*Bryn falls to her knees and worships whoever wrote Rust*
*Bryn falls to her knees and worships whoever wrote Rust*
Rust was.....good.
I liked all the fight scenes except for the final battle. I completely called the reveal halfway through the fic and was utterly unfazed when my guess was confirmed. While the previous fights flowed nice and smooth, for the most part, the last battle made less sense. I followed with it well enough, but while reading I kept have to suspend disbelief.
Spoilers for Rust
Make no mistake, I like Rust. It's a good story. It got me sucked in quickly, kept me to the end, and had good fight scenes. Especially the first fight scenes. It just requires some work on my part to really immerse myself. Compare that to Lunatique, where my reaction was mostly as follows:
Yes...
YES.....
YES! YES! YES!
GO GO GOGOGOGOGOGO!
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME!
*ahem*
Yeah, Lunatique is still winning. It's not perfect, I can find a few things to nitpick, but for the most part I let them slide because Zelretch and Brunestad are so outrageously powerful and skilled. Might have been a spelling mistake too, can't remember.
Originally Posted by Hymn of RagnarokOriginally Posted by RadiantBeamThat's all, folks!
Oh my God...three days to finish Action (two spent on Bare Knuckle Brawler!)
Review - Sensitive Writers Beware (I do sincerely apologise for striking any nerves though)
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That all said - Lunatique is my favourite with Rust in second (simply for the strong, emotive opening) and Nadir a close third.
I did find that there were the usual grammar/spelling errors and wrong words used. Perhaps I should have answered the pleas for beta readers...I just hesitate because I know my comments will grate on people.
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