How long has this thread been a thing and how did I not notice it? This will be super helpful for me.
How long has this thread been a thing and how did I not notice it? This will be super helpful for me.
Gigan:
-Titles: Borodan, Galien, Monster Zero, Savini, Cybernetic Slaughterer, Vanguard of the Vortaak, Mutilator of Kaiju
-Alternative Classes: Archer and Lancer
-Class: Berserker
-Alignment: Lawful Evil
-Weaponry: Scythe blades, grappling cables, optic laser, Universal Cutter, flamethrower, guided razor discs, chainsaws, tail pincer
-Origin: Godzilla
-Summoning Relic: His severed head
-Theme:
Legend:
The vanguard of many an alien invasion, Gigan was a cycloptic engine of destruction that lived to destroy and mutilate. His first attack on Earth took place in 1972 alongside King Ghidorah as part of the Space Hunter Nebula M aliens' attempt to conquer Earth. The aliens lured the planet's defenders, Godzilla and Anguirus, to their' base at Children's Land, and a devastating battery of laser weapons within the Godzilla Tower. The plot nearly succeeded in killing Godzilla, only the Godzilla Tower’s destruction and the Space Hunter’s defeat by human forces saved the monster from destruction. No longer guided by the aliens, Gigan and King Ghidorah displayed a reduced ability to cooperate. The monsters soon argued with each other, giving Godzilla time to recover and, with the aid of Anguirus, send both space monsters packing.
Gigan next appeared in answer to the appeal of the Seatopians to the Nebula M aliens. Gigan helped the Seatopian monster Megalon in his battle with Godzilla and Jet Jaguar, but, again, displayed a reduced ability to coordinate with his ally. Again, Earth's defenders soundly defeated Gigan and sent him back into the void. A much weakened Gigan was later used by the evil Garoga aliens to attack Earth. So reduced in power was the cyborg that he could no longer fly; instead, he parachuted down to the ground. Godzilla quickly beat the cyborg, leaving him for dead, but Gigan survived but then confronted Zone Fighter. The superhero employed his devastating Meteor Missile Might to defeat Gigan after a fierce battle.
Parameters:
-Strength: B+
-Endurance: C+
-Agility: B+
-Mana: D
-Luck: D-
-NP: EX
Class Skills:
-Mad Enhancement (D): Strength and Endurance parameters are up, but complex thought or attempts at communication are heavily strained.
Personal Skills:
-(Tools) Aptitude for Slaughter (A): Due to being a Space Dinosaur unwillingly transformed into a war machine by the M Space Hunter Nebula Aliens, Gigan’s weapons have a particular affinity for slaughtering humans and deal additional damage to humans.
-Monstrous Strength (A+): An ability possessed by monsters and beasts, temporary boost of the Strength parameter by one rank for a time limit determined by the ranking of this skill.
-Teleportation (EX): Aside from flight, Gigan's greatest asset is his ability to teleport. Gigan can jump into the air and teleport over distances to confuse his opponents. This ability has a range of several thousand meters and can be done repeatedly after several minutes of recharge time. Gigan can teleport in rapid succession, but the effort is heavily draining on his internal power stores.
-Disengage (B): Gigan is more opportunistic than he is loyal or principled, and as such has a history of retreating from battle when the tide turns heavily against his side, abandoning his teammates.
Noble Phantasms:
-Scythe Blades: Blood-Stained Tools For Dismemberment
*Rank: C - A+
*Type: Anti-Unit
*Description: Gigan's forelimbs sport a pair of giant metal scythes in place of hands. Created from Cosmo Steel, these appendages allow Gigan to batter, hook, or stab in close-quarters combat. Gigan can enhance their deadliness by supercharging them to create explosions on contact with an enemy, coat them in neurotoxic venom or use a fork-like tuning device inside the scythes to amplify their striking power. Gigan can also fire two grappling cables from each appendage and use them to pull his opponents into the Universal Cutter.
