as I look over the blade in my hands. "Remember, it's not a toy, but a weapon. People should use weapons to fight for what they believe in, and to protect what they can." I nod at his words, it makes sense.

    "You can keep that, if you'd like."

    "Really?" I ask, my face brightening.

    "Just take care of it. And use it for the right things."

    His hand ruffles my hair, in the way I'm beginning to love.

    "Thank you."
    __________________________________________________ ______

    Kirei held Caren in his arms as we walked down the street in the residential half of Fuyuki, in the part where western-style houses were common. The hilt of the Black Key had stayed in the pocket of a jacket Risei had taken from my old house, ready to be used if needed. I felt safe, knowing I had something to defend myself from any danger to come my way.

    When Kirei stopped, we stood before the gate to a large house, a practical castle in comparison to my size. The gate creaked open, and Kirei ushered me inside. He weaved me through a garden, down the path towards the western style house. I noticed a man standing before the door.

    And I also noticed eyes watch me from the upper windows.

    They weren't watching Kirei, they were watching me. My eyes locked with what I think were blue ones, which narrowed at me. Curtains flew between us, and the mysterious person withdrew into the house. From what I could tell, it was a girl.

    "Kirei, welcome." The red suited man said to him, arms wide in a welcoming gesture.

    Kirei nodded to him. "Tokiomi." He said, setting Caren on her feet. The first thing she did was run to me, latching onto my arm.

    "Onii-chan!" She chimed happily.

    I groan a bit, trying to loosen myself from her. No use.

    "And who are you?" The red suited man asked me.

    "Takeda Kouhei." I answer politely, taking care to put my last name first in respect.

    "So this is the boy?" He asked Kirei, who nodded with a sigh. The other man sighed himself. "Such unfortunate circumstances... But no matter, I believe you can do a good job taking care of him."

    The man looks down to me. "My name is Tohsaka Tokiomi, and I'm Kirei's master in the matters of thaumaturgy." He introduced himself. "I see now my apprentice has a little apprentice of his own." He chuckled, and then stood aside.

    "Please come in, make yourselves at home."

    He lead us in to the large house. The foyer itself was huge, and fancily decorated like a castle would be. Caren kept her hold on my arm, refusing to let me go. "Father! Kotomine!" Another voice called out to us.

    A girl, about my age stood on stairs, walking down them. She had long brown hair tied up into twin tails that reached the shoulders of her red clothes, and from what I can tell from here, she had aqua coloured eyes. The same eyes that spied on me outside the house... Those eyes locked with mine once more in suspicion.

    "Rin-Rin!"

    "Caren-chan!"

    Caren let go of me and bounced over to the girl, and locked her arms around her. The girl smiled, patting her head. "It's so good to see you!" She told Caren, moving down a bit to her eye level. "Now who's the suspicious guy over there?" She jabbed an accusing finger in my direction.

    Caren brought a finger to her lips in thought. "Onii-chan!" She grinned.

    I palm my forehead. I'm not her Onii-chan. The girl walks up to me, holding Caren by the hand. "I'm Tohsaka Rin!" She says, trying to stand tall with pride and intimidate me. She's shorter than me by about a full inch.

    "I'm Kouhei Takeda." I answer her, folding my arms and standing tall myself.

    "Rin, why don't you go play? I need to talk business with Kirei." Her father, Tokiomi, told her.

    She looked reluctant , then with a "Hmph!" turned on her heel and walked off with Caren.

    "Good luck with her." Kirei advised me, and then nudged me off to follow them.

    We sat in what seemed to be Tokiomi's workshop, surrounded by books and other thaumaturgy-related paraphernalia, all illuminated by
    candlelight. Caren curled up in Rin's lap, as she read her a book about magecraft. "So that's how jewel magecraft works!" Rin exclaimed happily to the little girl. Who seemed uninterested and oblivious, not understanding the completely complex explanation about the Tohsaka family magecraft.

    "Rin-Rin smart!" Caren chimed, clapping her hands.

    "Why thank you!" Rin giggled, hugging her in thanks.

    I turn to spot a magecraft circle, one that Rin detailed in her lecture to Caren. I see a bunch of diamonds, of all things, sitting beside it. First thought in my mind was to pocket a few of them, since they obviously was worth quite a lot of money, an amount of money I never had before. The next thought scolded myself, since I knew stealing was wrong. My last thought was one of curiosity.

    I take the jewel, and instead of putting it in my pocket, I put it in the middle of the ornately designed circle, or from what I understood from the lecture, a sigil. The process of Jewel Magecraft seemed to revolve around putting converted prana into the jewel and controlling its properties from within. I summon prana into my hands, feeling it convert into mana. I feel the mana wrap around the jewel, which now began to glow with a soft blue light.

    I weave my hands up, feeling the mana pulse. I'm relaxed, enjoying the little display. The very little amount of prana I had at my disposal compared to other magi made it much easier to control. My hands moved about, keeping the mana flow straight into the jewel. Every few times I felt it try to flow away, and so my hands moved to counter it and control the jewel.

    A smile drifts upon my face as the jewel takes shape. Right into a miniature replica of a Black Key.

    "What?-! How can you do that!"

    My concentration breaks at the sudden shout, the mana flow breaking from the shaped diamond. I drop all use of mana, and use my hand to pick up the sword. "Wow." I murmur.

    "Rin! Is something wrong?" Tokiomi comes storming down the stairs. Rin shakes her head, staring at the blade in my hand. The little replica captures his attention at well, and he holds his hand out at me. "If I may?" He asks, gesturing for the sword.

    I place it in his palm, and he lifts it up to the candlelight. "Impressive. Where did you learn this? From Kirei?"

    I shake my head. "I listened to her read a book." I point at Rin.

    Tokiomi turns to his daughter with a small smile. "You'll make a great teacher in the future, I'm sure about that Rin. But you'll need to step up your efforts. Now, I've got to get back upstairs. Don't play with anything you don't know how to read or use. Don't touch the machines either." He advises us.

    He hands me back the miniature blade. "You can keep that." He tells me, "Good work." And with a wave, he walks back up the stairs.

    "You showed me up!" Rin exclaimed, frowning and stomping her feet on the ground angrily. "How come you can you do it, and I can't!"

    I look at my hands.

    "I... I don't know."

    I felt relaxed as my converted prana did its work, and took the shape of my imagination. I could feel mana resound from the miniature sword in my hand, like a heartbeat. I'm a little more sensitive to mana then quite a few people. When I feel a surge of mana, I can sense it. Sometimes it tickles, other times it just hurts.

    "What other things can you do?" Rin asks me.

    "What can you do?" I say, trying to divert attention from me.

    "I can do other things with jewels!" She starts off. "I can store mana in them, and I can make things explode!"

    I nod. That's actually pretty impressive. I pull out the hilt of my Black Key. "I can do this."

    I materialize the blade, shocking Rin.

    "You can do Projection?"

    I don't think the blade's projected, I actually think it's a power of the hilt. I dematerialize the blade, and settle it into my pocket again. I shouldn't play with it, since it's a weapon. Though my other sword...

    I lift the small diamond sword up. It's only faintly sharp, so I scratch the wood of the work table with it . It leaves a thin faint line, but when I grip it doesn't cut my skin. The Black Key can slay demons and smite evil, but the only things this could probably kill were cockroaches.

    Fear my magic diamond mini-sword, you worthless bugs!


    ...

    I think I just posed in my imagination trip. Rin was giggling. "You say nothing." I tell her, putting the diamond sword in my pocket.
    We start talking about our lives, from where we went for school, to what our favourite foods were. She's a genius at school, practically performing swan dives while I can only tread water. We talked about nearly everything, anything on our mind, we brought it up. Until she brought up that one question.

    "So, what're your parents like?"

    "..."

    I'm quiet, looking down.

    "Hey, I asked you a question." She said, tiling her head as she came closer.

    "I don't want to talk about it."

    "Come on!" She urged me, "Say something!"

    "I don't want to say anything!" I shout.

    Rin's eyes widen, as Caren's begin to grow teary. "Onii-chan's a meanie!" She cried. Rin turned on her heel to comfort her.
    "Idiot, you made her cry! Why can't you just answer a simple question?-!" She said to me. Her eyes widen a bit more, meeting mine.

    I feel something flow down my cheek.

    I turn on my heel, and I run. I run up the stairs, past a worried Tokiomi. I run out into the hallway, just needing to get away for some reason. I just needed to get away.

    Run. Hide. Safe.
    Those words ran through my head as my feet took me out of the house.

