Fate/Stay Night [Realta Nua] PC version Mirror Moon TL insertion project

[Jacktheinfinite101]

Spoiler:

these lines that must be in Black font are barely readable..

http://imageshack.us/a/img823/3181/6474.jpg
http://imageshack.us/a/img5/1191/ibqh.jpg

13) Q: Are you going to leave Waku Waku's version notes on the Extras menu as they are?
[Fate] http://imageshack.us/a/img7/3967/lwqm.jpg
[UBW] http://imageshack.us/a/img855/3582/srji.jpg

I can read the black text just fine. As for Waku Waku's notes, it depends on how difficult it will be to get rid of them, I tried to get rid of MeruP's hidden button in HF but had difficulty with it.



Oh one more thing, I couldn't fix the (saved scene doesn't have data) bug for Fate and UBW, it's probably because those scenes are supposed to only be in HF. BTW I find that hilarious, in Fate and UBW, you can make every choice that initiates HF, but you still go into Fate and UBW.


In any case, I fixed everything else...............I kind of wish you were here back when I HAD time to work on this (it's amazing how one week of clases can pile enough assignments and work to destroy any semblance of free time you were thinking of having for the rest of the month).

[Waku Waku]

Getting rid of them should be painless. In titlemenu.tjs just delete

[ void, "version1", 10, 10, 1, 261 ],
[ void, "version2", 10, 45, 1, 261 ],

[Lochas185]

In any case, I fixed everything else...............I kind of wish you were here back when I HAD time to work on this (it's amazing how one week of clases can pile enough assignments and work to destroy any semblance of free time you were thinking of having for the rest of the month).

There is no need to hurry on this if you are busy you know.. Thank you for all your hard work.

Good lord it's a mess there. Ok so it seems that RN changed this bit of the scene and made it different, but MeruP just stuck the Mirror Moon TL of FSN in, so we'd need to have the new version of the scene translated first to fix this. For now, let's just cope with this (considering they probably just toned the violent implications down) and deal with it after the big scenes have been translated.

I thought that MeruP also restored all the voices in HF with the MM TL, wasn't that all about his Restoration Patch?

[Kotonoha]

I thought that MeruP also restored all the voices in HF with the MM TL, wasn't that all about his Restoration Patch?

But if those lines weren't in RN, they wouldn't have been voiced so there'd be nothing to restore.

Unless you're saying he put voices that didn't match what was being said, but... why would you do that haha

[Lochas185]

But if those lines weren't in RN, they wouldn't have been voiced so there'd be nothing to restore.

Hmm.. Maybe you are right.

Unless you're saying he put voices that didn't match what was being said, but... why would you do that haha

Lol No..

[Jacktheinfinite101]

There is no need to hurry on this if you are busy you know.. Thank you for all your hard work.



I thought that MeruP also restored all the voices in HF with the MM TL, wasn't that all about his Restoration Patch?

It's just like Kotonoha said, these lines weren't recorded since they weren't in RN. Not a big deal since we have plenty of those in other places right now.

As for being busy, what you said is exactly what I should do, but I still end up working on this anyway and procrastinating other work, which is totally my fault.

[Lochas185]

As for being busy, what you said is exactly what I should do, but I still end up working on this anyway and procrastinating other work, which is totally my fault.

So, Fate > College for you huh?

Then I shouldn't feel bad for piling all this work on to you?! xD

Spoiler:

1)a.[HF] 5th Day: After school: Shopping district - The daughter of winter-Ilya(I)

shouldn't this be in the next line, since its a dialogue?
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/6879/nqft.jpg

b.[HF] 6th Day:Park - The daughter of winter-Ilya(I)

same as above
http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/2392/no6u.jpg

(^ scene appears when you won't make any "Sakura" choices and then choose: "I'll go shopping.")

note: I just noticed this: but it seems like the same scene all the way,
but some lines in the screeshots above are different (~no idea how the original script is..)