-Optic Laser: Burning Stream Of Devastation
*Rank: B
*Type: Anti-Unit
*Description: Gigan does not limit himself to close range combat, as he can fire a high-powered laser beam from a cannon contained in his eye, boasting remarkable range and accuracy. Another variant of this attack is a stronger and diffuse, short-range "shotgun blast" of damaging energy starting as a single beam before immediately scattering into multiple ones.
-Blood-Crazed Eradicator: Crush! Kill! Destroy!
*Rank: EX
*Type: Anti-City
*Description: At the cost of all Command Seals from his Master, Gigan grows in size from a measly 12 feet to his original height of a towering 120 meters and transform his scythes into dual-pronged chainsaws. This form allows Gigan to quickly lay waste to entire cities and decimate whole armies with no effort. All of his Parameters rise by three ranks, becoming strong enough to create small earthquakes by merely walking and easily laugh off Anti-Unit, Anti-Army or Anti-Fortress Noble Phantasms. However, Gigan is far from invincible in this state, as he can’t maintain his gigantic size for an extended period due to the sheer amount of Prana needed to sustain it and a powerful Anti-City or Anti-Country Noble Phantasm can cripple or even kill him.
Last edited by Diablo Interceptor; December 11th, 2018 at 12:28 AM.
Berserker
Hank Hill
"You shut your got-dang mouth or I'll shove that Ditch Witch down your throat and dig a tunnel straight through to sunshine!"
True Name: Henry 'Hank' Rutherford Hill
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Human
Aliases: King of the Hill, King of Propane and Propane Accessories
Likes: Propane, His family, Barbequing, America
Dislikes: Butane, Charcoal, Yankees, those who disrespect propane
Armament: His propane and propane accessories. Wields a WD-40 gun and spatula, alongside his power drill and duck tape grants him unprecedented options in combat.
Traits: Humanoid, Servant, Male, Brynhildr's Beloved, Weak to Enuma Elish, Propane
Parameters:
STR- D
END- C
AGL- E
MAG- E
LUK- C
NP- B
Class Skills:
Madness Enhancement E+ (C): The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange of hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. Berserker doesn’t receive the effects of Mad Enhancement. In exchange, he keeps his normal ability to think. However, this changes if one speaks negatively of his propane and various propane accessories.
Personal Skills:
Propane Powered EX: A skill characterizing Berserker’s nature as an unprecedented propane salesman and avid user of it in life. When powered by propane, it can supplement as an excellent substitute to mana. Berserker can also use this skill to ignite the propane he gathered within himself to gain increasingly higher speed and destructive power but at the cost of mental stability.
Unyielding Will (Propane) C: A skill that represents one's extremely firm will that never yields to any sort of agony, despair or circumstances. In this case, Berserker’s devotion to not only his propane but his family and nation. The patriotism of your every day, propane loving American would never succumb to such circumstances.
Smog Creation A: A unique skill to Berserker. His innate and precise control of propane allows him to use it in many forms. Due to its high gas output, Berserker can make his surroundings smoggy, allowing it the element of surprise in a physical confrontation as well as letting him boost his attacks in the process
Noble Phantasms
Character
Gameplay
Bond CE
Current FGO setup
Berserker.
Real Name: The Loud siblings (Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln, Lucy, Lana, Lola, Lisa and Lily Loud.)
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Attribute: Human.
Likes: Each other (not that most of them will ever admit it), Television, Hugh.
Dislikes: Being chastised, being grounded.
Natural Enemy: Nightingale, Gilles De Rais.
Parameters:
Strenght: E.
Endurance: C.
Agility: B.
Magic: E.
Luck: D.
Noble Phantasm: B.
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement (C): The Loud siblings were a cohesive familiar unit that regardless was constantly shaken by internal strife. They were, overall, rather easy to incite into agression, and once engaged in combat, they would hardly listen to reason or pause until stopped through the application of dire threats or superior physical strenght.