    I found myself in a large garden, surrounded by flowers of various sorts. The evening light shined down on me, as I began walking through the flowers. I sat down on a stone bench, pulling my legs closer. I rest my head on my knees, thinking that I need to stop running from my problems and what I don't want to hear.

    I was so into my thoughts, I neglected to notice the other occupant of the bench.

    "You must be Kouhei. My name's Tohsaka Aoi."

    I turn my head to see a woman, with long brown hair and deep brown eyes, wearing pale brown clothes. She sat on the bench beside me, a few flowers in hand. She puts the flowers beside her, and scoots over to my side. "Are you okay?" She asked me.

    She seemed friendly. Very trustworthy in my eyes. I think about lying to her. "No." I tell her with honesty.

    I think that lying would be an injustice to this woman.

    "Would you like to talk about it?" She asks, a consoling hand on my shoulder.

    "... I miss my Mommy."

    She was gone. I have to move on with life. But I just can't let go. I can't let go of the memories, the emotions that came with them.

    I can't let go of what made Yuriko Takeda the most wonderful woman in the world.


    "And what do you miss?" She asks, moving closer until her arm was wrapped around me. "Tell me anything, even the little things."

    "I miss... I miss waking up to the breakfast she made me... I miss when she hugs me... I miss when she played with me... I miss when she held my hand, I miss when she made me feel safe, I miss when she told me she loved me... I miss her smile."

    I miss the smile I would never see again.

    I missed EVERYTHING.

    I remember everything so clearly. I miss everything that made Mommy my Mommy. I miss her love. I miss it all. I don't miss my Daddy.

    I hate Daddy for taking her away from me.


    Everything that Yuriko Takeda embodied in my heart was gone. And it left a gaping, bloody hole. I wanted my Mommy back. I wanted to see her smile.

    I wanted my father to go to hell.


    I wanted my Mommy.

    That man was never my father.


    Yuriko Takeda was dead. I was alive. It was so unfair. I wish I was-

    ...

    ...

    ...

    No
    . I don't wish I was dead.

    I just wish all this never happened.


    And so I let the dam break. I let all my emotions loose. I quickly hug Aoi, much to her surprise. And I just cry my eyes out, letting loose all the pain, all the sorrow.

    "Waaaaaaaaaah!"

    I just let it all go.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I sit beside Kirei, quiet once again. We're silent as we listen to Aoi argue with her husband behind wooden walls.

    "Tokiomi! You heard what I said! Kouhei just lost his mother and look what's happening to him! What about Sakura! What if she's feeling the same pain?-!"

    The shouts become muted, as I see Kirei draw something on the wall with chalk. It seems to be a sigil. "Is it my fault?" I ask him. "Is it my fault they're arguing?"

    "No, it's not your fault. It's something they would have to talk over eventually. Something I hope they'll resolve soon." He sighs, leaning against the wall.

    I nod at his answer.

    "Are you feeling better?" He asks me.

    I nod. I feel much better. He smiles down at me with that small smile, the one that gave me the feeling that all was once again right with the world. Caren's lucky to have a father like him. His hand ruffles my hair again.

    I feel something tug on my wrist. It's Caren. Her eyes show evidence of having cried, and quite a lot at that. She hugs my leg.

    "Sorry..." She murmurs.

    She's not the one who needs to feel sorry. I kneel down a bit and hug Caren tightly. She hugs me back, giggling. "I love Onii-chan, Rin-Rin, and Daddy."

    "I'm not-" I pause, still hugging her.

    I close my eyes. She's one of the only things that are still going to be here for me.

    "I'm your Onii-chan." I murmur, holding her tight.

    "I love Onii-chan."

    "... I love you too."
    __________________________________________________ ______

    School...


    Well, I hate school. Not as much as other people do, but I generally dislike school. I could be doing something productive, but I'm doing math problems and other things that won't be of major use in the outside world. Oh well. I transferred out of my old school, and now I'm at a new one. Turns out I'm in the same class as Rin. And she hasn't quite forgiven me for making Caren cry.

    "Idiot, you don't answer like that!" I rest my head on my desk, as Rin starts marking my math work. Most of it is probably wrong.

    "Don't bully him..." Her friend, Kotone says.

    At least someone supports me here. Rin's the class idol, so everyone looks up to her. And Rin's currently looking down on me. It's not nice.

    "Listen to the girl, will you?" I tell her off.

    Rin pouts. "At least I'm not an idiot who makes girls cry!" She storms off towards her desk.

    "I'm sorry..." Kotone bows.

    I smile at her. "No, it's fine. It's my fault in this case."

    She brightens a bit. "You seem familiar with Rin-chan."

    "Er... Family friend." I answer.

    "That's interesting." She gives a soft smile. "I'll see you around, Kouhei-kun."

    My face feels a bit warm as she turns to walk to her desk. Haven't had anyone stick kun to the end of my name before... It's nice. Especially coming from such a soft spoken girl like Kotone.

    The teacher catches our attention. "Due to the sudden disappearances, please take care and extreme caution when walking home. I'd advise for your parents to pick you up, but if you must go home on your own, then please be careful." The man turns to write things about schoolwork and warnings on the chalkboard, while my classmates come to life with conversations.

    The mysterious disappearances of children all over Fuyuki have gripped everyone in the city with cold hands. It's scary, kids disappearing from their beds, parents turning around to see their children gone. The people on the news every night keep sugar-coating things, telling us that the police have everything completely under control. They don't want people to panic.

    But children keep disappearing... And I can't help but feel a bit scared.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    After class, I walk alongside Rin and Kotone home.

    I smile, absentmindedly listening to their conversation. They seem to be really good friends. I wonder how my friends are doing. I haven't even had the time to call them, or see them. I really should, I don't want to worry them or anything.

    "Well, this is where we go." Rin says, pointing into the direction of a train station.

    "I'll walk." Kotone smiled, waving at us as she began to walk to wherever her home was.

    "What're you waiting for?" Rin asked me, as she began walking to the station.

    "Go without me." I answer, running after Kotone.

    "Kouhei-kun?" She gasps, as I appear by her side.

    "See you later Rin!" I watch the girl palm her forehead and walk off.

    "What're you doing?" Kotone asks me. Her cheeks seemed a bit red for some reason.

    "A gentleman must walk a lady home. At least, that's what Father said."

    Wait, Kirei said that. Not my old father. I paid it no mind, as Kotone began playing with her fingers, probably nervous for some reason. "Okay then..." She answered.

    "Lead the way." I bow in an elaborate pose.

    "Okay." A wide, more confident smile appears on her face as she begins to walk with me.

    "How long have you known Rin?" I ask her, adjusting the bag on my back.

    Kotone smiles, "Since Kindergarten. She's always been friendly to me."

    "I can't see why she wouldn't." I smile back. Kotone's a very nice girl, she just has a few confidence issues.

    Kotone's cheeks grow a bit redder, and I still don't know why.

    "Are you feeling okay?" I ask her, reaching out my hand to feel her forehead. As soon as I touch it, I can feel her face burn up.

    "I'm feeling fine!" She near shrieks.

    "Okay. Good to hear." I chuckle nervously.

    It's nearing winter, so evening comes sooner. The sun's already starting to set, and large shadows already creep amongst the city. Kotone looks around anxiously, as if scared. My foot taps a can, and she jumps up in fright.

    "EEEEK!" She squeals, latching onto my arm. She's all jittery, and shaking.

    "It's okay." I assure her. "Nothing's coming this way." If something were to come, I have my Black Key ready for use at any moment. In the case of a strange person versus very long sword, the very long sword shall win hands down in a very bloody and epic fashion that involves dismemberment, disembowelment and/or violent castration.

    We're fairly safe.

    "It's okay." I assure her once more.

    "Okay." She says, but she doesn't let go of my arm.

    "Kouhei-kun?"

    "Yes?"

    "Thank you for being with me."
    __________________________________________________ ______

    Kotone's mother offered to let me stay the night, since it was almost dark out by the time we made it to her house. She had lauded me in an over the top fashion, praising me as the brave boy who saw to it that her daughter made it home without a scratch. That may have been what happened, but it didn't make it any less weird.

    "I'm sorry, but I really have to get home."

    "Where do you live?"

    "Oh, the church on the hill." I answer. "It'll be easy to walk there."

    "Are you sure? You're very welcome to stay-"

    I interrupt the woman. "I'm sorry ma'am, but I'll be fine." I wonder if I should tell her about my weapon. But if I did, I probably would have given the woman a heart attack.

