Hardest Choice Ever [Lemon]

[mAc Chaos]

This reminds me of some crazy Ranma 1/2 parody or something.

[ratstsrub]

“It is kind enough to include one escape clause.” Rin said with a smirk, “If one of us dies, the survivors are released from any obligations.”

Actually, with this sentence, I immediately thought that she was gonna ask him to die.

=|

[Servant Shiki]

Doesn't have to be smut. Would love to read a Caren/Shirou comedy.

Sure, why not write more Fate fics! Its not like there is a thousand of them, meanwhile we have a pile of Tsukihime fics to read.

[Arashi_Leonhart]

Dude, we get it, you want more Tsuki, but your complaints only make fic writer's resistance funnier.

[Kieran]

Suddenly, Kiritsugu is Genma! =P

Nice to know I'm not the only one who had that thought.

Nice work, Pata. XD

Very - thank you for it.

[Servant Shiki]

Dude, we get it, you want more Tsuki, but your complaints only make fic writer's resistance funnier.

Eh, I'm usually more capable of keeping those comments to myself, I don't know why that one just slipped trough.

[Kelnish]

Sure, why not write more Fate fics! Its not like there is a thousand of them, meanwhile we have a pile of Tsukihime fics to read.

I think it's funny because there is a pile of Tsukihime fics but like, 1 kinda sorta notes fic, that one russian DDD fic, and like five canaan fics.

[Flere821]

Oh wow, this was brilliantly funny I guess I'm too used to top quality lemon by others such as Elf or Arashi, so I was mostly laughing instead of being aroused when I read this.

[Arashi_Leonhart]

I think it's funny because there is a pile of Tsukihime fics but like, 1 kinda sorta notes fic, that one russian DDD fic, and like five canaan fics.

Yeah, but Notes is hardly long enough to even develop much interest in, no fanfic writers care about DDD, and Canaan really doesn't have an excuse so yeah we need more Canaan.

[Lycodrake]

...Canaan really doesn't have an excuse so yeah we need more Canaan.

More sugoi sugoi sugoi~ Maria x Canaan.
Also Alphard. The world can never have enough Alphard.

[KAIZA]

Okay, I laughed way more than I should have. Good work, Pata.

[Frantic Author]

“Good evening, Emiya-kun,”

I didn't read anymore the instant you didn't have a comma, which is the ​most basic part of dialogue ever

[ratstsrub]

Hey hey, if you're gonna be a pedant, start with the first line!

Authors note: Please do not take this terrible tale of bad jokes and smut any seriously then I did.

Then instead of than? No wai! Wut is any seriously? Authors note?

You shouldn't even have gotten to the dialogue, for shame for continuing on!

[Pata Hikari]

I didn't read anymore the instant you didn't have a comma, which is the ​most basic part of dialogue ever

Thank you for pointing out this typo, who's presence reverberates throughout all I have created and brings to ruin my whole writing career. Destroying my body and soul, reducing me to a hollow shell, doomed to wander for eternity.

Also, wouldn't it be a period since it's the end of a sentence and there's no "X Said" afterwords.

[Frantic Author]

“Evening Senpai.” Sakura said. “Can we come in?

Clearly you know how to do dialogue good when the sentence like right after that breaks the rule you just used to argue with me

[Pata Hikari]

Arguing?

I would never do that.

I am merely a humble wretch, recoiling to the true failure of my works.

Nay, I am grateful to people helping me by pointing out errors, both big and small. Surely you have only the kindest motives in aiding a miserable being like myself.

[SeiKeo]

Clearly you know how to do dialogue good when the sentence like right after that breaks the rule you just used to argue with me[/FONT]

well

[mAc Chaos]

frantic author's avatar surprisingly relevant