Riding (C): Lori only. Eldest sister Lori was the only of the siblings technically qualified for driving, and thus the group's designated driver in the absence of their parents. All four wheeled vehicles are accessible, especially those with motors, but flying artifacts and beasts are out of her reach to control.
Territory Creation (A): Lisa only. Second youngest sister Lisa was a scientific genius of incredibly advanced intellect despite only being four years old, and summoned on her own she could qualify for the Caster Class. Lisa can set up a highly developed laboratory or workshop in short periods of time by making use of mere household items, and could develop instruments, biological beings, and machinery such as armored combat vehicles and living monstrosities cobbled together from trash. These workings can only be achieved within the limits of the workshop, but may be deployed anywhere else after completion.
Personal Skills:
Specialist of Many Abilities (Fake) (A): Lincoln only. Through long direct contact with his sisters, all of whom were more talented than him in their own different ways, Lincoln developed a wide set of borrowed skills ranging from Lynn's athletic gifts to Luna's musical prowesses. Spending a meaningful amount of time around any other Servant will allow Lincoln to develop inferior copies of their own abilities, as long as they are not Divine or purely magical in nature, or ranked EX.
Innocent Monster (C): Lucy only. Ever obsessed with the undead, magic and afterlife, Goth sister Lucy never achieved magical capacities in life, but a distortion born from her own delusion and a misinterpretation of her legend grants her a certain amount of limited vampiric abilities and a D ranked Presence Concealment as long as this Skill is used.
Natural Body (C, Lola) (E, Lana): Lola and Lana only. The possession of a perfect body as a living being since birth. Lola has been the undisputed champion of the local beauty pageants for years now, and while Lana is her twin sister, her careless, uncouth nature brings this Skill down for her to the lowest possible rank.
Family Ties (A): All siblings. While constantly bickering and in-fighting, the Louds held an intense love for each other which has prompted them to be summoned as a single Servant. Losing a member of the group in battle will decrease the whole Servant's aptitude by a rank down in any random Parameter; the Servant only can lose up to a maximum of five siblings, at which point the existence of the whole is dispersed. If all siblings agree on a single given objective, their Parameters and Skills all rise one rank each, but this is an extremely rare occurrence.
Noble Phantasms:
April Fools Rules (A+): Luan only. A specific Noble Phantasm that only can be activated the First of April, or the 28th of December if the Servant happens to be fighting in a Spanish speaking language. During the whole day, Luan, the pranks and jokes obsessed sister, will gain a supernatural boost on all stats, turning her into a relentless machine of savage terror campaigning upon the enemy with a minimal use of mana. Luan gains and added EX Presence Concealment as long as this Noble Phantasm is active, and her Strenght and Endurance bloom up to A, but so does her Mad Enhancement, making her unable to tell friend apart from foe without the application of a Command Seal.
Big Ball of Violence (B): The Louds break into one of their collective fights, pulling the opponent into it and not letting go until either is defeated or the adversary retreats with a superior ranked Disengage skill, or a Spell Command is used to stop them. Mad Enhacement rises up to A for the Noble Phantasm's duration.
Summon: Lincoln- "Ever wonder what it's like to grow up in a big family? Well, now you have one! We are Servant Berserker!"
Beginning of Battle: Lynn- "Alright... Let's do this!"
Victory: Luan- "Don't feel bad about losing... We won't be Loud about it! Got it?! Hah hah!"
Lori: "We literally just kicked your butt, huh?"
Lincoln- "Huh. Now that surprises me. Isn't there anyone who can handle this house?"
Lola- "Hah! You never stood a chance competing against this much of a beauty!"
Defeat: Lana- "Aw, man...!"
Lori- "Bobby--!! I'm sorry--!"
Lily- "Poo-poo...!"
Defeat by Noble Phantasm: Leni- "W-Wh-What was THAT?!"
Noble Phantasm Activation: Luan (maniacally)- "HA HA HA HA HAHAAAAAAAA!!"
