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    Everwinter


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    Everwinter
    ~Pale blossom on the white skies~
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    Fear me, for my greed moves the mountains.


    I am that which lives in your nightmares.

    Darkest night, longest night, when the sun refuses to rise.

    In the cold glimmer of the pure, white world, I alone hunt for the fools.

    —Because monsters of this land, ne’er shall they fall before heroes.





    Chapter 1

    Dawn of a new day

    Amongst the falling flakes of snow, there was not one that looked like the other. Streams of sun’s golden light impishly played between the crystal surfaces, bouncing to and fro like a child, excited. It was the beginning of the new day. Soundlessly, the great light of the sky climbed up, becoming the only difference between the whiteness of the land and the air. In these early hours of the day, the sky tended to be as pale as a lady’s face.

    But as beautiful as the scenery outside was, she ignored it completely. With half-open eyes, she stared at the old ceiling, lying in the luxurious bed. Wrapped up in blankets, she cursed under her breath. Had she known it was below twenty degrees outside, she would not have found it strange that she was freezing. After all, her bed was next to the window.

    Wearily, she reached for the alarm clock on the nightstand next to the bed, and shut it with a sluggish move. The ringing had long since ended, but it still continued to resonate in her ears. She had never been the morning person, and never would be. It was enough that the old room had the fragrance of dusty earth and old books. That alone would have gotten anyone drowsy. But for her, who stayed up till past the midnight, waking up this early was a miracle.

    The only small resignation she made to the land of waking was a quick jump to her feet, before opening the blackened metal hatches of the large fireplace at the very corner of the room. The white-painted tiles were hot to touch, enough to warm the whole room. With dry eyes, she swiftly snatched a few logs from the basket nearby, and stuffed them in the fireplace. Back when the maids had still lived in the mansion, it had been their job to keep the place heated. But now, with the three of them left, it was up to the tenants of the mansion to make it livable.

    The logs cracked and popped happily, as the bright flames licked their coarse surface. She murmured contently, feeling how the heat started spreading more fiercely than before. The fireplaces of the house were all connected, but it already took the contraption they had built to keep the lobby and the sitting room warm. It would have been a waste to ask any more, so they resigned to heating the smaller rooms separately. And now that hers had been promised the fire of few more hours, she nodded to herself and closed the hatches, before quickly jumping back to her bed. It was more of her domain right now, far from the previous seconds of squatting before the fireplace in her undergarments.

    Thus, right now, she was undergoing a great mental battle between going back to sleep and getting up.

    Normally, she would have been dragged up at this point by her friend. Well, friend was a wrong word, but it was the only word she had. Glancing at the chilling air outside, she could already see her friend’s frowning face. If there was someone who had been born into the right climate, it was the person living on the opposing wing of the house.

    However, it was Saturday. And by the degree of the government, Saturdays were considered free for everyone attending school. Thus, she could simply offer a smug smile and snuggle deeper into her bed, without any worry about lessons, teachers or anything. Sleeping in was a very viable option, therefore, and she admitted to herself that by every passing minute, the idea was sounding more and more tempting.

    To turn your back to “Good Morning!” and to welcome “Good Day!”… She knew that she would have gotten scolded for it, had there been anyone to scold her. But since her project had kept her up till the first signs of darkness fading away in the sky, she deemed that she deserved it.

    Common rules of society could go rot for all she cared.

    Whatever the case, she had no responsibilities to take care of, and nobody was stupid enough to bother her on the mornings after the experiments. Well, those that knew of those experiments. And it was not like somebody would just climb over the wall and trick Lemminkäinen, merely for the sake of waking her up. If for no other reason, simply because it was getting colder and colder outside. By the time of the evening, it could be below thirty degrees.

    Sighing, she flicked the alarm clock to the floor and resigned herself for some more sleep. The blanket whispered sweet promises of slumber, and she was an eager listener. When she got the chance, it would not take even two minutes for her to fall straight to sleep.

    —If only during those two minutes somebody had not rang the doorbell.

    The far-away sound drew her attention, causing her to curse for the second time. The Gods of Irony that her friend refused to believe in had once again reared their ugly heads, and arranged this most unlikely scenario to happen the moment she found some time to sleep.

    Once more, it rang. Out of the room, down the stairs, through the corridor, into the lobby, once more down the stairs, and there would the perpetrator be. Even thinking of the journey she’d had to go through in order to open the door made the girl groan in anger.

    By the time of the fifth ring, the girl’s mindset switched from playing dead to wanting revenge. Her nails dug into the sheets, and her white teeth grinded against each other. Whoever it was behind the door, the sheer persistence was unworldly.

    “… This is bad.”

    Her words finally broke the silence of her room. She had come to a realization. If Vasilisa had been in the house, she would have already opened the door and shooed away whatever guest there was. That girl was either underground, or out in the city. The latter option would have been very unlike her, and the mere thought of the blonde introvert in the mall caused the girl to chuckle. And what came to the freeloader in their house, that was a foolish dream. That person was tucked away in her box, most likely with a cup of hot chocolate and a steamy romance novel. There was no way that freeloader would have taken any responsibilities when it came to guests.

    The pace of the ringing was beginning to slow, but that did not mean it was stopping. Far from it. It looked like the assailant was reserving his stamina in order to last longer.

    “Okay, that’s it. You deserve to be punched. A slug straight to the face,” she announced, and with angry resignation, jumped up from her bed. Cold air assaulted her, but she threw her leather jacket on and hurried out of the room.

    White corridors outside of her cozy room seemed to reflect the outside perfectly. Both the piling snow and the pale paint were in perfect harmony, and judging from the lack of heating in the corridor, she suspected that there was some sort of synchronization going on between the two. Winter, as big part of the country as it was as a season, had always been her greatest enemy. Pulling her jacket closer, she hurried forward on her bare feet.

    Although not that far away from the city, the mansion, like all of those in Finland, was hidden by a formidable wall of forest. White topped spruce and fir, as far as the eye could see. Nestled deep in the valley, far away from the agricultural fields, it was the perfect hideaway for people like her.

    And now someone had broken into that hideaway. With the persistent ringing of the doorbell as his weapon, this intruder was about to be repelled by the mistress of the house. She had momentarily wondered if she should wrap the corpse into the long carpet that protected her naked feet from the coldness of the corridor’s floor, but decided against it. Even if she was one to act first, think later, she realized that her sleepy mind was still somewhat unnecessarily violent.