    I wave goodbye to a red Kotone, as her mother began to walk me down the block. I waved goodbye to the woman too, as I crossed the street and began heading for the hill. It was dark now, so I had my hand gripping onto the hilt of my sword. It would help so much to be safe right now.

    I watched the shadows with speculative eyes, trying to figure out whether threats hid behind the shelter of the darkness.

    "Ohohoho, what do we have here? Just another lonely little child. Come, my lost lamb. I have good use for you." A voice called out to me.

    In the crass terms learned from watching lots of TV and reading older manga, I swore.

    "Oh FUCK." I mutter under my breath. I drop my bag, pulling out the hilt of my Black Key. A pulse of prana, and the blade is out. I speed up in
    my walk, ready to lash out at whatever comes at me.

    "An interesting weapon."

    At the second he finishes his sentence, I break into a run. I can hear something chasing after me, but I don't know what it is. I know it's coming. I don't stop running, I just keep pumping my legs.

    Until the feeling of cold water washes over me. I don't recognize it at first, but then I realize it to be a Bounded Field, deflecting against something. I break into a stop, turning around. But nothing's there in the street behind me.

    "I'll remember this boy... You interest me."

    I jam the blade outside the boundary of the field, poking around for something solid. But nothing's there. My enemy might be invisible, so I continue poking around the length of the boundary I could reach. Still nothing. Until I see the shifting of air.

    I stab at it with all my might. And I see red drops dripping to the ground.

    Something yanks at my sword, pulling me out of the safety of the Bounded Field.

    Something grabs at my head, its palm covering my eyes.

    And all I hear is cruel laughter, as everything falls black.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I was walking. I don't know why. Surrounding me were children, each walking around this strangely clothed, bug eyed man. I still had my bag with me. Through my hazy view, I can see we're in a forest.

    I can feel some sort of strange prana leeching off my circuits. It must be controlling me. Through the small application of what prana I could access, I began chipping away at the strange presence, the leech. I felt it wither away and die inside me.

    My vision became clear, but I still fell into step with the rest of the children. This man was a powerful magus, so if I were to run... I wouldn't doubt the chance he'd try to kill me, and the rest of the children around me too. I have to find some way to get us all out of here.
    But perhaps I was too late.

    For we soon stopped, and the man began speaking to someone I couldn't see. And then the children around me came back to their senses. Some looked around, others started to cry. And then the man grabbed a boy near my left.

    He lifted him up by the head, and I heard the boy scream in horrendous pain as he clawed around violently to get out of the man's grip. I heard a sharp crack. And I watched the boy stop moving, but the man kept up with his grip. The boy's head turned into red mush, and the man just callously threw the body to the ground.

    "I'll count until one hundred, so what are you waiting for kids?"

    The man's bug-like eyes eyed every child surrounding him. They lay a bit longer on me. I freeze, just looking into his eyes. The crease of a grin appeared on his face.

    "RUN."

    The children scattered, panicking. Their screams brought the man's attention away from me, and I saw him grin in delight. They shouldn't have screamed. It brought attention to them.

    "This has to be a dream, this has to be a dream..." A young girl sobbed beside me, scared out of her mind.

    Horror took root in my chest as I turned from her and stared at the dead boy crumpled up on the forest floor.

    That could happen to me.


    My head snaps to the young girl still within the man's reach. I grab her by the hand, and I run like hell was licking on my heels with her behind me.

    "MOVE!" I urge the girl as she cried. I heard another scream, just to hear it fall silent, and sound of something hitting the ground echoed around us.

    Another scream. Then silence. He was killing them. He was really killing them.

    I needed to get us to safety. I needed somewhere to hide. I needed to do the same for this girl. And another urge hit my head with the weight of a rock.

    I needed a weapon.


    I quickly scooped up branches as we ran further and further away from the man. Prana surged to the forefront of my hand as I remembered one trick my Mommy taught me. More prana gathered, and flowed into the branches. I needed this to work, this one skill Mommy taught me before...

    Before... I can't afford to think of it right now. I start.

    Transmutation.


    With my prana, I forcibly ripped apart the electrons in the branches in my hand, rearranging them to the element I needed. Soon enough, I had a makeshift iron sword in hand, ready to be used against anything. I can feel the girl holding my hand grow tired, panting so loudly that it reached my ears. I slow us down, having us hide behind the trees.

    "What's going on...?" She cried, holding my hand tightly.

    "Don't worry, we're gonna get to safety." We have to.

    I start guiding her by the hand, slowing down into a walk. I'm no match for that man. He could kill me so easily. I don't have a shot at saving everyone with the way I am now.

    So God, I pray to you, let me at least save this girl.

    I felt pain in my stomach.


    I doubled over, feeling like I was going to throw up. Pain rocketed through my chest, setting my entire upper body on fire. It hurt to breathe, and
    I fell onto my knees. Something was inside me.

    Just waiting to rip out.

    I feed my prana into the source of the pain, trying to incise it out of my body like a surgeon would do for a tumour. I feel something wither again,
    this time inside my stomach. Something was alive in there, wanting to get out. My prana flows towards it, piercing it, stabbing it, killing it.
    And then it just stopped moving. And I suddenly felt full, as in not hungry anymore. I kind of felt sick. So upon note to myself, do not look into
    the toilet the next time I take a crap. I've had enough trauma lately.

    What was that anyway? A parasite injected into me when I was out of it? Did that man put it in all of us? Perhaps I was the only one who could get out of it...

    Realization dawns on me.

    I turn to the girl holding my hand while I begin to stand, and she blinks at me.

    "What's wrong?" She asks, now scared.

    "Nothing. I need you to lie down."

    "Why?"

    How do you tell someone they have an abomination living in their stomach?

    I look her in the eyes, the fear in mine reflecting into her own. She understands, and decides to sit herself up on a tree. "What's happening?" She asks.

    I place my hand on her stomach, channelling prana into her. She has no magic circuits, which makes my job much easier. I can't find that parasite. It seems to be gone.

    And then I feel her stomach rumble.

    "Hungry, are you?" I chuckle nervously. And then I look in to her eyes. They're as wide as plates.

    She quickly stands, and grabs at her stomach. I see something, something that doesn't belong in her, rumble in that area. She falls to the ground once more, screaming and kicking about in pain. I know how she's feeling. She's feeling like she's being ripped from the inside out.

    I scramble to her, falling to my knees and jamming my wrist into her stomach. I feel some resistance, some motion that seems to push away at my hand. I sense a parasite. I flood my prana into her, my makeshift sword jammed into the ground at my side. The prana constricts around the parasite, but it can't seem to kill it.

    It's wreaking havoc on her insides, tearing through her stomach and possibly rupturing organs.

    "GET OUT OF HER!" I roar at the top of my voice.

    "IT HURTS!" She sobbed.

    The parasite refused to die.

    It was going to kill her.

    And I couldn't do a thing.

    "Make it stop... Make it stop..." She cried.

    "I'll make it stop." I assure her. "What's your name?"

    "M-Michiru..."

    "That's a nice name."

    My prana constricts around the strange parasite once more, still attempting to keep it steady while other streams of prana stab into it. No matter how much I stab it, it refuses to die. It won't die. It can't die. Why won't it die?

    Michiru's going to die.

    I can't let that happen.

    I won't let that happen.

    My prana flows at the maximum capability it could, trying to kill it before it killed her. It stabbed, strangled, tried to mutilate the parasite. I have to kill it. I needed to kill it. So die already.

    Die.

    Die.


    Die!


    DIE!


    WHY! WON'T! YOU! DIE!


    It continues to rip her apart from the inside out. I couldn't do it. I wasn't powerful enough. I could do the one inside me, since I had weakened it. But I couldn't kill the one inside her.

    Michiru was going to die.
    "It hurts." She whimpered. Then she coughed, blood splattering out onto my shirt. "Make it stop... I don't care, make it stop..."

    I was going to end this. I grab my sword, yanking it out of the ground. Then I poise it over Michiru's stomach. I have to do this.

    I can't let that parasite live any longer.

    It needed to die, to stop hurting Michiru.

    I needed to kill it, so Michiru would stop hurting.

    ... To do so, I needed to kill it with my sword.

    I would kill Michiru.

    "Make it stop..."

    I steeled myself with tears in my eyes. I can't let this go on any longer.

    "I'm sorry."

    I take a deep breath, and look into Michiru's eyes.

    "Do it. Make it stop."

