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    Writer's Note: Certain dialogue sequences in this story are lifted from Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, but I trust in the intelligence of my readers (and the availability of the books) to recognise them.





    Chapter 33 – Baiting the Trap



    October 30 – 31, 1997






    Shin considered every aspect of his plans once more, to make certain that he’d covered all possible contingencies. To do less would be simply foolish, after all.

    And it was absolutely critical that this go off as he’d planned, though not for the reasons that most others might suspect. To Malfoy (and possibly Davis, though she was intelligent enough to see this plan for what it was), this attack was meant to eliminate the remnants of the so-called “Scarlet Seven” within the castle, and thus, all potential sources of organised resistance. Davis, being more intelligent, likely understood that this was merely a reconnaissance mission; a probing attack of their capabilities and defences, while heightening their tension level. They both had some idea of his nature and abilities, and were almost certainly terrified of him. The sudden panic of his attack, after having already deflected the Hallowe’en attack they’d expected, ought to make overcoming them easier.

    In some ways, it was a feint, in preparation for a better-organised and better-executed strike at the first Quidditch match. And this was true, so far as it went, but Shin’s ultimate aims went far deeper than even that.

    Lord Voldemort had expended a great deal of time and effort – to say nothing of the value of an agent of Kohaku’s calibre – in infiltrating Hogwarts Castle. While he had accomplished that, as well as some lesser actions, his plans had not worked out to nearly to the degree he had wished for. Likewise, his mother had managed to acquire the lost Nanaya, and conceive by him, but her capture of his daughter had not gone even remotely as well. The girl had escaped; Shin himself had been at risk of dying from a stray gunshot, and in addition to the damage done to their property, the damage to their reputation within the Imperial Court had nearly caused the Emperor to dissolve the clan entirely. No, neither leader could honestly count the outcomes of their schemes as successes.

    But on the other hand, if he could, then . . . Then, ultimately, he would’ve proven himself a superior leader – a superior heir. The faction within the clan that supported his position would have genuine reason to do so: a legitimate success that neither the clan’s current head nor its ally could claim. With that, there was a good chance that his rank within the succession could be maintained, regardless of his soon-to-be siblings’ abilities. At worst, he would be confirmed as a regent, until one or more of them was properly qualified for the position.


    And so many accidents could befall them within that timeframe . . .

    It was a scenario Shin felt quite pleased with, and therefore was anxious to see brought about. And the first step towards accomplishing that would be to successfully (but not too successfully) attack the Gryffindor girls tomorrow night. From there, the real attack would hit in less than a week – and after that . . .

    Well, after that, it would honestly depend on what could be learned from the two. Both Lord Voldemort and his mother seemed to believe that the pair knew where the rest of their group was hiding. Personally, Shin doubted it; every report he’d seen on the group as a whole indicated that they were both well-organised and very well-versed in military tactics – and their assault on the penthouse last summer certainly argued in favour of that impression.

    In his opinion, the smart thing to do, if they had to send the pair to the school, was to treat them as a resistance cell. Effectively, while they might answer to a controller among their group, that person’s location would be kept secret, even if their identity wasn’t. More to the point, with the proper application of certain skills and spells, the girls could be rendered incapable of divulging information, which he certainly would’ve made certain of, had he been running the opposite side. Shin had to assume that they had, as well.

    Of course, every spell and potion had a counter, or a workaround – it was simply a matter of finding it. But that would take time and effort, which he certainly could take, provided that he got his hands on the girls in the first place.

    . . . This brought him back to needing his assault to go off smoothly – which in turn required that this one go off as planned.

    Patience, he told himself, echoing Kohaku’s oft-spoken mantra. It always comes down to patience. If a man waits by the river long enough, the bodies of his enemies will float down it.

    Of course, the Metamorphmagus had always added, if you have something more important to be doing then you’d probably be better off throwing them in the river yourself . . .






    Galen awoke, and became suddenly aware that his left arm had been restrained. After blinking, and sorting through the sensory input, he understood that Hermione had wrapped his arm around her body, pinning it under her hip – low enough that she couldn’t reach it without moving.

    And I’d be awake before that happened – either because I’d caught up on my sleep, or because the sudden absence of her weight would trigger my instincts. So I’m effectively safe, but at the same time, she gets some comfort from my touch . . . Clever girl.

    That last thought, cribbed from the film version of Jurassic Park, was tinged with the traditional Robert Muldoon accent, but meant affectionately rather than ironically. That said, however, Hermione’s position did present a problem regarding his getting up, since she was effectively paralysed by rigor mortis – and while she wasn’t heavily-built, she was dead weight, in a literal sense. That would make moving his hand out from under her difficult . . . And the act was further complicated by his abrupt realisation that Takara was very firmly moulded to his back.

    Galen blinked, momentarily knocked off-kilter. He wasn’t usually the sandwich filling, when it came to these situations – what had happened earlier, again?

    A quick dive into his Occlumency rituals recalled and ordered his memories of the time before he went to sleep, and Galen found his current position perfectly understandable. Both girls would’ve wanted comfort, and this was the safest position for all involved – whether “safest” was referring to the likelihood of falling victim of Hermione’s bloodlust, or the odds of any or all of them retaining their virginity in this situation.

    (Hey, they were physically teenagers, and he was a male literally surrounded by two beautiful girls, at least one of whom was sleeping in the nude – it was a definite possibility.)