    However, she had no idea why anyone would be that persistent. Even with a bus, you would have to walk on the forest road for good fifteen minutes before getting to the outer wall. It was designed to keep away those who would approach the place out of sheer curiosity. But perhaps that was the weakness of it, too. Anyone who made it this far would not go away until they got what they wanted.

    Therefore, she hurried down the stairs, across the lobby, and headed straight for the door and the shadow behind the twisted glass surface. Wanting nothing but to place a fist straight into the face of the one who disturbed her sleep, she swept away her hair from her face and put her hand on the handle, opening the door the chill of January.

    Clicking her tongue, Sallalea Edelfelt stared up at the person standing there, her eyebrows cocked. She had no idea who the young man was, and as far as she was concerned, she did not care. He had woken her up after all.

    ”...Just who the hell are you supposed to be?”

    The young man was as tall as Sallalea herself was short. His large coat with a fur-rug and messy long hair created an image of a refined hobo, someone who even poverty could not make look bad. Golden hair, golden eyes and unshaved beard belonged to someone who clearly came from different origins than from the street. However, the combat boots, the pants with camouflage pattern and the torn hoodie under the coat had both the look and the stench of streets on them.

    In short, he was a polar opposite of how Sallalea was dressed. Even though she had just climbed out of bed she looked like an aristocratic lady. Her blue silk pajamas with pictures of snowflakes, covered mostly by her well-kept leather jacket, exhibited the aura of money and fame, something very fitting for the mansion built many centuries ago. Her hair, resembling the sky in its color, was nearly the length of the girl herself. Two orange eyes stared at the boy with doubt and annoyance seething from them.

    “So? Who are you? What are you doing here?” Sallalea demanded to know again, frowning at the young man. “If you’re here for handouts, tough luck. The church is on the other side of the city. We don’t have anything for hobos here.”

    There was a few seconds of silence, as the blonde man stared at Sallalea, seemingly confused by her attitude.

    “No…” the young man finally answered, and put his hand into his pocket. “I came because of this. You know, the ad.”

    Having said that, the young man produced a piece of paper from his pocket. It seemed to have been cut from a newspaper, one that had been lying in some trash for a long time, judging by the smell. As Sallalea made no move to take it, mostly because of the smell, the young man presented it to her so she could read it. Still looking rather doubtful, Sallalea eyed at the contents of the paper.

    “’A room for rent: Looking for a place to stay? Come to the Lintukoto Mansion. We have multiple rooms available for you, with a measly rent of 2300 markkaa per month, water and electricity included. No questions ask, full guarantee of privacy. The house includes a common room, a kitchen and a sauna. Foodstuff not provided by the house. First month’s pay up-front. Address is…’”

    As she read on, Sallalea’s eyes started to widen in disbelief. It was as if someone had presented her the American Declaration of Independence. Shaking like a leaf, her eyes darted between the piece of paper and the young man, until an expression of anger and rejection rose to her face.

    “W-what sort of prank is this!?” Sallalea yelled out, turning around on her heels. “There’s no way something like this can be on the papers!”

    Like a gale, Sallalea ran to the nearby newspaper rack in the lobby, where all the old newspapers of the week were stored. She stuck her hand in and drew forth the yesterday’s newspaper, showing a rather disturbing sense of flair when it came to dramatic movement. With a flurry of paper, she turned on the page showing the ads. And there, at the very bottom of the page where she usually didn’t even bother looking, shining like a blaming finger straight at her face…

    “What!? The same ad is here!?” Sallalea’s “How could it… who could have… I mean, there’s no way something like this was written. Unless… unless…”

    Sallalea’s eyes snapped to the door in the lobby, the one with a spiraling staircase that led to the underground basement behind it. The only possible culprit for such an add had to be behind it, and currently, Sallalea wanted to do nothing more but to kick down the said door and re-enact the charge of the Golden Horde down the staircase.

    Unfortunately, there was one problem. Namely, the young man with a tepid expression that stood behind her.

    “Sorry, but I’ll have to inform you this now. We aren’t currently accepting any tenants,” Sallalea informed, adopting an expression of deep frown once again. “So, just… crawl back to whatever cardboard box you crawled out of. That’ll be better for all of us.”

    If Sallalea was expecting the young man to simply retreat at this point, she was sorely mistaken. What she got was instead a face that seemed almost like a reflection of her own, and pose that emphasized the fact that the young was over half a meter taller than Sallalea.

    “Oi. Brat. All I hear is ‘hobo, hobo’ from you. Just what do you think a paying customer is?” The boy growled at her. “I may look like this, I may not have a house or a job, but that does not mean I’m a hobo.”

    “Isn’t that the exact definition of a hobo?” Sallalea asked with a deadpan expression, causing the boy to flinch like he had been sucker-punched.

    “So it’s true. Hermits who confine themselves in a rich life at mansions really look down on the little people,” the boy commented, now glaring at Sallalea defiantly. “How scary world we live in.”

    “Hey don’t go getting your sweat of poverty all over me. Even if that hoodie of yours is ventilated in the most uncouth manner, you’re still like a bear in a sauna.”

    The air nearly crackled under the tension of the two figures, one small and one tall, confronting each other in the lobby of the mansion. A combo of rich thickhead and poor blockhead was so clashing that it was a small miracle that the expensive wooden floor under them didn’t start burning from the friction the collision of these two caused. With forced smiles, more akin to toothy grins, on their faces, the young man and a woman displayed their full enmity, something only strangers with too similar personalities can achieve.

    “I’ll have you know, my hoodie wasn’t like this from the beginning. It’s because of that mad army of magpies on your yard that I look like I crawled out from the other side of the Iron Curtain,” the young man retorted. Sallalea snorted and gave a mocking shrug.

    “It seems that even the animals living here see that you have no business on being in a setting like this. Now, go on, get lost. The visiting hours are, and have always been, closed.”

