.....Yes. Jeanne as Kotomine's Servant? Excellent casting choice. Much better than Arturia. Kotomine is still fun. Are you still quoting Ignatius? I've had to study him a bit, so I'm curious.
Also, Jeanne dressed like a harlot because the Grail is a perv? I approve of blaming the Grail for all the improbably outfits. Tis funny.
Hmm. Rin obtains Gilgamesh's service is clever, I admit. Gilgamesh is supposed immune to orders from the Command Seal, but hell, Rin's laid two of them on him and making him supplement it with his own artifacts. I'll let it slide, because it's amusing and novel.
It'll be a shame if this story isn't continued, but if you lack inspiration I understand.