    More to the point, however, reviewing the events of several hours ago (given his new sleeping habits, maybe four hours, tops?), the ex-lycanthrope realised that they’d picked up two of the Deathly Hallows – but neglected the fact that the third one was also present there. It was a mistake he ought to rectify, immediately.

    As tempting as it is to just use a Summoning Charm on it,
    Galen reasoned, I doubt it’d work. I’d expect that the Elder Wand could only be summoned by its master – who is not me. But even if I could, if there’s a team of Aurors and/or hit-wizards combing the battlefield, I’ll be leading them right to us. That would just be terminally stupid.

    He sighed. There’s no help for it, I suppose – I’ll have to get up.

    As Fred and George Weasley had demonstrated inside Grimmauld Place, Apparition was possible within even the most heavily-warded structure, barring application of the specific jinx. And unlike most things, the rules didn’t follow those of the book; he didn’t actually need to take a step before pulling it off – of course, that might’ve applied to just him . . .

    That said, however, it was a bit startling going from being parallel to the floor and surrounded by bodies, to suddenly being perpendicular to the floor, with no such impediments. He reached out to catch himself on the tent wall with one hand, the other drawing his wand. A silent Summoning Charm called the Deathcloak to him, and a quick motion had him garbed in it.

    Galen paused, kneeling down to adjust the blanket over Takara’s form, so she wouldn’t be too cold – and stroking Hermione’s cheek, to be reminded of how cold she was. It was important that he remember that. She was so human, most of the time, and so damned darkly alluring to him, that he worked hard to remind himself that this was something that had been done to her. That it was something terrible, something unforgivable, and he didn’t ever want to become so used to it that the horror of that didn’t touch him.

    Now thoroughly angry, Galen found it quite easy to assume his Animagus form on exiting the tent, which he did, for the same reasons as before – the dire wolf was better suited to moving with stealth in the forest, invisible or otherwise. And as the transformation produced no detectable magic, he’d be able to shift back and forth to ambush anyone he might come across.

    Tracing their scent trail back to the battle site was child’s play, and he was pleased to see that whatever investigation the Albanian Ministry might’ve done had come and gone. There might be a detection ward on the scene, if they were looking for someone to come back – which might be a problem for them when they did come back, to deal with the diadem – but otherwise, he needn’t worry about ducking actual interference.

    . . . Wait – the diadem?

    Thinking didn’t come as easily to him in this form, but he was clever, for a dire wolf. As such, he worried whether or not the Ministry investigators had found the diadem, instead of (or worse, as well as) the wand. And the thought caused him to curse for several minutes. Not that wolves, whether they were dire or otherwise, had much of an actual concept of invective, much less a capacity for it – but Galen certainly gave it his best shot.

    The Animagus closed his eyes and breathed deeply. The ozone scent of the dual lightning strikes in the area hadn’t faded much, at least not to his nose. The overwhelmingly dark and bloody scents that had marked the revenants had faded, though there was a strong miasma of char in the air. As far as metal scents were concerned, though . . .

    There – it was still in the same place he’d caught it before. Whatever Riddle had done to conceal it from magical detection had apparently worked. But while he was relieved to know that, there was still the reason that had brought him out here in the first place: the Elder Wand. Just what had happened to it . . .?

    Unfortunately, he had no idea what elder wood smelled like, so he had no way of confirming its presence other than visual. Fortunately, he did know what it looked like, but considering that he was looking for what amounted to a segmented twig on the forest floor – and without even colour vision, for crying out loud – it promised to be a long search.

    The dire wolf sighed – a rather impressive huff, given its size – and began nosing along the ground.

    Fortunately for his sanity (whatever little remained of it), the wolf had very little sense of time, and (dare he say it?) a dogged sense of persistence. That, combined with his ability to review the battle scene and at least guess the direction that the explosion had thrown the wand in, eventually rewarded him with the sight of the Elder Wand.

    No doubt it had been overlooked as a stick amidst a pile of sticks, being far from the site of so much expended magic. After all, no one used elder as a wand wood, thanks to the superstition engendered by Beedle the Bard – and he was likely as widespread in the magical world as the Grimms were in the mundane, making it a common taboo. Regardless, it had worked in their favour this time, and he dipped his head down towards the wand, his mouth open –

    And it tasted cold and bitter, like half-frozen crude oil, when he tried to take it in his jaws.

    Galen sat back on his haunches before transforming back to human, confused and desperately wanting some industrial-strength mouthwash. People who hadn’t been the Elder Wand’s master had been able to handle it before, and even use it! Why the odd reaction?

    Maybe it’s because it’s a genuine Deathly Hallow, and since I’m not its master, its power isn’t attuned to me like the cloak is – how many times have the others complained that wearing it makes them uncomfortable? Or it could be because animals have a closer relationship to death than humans, he conceded, remembering how Nala had proven able to track him under the Deathcloak. Heck, it might even be because I’m a Hallow holder myself, and not worthy to “unite” them – and thus, I’m being punished for trying, even though I’m actually not.

    Or, knowing my luck, it could even be all of the above.


    Regardless, it meant he had to be careful. Slowly rolling the wand in the edge of the Deathcloak, he carefully held its wrapped weight in his hands, and gradually made his way back to the tent. Once inside its protections, he let out a relieved sigh. He suspected that they’d really dodged a bullet there –

    “Where on earth have you been?” Takara demanded angrily, her eyes flashing and her wand drawn.