Dialogue Samples:
Lucy- "I, I can't believe it... She's so beautiful..." (When you have Assassin Carmilla.)
Lori- (Gasps) "No way! Who is this mega super hunk? Is he even for real?! Literally perfect!" (When you have Lancer Diarmuid, Saber Diarmuid or Prototype Arthur.)
Lana: "Okay, now that looks like a really interesting gal!" (When you have Archer Nobunaga.)
Luna: "Yeah, yeah, very famous and all of that, but... Can he rock with an ax? No? I thought so!" (When you have Caster Mozart or Avenger Salieri.)
Birthday: Lori- "Happy Birthday, Master! From all of us, have the best of days!"
Leni: "Huh? Was it today? But, but you hadn't told me anything...!"
Event: Lincoln- "Oboy, a party?! Yeah, it must be a party! I'm so excited, I can't sit still! I'm so excited, my palms are sweaty!"
Holy Grail: All at once- "Well, I'd like to--!" (They look at each other, then begin fighting each other for the wish.)
Last edited by OverMaster; January 23rd, 2019 at 09:27 PM.
Berserker
Spoiler:
True Name: Jonathan Joestar and William Antonio Zeppeli
Alignment: Lawful Good
Origin: Victorian Britain and 19th Century Naples
Armament: Fists, Sword, Wine Bottle and Glass
Parameters:
STR: C+ ~ B++*
END: B+~ A+*
AGI: B - A-*
MANA: E
LUCK: E
NP: C - A+
Skills
Spoiler:
Noble Phantasms
Spoiler:Description and Personality
Spoiler:
Lore 1
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Lore 2:
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Relationships:
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Notes
Spoiler:
Sadly, I've never read or watched any JoJo's, sorry.
Caster.
Real Name: Kitami Reika.
Alignment: Neutral Evil.
Attribute: Earth.
Likes: Exerting control over others, Sexual Torture.
Dislikes: Being outdone by others.
Natural Enemy: Saint Martha, Ruler Jeanne.
Parameters:
Strenght: E.
Endurance: D.
Agility: C.
Magic: A.
Luck: B.
Noble Phantasm: C.
Class Skills:
Item Creation (B+): Caster was an accomplished modern day alchemist, bringing contemporay science and black magic together to craft many spells, potions and contraptions, most of them geared towards sexual and spiritual domination.
Territory Creation (A): Caster doesn't need an extremely wide area to set a functional workshop for her needs. She can optimize average resources to great efficiency, and excels at establishing posts that can syphon life energies from those around her. Generally, the more followers Caster gathers, the more skilled at developing workshops she becomes, and she can maintain up to six at once.
Personal Skills:
Body Theft (A): While studying about the Knights Templar to escape the consequences of a pact with the devil, Caster once stumbled upon a certain secret. In order to investigate this secret, she joined a secret organization called the Prieure de Sion. The Knights Templar knew of a spell that would allow one achieving soul-succession, by excising the soul from the body, and transferring it to another body. Should Caster's body be destroyed, as long as she has enough time to make use of this ability, she can transfer her esence into another Servant, who becomes her host, or a human, who has their body altered until becoming an identical but weaker copy of Caster's original body. This skill cannot be used against Servants with the Divinity skill or high Magic Resistance.
Charisma (B): Caster was able to make others follow her into all manners of sickening crimes, eventually becoming a cult-like figurehead through possession of Kurumi Imari.
Natural Body (B): The possession of a perfect body as a living being since birth. Caster was one of the most attractive women in her country and age, able to seduce men and women alike effortlessly, and even without her. Even without using magic, she could bring all but the most determined individuals under her sway, and one of her favorite sexual tricks involved the development of a massive phallus of seemingly never ending stamina, which never failed to sexually satisfy any women she had intercourse with.