    I plunge my sword down.

    The blade enters through her stomach, meets something that I hear shriek before it dies, and comes out into the ground. I fall to my knees, cradling Michiru's head. She gives me a soft smile, blood spewing from her small mouth. I can't believe I did it.

    "Michiru..."

    "What's your name...?" I hear her garble.

    "Kouhei." I answer. I watch my tears fall into her blood.

    "That's a pretty name... Don't cry Kouhei..." She hacks up another rush of blood.

    "Don't die, don't die, don't die..." I sob, grabbing her hand and holding her tight.

    "It doesn't hurt anymore... Thank you... Kou..." Her voice drifts off.

    Her eyes turn blank.

    Glassy.

    Unseeing.

    Dead.

    I let Michiru die.


    "No. No." I mutter. I caress her head, thinking that she's still watching me, trying to convince me to stop crying. Deep down, I know it's useless.

    I killed Michiru.


    I rear my head back, and I scream.

    "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

    I hear a crack of wood. "STAY BACK!" I roar. A silver haired woman and a black haired woman step out from the tree line.

    I held Michiru's head close, watching the silver haired woman gasp at the sight of all the blood.

    "STAY BACK!" I roar, a river of tears cascading down my eyes.

    My head begins to throb, and I feel myself sway to the side. My head hits the ground.

    And as blackness overtakes me once again in my life, I notice that I'm still holding Michiru's hand.

    __________________________________________________ ______

    I awake in a bed.

    My eyes snapped open, and I pushed myself up. I was in some fancy bed, in the middle of some fancy room somewhere.

    "You're awake. Thank god."

    My eyes drift to a silver haired, red eyed woman.

    I had seen her in the forest.

    "I'm so glad we managed to save at least one of you."

    Save at least of us? Is she talking about the children...?

    One of us?

    One?


    Me?


    ...

    They could only save me? No. My mind drifts back to Michiru, and the murdered boy in the forest. The other children must have succumbed to the parasites in their bodies.

    "What's your name?" The woman asks me, reaching to my side. I reflexively flinch, until I notice she's just reaching out for a pitcher of water, pouring some in a glass. She hands it to me, and I take it gingerly.

    I suddenly notice that my throat is parched. Very parched. I throw back the water quickly, trying to clear and get some moisture into my throat. I hand her the glass quietly after I finish.

    And then I suddenly burp.

    The woman giggles at the burst of air from my mouth.

    I look down. "I'm Kouhei Takeda." I tell her.

    "Irisviel von Einzbern at your service."
    ...

    All those children died. And I couldn't save one I promised I would save. DAMN IT. I grip the sheets around me until my hands are pale.

    "What're your parents' names? We'll get you home as soon as possible." Irisviel von Einzbern says.

    "..." I don't have any parents, not anymore.

    I can think of two names that come up in my head. One is more prominent than the other.

    "Kotomine Kirei."

    Her eyes widen, and she chuckles nervously. "Is that so? Then rest, we'll have you back with him before you know it." She urges me back into lying down, then takes the pitcher and glass and leaves the room.

    Did Kirei know these people?

    I didn't know. So I put the thought in the back of my head, and I let myself drift to sleep...
    __________________________________________________ ______


    When I woke up again, morning light drifted through the windows.

    "Are you okay?"

    And this time, sitting by my bedside, is Kotomine Kirei with Caren in his arms.

    I nod quietly with a soft smile on my face. His hard look brightens, and that small smile appears on his face as well. He looks much more relieved.

    "Now, let's go." He gestures for the door.

    I throw the blankets on me off, and I stand. My knees feel weak, very weak. My hands felt as equally frail, as my mind brings me back to the events of last night. I don't want to think about it anymore. I'm going to try to put it behind me. I did what I could. Even if what I could do wasn't good enough.

    He leads me into a fancy hall. The place seems like a castle, and even more fancy than Rin's place. Through another door, we end up in a dining room. Sitting beside a table is Irisviel and that other black haired woman. Another man stares at me with a calculative look, as if trying to gauge who I was for some random reason I didn't know.

    "We'll be leaving, Emiya."

    Emiya, Emiya, where have I heard that name?

    My eyes widen a bit. Magus Killer, Emiya Kiritsugu? That Emiya?

    "You know where the front door is. Or where what's left of it is anyway."

    "At least stay for breakfast. Your son and daughter must be hungry." Irisviel asks.

    Kirei and I share a look. I raise an eyebrow. He smiles, and shrugs. "Why not."

    ...

    He didn't disagree with the fact she called me his son.

    Confusion struck me first, as Irisviel set down a plate of pancakes before each of us, including Kirei and Caren. She then sat down herself, and struck up a conversation with a blonde haired woman and that black haired woman. Kiritsugu on the other hand, simply takes a bite from his pancake, then reaches into his pocket and pulls out a cigarette and lights it.

    Shink.


    The black haired woman has a gun aimed at Kirei's head as he held a Black Key before Kiritsugu's face. He lopped off the smouldering butt of the cigarette with a twitch of his hand, and then dematerialized the blade as the shocked man looked him in the eye. "I don't appreciate you smoking in front of my children." He explained.

    The black haired woman holstered her weapon, sitting down quietly as I just stared at him. Kirei sighed, then proceeded to help Caren eat her pancake.

    "Told you people don't like it."

    Kiritsugu just looks blankly at Irisviel.

    For some apparent reason, we're staying here for longer than I thought. Kirei was discussing something with Kiritsugu, as I watched Caren run about the castle. The black haired woman and the blonde haired woman watched alongside me. The blonde haired woman referred to herself as Saber, while the other named herself as Hisau Maiya.

    "Your father seems like a nice man." Saber tells me absentmindedly, watching Caren explore.

    "He is." I answer. I look up at Maiya, as she fiddles with a gun in her hand. She pulled off the slide, checking the insides.

    "Can I get one of those?" I ask her.

    "Why?" She asks in a blank tone.

    "Um... So I'm not defenseless when things like this happen." I reply, looking down.

    "Well..."

    After a very long lecture about gun safety and stupid things one shouldn't do with a gun, and a short explanation on how to use it and how it worked, she had handed me a long box of pistol bullets, and the actual pistol.


    "It's a Walther PPK, 22. caliber and equipped with a silencer. I've given you two magazines and fifty bullets. Be careful with it." She advised me.

    I nod. Now I feel like that foreign spy I saw on TV a few nights ago.

    Most people my age would take this weapon and go shoot something they really shouldn't have shot in the first place. I, on the other hand, have a reason to use this weapon. If I ever see that man again, I'm going to put every bullet into his head before those bug-like eyes can blink. I'm going to kill him.

    For Michiru.


    "Kouhei."

    "Maiya."

    All our heads turn to see two men walk up to us. I stifled a giggle.

    Kiritsugu had a black eye while Kirei walked with a slight limp.

    "What happened?" Maiya asked Kiritsugu.

    "Nothing important." He muttered.

    Caren ran up and latched onto her father.

    "Let's go, Kouhei." Kirei told me.

    Once we had left the castle in a hurry, I asked the one question nagging my mind.

    "What happened?" I asked.

    "... We have a truce now." He replied.

    "But why did he have...?"

    "We had a minor disagreement."

    I sat in Kirei's office, browsing through his notes on thaumaturgy. There's a lot of stuff here I'm willing to learn. Kirei was out doing stuff for the war, and Risei was taking Caren for a day out. I was here in the office, trying to figure out how to do some of these things. I twirled a Black Key in one hand, reading over a book on alchemy. It was quiet...

    It's been a week or more so since I've come to live with Kirei and his family at the Church. Due to the events of two days ago, I haven't gone to school in a while. Watching TV all day has lost its novelty, and though I considered practicing with the firearm Maiya had given me, but I didn't want to waste the bullets on something that wouldn't be productive to use them on.

    I continue to read the book on alchemy. Mother taught me the basics of alchemy before... Before she died. She said she had fun teaching me about it, and I really was interested in it. I remember her marvelling at my achievements.

    I wanted to learn more. I wanted to make my mother proud. So I studied. But it still feels kind of lonely, just sitting here reading a book.

    I can't strike up a conversation with Caren, and Risei and Kirei are more often than not busy.

    I wanted some company. So when I read over a kind of alchemy that would give me a companion, quench some aberrant loneliness, it caught my attention. It would be a difficult process, but it would be worth it. It would prove that I can be a proficient alchemist, and I did my mother proud. I smile, as I read the name and the basics.

    "Homunculi..."