    What Sallalea did not deem to tell the boy was that the “mad army of magpies” outside was actually part of the Bounded Field that surrounded the mansion and the woods around it. Through the magecraft of her friend, they had created a flock of sentries that would assault any unwanted visitor. The only problem with it was that the said sentries also kept snatching anything shiny that was left outside. Sallalea still hadn’t found her other earring. Not only that, but thanks to a certain accident that had happened during their creation, the magpies were currently extremely vicious, and anyone who had met them agreed that rather than crows, these magpies should have been called a “murder” instead of a “flock”.

    “Then why do you have such an ad in the paper? Are you tricking innocent people here, to the middle of nowhere, just to turn them away for fun? What kind of sick people are you?” The young man demanded to know, causing Sallalea’s eyebrow to twitch.

    “Don’t make me sound like some sort of S&M queen! What sort of Stop & Go play do you think I’m into!?” Sallalea asked, her eyes narrowing with severity. “The only reason that ad is there is because my friend is an airhead who doesn’t think things throught!”

    During their argument, the two failed to notice how the massive, dark, wooden door leading to the basement slowly opened, and a lithe figure snuck outside. That was why the third voice joining the conversation gave them both the scare of their life. Despite the dawning sun’s first rays that stealthily entered the lobby, it was still relatively dark outside. Therefore, the slender blonde shadow that crept up upon them was like a hazy image out of a nightmare.

    “—No. The reason is money.”

    While the two stubborn debaters screamed out in surprise, the mistress of the house dusted her white dress and gave them both an indifferent look. With her long, silky flaxen hair and white gown lined with ermine fur, she seemed to give of some sense of reservation. However, Sallalea knew very well that this style of fashion stemmed solely from the girl’s incredibly lazy nature. Her half-closed, ice-blue eyes and sluggish movement were a testimony of this personality. Whenever Sallalea saw her, she was surprised the girl didn’t simply fall over and start snoring. Either she was always suffering from a serious sleep-deprivation, or then it had something to do with the fumes that filled the basement.

    “Money?” Sallalea asked, scratching her head. “Vasilisa, what are you talking about? It’s not as if we need a new tenant just because we’re low on money, right?”

    “Well… there is another way,” Vasilisa admitted, gazing slightly off of Sallalea. The way the girl never wanted to look anyone’s face was just one of the many oddities surrounding the girl known as Vasilisa.

    “See? Let’s just go with that,” Sallalea said before grinning triumphantly at the young man’s direction. “You heard the lady. No need for you here.”

    “In that case… Salla?” Vasilisa suddenly stepped right in front of the other girl, bringing her hand up with the palm open. “Fork it over.”

    “Erm… what?”

    “Fork it over,” Vasilisa repeated. “The rent. You haven’t paid rent for over a year now. Neither has Alyssa.”

    It was at that point that the economic situation of the Lintukoto Mansion came crashing down to the head of Sallalea Edelfelt, along with a startling revelation as to what had transpired. Due to her expensive tastes and poor budget planning, Sallalea had been low on money since the start of the previous year. And since Vasilisa never demanded for the rent, Sallalea had simply assumed that her input in the matter was no longer needed. But that was far from the case.

    The Russian girl had simply bided her time, waiting for their monetary situation to come to the point where she could simply force her will, no matter what Sallalea said.

    “G-gah! Such a demon! A demon!” Sallalea accused Vasilisa and pointed at her. “You planned this all along, didn’t you?”

    “Yes.”

    Vasilisa’s response was so honest that it became a One-Hit KO attack that took any steam off of Sallalea. Defeated, the small girl slumped against the wall, wrapping her arms around her. Her eyes stared into the deep distance, seeing back to the moment when the blonde girl had executed her merciless plan.

    It was during this January, the first January of year 1990, that Sallalea Edelfelt’s rights in the Lintukoto Manor were completely eradicated.

    “Well, there you have it,” Vasilisa said and turned towards the young man, who had been following the exchange with growing concern. “You’re welcome to move in here. First month’s pay, up-front. Here.”

    Vasilisa, in her typical unconcerned manner, presented her open palm at the boy. The pale skin of the girl was nearly matching when compared to the white walls of the lobby, creating a surreal image of the girl being just another part of the mansion. Perhaps a furniture, or perhaps a piece of decoration somewhere high up on the wall. And even Sallalea had to admit that sometimes it felt like this mansion had been just another limb of the girl.

    “Really? Well… alright, “the young man said, still seeming rather doubtful. However, he finally took a paper bag from inside his jacket, and handed it over to Vasilisa.

    As the two girls peered inside, they saw what seemed like incredible amount of pocket change and few bills.

    “That’s exactly 2300 markkaa. I counted them for the whole night, so I’m sure,” the boy informed them.

    “—Mm. So it seems. Welcome. To Lintukoto Mansion.”

    As Vasilisa was about to offer her other hand for a handshake, Sallalea quickly cut in, letting out a sound that was somewhere between a roar and a scream. She spread her hands, acting as a defensive barrier between the two who had so quickly come to an agreement.

    “W-wait, don’t you think this is a bit strange, Vasilisa?” Sallalea asked from her friend. “That’s a huge amount of pocket change. Just who pays their rent in pocket change? Where did you even get all these coins!?”

    The last question was asked from the young man, who scratched his unshaven chin while looking a bit awkward. Finally, after clearing his throat couple of times, he answered, looking away from the girls while he did so.

    “… I collected bottles.”

    Those words caused a short silence to fall into the lobby. There, in the middle of the lavishly patterned walls, grand furniture carved from mahogany, standing on a high-class Persian carpet, was a young man who had admitted that he had come up with enough money for month’s rent in the place by going through other peoples trash. The crack that had appeared in the high-class, chateau-like atmosphere was simply too big to be ignored, and for that reason the two girls simply gave their completely emotionless gazes.

    “… Sure. Well. Welcome to Lintukoto Mansion,” Vasilisa finally broke the silence, grabbing the man’s hand and shaking it.

    “Erm, thanks,” the young man answered. “I don’t have any luggage with me or anything, so don’t worry about me asking for a help in the moving. Do you have a smoking room here?”

    Vasilisa tilted her head, her eyes staring off into the distance like a pair of paraffin lamps. Both the young man and Sallalea could nearly see how the clockworks of Vasilisa’s brains kept turning, trying to come up with the requested information. Though she might have been the mistress of the house, even Vasilisa wasn’t the one who had designed it. Therefore, even she had trouble remembering all the rooms.

