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    Ah, Viva Youth! (FE: Awakening Comic)

    So...I got this idea some time ago...not sure from where. Still, after thinking about it for a while, while at the same time being horribly mangled at college, I started writing it out. I did have some doubts about whether it should have been a fanfic or a comic; each one had its strengths and weaknesses.

    In the end, I chose comic, since might as well practice while doing this. Also, I decided not to use any dialogue whatsoever, to see if I can convey the right idea just with images. Time will tell if I made the right choice.

    As such, I apologize in advance for the quality of the images and possible inconsistencies.

    The story will be divided into chapters, I guess, though it'll be just a few. Four chapters, tops. All in all, it'll be a short story. Hell, if I had written it as a fanfic, it would have been a one-shot.

    Anyways, enjoy.
    EDIT: Oh, before I forget. Minor spoilers here. You've been warned.

    Reads right to left, because yes.
    Index:
    Chapter 1 (Down here)

    Ch. 1













    EDIT: Chapter 1 complete.

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    Still haven't gotten a chance to pick up the game yet, but I support this.


    The Great Challenge of Our Time

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    Was important to me...........
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    nice priorities =_=
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    Thanks to TheSpy for the Sig pic~

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    Looks interesting.
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    First panel immediately made me think of Katie Tiedrich's style (the body types are similar) then bam, anime faces.
    Code:
    [07:55:59] <Spinach> Take off your clothes Kirby
    [07:56:07] <Kirby> I'm in class
    
    [20:37:34] <Lian|phone> there is a such thing as lingerie for guys?
    [20:37:54] <Kyokushi> yea
    [20:37:57] <Kyokushi> they're called jockstraps
    [20:38:02] <Lian|phone> :o
    [20:38:07] * Lian|phone googles
    [20:38:10] <Kyokushi> NO
    [20:38:11] <Kyokushi> DON'T
    [20:40:07] <Lian|phone> okay
    [20:40:16] <Lian|phone> I don't think I should have googled that
    
    [12:59:30]  <Spinach> call me onii-chan, bitch
    [13:00:12]  <kroyo> imma fuck ur shit up onii-fam

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    Very neat, Kaiza! Looking forward to where this goes, definitely. ^^
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    So...chapter 1 is almost done. Updated the post with some more "pages". Just a couple more and ch. 1 is complete; then I can start working on ch. 2. Just hope the plot remains interesting. This one is just the prologue/set-up.
    Also, I think I notice a drop in quality...I need some sleep. (=_= )zzz

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    This may hurt a little Neir's Avatar
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    draw more of this
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    says the hater, you keep on hating, i'll be around ignoring your invalid, incorrect opinion.
    [18:00] Spinach: Because I don't like Saber's personality but boy oh boy does she make my dick turn to diamonds when I see her getting tentacled.
    [18:01] Leo: feeling superior to EU makes me hard
    [16:16] <Bloble> Drakengard? Is that a rhythm game?

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    I'm betting it's a gender-changing spell.
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    marines are just kawaii meidos trapped in crew-cut heads




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    This may hurt a little Neir's Avatar
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    uh, no. It's called viva youth. it's a youth spell. Loli lucina
    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    says the hater, you keep on hating, i'll be around ignoring your invalid, incorrect opinion.
    [18:00] Spinach: Because I don't like Saber's personality but boy oh boy does she make my dick turn to diamonds when I see her getting tentacled.
    [18:01] Leo: feeling superior to EU makes me hard
    [16:16] <Bloble> Drakengard? Is that a rhythm game?

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    The enemy may have a missile, but we have... Doc Havoc's Avatar
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    Oh, right. I just forgot everything else when I checked the comic.
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    marines are just kawaii meidos trapped in crew-cut heads




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    Also, the hourglass on the tome's cover is kind of a giveaway.
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    OK, so...I was gonna steal a Joshiraku gag for one or two more pages to end on a funny note, but since I still have lots of homework to do, I think these last two pages make for a good stop. And so, Chapter 1 is complete, with 12 pages.

    And now I can thank you all for commenting. The fact that people are interested and actually reading makes me happy. And now that the set up is complete, now it's time to start the plot. Oh, don't worry, it'll be short.
    When I get some free time, I'll start work on ch. 2. Now with more Chrom!

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    Bet you thought I forgot about this, didn't you?
    No, it's not forgotten, I just haven't had the time to focus on this. Yeah...I blame college and video games.
    Thanks to NAHTCUW for giving me the extra push to continue!
    Ch.2

    So, just the first page for now, since it's getting late, but I'll start working on the rest this weekend.

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    Hope to see more, man. I liked the first chapter quite a bit.


    The Great Challenge of Our Time

    Quote Originally Posted by KENTA View Post
    Was important to me...........
    Quote Originally Posted by lilithsama View Post
    anal is what's important to you?
    nice priorities =_=
    Quote Originally Posted by KENTA View Post
    It's not important to you?

    Thanks to TheSpy for the Sig pic~

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