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    Quite pretty indeed!
    The Manhattan Project: Is it a sin to kill for your country? In an age of nationalism, where do you draw the line between right and wrong? In the 1960s, eight people seek peace amidst war and tragedy.

    [11:20:46 AM] GlowStiks: lucina is supes attractive
    [12:40] Lace: lucina is amazing
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    Thanks, both of you!

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    Fucking frills how do they work. This would've been finished weeks ago if it weren't for them.

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    The rightmost hand is a bit weird, and I don't know if her hair ought to be covering the upper arm quite like that. There are also some weird perspective issues with Ruby, but it's nothing too bad. The greatest distortion is around the knees, which seem to be detached from the thighs. That makes her legs look elongated, and speaking of which, the rearmost leg ought to be a bit higher up.

    It's very minimally shaded, so I'm not sure if this is still a WIP or if it's the style of the composition. Given that it's an aerial scene, you shouldn't have any trouble with cast shadows, so I suggest advancing the contrast between the values, and making some parts super bright, as though she just burst into sunlight or something.

    Everything aside, I think this definitely has the cleanest lineart you've produced so far. It's an interesting pose and the face looks quite good, so you're getting a lot better.

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    Thanks for the crit!

    It's a paintover, not an original composition so at least some of the anatomy issues aren't completely my fault. This is the original.
    As for the shading, now that I see it on a different monitor, it is pretty nonexistent. I swear it looked better on my laptop. I didn't want to push it overmuch, since I was going for a watercoloured style,(Ref) but I think I did underdo it, especially on the pink.

    And thanks, that means a lot to me.

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    Made this for last week's console-tan thread on /v/.
    There was gonna be more to it than a boring bust shot, but I got lazy.

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    Wow, you improved so much over time it's fucking scary.

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    Post more! :3
    The Manhattan Project: Is it a sin to kill for your country? In an age of nationalism, where do you draw the line between right and wrong? In the 1960s, eight people seek peace amidst war and tragedy.

    [11:20:46 AM] GlowStiks: lucina is supes attractive
    [12:40] Lace: lucina is amazing
    [12:40] Neir: lucina is pretty much flawless

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    This took longer than expected. I really need to work some more on perspective.


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    Not bad, seems you have practiced for a while. :3

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    Made this for last week's console-tan thread on /v/.
    There was gonna be more to it than a boring bust shot, but I got lazy.
    it's really nice but her eyes are so bright compared to the rest of the shading that it kinda creeps me out.
    i hope that was intentional

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    Quote Originally Posted by Quad View Post
    it's really nice but her eyes are so bright compared to the rest of the shading that it kinda creeps me out.
    i hope that was intentional
    ???
    Are pale eyes creepy?


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    Must admit, I often feel the same. Eyes that are unusually light (or dark, but I think you have to look closer to notice that) can look unnatural just because we're not used to seeing them.
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    Maybe the eyes aren't awkward.

    Maybe it's just...

    mesmerizing.

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    Hmm, well I come from pale-eyed stock so maybe that's why. Definitely something I'll keep in mind from now on.


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    I find nothing wrong with the eyes though.

    Keep it up, Cake!

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    AAAAAIt's been so long since I last posted anythingAAAAA

    I was gonna add more to this, but I'm fed up of it by now.


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    Nice to see you back, Desu_Cake!
    The Manhattan Project: Is it a sin to kill for your country? In an age of nationalism, where do you draw the line between right and wrong? In the 1960s, eight people seek peace amidst war and tragedy.

    [11:20:46 AM] GlowStiks: lucina is supes attractive
    [12:40] Lace: lucina is amazing
    [12:40] Neir: lucina is pretty much flawless

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    Nice to be back
    I hadn't realized I'd been gone so long until I looked at the dates.


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    Extreme perspective is difficult. I totally messed up.


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