IMHO, posting it in the thread is just one less step to reading it, which makes people more inclined to read.
Lol, cupcakes, with poison~ Next time I have the time, I'll run a grammar hammar on a part.
Or to quote things when you see something strange/in need to be checked.
A nice start, but I can't say much more at the moment. Casko seems a bit off, though.
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Where did I mention Casko in there?
Dunno. Maybe the hooded girl with pink hair?
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