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    Quote Originally Posted by LeopardBear View Post
    Could we agree that there's at Lear a moral difference between angering your own mental chemistry and doing something as a result of that vs the same result but non-consensual alteration?
    The justice department says otherwise.

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    Hence why I said moral difference and not legal.
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    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    Quote Originally Posted by LeopardBear View Post
    Hence why I said moral difference and not legal.
    From the last time I had a discussion with their office on the subject, they consider it a moral decision that they just happened to make a legal code about rather than the other way around.

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    ...Something I should know about?

    Please tell me if it is.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Xamusel View Post
    ...Something I should know about?

    Please tell me if it is.
    When people under you get in trouble, you're often left holding the paperwork. The phone calls that follow can be...unpleasant.

    As for your story, just try to avoid anything that might imply forced or impaired consent to anything that involves sex.

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    Which why my suggestion was 'both are drunk but sex doesn't actually happen'.

    At best make it 'drunk Ayako kisses Shirou on a dare' or something and don't let it go further than that.



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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    Which why my suggestion was 'both are drunk but sex doesn't actually happen'.

    At best make it 'drunk Ayako kisses Shirou on a dare' or something and don't let it go further than that.
    This would actually be funny.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xamusel View Post
    *facepalm* I hate my life sometimes.

    I didn't realize that my idea was essentially that flawed. I guess I'd better go back and redo it from the beginning.
    I dunno. If you're looking to write an introspective character piece on Shirou that deals with the consent of those he helps or saves bringing in the element of unwitting rape as an extreme comparison you should write it. If you're going for cute high school romance... not so much.

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    I mean unless you want it to have shaky consent issues (there is a fetish for that), yeah, what everyone else is saying.
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    People dont REALLY get the same punishment for brutal sexual assault and drunk fucking in the US right?Because you people made it sound like that.
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    At least for NY the second appears to be third degree while the first is well 1st, which is the difference between an E felony and a B felony.

    - - - Updated - - -

    Which is the difference between max 4 years probation and max 25 years.
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    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    >4 yrs probation for drunk sexHow do you guys still have teen pregnancies
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    Because the history of drunk teens fucking who have ever actually been charged with a felony is a bare one.
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    Quote Originally Posted by I3uster View Post
    >4 yrs probation for drunk sexHow do you guys still have teen pregnancies
    Because we don't have the SS keeping track of all our drunken flings?

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    You should, more efficient than sex ed anyways.
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    Quote Originally Posted by I3uster View Post
    You should, more efficient than sex ed anyways.
    Haha! My criminology 212 class I took a couple years back tells me that deterrence is ineffective! A professor and a text book gave me that nugget so it can't be wrong!

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    Quote Originally Posted by I3uster View Post
    You should, more efficient than sex ed anyways.
    You're implying that we have money to do that.

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    See abstinence sex-ed is cheap.
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    Quote Originally Posted by LeopardBear View Post
    See abstinence sex-ed is cheap.
    American public school sex ed was literally:

    "Here's a few slides of what STDs look like on you. Here's a spreadsheet detailing the cost of a baby. You still wanna have sex? WELL DO YOU!?"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Riven View Post
    You're implying that we have money to do that.
    Tell the public that the Norks are infiltrating your country via swagasians that prey on your drunk daughters. Increase mil budget until everybody feels safe again.

    Then again this might result in the cryptography department of the CIA having to deal with the hardest code they have ever faced, 16 year old drunk abbreviation texting.
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