Finished chapter 7, liking the buildup so far. Great job with the translation McJon.
I have a few edits to contribute:
Chapter 4, Secret Resolution:
"She walked briskly through this long, moonlit hallway, before finally arriving at the deepest part of ^the east wing."
- missing "the"
Chapter 7, Fairy Tale Garden:
"The ceramic pot had excellent heat retention, so XtheX it was still warm."
- extra "the"
"Or perhaps, a forgotten, faded world of pictures from a somber fairy tail."
- tail/tale mixup