Bible Black- Forbidden Tome of Sex (A): A book of ancient origins, dating from Medieval France, which fell into Caster's posession during a traumatic event of her youth which turned her from a pure and innocent soul into a twisted degenerate witch. Caster does not need the book, as she has learned all she could from it, and should it be destroyed, she can continue acting normally. However, holding the book increases the potency of the magical attacks and defenses she learned from it, including energy barriers to act as her shields and mind control techniques. Mostly, the book allowed her to engage into a wide variety of obscene sex rituals to break the will of others and make them into her loyal long term slaves.
Noble Phantasm:
Night of Walpurgis (C+): The crystallization of Caster's depravity, this Noble Phantasm envelops everyone around her into a bounded field that, while escapable and not reaching the status of a Reality Marble, numbs the senses and willpower of those she catches into it. The more enemies or Servants caught within the Night of Walpurgis, the more effective this Noble Phantasm becomes. Its efficiency also increases greatly if it is performed at nightime. Living humans cannot escape it and have their life energy drained; Servants with high levels of the Disengage, Eye of the Mind, and Willpower skills may break from it. Caster and whoever she has snared will have repeated brutal sex within the Noble Phantasm until its ultimate completion; humans die from it invariably, but Servants may be used as mindless slaves for Caster to deploy later until they run out of mana and disappear.
Summon: "Greetings, young Master. I'm Kitami Reika, Nurse. At your service, always."
Beginning of Battle: "Come in. Get undressed. Your examination will start right now."
Victory: "Don't worry. You can just get an abortion if you get pregnant."
"Ahhhhh... It's fun watching people suffer over and over again. A face filled with pain, a face filled with pleasure...They all turn me on in different ways."
Defeat: "N-No! Give me more time...!"
"Damn you--!"
Defeat by Noble Phantasm: "No! You will pay for this! I will have my revenge, from Hell...!"
Noble Phantasm Activation: "Once people begin using magic, they can never again escape temptation. You just have to obey me. I'll show you how wonderful the darkness is..."
Dialogue Samples:
"Well, well, well! And what do we have here? Such an interesting existence..." (When you have Alter Ego Sessyoin Kiara.)
"What is this supposed to be? A demon? Don't make me laugh! I have seen real demons..." (When you have Caster Mephistopheles.)
"Let us explore the pleasures of the flesh together, Master. She, you and I, brought together in the vilest of embraces." (When you have Rider Medb or Saber Medb.)
Birthday: "Happy Birthday, dear Master. We will enjoy ourselves all day and night long."
Event: "Oh ho ho. What a quaint little experience! Let us see if we can improve on it, shall we...?"
Holy Grail: "What would I wish for? Well, if I could... I would just turn the clock back twelve years, so I never-- Oh, but what am I saying. The world doesn't work that way..."
Last edited by OverMaster; January 25th, 2019 at 10:42 PM.
Why?
Anti-Dio Squad: I can get why they're a Berserker, but I expected Jonathan to be a Saber. The sheet is overall good, but I suggest lowering the rank of Charisma to C
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Thanks man, will probably lower the Charisma, but as for why Jonathan isn't a Saber, I reasoned that a) he's too young, and b)he's not particularly skilled with a sword, only using it for a few minutes at best, and c)being a mostly close quarters, unarmed fighter. Also, is my unique Crest of Destiny skill too busted, and would it be a good idea to add an NP based on Zeppeli's final examination for Jonathan?
I think Crest of Destiny is fine as it is, but I wouldn't add any more NPs, as they already have 4. Also, now that I think about it, sinceHermit PurpleThe Passion was awakened after Jonathan died, it's kinda weird that he can use it. Then again, I made a sheet for young Joseph that also had HP
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Oh, sorry, I may have skipped that part by accident
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Archer.
Real Name: Emiya Shirou.
Aliases: Sempai, Emiya-kun, Onii-chan, EMIYA Lily.
Alignment: Lawful Good.
Attribute: Human.
Likes: GREAT JUSTICE, Saving People, Helping People, Cooking.
Dislikes: Injustice, EMIYA.
Natural Enemy: Archer EMIYA, Gilgamesh, Kotomine Kirei.