    “Yes. There is,” Vasilisa finally answered. “Take the east-wing’s corridor here on the first floor. Last door on the left. That parlor was converted into a smoking room. Possibly. At least there are velvet curtains. Probably.”

    “Ah, thanks. Well, I’ll be off, then,” the young man said and took off, lazily waving his hand at the girls. “I’ll be back soon enough, to sign the contract and all that.”

    As the tall boy passed her, Sallalea frowned again and with a swift move of her hand, swatted him on the shoulder. The blonde let out a yelp of pain, before giving the girl a glare full of grudge. Sallalea returned the expression, before opening her mouth.

    “Your name. What is it?” She asked. “You never introduced yourself, you know.”

    For a moment, the young man looked honestly surprised.

    “Oh, me?” he asked, before tapping his chest with his thumb. “I’m Sisu Myrsky. Just call me Sisu, though. I don’t particularly care for my last name.”

    “Sisu, huh?” Sallalea repeated the name, sounding unimpressed. Her eyes continued that fashion, having the same sort of interest in them as what was usually reserved for a roadkill. “My name is Sallalea Edelfelt. As you can understand from my name, I am the heiress of the Edelfelt family. So do watch your manners.”

    “What manners? I haven’t seen you show them at all,” Sisu retorted, causing Sallalea’s eyebrow to twitch.

    “And this is Vasilisa,” she continued, trying to restrain from bickering with the boy again. “She’s the current mistress of this house. So stay on her good side.”

    For a moment it seemed that Sallalea was about to end it there, but then, like an after-thought, she added:

    “There’s also one other tenant, but she keeps to herself. I doubt you’ll be seeing her much. Just remember that, though, if you run into her.”

    “… I’ll keep that in mind.” With doubtful eyes

    The heavy footfalls of Sisu retreated towards the corridor, and soon his large figure disappeared from sight as he turned around the corner. That left both Sallalea and Vasilisa alone in the lobby. The former turned towards her friend, folding her arms and straightening her back. These mannerisms were not unlike those of small birds, who, when threatened, tried to make themselves look bigger. Thus, the orange, angry eyes met the blue, lazy ones, as Sallalea confronted Vasilisa.

    “What are you thinking!?” Sallalea demanded to know. “You know that we can’t have a normal person running around here! Just yesterday your experiment filled backyard with crystallized critters. What if something like that happens again, and he notices! A fine mess that’ll be.”

    “Don’t worry.” Vasilisa gave her friends an indifferent thumbs up. “I’ll be discreet.”

    Unfortunately, this did anything but reassure her friend. It was merely the dawn of the day, and already to Sallalea’s ears the rhythmic ticking of the clock sounded like bells of doom announcing the moment when her family would disown her. What had been a wonderful Saturday with nothing to do but to laze around had quickly become a spiraling head-spin into a catastrophe waiting to happen.

    “I’m not turning your head around on this one, am I…?” Sallalea finally asked, sighing a heavy, defeated sigh. Vasilisa nodded, wrapping her ermine muff so that her hands were now completely hidden.

    “No. You aren’t.” That was her short and to-the-point answer. Sallalea had long since learned that there was no arguing with this girl.

    The two of them could not have been more different, standing there in the lobby. One dressed in white, cold and pure as the snow. Inhuman aura of gloom hung around her, and her half-closed eyes never met the face of anyone she saw. And the other one was in clothes as blue as the skies, her spirit flying fast and free, refusing to stop for a single moment.

    Perhaps it was for this reason that these two got along so well. Polar opposites who supported each other. Just like in the flag of the country they lived in. As long as they were in for a penny when it came to their odd relationship, they had decided they might as well be in for a pound.

    “You don’t trust him.” That was not a question. Vasilisa rarely asked questions.

    “Of course not, that hobo is a normal human. He has no business in this house. Who knows what’ll happen if he stumbles onto some of experiment of ours, or worse yet, into the coffin of that freeloader?” Sallalea grumbled. “Speaking of which, whatever happened to that thing you were building in the backyard? I didn’t see it anymore when I came back from school yesterday.”

    For a moment, a cloud travelled across Vasilisa’s eyes. As much as the girl avoided asking questions, there was only one thing that she avoided more: admitting her own mistakes. Therefore, the moment Sallalea saw her silent fidgeting, she could pretty much guess what had transpired.

    “Wait, wait. Let me guess: you increased the intake of mana by lengthening the artificial circuits? And that made the whole thing blow up like a New Year’s fireworks, though thankfully towards the forest, and without a chance of fire. Is that about right?”

    Vasilisa’s deepening silence was enough to tell Sallalea that she had hit the jackpot. The more the blonde girl looked like the discussion was about someone else’s problem, the more it usually had to do with her. Such as the case just now. Sallalea heaved a sigh, and tapped Vasilisa’s shoulder.

    “Well, that much is understandable. The core was too weak, so any tampering with the insides would make it explode,” Sallalea said. “I sometimes wonder just how you Russians have gotten so far with your magecraft. It’s almost as if you don’t pay attention to details, you just make the overall schemes smaller and call them details.”

    “Matryoshka Principle,” Vasilisa answered quietly. “That’s what it is. Smaller world inside smaller, generation after generation. It is to take the source and hide it. You should do that, Salla. With your anger.”

    Sallalea grunted in her mind, annoyed by the sharp insight of her friend. The verbal riposte had been unsuspected and had thus scored a critical hit. It was clear that Vasilisa knew that she had yet to accept the new tenant in the slightest.

    “Ugh, like I could. That guy is definitely trouble. Just from the way he speaks I can tell he’s from Lapland. You could say that by merely existing in the same building as us, he will bring up our chances of failure,” Sallalea complained, glaring at the direction where Sisu had previously disappeared off to. “Not to mention his whole appearance is suspicious. Just where do you find people like that anymore, nowadays?”

    “But isn’t that alright?” Vasilisa inquired. “Normal. That’s what we lack.”

    Sallalea flinched, understanding what her friend meant with those completely ordinary words. Currently their mansion was nothing but a home to all the unnatural things in the municipality they lived in, gathering unwanted attention by merely being hidden. To have someone normal in a place like that would surely even the aura of the land, but still… the mere thought of living in the same place as Sisu Myrsky caused her to feel a tinge of unpleasant taste on her tongue.

