Valentines day collaboration work [R18]

**Arashi_Leonhart** · February 15th, 2012, 02:54 AM

Knee-jerk reaction--

Or something-else-jerk reaction? YOU DECIDE actually it should be pretty obvious.

Originally Posted by Tusia

ah I remember when I've asked you to look for something xDDDD
and then I've realized that I ask guy to look for woman lingerie...
... and it was awesome xDDDDD

I actually think about that sort of thing probably too much. "What would this character wear for teh sexy?" is actually something I consider when I'm character building.

**Tusia** · February 15th, 2012, 07:17 AM

Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart

I actually think about that sort of thing probably too much. "What would this character wear for teh sexy?" is actually something I consider when I'm character building.

sexy indeed~ <3
Thanks again (6 ? 7'th time now? xD ) for your hard work and dealing with me <3

**Keyne** · February 15th, 2012, 07:52 AM

Indeed, good choice Arashi.

PADDOPADDOPADDOPADDOPADDOPADDO~~

**lethum** · February 15th, 2012, 09:15 AM

Originally Posted by Five_X

...

Lethum, there's really, really not much past the "first" choice. Just an ending. :P

I noticed. But I still saved!

**Tusia** · February 15th, 2012, 09:21 AM

195 downloads...
nice <3
Thanks everyone <3

**DreamsRequiem** · February 15th, 2012, 09:58 AM

...you know it would be great if someone posted this at /fate/, if someone hasn't done that already.

**Tusia** · February 15th, 2012, 10:18 AM

Originally Posted by DreamsRequiem

...you know it would be great if someone posted this at /fate/, if someone hasn't done that already.

I'm too shy to do it xD
especially now, when I feel like I should improve with drawing and redo some of CG's :3c

**Fafnir** · February 15th, 2012, 03:15 PM

This pleases me. This pleases me GREATLY.

Originally Posted by Ivan The Mouse

This scene was so bloody fappable like heresy.

Warning: Medium Risk Spoilers; NSFW Alert.

I like it. Very sexy.

I highly approve of Arashi's taste in lingerie.

**Ivan The Mouse** · February 15th, 2012, 04:35 PM

Indeed, Fafnir.

**lantzblades** · February 15th, 2012, 06:10 PM

well i read it, now i'm definitely glad i went and read Arashi's stuff first. I like both writing styles but they are very much worlds apart.

honestly Arashi if you hadn't signed your name i'd have never have known it was you.

I have suggestions, question and a few personal nit picks but otherwise nice job to both of you, i really enjoyed it.

i'd suggest that the next time a project like this one comes up there should be more choices (choices make players feel awesome) that and jazz up the interface (it fits because it's alter but it comes out a bit flat being all black and grey)

what interface did you use? a predesigned engine or is it custom?

is there any unused art that didn't make it into the project?

are either of you planning something like this again?

as to my personal nit picks. (i have no actual criticism to offer as it was executed pretty much perfectly these are just the things that bugged me personally)

Shirou at times seemed a bit too smart just with some of the words he used.

in the first CG shirou looked a bit big compared to alter. (rest was fine)

I wish Alter hadn't put the brakes on shirou and gotten a facial before continuing (again just personal preference)

yeah so that was my thought on it. if you guys do something in the future please direct me there if i miss it.

**Neir** · February 15th, 2012, 06:19 PM

I gotta agree with Lantz on Shirou sounding too smart, but that's how it goes with Arashi's writing.

**Arashi_Leonhart** · February 15th, 2012, 06:30 PM

You guys are too used to the game translation.

**lantzblades** · February 15th, 2012, 06:30 PM

I gotta agree with Lantz on Shirou sounding too smart, but that's how it goes with Arashi's writing.

yeah i mean he's not dumb but the word cognizant seems really out of place coming from him

You guys are too used to the game translation.

this i can admit.

**Neir** · February 15th, 2012, 06:31 PM

Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart

You guys are too used to the game translation.

This.

Originally Posted by lantzblades

yeah i mean he's not dumb but the word cognizant seems really out of place coming from him

And this.

**Arashi_Leonhart** · February 15th, 2012, 06:36 PM

Of course, I probably just like that word too much. Sounds more interesting than "aware."

**lantzblades** · February 15th, 2012, 06:41 PM

Of course, I probably just like that word too much. Sounds more interesting than "aware."

true enough, so what about my questions?

**Arashi_Leonhart** · February 15th, 2012, 06:46 PM

You'll have to wait on Tusia's answers, since I don't really know. This wasn't even really that much of a plan to begin with, just, one day...

Tusia: "Write Alter porn, I'll draw it."
Me: "Okay!"
*a day later*
Tusia: "That was fast. This is embarrassing. Also, what're boyshorts?"

**lantzblades** · February 15th, 2012, 06:49 PM

You'll have to wait on Tusia's answers

so you did the writing and none of the technical scripting for the engine then?

i'm doubly impressed by tusia then

**Arashi_Leonhart** · February 15th, 2012, 06:50 PM

Indeed. Like I've said elsewhere, I get credit for something I didn't do much for.

**Tusia** · February 16th, 2012, 04:15 AM

what interface did you use? a predesigned engine or is it custom?

I've used Renpy, I was too lazy to write program by myself, because it was just one short scene.

is there any unused art that didn't make it into the project?

Well yeah, many - all in my sketchbook, because I usually don't draw ero, and had to learn pretty fast how to do it

are either of you planning something like this again?

I'm too lazy... but projects like this one help a lot with skill development... so I won't say no

in the first CG shirou looked a bit big compared to alter. (rest was fine)

pff True, he was even bigger before xD
(Tusia never seen these things on her own eyes ^^; )

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