    God damned ricochets, he thought, realising that the bullet had caught him after all, even if not in the form he’d originally feared. They always end up getting you, don’t they?






    Neville spent the morning of Hallowe’en pacing the Room of Requirement and cursing. After being more or less confined to rooms of one form or another for the last three months, he was almost getting accustomed to having four walls around him at all times – but today, he wanted out.

    Hallowe’en
    never ends well for us – not really, he thought, and especially not lately. It’s been getting worse every year, too – and how are they going to try and top last year?

    He very carefully did not ask the question aloud, nor had it ever come up in his communications with Ginny and Luna. In this, they all trusted Galen’s maxim: “Don’t tempt Fate – the woman has no self-control.”

    Yes, as beliefs went, it was a bit sexist, and a lot paranoid – but when applied to Neville’s experiences in the last seven years, it certainly wasn’t wrong. And given that last year had seen Hermione turned into a vampire, Neville didn’t want to hand any more impetus to Fate to try and top the event than he had to. In fact, he’d prefer that topping that not be tried at all . . .

    The young wizard shook his head, willing himself to focus on the matter at hand. According to past history, at some point tonight, someone would try and stick a knife in their backs – figuratively or literally. Since he was the proverbial ace in the hole here, that meant it was up to him to see it coming and block its strike.

    . . . The only major question is, where should I be looking?

    In general, whenever the Hallowe’en Curse had come up before, they usually had some warning. Granted, for the first few years, that warning had consisted of the trinity’s foreknowledge, but even later, they’d had some clue as to where their troubles might be coming from. Whether it the presence of the Goblet of Fire and its selection for the Triwizard Tournament, or even the vague warning that Tracey Davis had passed along about Hermione’s being targeted –

    He paused. That was a possibility. Davis had been keeping her head down, much as Ginny and Luna had, since returning to school. But they knew she’d had a hand in Takara’s kidnapping – though the question remained as to whether or not it was voluntary, and whether or not they should care if it had been, or just curse her out of hand . . .

    Neville shook his head – he was getting distracted again. The point was that with the castle’s current political layout, Tracey Davis was an ideal candidate for a hidden attacker. She knew how to use subtlety, they sort-of trusted her (or at least, there was a basis where they could be prevailed upon to trust her), and the girl had connections. Certainly, she was a greater threat to them than, say, Draco Malfoy. But on the other hand, Shin Tohno just screamed “overt threat.” By all accounts, he’d nearly beaten Galen to death with his bare hands – something that hadn’t happened since first year. There was no real need for subtlety when that kind of force was available.

    Neville frowned. Practically speaking, however, the hostage principle still applied. So long as the Death Eaters at the Ministry wanted to pretend that everything was running normally and smoothly, they couldn’t be too overt or heavy-handed in their dealings with the citizenry. That very much included Hogwarts, since the students were their hostages for people’s good behaviour – and if the hostages started suffering, then Riddle and his ilk could find that they were facing wide-scale rebellion in very short order.

    Particularly, he noted, since Luna’s father ran a media outlet, and was no longer easily run to ground at the Lovegood home. He could whip the populace into a seething frenzy very quickly, if motivated to do so.

    And hurting Luna would motivate Mister Lovegood like nothing else in this world, the young wizard thought grimly.

    All right, so subtlety was definitely the order of the day, for their enemies – which meant what? What were they liable to do?

    Neville spent most of the morning considering that, when he wasn’t exercising or checking his gear. He also kept the Marauder’s Map open, eyes scanning the most likely trouble sources: Tohno, Davis, Malfoy, Umbridge – as well as keeping Ginny and Luna themselves in sight . . . It wasn’t easy, even with half a decade’s Occlumency studies augmenting his concentration and focus. Hermione, and maybe Luna, could probably do it easily, but he just wasn’t used to tracking so many moving targets across such a wide field.

    It’s a shame that Ginny didn’t keep Winky’s services, or that we weren’t able to free that “Dobby” the trinity talk about, he reflected. The extra set of eyes would be a big help right now – and house-elves’ magical abilities wouldn’t hurt, either.

    He could always go to the kitchens and ask for a house-elf to help, of course, but as they were bound in service to Hogwarts, and the Headmistress in particular, that wasn’t exactly the brightest idea. And to a lesser extent, the same tie bound ghosts like Lady Ravenclaw or Sir Nicholas, so asking them to help would result in the same problem.

    Briefly, the young wizard considered calling for Kreacher, the Black family elf. While the old house-elf didn’t like him much, the Longbottoms being notable blood-traitors, Galen and Sirius both had ordered him to assist any of their allies . . . But on the other hand, given the current situation, that could mean pitting him directly in opposition to Malfoy (or in a worst-case scenario, Bellatrix Lestrange). While Galen was reasonably cunning in closing loopholes, and events had left Kreacher with a supreme dislike for that side of the family, they were of the Black bloodline, and there was no guarantee that it wouldn’t cause him harm to oppose them. Or, for that matter, that they couldn’t find a way to issue Kreacher orders that he had to obey, Galen and Sirius’ commands notwithstanding.

    It was better, Neville decided, to keep the house-elf in reserve, in case they needed a quick extraction from Hogwarts altogether. Well-protected though they were, both the Room of Requirement and the Chamber of Secrets could be broken into (the latter even more easily than the former, since Riddle was now in charge), but Grimmauld Place was absolutely secure. It had been designed that way, so that if necessary, they could fall back to there – and Kreacher could have them there in a matter of seconds, despite all of Hogwarts’ enchantments. Yes, far better to keep him in reserve.