    “As long as he behaves like it is to be expected. This is a mansion after all. If he starts exhibiting manners akin to what I see my classmates having, I’ll be first in the line of booting him out of this place,” Sallalea concluded and turned her head away in a huff.

    Vasilisa, understanding that her friend had said all she wanted about the subject, gazed at the snow outside, and how the perfect whiteness seemed to spread all across the land. From there, her thoughts moved on to how cold it must have been out there, and thus arrived to the logical question that had been knocking at the back of her head for a while now.

    “Well, alright. But…” Vasilisa gave a sideways glance at Sallalea. “Those pajamas. How long will you wear them?”

    With a great blush on her face, Sallalea quickly retread back to the second floor, in order to find more acceptable clothing.


    ΩΩ


    Meanwhile, at the smoking room in the far end of the east-wing, Sisu Myrsky pressed himself deeply into one of the lavish sofas that acted like vanguard of those who stepped into the parlor. Just like Vasilisa had said, the place had been fitted with velvet curtains which would absorb most of the smoke, though judging by the large window fitting for a parlor, at summers it would be a whole other deal.

    The smoke of a cigarette quietly floated into the air as Sisu took a drag and let the ephemeral wisps seep into the air through his lips. A quiet smile spread on this face, as he was finally able to relax. While there was no electrical light in the parlor, the fireplace gave enough light so that he could see even in the dim dawn of a winter day. Not only that, but the warmth of the parlor was far better than the unfriendly coldness, not enough to actually feel freezing, of the lobby.

    Having spent most of the last few days travelling, Sisu felt relieved that he could finally sit down, relax, and smoke in peace. His last attempt had been thwarted by the ridiculously big German Shepherd outside. While the dog must have been calm on normal days, merely seeing his form had sent it to a quite the fit.

    Luckily for Sisu, he knew how to handle dogs. Unfortunately, his cigarette had been destroyed in the small scuffle that had ensued.

    “But I really got lucky, didn’t I?” Sisu muttered to himself. “To find a place like this with low rent and good living conditions… I really hit the jackpot.”

    The only problem Sisu had at the moment was the girl called Sallalea Edelfelt. While he had felt that the girl named Vasilisa would not mind a casual approach, the short firecracker with sky-blue hair was a whole other deal. He still had no idea how to speak to him, as anything he did seemed to simply set off another argument. Now that he thought about it, it had been a long time since he had argued with someone like that.

    After all, usually Sisu preferred to be left alone.

    That was why he had chosen this mansion. Far away from the city without it being an inconvenience, with big enough place so that he would not have to talk to the other tenants if it was not the absolute necessity, he could be as much of a hermit here as he wanted to. Nobody would bother him needlessly.

    That only left the problem of a school. While Sisu had applied to the only gymnasium of Tapiola, he was somewhat worried about the people in there. While his appearance and mannerisms were usually enough to drive away all the curious people, here, far in the south from where he came, people behaved differently. Living through the days in his own peace and quiet seemed like a monumental task.

    “… Maybe I’m worrying over nothing,” Sisu muttered, taking another drag off his cigarette.

    Sisu sighed and leaned further back, staring at the wooden ceiling adorned with a pattern depicting numerous trees and other local flora. While he knew he could cope with the style of life here, seeing all these lavish decorations still made him feel alienated. He himself would have preferred a more simplistic approach in interior design, but since he had gotten a room here for cheap, he decided to keep that bit of selfishness to himself.

    He simply hoped that his own room would not be some sort of frill-filled hell of fluffiness and bright colors. Judging from the pajamas Sallalea had worn, that seemed to be the norm in this house. Maybe he could request one of the rooms that the servants had used. A house like this must have had servants at some point, right…?

    “But that makes me think…” Sisu scratched his chin, while bringing his cigarette back to his lips. “Just how come there are only three people living in a mansion as big as this?”

    Feeling like he was about to intrude into topics that had nothing to do with him, Sisu quickly abandoned that train of thought. Instead, he allowed himself to enjoy the taste of the cigarette and the soft fall of the snow outside.

    After all, during this time of the year, there was nothing but snow.




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    For some odd, inexplicable reason, my mind went "I really want to see some good Shirou/Luvia" while reading this.

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    I like this. Having read your blog post a while back I can definitely see the parallels with Mahoyo, with the lone ordinary man in a manor full of extraordinary women. I also got a strange vibe that I usually get from novels that explore their cultural setting; adding touches of Finnish life would be a very complementary addition to the whole. I'll be watching this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Revenant View Post
    I like this. Having read your blog post a while back I can definitely see the parallels with Mahoyo, with the lone ordinary man in a manor full of extraordinary women. I also got a strange vibe that I usually get from novels that explore their cultural setting; adding touches of Finnish life would be a very complementary addition to the whole. I'll be watching this.
    Well, the original idea was, of course, inspired by Tsukihime, since I didn't even know about Mahoyo back when I first wrote this in Finnish. But the whole "One man, mansion, girls" aspect is in both, to be fair.

    In any event, yeah, this will be seeped in culture of Finland in the 90's. There were few hints here and there in this first chapter, but since it was mainly introducing part of the main cast, it wasn't that clear. It'll show up later on, though.

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    Please do include notes on the culture at the end, I love learning more about different cultures.

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    Nice chapter Verg.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KooriRenchuu View Post
    Please do include notes on the culture at the end, I love learning more about different cultures.
    Yes, This, learning about cultures around the world is always interesting.

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    Very interesting. I'm getting a Mahoyo vibe from it, what with the normal man tenanting with several supernatural women. Is Sallalea an older sister of Luvia's, and who is Alyssa since we've seen both Sallalea and Vasilisa?

    Sallalea mentions "Lapland", what place is this and why does it have such a negative connotation?
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    Quote Originally Posted by KooriRenchuu View Post
    Please do include notes on the culture at the end, I love learning more about different cultures.
    Sure, I'll keep this in mind when writing the following chapters.

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    Is Sallalea an older sister of Luvia's
    Well, she's at least of some relation to Luvia, that's for sure... - 3-

    and who is Alyssa since we've seen both Sallalea and Vasilisa?
    Alyssa is the free-loader of the mansion. You might see few hints about her through the first chapter...

