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  1. April 22nd, 2013, 01:06 AM #21
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    I didn't know Moczo was the one who wrote this, though I really should have.

    It's still my favorite Humor fic for the contest. Sure, the characterization was exaggerated, but that can work sometimes. And it did here.

    The Hannah parts were probably my favorite parts of the story. I totally ship her with Rin. (it was inevitable)
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  2. April 22nd, 2013, 10:08 AM #22
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    Quote Originally Posted by DezoPenguin View Post
    Eleven hours ago. You reeeeallly need to get that boy on Author Alert!
    Gah, dammit, I really do. I just avoid Author Alert like the plague.


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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    Gah, dammit, I really do. I just avoid Author Alert like the plague.
    *blink* Why is that? There's maybe four authors that I read that I ever go, "Nah, not that fandom, skip" and even then one tap of the delete button on the e-mail solves the problem. And it's really handy for people like you, Moczo, or deathcurse from whom I'd read a novella-length dissertation on how to darn a sock (even though I know that if it was deathcurse, they'd find out at the end that the sock didn't fit the person's foot any more!).
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  4. April 22nd, 2013, 12:15 PM #24
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    Quote Originally Posted by DezoPenguin View Post
    *blink* Why is that? There's maybe four authors that I read that I ever go, "Nah, not that fandom, skip" and even then one tap of the delete button on the e-mail solves the problem. And it's really handy for people like you, Moczo, or deathcurse from whom I'd read a novella-length dissertation on how to darn a sock (even though I know that if it was deathcurse, they'd find out at the end that the sock didn't fit the person's foot any more!).
    I'm just really picky about letting my inbox get flooded with alerts, I guess. And since I regularly check my favorite authors anyway, I've never seen much of a point of having anyone on Author Alert. I just didn't think Moczo would be so quick to post the story to FF.net!


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  5. April 22nd, 2013, 12:19 PM #25
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    Quote Originally Posted by Moczo View Post
    Hannah smiled at him. “Not anymore. Dentist school, here I come!” she said cheerfully, skipping off with her bag.
    Fame and fortune, fame and fortune
    We're off to seek them now
    Anyone can have them both
    It just takes the right know-how
    We put on our traveling shoes today
    We won't stop until we find the way
    To fame and fortune, fame and fortune
    They will be ours someday


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  6. April 22nd, 2013, 12:30 PM #26
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    Be a dentist!

    Kotomine missed his calling.
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    There is nothing either good or bad but thinking makes it so. - William Shakespeare


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  7. April 23rd, 2013, 09:44 PM #27
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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    I'm just really picky about letting my inbox get flooded with alerts, I guess. And since I regularly check my favorite authors anyway, I've never seen much of a point of having anyone on Author Alert. I just didn't think Moczo would be so quick to post the story to FF.net!
    In your defense:

    A) I never put anyone on Author Alert either, so it's not just you.
    B) I'm usually way lazier than that, yes.

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    Be a dentist!

    Kotomine missed his calling.
    ... Well, if all you want to do is inflict pain, it's definitely not the worst career. And think how much trouble and murder could have been avoided!

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    Quote Originally Posted by kay4today View Post
    I didn't know Moczo was the one who wrote this, though I really should have.

    It's still my favorite Humor fic for the contest. Sure, the characterization was exaggerated, but that can work sometimes. And it did here.

    The Hannah parts were probably my favorite parts of the story. I totally ship her with Rin. (it was inevitable)
    Exaggerated Characterization is half the fun of humor. That's my story, and I'm stickin' to it.

    And Hannah was the best OC I have ever written, ever.
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    I think it's less that we're elitist assholes and more that that's just plain terrible.
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    Jesus fucking christ on a hopped up crutch.

    Part of being a writer is to fuck what people think and tell you and just write. Write to prove the naysayers wrong. Throw your giant brass testies on the table and say, "Look at that bitch, I wrote it. Fuck yeah."

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  8. April 23rd, 2013, 10:51 PM #28
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    I thought the dentist thing was some reference to Hermione. Anyway funny. The Star Wars thing was a bit forced, but the majority of the fic was rather good.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Moczo View Post
    And Hannah was the best OC I have ever written, ever.
    I don't know. The Shinigami therapist was a real great laugh every time she came up in Uninvited Guests.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moczo View Post
    Exaggerated Characterization is half the fun of humor. That's my story, and I'm stickin' to it.

    And Hannah was the best OC I have ever written, ever.
    Objection! IMO Amaterasu in your 'Infinity' fic is the better OC. At least back in her heyday of hitting on Signum, making snide remarks about Fate's age in regards to her looks, and combining forces with Hayate in her perverseness anyway.
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  11. April 24th, 2013, 08:38 AM #31
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    This Fic just reminds me of the potential humor fic I could have written if not for the wall that wants to keep proverbially kicking my mind's butt.
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  12. April 24th, 2013, 10:56 AM #32
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    Quote Originally Posted by Moczo View Post

    And Hannah was the best OC I have ever written, ever.
    Susanoo.
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    Oh, man, you ruined it, I was typing up a big thing about how "three reams" equals 3000 sheets of paper, and that it connects back to the ancient Japanese legend about how folding a thousand paper cranes will grant you a single wish. It was going to be wonderful.
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    Not really, more like he knows that realistically he can't save everyone but he's going to strive to do so no matter what regardless, because Fuck The Ideal Police.
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  13. April 24th, 2013, 10:57 AM #33
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    Quote Originally Posted by DezoPenguin View Post
    Susanoo.
    I agree.


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  14. April 24th, 2013, 09:24 PM #34
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    ... Okay, so I made a few good OC's. XD
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    Jesus fucking christ on a hopped up crutch.

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  15. April 24th, 2013, 10:39 PM #35
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    Quote Originally Posted by Moczo View Post
    ... Okay, so I made a few good OC's. XD
    You've made plenty of good OCs!


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    I haven't read Infinity, so Hannah is still the best~
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    Quote Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
    You've made plenty of good OCs!
    It's actually not as hard as most people act like it is... a good writer knows what makes a good character. I mean, you don't typically use them, but you turned Ayaka from a blank slate into a totally lovable bundle of woobieness who has actually made me tear up a little in empathy. And by the end of your Shadowverse both Lutecia and Vivio had basically become characters totally unique from the canon, and they were both way, way more interesting than the canon as well. It's not exactly the same, since you had a basic framework, but I'd call it close enough: they were your characters, made from basically the ground up.

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    I haven't read Infinity, so Hannah is still the best~
    The dentistry wins her a lot of points.
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    Part of being a writer is to fuck what people think and tell you and just write. Write to prove the naysayers wrong. Throw your giant brass testies on the table and say, "Look at that bitch, I wrote it. Fuck yeah."

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moczo View Post
    It's actually not as hard as most people act like it is... a good writer knows what makes a good character. I mean, you don't typically use them, but you turned Ayaka from a blank slate into a totally lovable bundle of woobieness who has actually made me tear up a little in empathy. And by the end of your Shadowverse both Lutecia and Vivio had basically become characters totally unique from the canon, and they were both way, way more interesting than the canon as well. It's not exactly the same, since you had a basic framework, but I'd call it close enough: they were your characters, made from basically the ground up.
    Kind of like Aiden's Altrouge.~ :3
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    Quote Originally Posted by kay4today View Post
    I haven't read Infinity, so Hannah is still the best~
    You should read it, it's good.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    Kind of like Aiden's Altrouge.~ :3
    Exactly, actually! Altrouge in 'canon' is basically... a wikipedia article of minor details. Aiden made her a character.

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