    I slam my head on the desk, hours later. The process is much more difficult than I thought it would be. I'd need tens of thousands of yen, much more knowledge, and the weight of murder on my shoulders if something were to go wrong. That kind of kills my enthusiasm. I put the book on alchemy away, looking for something else to do or read.

    I find something rather interesting in the drawers.

    "Adoption papers?"

    ...

    With my name, and Kirei's.

    An emotion I don't really know how to explain fills my chest.

    I can define it as some sort of happiness. A strange kind of relief. I can have a family again. But this is just a piece of paper in a legal system.

    I already felt like part of their family after that night in the chapel upstairs.

    I put the papers back where I found them. And then I hear the phone ring. Nothing can ruin the feeling I have today. No weird things in my crap, no difficulty bar for my dreams, nothing will ruin this day!

    I answer the phone. "Hello?"

    "KOUHEI! KOTONE'S MISSING!"

    My heart drops into my stomach, gets digested, goes through my guts, and falls out my ass.

    Shock hit me first. Then worry. Then fear. And finally, I found the will to speak.

    "WHAT?"
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I found Rin waiting outside the train station. Without hesitation, I had left the safety of the Bounded Field, armed with a Black Key and a pistol, and I had run out into the city to search for my new friend with another friend. "What happened?" I ask her, skidding to a stop.

    "Kotone-chan didn't come to school today! And the police called the teachers!" She exclaimed, worry flaring in her eyes. "She's gone!"

    God, please make sure Kotone's safe.


    "Do you have any leads? How do we find her?" I ask Rin, playing on those missing persons episodes of those crime shows I see on TV.

    She freezes, giving it some thought. "I don't find it normal, the way she disappeared."

    "How so?"

    "Kotone's smart enough to walk where there's people watching, and no one can snatch her." She explained. "There was a lot of traffic, and she just disappeared. Someone would have stopped anyone trying to take her. But it's as if she just disappeared into thin air."

    "..." I give it some thought.

    Teleportation? I doubt it. Illusion magecraft? Maybe, but not likely due to all the people.
    ...

    Memories of what happened to me shoot through my head. Mind control. Clouding my senses to make me do things I had no will to do. That's what might be happening.

    ...

    If that's happening, then that man might be responsible. He might be doing horrible things to them. I shudder, as the memories of the parasite come up in my mind. I don't want to think of such a thing inside Kotone.
    But if that happened... We needed to hurry.

    "Mind control..." I mutter, loudly enough for Rin to hear to hear. Her eyes widen at the suggestion.

    How am I supposed to sense mana and its applications? We're in a city! Traces of natural mana are practically everywhere! I shove my hands into my pockets and I grip the hilt of my Black Key...

    Black Key? What about the miniature one?

    I pull out the diamond sword, placing it in the center of my palm. It's still giving out that heartbeat-like pulse. I feed mana into it. And I watch it rise, and start to spin in a circle.

    "A mana compass..." Rin murmurs. "My father told me about those. They sense mana and point to the source. The device senses the mana, and it moves the pointer in the right direction."

    So in substitute for a metal device, my energy-sensitive body is the one sensing mana, and the diamond sword serves the pointing stick. Sounds simple enough. I tune into my mind, feeling my circuits come to life. I feel around for traces of mana, or specifically prana turned into mana.

    A short jolt of pain hits my forehead.

    "Ahh..." I groan, trying to rub away the pain. But I watched the diamond sword jam it's point towards a direction. We have our first lead.
    "Come on!" Rin shouts, tugging me in the direction the sword pointed. I kept my hand close to my chest, trying to concentrate and keep mana flowing into the sword. The evening light descended upon the city. Very soon it would be dark. I was still very worried about Kotone. But now I had reason to be worried about ourselves.

    Things hide in the darkness. Terrible things. I had my sword, and I had a gun. I think I'm ready.

    I hope I'm ready.

    Rin slows down, as we keep our eyes on the sword. It leads us through alleys, down streets, an endless maze through the quickly darkening city of Fuyuki. A small breeze continuously swept by us, sending chills down our spine.

    We had to find Kotone. We had to find her.

    I don't want to think of the otherwise.

    We're in an alley, a close eye on the sword as it points further before us. And my eyes widen. Rin yanks me to the wall, and I quickly have my back to it. We see a shadow come up on the street.

    "Come on, come on."

    An orange haired young man lead a child by the hand. What struck out to me was the way the child's eyes seemed blank, unseeing. He hobbled along, almost drowsy. That wasn't natural.

    Nor was the purplish glow of a bracelet around the hand the man led the child by.

    There was our culprit. There was the guy who had taken Kotone.

    I reach into my bag, pulling out the gun. Rin stared at it, perhaps a bit scared. I load in the magazine, cocking it once. "You're not going to kill him, are you?" Rin asks.

    "Maybe." I answer, putting the silenced weapon in a pocket on the inside of my jacket. "Come on." We run across the street, and go into another alley.

    We sneak through the alley, hopping over garbage and paint cans. As soon as we come out near the end of the alley, I spot the same orange haired man. And this time he held two kids by the hand. "He's really controlling them somehow..." Rin said. I take out the gun again, aiming it at the man's head. It's too risky, and not worth the shot.

    "We follow him." I keep the gun in my hand, and we run across the car-less street. I hide behind a newspaper box and Rin hides behind a garbage can. I watch the man lead the two children down stairs into a bar of some kind, and disappear behind the doors. Okay, I have my gun ready; I have my Black Key ready.

    Let's do this.

    I run forward, racing towards the entrance to the bar. The sword is still floating in my hand, aimed straight towards the bar's door. I turn on my heel as soon as my feet reach the top of the stairs, ready to barge in and start shooting the bastard who was kidnapping and/or killing children. The sword spins wildly, then jams right towards the door.

    Pain blasts through my head, as the shock of such strong mana reacts to me.

    "Stay close." I tell Rin, as I walk down the stairs.

    Gun in one hand, other hand resting on the hilt of my Black Key. I walk first into the bar. It's dark in here, only dim lighting illuminating the rooms. I see stools, glasses, upended chairs and tables. No people. Wait. In there, deeper into the bar. I take those few steps forward.

    And I feel like gasping.

    Children lay down all over the inner parts of the bar. Some lay on chairs, some sat on stools or chairs, and others just lay like discarded dolls on the ground. All of them had those open, glassy, unseeing eyes. The same eyes Michiru looked at me with as she lay dying in my arms. I thought they were dead, and that I was too late. Then I spot the person I was looking for, laying down.

    "Kotone!" Rin cried.

    We ran to her side, lifting her up. She wasn't dead, and she was faintly breathing. She had those eyes, those glassed over eyes. She was still under some sort of control. I send my prana into her, feeling around. No parasite, nothing. And I was very thorough. All that was inside her was supposed to be there. I think. Do I look like a professor on the female anatomy?

    "She's alive." Rin breathed, a smile on her face.

    "Thank God." I breathe myself.

    "Oh, what do we have here?"

    Rin and I freeze. Standing over us was that orange haired man, holding two kids by the hands. He tossed them to the ground, and they just fell over with no resistance. They crumpled to the floor like dolls. Okay. Time to act.

    The man walked around to Rin, kneeling beside her. I watch her pale, begin to sweat. "We're just about to start the party. I guess we can fit two more people in." I see him grab her shoulder.

    "GET AWAY FROM HER!" I shout, standing up and socking the bastard in the face with my tiny fist.

    "Why you-" The man stands up, his attention drawn on me. He reaches for me, but I weave away from his hands. "Get over here!" I back away into the main part of the bar; watch the man as he follows me. I can't shoot him where he stands, I might hit Rin or another kid. The man reaches for me again, trying to grab me.

    I grab an empty beer bottle, and smash it over his head. The man falls to his knees with a groan. "No more playing nice!" He lunges at me, trying to grab at me with his hands. I can't let him touch me; I might get put under his control. I dodge him, trying to think of a way to break what was controlling the children.

    That ominously glowing bracelet. That's a fairly obvious target.

    I lunge for the bracelet on his wrist trying to yank it off.

    "Made my job much easier."

    My vision begins to cloud as his right hand grabs my neck.

    "No use for faulty goods. Say hello to God for me."

    My vision clouds with a purple haze. I try to break out of the man's grip, but it's no use. His grip stands firm, and the longer my body is in contact with his skin, my vision begins to cloud even more. The foreign energy is fought by my prana, allowing me to have just a bare amount of control over myself. But the man's physical grip is too strong.