    Sallalea mentions "Lapland", what place is this and why does it have such a negative connotation?
    Lapland is the very northern Finland, which has always been associated with evil powers and dark magic in Finnish folklore. Basically what Sallalea is saying is that "As long as someone who carries the winds of Lapland is here with us, we're going to suffer from it". A bit racist, but when it comes to the magi, understandable.

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    Well this looks entirely intriguing and full of possibilities. Nice work so far, Verg; looking forward to more.

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    This is one of my Fav chapters

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    Even if it technically predates it, I do have to echo a bit of (unintentional) Mahoyo here. But that just means you anticipated Nasu by a few years from the sound of it, considering this is a rewrite of something you already did. ^^; And there are much worse things to be than similar to Mahoyo in spirit. It's an interesting beginning and the characters are likeable, though we only really got a strong hint of Sallalea and Vasilisa this chapter.

    It feels like the writing style is a bit different from what I've seen you post in previous fanfic posts, but I can't quite put my finger on why. The structure just comes off differently, I think, mostly because it is probably translated across languages. Great start though. ^^

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    Hey Verg is there a snappy summary that can sum up the fic?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cyber Angel View Post
    It feels like the writing style is a bit different from what I've seen you post in previous fanfic posts, but I can't quite put my finger on why. The structure just comes off differently, I think, mostly because it is probably translated across languages. Great start though. ^^
    It might also be because this story was written much more like how I write usually in Finnish, less like a Type-Moon story and more like a proper story.

    Hey Verg is there a snappy summary that can sum up the fic?
    Summary? Erm.... there is now!

    "At the beginning of the 90's, a spree of mysterious, gruesome murders plagues the city of Tapiola, Finland. While the unforgiving winter of the north pushes on and the days grow shorter, is it up to Sisu Myrsky and the enigmatic tenants of Lintukoto Mansion to solve just who or what is killing innocent people at night. Magic, mysteries, murders and maidens: Such is the tale of Everwinter."

    Something like that?

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    “… I’ll keep that in mind.” With doubtful eyes
    Kinda wondering about his Sisu's actions here even though I can get the full picture using some imagination.

    He still had no idea how to speak to him, as anything he did seemed to simply set off another argument
    Yeah. A little mistake, and my imagination goes wild.

    With these mistakes out of the way, I can safely say that I enjoyed the first chapter from the beginning to the end. I will look forward to new chapters.
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    Chapter 2
    Settling in

    After finishing his cigarette, Sisu exited the smoking room into the dimly lit corridor of the eastern wing. The sun outside was slowly climbing up to the off-white sky, but because the corridor itself was well-hidden from the outside world, discounting the two windows at the very end of it, the only light there were the few electrical lamps. They had been situated sparingly, with the arcs of light barely touching each other on the deep red carpet.

    To his surprise, Sisu found Vasilisa waiting for him in the lobby. The blonde girl was leaning to the wall, her eyes staring off into the distance. As much as he tried, Sisu couldn’t really grasp the girl’s character at all. She seemed to be nothing more than a good-for-nothing who lazed around all day, yet there was an unmistakable commandeering aura around her. Not to mention that when she turned her head towards Sisu, her eyes were focused somewhere around his left shoulder, instead of his face.

    “Your room. Come. I’ll show it,” Vasilisa immediately said, without letting Sisu get a word in edgewise. “It’s in the second floor, western wing.”

    “Mm. Sure,” Sisu answered, tilting his head at the strange, almost telegram-like way of talking.

    Together, they began climbing the sturdy, wooden stairs that continued all the way to the third floor. As they ascended the stairs, Sisu finally raised his eyes to look at the grand form of the lobby, which was like a tower inside the mansion. It rose high up, higher than the third floor. High up at the ceiling, there was a beautiful looking rose window, spreading a full spectrum of colors into the heights of the lobby. Below it, at the height of the second floor, was something else, however, that fully caught Sisu’s attention.

    “Who’s portrait is that?” He asked, nodding towards the large portrait that hung on the wall, the large golden frames reflecting the multicolored light that shone from up above.

    “—Albert Edelfelt. The man who built this mansion.”

    “Eh?” Sisu frowned in confusion. “Doesn’t that make him the ancestor of that Sallalea girl? Then why did she imply that you were the mistress of this house?”

    “I’m just watching it for their family,” Vasilisa informed him. “Until Salla is ready.”

    Understanding that this was the sort of topic that most likely did not need prying, Sisu left it alone. Instead, he took one more glance at the dark-haired man with a severe glare in the portrait, before picking up his pace, hurrying after Vasilisa. The girl had already made it to the second floor, and was now gazing at him, waiting for the boy.

    The western wing of the second floor was much like the lobby in atmosphere. The dominant color was still white, with the occasional doorframe of deep, dark brown to break it. The red carpet completely covered the floor, but it was far from enough to keep the chillingly cold outside air from creeping in. With all of the fireplaces situated inside the rooms, and none of the piping going above or under the corridor, the heat was definitely a problem. With the added fact of the lack of electrical lighting in the corridor, Sisu could only imagine how gloomy it could get during nights.

    He would simply have to learn how to operate oil lamps.

    “Here,” Vasilisa finally said, stopping in front of one of the doors. “This is your room.”

    As the heavy wooden door opened with a creaking sound, the room was revealed to Sisu in all its glory. The second empire style of the mansion could be heavily felt in the room, too, as the flowing design of Neo-Renaissance were integrated perfectly into the domineering, almost bombastic style of Neo-Baroque. White walls, detailed tapestry, grand furniture and the tower-like fireplace all gave a sense of grand importance, one that Sisu did not share in the slightest. He was glad, however, of the large four-posted bed that sat in the corner, near the aforementioned fireplace. It was large enough to support his tall frame without his feet slipping over the edge.

    “It’s… grand, I give you that,” Sisu said as he walked around the room, examining the place. He stopped momentarily next to the window to gaze into the courtyard. He saw a beautiful garden below, one completely covered by the snow. “Not exactly something I’m familiar with, but I can’t complain. Thanks.”

    Vasilisa nodded awkwardly, tilting her head downwards like she did not exactly know how to. Then, using her muff in a rather silly-looking way, the girl gestured towards the beautiful pier glass that was completely covered by a black sheet. It was such an absurd thing, standing alone between the two windows, that even Sisu realized something was wrong with it.