    All of which meant that, like it or not (and he didn’t), the girls had only him to act as overseer – and Neville was determined to do the job right. Given what had happened to Hermione last year, he didn’t dare do otherwise . . . All of which led him back to his original questions: what form would the attack take this year, and who would it come from?

    If everything goes by the tradition, the young wizard thought, I’ll find out at the Hallowe’en feast. I just hope that by that point, it won’t already be too late . . .






    Revenge – at last,
    revenge!

    The thought had occupied virtually every waking moment of Draco Malfoy’s existence for nearly a solid week. In truth, without the protection of his Dark Mark, he’d likely have been in detention until the end of the year for the amount of attention he’d failed to pay his classes, his teachers, or almost anything else in the same period of time.

    But that didn’t matter to him – not really. Not when, after years of humiliation, he finally had the means to destroy those Gryffindor fools once and for all!

    It should be noted at this point that Draco Malfoy had always had an obsessive personality. Mostly self-obsessive, to be sure, but the foundation was always in place. When added to a string of constant defeats over nearly seven years, and mounting losses that included the father he’d idolised, the teacher he’d respected, his own striking good looks, and finally his home, and his mother with it . . . Nobody had said it out loud, but even Crabbe and Goyle knew it: Draco had well and truly lost the proverbial plot.

    “Make sure everything’s in place!” he snapped. “I don’t want any surprises this time!” An unholy light shone in his eyes. “Weasley and Lovegood aren’t going to escape – and then Longbottom, Aozaki and Einzbern are going to pay.
    “Love will be cruel to who it entices — love will have its sacrifices.”

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    ... Malfoy, you overtly prideful idiot ... .

    That's all I want to say.
    “Evil or not, I refuse to accept this 'fate'.”

    Spoiler:
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    There is a need to pull reader in with emotional scenes. Therefore, when creating one, write it as if you were describing a painting.
    There is a need to give your reader relief with comedic scenes. Therefore, you need them short, and cut off from the drama.
    There is a need to create suspense with drama scenes. Therefore, show the thoughts of your characters, make readers relate to their problems.

    And there is a need for you in all of your scenes.
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    Well, now I've got time to work out exactly what he has in mind - and how it'll all fall apart.
    “Love will be cruel to who it entices — love will have its sacrifices.”

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kieran View Post
    Well, now I've got time to work out exactly what he has in mind - and how it'll all fall apart.
    Like a Jenga tower of epic heights hit with a sledgehammer.

    Oh yes, the bad lad's tears will be delicious.
    “Evil or not, I refuse to accept this 'fate'.”

    Spoiler:
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    There is a need to pull reader in with emotional scenes. Therefore, when creating one, write it as if you were describing a painting.
    There is a need to give your reader relief with comedic scenes. Therefore, you need them short, and cut off from the drama.
    There is a need to create suspense with drama scenes. Therefore, show the thoughts of your characters, make readers relate to their problems.

    And there is a need for you in all of your scenes.
    Create things you want to create; shape the world to your whim.
    For you are the author of your tale.


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    Bahaha, I just wanted to point out Draco went from stupidly obsessive, to stupidly nuts.

    For once I suggest you make his sudden dip into insanity one that makes him seem competent, if only to have it fall explosively in his face. In other words, leave an opening for a much more... cunning opponent. If said opponent wasn't already involved with Draco, mwahahaha!
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    That's sort of what I have in mind. I've got a couple of ideas, but nothing solid yet.
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    so who was in the nude again?

    ah yes, Hermione..
    I shall serve thy cause, upon my honour, till thy death.
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    I expect at least one of the trio at Hogwarts to say "That was too easy"... Thus tempting the woman with no self-control, and simultaneously alerting them something might be amiss.

    Next words will either be "It didn't top the previous years" or "What else could go wrong?" - with the implications that something big is lacking, and that there may be other forces to play their hand.

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    Quote Originally Posted by hatori View Post
    so who was in the nude again?

    ah yes, Hermione..
    Yup. It's that pesky requirement for using her cushion instead of a coffin.


    Though it should be pointed out that she's never done that before; she's taken one or either of them with her. She's been fairly adamant about not having them see her sleep (or, more accurately "die for the day"). So consider it an indication of just how badly she was rattled.



    Quote Originally Posted by Faraway-R View Post
    I expect at least one of the trio at Hogwarts to say "That was too easy"... Thus tempting the woman with no self-control, and simultaneously alerting them something might be amiss.

    Next words will either be "It didn't top the previous years" or "What else could go wrong?" - with the implications that something big is lacking, and that there may be other forces to play their hand.
    I had planned something along those lines, yes.
    “Love will be cruel to who it entices — love will have its sacrifices.”

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    Let's think:

    Malfoy has nothing to lose now, he's made that clear. He's lost his family, his looks, his home, and his money. There is nothing more dangerous than a man with nothing to lose. At this point, revenge driven idiot he might be, he knows the Scarlet Seven better than just about any other Slytherin due to constant exposure. He should know that they would always have a back-up plan. Neville himself isn't regarding Malfoy as a big threat, meaning that provided he has just enough luck he can probably do some real damage before he dies (let's be real here, letting him live would be crueler after everything he's been put through and he's got no reason not to try and go out with a bang rather than a whimper).

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    Again, that's pretty much what I'm planning.
    “Love will be cruel to who it entices — love will have its sacrifices.”

