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    Didn't want to do this, Race, but you forced my hand.

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    http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/6470-Titanomachy-Quest-The-Second-Toll?p=2309716#post2309716

    I think we should use the Titan OOC for OOC talk of the quest as well, if needed.
    Last edited by RacingeR; March 29th, 2016 at 02:38 PM.


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    Besides, I don't see what's so terrible about looting anyway. It's only property, they're not actually harming anyone.
    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    when I say hero I don't mean hero in the spirit sense. I mean a morally grounded, good natured person who doesn't slaughter innocent people. No such person exists in the Nasuverse.
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    [00:12] <~Katie> of gay memes

    [16:15] <~Katie> lesbians has always been my gimmick and i will exploit it to the fullest

    [22:56] <@Sei> airen is pegging hero this time
    [22:56] <@Sei> for once airen isn't the uke
    [22:56] <@Kuroyuki> I thought Air was the Woman in the Relationship?
    [22:56] <@Airen> Yeah I kinda thought I was the girl too!

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    Reminder that crow girl was originally a hitman hired to kill crooklyn, where were you when Jordan saved their ass?
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    We wanted our return to be us showing up to interrupt that scene and steal everyone's thunder like the dickish gaylords we are.

    Race didn't let us


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    Quote Originally Posted by Erlkonig View Post
    Reminder that crow girl was originally a hitman hired to kill crooklyn, where were you when Jordan saved their ass?
    oh shit where did they say this

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    They were sent by that guy who was talking to our Mafioso pal in an interlude


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    oh shit how did i not realize that

    so it was actually Good Plot and not just a random dice roll

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    [20:41] <RacingeR> well its named like that because the leader is german, so are quite a few of its members
    [20:41] <RacingeR> Sarah Gwerder, the surname is german, and given that the leader is her sister
    [20:42] <WeisserRitter> well they don't sound like nice people that's for sure
    [20:42] <RacingeR> they're a bunch of psychos and murderers, but they mostly work as mercenaries
    [20:43] <WeisserRitter> mercenaries?
    [20:43] <WeisserRitter> you mean somebody hired them to kill students?
    [20:44] <RacingeR> if you recall an early intermission when crooklyn returned
    [20:44] <RacingeR> mr shadowy mcshadow put them on a hit on crooklyn
    [20:44] <WeisserRitter> Ye I know
    [20:44] <WeisserRitter> but they didn't attack crooklyn did they
    [20:44] <RacingeR> in fact those two were hunting for the crooks but they found team baka instead
    [20:44] <RacingeR> so this was originally a crooklyn encounter
    [20:44] <WeisserRitter> why'd they shoot team baka first
    [20:44] <RacingeR> but stuff changed
    [20:45] <RacingeR> they also act as scavengers when not mercenarying
    [20:45] <RacingeR> Kurai decided she wanted their food, plus she actually didn't know who they were
    [20:45] <WeisserRitter> god
    [20:45] <WeisserRitter> fucking
    [20:45] <WeisserRitter> damn
    [20:45] <WeisserRitter> That's brutal
    [20:45] <RacingeR> that's why she was surprised at Jordan's attitude and discovering they were newbies btw
    [20:45] <WeisserRitter> Makes me wonder how patrick managed to build a team
    [20:45] <RacingeR> (you're free to share this in the thread if you want)
    [20:45] <WeisserRitter> if everyone was like that
    [20:46] <WeisserRitter> so does this mean Jordan is unknowingly responisble for saving crooklyn
    [20:46] <RacingeR> obviously not everyone is like that
    [20:46] <RacingeR> sorta, but they have lost the hit on crooklyn
    [20:47] <RacingeR> their orders changed, which is something I forgot on the intermission to say

    copypasting for clarification purposes lol


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    Besides, I don't see what's so terrible about looting anyway. It's only property, they're not actually harming anyone.
    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    when I say hero I don't mean hero in the spirit sense. I mean a morally grounded, good natured person who doesn't slaughter innocent people. No such person exists in the Nasuverse.
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    [16:15] <~Katie> lesbians has always been my gimmick and i will exploit it to the fullest

    [22:56] <@Sei> airen is pegging hero this time
    [22:56] <@Sei> for once airen isn't the uke
    [22:56] <@Kuroyuki> I thought Air was the Woman in the Relationship?
    [22:56] <@Airen> Yeah I kinda thought I was the girl too!

