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    Archetype:Earth F/GO Valentine's Scene

    Arcueid So, I'm thinking we should get our Valentine meeting going!
    Arcueid Yay, yaaay, applause please~☆
    Well, not that there's anyone else but us here!
    Arcueid Gonna be kinda like talking into a mirror,
    but let's not let that bother us and get this show started!
    Archetype:Earth Would arguing into a mirror not be quite the waste of time?
    I think it's not only confusing, but would just lead us to the same conclusion.
    True Ancestor Princess Not necessarily. Worry thyself not...
    Nay, perhaps I ought say beest not so craven, thou princess of old.
    True Ancestor Princess 'Tis true we act from within the same Saint Graph,
    but the character and thinking of us is not equal.
    True Ancestor Princess I am a True Ancestor royal of thousand years of passing
    whom followeth the purposes of Father, never to meet my fated.
    True Ancestor Princess As they would say in the Pan-Human way:
    an inexistent, yet correct "what-if".
    True Ancestor Princess Royalty with neither subjects nor people;
    a princess with but a deserted castle. Nevertheless, heed it not.
    True Ancestor Princess Lonely I may be, but never bored, for I may look upon
    the many dreams of myself, much as I am now.
    True Ancestor Princess Besides―Heh-heh...
    True Ancestor Princess While physical form I have not, as nature I am most potent of all.
    True Ancestor Princess Ye are, let us say, the minds formed by the vessel,
    while I am the archetype used for the vessel's creation.
    True Ancestor Princess As your minds falter, I sameself—no, perhaps I overspeak,
    but it beeth something of the same nature that cometh to the surface.
    True Ancestor Princess An uncontrollable rampage, mayhaps.
    True Ancestor Princess Thou knowest surely what I mean, princess of now?
    Even if the nature were mine, was thy display not rather too immodest?
    Arcueid W-what!? I'd like you NOT just come here
    to make this an Arcueid-shaming-meeting, okay!?
    Arcueid And I mean, it wasn't, like, actually a rampage, okay?
    I was still in control, okay? I just got a little stubborn, okay?
    Archetype: Earth Stubborn, is it? So if I let go of all decorum,
    and make feelings take priority, I will become like you, yes?
    Archetype: Earth I will take it to heart. As a warning. So that I may never become that way myself.
    Arcueid Urgh... Past me is way more ladylike than I'd imagined.
    Almost can't believe it's myself.
    Archetype: Earth I also cannot perceive you as being myself.
    Both the usage of your body and the conclusions of your mind are entirely different to mine.
    Archetype: Earth Just what on earth happened to me that I went from how I am,
    to the way you are now? It boggles the imagination.
    Arcueid Oh, what it was is obvious!
    There was this human I'd never seen before who just....... Geeeee~☆
    Arcueid Sorry, the rest is a secret! It's just so dear to me, I can't even talk about it to myself!
    Archetype: Earth ......
    I wasn't exactly looking forward to hearing about it.
    Archetype: Earth Goodness, you do laugh an awful lot, don't you? Are there really so many things you consider that fun?
    Arcueid Yep. To the point where it feels like the world is nothing BUT fun things.
    I hope you'll feel the same one day, but...
    Arcueid First, we have to take down today's problem.
    Valentine's Day! You're interested, right?
    Arcueid I can't really give Mr.Ms. Chaldea any chocolate,
    but it shouldn't be any problem if it's from you!
    Archetype: Earth I told you: it's not like I really care...
    I was merely a bit curious about what kind of festivity it was, that's all...
    Archetype: Earth I may not know of the world outside the Inner Sea of the Planet,
    but I'm still Archetype: Earth, the custodian of the planet's memories.
    Archetype: Earth I ought at least learn the culture and customs of
    the sapient life that prospers on the surface above.
    True Ancestor Princess Forsooth, I am of the same mind.
    I wish to keep up with each era's trends.
    True Ancestor Princess Be it as we are in this faction of man; Chaldea, one would attain greater
    concentration of information by participation rather than mere learning.
    True Ancestor Princess This matter concerneth the dignity of us all.
    The princess of now adapted hence well, but...
    True Ancestor Princess If thou wert to condemn every insolent whom calleth thee "sheltered" or "out-of-touch", Chaldea would soon be empty, no?
    Archetype: Earth That's... true...
    Archetype: Earth I once conversed with the one named "Blackbeard",
    and nearly was it that I rendered him a 10-folded flat plane.
    Arcueid (Right... so this is how past and future me are like...
    Seems like neither of them are used to human society)
    Arcueid Okay, stop it with that haughty I-may-as-well-participate attitude.
    Arcueid Valentine isn't just a "human festivity". It's our—no, your festivity, past-me.
    Arcueid You do have feelings of gratitude and appreciation, or even just ones of wanting to know your partner better, right?
    Arcueid So you've gotta take initiative. Even if you try to act all above it,
    the pleasant feelings will be nobody's but your own.
    Archetype: Earth I am neither "trying" to act above it, nor would I ever feel that this would be "pleasant".
    Arcueid Really? Even though you were so nervously counting the hours before this,
    wondering what kind of day Valentine would turn out to be?
    Arcueid "Anticipation" and "unease" are the same thing.
    The mind doing that sorta stuff is what humans would call "pleasant".
    Arcueid Thinking about someone other than yourself was fun, wasn't it?
    Archetype: Earth ......
    Archetype: Earth Certainly... if my feelings were the ones coming together,
    then that would be "my festivity", yes.
    Archetype: Earth And as it is, I have no qualms with making homemade chocolate.
    Archetype: Earth Do you happen to know anything about it?
    Arcueid Oh, but of course! I've got some real homemade ones
    I made without cheating with my Marble Phantasm right here!
    True Ancestor Princess &
    Archetype: Earth
    (Without cheating!? Me, thou art astounding!)
    (Without cheating!? Me, are you a god or something!?)
    Arcueid Look at that, not seen surprise and self-affirmation like that ever before!