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    Wild guess time it is - he's going to use FiendFyre, like one of his Tweedles did in the Room of Requirement.

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    Unlikely, but the Tweedle might end up doing that - and in an enclosed corridor . . . *shudder*

    Like I said, this part takes careful planning. Especially if it's meant to be the diversionary attack, because the real one has to be worse.
    “Love will be cruel to who it entices — love will have its sacrifices.”

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    Well, on the other hand what's better to use as a diversionary attack if it's not something that would serve highly effective as main attack? I thought diversions were supposed to divert attention - and Draco certainly wants for it to be one true strike aganist the Seven.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kieran View Post
    Unlikely, but the Tweedle might end up doing that - and in an enclosed corridor . . . *shudder*

    Like I said, this part takes careful planning. Especially if it's meant to be the diversionary attack, because the real one has to be worse.
    Unless you subvert it and have the distraction be the more devastating attack. Have the trio realize its a distraction and prioritize it lower, only when they get back to it after the expected sneak attack, find that it unexpectedly ran amok/got much worse while they were preoccupied. Plus, it gives Draco some street cred as a viable enemy instead of a joke.
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    You both raise good points . . . Damn. I really need to consider this carefully.
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    Um okay wow great chapter. I was intending on offering some suggestions here but the ideas kept flowing and now i have an absolutely horrible​ sequence of events worked out and i don't know if you will want to use any of it so i'm going to PM you instead.

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    Seeing that moon of yours reminds me of Star Fox for some reason, haha.

    @Kieran: I suppose being vague myself made that gravy train start, eh? Guess I should be more in depth with my... suggestions and ideas from now on. Like when I went in depth about the Fidelius.

    Though I have to say, even though Draco is crazy, he isn't the type to think things through. Sure he might put a bit of extra effort into his actions and add a few ideas (even maybe procure a little more help), but I don't believe he is going to be that much different than he usually will be. Just that his sense of restraint will be completely gone like the Scarlet Seven's was years ago when they threatened to throw him out the window of the Express. How embarrassing is that? Though he did go to Daphne so it's completely in her hands what kind of damage Draco will do to achieve his objective (rather pedestrian in my opinion, but I'm biased by having the knowledge of the original Trinity being more experienced and powerful). My major concern when I was hinting to you how things were probably going to go that Shin might take advantage of the situation.

    At present, I would merely consider Shin and Draco enemies based on belief. Not necessarily by design or opposing sides.
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    A reasonably accurate analysis.
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    Chapter 34 – The Last Curse



    October 31, 1997






    The mission had been carefully planned out ahead of time. In this, Ilya’s help had been invaluable – specifically, her ability to recall Galen’s memories with complete accuracy, and his ability to remember (frequently verbatim) virtually anything he’d ever read. It wasn’t quite the same as having a set of blueprints, but it was damned handy, nonetheless.

    With an information source like that at hand, they’d already planned for a number of details that the movies had left out. For example, the fact that Apparition had been blocked in the Ministry – both ingoing and outgoing – which was why people were lined up to take the Floo to work in the first place. The higher-ups had their homes connected to the network, but the rank-and-file had to live with the commute, which explained the lineups to use the toilets.

    That, Shirou thought grimly, could’ve made escaping a tricky business, if I’d tried to take the same route that Hermione did in the movie.

    Another overlooked fact was that the witches and wizards entering the Ministry needed a security token to in order to enter the toilet stalls in the first place – a variation on pay toilets, he supposed, that they’d taken advantage of, much like the pay phone booth that served as the visitor’s entrance. But if he’d not had that information, and just gone by what had been shown in the movie . . .

    They’d probably have had me before I even got inside – or not long after, he admitted. After all, we can’t count on Riddle not having decent security – because unlike the movie, he has a functioning brain.

    Also
    unlike the movie, they lacked access to the Deathcloak in order to spend time spying on the Ministry entrance, in order to confirm routines and details – but at least that was a problem that had several solutions that lay within their power. Polyjuice Potion allowed for short-term spying, and Tonks’ Metamorphmagus nature gave her the ability to do quick passes, at least, even if it was becoming harder for her to hold a shape for lengthy periods. When added to the capabilities of modern surveillance equipment . . .

    Shirou had to hand it to Kiritsugu – his tendency to combine modern technology with magecraft in their universe of origin carried over here, as well. As a result, the Clock Tower had been stocked with any number of tools and devices that he, thanks to the experiences that had forged him into Archer, was intimately familiar with. Infrared scopes and cameras, directional microphones, electronic listening devices – anything an aspiring spy or assassin might conceivably need, at least for an infiltration.

    There were a handful of weapons, as well, of course – Kiritsugu did like sniper rifles, after all – and some medical supplies, but not much compared to the general utilities stuff. Which made sense, in Shirou’s mind; after all, the Clock Tower had been designed as a general resupply cache and safe house, not an armory or field hospital. Still, he found it enough to do the job – and with Rin and Ilya’s help (and the disbelieving assistance of Lupin and Tonks), they’d tested the limits of magic in protecting from mundane surveillance capability.

    Thus far, invisibility had proven to work only on the visible portions of the spectrum, but because the body or object it rendered invisible was still there, it was vulnerable to thermal imaging, for example. Sonar, as well – but then, as Shirou understood it, that was more or less how the Revelaspell with the incantation “Homenum revelio” worked, too. And using a Supersensory Charm would undoubtedly enable him to hear (and probably smell) an invisible foe, as well – so it was a minor victory, really. There were lots of ways around invisible opponents, mundane and magical, if you were creative enough.