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    Quote Originally Posted by RacingeR View Post
    [20:41][20:46] <WeisserRitter> so does this mean Jordan is unknowingly responisble for saving crooklyn
    If they fought crooklyn it would have ended with all their stuff stolen, including the birds.
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    No doubt spinach would have sent them packing without their underwear through gambling


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    So... I3, Plue.


    Given how hard it has been to get you guys to post, I think it might be better to do this in google docs at some point, like Verg is doing for Regalia, and try to get this segment done with soon.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Mike1984 View Post
    Besides, I don't see what's so terrible about looting anyway. It's only property, they're not actually harming anyone.
    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    when I say hero I don't mean hero in the spirit sense. I mean a morally grounded, good natured person who doesn't slaughter innocent people. No such person exists in the Nasuverse.
    [00:12] <~Katie> i can't defy my origin
    [00:12] <~Katie> of gay memes

    [16:15] <~Katie> lesbians has always been my gimmick and i will exploit it to the fullest

    [22:56] <@Sei> airen is pegging hero this time
    [22:56] <@Sei> for once airen isn't the uke
    [22:56] <@Kuroyuki> I thought Air was the Woman in the Relationship?
    [22:56] <@Airen> Yeah I kinda thought I was the girl too!

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    Kuro reviewing your piece bonuses it seems like the rook is the best so unless you have a different idea you want to put out could you mention upgrading Michael to that in your post.

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    Upgrade Cyrus to Queen


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    You'd need to get the dress and prom tickets for Cyrus and Kyle first.

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    Kyle wears the dress btw


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    Alright, remember that snippet contest? No, you don’t but here are surprise results!

    I actually wanted to make this a bit more elaborate, with some more detailed judging, but since stuff kept happening and I kept leaving this for later, and since so few snippets (just 4) were sent, I decided to do things more simple for this. I might do another snippet contest for later if people have some interest, but we’ll see.

    First, I’ll announce the two winners and the overall ranking:


    1. Mormarth – Scene canonized. Wins a trinket, as well as the chance to create a monster
    2. Bloble – Scene canonized. Wins the chance to create a monster.
    3. Snax – Scene canonized.
    4. Frantic – Scene canonized.


    And now, for the stories, each with the score and some commentary at the end:

    Morm – People-Watching

    People-Watching.

    It was one of my favored hobbies, to be sure, to just sit back in a chair or on the ground and let the world just walk on past you. Picking out various details, how they walked, how they talked, how they held themselves.

    I'd gotten quite good at it, over the years, part of my talent, I'm sure. But People-watching was what got me where I am today, just watching how people moved, their posture, their whole being, it was like reading out of a textbook for me, I could pull every single twtich out from memory and go through a play-by-play how it happened, what it meant, and so on and so forth.

    Unfortunately, when people notice, I tend to just look like a creepy staring stalker person, or some other nefarious shifty person of ill-repute.

    "Um, what are you staring at? And, wait, aren't you in my class?"

    Like so.

    I blinked, torn from my thoughts which were distanced from my current watching of the Martial Arts Club, it was a slow day, and most of the members had gone home, the remaining members had begun busying themselves with picking up the various mats. During this, their captain, Gwendoline, had apparently noticed me lurking off to the side like some creeper.

    "Uh, I was watchin' the practice."

    I was a bit embarassed by this, it wasn't often I was noticed, and I usually didn't stick around for clean up, either.

    Man this internal monologue is making me sound more like a creep.

    She looked at me, then seemed to come to a conclusion, a wave of dull crimson crawling up her cheeks, taking a few steps backward.

    Oh dear.

    "You, you're not some kind of pervert are you?!"

    Oh jeez better head this off at the pass.

    I waved my arms in the air frantically, "No, no! I-I'm just interested in martial arts, watch a bunch of Bruce Lee movies and stuff, and, ah..."

    I shifted awkwardly, "I tend to learn things by watching other people do them, and I, well, I've always felt that Martial Arts, y'know, punchin out bad guys and looking cool was super neat."