    “You may remove that. If you wish, that is. We have not used this quest room in a while, thus, the mirror was covered to avoid… dust,” she explained. “However, if you require it, feel free to make use of it.”

    Nodding to the words of the girl, Sisu walked over to the pier glass, and with a single, dedicated move, he removed the heavy cloth covering the glass. The pier glass that was revealed was not what he had expected. Unlike the rest of the furniture in the room, this was a rather plain, yet large, giltwood pier glass without any fancy cresting. It hung on the wall in an absent-minded manner, like a man who did not fit in with his present company - much like Sisu himself.

    The mirror was without any dust to cover it, and thus, Sisu put it to use immediately. He threw off his large coat and quickly removed the hoodie under it. While it had been chilling in the lobby, the room was rather warm, thanks to the central heating and the ducts that squirmed inside the walls. He breathed a sigh of relief as he felt the slightly suffocating heat disappear, now that he was wearing only his T-shirt.

    “—Oh, my.” Vasilisa seemed somewhat troubled by the sight, however.

    Sisu could hardly blame him. He knew that his arms were not exactly pretty to look at. Now that their muscular form was revealed to the air, the scars that ran all across his arms were plain to see. Long, old-looking wounds that were almost like made by a beast. Sisu sighed, cursing internally that he had forgotten such a basic thing. After all, he was so accustomed to being alone that he had not realized how others would react to the scars.

    “Sorry,” Sisu mumbled, scratching his head awkwardly. “I know they’re not a pretty sight. I’ll try to keep something with long sleeves on while here.”

    “No, that’s alright,” Vasilisa answered, tilting her head so that she could see the scars better in the sunlight. “They are not gruesome. However, I was wondering if they needed to be tended. But, it seems they are old. So perhaps that was rude of me.”

    “Nah, it’s alright,” Sisu said. “They’ve healed as much as they can. No use in crying over spilt milk.”

    A rather awkward silence fell into the room like a heavy drape. Well, it was awkward for Sisu, at least. Vasilisa seemed rather content in simply standing there, near the door, like a statue made out of ice. Her eyes stared once more slightly off of Sisu, and yet Sisu knew her attention was wholly on him. It was like being stared by an animal, who looks at what you are instead of who you are.

    “Well—“

    They both started to speak at the exact same time, and thus, fell silent at the exact same time. Vasilisa recovered from this faux pas first and invited Sisu to speak his mind by a gesture of her muff-covered hands. Sisu cleared his throat, scratched his cheek and began talking.

    “So, you said that there are two other tenants in this house beside you? I already met Sallalea, and know that I should steer clear off her as much as I can, but what about this other tenant?” he asked. “And, if you don’t mind me asking… why aren’t there any servants in a mansion this big? It feels a bit wasteful to have it run by three people… well, I guess it’s four now, huh?”

    Vasilisa seemed to take in the words rather slowly, carefully listening to them and thinking afterwards. Before long, she finally produced an answer, saving Sisu from another awkward silence that he had anticipated.

    “I should probably tell you that it is none of your business… but I’d like to avoid being rude,” Vasilisa answered, and Sisu could not tell if she had actually just cracked a joke. Her face certainly did not reflect that. “We did have other tenants a year ago, but during the time Alyssa, the third tenant you mentioned, arrived, they all left. It was deemed that we did not require other members of the Edelfelt-family here, and thus, they left the mansion in my care. As such, we have not sought out to find new tenants… not until now, at least.”

    Vasilisa took a deep breath, one that sounded almost like the flutter of the wings of a swan. It was such a beautiful, small sound that Sisu found himself momentarily dazed, surprised that the marble-like girl was capable of such signs of life.

    “As for Alyssa… she only comes out during nights. “ A shadow passing over Vasilisa’s face told that she was not happy about this girl’s way of behaving. “While she seems to be what most people would call… beautiful, she seems to be also a source of much trouble. If you ever encounter her during the night, do not associate with her too much. Ignoring her works simply fine.”

    Sisu wanted to mention how cruel that sounded, but if this Alyssa was as great trouble-maker as the stone-faced girl described, he was not sure how unwarranted such warnings were. He would simply have to form his own opinion after he would meet this mysterious third tenant. After all, Sisu had no doubt that he would eventually run into her. He was, after all, rather adept in attracting troublesome things.

    After finishing her explanation, Vasilisa once again fell silent. Sisu sighed and let his eyes once again roam in the room, trying to keep himself occupied with the décor of the house. Things such as the finely detailed carvings of hawthorn and wild roses in the linings were curious enough, but soon enough he realized that it was not just some single detail that made him feel so strange in this mansion.

    No, the mansion itself seemed to have been built in a way that never welcomed its occupants. It simply was there, dutifully ignoring the people living in it, like a giant from ancient folklore with an old mystic inside its stomach.

    “In any event…” the words of Vasilisa dragged Sisu back from his thoughts and into reality. “We will begin lunch in about two hours. You are free to join us if you do not have any other plans.”

    “Y-yeah, sure. I’ll be there,” Sisu said. “To be honest, I don’t have any food with me, so I’ll be forced to rely on your kindness until I get myself a part-time job in the city. A certain record store was already interested in hiring me, so it shouldn’t be a problem for long.”

    Sisu dreaded to think what the pint-sized ball of anger known as Sallalea would think about the fact that he had no money to even buy his own food for the time being. Perhaps he could pretend he was simply accepting their courtesy, instead of relying on them.

    As Sisu raised his head, he saw something strange. Vasilisa was now looking straight at him, and though she seemed as frigid as ever, there was a slight change. The corner of her lip had turned ever-so-slightly upwards, and there seemed to be a bit more life in her ice-blue eyes.

    “If you are worried about Salla, don’t be. She shall complain and gnash her teeth, but in the end, I am the mistress of the house,” Vasilisa said with a peculiar tone. “Until she herself has money, she is unable to take offense in others’ similar situations.”

    Sisu was slightly taken aback by this miniscule change in Vasilisa’s demeanor, but managed to crack a half-smile. The thought of the annoyed incapability to do anything in Sallalea’s eyes was something he’d like to see.

    “Thanks. I’m glad to hear that.”