Parameters:
Strenght: E.
Endurance: D.
Agility: C.
Mana: C.
Luck: C.
Noble Phantasm: E-A.
A younger manifestation of the existence that would result in Counter Guardian EMIYA, and the one who would host Pseudo Servant Muramasa. Whem EMIYA contracted with Alaya, he surrender the whole of his existence to The World, and so The World has now exerted that right to draw this Servant from a much earlier point of his life than that when he was contracted. The exact reasons behind this course of action are unknown.
Class Skills:
Independent Action (B+): Archer was a stubborn, headstrong boy, so obsessed in his pursuit of a just path in life he could borderline delusion on his capacities, and would prefer taking risks on his own, without involving others, as often as possible. The reason why this Skill is ranked higher than EMIYA's is because Shirou's bullheadedness granted him a willpower based Idiot Shounen Hero effect the more mature and realistic (or more jaded and cynical) EMIYA could not duplicate anymore, despite being even more stubborn in other related ways. He could survive up to three days without a Master as opposed as EMIYA's average of two, however this may be greatly lessened by Young Shirou's less economic and pragamatic usage of mana.
Magic Resistance (E+): Compared to his older self, Archer has a lessened Magic Resistance because of a worse track record against magic, and a lesser degree of experience dealing with it. What resistance he has in him is owed to the effects of the Avalon relic stored within his body at this point of his life.
Personal Skills:
Magecraft (D-): At this point of his life, Emiya is still a neophyte just starting to get used in the use of Reinforce and Projection, and thus his rank is lower than the older EMIYA's.
Charisma (C-B): Archer, by this stage of his existence, was less likely to push others away from him than he would be later in life, and his eagerness to help others no matter the situation made others overall quite willing to follow him in his quests, although generally only after some disbelief and disparaging of his ideals. The Skill is ranked C when dealing with males, and B when applied on females. It may increase to A if Archer is witnessed displaying an apparently impossible feat, inspiring others to stand by his side.
The true mark of a Harem Hero.
Projection (C-): A special type of magecraft that reproduces tools for a few minutes by means of images. Archer's was more inclined towards the duplication and handling of weapons, especially bladed ones, even though, once again, a lack of experience compared to EMIYA's has lowered his rank in this regard.
Cooking with the Emiya Family (A): A support skill used to boost the physical and mental capacities of allies through the gift of generous meals skillfully prepared. While Counter Guardian EMIYA was more experienced and skilled at cooking itself, he lost the extra human touch and warmth this younger version of himself would put into his cooking, meaning this Skill is exclusive to Young Emiya.
Noble Phantasm:
Unlimited Blade Works (E-A): An unorthodox, unofficial type of Noble Phantasm, more of a Reality Marble that rewites reality around Emiya, manifesting as an open, barren desert with monolithic black gears gyrating in the distance. It is a kingdom of rubble littered with thousands, perhaps a countless number, of swords anchored in the ground like grave markers in a wasteland, yet are well preserved. It is a world likened to a steel mill, filled with weapons, flames, and giant gears. The basis for the world in the Reality Marble is a hill of swords spreading infinitely within Emiya's mind. Upon completion, Unlimited Blade Works allows Shirou access to a huge variety of weapons for his use against the enemy, including any weapon based Noble Phantasm he has observed. Divine Constructs, such as Ea and Excalibur, are impossible to replicate, however there may be degraded Noble Phantasms with similar abilities stored within this Reality Marble.
Archer's Arm (C): Once, in one of several paths his life could have taken, Young Emiya lost an arm in combat, and received a spare arm from his future counterpart, Counter Guardian EMIYA. Activating this Noble Phantasm revives that moment, grafting a copy of EMIYA's arm onto Shirou, and boosting all of his parameters and skills that were inferior to EMIYA's up to EMIYA's level. Otherwise, Young Archer's parameters and skill set remain in the same. While this increases his efficiency in battle, the stress of the merging takes a quick toll on Emiya's body, which will crumble down eventually if the Noble Phantasm is not deactivated within a time limit. After that, Young Archer's body begins going back to normal slowly.
