Add that to the fact that I'm incredibly lazy and unimaginative.
Add that to the fact that I'm incredibly lazy and unimaginative.
The fic is what I'd call a standard ZnT crossover fic, following the Stations of Canon. No glaring spelling or punctuation mistakes, so that's at least a plus.
The timeskip though came out of nowhere and lowered a bit of my enjoyment. Overall, not bad.
I have no imagination, so I can only take pride in my spelling, punctuation, and grammar.
Well, the possibility is there in the end, and whoever takes advantage of the familiar will try to play to it's strengths. In the novels the Pope abused to hell and back his void powers, and only the wrong familiar prevented him from making use of them full power.
The point is that there are more than enough ways for you to change canon in a logical way under the new premises without sounding a complete asspull, or someone trying to ripoff/plagiarise/explore another author's work in order to gain instant popularity instead of doing your own piece of fiction,