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    • On the changes in Mad Enhancement, Ilya and Heracles from F/SN to RN: http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...0875#post80875

    - Small change in phrase. "凶暴化" was substituted for "狂化".

    So instead of "you have not been allowing Berserker to use Mad Enhancement", it becomes "you have not been allowing Berserker to become wild".

    Also, instead of "Go mad, Berserker", Ilya's command was "Obliterate them, Berserker".

    - If you read the skill descriptions, Mad Enhancement must be active in order to rob the Servant of all thought processes. Einzberns summoned Hercules in Berserker class in order to rob him of all thoughts and turn him into a puppet. It made no sense that Ilya was fully controlling Berserker without activating the ability until that point. Also, Berserker was growling and smacking wildly (instead of talking normally and moving in a normal manner) while not under Mad Enhancement.
    (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...0897#post80897)

    - The "ability increase" part is still present as Hyrion posted, however, that can be easily attributed to "Ilya was withholding Berserker's powers".
    (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...1948#post81948)

    -I don't think it's as much of a retcon as people are making it out to be. Rather than just flipping the enhancement switch from off to on, it's now more like turning a dial from a lower setting to full-blast.
    (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...1987#post81987)

    -So the difference is: "Insane but without an ability boost"(original) vs. "insane with only a minor ability boost until Ilya goes full power"(Realta Nua)? (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...1999#post81999)

    -Light shines in Berserker's eyes.
    …The Servant that has obeyed Ilya up to now has his mind released and identifies us as his enemies.
    (Fate, Day 11, A distant back)

    - Either Master or Servant (e.g. Lancelot) can turn it on. Don't know about turning it off once it is on though.
    (http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...917#post667917)


    ....The Command Spells engraved on her entire body were there just to control Berserker. Those things that were useless as circuits were without question cutting the girl's life away. Just the slightest movement from Berserker would make her scream. -Of course this would happen.
    The appearance of the Holy Grail is 2 months from now, still a time away. What was holding down the great hero, was only her magical energy and command spells. Berserker was not woven with the magic energy of the Holy Grail. Despite how unique the girl is, holding Berserker with her own magic energy was the same as having her life being stolen from her.
    And knowing that, they had not given her time to breathe. In the winter forest, they left her to the starving herd of beasts. They even gave them to corpses possessed of evil ghosts. They had even thrown her into the disposal yard for failed creations. For the girl to survive, she had to rely on the giant, the one thing that she had.
    The girl came back entirely intact from training that had mutated into torture. She made the giant strike the enemies that came crawling towards her. While screaming from agony with each blow, she made him eliminate him all the hordes that came attacking her.
    .....He himself didn't really know when it was, that this process had become something special to him.
    The girl, in contradiction to her youth, despised showing signs of weakness. Everything she said was abusive. If she were going to grieve over her plight, then it would better serve her to hate the source of her condition. That way, she would become stronger, as she instinctively knew. The girl looked down upon his ugliness and cursed his very existence.
    It was to be expected.
    If only Berserker hadn't been here, she wouldn't have to suffer. If she hadn't been chosen to be a Master, she wouldn't have been tossed into that hell.
    The girl resented the giant all the time and let out her anger. When the signs of the appearance of the Holy Grail had appeared and she grew used to controlling him, the pain attacking her had disappeared. The girl, out of revenge for her experience, robbed the giant of his reasoning, and treated him as a speechless "Berserker".
    .....He had long known that it had been the only resistence she could muster.
    [Winter Forest scene, unchanged in Realta Nua]
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    ^^You don't know how close I came to weeping manly tears....
    broserker....
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    Oh, I did cry during that scene.

    The tears weren't manly.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiden View Post
    Where have you been hiding all this talent from us?
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    This is awesome, Seika. Liked the Lesbian Rin and Herc parts.
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    I feel the urge now to do more of this challenge. Maybe one for my MoS!Rin continuity and one for Ayaka/Shirou.

    DAMMIT SEIKA WHAT DO YOU DO TO ME.



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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    DAMMIT SEIKA WHAT DO YOU DO TO ME.
    Hey, you started it.

    I feel the urge now to do more of this challenge. Maybe one for my MoS!Rin continuity and one for Ayaka/Shirou.
    I just had enjoyed making up anything for the music, though. I mean, I ended up with 1st person present, 1st person past, 3rd person present and 3rd person past? For no other real reason that because I thought it worked. And the person who appeared most was Rin in two. It's fun just to let your mind go free, boosted a bit by the music. (Then again, I had the luxury of time compared to the 'proper' challenge, yes? )
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    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Hey, you started it.



    I just had enjoyed making up anything for the music, though. I mean, I ended up with 1st person present, 1st person past, 3rd person present and 3rd person past? For no other real reason that because I thought it worked. And the person who appeared most was Rin in two. It's fun just to let your mind go free, boosted a bit by the music. (Then again, I had the luxury of time compared to the 'proper' challenge, yes? )
    Seika is a R-R-Rule Breaker.
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    Proto R-R-Rule Breaker. Makes it older and more original, you see?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post


    Proto R-R-Rule Breaker. Makes it older and more original, you see?
    Now shipping Seika x Gilgamesh as Ultimate Hipsters.
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    Aiden's mind is a scary place, but this part is nice.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TetsuoS2 View Post
    I thought you were only Tusia's?
    Confusing Artee and Seika?
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    I am pleasantly surprised.

    These were pretty good, the Lesbian Rin one was quite sad and so was the MoS with Archer sort of giving up on Rin.



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    Whoa there.
    I'm impressed, especially by Rin's. Talk about a punch in the gut.

    You definitely need to write more.

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    Consider me freaking awed by all of this. The harmony and poetry in motion of each of these pieces was simply magnificent.

    Good freaking job Seika.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Fafnir View Post
    Whoa there.
    I'm impressed, especially by Rin's. Talk about a punch in the gut.
    I'm glad it hits hard - the song gets really bitter, and whilst I wasn't trying to match the exact emotions, I still wanted to write a piece that would make a reader stop and think about the nasty situations people can end up in - and what people end up doing to themselves in those situations.


    Quote Originally Posted by YeOfLittleFaith View Post
    Consider me freaking awed by all of this. The harmony and poetry in motion of each of these pieces was simply magnificent.
    :blush: is about all I can say to that, I think. Thanks!
    Always bits to improve on, though ...
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    I dunno; the lesbian Rin one seems out of character to me. She wouldn't give in like that; she'd just get really angry, start smiling, and proceed to be really vicious to everybody who had crossed her.

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    Quote Originally Posted by nick012000 View Post
    I dunno; the lesbian Rin one seems out of character to me. She wouldn't give in like that; she'd just get really angry, start smiling, and proceed to be really vicious to everybody who had crossed her.
    She did that. She got vicious, she got angry, and it's mentioned that Luvia had to stop her attacking one of the ... bigots. But Rin couldn't keep that up constantly, not with people she was in day-to-day contact with, not with people she'd once liked. And so it really started getting to her. I tend to think that Rin puts up fronts a lot, some trivial and some less so, but if you push on them right (or just catch her off-guard), they can come falling down. It took a while in this case - months. But it did finally happen.
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