    I mumbled out the last bit, my pride bristling at the admission.

    Luckily, my embarrassment seemed to settle Gwendoline down a bit, as she perked up, "Oh, so you came down here to learn?" Then she frowned slightly, "Then why don't you just join the club?"

    Ah jeez.

    "I, uh, don't really do clubs." I tried to brush the question off.

    "Oh, I see," Gwendoline said earnestly, "It would get in the way of your cool loner vibe!"

    Erk.

    I uh, I hadn't ever thought of it like that.

    She froze, "Oh, I, I, I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to say it like that! I'm so mean!"

    I held up a hand weakly, "No, it's uh, it's okay. You're kinda right, but well..." I frowned, and stood up straight and proud, "I suppose a way I like to put it is that, while some people a generalists, and others are specialists, I'm aiming to be a 'General Specialist', instead of Jack of All Trades, Master of None, I'll be King of All Trades, Master of All.

    "I want to be the best at everything I apply myself to, and well, I guess that's why I was watching you, I learn from watching talented people, and you're, uh, you're extremely talented at martial arts, and I want to be as good as you."

    Now we both were embarassed.

    "W-well, I'm sure you're pretty talented too, I mean, I just, I'm not that good at Martial Arts, I, uh, I guess I won a few gold medals, but that doesn't make me that good!"

    Actually, yes it does, and I said as much.

    "If it makes you feel any better," I said dramatically, "You're like, uh, my muse or something!"

    Her entire face went scarlet.

    Wait shit that was the wrong thing to say

    "I-I I'm sorry, but I'm not interested in you that way!"

    "No! It's not like that! Damn it!"
    ===============

    Eventually, things got straightened out, and I ambled by to the club more often, and I'd be made the occasional recruitment offer.

    And I always said no, I have to maintain my, heh, cool loner image.

    Still, people-watching, it gets you ahead in life in the strangest of ways sometimes.


    Fun: 10
    Interestingness: 9
    ICness: 10
    Execution: 9
    Total: 38

    I liked this one the most, and it managed to scratch the first place rather well. It was just fun, and at the time it gave some nice insight regarding Alexandra’s character, as well as how she spends her time. Could’ve stood to be a bit more longer, but I think it ended up working rather well as it is.



    Bloble – The Athlete and the Dragon

    The pressure was enough to make Jordan J. Jones quake in his boots.

    Two years. Two years of studying and playing at Zeus Academy and he’d never gone up against such a fearsome opponent in service of the football team. His instincts screamed at him to back off, to let someone else handle this, but Lavrenti’s pre-battle speech did its work well.

    “Jordan,” the boy had said, perfectly seriously. “The survival of the club is in your hands. All you have to do is get the ball to the goal. We’ve opened the way, so just charge right through. If anyone can do it, you can.”

    Jordan gathered up the courage he’d been given and pushed open the door to the Student Council room.

    Within, the shades were drawn and the lights had been shut off. Only a single desk lamp illuminated the sole occupant, softly scribbling by herself. The noise of pen on paper was deafening.

    The girl looked up. Her hair was a mess and there were bags under her eyes.

    “Close the door.”

    Jordan nodded and quickly complied, shutting himself in the lair of the beast. The papers clutched in his hands were no shield against the enormity of the ordeal before him.

    “Gimme.”

    He took a few steps forward and gingerly placed the forms on the Treasurer’s desk. Rosalin slid them forward, perusing the first page with grating slowness.

    “Petrov’s handwriting is still abysmal.”

    Jordan jumped. He wanted to say something, but the words wouldn’t come out. All he could do was endure as the person in charge of their fates and the team’s budget pored over their latest proposal. The fifth one, Lavrenti had said, seeming uncharacteristically worried. It had been a fierce battle, and now the torch had gone to Jordan.

    He was already looking for an excuse to drop it. Rosalin Lovell finished reading the final page and put down the papers, looking up at Jordan again. It was said that behind those beautiful eyes, one would find a machine more merciless than the T-1000.

    “This is still too much,” she said bluntly. “You could make do with half.”

    Half! A bisection! Would it be horizontal, leaving him a pair of legs, or vertical, making him choose between left and right!? No, he couldn’t let that happen!

