I'm divided. Murder mystery sounds cool now.
IT'S A TRAP! He's setting this up so we forget about the Fifth War! But I will not fall for it!
...No matter how awesomely tempting it would be to fall to my knees and beg you to do that idea because it sounds outrageously awesome... I won't!
Hmm...
Speaking of distractions, I could also continue the plot-bunny I began a while ago. Heaven's Feel transplanted into Lovecraft's universe, with a reluctant Marsh family assassin as the protagonist: http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...aft-s-Universe.
Not sure if it's technically a FSN "crossover", since it takes the premise rather than the characters.
Last edited by Zalgo Jenkins; June 23rd, 2012 at 10:53 PM.
Wow, I read this *entire* story in one sitting, and I have to say: Excellent work. This is possibly the best fanfic I've ever read, let alone a F/SN fanfiction. I loved the writing, the seamless flow of continuity - Though Meriweather's snarkiness rubs the wrong way on occasion, his character development (and the slow-burning not-quite-romance between him and his Sekirei) is incredibly well done.
I especially liked the sheer amount of detail included - The intricacies - about the life of the Magi, and the workings of the Association: This story was a labour of love, and it shows - I felt you just get the way the Association works, in a way few other stories explore.
I've seen a bit of Sekirei, and I didn't especially like the anime or the manga; This story, however, is a great example of how a crossover can be much more than the sum of its parts. I'd say it did this significantly better than In Flight, which had an ostensibly similar premise, but quickly lost direction.
You've written an excellent story out of two entirely different settings, and done credit to both. I especially like the characterization of Emiya Kirigitsu and Kayneth, and (again) the meticulous care/attention dedicated to the backdrop.
I'd highly recommend this fic, not just to fans of either setting, but to fans of good writing in general.