    On the other hand, the charm that made properties Unplottable seemed to work regardless; no matter how they tried, they just couldn’t make the Ministry show up on any kind of map. Shirou suspected, after consulting with the girls, that the actual spell was some kind of broadcast psychic effect – meaning that the Ministry was there, but their minds simply slid over it. Even computer imaging suffered from the effect, with the area just not appearing so that it could be targeted, at least so long as a human mind was the one deciding the targets. This meant that, barring the use of artificial intelligences, Unplottable properties simply couldn’t come under direct attack.

    . . . The key word, of course, being “direct.” It could still be caught in a blast. Or, for that matter, having a guy with a beacon stand on top of the thing and flash a signal for a plane to aim at, though Shirou privately assumed it would mean the sacrifice of the signaller in the process. Simply leaving a beacon in place would reduce the target to a location again, otherwise, which likely meant that it would be erased from the shooter’s mind once more. It was the kind of loophole that magic would have, based on his experience.

    But of course, he had no real way to test that at the moment.

    The listening equipment, sadly, was less effective. Once again, Shirou suspected that it was a psychic effect, scrambling or silencing what the listener heard, rather than the actual sounds. Regardless, the microphones couldn’t pick it up at any distance or sensitivity, at least as far as they could tell – but again, a computer might have had more luck than a human operator.

    In fact, a similar theory had brought him here, to test the possibility – more specifically, the fact that the aura and abilities of a Dementor were less effective on an Animagus in animal form. The reason for that was because the Animagus’ animal form, while possessing human-level intelligence and with the appropriate memories, still mostly thought like an animal, and he’d wondered if the spells were as specific in their targeting, such that an Animagus could slip past them.

    This was how Shirou found himself where he currently was – in his eagle form, and roosting on top of a high-rise overlooking the Ministry entrance. Of course, there were other reasons. For starters, the Animagus transformation (and nature) didn’t register on any sensor they were aware of, so he could hide with impunity, even if he did have to hide fairly high up – golden eagles weren’t exactly a common sight in Britain.

    But then, like any raptor, their sight and hearing were phenomenally sharp, having been designed to detect assorted (and sometimes mouse-sized) prey from a couple of miles above ground. So it wasn’t exactly difficult for him to deal with. As far away as he was, he could still see and hear everything that was going on beneath his perch.

    Everything there is to see, at least, the part of him that was still Shirou amended. The rest simply concentrated, taking in the rhythms and routines of those its other half had designated “prey/potential enemy.”

    Not for the first time, Shirou blessed both the Occlumency lessons that had taught him to order his mind, and the Animagus Potion that had allowed his animal and human aspects to meld. The result left him safely shielded behind the eagle’s thoughts and instincts, but still capable of processing everything it took in with a human eye. And as he watched, he noted a couple of people the movies tagged as traitors and/or Ministry lackeys, like Albert Runcorn, as well as noting the distinct lack of Weasley red among the hair colours of those below.

    Inwardly, Shirou frowned. He’d kind of been hoping Arthur Weasley would be around – or, failing him, Percy. According to what he knew of canon, the pair of them had shown up to work, at least in the early days of the regime, and if Riddle wanted to send the message that all was status quo, then he needed that department running. Arthur Weasley was a Department Head, whether the current Ministry liked it or not, with a dozen people reporting to him. If he wasn’t showing up for work, then things looked bad, in multiple ways.

    They would be highly motivated to get Arthur to show up to work, at least for now – and that definitely wasn’t good, especially with their access to Ginny as a way to force compliance . . . The former Servant considered that for a while, ultimately asking himself what it meant.

    Did Ginny get to Hogwarts? Shirou wondered. It doesn’t seem likely that she’d have left Luna by herself – but it seems even less likely that Arthur Weasley would allow a situation where his daughter could be tortured, particularly as a means to assert control over her family.

    Shirou briefly, for just an instant, imagined what he would do to avoid bringing Ai to harm – and what he would to anyone that dared to commit that harm. No, neither Arthur nor Molly would’ve allowed anything to happen to Ginny, no matter the cost. So what, then, was going on?

    It made the reason they were planning to infiltrate the Ministry all the more urgent, really. Not simply to disrupt its workings – although that was high on the list, naturally – but to find out what the Ministry knew about their potential allies. Several members of the Order of the Phoenix had been present at Bill and Fleur Weasley’s wedding, but they’d scattered upon hearing that the Ministry had fallen, and their own group could use some additional manpower and competency.

    Not that the Clock Tower had room for dozens of people, admittedly, but the addition of skilled Aurors like Kingsley Shacklebolt, or Mad-Eye Moody, would be handy if it could be arranged. Even just the Weasley twins could be an asset . . .

    Besides, Shirou thought, sooner or later we’re going to need an army – so we need to know where to find it.

    Lacking any clues of their own, the Ministry was the best place to start looking, if for no other reason than to erase their records of “Undesirables.” Whatever knowledge they had, after all, they couldn’t be allowed to keep – but there was nothing wrong in Shirou and his group using it for their own purposes, either. And the only other reliable way to find out would be to break into Hogwarts and ask Ginny or Luna, which was something Shirou wasn’t prepared to do – yet.