    “L-Lav says this is the lowest we can go, especially taking into account all the expansion he’s been doing.” Jordan said. Lavrenti had chosen the one guy most likely to be able to take banter from the Demon of the Student Council. Terrified as he was, Jordan’s motor mouth would keep on running. “Like, pretend we’re playing Limbo. If you set the bar any lower we might pass through, but we won’t be walking straight afterwards.”

    “This isn’t a game, Jones.” Her voice was gravelly in a kind of sexy way, like a 20 year old after too many cups of coffee. Judging from the paper cups clogging up the trash bin, the comparison hadn’t been too off the mark. “Do you know where this money comes from? Do you know how many clubs there are in Zeus? Do you even know the number written on this paper, or is Petrov sending in another muscle-head to stall things again?”

    “I’m a runner.”

    “Then run along and tell Petrov to stop wasting my time and do his own damned dirty work.”

    Complete defeat. In an instant, both the revised budget proposal and Jordan’s self-esteem had been crushed. Dejected and seeing no mercy in Rosalin’s tired eyes, the boy sullenly marched to the door and let himself out.

    Rosalin sighed and turned back to her papers. It was going to be a long night.

    Not a minute later the door slammed open, causing the girl to jump in shock and dash her pen across the page, completely ruining all the work she’d put into it.

    She looked up. Oh, it was him again.

    “Jones…”

    “Here!” Before she could finish the sentence Jordan leapt over a chair and a desk and slammed a can onto the desk, further ruining the paper. “Before you say anything, drink this.”

    It was… a can of lemonade. All-natural, no unneeded preservatives, and not from concentrate. Rosalin recognized it as a product of the ill-fated Healthy Drinking program they’d implemented last year. To her knowledge it had been a complete failure, for reasons that were obvious in hindsight.

    She blinked. “Why?”

    “’Cus you look like you need it.” Jordan was grinning from ear to ear. “This thing’s my little secret. Even Lav doesn’t know about it. The whole team guzzles energy drinks like crazy, and ‘Rade’s usually fine, but this stuff’s even better. Take one before a big game and it’ll perk you right up. Only one of the vending machines stocks it, and they refill only once a year.”

    Rosalin was aware of that particular machine, because she’d personally overseen its installation. To her knowledge, it was on the opposite side of the school, meaning…

    She peered closer. Jordan was sweating and doing his best to hide the panting in his breath. What an idiot. Definitely a muscle-head.

    She popped the tab and took a sip. It was good. “You give you points for effort, but I don’t take bribes.”

    Jordan winced. “No, no, that’s not it!” he quickly assured her. “I was just thinking… look, do you ever watch our games?”

    “Alexander does, on occasion. He says your team’s okay.” She wasn’t one for sports, especially not ones like football that consisted of people wearing heavy armour taking turns tackling each other.

    “We’re not just okay; we’re amazing,” Jordan said. He pulled up a chair, flipped it around, and planted himself on it, leaning forward against its back rest and staring at Rosalin with clear eyes. “But we’re gonna be even better.”

    “Do you even know what personal space is?”

    He scooted even closer. “Watch one of our games, and then decide what you’re doing with the budget. Otherwise you’re not giving us a fair shot.”

    She rolled her eyes. “I’ve heard that one too many times, Jones. It didn’t work for the D&D club and it ain’t gonna work for you.”

    “But it’s fun!” he insisted, eyes lighting up like a little kid. “Football ain’t just a sport, it’s an adventure! You can’t really get it unless you’ve seen it!”

    “Jones…”

    “Look, the big muscle-y dudes, those are the linebackers. They’ve gotta push forward and make sure the other team’s big guys don’t squash their own team’s little-er guys.” Now he was making dumb hand motions reminiscent of a ten-year-old’s play fighting. “The really fast guys – that’s me – gotta get past the big guys and get the ball aaaaaaall the way to the other end, with the whole other team standing in their way.”


    “Jones, I know the rules of football-.”

    “But there’s also the accurate guys that throw the ball! They can pass it anywhere, but the other team knows where the ball’s heading so they can go for an intercept. And the Quarterback, he’s like you, Ros!”

    Like… her?

    “He does all the work! He makes sure everyone’s going where they need to be and doing their job. He’s gotta coordinate a whole team of people! And if he’s captain, it’s even harder.”

    “…”

    Jordan’s words were quieter now. “But no one ever gives him credit for it. It’s always the guy getting the touchdown. But that ain’t fair. That guy wouldn’t be there if it wasn’t for everyone that made it possible. He could never have done it alone.”

    This guy was an idiot. But instead of interrupting the silly story, Rosalin leaned back and took another sip of the lemonade. “And?”

    “And we can’t do it alone either. You can’t do it alone. No one can. The football team’s growing. We’re getting more people applying and we’re winning more. Maybe not this year, but Lav says next year we might be good enough to get to the Nationals. But we can’t do that with what we’ve got now. If we wanna be a great team, we need a great budget to go with it.”

    Oh, this again. Rosalin sighed.

    “Jones,” she said patiently. “That’s not how it works. You aren’t big enough to warrant it.”

    “But we will be!” he insisted. “Come on, Ros!”

    She shoved the can into his arms, followed by the papers he’d delivered.

    “You’ve got a game tomorrow, right?”

    He blinked. “Uh… yeah?”

    Rosalin nodded. “Okay. That’s my day off, so I’ll drop by and take a look. Don’t tell your captain or he’ll go crazy trying to make it flashy.”

    Jordan’s eyes widened. “You mean…?”

    “Don’t get your hopes up. I’ll see what kind of team you are – no, what kind of team you might be, and I’ll give you whatever’s appropriate. So if you wanna impress me, put on a good show, okay?”

    Jordan grinned. “For you, only the best.”

    In the end, they still got half, just as Lavrenti expected.


    Fun: 10
    Interestingness: 9
    ICness: 10
    Execution: 9
    Total: 38

    Score is pretty much the same as Morm’s. I had a hard time deciding the winner between those two, so at the end I went with the one I liked the most. This one was also pretty good, and Rosalin was written rather well in here.



    Frantic – Two Gangsters and a Six Pack

    "Mind telling me exactly how he got in here?"

    The redheaded girl gave a vicious glare to the two boys in leather jackets nearby, who shuffled awkwardly on their feet, trying desperately not to look her in the eyes.

    "S-sorry boss! He had that dude with him an-"

    His voice fell off as he realized that she was staring at him, one hand idly drumming out a beat on the arm of her chair, and he wanted nothing more than to sink into the ground.

    "Awww c'mon now Red!" A voice cut through the silence with a drawl, and dancing eyes met frustrated ones as a brown haired idiot held up a six pack of... something. "I come bearin' gifts and things like 'em! Don't fault yer men just 'cause Cy kicked their asses in Blackjack. Seriously, you should learn to play cards at some point, because it was embarrassing. I thought you were a gang, Red, not a circus!"

    The boy peered around the room, making a tutting noise. "This place ain't even all that great! You've got like, four tables an' seven chairs? Where do you all hang?"

    "It's a gang, Justice," she said, staring at him. "It's not a goddamn ice cream social."

    He scoffed, and she idly noticed the two who'd brought him in shuffling away. She'd deal with them later, because he was scoffing at her, like she wasn't anyone important. The goddamn arrogance.

    "Please, Red. I ain't here to fight over your gang - I think this could be a solid business opportunity, see?"

    She paused for a moment, as he sat down at the table and pulled out two cans, tossing one to her. He grinned a dangerous grin that looked far too at home on his face.

    "Look, I'm not saying your gang is garbage or anything -"

    "Fuck off, Justice."

    "Buuuuut," he drawled, winking at her, "It is unbelievably shitty. You ain't a cohesive unit see? Got no heart. Heart's important, pumps blood through the rest of the body. Your gang don't have one, does it?"

    There was silence for a second.

    "Justice, the next words out of your stupid fucking mouth better be 'let's drink till our hearts stop', or I'm going to smash your head into the fucking concrete."

    He gasped, a shocked and offended sound that made her eye twitch. "Why Red! I had no idea you were so forward!"

    He leaned back in his chair, taking a sip from the can in his hand and holding it up to the sky as he watched it for a moment. "But I really think we should get to know each other first."

    She drank out of her can, watching him for a moment. He drank until she stopped, as if he was trying to fucking match her.

