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    Magical Girl Noir Quest Gaiden - Forgotten Story

    Magical Girl Noir Quest
    Gaiden

    A Choose Your Own Adventure Story

    }´{

    Foreword

    }´{

    Hi, guys, it's been a while, hasn't it? I'm sorry for disappearing from the RP section without much warning. I haven't been writing as much as of late and have instead been focusing on my other hobby: drawing. However, due to Fishie's insistence, I've been trying to fix that and get back into writing again. I suppose this could be considered a warm up for going back to certain writing and RP projects that have been left in the backburner for far too long. So I hope that if you've enjoyed reading my RP posts before that you'll also enjoy playing through this little project of mine.

    This is going to be a Choose Your Own Adventure story based heavily on Puella Magi Madoka Magica/Magical Girl Noir Quest. If you're unfamiliar with both or either of these, don't worry, I'll be keeping things as simple as possible so that you can jump in, read, choose your own adventure, and still have a good time. In fact, it's probably better if you're unfamiliar! It'll add to the mystery and tension!

    And, yes, before you ask, I did get Deculture's permission for this. I can only hope to live up to his expectations.

    At any rate, here is how things will work out: I'll post story scenes and their choices. After a period of voting, I'll post the next scene, adding links so as to connect the entire story; so you don't have to worry about voting or commenting because all the relevant posts will be linked to each other. We will continue the process of scene, vote, scene until we arrive at a choice that I have not written yet. This unwritten choice will be the next scene that I write and we'll keep going until we complete that particular path. Once a path is finished we can go back and write a different end to the story!

    Fun, right?

    Now, before we begin, I have to thank a few people without whom I would never have undertaken this project. So, I would like to thank Alfheimwanderer, Velsper the Cat, AFaceIntheCrowd, and xyxxyDenton for their invaluable feedback, editing, and countless contributions. Thank you, hero, for being an awesome guinea pig for my early ideas on this CYOA. I would also like to thank Airen and Israelhexen for giving me the final push to go ahead and post this.

    Most importantly, I would like to thank Deculture for writing Magical Girl Noir Quest and getting me back into drawing and writing and providing me with the inspiration to do this and all the awesome moments that his quest has provided.

    Thanks guys.

    Lastly, I hope you guys enjoy this. Even if you cannot participate consistently, even if you only give this a cursory read, thank you, everyone, for sparing me your time.

    Now, let's begin the opening act!

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    }´{

    You are a Magical Girl.

    A fancy term used to snare young girls and conceal the truth: that you’re nothing more than a killer for hire.

    An assassin.

    And right now you’re staggering slowly through filthy deserted alleys, clutching at your stomach with your left arm as your right hangs limply at your side. Trying to stem the blood flow from the nasty gash at your stomach has proven to be completely hopeless, your limited regeneration sadly inadequate at closing the persistent wound. At times like this, you find yourself envying that uptight blue haired bitch and her enhanced regeneration. It would sure come in handy right now.

    Without warning, you find yourself feeling dizzy and you can’t stop yourself from slipping on a grimy puddle, your body tripping awkwardly as you lose your footing. Somehow you manage to keep yourself from falling forward, but your shoulder slams painfully into a wall, streaking it with red and forcing a small groan from your lips; the force of the impact nearly knocking your glasses off your face.

    ...You’re exhausted.

    Each breath is an agony; coming in short, ragged gasps and wheezes that leave your lungs burning with each exhalation. Your left arm is trembling; you can’t stop it, the gun in your hand feels heavy and just about to fall in between your nerveless fingers, and your right arm? Completely useless. You can’t even feel it anymore.

    [#01]You stand up and push on forward. You can’t stop here. You have no time to spare.
    [#02]You lean against the wall and stop. You’ve earned a small rest.
    [#??]Other: Write-in.

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    #1.

    Stopping is never a good idea. Also it's not shonen
    Spoiler:
    Death is nothing but a disease.
    But it is one that often comes from all sides.
    An end like that is coming, and yet here you are.

    Tell me.

    Could you kill someone you love for the sake of everyone else?


    What a cynical worldview, Messiah.
    Real heroes would find a different answer.


    Right, right.
    The power to break through a sad realityŚ
    I wonderŚ

    Will they be able to show it to me?



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    [#02] You lean against the wall and stop. You’ve earned a small rest.

    laziness max
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    [#01]You stand up and push on forward. You can’t stop here. You have no time to spare.

    WE GOTTA KEEP GOING.
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    Magical girls need no working out.
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    #1.

    Well, after being included in the foreword like that, I couldn't not register, now could I! Let's get this show on the road~

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    I remember this~

    Let's aim for a no bad end run...

    <.<

    >.>

    <.<

    Push forward >.>
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    2 rest is never a bad end


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    (1) Push forward. Besides, an alley is hardly an ideal place to get caught in.
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    [#02]You lean against the wall and stop. Youĺve earned a small rest.

