Also what made you format the story this way? Usually you have paragraphs but this has a lot of line breaks.
Also what made you format the story this way? Usually you have paragraphs but this has a lot of line breaks.
He never sleeps. He never dies.
Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.
Authenticity, maybe?
Sometime's that kinda annoying to our Western sensibilities, but in cases like this where it emulates the "feel" then it's very much underappreciated, IMO.
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
The account of how the old worm became the withered thing he is today is off to a grand start, I should say. The direction it is headed in is certainly enticing.
I try to keep my formatting similar to whatever style I'm emulating. This time, I'm emulating light novel style, so it turns out like this.Originally Posted by mAc Chaos
Hm-hm. I don't know if it was the format or the diction but I really enjoyed this next little piece of the story and it certainly made me anxious for the next one. Glad I noticed it had been posted, or I might've missed Nagato and Lancer. Like Saber, I have no idea who Lancer is but the mystery of their identities is what helps make the story intriguing. Looking forward to more~
I'll try to getEeyoreLancer's profile added to the first post soonish enough.
The next update might be a bit aways, unfortunately. I'm currently sick as a dog, so writing isn't easy.Looking forward to more~
I kinda wish I had photoshop now, so I could add a Gae Bolg/Dearg/Buidhe to my avatar...
Binged All Of Gundam In 4 Years, 1 Week and All I Got Was This Stupid Mask
FF XIV: Walked to the End
Started Legend of the Galactic Heroes (14/07/23), pray for me.
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