    "Why are you even here, Justice?"

    He shrugged. "Boredom, mostly? I'm sure you are too - leading a gang aint' somethin' interesting. S'mostly sitting around. Waiting."

    "I've never waited for shit, Justice."


    He rolled his eyes, sipping the can before letting his arm fall down, loosely dangling below his chair. "Clearly you aren't leadin' properly then."

    She debated throwing her can at him for a moment internally, before deciding not to, if only because there was still something in it. His head was a perfect target anyways, and it's not like he had any plans
    on moving or something intelligent like that.

    "What do you mean 'properly'? You dick around with your idiot gambling friend all day and don't get anything fucking done. At least I've accomplished something."

    He whistled, looking at her as he raised his hands in the air. "Ooooh yeah. Big scary Zhong, with her gang of redheads. I'm shakin' in my shoes over here."

    "If you just came here to mock me, Justice, get out."

    He sighed, running a hand through his hair and slamming his chair back onto the floor with a sound like an axe hitting wood. He opened his mouth once, then paused, and thought for a moment.

    "We're too alike, Red."

    "We're nothing alike. You're an idiot."

    "I ran a gang once, ya know?"

    She paused there, staring at him. Johnny Justice, the guy everyone said was going places - preferably prison, but places. Him and his two inexplicably connected friends - a star soccer player and a gambling fanatic - didn't make much sense. They weren't as talkative as Justice, and they sure as hell didn't have the sheer... presence, she supposed would be a word to describe him. Justice had a presence that really couldn't be ignored, however much she wanted to ignore him.

    "We weren't nice; but we were sure as hell better than the rest of the guys in the area. Better t'join good ol' Johnny, with his lazy grin and dangerous eyes, then goin' for someone like Gumshot Al or the
    Mafia. Nah, you went to Johnny, because he was young and wide-eyed and didn't seem to realize what he had goin' for him."

    "Is there a point to your story, or are you just talking at me?"

    He snickered, a thing perfectly befitting the arrogant idiot that was Johnny Justice.

    "It fell apart. We lost a bet, and didn't have anything really to tie the gang together, after the Mafia got it. So tell me Red - what the hell ties your gang together? Hair? Clothes? Those ain't a fucking gang, that's a fashion stateme-"

    She lunged at him, grabbing his collar and throwing him to the ground, a foot smashing onto his chest as he stared up with that grin on his face and twinkling eyes like he'd got what he wanted.

    "Don't judge my fucking gang because yours was shit Justice. You don't get the right to judge."

    He sighed, grabbing her leg and removing it from his chest. "Fine. You wanna drink, or you just gonna sit there and yell at me?"

    She drank.

    He drank.

    They drank until they ran out of alcohol, and she called her guys to get more. There was a lot of booze to go around and little to no reason to drink it. Johnny pulled a bottle of liquor out of his hat or
    something, and that gambling dude showed up halfway into their drinking party.

    "Cy."

    "Mm?"

    "Let's throw dice. Call your numbers."

    She thought for a second, mulling it over. "Double threes."

    He grinned at her, eyes twinkling dangerously. "Ah, dangerous. I'll take two and six."

    Cyrus didn't smile or anything, just looked at the other two. "Snake eyes."

    He threw the dice, and there was a moment of bated breath, where she stared at the dice in frustration; double sixes, of all goddamn things. A sigh left her lips, and then she grinned.

    "Nobody wins, then?"

    Johnny shrugged, looking back at her. "Eh. That's life sometimes, right?"

    She lifted her glass to that, and threw it back. Maybe Justice wasn't so bad after all.


    Fun: 10
    Interestingness: 9
    ICness: 8
    Execution: 8
    Total: 35

    The one problem with this one is that Johnny had too much dominance over the scene, more than what she’d have allowed, and got away with way more than Zhong would’ve let him without attempting to punch his teeth off. Still, I liked the dynamic, and I could see it working if Johnny was less outright confrontational at the beginning portion, so I’m still canonizing it.



