Results 1 to 13 of 13

Thread: My Magic System

  1. #1

    My Magic System

    Hello. I'm a big Type-Moon fan and I'm working on a novel with a magic system. It's a contempatory fantasy like some of the Fate franchises. I'm working on a magic system and I discovered it's very similar to Magic in the Nasuverse. If somebody don't mind reading alot and have a great interest in magic system of Nasuverse, could you tell me if I'm copying Nasus work. Sorry for some of the bad grammar and spelling since english isn't my native language.

    Magic and Magecraft
    Magic is a mystery, only partly understood by humans. Magecraft is used to perform miracles that's possible to comprehend and realize scientifically. Through research, magecraft has become more advanced and less limited.
    The Source
    The Source or The Root, is a metaphysical object or location that contain the powers and energies that holds the world together. The Source contain the past, presents and the future.
    The World
    The world is from a magus view, the reality. A better understanding of the world allows for an increased understanding in magic. A human can only partly see the world.
    Magus, Magi
    People who studies magecraft are called magi. Most magi have a soul structure, a pseudo-neurological nervoussystem that transfer vigor into energy and a miracle. But a soul structure isn't entirely neccesary. Some magi, allthough rare, is without abilities and rely on magical artifacts and/or ESP to perform miracles.
    Mage Association is a world-wide organization that focus on research in magecraft and magic. Majority of the organizations member is old families and factors. Magi are secret by nature and holds much of their knowledge to their families and/or factors.
    Humans
    Humans can be divided into two key factors. The first one is the soul, the force and the second one is the body, the container.
    The soul is the force that seek survival, or with other words the will to live. Souls are the forces behind the will to live and require a body to interact physically. It is possible to transfer the soul to another body, but the soul will almost always reject it. The soul and its body combines and develops a personality. Sometimes the personality and the body contradicts the force behind the soul, with other words: suicide.
    Humans are limited to their understanding of the world.

  2. #2
    Preformance Pertension SeiKeo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Posts
    49,574
    Blog Entries
    9
    yes
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


  3. #3
    Mind to expand on that?

  4. #4
    blue blue glass something something Pillzman's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Posts
    1,349
    yes

  5. #5
    鬼 Ogre-like You's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2012
    Location
    https://twitter.com/LickYouTie
    Posts
    35,172
    JP Friend Code
    101043939
    Blog Entries
    69
    this is like reverse lantz.

  6. #6
    Preformance Pertension SeiKeo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Posts
    49,574
    Blog Entries
    9
    Quote Originally Posted by GhGhGhGh View Post
    Mind to expand on that?
    It's all the same OP
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


  7. #7
    Greatness, at any cost mAc Chaos's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Location
    Phyrexylvania
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    19,178
    JP Friend Code
    Throw xN
    Blog Entries
    5
    its literally identical
    He never sleeps. He never dies.

    Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

  8. #8
    Preformance Pertension SeiKeo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Posts
    49,574
    Blog Entries
    9
    Actually no sorry there's one difference
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


  9. #9
    死徒二十七祖 The Twenty Seven Dead Apostle Ancestors
    Join Date
    May 2012
    Posts
    4,142
    and what is that

  10. #10
    鬼 Ogre-like You's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2012
    Location
    https://twitter.com/LickYouTie
    Posts
    35,172
    JP Friend Code
    101043939
    Blog Entries
    69
    Soul is a force that seeks survival.
    Some magi don't have circuits
    Actually there are a few differences.
    Last edited by You; December 31st, 2014 at 12:28 AM.

  11. #11
    Preformance Pertension SeiKeo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Posts
    49,574
    Blog Entries
    9
    Quote Originally Posted by June View Post
    and what is that
    i was under the impression that the association was not worldwide
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


  12. #12
    Sakura~ SINIB's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2014
    Location
    Canada's underpants
    Age
    29
    Gender
    Female
    Posts
    7,864
    Blog Entries
    1
    Quote Originally Posted by You View Post
    this is like reverse lantz.
    It's eerie.


    Quote Originally Posted by Vagrant View Post
    SINIB is already a fan of the best whore. Well, she's not a whore per se, but I have it on good authority that she moves like an experienced prostitute.

  13. #13
    死徒二十七祖 The Twenty Seven Dead Apostle Ancestors Thedoctor's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2014
    Location
    Sweden
    Age
    30
    Posts
    2,742
    Yes it's like 90% identical.





Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •