Alright. Anyone wanna help me beta my fic?
(No, it's not done yet :<)
Basically, I'm gonna kinda want help developing the ideas and plot, but mostly to improve my prose, characterization and stuff. Experience and familiarity with Kara no Kyoukai would be appreciated.
Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.
Okay, if I could have your attention, please? I need help with writing fight scenes that are actually good, as opposed to my current selection of fight scenes, anyway. No knowledge of the franchises involved needed (to the best of my knowledge), though it would be nice if you had some knowledge of what I'm writing about, and not just on the Nasu side of things.
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For those that don't necessarily care if my fics aren't all Type-Moon related.
Hmm... this is a bit of a surprise these days.
An archive of my works on the forum that's pretty accurate.
Note that I don't wish to be seen as an idiot any longer. I can't always promise better works than before, but I can sure as hell try, alright?
So I have roughly 16,000 words of oneshot here that sure could use a proofreader for the most insidious and hidden of grammatical errors and someone who can spotcheck the unintentional lore hiccups. Good, working knowledge of /hollow's mechanics in particular is a must, just so you can tell me how wrong I am about X under Y condition. The usual beta stuff, really.
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I might be able to.
Originally Posted by Vagrant
Is the beta reading for free?
If you paid me I wouldn't say no.
Usually, yes. I guess somebody could charge for it, but I don't think they'd get much bussiness.
I don't have cash so(
But this, yes.
Think about this, if someone thinks they're good enough at editing to be paid, they wouldn't be editing fanfiction.
I wouldn't mind being paid for it, though
Is there anyone who would do it for free
It tends to help if you give a basic idea of what sort of fanfic you're wanting beta-read.
F/GO SUPPORT
I am new to these stuffs but the story is OC (mostly OC characters) set in an alternate universe of FSN where Avenger was not summoned in the 3rd War and the Einzberns did not hire Kiritsugu for the 4th War as well as Kirei being chosen by the grail never happening. I just finished the prologue.link
Ok I need a beta, possibly two (presuming one is not ok with Lemons) who are quick and/or good with fight scenes. I'm a huge continuity nerd, when I say swords and sorcery is one story I mean it, however there's a lot of stories that intersect with it and I want to get those done by the end of the fucking century. I'd prefer Leo or Eddyak but I'm aware that you two are likely busy so beggars, choosers and all that.
Heh.
I have been informed that it is my solemn duty to accept this request. PM me.
Pm sent
Beta get. Thanks to all who offered.
Last edited by Extrinsical; December 1st, 2014 at 07:02 AM. Reason: End request.
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