    Snax – How To Tame A Sharkgirl (or Gotta Snack)

    Sarah woke up early. While she usually always did wake up early, this was earlier than early. It was, after all, only 4 am. Yawning and stretching like a cat, Sarah crawled out of bed and rolled across the room to lie down upon the tiger-skin rug in the middle of her room, her lithe, buck naked figure covered within the folds of the striped fur. She looking up into the ceiling, across the varied stuffed animal heads and trophies she had stuck all across the walls, and scowled.

    “Bah, I’m starving. Didn’t eat enough yesterday, shoulda filed a complaint about the lack of meat on the menu. Are these idiots trying to turn me into a herbivore or what??”

    Grumbling while scratching her bare belly, Sarah got up and rummaged through her closet, taking out her jersey. It was one of her favorite pieces to wear - simple, warm, and easy to move in. Perfect for a quick dip outside. Anyway, it was time to go out and look for a morning snack before breakfast.

    Slinking through the corridors of the dorm building, Sarah moved through the building and towards the cafeteria to sneak some food out. She didn’t want to wake anyone up, especially after that one time when she had nabbed a chicken from the pens and had tried bringing it back with her to her room alive. That was a mess, not to mention a number of complaints being lobbed at her especially by the more studious members of the student body who lived in that particular dorm. Honestly, the complaints weren’t that big an issue, until the School threatened to cut down on the number of times they let her leave the grounds in order to hunt. Assholes. As if sticking her in a boring environment without any big game wasn’t already torture enough.

    Having left the building without disturbing anyone, Sarah sneaked towards the main building, headed for the storage where they kept some of the better cuts of meat. Opening the door was easy - this wasn’t the first time Sarah had sneaked food from the fridges, at any rate. Normally, she would have gone hunting her own game, but it wasn’t quite the time for that without preparations, not to mention it would be a hassle getting in and out of the academy grounds when all she wanted was a small snack, although her definition of small might be somewhat off.

    Rummaging through the cuts, she found a rather meaty portion of tenderloin. Her mouth watering at the prospect of a nice juicy slab of meat, Sarah took the package and went into the kitchen to cook the meat. After she had finished, she started the trip back, already munching on her snack while skipping back towards the dorms.

    Perhaps it was the meat preoccupying her, but she didn’t notice a particular someone running at top speed towards her until that figure was a few feet away. Startled, she nearly dropped the meat, only holding onto it with her sharp teeth. The figure soon caught up to her due to momentum - but only then slowed down to pause and stare at Sarah’s nonplussed face, meat still hanging by her teeth.

    “Huh, aren’t you Sarah? That transfer student that got enrolled by the American Government for over hunting, or wait, was it poaching…?”

    A rather energetic looking countenance with a somewhat dumb look to it, which was funny and endearing at the same time. This was the PE teacher, Rebecca Matthews. Probably she was doing some kind of morning jog, only at her top speed…Rather popular with the students too, considering she was a dutiful and nice woman.

    Honestly, Sarah had never really paid much interest in any of the School’s students or faculty, considering she didn’t consider any of them to have much consequence upon her life. As said before, this School was more of a prison to Sarah rather than anything else. Occasionally she took note of the more athletic members of the community, considering she might be able to pick up a move or two that she could use in her future hunting escapades. Therefore - Sarah usually kept to her own, not getting involved with anything.

    ….Thus, she was rather unsettled her when a teacher actually noticed her.

    “Uh...yeah, ‘over hunting’, that’s me. What’s up, teach?”

    Rebecca had fully stopped and was catching her breath for a bit, breathing in deeply. After she took in one more deep breath, she smiled widely and patted Sarah’s shoulder.

    “Well, aren’t you a diligent one, waking up so early and working out! Not even that many of our athletes here are that devoted to keeping their training up to speed.”

    Sarah was still nonplussed, but it was indeed rather dark. Perhaps the teach had not seen the meat dangling from her mouth?

    “But you know, as a teacher I can’t have you stealing from the School’s cafeteria. Maybe you can’t help it; you’re a growing girl, and you get hungry often. Still, what’s wrong is wrong, and as your teacher, I need to deal out a punishment.”

    Sarah’s expression soured, as she expected another bout of threats with cuts on her hunting exploits. Man, this day was starting to be rather shitty.

    “Well then, you’ll accompany me for the rest of my run around the campus.”

    ….What?