    Hogwarts will be the
    last stop, he reminded himself. When those last two Horcruxes are destroyed, Shiki is rescued, and we’ve done as much damage as we can, then we’ll go to Hogwarts. School or not, it was literally built to withstand a siege, and drawing in Riddle and his army would mean that all of them would be in one place, and up against the best defensive position Shirou could possibly think of. If there was anywhere on the planet that they were likely to beat the Death Eaters, it was there.

    But that time was far in the future. For now, they needed to worry about getting into – and just as importantly, out of – the Ministry. It would be a challenging task . . . But not today’s. Today, after all, was Hallowe’en – and neither Shirou nor Ilya was willing to tempt the universal tradition of bad luck today (or especially tonight).

    Though maybe it won’t be as bad, since it has to spread out among the bunch of us, Shirou mused. Either way, however, the Einzberns intended to keep their heads down, and let the usual curse pass them by, if at all possible.

    He felt extremely sorry for whomever of them it did happen to land on this year, though.






    Even though it had been anticipated, the attack caught them by surprise when it finally came.

    Ginny blamed herself, for becoming complacent. It was a tradition that these events, whenever they happened, took place during or immediately after the Hallowe’en feast. Even as the curse increased in severity, its timing had remained the same each year, and as such, she hadn’t been as on guard against as she could have been. Just because it hadn’t happened earlier before, didn’t mean that it couldn’t, and most of their strategy teachers would’ve torn a strip off of her for thinking that way.

    On reflection, however, she doubted that it would’ve ultimately mattered. Generally speaking, when you were within sight of an approaching tidal wave, there wasn’t a lot you could do to avoid it.

    It began after Potions class, which was the most natural site for an ambush, given that it was down in the dungeons. The N.E.W.T.-level class, as run by Slughorn, didn’t have as high a ratio of Slytherins in it as Snape’s would have – Slughorn wasn’t as strict in his admittance rules, and he did mark fairly – but there]were still a good number of them. And given that they were not too far from the Slytherin dorms, ample backup was available for them. So in that sense, Ginny did have only herself to blame; she should have known better than to be anything less than absolutely aware of her surroundings.

    To be fair, however, they did have some warning. Ginny and Luna had taken to wearing their charmed Galleons on a chain around their necks, which was normally quite well-hidden by their robes. As such, when the coins grew warm, both girls knew to surreptitiously check one or both of their communication mirrors. And when they were together, it was usually Ginny’s – she was considered prettier by most, or at least, thought to care more about her appearance. Pulling out a pocket mirror to “check her hair” wouldn’t be thought of as unusual, whereas Luna’s blithe disregard for people’s opinions of her appearance was equally well known.

    Neville’s appeared in a cloud of fog, like condensing breath. When he spoke, it was in Japanese, and at a volume only their animal-keen hearing could understand.

    “You’re being boxed in by Slytherins,” he warned. “There’s a corridor to your right– with luck, you can slip by before that end of the cordon is in place, and make your way into the kitchens.”

    Ginny mentally calculated the number of people needed to create an effective cordon, and winced – they’d be outnumbered at least twelve to one if they got caught, and probably more than that. In close combat, that wasn’t actually too bad, because the other side could only come at them from so many directions, but when facing those kinds of odds at a distance, and especially when in a confined space like the castle corridor . . .

    Then they might as well be a firing squad, she thought grimly. Oh, they’d make a good show of it, but having to take on that many attackers, from that many angles, didn’t make for the best of odds.

    In which case, Neville’s plan was a good one: slip by before they managed to finish blockading the passage, and fight their way past them if necessary. All they needed was a bit of lead time – if they could find a spot out of the immediate sight of students or portraits, a quick Disillusionment Charm or Animagus transformation would go a long way to throwing them off the scent. Preferably the Disillusionment, really, since there wasn’t really a great place for a fox and skunk to blend in within the castle itself.

    If we could get outside, to the Forest, then hiding would be a lot easier – but how?

    As Ginny thought up and discarded ideas as quickly as she could, it was Luna who came up with a plan. And unsurprisingly, it was a crazy plan, but one that might just work.

    “If we can get to an empty classroom, or even a broom cupboard,” she whispered, “then Neville can ‘require’ a door to it, like they did with the Chamber of Secrets in first year.”

    Ginny remembered that – to be honest, she was momentarily shocked that she’d forgotten – and she nodded. Neville recovered just as quickly, and glanced down for an instant before snapping out, “Left, now!

    They dove for the corner, and spun into the door. It was a broom cupboard, and more than a little cozy, even for girls as petite as they were, but that wasn’t really a consideration at the moment. Instead, Ginny was layering every possible defence she could think of on the door and the wall surrounding the frame. Once she’d finished, Luna began Conjuring a plane of stone to overlay it. It wasn’t very thick, and it was slow going, given the size and complexity of the material, but gradually the front wall began to be swallowed by an expanding mass of –

    “Is that marble?” Ginny asked incredulously.

    In the darkness of the cupboard, she felt more than saw Luna’s answering nod.

    “There’s no reason why it can’t be pretty, is there?” the other witch asked innocently.

    Any reply Ginny might have made was cut off by the sound of scraping stone. Both witches turned to see a door outline itself in the back wall, which opened inward to reveal Neville.

    “Come on!” he exhorted.

    They obeyed, darted through the open portal, and Neville was quick to slam the door.

    That was close,” Ginny declared with a tense sigh.

    “Very,” Luna admitted, looking a little pale despite her normally unflappable disposition.