2)[HF] 6th Day: Awakening-Morning - In bad shape-Nurse Sakura

shouldn't this be in the next line, since its a dialogue?
http://imageshack.us/a/img201/1778/q5a2.jpg

3)[HF] 6th Day: Nurse Sakura - A simple question

a)one word splits again and b) since the dialogue ended, shouldn't these two be in separate lines?
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/7284/5aro.jpg

4)[HF] 6th Day: Afternoon - Matou Shinji

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/5909/4x1t.jpg

5)[HF] (6th Day) Intermission - Hero's death

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4603/7thp.jpg

6)[HF] (6th Day) Intermission - Hero's death

http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6730/sfn6.jpg

7)[HF] 7th Day: After school-Chinese Restaurant - Shocking Mapo tofu

http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/5675/y3l2.jpg

8)[HF] (7th Day) Intermission - Re-contract

wordwrap ~out of borders
http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/4676/6tk8.jpg

9)a. [HF] 7th Day: Return home: Living room - Temptation(Afternoon)
(from choices: "Have her forgive me." and "Invite her to my house as a guest.")

http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/9140/697x.jpg

b. [HF] 7th Day: Return home: Living room - Temptation
(from choice: "To show my apology, I'll do anthing she says.")

http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/8039/27nu.jpg

10)[HF] 7th Day: Training-Living room - Treat Sakura

http://img547.imageshack.us/img547/7938/wr7d.jpg

11)[HF] 7th Day: Midnight: Park - War balance randomizer

shouldn't this also be in a separate line, since its a dialogue?
http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/5320/czg6.jpg

12)[HF] 7th Day: Midnight: Park - War balance randomizer

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7141/u9md.jpg

13)[HF] 7th Day: Return alive-Return home - Gap between the two

this seems fine, but when the next line appears..
http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/6987/pd2g.jpg

14)[UBW] 5th Day: Staredown-To the woods - Hanging death-VS Rider

spaces
http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/6889/x7i8.jpg

note: I also encountered an issue in [HF] starting at the
"7th Day: After school-Chinese Restaurant - Shocking Mapo tofu",
where my saves kept saving with the thumbnail of another one, until I restarted the game
and reloaded them and saved them again properly. This happened a few times.
I don't know if this was a locale issue (en-us) or my system's and just happened to me only,
it hasn't happened before.

[Jacktheinfinite101]

So, Fate > College for you huh?

Then I shouldn't feel bad for piling all this work on to you?! xD

No, it's just that I tend to have a bad habit of doing everything in my power to avoid doing what I have to do. No you shouldn't feel bad for giving me work, it's my choice on when I choose to make these fixes, I can wait if I have to. If I don't, that's entirely my fault.

[Lochas185]

There's more too.. especially with the UBW H-scene it has a lot of grammar or spelling mistakes
I've compared it a little with the old FSN one but there are probably a lot more since I didn't check from the begginning..

I can't provide sceenshots for most of them so you have to get the savedata below

Spoiler:

15)[Fate] (H-scene #2) 14th Day: Night: My room - Temporary dream

#1 is a wordwrap thing
#2 is a dialogue that should be on a different line

16)[UBW] 15th Day: Night - Rin's proposal(lethal dose) (~H-scenes ON)

grammar mistake this should say: " I didn't want to."
http://imageshack.us/a/img823/6053/9lal.jpg

17)[UBW] (H-scene 15th Day) The two's choice - Mind and body

a) wordwrap ~out of borders
http://imageshack.us/a/img543/9617/ii69.jpg

b) "off=guard"
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/1035/lnj4.jpg

c) this is a little different from the old FSN version from MM
the sentance with the small gap, and the lines below it
go to a separate page in FSN

and there is a comma missing in: I'm p@@@@@@@@@@ Tohsaka, and Tohsaka is accepting me.

d) wrong spelling in Shirou's name it says Shurou

e) wrong grammar its: Tohsaka fears

f) in the old FSN says: onto

g) RN: " you beast." , FSN: " you beast!?"

savedata: http://www.solidfiles.com/d/05a53a2a6f/

[Jacktheinfinite101]

There's more too.. especially with the UBW H-scene it has a lot of grammar or spelling mistakes
(I've compared it a little with the old FSN one), but there are probably a lot more since I didn't check from the beggining..
I can't provide sreenshots for most of them so you have to get the savedata below