    I can feel the motivation coming off of both of you!
    Arcueid No worries, making chocolate is easy-peasy! I'll teach you the winning strategy myself!
    Arcueid Even just using the kitchen utensils is proving challenging...
    Was I really this much of a catastrophe before?
    True Ancestor Princess 'Tis not I who is to blame. The human tools are merely frail.
    True Ancestor Princess Moreover, what wantest thou prove by capable cookery?
    Princess of now, how low thou settest thy sights.
    True Ancestor Princess However thou stretchest thy wits, this lowly chocolate
    would never amount to more than sweet flavor.
    True Ancestor Princess If so, what remaineth is a mere question of quantity and quality.
    I shan't make something capable of being contained by a mere box.
    True Ancestor Princess I shall manipulate earth's surface, cultivate an infinitude
    of cacao trees, then melt it all into an ocean...
    True Ancestor Princess An ocean of chocolate. That is what I shall make.
    With this, I shan't surely be outdone by any other Archetype.
    Arcueid Yep, that's disqualified! Archetype-me, why are you always like this!?
    Do you really think bigger is always better!?
    Arcueid Do you even remember the snide comments you had about me earlier?
    True Ancestor Princess Hmph. This ill suiteth me, 'twas all.
    Furthermore, candy-cookery beeth not the role of royalty.
    True Ancestor Princess I shall take my leave. Ye are entrusted with the rest.
    True Ancestor Princess Recount to me only the outcome. Ye princesses of old and now,
    your achievements both are mine in the end.
    Arcueid She ran away, huh...
    Coldhearted and capricious, but still selfishly wanting...
    Arcueid So that's who I'm based on, huh...
    It's hitting so close to home, I'm almost starting to feel a bit down.
    Archetype: Earth Let's forget about her. Please just concentrate on the chocolate-making right now.
    Archetype: Earth Arcueid, after the water bath, it's fine to add flavorings, yes?
    Archetype: Earth The chocolate you prepared had no bitter profile to it.
    Archetype: Earth I want to make something more refined, something which leaves a deep
    impression with just a single bite..... is there something on my face?
    Arcueid No, it's not that. I was just surprised.
    It's the first time I've been called "Arcueid" by myself, is all.
    Archetype: Earth Yes... that usually doesn't happen, does it?
    If it bothers you, I can stop.
    Arcueid No-no-no, please keep calling me that!
    Arcueid The two of us are both "outcomes" born from the same vessel, but still...
    Arcueid ...that you, who saw yourself as "nothing" all this time,
    would speak that name is very heartwarming.
    Archetype: Earth Is that so...? Our Master calls you that,
    so I thought it appropriate to imitate, that's all...
    Arcueid Aha. So that boygirl is someone you find precious
    enough that you'd think something like that. I see.
    Arcueid Alrighty! Let's do our best making this chocolate then!
    Tell me more about what kinda chocolate you want!
    Archetype: Earth ...It being too overblown would be bad.
    I have a preference for things of a more modest touch.
    Archetype: Earth Additionally, the taste should be complex, but soft.
    Something like the feel of a luxurious silk... does that help?
    Arcueid Got it! Basically, premium-grade chocolate!
    Arcueid If I'm allowed to be frank... that's actually my speciality!
    Just listen to me, and it'll allll turn out great!
    - On Valentine's Day -
    Archetype: Earth Excuse me, and greetings, Master of Chaldea.
    Archetype: Earth ...Are you perhaps free? If not, I'll just... take my leave...
    (choice 1) I am.
    (choice 2) I'm so free right now.
    Archetype: Earth Really, now? From how the other Servants were talking,
    it seemed as if each minute of this day was busy for you.
    Archetype: Earth But if you're free, then so be it.
    Perhaps it was just meant to be.
    Archetype: Earth Here, this is for you. I am, at the end of the day,
    someone who now calls Chaldea their home.
    Archetype: Earth I ought at least adjust a bit to my environment.
    I don't want to be thought of as "out-of-touch", you see.
    (choice 1) Yay, chocolate from Her Majesty!
    (choice 2) Thanks! I love it!
    Archetype: Earth ......
    Archetype: Earth I wasn't expecting that would be enough for you to jump out of joy.
    Archetype: Earth So Valentine's is that great of a festivity, yes?
    (choice) Can I open it?
    Archetype: Earth ...Naturally.
    Archetype: Earth Regardless, this is my first time making chocolate,
    so I hope it is to your liking... actually, you better make it be to your liking.
    Archetype: Earth Half of it was made by Arcueid.
    Her way of showing gratitude, or so she says.
    Archetype: Earth I cannot fathom why she made a crack run through it,
    but that's apparently something she considers "cool".
    Archetype: Earth Which is to say, even though we are the same being,
    our preferences differ. Ultimately, mine came out better.
    Archetype: Earth Oh. This should go without saying, but the black chocolate is my creation.
    Archetype: Earth ...Right then, I'll excuse myself. I hope you'll enjoy Valentine's Day.
    (choice) Wait, wait, wait!
    Archetype: Earth Yes?
    (choice 1) Would you eat it with me?
    Archetype: Earth ...Somehow such an idea never crossed my mind.
    Archetype: Earth If I recall, Arcueid did say she spent her Valentine's together with...
    Archetype: Earth Incidentally, you did say you were free, did you not? In that case, I will take you up on your offer.
    Archetype: Earth I've had to taste far more chocolate than I ever wanted,
    but this will be the first time where it's not for a taste-test.
    Archetype: Earth Yes, like the tea time I've always dreamed of.
    I hope you may teach this sheltered princess some of your human etiquette.
    (choice 2) So... do you find this enjoyable?
    Archetype: Earth Why, who could know? I do not really understand much about myself.
    Archetype: Earth However, I might have been imagining how your face would
    look when asking me that question these last few days.
    Archetype: Earth Now that it's become real,
    my heart is beating so loudly that I can almost hear it, and......
    Archetype: Earth I suppose she was right. This really is too precious to be put into words.