    He's going to choke me to death. The purple haze grew stronger. I can barely breathe. My sight begins to fade.

    And it all slowly turns to darkness.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    You cannot fight us.

    Why?

    We are powerful. You are nothing.

    So what?

    You will not survive. You cannot survive.


    I can try.

    You are worthless. Accept your end with dignity. Die for us.

    No I won't.

    Why won't you die?

    That's what I should be asking you.

    DIE.


    No, I won't.

    LET US KILL YOU. LET US CONTROL YOU.

    I don't want to die.

    We'll make it painless.

    We'll make it so you won't have to feel a thing.

    You'll feel like you're just going into a deep, deep sleep.

    I don't want to die.

    I won't let you kill me.

    Because I am going to kill you.

    __________________________________________________ ______

    A surge of prana filled me. I feel a hand grip my shoulder, while I see a hand grip the bracelet. It's Rin. She's here to save me.

    "BREATHE KOUHEI!" She shouts.

    A blue light engulfs the purple light. Rin's flooding her mana into the bracelet, trying to overload it. I try to pry the fingers away from my neck. It's working. I'm going to live.

    I reach my hand into my pocket. I pull the hilt of the Black Key out into the air. And I materialize the blade. I'm going to do this.

    And as Rin's mana shatters the bracelet into pieces, I jam the length of the blade into the man's shoulder.

    I hear him scream, and let go of me. I see the children stir awake, some started looking around, others started crying.

    "There's no time to cry! Run!"

    Rin starts directing the children out of the door, while I stare down the man with a bloody sword in hand. "You bastard!" He shouts at me.

    A girl is still sitting behind him, crouched up and crying. It's Kotone. Damn it. Make this quick.

    I dematerialize the blade, and pull out my gun. The man's eyes widen to the size of plates. "I don't have time for you." I aim for his stomach.
    And I yank back on the trigger.

    BANG.


    The bullet goes through his guts, and comes out into the wooden floor. He coughs up blood, and falls to the ground. "Damn it..." He mutters.

    I run around him, straight for Kotone. I grab her hand with one hand, using my other to caress her face.

    "You're safe now. Let's go."

    "Kouhei-kun?"

    She seems frail. I sling one of her arms over me, and help her stand. She limps with me towards the bar's door. "You're safe now." I breathe. I turn back to the bleeding man.

    He looks up at me, a nervous smile is on his face.

    "Come on kid, help me..." He urged.

    I narrow my eyes at him, then turn around to leave.

    "Go to hell."
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I help Kotone stand, as the children crowd around the police officers. A few squad cars had shown up, officers and ambulances tending to the kids. "It's okay now."

    "You and Rin-chan came to save me..." Kotone murmured.

    I smile at her. "It's what friends do. Are you okay?"

    She nods. Tears start falling down her face, as her hand comes up to quickly dry them. My hand beats her to the chase. "Everything's okay now."

    I give her a hug. It seems like she needed it.

    "You can go home now. Now let's talk to the nice police officer. He'll make sure you get home."

    I help her walk to an officer, as I notice Rin watch us from her hiding spot in an alley.

    The officer takes care of Kotone, and leads her to an ambulance.

    "Kouhei-kun!" She cries, reaching out for me.

    I smile at her, and wave my hand. "See you at school!" I say.

    "Oh, and what's your name?" The same police officer asks.

    "Eh..."

    I wonder how Kirei would react if I came home in a police car. Not very well I imagine. I needed a good excuse, and fast. So I pulled one out of nowhere.

    "Look! Aliens!" I point dramatically in a direction.

    The police officer and a few kids look over there. I take the chance to sprint all the way to Rin. And when they turned around, I had magically disappeared. Heh.

    "You okay?" Rin asks, reaching for my neck.

    I flinch at her touch as my neck is still sore.

    "I'm fine." I assure her. "Now let's get home."

    I take my first step, when I feel pain zap my head. I pull my miniature sword out, watching it float. And point itself towards the sky. I grip it and shove it into my pocket, as my head looks up. I see something falling. And I watch that thing hit the ground.

    It's some sort of starfish-like abomination, with multiple tentacles and feelers. It pulses, then rises up taller than we are. I pull out my gun, aiming at it. I start pulling back on the trigger.

    BANG.


    BANG.


    BANG.


    BANG.


    I pull out my Black Key, materialize the blade and I stab it right into the now bleeding mass. I feel it twitch. Somehow, some way, it's not dead. I pull my weapon back, backing away with Rin. I feel another pulse of mana.

    And I blink as a swarm of insects flurry around us. Panic hits me first, but then I notice they're only going for the abomination on the ground. A shadow drapes over me. And I turn around. Rin had fainted, and a man stood there, wearing a hood.

    He had pale, sickly skin, and he was surrounded by the insects. He looked me in the eye, with his brown eye and a light blue one. He looked like a corpse, a walking corpse. Kirei warned me about things like him. Beware of demons he told me, the monsters who look like monsters, and the monsters who wear human skin.

    I had my gun aimed at him too. He just walked up to me, and pushed it down.

    "I am not your enemy." He said. He turned and picked up Rin, and as I poised my sword to stab him in the heart, he turned around again.

    "Follow me." He said, passing me and stepping into the alley.

    He had Rin in his arms.

    So I followed.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I sat on a park bench watching Rin sleep in another. The man eyed me.

    "What's your name?" He asked me.

    "Kouhei Takeda." I answer, hand still gripping the hilt of the Black Key.

    "Matou Kariya." He introduced himself, "Didn't your parents tell you to introduce yourself with your last name first?"

    "I don't have parents anymore." I answer, flinching.

    He whistled, looking away. What was he waiting for? Probably he was waiting for Aoi, since he had called her on a payphone. But why?

    A car stops beside the park, and I can see Aoi run out.

    "Rin! Kouhei!" She cried.

    First she ran to Rin, making sure she was okay. Then she turned to me, her eyes widening at the weapon in my hands.

    "Kouhei, put that away!" She scolded me.

    "But-"

    "Put it away. Kariya-kun's not an enemy." She told me.

    I dematerialize the blade, still staring at the man, Kariya, with as fearsome a look as I could muster.

    "Why are you doing this?" Aoi asked the man.

    He pulls of his hood.

    He looked like a corpse. He had white hair, different coloured eyes, and the state of his skin. If he wasn't a walking corpse, then I could tell that
    the man was dying. What was he?

    "What...? What's all this about? What're you doing here?" Aoi asked him, worried.

    "This is the Matou family magic."

    Matou family magic? Necromancy?

    "You offer your flesh, and let it eat away at your life." Kariya continued to explain.

    What do you offer your flesh to? Demons?

    "And your sacrifice is repaid with magic."

    Sounds a lot like demons.

    "But Sakura-chan's okay. I promise to save her before she ends up like me. Zouken only cares about the Holy Grail."

    Holy Grail. Was he a master? He was an enemy then! An enemy of Kirei, Kiritsugu, and Tokiomi!

    "He promised to free Sakura-chan if I win it for him."

    He was going to hurt someone I knew to win the Grail. But if he didn't win the Grail, someone was going to get hurt. Who had the right to win such a thing? Tokiomi? Kirei? Kiritsugu?

    They all seem like good people, except they're forced to fight and possibly kill each other for such a thing. As I thought, he continued to talk to Aoi. And then he raised his hand. The shape of a command spell was lit up by moonlight. He was a master.

    The master of the "strongest Servant".

    "Pray that I win, pray that Sakura-chan has a future." He continued.

    If he won... What would he wish for? What would he do to win? Would he kill Kirei and everyone in his way?

    And so the man turned around, and he began to walk away deeper into the park.

    "Kariya-kun, you..."

    Kariya turned around to look at her and pulled on his hood.

    "Someday, we'll all come to this park and play, like we used to. And Rin-chan and Sakura-chan can be sisters, like they once were." He said. He looked me in the eye. "You're welcome too, kid. I think Sakura will like you."

    "Kariya-kun... Do you want to die? To take Tokiomi, and the other masters with you?" Aoi asked him. Tears began to fall down her face.

    "Mother?" Rin had awoken.

    "Rin! I was so worried!" Aoi cried, resting her head on Rin's shoulders.

    "I'm sorry, I'm sorry..." Rin cried into her mother's shoulders.

    It didn't feel right, me standing there and watching such a private moment between the two.

    And when I turned around, the man was gone.

    But I had noticed the white mask of an Assassin hiding in the tree.

    Kirei was going to be mad...