Spoiler:

15)[Fate] (H-scene #2) 14th Day: Night: My room - Temporary dream

#1 is a wordwrap thing
#2 is a dialogue that should be on a different line

16)[UBW] 15th Day: Night - Rin's proposal(lethal dose) (~H-scenes ON)

grammar mistake this should say: " I didn't want to."
http://imageshack.us/a/img823/6053/9lal.jpg

17)[UBW] (H-scene 15th Day) The two's choice - Mind and body

a) wordwrap ~out of borders
http://imageshack.us/a/img543/9617/ii69.jpg

b) "off=guard"
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/1035/lnj4.jpg

c) this is a little different from the old FSN version from MM
the sentance with the small gap, and the lines below it
go to a separate page in FSN

and there is a comma missing in: I'm p@@@@@@@@@@ Tohsaka, and Tohsaka is accepting me.

d) wrong spelling in Shirou's name it says Shurou

e) wrong grammar its: Tohsaka fears

f) in the old FSN says: onto

g) RN: " you beast." , FSN: " you beast!?"

savedata: http://www.solidfiles.com/d/05a53a2a6f/

That doesn't surprise me, I had to type up UBW's H-scene by hand (which took forever), so despite reading through it to eliminate mistakes, it doesn't surprise me that more remain.

[Lochas185]

That doesn't surprise me, I had to type up UBW's H-scene by hand (which took forever), so despite reading through it to eliminate mistakes, it doesn't surprise me that more remain.

Oh so that's why there were so many of them..

I must have missed a lot too, its hard to pay attention with Tohsaka like that..

[Jacktheinfinite101]

Oh so that's why there were so many of them..

I must have missed a lot too..

I'm assuming you've never been to the fanclubs Made of Swords or Avalon because there's tons of NSFW images (many of which are the H-scene CGs) posted on both and nobody cares, the only condition is that you spoiler tag it and warn that the image is NSFW.

[Lochas185]

I'm assuming you've never been to the fanclubs Made of Swords or Avalon because there's tons of NSFW images (many of which are the H-scene CGs) posted on both and nobody cares, the only condition is that you spoiler tag it and warn that the image is NSFW.

No I haven't.. and I don't know if its allowed on Beast's Lair or where to host them for that matter

[Jacktheinfinite101]

No I haven't.. and I don't know if its allowed on Beast's Lair or where to host them for that matter

Well, if they aren't allowed on BL, then the people in charge are very lenient about it and since it serves a practical point, there's actually a good reason.

Also, the "gap" in the UBW H-scene is intentional

[Lochas185]

Also, the "gap" in the UBW H-scene is intentional

But in FSN it's in the next page

[Jacktheinfinite101]

But in FSN it's in the next page

..........not it's not, I just compared the Mirror Moon script file with the original and mine and there's no difference there.

[Lochas185]

Took me a while to find it.. that savedata moves way behind that part

[Jacktheinfinite101]

Took me a while to find it.. that savedata moves way behind that part

What line is it?

[Lochas185]

Its here [NSFW]

Spoiler:

http://bayimg.com/PAclAaaFB

[Jacktheinfinite101]

Its here [NSFW]

Spoiler:

http://bayimg.com/PAclAaaFB

Ooooooooh I see what's wrong. Fixed. Oddly enough, even though it should look like that with the mistake in place, when I loaded it using your save files, it was how it should be.

- - - Updated - - -

Also dreamedfire, you said you'd point out sexual references in HF, but I figured I'd list off the ones I already know about to save you some time.

Spoiler

Day 6, When Shirou Wakes up and realizes he had that sex dream.
Worm description
Day ?? (probably 7) Rin calls Shirou out on "Masturbating" to the girl he likes (referencing the sex dream)
Day 8 Sakura Masturbation scene
Day 10 Morning reaction to sex, Shirou talking to Rider
Day 11 Sakura and Shurou talking about having sex
Day 12 Morning reaction to sex, Sakura nightmare "Senpai asked for my body for the first time"
Day 14 Shinji rape scene changed to beating scene, Sakura gets "excited" at Rin covered with grail mud (WTF!?)