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    Took forever to read this.

    Worth it!

    That's pretty much how I imagined an Ultimate One with enough humanity to interact with us like that (who wasn't V/V, cause she's... weird, like that) would behave.
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    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
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    *at a loss of words after reading this fic*

    Okay, this will definitely rank somewhere in the top 10 Nasuverse fics I've ever read. Very good =D
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    This was magnificent.

    Shame Zeltrech couldn't be a Troll and Dodge The Moon...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    Took forever to read this.

    Worth it!

    That's pretty much how I imagined an Ultimate One with enough humanity to interact with us like that (who wasn't V/V, cause she's... weird, like that) would behave.
    Thanks! Writing Type-Moon was actually... one of the more complex problems I had. I wanted him to come across as alien, but he also had to be humanlike enough to interact with other characters. So the question of how to get across 'humanoid abomination' without putting in too much 'human' or too little vexed me throughout the whole story.

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    Did Moczo say Saya~?
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    Oh my. It is strange that Lyco is such a Saya no Uta fan, given what goes on in that VN~

    It just doesn't fit my image of you, man.
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    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    Oh my. It is strange that Lyco is such a Saya no Uta fan, given what goes on in that VN~
    It just doesn't fit my image of you, man.
    It's funny since I haven't played/read the VN. =P
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
    This was magnificent.

    Shame Zeltrech couldn't be a Troll and Dodge The Moon...
    He probably did, in another AU.
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    There should be an AU to this.

    Instead of deciding humanity's drive for conquest was something interesting to look into, the Crimson Moon becomes fascinated with their courtship rituals.

    Zelretch becomes an H-game protagonist, as he seeks to survive/fend off the advances of his humanoid abomination love interest.
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    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
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    I dunno, I quite like Aiden's mind.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TetsuoS2 View Post
    He probably did, in another AU.
    And in another AU, Brunestud fucked up his calculations for his Moon-drop, and sent the moon out of Earth's orbit and into space (or something else).

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    *Moon hits Venus*

    V/V: Oh, it is on.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moczo View Post
    *Moon hits Venus*
    V/V: Oh, it is on.
    ...I'd read it. Mostly because V/V.
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    Yesss.
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    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
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    I dunno, I quite like Aiden's mind.
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    AWESOMENESS WRAPPED IN EPICNESS WRAPPED IN PURE GAR AND SEALED IN THE TIN FOIL WRAP OF THE GODS.
    This is what i think of this fic. A burrito of greatness.

    "Red like roses fills my dreams and brings me to the place you rest."

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    Moczo, this was my favorite fic in the contest and still is. If you didn't have a creepy Zouken avatar I'd hug you for writing it.

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    It's funny since I haven't played/read the VN. =P
    I encourage you to, if only because a person's sanity does such an interesting sound when it SNAPS.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fafnir View Post
    I encourage you to, if only because a person's sanity does such an interesting sound when it SNAPS.
    Haven't found a good source to download it from...and I'm crap at understanding how patches are supposed to work. If I did, I would've already gotten Monmusu Quest 1+2. XP
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Haven't found a good source to download it from...
    ...There is a website I've used (seriously, some H-games have good stories and that's what I play for...) that uses DDL links. They've got Saya...but I haven't visited it recently to see how they've survived the MU incident. Then again, you must have come across it during your searches since it's so aptly named...erogedownload.com

    Also, on topic - Moczo...like many before, EPIC! I especially stalked you on FF.net and added you for future trolling on slow days...I also second IRUN's sentiment...until otherwise, your events are canon for me <3
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    You mean they aren't supposed to be canon?

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    I'm so glad this won over all in the contest. For me it was the fic that was the most fun to read.



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    Epic. Truly epic. Brunestud as a human monstrosity was flawless in my opinion. He tries to understand things, but he can't. At least not most things. Also, Zelretch as a wise (and arrogant) wizard was perfect, too. Still, the best line would be "Flawless" after Rin manages to score a hit on Zelretch's head, followed by: "Bring. It. On." She is a girl with priorities that does one thing at a time. Before that, her goal was to hit Zelretch in the head. Now that it was done, she can concentrate on the spell.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moczo View Post
    *Moon hits Venus*

    V/V: Oh, it is on.
    Hey!! Dammit, Brunestud! What did we do to you?! Now I'll get your head! *charges Meggido*

    ...

    Now that I think about it... So Beamu is V/V! That explains everything!

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    Archer: "What? But Archers are all insanely OP, it's like a rule or something, why would you think Sabers were better?"
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    I dont even know what Lunatique is. I assume it's terrible for the sake of argument.

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