Summon: "Ahhh, it's going to feel weird, saying this, but... Okay. I'm Servant Archer. I ask you, then, are you my Master?"
Beginning of Battle: "If you walk down the path that you believe is right, you cannot be wrong!"
Victory: "Even if I'm a fraud, I know my dream isn't wrong."
"It makes me so mad when people try so hard to become victims."
Defeat: "Urgh..."
"Father! Saber--!"
Defeat by Noble Phantasm: "Aaaaahhhhh...!"
Noble Phantasm Activation: "I am the bone of my sword. Steel is my body and fire is my blood. I have created over a thousand blades. Unaware of loss, Nor aware of gain. Withstood pain to create weapons, waiting for one’s arrival. I have no regrets. This is the only path.My whole life was Unlimited Blade Works!"
Dialogue Samples:
“It can’t be… Is this… Is this really you, Saber?!” (When you have Saber Artoria.)
"S-Saber! That... That bikini is... um... it looks good on you..." (When you have Archer Artoria.)
“I… I don’t really know how to feel about this…” (When you have Saber Artoria Alter, Mysterious Heroine X, Lancer Artoria, Lancer Artoria Alter, Rider Santa Artoria, Rider Maid Artoria, Berserker Mysterious Heroine X or Foreigner Mysterious Heroine X.)
“No way. No way we both would end up here, that’s too much. I refuse to accept it…” (When you have Archer EMIYA.)
“That person… I don’t know who he is, or why he eludes me, but I still can feel some sort of connection between us…” (When you have Assassin Kiritsugu.)
“Eh? Tohsaka? What are you doing in that get up? It’s kind of, well…” (When you have Archer Ishtar.)
“Illya-chan! What in the world are you doing?! P-Put on something else, that’s too scandalous!” (When you have Caster Prisma Illya.)
“Eh?! What—What are you doing here?!” (When you have Archer Gilgamesh.)
“Oh, Fuji-nee. Are you drunk again? For shame, that’s—Eh? What other reason would you have to be dressed up like that?” (When you have Lancer Jaguar Man.)
“It’s you again, sheesh… What a persistent guy, huh…” (When you have Lancer Cu Chulainn.)
Birthday: "Hey, Happy Birthday! Come on, come on, I've prepared a birthday feast for you!"
Event: "What is that? A party? Well, it sure looks interesting, doesn't it...?"
Holy Grail: "I have no real reason to make a wish on it. All I'd like for is to keep others from killing each other for it, and for it not to be used for evil..."
Last edited by OverMaster; January 26th, 2019 at 07:00 PM.
I've often toyed with the idea of writing a "proper' Heroic Spirit Shirou (in other words based on his feats during F/SN), so this was interesting to see. I actually think this could've gone in the regular Servant thread instead of Modern Fiction, since it does have a designated "Nasuverse" section. Moving on to the technical merits of the sheet, it's pretty good all around but some of his Skills seem iffy.
I get what you were going for with the whole "harem protagonist" aspect, but Charisma at the level of a king of a country doesn't really fit Shirou IMO. I'm also not a fan of making Magecraft and Projection separate Skills. I know GO did the same thing, but it seems like needless padding of his Skill section to me. EMIYA back in the original VN had his Projection abilities subsumed under Magecraft, so I'd have just gone with that.
Lastly, I'm really surprised this Shirou doesn't have any Skill to represent how (unlike EMIYA) he's still determined to uphold his ideal of being a hero of justice. Unyielding Will or even low-ranked Mental Pollution (given how many people in the VN note mow messed up Shirou's hero complex can be) would work wonders here. On the other hand, Cooking with the Emiya Family makes a fun "flavor" Skill. I definitely got a kick out of that.
Last edited by RoydGolden; January 26th, 2019 at 11:09 PM.
Thank you. That's very really nice input.