    The Assassin disappeared, going off to probably trail Kariya.

    I felt a hand grab mine. "Come Kouhei. Let's get you home. Kotomine-kun must be worried."
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    I sat in a pew, right beside Kirei. We were silent, like the other times we talked.

    "Was what I did wrong?"

    He looks at me.

    "Do you think it was wrong?"

    I shake my head. "If I didn't go... Would Kotone-chan still be okay?" I asked him.

    He gives a thoughtful look. "I don't know. But if you did the right thing..."

    "... You had an Assassin trail us, didn't you?" I ask him.
    "I was ready to have him kill that orange haired man, but you two would have been at risk if I let him go at it inside the bar." He told me.

    "Surprisingly, I didn't have him kill the Matou master. Would have made my job much easier."

    "... Did you hear him talk about that Sakura person?"

    "Yes. Yes I did." He answered.

    "Are you still planning to kill him?"

    "No. Not really."

    "He's fighting to save that Sakura person. Rin's sister, I think. What're you fighting for?"

    He brings a hand to his chin.

    "Caren and you, I guess."

    I look down.

    "Are you mad that I went to find Kotone-chan?"

    "No, I'm not mad. If I were you, I would have done the same thing. Albeit a bit differently."

    I nod, and we're quiet again.

    "Kouhei, can I ask you something?"

    "Yes?"

    "How would you feel about becoming part of the Kotomine family? Do you want to be part of my family?"
    I turn to him, and look him in the eyes. A soft smile is on his face, and I feel a smile appear on my own. I hug him. I had a family again.

    "Yes, Father."
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    Present Day


    "Boy, are you alright?"

    I lift my head, looking Zelretch in the eye. "I'm fine." I stand, abandoning my ramen and leaving my Master to his feast. "I need to walk."
    After I had left him to his food, I found myself wandering Fuyuki again. I had crossed the iconic bridge, I had gone to my empty school, I had visited places I've been with friends. I saw the bar where I had fought for my life. I went to the park where I met Kariya. I even found myself staring down my empty home.

    No one was there, no Father, no Caren, nobody. Not even me.

    And so my travels brought me to the Church upon the hill. I had entered, and found myself sitting on a pew like I do every Sunday. No one seemed to be here. And then I saw a door open.

    And standing there, was Kotomine Kotomine. He walked down the aisle, passing me without a word. Our eyes met, just fleetingly. And I knew something was wrong.

    There was no warmth in those eyes, no feeling. No joy, no happiness, nothing. I stand. I'm going to do something drastic.

    "What happened to Caren?"

    Kotomine Kirei froze in his spot. He turned on his heel, staring at me.

    "How do you know that name?" He said in his gruff voice. It wasn't the gruff, yet warm voice I was used to. It was frozen cold.

    "What happened to Caren?"

    I barely have time to dodge, as a Black Key nearly skins my side. I pull out a Black Key of my own from my wrist, staring the man down. He meant business. So did I.

    "What happened to Caren?" I ask again.

    He pulls out three Keys from his jacket, and runs at me. I duck, as the blades slice over my head. I roll past his side, moving closer towards the exit of the Church. There's a cold apathy in his eyes. I run out of the Church as the three Black Keys embed themselves in the wooden door.
    As soon as I'm out, I turn into the forest, hoping to get away. I stop to catch my breath, after a while of running. I should be fine now. Well, I thought I would be fine.

    Because one second after I lifted my head, a Black Key embedded itself in the tree beside me.

    I shift to the side, as more Keys fly by where I once stood. No time to stop, keep running. I sprint through the forest, dodging swords left and
    right. Kotomine Kirei was trying to kill me.

    My father was trying to kill me.


    A Black Key cuts my legs, causing me to fall to the ground. I hit it hard, but it hurts too much to stand. I push myself forward, trying to get away. But a foot kicks me, and I land hard on my back.

    I stare up into the cold eyes of my father. There's no emotion, nothing. I'm your son, is what I want to tell him. But in this world... I don't think I was his son.

    In this world, Kotomine Kirei wasn't my father.


    But it still hurt, not just my legs. Not just my entire body. It still hurt, just to look in those cold, apathetic eyes. I brace myself for the killing blow.

    And I feel sharp, horrendous pain, as a Black Key stabs through my collarbone, and right into the ground.

    I feel my entire back grow wet. I'm lying in a pool of my own blood. I stare up at my father, and I can feel myself mouthing for him to help me. But he just stares down at me, unfeeling, uncaring.

    "You'll be dead soon."

    And he turns around and leaves.

    I lay there dying in a pool of my own blood. I think this was the lesson Zelretch was trying to tell me. Every universe has its differences. From the profound, do the small. The same applies to the people.

    The people I know, care about, these people in the other universes, they look the same, maybe act the same.

    But they are not the same people.


    They are not the people who love me, care about me.


    They are completely different.


    They are not the people I love.


    Because this is not my universe.

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    "Do you understand now?"

    I open my eyes, and through blurry sight, I see my Master stand before me. Probably an effect of my mind. If my master was watching me, then
    he'd probably laugh at my own stupidity. "I understand."

    I decide to humor myself. The truth still hurt though.

    Zelretch sighed, and my eyes widen as he pulled out the blade. His hands moved down to cover my wounds. And my wounds began to slowly heal. "You're alright now, boy. You've learned your lesson and suffered enough."

    He helps me up, but I can barely stand. I feel faint, as if I was going to pass out. He slung one of my arms over his shoulder, and helped me stand up straight.

    "Come on. We have a bit of walking to do."

    I limped with my master across grass. We seemed to be in a graveyard. I could barely think straight, but I tried my hardest. "Why are we here?" I ask him.

    "There's something you need to see. If I don't show you, then you'll bother me for the rest of our trip."

    I hobbled forward, blood loss still taking its toll on me.

    And then we stop.

    "Look here." He points down towards a pair of graves.

    My eyes widen at the sight.

    Yukari Nishio.


    Kouhei Nishio.


    "... What happened?" I force out.

    "They both died on that night of the Fourth Grail War." He told me. "That's all I could really find."

    I let go of him, dropping to my knees. I crawl towards both graves, staring down. I haven't been to my mother's grave for a while. But right beside it... The skeleton of a little boy whose life was cut short lay in a coffin six feet under. And that little boy was me.

    It may have been an alternate Kouhei Nishio, but it was still me under there.

    I place my palms on the two gravestones. I feel prana flow in my hands, and the converted mana flow into the stones. A short flash of light later, and then I let my palms drop to my sides. I examine my work.

    Yukari Takeda.


    Kouhei Takeda.


    "That's about right, isn't it?"

    "You sure about that, Kouhei?" Zelretch asked me.

    "I stopped being a Nishio a long time ago. That man is not my family anymore. And besides. I think I would have liked it." I reply, staring down at my own grave.

    "It's not your grave. It's the grave of this Kouhei Takeda."

    "I know it's not... But it's what could have been."

    He helps me stand up, slinging my arm around his shoulders once more.

    "Do you understand now, Kouhei? This is a different world. People have been shaped by different experiences. And at the heart of it all, no one is the same person from your world." He explained.

    "I understand, Master."

    "Do you know the consequences of assuming so, now?" He asked, looking me in the eye.

    I reach my hand up to my collarbone. I feel the soft skin where Father- no, Kotomine Kirei stabbed me.

    "I understand." I reply.

    "I think we can leave this world to its own devices, and it'll come out the same. Are you ready to continue? Or should I just return you to your own universe?"

    I hesitate. Then I stop hesitating. I'm ready to do this. I stepped into a new world when I decided to become Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg's apprentice.

    "Let's go."

    He smiles at me with his aged face. He raises his hand, and wind surrounds us. The tear in reality appears before us, the gates of the multiverse appearing behind them. Master helps me take the step forward.

    "I wish you luck, Kouhei." He tells me, grinning.

    "Thanks." I say, faintly smiling back.

    We step through the tear in space and time.

    A new world awaits us, across the multiverse.

    __________________________________________________ ______

    Chapter 2 Complete!


    More of Kouhei's backstory shall come up in later chapters, but now, the story shall take it's main plot. This isn't the last time they'll step into the Fate/Stay Night universe.
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    I didn't manage to edit any scenes, but most of the grammatical errors have been worked out. I've found a way to proceed with my desired plot without majorly editing these scenes. So sorry, readers both new and old, for having this uploaded late.