    “Yeah,” Neville agreed seriously, before his lips quirked in a smile. “Though I would like to see the look on Malfoy’s face when he tracks you back to that cupboard, and breaks in, only to find out you’re not there . . .”

    As the words left his mouth, a mirror formed on the wall that had only seconds before held a door, and its surface rippled for a moment before clearing to show –






    “WHERE DID THEY GO?” Malfoy roared. “You can’t Apparate in Hogwarts – FIND THEM!”

    Shin could hear his bellow from halfway down the corridor, two corners away. His eyebrows rose, if only in the metaphorical sense – while his opinion of Malfoy’s quality as a tactician, wizard, and general living being was very low, it seemed almost impossible that two witches would’ve managed to disappear from his sight in less than a hundred feet. It seemed especially ludicrous when the castle’s enchantments did prevent anyone from Disapparating – so that left simply hiding as the only possible alternative. And between the spells available, and the fact that it was a corridor, there were only so many ways to possibly accomplish that –

    The sounds of spells striking stone caught his ears, and the Japanese wizard quickened his pace. He needed to know whether the fool was simply having a temper tantrum, or whether the girls had barricaded themselves in. The former seemed all too likely, but the latter option . . .

    If the two witches had managed not only to evade, but prepare defences against their trap, it argued for superior intelligence-gathering capabilities on their side. Possibly one of them was a Seer, or they had a traitor within their own ranks, or they had some unknown means of monitoring conversations, even within the Slytherin dorms – and Shin honestly didn’t know which option he’d have preferred to be true.

    Regardless of which one it actually was, however, he arrived in time to see his would-be patsy blast through the last of a stone slab that was blocking the entrance to a broom cupboard. As the dust cloud cleared, it revealed a hollow expanse in the process – there was no sign of either witch.

    The blond let out an infuriated screech. His eyes were wild, and there was actual froth at the corners of his mouth – like a rabid dog.

    Inwardly, the Tohno scion snorted. If ever there was evidence required that the ways of Nihon were superior, it was currently howling madly in front of him.

    The truly amusing aspect of all this was, by the standards of the British pure-bloods, he himself would be little more than a creature – the bloodline of too many magical beasts strengthened his own. And yet, Malfoy was equally repugnant by his own standards. His blood might be magical, but he was of foreign blood – even here, in his nominal home. Mal foi, after all, was French for “bad faith,” which meant that his family was not even truly British in origin.

    If Britain ever decided to hold itself to the same standards as Nihon did (an act which could only improve the country, in Shin’s opinion), Malfoy’s status would drop to reflect his nature, showing him for the mongrel he was. And he was a mongrel whose usefulness, the Japanese wizard decided, had finally been reduced by events to a single purpose.

    It wasn’t how Shin would have preferred to do things, but however it had been done, the girls’ escape implied that they were more formidable (and potentially more dangerous) than he’d originally assumed. At the very least, he couldn’t rule out their anticipating his ambush at the Quidditch game – which meant that he would have to employ his backup plan. It would be less satisfying to do so, lacking the personal touch he’d have preferred, but so long as it was effective . . .

    Aloud, however, Shin announced, “Calm yourself, Malfoy-san” as he appeared around the corner. Stopping some distance away, he continued, “There are other ways to achieve our ends.”

    How?” Malfoy demanded, sneering. “The bitches always seem to be two steps ahead of us this year – how are you going to get them?”

    Shin smiled. “By making them come to us, of course – and giving everyone else a reason to after them in the process.”

    He withdrew a potion-filled phial from one pocket of his robes, and a box similar to a cigarette case from another. Opening it and handing it off to one of the others gathered around, the Japanese wizard continued conversationally, “You know, it’s remarkable what is often overlooked. For example, while the Gryffindor dormitories are protected by a password, the Quidditch changing rooms are communal among all four houses. And while the servants who clean Hogwarts are quite diligent, not even they can be everywhere at once – which means, if you are clever, patient, swift, and possessed of a strong stomach, you can acquire remarkable treasures.”

    He popped open the phial with his thumb. With his other hand, he delicately extracted a long red hair from the case with a set of slender tweezers, which he dropped into the potion. It caused a sudden, violent change in colour and consistency, and Shin downed it swiftly. His inhuman heritage would normally have rebelled against the changes it brought on, but such was his mastery of his body that he could force it to accept the metamorphosis.

    Draco sneered. “And what just good will you turning yourself into Weasley do?”

    “Quite a bit,” Shin assured him, even as he mentally adjusted himself to the height, balance and reach of his new, female form. “For example, Weasley’s older brother would trust me, appearing like this – and we could hold him hostage until she or Lovegood appeared to rescue him.”

    If possible, the boy’s sneer became more pronounced. “From what I’ve heard, your last attempt at hostage-taking didn’t turn out so well.”

    A spike of anger stabbed hot in Shin’s chest, but he worked to keep his tone cool as he answered, “You’re right – which is why I have another way in mind for making Weasley pay for what she’s done to you.”

    “And what do you know about what she’s done to me?” Malfoy demanded.

    Malfoy’s wand was already out, but Shin was faster than he was, by far – and he knew far faster and less obvious spells that worked just as well at accomplishing their purpose as bellowing “Avada Kedavra” at the top of his lungs did. To his surprise, opening the top of Malfoy’s skull revealed that it had contained a brain, after all.

    “Well, to begin with – she’s murdered you.”








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