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    Ok, I hereby give this the NZXT Stamp of Approval.

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    If you're running with what I think you're running, I can probably help with Touhou characterization.

    Why no I don't read enough Touhou doujin to fill a library stop looking at me like that right now
    in the end we will make thoughtcrime impossible, for there shall be no words to express it

    #THELEGENDNEVERDIES

    [01:05.15] <@Spinach> I can flash gang signs faster than Sasuke can perform ninjutsu and I rap like Medea's High Speed Divine Words.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Frantic Author View Post
    If you're running with what I think you're running, I can probably help with Touhou characterization.

    Why no I don't read enough Touhou doujin to fill a library stop looking at me like that right now
    Be at peace Brother, you are among friends here XD

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    The beta file has been sent to my dear helpers, so do be patient my other faithful readers. As to the rest of you that cannot wait... I have a small treat for you, made by Yakumo-san. Wallpaper material concerning Fate/Phantasm, enjoy:

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    Also, the one video every Touhou lover should be watching is this one:
    Touhou in its greatest glory

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    ^Nice Wallpaper! And saw that video the other day! My god it's amazing! Sometimes I wish there was an real Touhou anime, but these PV are the best! I love it and the song is beautiful, too, and totally fits the Touhou world!
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    First chapter is looking great, nice job Yakumo!

    Now, I have my own chapter to work on.

    No, it's not Knight of Steel.
    No, it's not that oneshot I was supposed to finish nine days ago shut up.


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    in the end we will make thoughtcrime impossible, for there shall be no words to express it

    #THELEGENDNEVERDIES

    [01:05.15] <@Spinach> I can flash gang signs faster than Sasuke can perform ninjutsu and I rap like Medea's High Speed Divine Words.


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    Well gentlemen, Chapter 1 is up.

    Fate/Phantasm - Chapter 1: Into the Phantasm

    Enjoy, and feedback/comments are welcome as always.

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    Interesting. But when is Casko going to show up? You have her in your wallpapers yet so far only Nero, Rin, and the MC from Extra (I'm assuming that's who it is) have shown up. Also I spotted two errors near the beginning of the chapter. Might want to take care of them.
    Last edited by nitewind; May 29th, 2012 at 10:48 PM.
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    And thus our warm waiting has finally paid off!
    Summary: in which Rin takes a window pane to the face courtesy of Marisa, a rabbit shoots at a plant [youkai], and Reimu is evicted from her shrine, most likely due to Medea and Sasaki Kojiro.
    Hm. If it is Medea's fault, and Castko~<3 is to appear in the story, does that mean there will be two Casters running amok?
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    Sounds like it.

    Catfight GO!!!!!!!
    Last edited by nitewind; May 29th, 2012 at 10:51 PM.
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    nitewind, quote them. It would seem that the 3 set of eyes that have scanned the text have failed to spot the said horrors that dare stain my story.

    As to Casko's apparition, she will be showing up in... two chapters. The next one is dedicated to Rin's little adventure with Marisa and Alice.
    Last edited by Yakumo-san; May 30th, 2012 at 01:53 AM.

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    leaves making up its canopy creates such a thick layer -> leaves ... create such a thick layer

    she can easily trust someone who'd feel comfortable living in such a place in such a place with ease (consider revising?)

    Marissa -> Marisa

    golden haired -> golden-haired
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    Thanks for spotting those errors I failed to see.
    Also, many thanks to qsurf for his other Beta Report, in which I've added more modifications and corrections!

    But yes, I should really sit down and put my attention to detail at maximum while writing this fic... if only it wasn't for my sleepiness.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yakumo-san View Post
    Thanks for spotting those errors I failed to see.
    Also, many thanks to qsurf for his other Beta Report, in which I've added more modifications and corrections!

    But yes, I should really sit down and put my attention to detail at maximum while writing this fic... if only it wasn't for my sleepiness.
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    Regarding the person who kicked Reimu out, possibly Caster, wouldn't Mima have intervened at any point? From what I remember she's still at the shrine, right?

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    PC-98 era characters aren't on the list. Due to the already large Fate Roster coming in, I decided to eschew the PC-98 era roster and keep most of the Windows era one.

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    Hoho. Quite the good job, Lady Yakumo.



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    Nice to see the chapter get released.
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    So due to me being busy with a few tasks, I haven't been updating things on here too much, Well, chapter 2 is in the works, so please wait patiently while I take care of it slowly.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yakumo-san View Post
    So due to me being busy with a few tasks, I haven't been updating things on here too much, Well, chapter 2 is in the works, so please wait patiently while I take care of it slowly.
    Yay. Hopfully Extra MC and his Seiba will not be separated for too long.
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