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    Would someone be interested in betaing for me within the next few days, preferably someone who is not participating in my contest as the fic is related to that.
    What’re the goods like, what skills do you need*, and when does it have to be done?

    * I’m not the greatest with canon, so I’d rather avoid something of that nature.

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    Is anyone interested in beta-reading mi fic?http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...-Fate-Parousia
    What is a savior? Is it someone who comes in dire times, riding a white horse and wearing a shining armor? Is it a messenger of the gods who shows mankind the road of redemption? Or just someone brave enough to defy common sense and devote his life to others?

    No... In the end, it's simply someone who saves others. Therefore, a savior is useless in times of peace.

    That's why we wanted you to come.

    This war... Shall bring forth the salvation we all sought.


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    The fic I wrote is too long to ask someone to beta read it, but I’m not entirely sure it’s readable. Storywise, I mean; I’ve had it in the works for almost two years now, so errors are minimal. Instead of beating it, I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give it a preliminary read and review, basically so that I can be sure it’s not boring. Like, I’m hoping that it’s interesting, and it features some characters that I really haven’t seen anywhere yet, namely Gray, Fiore, and Olga-Marie.

    Main characters are Rin and Shirou though, so if you’re totally sick of them feel free to pass on this.
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    Hello,

    I need some advice regarding the mechanics of summoning for my own story I'm writing. Is it possible to summon Arturia Pendragon as a Saber-class without Avalon as a Catalyst? If so, what catalyst would that be? I'm researching Arthurian mythology, and I've come across the Thirteen Treasures of Britain as a starting point. Please reply, I'd like some feedback. Thank you.

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    any catalyst as long as its strongly related to her and the personality of the person being close is even better.
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    That's exaggerating my point.

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    Hello,

    Thank you for the swift reply. It really helps. I came across 'The Mantle of Arthur in Cornwall', referenced in the welsh tales. Or would that fall under the Assassin-class? Because it's not as well known as Avalon, Excalibur or Caliburn. Can the first artifact apply, do you think?

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    Ah, I just read your second part: the personality of the person summoning. Yeah, now that I think about it, MC (Main Character) is an idealist. Well, mostly.

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    Hello,

    I have a question that's I've been scratching my head over. Shirou was revived after Lancer killed him, yeah? So, what is the reason he survived more? Was it Avalon or Rin Tohsaka's pendant that got the job done?

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    Yes.
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    Rin constructed a new heart for him. Saber hadn't been summoned yet so Avalon wouldn't have taken effect. Or at least, that's what I 've been led to understand. Either way, these questions belong in the Questions, questions, and more questions thread, not here, for your future reference.
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    Hi, thanks for the answer.

    I'll remember to post in the proper thread regarding the questions. I hope you have a nice day.

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    Mm, it's my nature to feel irritating when I ask absolutely anything of this nature, but could I run a story concept and some half-finished sheets by someone by PM? It's one I don't want to just toss out and spoil for everyone, but that I do really need a voice besides myself to weigh in on.

    I'm working on a CAS/fanfic project and I've reached the point where I've done enough that my anxiety starts taking it seriously and begins to question if the whole concept actually feels legit or not.

    I promise I won't spam the prospective someone with too much, but I need a second opinion, somewhat.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Sunny View Post
    Mm, it's my nature to feel irritating when I ask absolutely anything of this nature, but could I run a story concept and some half-finished sheets by someone by PM? It's one I don't want to just toss out and spoil for everyone, but that I do really need a voice besides myself to weigh in on.

    I'm working on a CAS/fanfic project and I've reached the point where I've done enough that my anxiety starts taking it seriously and begins to question if the whole concept actually feels legit or not.

    I promise I won't spam the prospective someone with too much, but I need a second opinion, somewhat.
    I'm game. Actually, do you have a Skype or something? Maybe we could talk there.
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