Looking for a beta for my first writing (Just the prologue is done). The story that I'm planning out is about the daily life of Gudao in a style that is a mix of All Around Type Moon and Carnival Phantasm. As in, fun fun jokey joke not serious kinda story.
Want to check if my writing is structured or not.
Something
I'm available as a beta, but I can't immediately look into your work. If you like, you can send it to me around Friday.
Looking for beta.
Preferably with knowledge about Apo and GO.
Also Holy Grail Wars haters would be nice.
Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
I fail on the last front, but otherwise I'd qualify.
My Skype's dead, though.
I know Apo's general plot, and some broad strokes of GO (except America chapter), and I have a lot of free time. So why not?
Looking for a beta. Preferably not a Grail War hater, just someone who can tell me if I've screwed up with Sakura (again).
Likes attention, shiny objects, and... a ball of yarn?
F/GO Supports
I joined two years too late...
I realize I'm not very well known around here - this is my first actual post in the forum - but didn't have much to say before. I'm looking for a Beta, if possible one that doesn't hate any of the canon series, and is somewhat knowledgeable about them.
The only true requirement, though, is that you can find anything wrong with the fic I'm currently writing, or let me know when it's solid. That's all I really need from a Beta.
Anything else, such as Characterization help, plot help, grammar help, and phrasing help, is welcome, but not specifically required, so you can just help with whatever you're good at - or at everything, as long as you can do it.
It's a serious fic, trying to take from elements of canon with my own twist. Figured I'd say that, in case it's needed. Still not fully planned, but the start seems solid, so far.
is this a fic that has been posted or has not been posted yet?
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
Not posted yet, I'm still too early on, so I figured it wasn't really worth posting until it's more fleshed out. Currently has about 2000 words done.
I reckon the idea itself is good, but I do need some help in the form of a Beta to actually manage to keep going. Last time I tried without any Betas, I managed 1000 words and then the idea was kind of lost on me. This time I'm planning it better, but I still need a Beta if I can hope to make it more than a short series of snippets.
@Edit: Currently still looking, 5k words done and I feel like they would be so much better quality, as 5k words, if I had a beta from here...
If anyone has the time, even a tad bit, I could use some help...
Last edited by kazamitempest; July 6th, 2016 at 08:02 PM.
Would anyone be interested in hearing my ongoing story project?
I might. My schedule looks like a binder with chronic obesity though, so I don't know if I can edit.
Would anyone be willing to fact check my story's chapters? I don't think I'll need a beta so much as a person to tell me, 'nope, Sakura wouldn't do this,' or 'Rin would require different motivation if you want her to do that,' and the like.
So far, I've only got one, so it would be pretty light work.
Likes attention, shiny objects, and... a ball of yarn?
F/GO Supports
I joined two years too late...
Sorry for the late reply, I think I found someone for the first thing I needed a beta for but I will have something else soon that you can look at, but if you still want help I'd be happy to offer what services I can.
Looking for beta for Kirby's secret santa contest.
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Both for bouncing ideas and reviewing.
same
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mostly reviewing though
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
HMU, I'm free like 90% of the time.
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
Awesome.
okay i'm going to procastinate a lot and then freak out in a month
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
That's the only way to do it.
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
Hey there! Would someone be able to beta read my fic for the Secret Santa event? Preferably, someone who isn't already taking part in it so as to not spoil the surprise. :-P
How long is it, and what's the subject matter (PM me, naturally). I can't guarantee anything, but I might be able to help. My weekend looks rather free at the moment.
Likes attention, shiny objects, and... a ball of yarn?
F/GO Supports
I joined two years too late...
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