    A quick stop to try and recover strength, rather than pushing on weakened to face whatever nasties the future holds in such a state.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    [#02]You lean against the wall and stop. You’ve earned a small rest.
    Goin' for lazy Noir mahou shoujo.
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
    F/GO SUPPORT

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    [#01]You stand up and push on forward. You can’t stop here. You have no time to spare.

    Cause tie break.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Mike1984 View Post
    Besides, I don't see what's so terrible about looting anyway. It's only property, they're not actually harming anyone.
    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    when I say hero I don't mean hero in the spirit sense. I mean a morally grounded, good natured person who doesn't slaughter innocent people. No such person exists in the Nasuverse.
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    }´{
    [#01]
    }´{

    With a grunt of annoyance, you stumble forward with desperate strength, your heels somehow finding steady purchase in the grime and the refuse. Each step is agony, yes, but you can’t stop here. You can’t die. Not yet. You still have too much left to do. If you stop, you’re dead. The only choice is to keep moving, regardless of the consequences.

    One foot, then the other.

    Splish, splosh.

    Gasp, wheeze.

    You hear nothing else other than your own labored breathing and your steps splashing from one disgusting filmy puddle to the next. Still, some way, somehow, you find the energy to keep on pushing forward. Is it hope? Is it fear? Whatever is driving you at this point is unimportant. All that you know is that you cannot afford to stop. To stop is to die. You cannot let your hunters catch up to you; you must escape, no matter the cost.

    One foot, then the other...

    Splish, splosh.

    You’re on the wrong side of the old game of predator and prey - the last thing you want is to make a lot of noise, and here you are making a lot of noise. But it can’t be helped. Grievously wounded, exhausted beyond measure, the ability to control your own limbs is inexorably slipping away, and yet, you can’t afford to stop. Not now.

    One foot, then the other...

    Out of the corner of your eye, you see something move ahead of you, causing your blood to freeze in your veins. Did they catch up to you already? No, wait...

    A pink and white costume adorned with black ribbons.

    A smiling face with pure midnight eyes.

    Pinky.

    Your one clear memory, the only thing that you can remember about your past, is the smiling rose haired girl - the Witch - before you ripping your heart out.

    The black eyed Witch from your nightmares is standing just a few steps before you and yet... you lift your eyes and look around, but the world is normal; not the dull gray hues of time stop, the tell-tale sign which heralds both the use of your powers and her appearances. You are not in frozen time so what is she doing here? What the hell is going on?

    [#04]Stop and try to talk to her. Something strange is going on here.
    [#05]Ignore her. It’s just a hallucination. You have to keep going.

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    [#05]Ignore her. It’s just a hallucination. You have to keep going.
    If we're going down this road, we can't talk to any Witches or strangers unless we know we can slap them across Noir Albuquerque.
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
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    [#04]Stop and try to talk to her. Something strange is going on here.


    quotes
    Quote Originally Posted by Mike1984 View Post
    Besides, I don't see what's so terrible about looting anyway. It's only property, they're not actually harming anyone.
    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    when I say hero I don't mean hero in the spirit sense. I mean a morally grounded, good natured person who doesn't slaughter innocent people. No such person exists in the Nasuverse.
    [00:12] <~Katie> i can't defy my origin
    [00:12] <~Katie> of gay memes

    [16:15] <~Katie> lesbians has always been my gimmick and i will exploit it to the fullest

    [22:56] <@Sei> airen is pegging hero this time
    [22:56] <@Sei> for once airen isn't the uke
    [22:56] <@Kuroyuki> I thought Air was the Woman in the Relationship?
    [22:56] <@Airen> Yeah I kinda thought I was the girl too!

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    [#05]Ignore her.

    she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there she's not there

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    [#5.]Ignore her.

    Witches aren't real guys.

    >.>
    Spoiler:
    Death is nothing but a disease.
    But it is one that often comes from all sides.
    An end like that is coming, and yet here you are.

    Tell me.

    Could you kill someone you love for the sake of everyone else?


    What a cynical worldview, Messiah.
    Real heroes would find a different answer.


    Right, right.
    The power to break through a sad realityŚ
    I wonderŚ

    Will they be able to show it to me?



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    Quote Originally Posted by Airen View Post
    [#5.]Ignore her.

    Witches aren't real guys.

    >.>
    Red Truth saying Witches aren't real. gg Airen. gg.
    Quote Originally Posted by Seika View Post
    Yes, excellent. Go, Lyco, my proxy.
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    This is the anime version of crazy cat lady, right?
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    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    [#04]Stop and try to talk to her. Something strange is going on here.

    diplomacy plz
    [Feb/Wed/04|07:00:04] <Lianru> it's ok with each stalker call I feel like we get a little closer
    [Feb/Wed/04|07:00:06] <Lianru> never give up

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