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    If it's not a conflict of interest, I can beta-read someone's if it's 5k or less pretty much anytime. I made a post about beta-ing skills here: http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...=1#post2341557

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    I don't wanna beta your Illya lemon if she's a loli, though, no offense.
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    Imagine that the world is made out of love. Now imagine that it isn’t.

    Imagine a story where everything goes wrong, where everyone has their back against the wall, where everyone is in pain and acting selfishly because if they don’t, they’ll die.
    Imagine a story, not of good against evil, but of need against need against need, where everyone is at cross-purposes and everyone is to blame.



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    Let Sakura say fuck and eat junkfood you weirdos.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Prix of Heroes View Post
    I don't wanna beta your Illya lemon if she's a loli, though, no offense.
    Dammit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Prix of Heroes View Post
    If it's not a conflict of interest, I can beta-read someone's if it's 5k or less pretty much anytime.
    I'll take you up on that! But why would it be a conflict of interest? Are you also taking part?

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    Quote Originally Posted by SpoonyViking View Post
    I'll take you up on that! But why would it be a conflict of interest? Are you also taking part?
    Yep, but it's not exactly a competition, as I take it?
    Imagine that the world is made out of love. Now imagine that it isn’t.

    Imagine a story where everything goes wrong, where everyone has their back against the wall, where everyone is in pain and acting selfishly because if they don’t, they’ll die.
    Imagine a story, not of good against evil, but of need against need against need, where everyone is at cross-purposes and everyone is to blame.



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    Let Sakura say fuck and eat junkfood you weirdos.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Prix of Heroes View Post
    Yep, but it's not exactly a competition, as I take it?
    Well, no, but what if I'm your Secret Santa? Won't that spoil the surprise? :-)

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    ... That is a fair point.
    Imagine that the world is made out of love. Now imagine that it isn’t.

    Imagine a story where everything goes wrong, where everyone has their back against the wall, where everyone is in pain and acting selfishly because if they don’t, they’ll die.
    Imagine a story, not of good against evil, but of need against need against need, where everyone is at cross-purposes and everyone is to blame.



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    Let Sakura say fuck and eat junkfood you weirdos.


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    looking for beta for secret santa
    pm me i guess

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    oh yeah and since i'm lazy i'm probably going to want to send a word document through skype of discord
    so yeah having those would be appreciated
    Quote Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
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    "And most importantly, it's me who'll be doing the cooking."
    Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
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    I'm looking for a Beta for a for a fic based around a slightly different story of the formation of the Holy Grail War, and how it affects the Fifth HGW.
    Edit: Scratch that.

    I'm looking for a Beta for a fic based around Magus Society in the 1600s , focused on the Einzbern heir.... who is not Justeaze von Einzbern.
    Last edited by WhatShouldNotBe; December 18th, 2016 at 09:33 PM.

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    Hello there. Nice to meet you guys!

    I'm a newbie at this forum. I've actually been reading things around here for quite some time since I got into the Fate series, and eventually TYPE-Moon's entirety. It's just been recently that I've decided to join in the forums, since it has been a while that I wanted to join the discussions around here.


    As for why I'm here, I wanted to ask for help from any of the available beta-readers around, particularly the one with a lot of knowledge concerning the Nasuverse's mechanics, as well as help on the proper characterization of the canon characters, something that I am screwing up a lot even until now. Seriously, I can't get a lot of things right on that part, even if I tried to research a lot on those characters. I seem to have a hard time on imaging how they would act in many situations I haven't seen them tackle in the anime or VN playthrough. (I couldn't manually play the VN due to lack of PC/Laptop.)

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    If you're still looking, I can't say I have a lot of time for such things, and there are definitely people who understand the characters better than I do as well, but I'd be willing to take a look at what you've got.

    Would I be able to get someone to look at something I wrote? Not to beta it or anything, but just to confirm that it isn't boring, because I'm worried it might be too long and too tedious.
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    Admittedly, she'd probably be the hottest loan shark you'll ever meet. She'd probably make you smile as she sucked you dry.


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    Depends. How long is it? If it's not a 100 page novel and just reading, I wouldn't mind.

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    Part one is 30 pages on word, but part two is around 50. So, that's a no, I'm guessing?
    I did say it was long.
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    Oh dear, that doesn't sound like yuri at all.
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    Not with that attitude.

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    I can take a look at it, if you'd like.

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    I'd still be ok with going over it too, just by the way.

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    Thanks TwilightsCall. I'll upload it in a few... days? Huh. There are few things I need to touch up. Thank you for your consideration.
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    Looking for beta for my fanfic contest entry.
    Story is like 20,000 words and the deadline is april 8th.
    Looking mostly for grammar, typos, as well as being understandable to someone who hasn't dumped a lot of time into this fandom
    PM me if interested or skype/discord me if you have that stuff.
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    "And most importantly, it's me who'll be doing the cooking."
    Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
    Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
    Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.


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    Don't @ me if your fanfic doesn't even have Shirou/Illya shipping k thnx ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
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    HMU bub I'm game as ever
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    aren't you a judge?
    Quote Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
    Dumas flashed a fearless grin at Flat and Jack as he rattled off odd turns of phrase.
    "And most importantly, it's me who'll be doing the cooking."
    Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
    Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
    Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.


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    Would someone be interested in betaing for me within the next few days, preferably someone who is not participating in my contest as the fic is related to that.

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