Chaos Theory

[Ergast]

EMIYA is too busy having a great time at the expense of Shirou and Saber.

[Lycodrake]

EMIYA is too busy having a great time at the expense of Shirou and Saber.

And Rin. And Illya.

[Fan_Fic_Reader]

Poor Shirou, he did not even had a chance to properly explain, I think that Rin and Saber are the bigger perverts for thinking like that. I am happy about the new relationship that Shirou, Saber and Illya have, its refreshing. I want Zouken and Caster Alter to die already, Kirei and Gilgamesh are a lot more interesting to have as the Final Villians, because Kirei killed Illya's mom, Iri.

[Megas]

Poor Shirou, he did not even had a chance to properly explain, I think that Rin and Saber are the bigger perverts for thinking like that. I am happy about the new relationship that Shirou, Saber and Illya have, its refreshing. I want Zouken and Caster Alter to die already, Kirei and Gilgamesh are a lot more interesting to have as the Final Villians, because Kirei killed Illya's mom, Iri.

I'm not sure how you got that out of it, since the whole thing was that they were surprised about his interpretation.

He was literally the one saying "Fuck, it was ok when I was dating a little girl, but dating a teenager? That's too lewd!"

[Tuvarkz]

I'm not sure how you got that out of it, since the whole thing was that they were surprised about his interpretation.

He was literally the one saying "Fuck, it was ok when I was dating a little girl, but dating a teenager? That's too lewd!"

What I thought he meant was "It's alright if it's a little girl pretending to be on a date, but having an actual date?"

[ItsaRandomUsername]

Shirou is a pure-hearted maiden.

Also, the nuances that "dates" have in Japanese culture varies on who is with whom during the outing. A play date and an actual date aren't the same thing, but oftentimes referred to with the same phrase.

[Megas]

What I thought he meant was "It's alright if it's a little girl pretending to be on a date, but having an actual date?"

That may have been what he meant, but what he actually said was much more towards the whole "It's ok if you have dates with children, but teenagers? Scandalous!".

[SINIB]

That may have been what he meant, but what he actually said was much more towards the whole "It's ok if you have dates with children, but teenagers? Scandalous!".

Lol

[Fan_Fic_Reader]

Shirou is a pure-hearted maiden.

Also, the nuances that "dates" have in Japanese culture varies on who is with whom during the outing. A play date and an actual date aren't the same thing, but oftentimes referred to with the same phrase.

Yup

[ItsaRandomUsername]

That may have been what he meant, but what he actually said was much more towards the whole "It's ok if you have dates with children, but teenagers? Scandalous!".

Shirou is a pure-hearted maiden.

:V

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Also, the nuances that "dates" have in Japanese culture varies on who is with whom during the outing. A play date and an actual date aren't the same thing, but oftentimes referred to with the same phrase.

[Ergast]

What I thought he meant was "It's alright if it's a little girl pretending to be on a date, but having an actual date?"

This is what he is saying and what we know he is saying. But Saber and Rin, at least partially moved by jealousy? They heard what Megas said.

[Megas]

This is what he is saying and what we know he is saying. But Saber and Rin, at least partially moved by jealousy? They heard what Megas said.

Basically yeah. I'm not talking about what we know actually happened and what he's saying given that context.

I'm saying that the words that came out of his mouth without any previous context make it sound like he's kinda pedo.

[Frostyvale]

Oh yes this. I'll surely be very upset when the Saber-not-quite-Alter boss fight begins.

[Fan_Fic_Reader]

I guess Shirou now knows that Illya is Kiritsugu's daughter.

[Altima of the Gates]

Feeling pretty similarly here, then again, this Ilya is probably more attached to Shirou than in other routes, so it's somewhat understandable.

But yeah, I'm starting to feel this is more Prisma's Ilya except Ilya knows how to backtalk Rin and is dere for Saber.

She is a little too together considering the situation honestly(and she should have already known that Berserker was inside her, so the scene of her mourning him didn't really come off as well as it should). That, and it's good that she has decided to come out with things fully now, because it was getting a bit trying for her to be holding back so many important factoids when we have this clusterfuck. Let's see how she spins it next chapter.

[UnlimitedBladeWorks]

Great Chapter but Caster Alter is just over living her stay and so is Zouken I just hope they get killed off soon and we get Gil and Kirei as the main villains.

[LunarLegend]

You updated! Yay! Now if only I could navigate this thread worth crap!

COud you do something like create a Chapter Link at the thread start, linking to each post? it would make things much easier for the casual (or new) reader to find your stuff!

[Viz]

Caster Alter can die for me.
Dislike her pretty much.
But I got it right that Ilya will get Saber (Alter) in this story.
Things have started to get pretty interesting.
This is definetly my number 1 Fate/Stay Night Fanfic I want to read.
Keep updating this glorius and Epic Story, Moczo.
10/10.

[RoydGolden]

This fic is freaking awesome. I binge-read it all the way up to chapter 28 over on Fanfiction.net and I'm just going to check out the latest chapter after posting this. Your prose is really good; your dramatic writing really gets across a sense of awe in battle scenes and your comedic writing can be downright hilarious at times (not suprising considering you write a lot of comedic one-shots). A++ rank writing, good job. Also Illya is seriously adorable.

[Rafflesiac]

You're better off sending Moczo a message on FFN; he doesn't go to BL anymore.