    You may also view this translation on youtube:

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    死徒二十七祖 The Twenty Seven Dead Apostle Ancestors Kirishima's Avatar
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    When I saw it on youtube and TA Princess spoke her lines, I was immediately aware of who had done the translation. Good job.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirishima View Post
    When I saw it on youtube and TA Princess spoke her lines, I was immediately aware of who had done the translation. Good job.
    Well, I'm happy that it spoke louder than the video description.

    Thanks for the compliment. I was rather happy that one of the more upvoted comments was about being able to distinguish between the three different Arc's by voice alone. That's all I could ask for, I suppose.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Petrikow View Post
    Well, I'm happy that it spoke louder than the video description.

    Thanks for the compliment. I was rather happy that one of the more upvoted comments was about being able to distinguish between the three different Arc's by voice alone. That's all I could ask for, I suppose.
    I actually didn't read the description because the credits were mysteriously absent for LB7 so I didn't open it for valentines either. But a translation for Arcueid this good and distinct could only come from one source anyway.

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    Well that was cute. Thanks for the translation.
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    canon finish apo vol 3

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    I didn't know that was your channel. Likewise, thank you for the translation.
    The priest was waiting for the arrival of the princess, who was only an enemy of all of them.
    For the priest, the golden princess was the one and only main heroine.
    Everyone else was unworthy of his respect, no matter how strong they were.

    Tsukihime 2 Prelude III

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dartz View Post
    I didn't know that was your channel. Likewise, thank you for the translation.
    It's not my channel. It's the channel of the developer of Rayshift.io, for which I translate things, sometimes.

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    Ah got it. I see now.
    The priest was waiting for the arrival of the princess, who was only an enemy of all of them.
    For the priest, the golden princess was the one and only main heroine.
    Everyone else was unworthy of his respect, no matter how strong they were.

    Tsukihime 2 Prelude III

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirishima View Post
    I actually didn't read the description because the credits were mysteriously absent for LB7 so I didn't open it for valentines either. But a translation for Arcueid this good and distinct could only come from one source anyway.
    Replace me for Petri in the LB6 credits and that's basically it for LB7, by the way. In case anyone actually wondered.
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    Ugh cokesakto no no no
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    your ability to be wrong about literally everything you post is truly astounding. Even a broken clock is right twice a day, but you haven't been right once.
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    The gay pics were the most entertaining thing going on in this discussion.

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    Oh, I wasn't told was removed from the project.

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    Penalty for waifu crimes

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    Quote Originally Posted by Comun View Post
    Oh, I wasn't told was removed from the project.
    Replace me for Petri in the Traum credits and that's basically it for LB7.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mcjon01 View Post
    Ugh cokesakto no no no
    Quote Originally Posted by Neir View Post
    your ability to be wrong about literally everything you post is truly astounding. Even a broken clock is right twice a day, but you haven't been right once.
    Quote Originally Posted by Kateikyo View Post
    The gay pics were the most entertaining thing going on in this discussion.

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