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    Names, you are cool.
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    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
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    I dunno, I quite like Aiden's mind.
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    NO. NO I WILL NOT SAY IT.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Larekko12 View Post
    What about, 'THE TRUTH, THE TRUTH OF YOU DEMISE!'?
    Sounds great, but it wouldn't be Hazama-like.

    He says its likes he means its.

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    Root of all Trolling snippet
    Zelretch: *steeples fingers in a Gendo Ikari pose* "I knew I would get some milage out of that Grail System someday."

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    Names, you are cool.
    You are too kind, my good sir.

    But you are still cooler than me. Because drabble, drabble everywhere.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NamesAreHardToComeUpWith View Post
    your

    [in beta mode]
    I hate my lazy fingers, and heavy hands. Want to trade? They good fuhr wrasslin' and fightan'.*affecting southern accent*
    Then let it break, if it shatters to pieces then forge an even better blade to take in hand. Should that blade crack then forge once again, untill the battlefield is a graveyard of blades that have fallen and but a single sword claims the field that embodies the world. Let that sword bear the world untill its time comes and time blows its dust to the winds. Then forge again.---Eric Dagger



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    Quote Originally Posted by Imaginary View Post
    Zelretch: *steeples fingers in a Gendo Ikari pose* "I knew I would get some milage out of that Grail System someday."
    Your comments amuse me.

    Proceed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Larekko12 View Post
    I hate my lazy fingers, and heavy hands. Want to trade? They good fuhr wrasslin' and fightan'.*affecting southern accent*
    *ACTIVATE FRENCH CANADIAN ACCENT* note: I have no accent

    My hands are perfectly capable wrasslin, thank you sir. I can cut slabs of solid steel with my hands.

    I'll keep the offer in mind, though.

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    Would you guys like to see another BlazBlue idea I had such a long time ago?

    It was bad.

    I'll be posting it up here and in my Drabble thread.

    EDIT: Here ya go.

    Fate/Stay Continuum Shift


    "Well... This seems to be quite a annoying predicament I've fallen into."

    I looked around to see nothing. In every direction all I saw was eternal nothingness. It seemed to go on endlessly.

    A void with me in it.

    It seemed rather fitting to be trapped here. Trapped in a place where no one can observe me.

    A place where as time goes by, I'll probably cease to exist.

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    "Ehehehehe... AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! It seems the jokes on ME now! But my, my, my... How ever will I entertain myself till I am observed no more?! Oooo. Maybe I should reminisce about how I chopped off ol' Rags' arm off and killed of that Nine bitch's sister... My was that SO satisfying..."

    Heh. Nothing to do, but think and remember to the good times I had. Ahh...

    This is getting BORING...

    "Ohhhhh... How I wish I wasn't trapped in this insufferable void! Damn that cat! I know I should have killed her off early on when I had the chance! Then my genius plan would have gone off without a hitch!"

    But sadly, they succeeded differently than I had calculated. That Kokonoe...! To think she was capable of doing this.

    Tch!

    "Bah! No use crying over spilled milk. Its not like me to whine about past things. Whatever is happening to that world now is none of my business anymore. The only place I have now is here... Doomed to fade away from existence. Slowly, but surely. And I REALLY don't want that to happen now, so let's see if I can try to bust from this joint."

    I float around to look and see if there was something in this void of white that has trapped me.

    A backdoor so to speak. If I could use it, I could finally leave this god forsaken place.

    I wouldn't be able to return to my world, but I could care less about it anymore anyways.

    "Hmm? Well, well. What's that over there? That wasn't there before." I see before me a black entrance of sorts.

    It looks just like a black hole really.

    "Since this seems to be the only thing around here, might as well investigate inside. Besides, I need entertainment."

    I slowly approached the black hole of darkness that seemed to be the only thing in this sea of white. And before I knew it, I blacked out.

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    "Ugh... Why do I feel like I was just mobbed by a bunch of cats." I said as I slowly came to.

    I looked around to see where I was. I seem to have been transported to a hospital of some sort. I could tell by the bland wall, smell of blood, and nurses walking around.

    "HELLLOOOOO NURSE! Oh man! I escaped! I'm FREEEEEEEEE! I can do whatever the hell I want AGAIN! YAHOO! Take THAT you fucking cat bitch! Now, firsts things first. Since my body is gone I'm going to have to shape myself a new one. Though, it's gonna be hard without Relius. I'm just going to have to find a child's body which I can probably still change."
    Emphasis on the PROBABLY part...

    I wandered throughout the halls of the hospital and heard the talks and whispers. It seems there have been multiple gas leaks and fires around this 'Fuyuki City' as they called it. The latest of these attacks have hit a orphanage this time.
    Perfect.

    "Now to find... Ahh! Found one! That was quick!"

    I looked over what was to be my new body in this new world.

    A kid with red hair.

    It seems he had just died from the over-exhaustion of his body.

    The Doctors haven't noticed it yet, or have yet to check up on him.