    A third and a final silence fell between the two, but this time, there was no awkwardness in it. It was the type of silence that announced the conversation over, as both participants were content. Vasilisa turned around to leave the room, her white clothes shifting silently like milky-white mist. However, the girl turned her head one final time, looking once again slightly off of Sisu.

    “Would you like to accompany me? In preparing the lunch, that is,” Vasilisa asked. “Usually Salla is with me, but I am afraid she shall be… stubborn today.”

    “Of course. It’s the least I can do,” Sisu answered.

    Together, the two left the room behind them, and entered back into the corridor of the western wing. They retraced their steps back into the staircase and down into the lobby, from which they moved into the eastern wing of the first floor. This was where both the dining hall and the kitchen were, along the same corridor that had previously taken Sisu to the smoking room.

    During their walk, Vasilisa opened her mouth, posing a surprising question.

    “Though you may have a part-time job, have you enrolled into any school here?” she asked.

    Sisu grimaced as he opened the heavy wooden door that led to the kitchen. He had not expected that question at all, and though he hated to admit it, he did need to continue his education. Even though he was a drifter, it did not mean that he could simply abandon the prospect of school, especially now that he had a place to stay.

    But he had certainly hoped that nobody would remind him of it, so he could simply “forget” that he had ever applied to a certain gymnasium.

    “Well, I was accepted into the gymnasium here in Tapiola. Well, the only gymnasium here,” Sisu said reluctantly as they stepped from the chilly corridor into the well-warmed kitchen. “Vipunen Gymnasium, to clarify. It seemed like a decent-enough place, and I figured I’d—“

    A sudden, loud bang and a following crashing sound completely cut off the rest of Sisu’s words. Both him and Vasilisa turned their eyes towards the source of the sound, which came from the other end of the kitchen. There, standing next to the gigantic refrigerator was none other than Sallalea. She had switched her pajamas to denim shorts, black thigh high socks and a black turtle-neck sweater, but she still retained her leather jacket. A pair of clunky-looking headphones rested on her neck, and their cord was connected to an old-looking Walkman in Sallalea’s left hand.

    She must have been listening to the music like that, as the volume was so loud that even Sisu could hear the lyrics. It was a familiar song, one where a male singer howled: “Tie auki taivasta myöten, me tukka pystyssä laulettiin. Minä ja mun frendit, rokkibändi Wounded Knee!”

    However, that music was very unfitting for the situation. After all, Sallalea’s other hand must have been holding the metal bowl that now laid on the floor, it’s meaty contents spread all over the floor. Sisu ventured a guess that it had been some sort of pasta-salad, but further than that, he could not tell.

    There was also one other thing worth of a mention, and that was the expression of Sallalea’s face. At the moment, it was something between disbelief and panic, covered in a hefty dose of horror. Her eyes were aimed straight at Vasilisa and Sisu, and rest of her body seemed completely frozen.

    “Oh. Salla,” Vasilisa greeted her friend as if nothing strange was going on. “Did you hear? It seems that Sisu will be attending the Vipunen Gymnasium…”

    Vasilisa put her finger on her chin, adopting a thoughtful expression.

    “I wonder if he will be put in the same class with us?”

    The negative yell of Sallalea Edelfelt echoed throughout the Lintukoto Mansion, as if it was trying to denounce the truth that the girl did not want to accept. However, it was too late, and the only thing that this yell achieved was waking up a certain trouble-maker sleeping deep in the second floor of the eastern wing.
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    Let's learn about Finnish society of the 90's with Chibilisa!

    Let's learn about Finnish society of the 90's with Chibilisa!

    Chibilisa: Well! Learning time. Due to the demand, we shall look at some strange aspects of Finland mentioned in each chapter.

    Chibilisa: Without further ado, let's tackle Chapter 2!

    Albert Edelfelt

    Chibilisa: "Somewhat famous Finnish painter, depicted in a commemorative coin once upon a time! Could be said to be the forefather of Finnish art... if such thing existed! Has groovy moustache. Apparently magi according to Nasu, and maybe he was! Mysterious man, at least. Perhaps his origin was "moustache."

    Finnish Lunch

    Chibilisa:
    "Finnish lunch is not a big event. Usually it's simply eating something, anything, that can be found from the house. However, since the tenants of Lintukoto Mansion are bourgeoisie, for them it's an actual gathering! What a load of snobs!"

    Mistress of the House

    Chibilisa: "In Finland, the Mistress of the House, or Talon Emäntä, is a very important person! For some reason, the tall, angry, muscular Finnish women of the past established in the culture that the house is their kingdom. They decide how money is spent, who does what chores, and if the spouse is able to get a pint of beer that day. Thus, even today, whoever holds the title of "Emäntä," usually rules like a true monarch in the house! Hint: this person is not Sallalea."

    Gymnasium

    Chibilisa:
    "Gymnasium is called 'Lukio' in Finland! It's a strange word that basically means 'Where you read.' Strange, since no one ever reads there. They just skip classes and laze around until the end of each semester, when they are woken up by the approaching exams. What a strange place! By the way, there are no school uniforms or any dress-code... in fact, there are barely any rules! Pretty rowdy place!"

    Finnish rock of the 90's

    Chibilisa:
    "A shameful music genre that still exists! It was very popular in the 90's, producing many horrible bands. The band that Sallalea is listening in the story is one of the bigger ones of the past, and the first band in the world to play underwater! (Why they did it, no one knows...) The song she listens to is an adaptation of Tom Wait's song. If you want to, listen to it here!"
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    invited Sisu to speak his mind by a gesture of his muff-covered hands.
    “I should probably tell you that it is none of your business… but I’d like to avoid being rude,” Alyssa answered
    Alyssa took a deep breath
    Sisu wanted to mentioned how cruel that sounded
    You are free to join us if you did not have any other plans.
    Strange, since no one ever readers there
    Some slip-ups in bold.

    Anyway, Vasilisa flag get! And the notorious troublemaker is awakened-?!

    Also, Chibilisa-sensei's corner is win.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Leftovers View Post
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    Thanks! God knows I need an editor if I'd ever write something serious. Or, perhaps I should cut down on the coffee. One or the other...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Verg Avesta View Post
    Thanks! God knows I need an editor if I'd ever write something serious. Or, perhaps I should cut down on the coffee. One or the other...
    Editor, cutting down on the coffee is NEVER an option.

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