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    4 posts in a row... I'm fairly sure I've done something that shouldn't really been done. That's what it feels like, anyway. The plot shall kick off now, and the point of the plot shall take it's shape. I'm putting this chapter into parts, so it'll be easier to manage, and so you guys'll get some more content with less waiting time.

    So here's a quickly done part one. The next 3 parts shall be MUCH longer.
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    Chapter 3

    Magus for Hire

    Part 1

    __________________________________________________ ______

    POV: Kouhei Takeda.

    I stumbled through the rift, feeling my feet touch the ground once more.

    My arm was still looped around my master's shoulder, as he hefted me up. I didn't know where we were, I still felt weak, dizzy like the last time I had done interdimensional travel. It felt like I had a hangover, of all things. It's not one of my best memories, but there was that one time where Gilgamesh had introduced me to the "wonders" of alcohol. A few bottles of booze later, and my father had "calmly" blown a fuse. That was the very first time I had experienced what my father called "cold rage". First thing he asked the man was the obvious; what was he thinking? Then we both had that moment when you realize something you should have realized before.

    The era Gilgamesh came from had no such thing as a "legal drinking age". Felt like crap for hours.

    I urge my feet into moving, using a hand to wipe away the drowsiness from my eyes. I turn my head in the general direction my master's head is in, a question running to the forefront of my mind. "Where are we?" I ask, moving my hand from my eyes and pressing it against my wound.

    "Fuyuki City." I hear his gruff voice say to me.

    "Again? Why?"

    "Different dimension, boy. We're meeting up with one of my old friends. I know for a fact that she's willing to part with some of her secrets, and perhaps she'll teach you some of them. But I also need her to tend to you. She'll know a few procedures to speed up the healing process, and as soon as you're healed, we'll get some of that teaching I promised in." He explained, urging me to move a bit faster.

    I nod to him, groaning a bit as the wound seemed to pulse in pain.

    "Still not fully healed, huh? No matter. We'll be there soon."

    I sighed, continuing to walk as I tried to ignore the pain. It was hard, since the drowsiness made me a little more sensitive. I know that Kirei Kotomine wasn't my father. But it still left a mark. If every universe could be strikingly similar but yet different... Was that the Kirei that could have been? Was that what my father could have ended up as? It was hard to even think of it. I sigh myself, speeding up my hobble. Emotional wounds left scars that took longer to go away then physical ones. But like physical ones...

    There are some that don't go away at all.
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    I still can barely see by the time we enter the city. I don't know who we're looking for, nor why I'm still standing here. The exact place I didn't know, but from the green shading I could blurringly see, I placed a bit of faith in an assumption that we were on the outskirts of Fuyuki. I see the figure of a building, and a door quickly comes up into my line of sight. I hear the creak of a doorknob, and my master ushers me in. It's dimmer in here, compared to the brightness of early afternoon.

    Fatigue still plagues my chest, as I hear and see a figure come up to me.

    "Fancy seeing you here. Is this your apprentice?" A voice, which seemed to belong to a woman, asked my master.

    "Yes, he is. It's nice seeing you too. How's your sister?" My master's voice asks.

    "Doing... Well." The other voice tentatively says with a hint of distaste. "So, what happened to him?"

    "Wound to the clavicle. Can you help?"

    "Get him to the table. I'll see what I can do."

    My master urges me down what seems to be a hall, and into a room. He sits me down on what seems to be an operating table, and lies me down. I panic for a second, seriously unprepared for surgery. Why else would I be suddenly put on what seems to be an operating table? I feel my arms and legs being strapped down. I can't move. Drowsily, I turn my head to what seems to be my master.

    "Get some rest Kouhei. It'll all be over soon."

    And as I feel something slither into my neck, I can feel it all go black.
    __________________________________________________ ______

    I awaken in a bed, shirtless and still drowsy. What had happened? I remembered being knocked out by something, and now I'm here. I'm laying down in what seems to be an empty room, completely empty other than the bed that I lay on. Light reflected softly off the grey concrete walls, from a large window right beside my bed. I sit up, taking a look through the window.

    I see a small grass courtyard, framed by what seems to be a two floored apartment building with balconies and walkways. And from what I can see, It's all empty, the grey sheen of concrete spanning over it all. No one's here. I remembered my master taking me here, and that other figure, that feminine voice. I turn my head, spotting my belongings resting in a corner.

    I give a stretch, and then I notice the state of my chest.

    A long thin X seems to cross over the initial scar over my collarbone, completely straight and even, done with what seems to be careful precision. I really had gone through surgery. Perhaps the damage done to my insides was worse than I thought. I push myself from my bed, and begin walking towards my belongings. I pull on a shirt, strap my bag to my back, and then make for the door.

    I stepped into the hall, still as bleakly grey as the room I was in. My steps still have a stumble to them, so I stay close to the wall for balance. My steps take me towards the stairs, and I quickly descend. I hear the noise of something clinking throughout the halls, so I try to get closer to the sounds. My master and his apparent friend should be around here somewhere, exactly where, I don't know.

    I ended up close to a door, hearing the noises come at full blast. What was once a clinking was now a full on hammering. The aged wooden door creaks open as I turn the knob, and I enter the room. The hammering falls silent.

    "Hello?" I call out, taking in my surroundings.

    It seems to be a workshop, tools blanketing the whole of one wall, strange materials covering the next. An operating table sits in the center of the dim room, a few small windows near the ceiling being the only sources of light. I walk over to the table, brushing my fingers on the cold metal. This seems to be some magus' workshop. It hurts to admit it, but it's far better in quality than mine. Mine's a shed. A shed.

    This is industrial strength metal, covered in powerful and almost unnoticeable runes, and obviously costs more than everything in my shed. Including the shed. Yes, I feel very jealous. VERY jealous. I rub my jealousy away, putting it aside. I put my bag on the ground, so I can lean over and observe the table.

    "You like?"

    I freeze, as arms wrap around my neck. The smell of cigarette smoke and tobacco reaches my nose, and I try to ignore it as I turn my head. I look into red eyes, that blink at me. A fair, feminine face is what I see, a cigarette hanging from her lips. A hand reaches up from around me to brush away red hair, which is done up in a ponytail behind her head. She's about as tall as I am, resting her head on my shoulder. Which isn't the only thing which is resting up against me.

    My face turns as red as her hair, as I pull myself away.

    A grin laces her face at the sight of mine. "Having fun there, Takeda Kouhei?"

    I frown, placing distance between us by going to the other side of the table.

    "Aw, don't be like that."

    "Who are you, anyway?" I ask the woman, taking her image in. She's dressed in a white shirt with long sleeves, and long black pants.

    "You shouldn't be asking a question like that to a person in her own workshop, you know."

    I take another look around, still extremely impressed/a bit jealous. "This is all yours?" I breathe.

    "All of it. Every single little thing. And for now to the next week, it's also yours."

    I gape at her, my jaw hanging low.

    "Your master seems to think you can benefit from what I have to teach you, and I do owe him a few favors. So I'll be teaching you a few things this week, and so we'll be working in here." She explained, sitting up on the table and taking a puff of her cigarette.

    "... So you're my temporary master for the week."

    "Pretty much." She sighed. "Now, let's start over, shall we?"

    "... Okay." I say, blinking. She waves her hand, urging me to sit up on the table. I comply, still keeping my eyes firmly locked with hers.

    "So..." She gestures for a name.

    I'm starting to feel a bit silly. I hold out my hand with a sigh, and she takes it. "Kouhei Takeda. Nice to meet you." We shake.

    "Didn't you ever hear that you put your last name first in an introduction?" She asks wryly, smirking.

    "Force of habit." I smirk back.

    "I like that about you, Kouhei Takeda." She takes another puff of her cigarette, and then as soon as she takes it out, she gives a soft smile. She fishes a pack of cigarettes from a pocket, opens it, and offers me one by flicking a single one out with her finger. I decline, pushing it in with a finger of my own. She pouts, putting the pack away. Our eyes lock again, this time, instead of hesitation, we have a friendly acknowledgement of each other. She shakes my hand with finality, then takes yet another puff of her cigarette, rolling it in her fingers.

    "Aozaki Touko. Nice to meet you too."

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    Ooh the KNK universe! Maybe there'll be a Shiki cameo!
    great chapter, thanks for cutting it down, it takes forever to completely scroll down sometimes
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    Australia sure has some mighty mojo, no?


    What Fate/Stay Night character are you?

    Emiya Shirou

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    Speaking of which, EternalRain, would you mind putting the index at the top of your first post instead of the bottom? It's easier to get to the links that way.

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