    "Well, too bad for him!" I floated over and slowly encroached myself into the child's body. It seems he was the last one to conscious to see the fires burn around him and the other children.

    Meh. Sounds like a personal problem.

    His soul has left already anyways.

    "Now... to shape the body in my image."

    A little bit of this and a little bit of that and-

    "Done! My, you look like your going to be a handsome devil when you grow up a bit! Aren't you?! AAAAHAHAHA! Now let's see how my new meat-suit works out."

    I bound myself to the body finally.

    I opened the eyes to get a feel for the body.

    A bit weak, but I can fix that. I move around the fingers, arms, and fingers to stretch.

    "Ahhhnnn. Man, this feels good." Ugh, my voice is squeakier. How amusingly annoying.

    "Oh, what's this? Why does there seem to be a sword's sheath inside this body?" That's strange.

    Then again I've seen weirder things throughout my awesome lifetime as a ghost. It's also strange that I still exist.

    Maybe, this world has something observing me...

    Then, before I knew it a man in a black coat came inside the room. My, what unruly hair. Though, the coat is a nice touch.

    "Hello there. You said your name was Shirou, right?" He then smiled. I proceeded to correct him.

    "Actually, your wrong sir. That's not my name..." He looked at me with a confused look.

    "Well, then let me introduce myself first. I'm Emiya Kiritsugu. What is your name kid?" He said while looking at me with his disgusting smile again.

    "My name...is Yuuki Terumi."

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    BAD END
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
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    Oh, crap! Very BAD END!!! 10 years later Kotomine happily welcomes his true successor into the fold as they usher in the apocalypse!

    ALso, looking forward to Terumi trolling Old Man Acht some more before the real fun starts!

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    Quote Originally Posted by G-Man View Post
    Oh, crap! Very BAD END!!! 10 years later Kotomine happily welcomes his true successor into the fold as they usher in the apocalypse!

    ALso, looking forward to Terumi trolling Old Man Acht some more before the real fun starts!
    Yes, sending bills involving property destruction will be sent to the Einzberns from the Association.

    You mad Wizzy?

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    ...okay what just happened? Hazama got mixed up in some sort of 2nd magic thing and replaced Shirou, or what?
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    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    ...okay what just happened? Hazama got mixed up in some sort of 2nd magic thing and replaced Shirou, or what?
    It was Bad writing.

    Hazama was trapped in The Boundary due to the Machinations of Kokonoe and Ragna.

    Hazama's true form is that of a ghost. There, he is ultimately doomed to fade away as people forgot about him.

    Then, Shit Happened.

    Shirou's soul didn't heal from Grail Mud Taint and died. So his body was all that was left, including Avalon that was put inside of him a little too late.

    So, without a body, Hazama had to find a new body.

    Guess who's body he found?

    Bad writing is bad.

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    But I thought the point of this was Illya summoning Hazama? ^^;;;
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    But I thought the point of this was Illya summoning Hazama? ^^;;;
    Omake snip old idea. It's up in my 'Drabble' thread.

    I'm writing snips of my own story too not relevant to the plot.

    is that wrong to do? o.o

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
    Omake snip old idea. It's up in my 'Drabble' thread.

    I'm writing snips of my own story too not relevant to the plot.

    is that wrong to do? o.o
    Not wrong, really, just...rather confusing when the premise has apparently changed and I didn't catch that happening at all.
    It might be my fault for not looking into that detail, though... ^^;
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Not wrong, really, just...rather confusing when the premise has apparently changed and I didn't catch that happening at all.
    It might be my fault for not looking into that detail, though... ^^;
    It's okay Lyco.

    Make sure to check the first page. I have a index up for actual chapters and snips.

    I recommend you read 'Team Faker vs Team Troll'.

    That was fun. And Aiden did one too with Hisui's cooking and Hazama. Short but sweet.

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    So...there hasn't been a decided plot to this, yet? Because I'm seeing Illya with Beserker-Hazama (then teamed up with Kotomine) and then Hazama-replacing-Shirou...
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    So...there hasn't been a decided plot to this, yet? Because I'm seeing Illya with Beserker-Hazama (then teamed up with Kotomine) and then Hazama-replacing-Shirou...
    No. The Actual chapters is where the plot is going.

    The Snips are fun/non-relevant to where I'm going with this story.

    Cleared up the confusion?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
    No. The Actual chapters is where the plot is going.
    The Snips are fun/non-relevant to where I'm going with this story.
    Cleared up the confusion?
    Kind of? I'm not sure what you mean, though...if none of what you've written has been part of the actual fanfic, I can't say much.
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Kind of? I'm not sure what you mean, though...if none of what you've written has been part of the actual fanfic, I can't say much.
    ...

    *facepalm*

    Look. Right. Here.

    http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...zBlue-xOver%29

    The first post is the actual first chapter. Right BELOW. Is. a. Index.

    Here they look like this.

    Chapters

    Snips

    I am at a loss at how this is hard to understand.

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