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    Don't @ me if your fanfic doesn't even have Shirou/Illya shipping k thnx ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    Almost all of my song collection = video game OST tracks.

    Or anime OST tracks.

    Yeesh.
    Sounds like me, only I've also got nerdcore, Weird Al, and Eminem.

    I'm not exactly well versed in music.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    Well, now I have to do one of those challenges with Kotomine yaoi.

    Not sure who the other person will be though!
    Archer.

    Unlikely pairing? Yes.

    Potential for steaming hot buttsex with trolling? Massive.

    And I think I'm going to do this.

    Ironically, I have a lot of heavy metal on my Ipod as well as a smattering of 80's music. However, if it plays nothing but Metallica I will have to start over.

    . . . And if Nine Inch Nails' "Closer" comes on . . . yeahhhh.



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    Beam, you are the giver of the good feeling. Also, diabetes.

    Quote Originally Posted by ItsaRandomUsername View Post
    Sounds like me, only I've also got nerdcore, Weird Al, and Eminem.
    Awww yeah.

    My playlist is filled with Queen, AC/DC, Guns N Roses, MJ, Led Zeppelin, Hendrix and Aerosmith. And by playlist, I mean a metric fuck ton of vinyls. I wonder what that says about me.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ItsaRandomUsername View Post
    Sounds like me, only I've also got nerdcore, Weird Al, and Eminem.

    I'm not exactly well versed in music.
    Mine has a bunch of Queen, some of The Clash, a load of Nightwish songs, most of the FSN soundtrack, U2, some random pop music and a bunch of other stuff. Basically, whatever I happen to like the sound of. Not sure how many songs, exactly, because I have some of them in the playlist more than once so they're played more often....

    These were nice drabbles, though. Very sweet, and I like the way Beam actually makes Rin/Sakura seem like a viable pairing. I wish she'd write stuff like this more often. I liked 8, especially, and how Sakura encouraged Rin to her room by offering to "make it worth her while"....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Techlology View Post
    Beam, you are the giver of the good feeling. Also, diabetes.
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    I wish she'd write stuff like this more often.
    I would love to, but honestly part of the difficulty of writing Rin/Sakura is that the pairing itself only works under specific circumstances in order for them to be romantically interested in each other. Otherwise they're either only sisters, or have nothing to do with each other. So getting the pairing to work out romantically takes some setting up.



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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    I would love to, but honestly part of the difficulty of writing Rin/Sakura is that the pairing itself only works under specific circumstances in order for them to be romantically interested in each other. Otherwise they're either only sisters, or have nothing to do with each other. So getting the pairing to work out romantically takes some setting up.
    Clearly, the solution is to give Sakura an internet connection and expose her to 'incest is best' memes frequently.

    /totally not serious yup right uh huh
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    Clearly, the solution is to give Sakura an internet connection and expose her to 'incest is best' memes frequently.

    /totally not serious yup right uh huh
    Incest is the best, put your sister to the test!



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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    Incest is the best, put your sister to the test!
    Of course, your smut is fluffy.

    You... you... fluffy... fluff person you!
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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    I would love to, but honestly part of the difficulty of writing Rin/Sakura is that the pairing itself only works under specific circumstances in order for them to be romantically interested in each other. Otherwise they're either only sisters, or have nothing to do with each other. So getting the pairing to work out romantically takes some setting up.
    Well, yeah, I guess. You could write it non-romantically, though, rather than it ending up with them either as lovers or killing/ignoring one another....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mike1984 View Post
    Well, yeah, I guess. You could write it non-romantically, though, rather than it ending up with them either as lovers or killing/ignoring one another....
    I suppose so, but honestly the romance appeals to me the most. There's something twisted and wonderful about it that I just adore. Which is ironic, considering I'm not a huge fan of Shiki/Akiha.



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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    I suppose so, but honestly the romance appeals to me the most. There's something twisted and wonderful about it that I just adore. Which is ironic, considering I'm not a huge fan of Shiki/Akiha.
    Psst. Beam.

    It's because Shiki/Akiha isn't yuri.
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    Debating if I should post this to FF.net or not, just to show I'm still alive. I didn't save the original Word document, but I could copy and paste it pretty easily.



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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    Debating if I should post this to FF.net or not, just to show I'm still alive. I didn't save the original Word document, but I could copy and paste it pretty easily.
    Give it a go; but if it gives you formatting trouble, don't push yourself to keep trying.
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    And posted to FF.net. Enjoy!



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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    I suppose so, but honestly the romance appeals to me the most. There's something twisted and wonderful about it that I just adore. Which is ironic, considering I'm not a huge fan of Shiki/Akiha.
    I guess because there was always a very thick cloud of wanting between them. Like when Rin actually got irritated when she heard about Sakura making Shirou's breakfast, asking if he thought he was some King to make his junior serve him like that. And the talk she had with him in UBW about adopted family members. Also the amount of Rin fangirling/defending Sakura did all throughout the game. First time I played, free of spoilers, I thought they were both either former lovers/friends gone wrong or sisters with severe complexes. Needless to say one of those hit the jackpot.

    Though I'd say it is platonic, it can be molded into romance, and you did well here. I doubt I can think of any other pair of TM characters who are actually blood related that can be turned like this without serious OOC-ness/being hilariously one-sided.



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