I like this story so far. Saw some slipups where you referred to the girls as "him" but other than that it was fine. Seems like this is going to be mostly OC stuff but I'm being drawn into the story so that's fine. Although learning more about the connections between this and canon would be good.
He never sleeps. He never dies.
Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.
Ah, i remember reading this story before i joined BL and it certainly does get my interest. One qustion though, is this gonna e an all OC story?
Originally Posted by LJ3
Nice, this sets things up nicely. I can see Sisu being the really snarky type of guy, he's also really interesting in his possible past. I wonder where he got those scars...
The main focus will be on the OC characters, but I cannot say that canon things won't make an appearance, either...
For some reason, that sound terribly ominous
Me? Ominous? Never.
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