    ------------------------------------
    Rebecca had been nice enough to wait for Sarah to finish her piece fo meat (It’s not nice to leave food lying about!!!) and then give her a drink of her own special sports drink (which tasted like a bunch of different ion drinks mixed and shaken together). Then, they began their trek across the campus. Rebecca did slow down a bit for Sarah - who was indeed a good runner, with enough stamina - but didn’t really match up to the iron fortitude of that of the teacher. Sarah was strong and fit enough to run a marathon, but this kind of breakneck speed jog was unheard of.

    After a few laps, Sarah was already panting like a dog, while Rebecca was sweating but not winded.

    “Done already? Geez, and I was expecting a little more stamina from you. I hear some hunters chase their prey until they drop, but you’re lacking a bit in that department, aren’t you?”

    Chuckling, Rebecca trots over to one of the campus benches, patting the seat beside her and signaling Sarah to sit down. Too out of breath to give the teacher a proper retort, Sarah slumped on top of the bench, looking into the dawn that was just breaking beyond the buildings of Iowa.

    “...Dammit, teach. Now I’m all hungry again.”

    Rebecca just smiled, taking out her small bottle of sports drinks and offering some to Sarah, who gladly accepted. Her throat was parched after all that hectic running.

    “Well, at least its soon time for breakfast. You won’t have to nick anything from the kitchen this time.”

    “Who knows, teach. I live how I want to, or at least that’s how it was until they stuck me into this prison. I honestly don’t give two shits about anyone here or anything - I just want out.”

    Rebecca’s smile faltered for a second, but then she chuckled.

    “Well, Sarah. I’m probably not the one to be giving you advice, considering I’m not the smartest teacher around - but at least I can tell you this. Do you really think this place is a prison?”

    Sarah stared at the teacher again, wondering what she meant.

    “I mean, here, there are dozens of talented individuals. This is a school for geniuses in one way or another. That means, no matter how you were enrolled into this school, you’re still considered a genius in one way or another, right?”

    Rebecca kicked her long, well-formed legs back, stretching out her thighs.

    “Everyone here is different in terms of talent or background, but at least they all are appreciated in one form or another. You too were also chosen for something, no doubt.”

    Sarah scowled, her sharp teeth glinting in the rising sun.

    “I didn’t ask to be chosen, and I’m pretty sure I’d rather be out there hunting more game than be stuck in a classroom learning crap-I-don’t-give-a-fuck. Sounds totally asinine, if you ask me.”

    Rebecca didn’t laugh this time, especially not after Sarah had just spat out a bunch of profanities. She had a serious face as she looked at her reluctant student, still young and green.

    “You do know, Sarah, that there are many other people at this school who came here because of their physical prowess, right? Are you saying you really have nothing you can learn from your experience here?”

    Sarah’s face faltered for a second. Sure, she was good, even near the best, at what she did. However, there were some moves that kids in this school could pull off - some that she thought might really come in handy. The acrobats, the parkour, the other sports activities...Well, maybe not football. That kind of contact sport wasn’t really her thing.

    Rebecca didn’t miss that change of atmosphere. While she wasn’t the brightest person around, she was, at least, somewhat competent in understanding the thoughts of a younger student.

    “See? Gotta make the most out of your current position.”

    Sarah wasn’t fully convinced, but she shrugged, not about to argue when the point had been so clearly made.

    “....Still, you aren’t supposed to talk to your teacher like that. You still need some punishment, it seems…”

    Sarah felt the hair on the back of her neck rise in alarm as a dark aura mingled around the PE teacher. Now why did she let her tongue flap like that...While she could try and run, Sarah had no confidence in outrunning the PE teacher, especially not after that initial run.

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    That morning, before breakfast, many a student saw the sight of a crazed teacher running like a maniac around the school, with a blond, sharkfaced girl panting and wheezing behind her, nearly about to pass out.


    Fun: 10
    Interestingness: 9
    ICness: 10
    Execution: 8
    Total: 37

    Pretty good as well. Only flaw that I could point out is that while it had a point going on it wasn’t quite finished with it and left it bouncing. It was still quite the fun read, just felt a wee bit inconclusive compared with the other two.



    Thanks to those that participated! I hope there’s a better turnout next time, if there’s one.


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